The Gang of Five
The Land Before Time => LBT Fanfiction => Topic started by: babidikrakenguard on February 20, 2009, 10:56:56 PM
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Staring Ozzy, Strut, Ichy, Dil and Chomper!
My story writing skills are very rusty, this is pretty much the first story i've ever done so there will probably be some goof ups here and there. This takes place just one day after Land Before Time V: The Mysterious Island and the Flash Back takes place in Land Before Time IV: Journey Through The Mists. not exactly sure what time the movies take place, but this is pretty much the imagination at work. Okay, here we go..
Many, Many years ago, when.. Okay i'll skip through that! aham..
Chapter 1: Egg-Stealers and a Sharpbeak
It was another peaceful day in the Great Valley, However this story does not start here nore does it involve a Longneck, Threehorn, Swimmer, Flyer or Spiketail. This story involves two Egg-stealers, a Belly Dragger, a Sharpbeak and a little Sharptooth..
It was a dark night in the desert, Two Egg-stealers slept but one Sharpbeak was unable to sleep. Ichy looked at one of the sleeping Egg-stealers with a scowl. they've been traveling for seven night circles now and the three became hungry. There were no plants or eggs, and no water. Bad enough, the growling stomachs of the Egg-stealers kept Ichy awake.. "Good thing these guys aren't meat eaters.." Ichy thought to himself.. it happened many many night circles ago that Ichy found these guys.. Or did they find him?
"From now on, Im doing it alone!" said Dil and Ichy. As Ichy went to fly away he looked back at Dil as she readied her tail to whack Ichy. Before he could fly out of the way he was sent flying from the blow Dil inflicted on him. He wasn't sure where he was going or where he was going to land, but this is how he found those Egg-stealers..
"Did you hear that Oz?" Asked Strut. Ozzy stopped for a moment to listen, he didn't hear anything and looked back at his brother. "What?" Ozzy asked with a dry tone. "I thought i heard a yell.." Strut said, looking around even though the mist was hard to see through.. "Must have been my imagi-" Strut began, but saw that Ozzy was already walking away.. "Hey, wait for me!" Said Strut, running back to his brother, Then he yelped as something bumped him in the head before he could get to Ozzy. Ozzy turned around and went back to Strut. "What now?" Said Ozzy in his usual tone of voice. Strut looked up at his brother while rubbing the sour spot on his head. "Something hit me!" Strut said. "Like what? A falling rock?" Ozzy asked. "It felt like it!" Replied Strut, frowning. Then the two turned their attention twords the sound of grunting. They followed the sound and found what had hit Strut in the head.. Ichy sat up with his wings on his fourhead. "Does she have to swing that hard?" Ichy growled. then he saw the area grow dark as the shadows of the Egg-stealers loomed over him. He looked up at the Egg-stealers. Strut looked at him with a 'you hit me!' look on his face, Ozzy however looked at Ichy with a glare that sent shivers down his spine.. "Um, i can explain.." Ichy said, trying to chuckle. "Im sure you can.." Ozzy said, moving closer to Ichy until they became nose-to-nose. "Look pal." Ichy pointed at Ozzy. "I've had a pretty rough night, and if it wasn't for that blind, big-mouthed Belly Dragger i would not have
been sent flying half a mile and hitting Whats-His-Name standing over there." Ichy then pointed at Strut, who now looked at Ozzy with a confused look on his face. "Belly Dragger?" Ozzy asked with pretend interest. "Yeah, and same goes for those stupid kids!" Ichy said, folding his wings. He didn't expect Ozzy's reaction to be so serious.. "Kids?" Ozzy said, Grabbing hold of Ichy and holding him infront of his face. "Yeah, a Longneck, actually TWO longnecks, a Threehorn, a Spiketail, a Flyer and a Big Mouth. Now can you let me go?" Ichy said, trying to free himself
from Ozzy's grasp. Ozzy seemed to be in deep thought about what Ichy had said. "The longnecks.. What were their names?" Ozzy said. Ichy thought for a moment, what were they called? "Well, i heard their friends calling them Ali and Littlefoot." "Littlefoot!?" Ozzy said, dropping Ichy. "Yeah. Yeah thats right. Why? Do you know them?" Ichy said, getting up and rubbing the sour spot.
"I know them. Or atleast that Littlefoot.." Ozzy said. "Littlefoot?" Strut said, walking over to Ozzy and Ichy.. "You will take me to where you saw those leaf-lickers!" Ozzy said, Pointing at Ichy. "Sorry pal, but their probably not there anymore." "I dont care. Take me to wherever you last saw them!"
And so, they followed the Sharp Beak to the area where he last saw the gang. Of course, they were nowhere to be found.. Same went for Dil, she was nowhere to be found as well. "Good ridence!" Thought Ichy..
Ichy was brought back from his thoughts when Struts stomach growled. Finally fed up with that(Plus the snoring) he went further away and layed down. "Hopefully we'll find something eatable tomorrow.." Thought Ichy, before closing his eyes..
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My mind has been trying to think up of how they would act and talk, and my writing skills for fanfics are rusty like i said. Hopefully they sound In-Character. So how was it? If there is anything that needs to be fixed or if i need to try more training Please let me know :)
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I think it's a really good start! They're voices were good, I could definitely hear them saying all of the things you wrote. Neat story idea, can't wait to read more :)
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Great start! :DD Can;t wait to see how the rest goes! :DD
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Really? Thanks :) I'll try doing another chapter tomorrow. thanks again :)
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Another chapter, not really proud on this one though. Here the Trio find the skeleton of a Big Mouth. The same skeleton the gang of five and the Grown-ups found, meaning next chapter they will find the island hopefully. Again, if you find any goof ups let me know :)
Chapter 2: The Skeleton
The next morning was just miserable. Ozzy and Strut walked and walked for hours and not even a single sign of life. Bad enough with the bright circle being high up in the sky things were roasting.. Badly..
Finally they stumbled upon a skeleton of a Big Mouth. They stared at the skeleton for what seemed to be like forever until Strut said.. "It was heading that way." Strut said pointing in the direction the Big Mouth was facing, which was where the three came from.. "We have to go back." Strut said, turning around but Ozzy stopped him. "We cant go back because by the time we get back to the land of mist we'll be nothing but bones like that Duckbill!" Ozzy said, pointing at the pile of bones. "Ozzy's right." Said Ichy, flying off Ozzy's back and onto the sand. "We wont be able to go back because we'll starve before we'll even get back to the land of mists." Strut frowned as his stomach growled. "Come on.." Ozzy said before walking away in the direction they were heading, Strut and Ichy following..
The Night Circle came and they found nothing, but they still continued. Both of them panting except for Ichy, who was relaxing on Ozzy's back. Finally, they came to a stop. Strut flopped down onto the sand, finally able to rest. Ozzy sat down and looked at Ichy as he slid down onto the sand. "Ow!" Ichy yelped. He looked up at Ozzy with a glare and said. "I was sleeping!" Ozzy grinned and replied. "Good, now you can go look and see if you find any water or eggs."
"What makes you think i'll be able to find eggs out here?" Ichy said, folding his wings. Ozzy then heard a growl coming from Ichy's stomach and said.. "You want to eat?" "Yeah." Ichy said. Ozzy then grabbed Ichy and held him infront of his face and said. "Then look for something!" "Alright already! Sheesh!" Ichy growled. Ozzy let go of Ichy, who then flew off to look for something to eat.
"And i thought Dil was bad.." Ichy thought to himself..
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Good! Keep going, I can't wait for the next update! :DD
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Haha, I love the way the characters interact with eachother :) Can't wait to read more.
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Thanks :) Again i will hopefully do Chapter 3 tomorrow. Thanks again :)
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Another chapter! Might actually try doing another chapter today, If not i will try a chapter tomorrow. Here the trio find the big water and the rocky path that leads to the island. Again if you find any goof-ups let me know :)
Chapter 3: Big Water
Ichy flew for hours and he found nothing. By now he felt like he would just stop flying and sleep right where he was, then he smelled something. He knew that smell very well.. He followed his nose until he found what he had been searching for: Water. He shook his head, thinking he fell asleep somewhere, but it was real. He flew back to warn the Egg-stealers he found water.
"Wake up egg-breath! Wake up!" Ichy yelled out, trying to wake Ozzy up but to no avail. "Alright that does it! Time for plan b.." Ichy thought to himself.. He walked over to Strut and held his tail, and then.. CHOMP "Ozzy!" Strut cried out in pain, waking Ozzy up. "Help! Something bit me!" Strut said, running over to his brother and hid behind him. "About time you woke up!" Ichy said, walking over to Ozzy and Strut with a proud grin. "You are late." Ozzy said, standing up. "Does that matter? I found water!" Ichy said with a tone of voice that made it sound like he defeated a sharptooth with one wing behind his back. "You did? Where?" Ozzy said, grabbing Ichy and holding him infront of his face again. "Will you stop grabbing me like that!? Come on, i'll show you.."
Ozzy and Strut followed Ichy to where he found the water, they could not believe their eyes. Never before have they seen such big water. "Oz? Are we dreaming?" Strut said, staring at the big water. "Beautyful, isn't it?" Ichy said, grinning proudly again..
Unfortunately, it didn't taste beautyful at all.. "Yuck!" Cried Strut as he took a sip of the water. Ozzy's reaction to the salty taste was spitting it out, unfortunately Strut was in the way so the water hit him in the face. "This isn't water!" Growled Ozzy. Ichy looked at the two Egg-stealers with confusion. "What do you mean its not water?" Replied Ichy. He sniffed the air and said.. "Take a wiff, it smells like water!" "Sure doesn't taste like water." Strut said, frowning. Ichy sighed and went up to the water to take a sip. Good thing he's got feathers because he thought his skin turned green. He too spat it out. "Does it taste like water to you?" Ozzy said. Ichy wiped the water off with his wing and replied. "Okay, so i didn't taste the water when i found it.." Ichy looked around and saw that there were no plants growing nearby. when he looked at the water again he saw something far off in the distence. It was big and green.. "Look! Over there!" Ichy said, pointing in the direction where he saw the big green object. Ozzy and Strut looked in the direction Ichy was pointing in. "Land!" Strut said. "Can you find a way there?" Ozzy said, looking back at Ichy. Ichy looked around and pointed to a path to the island..
the trio followed the rocky path to the island, Ozzy and Strut were exhausted while Ichy relaxed on Ozzy's back yet again which was starting to tick Ozzy off. Then they reached the island but had to climb up to actually be on the island. Strut flopped down to rest finally. "I hope there's eggs here.." Ozzy thought to himself as he looked around. "See? That wasn't so bad, now was it?" Ichy said, flying down onto the ground. Ozzy looked back at Ichy with a sinister glare and said.. "Easy for you to say Sharpbeak, You slept through it!"
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Good chapter! I wonder if Chomper will be befriending the 4 :DD
Please update soon!
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You made a few good and nice chapters. Dont stop on that. :)
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Yay, another one! Can't wait to see where this goes :)
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Thanks :) Hopefully i'll be able to get Chomper into the next chapter, i might (Somehow) Even add Dil, but dont get your hopes up!
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Hey nice job with the story so far! Keep it up and you will have an amazing story! :D
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Yay, another chapter! :) As for the flyer crashing into the beach in the first part, that was kinda a refrence to LOST (Flyer crashing, Air Plane Crashing..) Another Flash Back, kinda telling of why the trio left the land of mists and we find our lovable sharptooth! Except he gets Kidnapped! (Or Eggnapped..) P.S: Has an Egg-Stealer being eaten by Dil! Dont worry, it's not any of the main characters.. Any Goofs-ups, let me know :)
Chapter 4 verse 1: A familier sharptooth
Ozzy, Strut and Ichy went further into the jungle. A Flyer had crashed onto the beach and unfortunately it was one that eats meat so they ran as fast as they could.. Finally they came to a stop when they knew they weren't being chased. Soon after, they found a cave and went inside. They were safe, or so they thought when they heard sounds outside off in the distence..
Dil wandered through the jungle, bumping into every tree and almost tripping over stones. "Maybe i should not have whacked Ichy with my tail.." Dil thought to herself, looking around. Even though she could not see well, she could hear well. The thought of what made the strange sounds almost frightened her, but at the same time angered her. She went forward and bumped into another tree. Now she was really mad. She charged further into the jungle, not caring if she bumped into another tree. She growled and roared and soon ran into a herd of Egg-stealers. Unfortunately for the first egg-stealer she bumped into, it was unable to run away as fast. It yelped in pain as Dil's jaw snapped shut on its leg. She snapped her jaw again, this time on its head, and it soon fell silent and did not move. She grinned with satisfaction as she went to drag the dead egg-stealer off. Then she heard a voice cry out. "Dil!?" It said. She looked around to see if she could find where the voice had come from. "Ichy?" She replied, but no answer. She decided that it was just her imagination, then bit into the dead egg-stealer and dragged it away.. Even though she could not see them, Ozzy and Strut held Ichy's mouth shut, Both of them shaking..
Ichy was brought back from his thoughts when Strut went up and asked him.. "Have you seen Ozzy?" "You lost him?" Ichy said, looking up at Strut. "I haven't lost him, it's just i haven't seen him for some time.." Strut said. Ichy could tell by Strut's tone of voice that he was slightly scared. "He said he would be looking for eggs. So why worry?" Ichy said, folding his wings behind his head and laying down. "Might want to eat some Green Food while he's gone." Ichy said. Strut's stomach growled and he nodded, then he went out of the cave to eat while his brother was away, but he still was worried..
Ozzy looked around to see if there were any eggs, none found. His stomach growled. "I hope that doesn't alert any sharpteeth.." Ozzy thought to himself.. Then he heard the flapping of wings above him, he looked up to see a flyer fly away. But the flyer wasn't the thing he was looking at, he was looking at where the flyer was in, a nest, and when theres a nest, theres.. "Eggs!" Ozzy thought to himself, he grinned proudly as he went to the tree where the flyer lived. Unfortunately he wasn't a very good climber. He put his arms around the tree and tried to climb, but fell down. Then he tried again and fell down again. Then he tried something different, He put his arms around the tree and dug the claws on his feet into the tree and began to climb. So far it was working and before he knew it, he reached the top of the tree. He grinned proudly as he reached the nest. Unfortunately, there were no eggs inside. He growled in annoyence as his stomach growled again. Bad enough now that he was ontop of the tree he wasn't sure how to get back down..
Lucky for the tree branches Ozzy was able to get down, unfortunately the nest fell and landed ontop of him. He got the nest off and went to go back to the cave but stopped when he heard a sniffle. He turned around to see where the sound was coming from and saw a little sharptooth sitting near a small pond. Ozzy knew that sharptooth, that was the same one that those leaf-eaters took care of!
Chomper looked down at his reflection. It was just one Night Circle ago that Littlefoot and the others went back home, and he missed them. He wondered how they were doing, and if he would see them again.. He got up when he heard his mother calling, but was stopped when he heard a familier voice.. "Well, well, well. If it isn't that sharptooth!" Said the voice. Chomper froze, he slowly turned around and saw a tall Egg-stealer infront of him, it was Ozzy. Chomper screamed and tried to make a run for it, but Ozzy jumped infront of him. "You were a little thorn in my side when you were a hatchling." Ozzy said, walking closer to Chomper as he backed away. "Oh, you dont remember?" Ozzy said with pretend sadness. Chomper slipped and fell down into the pond. "I'll bet you dont even remember your leaf-licking friends!" Ozzy said, this time with a cruel tone to his voice. Chomper looked up at the Egg-Stealer and replied. "Your wrong!" Chomper said. "Oh? You do speak?" Ozzy said, grinning. "We all do." Chomper said. Ozzy knew Chomper was scared, with how Chomper's hands were shaking. "And i remember you too." Chomper said. "You were that Egg-stealer that tried to kill me." "Exactly." Ozzy said, grinning. but his grin soon turned into a scowl when Chomper said.. "You're that Egg-stealer that ran away when my mommy and daddy came!" Ozzy growled at what Chomper said. "Watch what you say, Sharptooth!" Ozzy said, glaring at Chomper. Chomper then yelped loudly when Ozzy grabbed him by the neck and said. "Your Mommy and Daddy isn't here so you better behave!" Ozzy said. "My Mommy and Daddy will come!" Chomper said, trying to fight from Ozzy's grasp, but to no avail. "Will they?" Ozzy said, taunting Chomper. Chomper then cried out for help which made Ozzy try to close Chomper's mouth. "Be quite or I'll-!" Ozzy was cut off when Chomper freed his jaw from Ozzy's grasp and bit his hand. Ozzy dropped Chomper, who then ran as fast as he could. Ozzy ran after Chomper as he cried out for help multiple times. Finally Ozzy caught him and held his mouth shut once again. "You i liked alot better as an egg!" Ozzy said, growling. He then went back to the cave, taking Chomper with him..
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Chapter 4 verse 2: A familier sharptooth
Chapter 4: A familier sharptooth
Ozzy, Strut and Ichy went further into the jungle. A Flyer had crashed onto the beach and unfortunately it was one that eats meat so they ran as fast as they could.. Finally they came to a stop when they knew they weren't being chased. Soon after, they found a cave and went inside. They were safe, or so they thought when they heard sounds outside off in the distence..
Dil wandered through the jungle, bumping into every tree and almost tripping over stones. "Maybe i should not have whacked Ichy with my tail.." Dil thought to herself, looking around. Even though she could not see well, she could hear well. The thought of what made the strange sounds almost frightened her, but at the same time angered her. She went forward and bumped into another tree. Now she was really mad. She charged further into the jungle, not caring if she bumped into another tree. She growled and roared and soon ran into a herd of Egg-stealers. Unfortunately for the first egg-stealer she bumped into, it was unable to run away as fast. It yelped in pain as Dil's jaw snapped shut on its leg. She snapped her jaw again, this time on its head, and it soon fell silent and did not move. She grinned with satisfaction as she went to drag the dead egg-stealer off. Then she heard a voice cry out. "Dil!?" It said. She looked around to see if she could find where the voice had come from. "Ichy?" She replied, but no answer. She decided that it was just her imagination, then bit into the dead egg-stealer and dragged it away.. Even though she could not see them, Ozzy and Strut held Ichy's mouth shut, Both of them shaking..
Ichy was brought back from his thoughts when Strut went up and asked him.. "Have you seen Ozzy?" "You lost him?" Ichy said, looking up at Strut. "I haven't lost him, it's just i haven't seen him for some time.." Strut said. Ichy could tell by Strut's tone of voice that he was slightly scared. "He said he would be looking for eggs. So why worry?" Ichy said, folding his wings behind his head and laying down. "Might want to eat some Green Food while he's gone." Ichy said. Strut's stomach growled and he nodded, then he went out of the cave to eat while his brother was away, but he still was worried..
Ozzy looked around to see if there were any eggs, none found. His stomach growled. "I hope that doesn't alert any sharpteeth.." Ozzy thought to himself.. Then he heard the flapping of wings above him, he looked up to see a flyer fly away. But the flyer wasn't the thing he was looking at, he was looking at where the flyer was in, a nest, and when theres a nest, theres.. "Eggs!" Ozzy thought to himself, he grinned proudly as he went to the tree where the flyer lived. Unfortunately he wasn't a very good climber. He put his arms around the tree and tried to climb, but fell down. Then he tried again and fell down again. Then he tried something different, He put his arms around the tree and dug the claws on his feet into the tree and began to climb. So far it was working and before he knew it, he reached the top of the tree. He grinned proudly as he reached the nest. Unfortunately, there were no eggs inside. He growled in annoyence as his stomach growled again. Bad enough now that he was ontop of the tree he wasn't sure how to get back down..
Lucky for the tree branches Ozzy was able to get down, unfortunately the nest fell and landed ontop of him. He got the nest off and went to go back to the cave but stopped when he heard a sniffle. He turned around to see where the sound was coming from and saw a little sharptooth sitting near a small pond. Ozzy knew that sharptooth, that was the same one that those leaf-eaters took care of!
Chomper looked down at his reflection. It was just one Night Circle ago that Littlefoot and the others went back home, and he missed them. He wondered how they were doing, and if he would see them again.. He got up when he heard his mother calling, but was stopped when he heard a familier voice.. "Well, well, well. If it isn't that sharptooth!" Said the voice. Chomper froze, he slowly turned around and saw a tall Egg-stealer infront of him, it was Ozzy. Chomper screamed and tried to make a run for it, but Ozzy jumped infront of him. "You were a little thorn in my side when you were a hatchling." Ozzy said, walking closer to Chomper as he backed away. "Oh, you dont remember?" Ozzy said with pretend sadness. Chomper slipped and fell down into the pond. "I'll bet you dont even remember your leaf-licking friends!" Ozzy said, this time with a cruel tone to his voice. Chomper looked up at the Egg-Stealer and replied. "Your wrong!" Chomper said. "Oh? You do speak?" Ozzy said, grinning. "We all do." Chomper said. Ozzy knew Chomper was scared, with how Chomper's hands were shaking. "And i remember you too." Chomper said. "You were that Egg-stealer that tried to kill me." "Exactly." Ozzy said, grinning. but his grin soon turned into a scowl when Chomper said.. "You're that Egg-stealer that ran away when my mommy and daddy came!" Ozzy growled at what Chomper said. "Watch what you say, Sharptooth!" Ozzy said, glaring at Chomper. Chomper then yelped loudly when Ozzy grabbed him by the neck and said. "Your Mommy and Daddy isn't here so you better behave!" Ozzy said. "My Mommy and Daddy will come!" Chomper said, trying to fight from Ozzy's grasp, but to no avail. "Will they?" Ozzy said, taunting Chomper. Chomper then cried out for help which made Ozzy try to close Chomper's mouth. "Be quite or I'll-!" Ozzy was cut off when Chomper freed his jaw from Ozzy's grasp and bit his hand. Ozzy dropped Chomper, who then ran as fast as he could. Ozzy ran after Chomper as he cried out for help multiple times. Ozzy stopped when he could not find Chomper anywhere. "I will find him again, and he will pay!" Ozzy growled to himself, he then turned around and began heading back to the cave..
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Good chapter! Just please don't let Chomper get hurt. He doesn't deserve it. :(
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Good chapter indeed. I dont want to put pressure on you, babidi, but I would be very glad that nothing bad happens to Chomper. :p
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Haha, what a cliffhanger. We're all on the edges of our seats to see what happens to Chomper, apparently. Keep it up :)
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No pressure put on :) I wont let Chomper get hurt, Nope, Nope, Nope! Again, Next Chapter will be today hopefully :)
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Another chapter, unfortunately this one was kinda rushed. Not really happy on how it turned out.. This is just a snippit, there will be more tomorrow. If you find any goof-ups let me know :)
Chapter 5: Re-intruduction
Ichy jumped when he heard a loud booming sound. He sat up and looked at the cave entrence and saw that water was coming down from the sky.. "We have some Sky Water." Strut said. "I Noticed.." Ichy said, rubbing his head with his wing. He looked around the cave and didn't find Ozzy anywhere.. "Still no Ozzy?" Ichy asked, Strut shook his head..
A couple minutes have passed and Strut got up and walked twords the cave entrence, but Ichy stopped him. "Strut, be calm. He'll show up in no time! You'll see.." It was funny Ichy said that, because right then they heard a voice that said.. "Im back." Ichy and Strut quickly looked twords where the voice came from, and there Ozzy stood with a proud grin. "And look who i brought.." Ozzy said, holding Chomper by the neck..
Ozzy took Chomper to the back of the cave and sat him down rather harshly. Chomper looked up and saw that Ozzy wasn't alone. Strut had come along as well, and so did another. Chomper never remembered seeing a sharpbeak with the egg-stealers before.. "Now then. Strut? Im sure you remember our friendly sharptooth here." Ozzy said, looking at Strut. "Cant forget him Ozzy!" Strut replied. Ozzy looked back at Chomper and said. "Im sure you remember Strut as well?" Ozzy said. "He hasn't changed since.." Chomper replied with a bitter tone. "And our new friend is called Ichy." Ozzy said, pointing at Ichy who looked at Chomper. Ichy walked up to Chomper and looked at him. "So, this is the Sharptooth you've told me about?" Ichy said, looking back at Ozzy and Strut. "Yes it is. He's the one that's friends with those leaf-gobblers.." Ozzy said. Chomper
quickly looked around to see if there were any places to hide in, but there were none. Ozzy then got Chompers attention when he said. "So, where are your friends now, Sharptooth?" Ozzy said with a taunting voice..
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Looks good so far, I just hope someone comes to save Chomper!
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Thanks :) I have done another chapter again and Chomper is rescued. Unfortunately he will end up being kidnapped again soon, but not now..
Ozzy and Strut have left the cave leaving Ichy in charge of guarding Chomper, which fortunately doesn't go to well..
Chapter 6: Rescued
Ichy paced back and forth, watching Chomper. Ozzy and Strut went out to look for eggs and left him in charge of watching Chomper. Chomper eyed Ichy pacing back and forth, He wondered where he came from and why he was there. Chomper then heard Ichy's stomach growl and saw Ichy look at him with a sinister look. "He's to big to eat.." Ichy thought to himself, looking away.. Chomper began to scoot back a couple, which alerted Ichy.. "Think your going somewhere?" Ichy said with a sinister tone. Chomper quickly shook his head and said. "No." Ichy laughed. "You know.." Ichy began, walking twords Chomper who scooted back even more.. "I haven't been able to eat for many night circles now.." Those words that Ichy said made Chomper shudder. Ichy grinned evilly until him and Chomper heard a loud roar coming from outside..
Ozzy and Strut returned back to the cave without any eggs. Ozzy growled in annoyence as his stomach growled, however he found it slightly odd that Strut's stomach wasn't growling.. "Strut, why is your stomach not growling?" Ozzy said, looking at Strut. Strut looked back at Ozzy with a confused look and said.. "What do you mean?" Strut jumped slightly when Ozzy walked over to him. "You were eating green food!" Ozzy growled at Strut. "No." Strut replied. "Then why is your stomach not growling?" Ozzy replied. "Well.." Strut began, but was stopped when Ichy came flying over a little too fast and slammed right into Strut's face.. "The Sharptooth! He's gone!" Ichy said, looking down at Strut. Ozzy came over and picked Ichy up off of Strut's face and said.. "Not now, Sharpbeak! We.." Ozzy stopped for a moment. He looked back at Ichy and grabbed him and held him infront of his face and said.. "The Sharptooth is gone!?"
"I haven't been able to eat for many night circles now.." Ichy said, walking over twords Chomper. Ichy then turned around quickly when he heard a roar coming from outside the cave. Chomper then ran over Ichy and out the cave too his mom and dad..
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Cool! I wonder who made the roar though....
Edit: Glad his parents came to the rescue
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Yay! More story progression :)
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Another Chapter! Chomper is back with his Mom and Dad (Decided to give Mom and Dad a name if thats okay. Tyra and Rano, Tyrano!) Ozzy is planning on getting Chomper back, but why? Next Chapter, someone might get hurt(I'll give you a heads up: It wont be Chomper.) Any Goof-ups let me know :)
Chapter 7: Back with Mom and Dad
Chomper ran out of the cave to his Mom and Dad. They nuzzled him gently when they knew he was okay. "What happened?" Chompers mom growled. To flatteeth, the growl would have sounded more like a threat but to Chomper, he knew that both his Mom and Dad were worried.. "Egg-stealers Kidnapped me!" Chomper chirped. "We remember them!" Chompers Dad growled in response. Chompers Mom nealed down to let Chomper climb up ontop of her head, which he did.. "It looks like we're in for some hard times, Rano." Chompers Mom growled. then the two Sharpteeth, along with Chomper, went back to their place of residents..
Ozzy paced back and forth, planning on how to get Chomper back. Strut sat silently, watching his brother pacing when Ichy walked up to him and said. "Come out, i want to talk to you for a minute.."
Ichy and Strut went outside of the cave to talk. "What's so importent about the Sharptooth anyways?" Ichy said, Folding his wings and tapping his foot on the ground. Strut shrugged and said.. "Your questions as good as mine." Strut looked back at the cave entrence. Why was Chomper so importent?
Ichy and Strut went back into the cave to see how Ozzy was doing. "I have a plan.." Ozzy said, grinning evilly..
"I dont understand Tyra, how did they come here?" Chompers Dad growled. "The same way the flatteeth kids did.." Chompers Mom growled. Chompers Dad looked back at Chomper, who was sleeping soundly. "Why are they here?" Chompers Dad growled, looking back at Chompers Mom. "I do not know.." Chompers Mom growled, she looked back at the jungle and growled. "But if they come back, they will wish they never came to this island.."
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Awesome, yet again :)
And the plot thickens... :lol
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good! ;)
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Intesrsting, Chomper's folks have always been some of my favorite characters! :DD
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Thanks again :) Might try doing next chapter today, but if it is not posted today it will be posted tomorrow. Might actually put this up on Fanfiction.net but i would need your okay first! :p Thanks again :)
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It's ok by me, babadi! :DD
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Its ok by me too. :)
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Oky Dokes :)
Did another chapter, this one is pretty long and i hope it isn't to confusing. Never did a battle scene before, hopefully it turns out okay. Also i have a couple refrences: Jurassic Park 3 (Ozzy uses a quote, Also a dinosuar appears..) and Lion King (Strut uses a quote.)
P.S: I hope there isn't already a Spinosuar in the movies or TV series..
Chapter 8: The Spined Sharpteeth
Chomper woke up when his Mom gently nudged him. Chomper rubbed his eyes and looked up at his mother with a confused look.. "We have to go." Chompers Mom growled silently. Chomper tipped his head to the side and chirped in reply. "Why?" Chompers Mom looked in the direction where they heard a strange sounding growl. "Mommy? Where's Dad?" Chomper chirped, worried..
Ozzy and Strut walked through the jungles, searching for Chomper. Ichy stood on Struts head (Ozzy told him he was tired of having a sharpbeak on his back and head.) Watching for any signs of movements. Finally Ozzy and Strut came to a stop, they must have found Chomper. "So, are they Aslee.." Ichy began, but was cut off when he saw a dead longneck infront of them.. "It's okay, it's dead.." Ozzy spoke a little bit to loud. A strange looking sharptooth raised its head and looked at the three. It had long arms with three big claws, a head that looked like a belly
dragger and a large spine on its back. "Nobody move a muscle." Ozzy whispered. Then the sharptooth roared at the three. Ichy quickly flew off and Strut ran away, leaving Ozzy alone. Ozzy made a run for it when the sharptooth began to move away from the dead longneck and twords him..
"Strut!!" Ozzy cried out, running as fast as he could. He could hear the sharptooth with the spine coming after him. Ozzy then saw another sharptooth infront of him and he knew who that sharptooth was..
Chompers dad roared in anger as he saw Ozzy. Ozzy ignored the angry roar of the sharptooth and ran past between its legs.. Chompers Dad looked up when he heard another roar and the Sharptooth with the spine ran straight into him, making him fall to the ground causing the whole area to shake.. Chompers Dad stood up and roared at the Sharptooth with the Spine. The Spined Sharptooth
roared and charged at him, slashing at Chompers Dad with its claws. Chompers Dad bit the Spined Sharptooth's hand and flung the sharptooth into a tree..
Ozzy ran as fast as he could but stopped when the tree the Spined Sharptooth was flung into fell, blocking his path..
Chompers Dad charged at the Spined Sharptooth, readying his jaws to inflict the finishing blow, but the Spined Sharptooth quickly recovered and slashed Chompers Dad acrost the chest. The Spined Sharptooth then slammed its tail into Chompers Dad's face, causing him to fall. The Spined Sharptooth readied its claws again to finish Chompers Dad off, but Chompers Mom rammed into the Spined Sharptooth and bit its spine. The Spined Sharptooth roared in pain and Slashed its claws again, slashing the tail of Chompers Mom. Still she held on..
Chomper watched as his Mom battled the Spined Sharptooth. He never thought that his Mom could be so strong, but his heart soon began to beat faster when another Spined Sharptooth charged in and bit his moms neck.. "Chomper! Run!" Chomper heard his Mom roar, Still he watched.. Chompers Dad soon got up again and slammed his tail into the Spined Sharptooths side causing it to let go of the mothers neck and fall down.. "Chomper! Run!" Chompers Mom roared again, louder this time. Chomper closed his eyes tight and ran away as fast as he could..
Chomper ran through the jungle, not even daring to turn around to see if anything was behind him. Chomper could still hear the roars and growls of the battling sharpteeth and it worried him. His heart beated faster and faster as he thought of what was happening to his Mom and Dad and he was getting tired of running. Then he ran into something.. Chomper fell back onto the ground as he bumped into whatever it was he bumped into. Chompers heart fell when he heard that same voice.. "Well.. What have.. We here?" Ozzy said, glaring at Chomper.. Chomper looked up at Ozzy with tears in his eyes. "Yes.. Be afraid..! Be very.." Ozzy said, but stopped when Chomper began to sob. Ozzy growled at Chomper and said.. "Stop crying! Your supposed to quiver in fear!" "Just go away." Chomper said in reply, rubbing his eyes. Ozzy looked down at Chomper and stepped closer. Chomper got up and ran over to a nearby bush and hid inside. Ozzy walked over to the bush and looked inside. Chomper looked back at Ozzy and sniffled. "What do you want with me?" Chomper said. Ozzy looked at Chomper with a sinister glare and said.. "I want revenge!" Ozzy said. Chomper looked at Ozzy with a sad look which made Ozzy feel a bit awkward. "Dont you look at me with that face!" Ozzy said, trying to scare Chomper, but it didn't work..
"Ozzy!" Cried Strut as he ran over to his Brother, panting.. "I've lost Ichy! And.." Strut began, but stopped when he saw what Ozzy was looking at. "Aww." Strut said, looking at Chomper. Ozzy looked at Strut with a glare and said.. "Dont you fall for this sharptooth's trick!" "But Ozzy." Strut said, looking back at Chomper.. "Dont worry, we wont hurt you." Strut said. Chomper scooted over twords Strut and stood up.. "How do i know your not lying?" Chomper said with a sniffle. "We wont." Strut said, smiling at Chomper. "Do you remember the trouble this sharptooth caused!?" Ozzy growled in annoyence.. "Yes i remember, but look at him!" Strut said, looking at Chomper. "He's so cute and all alone! Can we keep him?" Strut said, looking back at Ozzy who put his hand on his face.. "What am i going to do with you?" Ozzy mumbled..
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Heheh, nice. Awww, poor Chomper. And such a cliffhanger! Can't wait to read what happens next, especially about his parents :blink:
There was a Spinosaurus in LBT 12, but that doesn't change things any I don't think :)
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Aww rats, oh well. Im glad you liked the Chappy :) We shall find out what happened to Chompers parents in the next chapter and we might even check up on how things are doing in the land of mists.. Also, why were there two spino's?
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I hope Chomper's parents are ok, good chapter though!
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Thanks :) Next chapter will show us what happened to Chompers parents and we might check up on how one of the main characters will be doing.. She hasn't been in the fanfic much! :blink:
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Gosh, another chapter. My fingers are starting to like doing this. I am actually surprised at how the story is turning out :p got kinda confused with the first part with the Spino's though..
Shows us what happened to Chompers parents and why there are two Spino's. Also tells us how Dil is doing and introduces a new character.. Enjoy! and if there are any goof-ups let me know! :)
Chapter 9: Ichy and the Pino
Tyra watched as her son ran away from the battle, she hoped for her son to be safe and that the Egg-stealers would not find him but she would not risk Chomper being crushed by either of the sharpteeth. She then returned her attention back twords the Spined Sharpteeth.. "What do you want?" Rano growled at the Spined Sharpteeth. "Meat!" One of the Spined Sharpteeth roared in annoyence. "We haven't been able to find food since you showed up!" The other Spined Sharptooth growled. "This was our island, this was our home and you ruined it!" The other Spined Sharptooth growled. Tyra and Rano looked at eachother then back at the Spined Sharpteeth. "Well what do you sugest we do? Starve?" Tyra roared angrilly. One of the Spined Sharpteeth roared in reply. "You eat everything you see! You even tried to eat one of our hatchlings!" Rano roared angrilly. "We never went near your hatchlings!" One of the Spined Sharpteeth snorted at Rano's roar. "If you have any.." Rano growled, which made one of the Spined Sharpteeth take one step twords Rano but was stopped by the other Spined Sharptooth.. "Dont bother with them." The Spined Sharptooth growled. "Why? Their half dead already! If we finish them off.." The other Spined Sharptooth roared angrilly.. "Let this be a message to them, that this is our island.." The Spined Sharptooth growled, and looked back at Tyra and Rano and roared. "Dont you forget it!" Then the Spined Sharpteeth turned around and went back into the jungle.. Rano looked down at the ground and growled. "Why are they so cranky?" Rano growled, now trying to look at the scar on his chest.. "Spine and Spino weren't always like this.." Tyra growled, looking in the direction where the Spined Sharpteeth went.. "We never went near their hatchling.." Tyra thought to herself..
Ichy flew as fast as he could, looking in all directions. Unfortunately he wasn't paying attention to where he was flying and flew into a tree and landed on the ground..
Ichy woke up a couple minutes later to see something looking down at him, it looked like a belly dragger.. "Im okay, Dil.." Ichy said. The one that looked like a belly dragger chuckled slightly and replied. "Im not Dil, whoever that is. My names Pino!" Pino said. Ichy sat up and looked more closely at Pino. By the sound of the voice, it was a girl. She had the head of a belly dragger, but she had long arms and a spine on her back. "Your one of those Spined Sharpteeth!" Ichy said, folding his wings. Pino nodded and smiled at Ichy. "Yep! My Mom and Dad went over to tell my friends parents hello." Pino said. Ichy thought for a moment at what Pino said.. "Is your friend by any chanse named Chomper?" Ichy asked. Pino nodded happilly and replied.. "Yep! Thats him alright! I haven't seen him for a while, i hope he's doing okay.." Pino said, looking down at her feet. Ichy stood up quickly and pointed at Pino angrilly and said.. "Your parents almost ate me!" Pino looked at Ichy and shook her head. "My parents aren't like that." Ichy folded his wings again and began to tap his foot on the ground. "Their Sharpteeth! They eat meat!" Pino tipped her head to the side and looked at Ichy's mouth. "You also eat meat to, I can tell with how your teeth look." Pino said. Ichy was going to say something but didn't find the words. Pino tipped her head again. "What's wrong?" Pino asked.. "Can you help me find two Egg-stealers? One has this obssession with eggs and the other one enjoys eating plants." Ichy said, changing the Subject. Pino nodded and said. "I saw one screaming 'Ozzy! Where are you!' a couple minutes ago. You can follow me, i know where that one was heading." Pino said, running in the direction where the Egg-stealer went..
Dil wandered through the misty jungle, bumping into tree's once in a while. She was starting to get annoyed by that and decided to stop for a while.. She layed her head down and listened for any food, she could hear squeeks coming from above and different kind of sounds coming from almost all directions. "Where's Ichy when i need him?" Dil thought to herself. Then she growled at the thought and raised her head again. "Who needs him?" She said to herself, moving forward and bumping another tree. She sighed in defeat and said to herself. "Who am i kidding? I guess i really do need him.." Dil said, flopping down making the area shake slightly. "My nose hurts.." Dil said to herself. She began to close her eyes when she heard a rumble. She looked around but could not see anything, then she felt the feet of Egg-stealers on her back. "Hey! Watch it! Im trying to sleep here!" Dil said in annoyence at the herd of Egg-stealers. Dil flomped back down and thought to herself.. "Im tired of eating Egg-stealers.."
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Haha, I loved that last part with Dil. Great chapter, still loving the story :D
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Cool, glad to see Dil back in the story.
Please update soon! :DD
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Couldnt agree more. :)
We want updates and preferably fast, please! :p
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Oky Dokes :)
Have to think up of how to get Dil to the island though. Might have to read a little bit about Deinosuchus first though because they cant really survive long without water, right? Unless she took an oceanic flight to the island :p I will have Dil appear in the next chapter and we shall see how Ozzy, Strut and Chomper are doing.
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Another chapter! Not really happy on how this one turned out though, it's pretty short.. And i dont know what to title the chapter :p
Ichy and Pino are getting closer and closer to finding Ozzy, Strut and Chomper. But what's wrong with Strut? Is he not feeling good? Enjoy! And if there's any goof-ups let me know :)
Chapter 10: Closer to the Egg-stealers
Dil woke up the next day and yawned. If anyone was around to see it they would have ran away scared. Dil looked around to see if her eyes were doing any better, unfortunately she still had trouble seeing. She then sniffed the air to see if she could smell any food, but the only thing she could smell was water. She got up and went to see if she could find something to eat..
Ozzy, Strut and Chomper wandered through the jungle looking for Ichy, They haven't seen him since they ran into the Spined Sharptooth.. Chomper stopped for a moment and looked back, he hoped his parents were okay. "Hey, are you okay?" Strut said, making Chomper jump. Chomper looked back at Strut and nodded silently. "Why did you take me?" Chomper asked. "Well.." Strut began but almost fell down. "Are you alright?" Chomper asked. Strut shook his head and looked back at Chomper. "Im fine." Strut said, smiling.. "Strut! Where are you?" Ozzy yelled out. Chomper and Strut looked in the direct Ozzy was and saw him with his arms folded, waiting for the two. Chomper and Strut began to follow Ozzy again..
Pino looked around the area where Strut had ran, but he was nowhere in sight. She sniffed the air and got a familier scent. Pino went over to the bush Chomper was hiding in, but he was nowhere in sight aswell.. Ichy landed a few inches behind her and said.. "Is Strut in there?" Pino could tell with Ichy's tone of voice that he was being sarcastic. She looked back at Ichy and shook her head. "Nope, none found." She said.. "Strut! Where are you?" A voice called out. Ichy and Pino looked in the direction where the voice came from.. "That doesn't sound like the Egg-stealer i saw." Pino said. "That's Ozzy." Ichy said. "He sounds.." Pino began, but paused for a moment as she thought of a word to describe the voice.. "Mean." Pino said. Ichy looked back at Pino and said.. "He can be if he doesn't get enough eggs.."
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Good chapter, as always! :DD
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Yep!
I'm liking Pino :)
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Thanks :) A little funny thing about Pino, she was named after two things" Spinosuar, and a character in a game called Legends of Dragoon.
I have also done another chapter, again its kinda short and not really proud on how it turned out and no clue what to title the chapter, oh well.. Enjoy and if there's goof-ups let me know :)
Chapter 11: Lost
The Night Circle was now in the sky, and Ozzy, Strut and Chomper stopped. They had been searching for Ichy for hours now and were now beginning to think that he didn't make it.. They were heading back to the cave, but they ended up getting lost..
Chomper sat silently, watching Ozzy and Strut talking. He couldn't really hear what they were saying and decided to scoot over a little closer to hear what they were saying..
"Ozzy, my stomach hurts.." Said Strut, frowning. Ozzy shook his head and said.. "For the last time Strut, You've got to have eggs!" Strut shook his head. "That's not it.." Strut said. Ozzy folded his arms and replied. "Then what's wrong?" Strut thought of something to say, he had to stay calm otherwise Ozzy would find out he was eating plants.. "Well.." Strut began, trying to think of something to say.. "My stomach's been hurting alot, and i haven't been eating plants. Honest!" Strut said, giving Ozzy an innocent look.. "Alright, i believe you.." Ozzy said. Strut sighed with relief. "Have to find him some eggs to make his stomach feel better.." Ozzy thought to himself..
Pino sniffed the air to see if she can find Chompers scent, or the scent of the Egg-stealers. She smiled when their scent was still fresh in the air.. "This way!" She said. Ichy landed a few inches away from her and folded his wings. Pino turned around and looked at Ichy and tipped her head. "What's wrong?" She asked. "Erm.." Ichy began but thought about what he was going to say.. He was going to say that Ozzy and Strut had captured Chomper a couple night circles ago but decided not to, otherwise he might become food for this Spined Sharptooth. "Nothing." Ichy said. Pino shrugged and followed the scent of Chomper and the Egg-stealers..
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Pretty good, I hope Pino finds Chomper. I agree, she's cool. :DD
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Another Chapter done, pretty much shows everyone going to sleep. but what's wrong with Strut? :o Pino will find Chomper in the next chapter hopefully, but will they be able to get away safely from Ozzy's clutches? Next Chapter. And if there's any goof-ups let me know! :)
Chapter 12: Sleep
Chomper and Strut slept peacefully, but Ozzy paced back and forth, wondering where the cave could be..
"This whole place looks the same!" Ozzy thought to himself. "I remember this place, I even remember that same stump!" Ozzy looked at the nearby stump and went over to it. he looked closely at it and heard a growl. He looked around to see where the growl had come from, but the growl was only his stomach. Ozzy sighed in defeat and went over to Chomper and Strut, he noticed Strut has been walking unusual lately, almost as if he was sick. He also noticed Strut hasn't been breathing to good either. "Must have a stuffed nose.." Ozzy thought to himself before laying down a few inches away from Chomper and Strut. He could hear the growling of many other creatures and it almost made him scared, soon it started to be difficult to keep his eyes openned and he soon fell asleep..
Pino layed down, Her and Ichy have been looking for Ozzy, Strut and Chomper for a while now and Pino's feet were beginning to hurt and she was beginning to fall asleep. Ichy landed a few inches away from her and said. "My wings are killing me." Pino chuckled at what Ichy said and layed down and yawned. "I think it's time to rest up." Pino said, laying her head down and began to close her eyes.. "We better rest up if we want to catch up with them fast.." She yawned again and mumbled "Goodnight." To Ichy. Ichy looked around to make sure no sharpteeth were nerby, the only sharptooth nerby was Pino and she was fast asleep. "Must be a deep sleeper.." Ichy thought to himself. He flew up to a nearby tree on a branch closest to the ground and close to Pino. He looked around again to make sure there were no sharpteeth around, when the coast was clear he too fell asleep..
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Aww, poor Strut... can't wait to see what happens next :yes
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Yeah, I'm starting to feel bad for Strut too.
Update soon, and thanks! :DD
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Np :) Might try doing another chapter again, if not, then tomorrow :)
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Neat! Hey, do you mind if I post a drawing of a scene from this fic sometime? I really wanna draw Pino, haha.
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Sure! Feel free to :)
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Another Chapter! This one kinda describes what Pino's colors look like(colors kinda based off of the Spino in the game Warpath: Jurassic Park). Also ends in kinda a cliff-hanger.. Any Goof-ups, let me know :)
Pino and Ichy wake up and Ichy tells Pino a little bit about Ozzy and Strut. Soon Ozzy is awoken by Chomper and warns him something is really wrong with Strut and soon Ozzy and Pino come face-to-face..
Chapter 13: Something Wrong
Pino yawned as she woke up, she looked around for Ichy but then she heard a sleeping sound from above, She looked up and saw Ichy sleeping peacefully..
"Hey!!" Ichy woke up with a jump and fell down the tree branch. He turned his head and saw Pino laughing at him. "Sorry!" Pino said with a chuckle. "Talk about rude awakaning.." Ichy thought to himself, rubbing his head with his wing. Pino walked up to him and said. "We've got to catch up to them, they could be awake and moving by now." Ichy sat up and looked at Pino. "Lead the way, Pino."
Ichy and Pino went further into the jungle searching for Ozzy, Strut and Chomper. Pino thought for a moment, she doesn't remember asking him his name yet.. "By the way.." Pino began, looking up at Ichy as he flew above her. "What's your name? I dont remember asking you that." Pino said. Ichy looked down at her and said. "Names Ichy." "Ichy, huh?" Pino said, smiling. "Funny name." Ichy grumbled to himself as he heard what Pino said.. "Great, kid has to make fun of my name.." Ichy thought to himself. "What are your friends like?" Pino asked. Ichy looked down at her and replied.. "Well, Strut is more of the nicer one and prefers eating plants. Ozzy though is a little bit on the mean side and has more of a taste for eggs." Ichy said. Pino shuddered at the thought of Ozzy. Ichy landed infront of her and said.. "Infact, he plans to take revenge.." Ichy added in. "Revenge?" Asked Pino, tipping her head. Ichy nodded and said. "Yeah." Ichy didn't say anymore, he looked up at Pino and saw she had an almost scared look. "Just forget what i said, it's not Chomper he wants revenge on!" Ichy said before flying up again. Pino sighed in relief and began walking again..
"Hey! Wake up!" Chomper said, trying to wake Ozzy up. Ozzy finally awoke and looked up at Chomper with a glare, Chomper quickly said. "Somethings wrong with him!" Chomper yelped. "What?" Ozzy said, quickly getting up and going over to where Strut was..
Strut was not awake and was coughing none stop. Ozzy looked at Strut and put his hand on his forhead. "He's sick!" Ozzy said, looking back at Chomper. "What should we do?" Chomper asked. Ozzy was looking around in all directions, having no clue what to do. Then he quickly turned around and saw a small blue spined sharptooth with black markings..
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Ooh, good as always! :DD I just hope, Strut, Tyra, and Rano will be ok.
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Yeah, I hope so too! Good chapter :)
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Thanks :)
And I did another chapter again. not really happy on how it turned out though. I wanted the Stinky Flowers to have more to them then just Smellyness. Looks like the Night Flowers aren't the only ones that can cure sickness.. again, if you find any goof-ups let me know :p
Looks like the only way to cure Strut's sickness is the Stinky Flowers. Chomper and Ichy go to get the flowers, unfortunately Pino is stuck with Ozzy..
Chapter 14: The Stinky Flowers
"Hi." Pino said, trying to chuckle. Ozzy went up and grabbed her by the neck and said. "What do you want, Sharptooth?" Ozzy said in with a harsh growl. "Let her go! She's my friend!" Chomper said. Ozzy looked down at Chomper then back at Pino. He sat Pino back down on the ground..
"Ozzy, Right?" Pino said, rubbing her neck.. "Who are you and what did you do to Ichy?" Ozzy asked with a sinister tone. Just as he said that, Ichy landed a few inches infront of Pino. "Im okay." Ichy said, folding his wings. Ozzy looked back at Strut, then back at Ichy and Pino. "Never mind about introductions! What's wrong with Strut!?" Ozzy said with an almost shakey voice..
Pino looked at Strut as he caughed. Pino looked back at Ozzy and said.. "It's nothing to worry about." Pino said trying to smile, but Ozzy replied.. "Nothing to worry about? He can hardly breath!" Pino looked down at her feet, then she remembered something.. "Chomper, do you remember that Stinky Place?" Pino said, looking at Chomper. Chomper nodded and Pino continued. "Take Ichy with you and bring me atleast five or seven stinky's." Ozzy looked at Pino with a glare and said. "Stinky's?" Pino looked up at Ozzy and nodded. "Yep, their for helping him." Ozzy went up to Pino and looked at her a little more closely. "How do i know this wont kill him?" Ozzy said with a questioning tone to his voice. "Because i saw some Horn-Heads taking some of the flowers to one of their baby's who was like this.." Pino replied. Ozzy looked at Strut, then back at Pino and said.. "Your staying with me, and if this is a plan to let that sharptooth over there escape.."
Ozzy said, pointing at Chomper. "You'll wish you never hatched!" Ozzy said, making Pino gulp..
Ichy and Chomper left to go to the Stinky Place, Pino sat a few inches away from Ozzy who was glaring at her. Pino tried to smile at Ozzy but he still glared at her..
Ichy followed Chomper, looking around every few minutes to make sure nothing is stalking them. Finally they reached the Stinky Place..
"We're here." Chomper said. Ichy landed near the flowers and sniffed, he put his wing on his nose to try and block out the smell.. "Strut has to eat these things?" Ichy said. "I guess." Chomper replied, going up to the flowers and taking a few. "Might want to take extra just in case." Chomper said, handing Ichy a few. Ichy looked down at the flowers, then back at Chomper. He folded his wings and said. "How come your helping us?" Ichy said. Chomper looked back at Ichy and said. "Because if i dont, Ozzy might hurt Pino.."
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Great as always! :DD I wonder if Ichy and Chomper will become friends
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Yep, good chapter!
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Yeah. Nice chapters.
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Thanks :) Doing another chapter, hopefully it turns out a little better.
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Another Chapter, Another Character. This time it's someone that wont be very friendly in other chapters.. Any Goof-ups let me know :)
Ichy and Chomper find the Stinky Flowers and go to take them back to Strut, but then they hear something lurking in the jungle.. Meanwhile, Ozzy and Pino wait for Ichy and Chomper. while their waiting, Ozzy and Pino talk.. kinda..
Chapter 15: Something lurking..
Ichy tried not to breath in the stinky smell of the flowers as he carried them in his feet, but to no avail. He wondered how such awfull smelling things could exist..
Chomper stopped for a moment and looked around, he thought he heard a growl. Then he looked up and saw Ichy was still flying. "Ichy, Stop!" Chomper said, Ichy landed on a treebranch and looked at Chomper. "What's wrong?" ichy asked a little too loud. "Shh!" Chomper replied. Chomper went over to the tree Ichy was on. "Listen." Chomper said, Ichy listened but did not hear anything. "What am i listening to?" Ichy asked. Then Ichy heard a growl coming from nearby.. "Do you see anything from up there?" Chomper asked. "No." Ichy said. He looked around to see if he could see anything, then he saw something moving between the trees. "Yes!" Ichy said with a shakey voice. "Stand perfectly still." Chomper said. Ichy stood frozen, staring at the area where he saw the movement. He heard another growl and closed his eyes tight. "Do you see it?" Chomper asked. Ichy openned one eye and saw a sharptooth staring at him from a distence.. "Yes!" Ichy yelped, tightening his eyes again. Chomper peaked around the tree and saw the same sharptooth. "It's Acro!" Chomper whispered to himself, He looked back up at Ichy and said. "Dont move! Acro has trouble seeing." Chomper said.. "Reminds me of Dil." Ichy thought to himself. Chomper peaked around the tree again and did not see Acro anywhere.. "Okay, i think he's gone." Chomper said. Ichy openned his eyes and looked down at Chomper. "Who was that?" Ichy asked. "That was Acro, he doesn't see to good." Chomper said, looking up at Ichy. "Why is that?" Ichy said, folding his wings. "I think he got both of his eyes scratched by a flyer." Chomper said, looking in the direction Acro was in.. "That flyer didn't live i dont think.."
Pino went over to Strut to see how he was doing, he had finally stopped caughing when Chomper and Ichy left but he was still not feeling good. Pino went back over to Ozzy and said. "He stopped caughing." Pino said with a smile, Ozzy only nodded. He didn't really trust Pino, seeing as how she was another sharptooth. And letting Chomper go to get the Stinky Flowers, that didn't help one bit..
"I heard you wanted revenge against Chomper.." Pino said, looking down at her feet. "And how did you know that?" Ozzy said, looking at Pino with a questioning look. "Ichy told me." Pino said, remembering Ichy's words. He told her it wasn't Chomper he wanted revenge against which made her sad. "Why did i believe him?" Pino thought to herself. "He did, did he?" Ozzy said with a dry tone. Pino looked up at Ozzy and nodded. "I also heard you wanted revenge against Littlefoot and his friends." Pino added in. Ozzy stood up and took a threatening step twords Pino, making her jump slightly. "How do you know about them?" Ozzy said with a sinister tone. "Chomper told me." Pino said. Then the two were interupted by a sniffle..
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Good, and a a cliffhanger too! It does seem as if Ichy and Chomper are becoming friends
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Another chapter, and i have no clue what to title it. Doing this and the game "Who you like more?" it was pretty confusing so there's probably going to be a goof-up somewhere.. If you find any let me know, my fingers need a rest :p
Strut awakens! Ichy tells Chomper why he's with Ozzy and Strut and we check up on how Dil is doing..
Chapter 16: Strut awakens
Ozzy and Pino went to check up on how Strut was doing. Strut openned his eyes and looked around, he tried to get up but was to tired to. He felt like going back to sleep until..
"About time your awake!" Ozzy said, startling Strut. "You almost gave me a heart-attack!" Ozzy said, walking over to Strut. Strut looked up at Ozzy and said. "I did?" Strut said with a quite voice. Strut smiled, he never once heard Ozzy saying that before, maybe Ozzy does care about him deep down inside..
Ichy looked around every once and a while to make sure Acro was not stalking him or Chomper. "So.." Chomper began, looking up at Ichy. "Yeah?" Ichy said, looking down at Chomper. "How did you end up with the Egg-stealers?" Chomper said, He had been wondering where Ichy came from for some time now. "Long story.." Ichy said, landing on a tree branch and looking back down at Chomper. "See, there was this Belly Dragger called Dil, she couldn't really see to good and i made a deal with her. If i be her Eyes, She'll be my Teeth. Know what i mean?" Chomper nodded at what Ichy said. "Well, some night circles ago we went our different paths and.. Well, that's how i met Ozzy and Strut, in the Land of Mist." Ichy said. "the Land of Mist?" Chomper asked, tipping his head. "Yeah, a place where you can hardly see because of all the mist, nothing special." Ichy said, flying off the tree branch..
A loud belch echoed through the Land of Mist. Dil had eaten another Egg-stealer and licked her chops, she began to move forward into the jungle when she heard a sinister sounding laugh from the river. Dil followed the laughing and almost fell down into the river, which made the laughing grow louder. "Who's there!?" Dil said with a threatening tone. Something peaked it's head out from under the water and spat the water into Dil's face. Dil backed away from the River and growled. "Alright, now you've done it!" Dil said in an angry tone. "Think you can rip me to peaces like i almost did with you?" Said the voice from the River. "Oh yeah? Well atleast i can walk on land!" Dil replied with a bitter tone. The voice laughed again. "Coward! You would rather hide on land then go head to head with me?" Said the one in the river. Dil looked at a nearby tree and replied. "Me a coward? Im not the one always hiding in the river!" Just as she said that, the one in the river peaked his head out of the water and glared at Dil. "That's because i live in the water.." The one in the water said. Dil laughed at the tree, which she thought was the Swimming Sharptooth-Longneck. "To bad, not enough room to explore." Dil said, laughing. She went to go away but bumped into a tree which made the One in the Water laugh again. She turned her head around and stuck her tounge out at him, then went back into the misty jungle away from the creature that lived in the river..
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Oooh, yay, updates!
Good stuff, as always :D
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Thanks :)
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Interesting! I wonder who the swimming sharptooth that challenged Dil was....
Glad to see Chomper and Ichy are kind of getting along, and I hope Tyra and Rano are ok
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The swimming Sharptooth is the same one that chased Dil at the end of movie 4 after Dil hit Ichy with her tail not sure what they call plesiosaur's :p. Might try bringing Tyra and Rano back into the next chapter hopefully
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Another Chapter :p Any goof-ups, let me know :)
Strut meets Pino, Chompers Parents continue searching for Chomper and Pino's Parents return to their nest full of Eggs(Uh-oh...) And Dil makes a decision which ends in a cliff-hanger for that poor Egg-stealer..
Chapter 17: Dil's decision
Pino walked over to the two Egg-stealers to see how they were doing. Strut wanted to get up but he didn't have the strength too. Then he noticed something.. "Where's Chomper?" Strut said, looking around. Then he caught sight of Pino, who smiled. "Hi." Pino said, waving at Strut. Strut looked up at Ozzy with a confused look. "Who's that?" Strut said. "I dont know, we haven't.. Introduced ourselves yet." Ozzy said, looking down at Strut, then back at Pino. Pino rubbed her head and said. "Sorry. My name is Pino." Pino said, smiling. "Pino? Im Strut!" Strut said, smiling. Ozzy looked down at Strut with a glare and said. "Pino already knows my name.." Ozzy said with a venomus tone. Pino frowned slightly and looked down at her feet, then they turn around and see Ichy and Chomper arriving with the flowers..
"Chomper!" Roared Tyra as they searched for Chomper, Rano sniffed the air and growled. "I can't smell his scent anywhere.." Tyra looked back at Rano and she too sniffed the air. "We must continue looking." Tyra growled. The two sharpteeth continued through the jungle looking for Chomper but he was nowhere in sight.. "Do you think.." Rano growled, but was silenced by Tyra's growl. "No. We will find him, even if we have to tear down this whole island."
Meanwhile, Spine and Spino returned to their nest. Spino sniffed the air and growled. "We cannot find Pino anywhere." Spino layed down next to the nest and layed her head down. Spine also layed down next to Spino and the nest. Spino raised her head and looked back at the jungle, wondering where Pino could be..
Dil grumbled to herself as she wandered through the misty jungle searching for food. "That Swimming Sharptooth's got some nerve." Dil thought to herself as the sniffed the air. She began walking again and a couple minutes later she bumped into another tree. "That's it! Im going to find Ichy!" Dil growled to herself. She turned around and bumped into another tree, angering her even more. Then she heard the sound of many creatures running, she layed down and stood still until the Egg-stealers came. They jumped over her head and when the time was right, she snapped her jaws on one of their legs. The Egg-stealer squirmed and tried to free itself from Dil's grip, then she let go and looked at the Egg-stealer with a sinister look. "Where's the way out?" Dil said with a demanding voice..
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Nice chapter. It looks like "poor Eggs-stealer" might live to see another sunrise. ;)
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Good as ever! Keep going :DD
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Another chapter! Hopefully things wont be to confusing now. A little funny thing: Ozzy, Strut, Ichy, Chomper and Pino are all ganged up(Sorta.) Making a Gang of Five.(Kinda like Littlefoot, Cera, Ducky, Petrie and Spike) If Dil entered the Story that would make a Gang of Six(Littlefoot, Cera, Ducky, Petrie, Spike and Chomper) um, anyway's. Onto the Story!
Strut is cured! Not really as bad as i thought though. And the fate of the Egg-stealer is revealed!
Chapter 18: Strut is cured
Ozzy looked at Chomper, surprised that he didn't take the chance to run away. Pino walked over to Chomper to take the flowers and quickly plugged her nose with one of her hands when she got a sniff. "Thanks." Pino said, smiling at Chomper. Pino went over to Ichy, who was holding the flowers with his wings. Pino took the flowers and Ichy gasped for air when Pino went over to Strut with the flowers. "I can breath!" Ichy said..
Pino took the flowers to Strut, who quickly plugged his nose. "No brother of mine is going to eat that!" Ozzy said while plugging his nose. "He has to eat these if you want him to get better." Pino said, looking up at Ozzy. Ozzy glared at Pino, but said nothing. Pino went over to Strut, who sniffed the flowers and looked up at Pino with a grossed-out look. "You have to eat these if you want to get better." Pino said with a quite voice. strut gulped, plugged his nose again and ate the flowers.. Everyone gathered around to see what would happen..
"That.." Strut began with a sour tone to his voice, but then the tone of his voice changed to surprise. "Actually taste's good!" Strut said, making Ozzy put his hand on his face. "Can you stand?" Ichy asked. Strut got up on his feet with almost no trouble at all. "That stuff really works." Pino thought to herself. "Thank you so much!" Strut said, smiling at Pino. "Your welcome." Pino said..
"Where's the way out?" Dil said in a damanding voice to the Egg-stealer. "D-dont hurt me!" The Egg-stealer begged. Dil felt like laughing at the Egg-stealer, but continued to growl. "And where's Ichy?" Dil said. "Ichy? He-he left with Ozzy and Strut many night circles ago!" The Egg-stealer said in a shakey voice. "He left!?" Dil growled at the Egg-stealer. "Dont hurt me!" The Egg-stealer yelped. Dil was about to snap her jaws on his head when she thought about something.. "How about you take me to wherever they were heading, or atleast lead me out of the
jungle and point me in the direction!" The Egg-stealer stopped shaking when he heard Dil's words. "But you might not survive." The Egg-stealer said with a more calmer tone to his voice. "You had better show me before i change my mind.." Dil said with a sinister tone..
Ozzy, Strut, Ichy, Chomper and Pino walked through the jungle for hours. Ozzy, Strut and Ichy were looking for their cave while Chomper and Pino hoped that they would run into their parents..
Ozzy looked back at Pino, still wondering if she could still be trusted..
"How did you know the flowers would work?" Chomper asked Pino. "Like i said back there, i saw some Horn-heads taking some to their sick kid. I didn't really know, i just guessed." Pino said, looking back at Chomper. "But Strut's sickness could have meant anything, right?" Chomper said, tipping his head. "Not sure." Pino said, rubbing her head. Pino looked up at Ichy, who was laying on Strut's back with his wings under his head. And by the sound of it, Ichy was fast asleep. Pino ignored the sound and continued following..
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Might try doing something different with the other chapters. Does an Alternet Chapter sound like a good idea? If i do Alt. Chapters they will be found on previous chapters. They will be the same chapter, just something a little different with them.. I wont do them right away though!
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Good chapter. I like how the "gang" is getting along. :)
And the alt. chapter idea thing, it sounds interesting.
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Thanks :) I did an Alt. Chapter of Chapter 4, not really much but it's pretty alternet! it's at the end of the chapter. going to put it up. Remember, it's on Chapter 4! :p
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Neat! Can't wait to read more :)
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Thanks :) (If anyone makes another game like "Who do you like more?" Im going to stay a few inches away from it.. :p)
Again, I did another chapter :p Any goof-ups let me know. And im also going to try working on some more Alt. Chapters, in the meantime, Enjoy :)
The Egg-stealer leads Dil out of the Land of Mist and into the mysterious beyond, and the gang find a small cave..
Chapter 19: Shelter
The Egg-stealer lead Dil to the edge of the jungle. Dil stepped out onto the sand, it felt weird to her but she continued. "Where are you going?" The Egg-stealer asked. "Im going to find Ichy!" Dil said, moving further into the desert. The Egg-stealer grinned to himself and went back into the mists..
Ozzy, Strut, Ichy, Chomper and Pino continued through the jungle but they still found no cave. By now the night circle was high up in the Sky Water had been coming down for some time now. Finally, they came to a stop..
Strut flopped down onto the ground and Ichy tried to find a big enough plant to hide under to keep his feathers from getting wet, but he could not find any. Chomper, Pino and Ozzy looked for a dry place to rest. "Over here!" Chomper said. Ichy, Pino, Strut and Ozzy went over to Chomper, who showed them a small cave.. Everyone entered the cave and looked around. It wasn't as large as the other cave, but anywhere was better then outside in the rain..
Ichy tried to dry himself off, but his wings still dripped. Ichy sat down and frowned. "I hate it when this happens.." Ichy thought to himself.. Strut layed down on the ground, Exhausted. He watched as everyone got into the cave to rest.. Chomper looked around the cave, he remembered being brought to the other cave and the memory made him shudder. Chomper looked back at Pino and felt a little bit more relieved that he wasn't alone, But at the same time he was afraid that Pino might get hurt.. Pino watched as Ichy tried to dry himself off again, but to no avail. She looked back at Chomper and smiled. She wasn't sure what to do though, she was afraid of Ozzy and was afraid that Chomper might get hurt, or worse.. Ozzy looked around. Pino looked at Ozzy and he looked back. Ozzy still didn't trust Pino even if she helped. Ozzy looked away and began searching for a place to rest..
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Pretty good.
And I'm also probably going to stay out of games like that while too :DD
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I hope we didn't break the game :( (We were posting pretty fast)
Probably going to write next chapter either today or tomorrow, Alt. Chapter will be tomorrow.
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Hey, well I finally got around to reading this little story of yours. Very good, and I am glad Strut got better, I always liked him even if he was the one to suggest throwing the kids off a cliff in the movie :)
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Thanks :)
Again, another chapter. not really to happy with it, My head has been hurting today so there's probably going to be a goof-up somewhere.. If you find any, let me know :)
Ozzy asks Pino a question: Why did she help?
Chapter 20: A quick question
Pino sat near the entrence to the cave, watching the Sky Water fall from the sky. She could not see any stars and was unable to see the night circle anywhere due to the sky puffies. Then a fast gust of wind almost knocked her down, she sat up and saw that the Sky Water was falling down even harder and she could hardly see what was outside of the cave. She quickly went away from the entrence when she heard a loud booming sound from outside..
Chomper sat next to Pino, who stared at the cave entrence. "You okay?" Chomper asked, making Pino jump slightly. "Yep, im okay." Pino said, smiling at Chomper. Chomper looked at the entrence to the cave, then back at Pino. "You miss your parents to?" Chomper said. Pino's smile soon faded away and she nodded. "It feels weird.." Pino said, looking back at the cave entrence.. "Im not used to being away from my Parents for this long." Pino said, looking down at her feet. "Sharptooth." Pino and Chomper looked up at Ozzy as he walked up to the two. "I want to talk with you for a minute.." Ozzy said. Pino and Chomper looked at eachother with a confused look, and looked back at Ozzy. Ozzy pointed at Pino and said.. "The Spined Sharptooth, Pino." Pino gulped, and looked back at Chomper. "Dont worry i wont hurt you.." Ozzy said, looking at Pino. Chomper looked at Pino. "I'll be okay." Pino said, looking back at Chomper with a smile.
Ozzy and Pino went to the back of the cave, Ozzy folded his arms and looked at Pino with a questioning look. "Just why did you help Strut?" Ozzy said with his usual tone of voice. "Well.." Pino began, looking up at Ozzy. Ozzy tapped his foot on the ground, waiting for an answer.. "I just wanted to help." Pino said. Ozzy's expresion softened up some, but he still looked at Pino with a glare. "Alright, that's all i wanted to ask.." Ozzy said, walking past Pino. Pino sighed with relief and went back over to where Chomper was..
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Yay!
I love your use of imagery in the first paragraph. It sets the scene very nicely.
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Great! The chapter was pretty sweet, Pino's very nice
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Another Chapter, Chomper and Pino's parents appear again! Got kinda confused though.. If you find any goof-ups let me know :)
Everyone goes to the back of the cave to keep warm, and the reason why Chomper's parents and Pino's parents aren't very friendly twords eachother is revealed! I think..
Chapter 21: Lies
Chomper watched as Ozzy and Pino went to the back of the cave to 'talk'. He wondered what it was they would talk about.. Chomper jumped when he heard the loud booming sound from outside the cave. "And i just fell asleep!" Ichy growled. "I cant even sleep with how loud the wind is." Strut said, shivering as another gust of wind went through the cave.. Chomper turned his head and saw Pino walking over to him. "What was it he asked?" Said Chomper. Pino sat down next to Chomper and said.. "Nothing much, just wondered why i helped.."
"When did it get this cold?" Ozzy said, shivering as another gust of wind blew through. "this isn't helping!" Ichy said, getting up and walking to the back of the cave. "Think we should follow him?" Strut said, looking at Ozzy, Pino and Chomper. Everyone nodded their heads and followed Ichy to the back of the cave..
A few hours have past and the Sky Water still came down and the Cold Wind still blew through the cave. Everyone huddled together to keep warm, and soon everyone fell asleep except for Chomper and Ichy..
"Never seen Sky Water come down like that before.." Ichy said to himself. "I have." Chomper replied. "Really?" Ichy said, looking up at Chomper. "It can get pretty bad." Chomper said, shivering. "How bad?" Ichy said, folding his wings. "it can last through alot of Night Circles.." Chomper said, trying to keep his arms from freezing from the cold air..
Tyra and Rano continued their search for Chomper, but they still could not find him. Tyra sniffed the air to see if she could find Chomper's scent, but cought the scent of another..
Acro slowly walked over to Tyra and Rano, both of them growling at Acro threataningly. "What do you want, Acro?" Tyra roared. "I only come to bring you news of your son." Acro growled in reply. Tyra and Rano looked at eachother, then back at Acro. "What news do you bring?" Rano roared. "The Spined Sharpteeth, when they retreated they killed your son. Pino is also guilty of this act." Acro growled. Tyra took a threataning step twords Acro and roared. "How do you know? Your blind!" Rano also growled threateningly at Acro. "My eyes may not see, but i could hear your son's voice crying for help.." Tyra and Rano looked at eachother then back at Acro. "How do we know your telling the truth?" Rano growled at Acro. Acro looked at Rano and growled. "They want you off the island, yes?" Tyra and Rano looked at eachother again, then back at Acro. "We will find the proof ourselfes." Tyra growled. "We will find the Spined Sharpteeth and make them tell us what they did to our son!"
Meanwhile, in a different part of the jungle, Spine and Spino searched for Pino, but found Acro instead..
"You are searching for Pino, am i correct?" Acro growled at the two Spined Sharpteeth. Spino stepped twords Acro and growled. "What do you know of our daughter?" Spino growled. "I could hear Pino calling for her parents, but Chomper ripped her throat out and she was eaten by Chomper's parents.." Acro growled. "You lie!" Spine roared at Acro. Acro looked at Spine and growled. "You saw one of the Sharpteeth attacking her, yes?" Spine growled at Acro. "Yes, and we want them off our island because of it!" Acro looked at Both Spine and Spino and growled at them both. "It is because of them that there is less food on this island and Pino unfortunately was on their list of food.." Spine roared at Acro. "Get out of our sight!" Acro snorted at the two Spined Sharpteeth then turned around and went back into the Jungle. Spino stepped over to Spine and growled. "Do we believe him?" Spine looked back at Spino and growled. "We will ask the sharpteeth ourselves.."
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Interesting. Can;t wait to see what happens next, the drama is really picking up!
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Yeah, I agree with Brek! Good stuff!
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Thanks :)
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Another Chappy! Kinda has a refrence to the song "Who needs you?" and Kinda ends in a cliff-hander, and if you find Any goof-ups, let me know :)
This is what happened when everyone sleeps huddled together in the back of the cave.. And Dil isn't doing to well, however her journey does not end there..
Chapter 22: Im Sorry
Chomper jumped when he heard the loud booming sound from outside the cave, he rubbed his eyes and looked around. Everyone else was still asleep, so that must mean that the bright circle is not in the sky yet, even though the sky puffies made it harder to tell if any of the great circles were in the sky. Chomper yawned and drifted back to sleep..
Pino's foot twitched when another cold gust of wind blew through the cave. She curled up and hugged the warmest thing she could find..
Ichy woke up when he felt something squeeze him. He turned his head and looked at Strut..
Strut woke up when he felt something kick him in the nose. He looked at Ichy with a 'Why did you hit me?' look on his face. "Can i have my feathers back?" Ichy said with a dry tone. "What?" Strut said. He looked down at his hand and saw feathers. "Im sleeping with someone who wont pull my feathers!" Ichy growled, folding his wings. "Sorry." Said Strut, handing the feathers to Ichy. Ichy took them and climbed over Strut to sleep somewhere where someone wont pull his fathers.. "Sure has a good kick for someone so small!" Strut thought to himself while rubbing his nose..
Ozzy woke up when he felt something tickle his nose. He looked down to see a feather. Ichy went over and picked up the feather. "Sorry, dropped something.." Ichy said, picking up the feather and walking away.. Ozzy then noticed something on his foot, he looked down and saw Pino holding onto his foot tightly. Ozzy grumbled to himself and layed his head back down to sleep..
Dil had been traveling for many night circles now and was beginning to feel weak, she had not found any food or water ever since she left the Land of Mist. She also began to wonder if it was a good thing to trust that Egg-stealer..
Dil flopped down onto the sand, to tired to continue. Her feet were soar and the sand was not helping, and she has never traveled this far without water. She could hear loud rumbling off in the distence, but was to tired to know what it was. She tried to stand up, but to no avail. "Im sorry Ichy.. I guess i really do disgrace the race that breeds me.." Dil said to herself before closing her eyes. She knew for sure that she would not wake up if she did fall asleep.. A few minutes later, Water began to fall from the sky..
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Good chapter, as always. The Who Needs you reference was good.
Update soon! :)
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Couldnt agree more. I wonder why Strut pulled Ichy's feathers? Maybe he was looking for a pillow? :p
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Yep :p
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Another chapter! Hopefully i dont have the timeline goofed up.. If you find any goof-ups let me know :)
Dil's fate is revealed..
Chapter 23: A Blur in the distence
Dil slowly openned her eyes and tried to look around. She felt like going back to sleep when she noticed everything was wet. She was quickly awakened by a loud booming sound and felt the Sky Water coming down. She at first was confused, but then she now knew what was going on and began to laugh. "Luck at last!" She said to herself, grinning evilly. She pressed forward through the Mysterious Beyond as fast as she could. "Ichy, here i come." She thought to herself. If it wasn't for the Sky Water she would have been dead..
Ozzy woke up with a head ache, he had a sleep story of being chased by a Belly Dragger and was not sure how the sleep story ended. He looked at the cave entrence and saw the Sky Water was still coming down, he would have sworn it was coming down even harder. Next, Pino woke up. She sat up and began to rub her eyes. "Well, Well. Someone has finally awoken." Ozzy said, looking back at Pino who yawned and stretched. Pino looked back at Ozzy and nodded.
Ichy then woke up, followed by Chomper and Strut.. Everyone watched the Sky Water, shivering when the cold wind blew through. Ichy stayed far away from the cave entrence, knowing that if he went close he would be blown away. Suddenly everyone heard a low grumbling noise and looked at Chomper. Chomper rubbed the back of his head and said. "Im hungry." Ichy shuddered at what Chomper said. Another grumble was heard and everyone looked at Ichy, who folded his wings. "Me too." Ichy said. He was only able to eat a few crunchy flyers ever since he got to the island, one of them even stung him. "I have not even gotten any eggs yet!" Ozzy said with a grumpy tone and frowned..
A thought struck Pino, she was lucky her scales were blue otherwise everyone would have seen her go pale. She remembered her parents had an egg not long ago and was beginning to feel uneasy with what Ozzy said. She had remembered what Chomper told her about the two Egg-stealers. he didn't remember much, just that they wanted to eat the egg he was in..
Dil stopped when she felt more water under her hands. for some reason it felt different then what she was used to. She lowered her head to drink some, only to spit it all out. "Yuck!" She growled at the horrable taste. She was wondering if it was water or not. She looked around and saw a large blur off in the distence. She readied herself for a long swim..
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Heh... It looks like Dil is finnaly catching up with Ichy. I wonder if he will be happy with this coming reunion? :p
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Good as always! :DD
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Yep! Good chapter!
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Another Chapter! Hopefully i wont be as slow for the next chapter.. This was kinda a tough one. I didn't want them all huddled together in the cave forever, so i tried to think up of a reason for why they left. and all i can come up with is the cave getting flooded? Might try an Alt. Chapter for this one.. Any goof-ups, let me know! :)
The gang leave the cave, and Dil arrives to the island!
Chapter 24: Bad Weather
Everyone watched as the water came down even harder, jumping when a loud booming sound is heard. Ichy stared at the entrence of the cave, hoping something small and eadable might poke its head through. Then everyone stood up suddenly. "Uh oh." Pino said to herself. Ichy looked at everyone with a confused look and said.. "What's the problem?" Strut pointed to the cave entrence. Ichy looked at the entrence and saw water coming through. He looked back at Strut with a dry expression and said.. "So? We've got some water coming in.." "That's the problem!" Pino yelped when she felt the water touching her foot. Ichy looked down at the ground and noticed everyone was standing in a puddle of water, which was coming from the cave entrence. He looked at the entrence again and saw the entrence was sloping upwards which meant that the cave could easily get flooded. "We're going to have to leave." Ozzy said. Ichy looked at Ozzy with a petrified stare. "Are you crazy? I'll get blown away!" Ichy said, flying infront of Ozzy's face. "He's got a point." Strut said, looking at Ichy then back at the cave entrence. "We could always hold onto our tails." Pino suggested, tugging her own tail. "That could work." Chomper nodded in agreement. "I dont know.." Ichy said, landing on Strut's head and folding his wings. "You can hold onto me. That way, if you fall off, either Chomper or Pino will catch you!" Strut said. Chomper and Pino nodded with agreement. Ichy thought for a moment, then he to agreed..
"And i just got my feathers dried!" Ichy thought to himself while holding on tightly to Struts neck.. "I cant see anything!" Ozzy yelled out. Strut was trying to keep his eyes open but the Sky Water kept going into them, making it harder to see. Chomper held on tightly to Struts tail while Pino held onto Chompers tail and tried to keep an eye out to see if Ichy falls off..
Still they continued through, making sure not to run into any sharpteeth. Suddenly a everyone was almost blinded by a bright flash, followed by a loud booming sound.. Pino was suddenly hit in the face by something with feathers and to her horror, she knew it was Ichy. "Ichy!" Pino yelped, Trying to hold onto Ichy's wing..
"Help!" Chomper yelped. Ozzy and Strut turned their heads and saw Pino holding onto Ichy's wing. They both tried to help Pino, but by the time they got their, Ichy was gone..
Dil crawled out of the big water and coughed. "I am not used to that kind of water!" She thought to herself. She walked into the jungle and bumped a tree..
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Good chapter! Even more suspense now! :DD
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Pretty cool.
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Oh no, Ichy! Good chapter :lol
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Another Chapter! When i did this the first time i forgot to save, Second time i did this the power went out. This is the third time and unfortunately the chapter is kinda short. Might try another fight scene in the next chapter. Any goof-ups, let me know :)
Chapter 25: Feeling guilty
"Ichy!" Both Pino and Chomper cried out when Pino lost her grip on Ichy's wing. Ozzy and Strut tried to look and see if they can see Ichy anywhere, but he was nowhere in sight..
Ichy tried hard to fly through the falling Sky Water, but it was to strong. Suddenly he rammed into a tree branch and held on tight, hoping the Sky Water will stop falling from the sky soon..
Ozzy, Strut, Pino and Chomper rested under a rocky hill. They searched for Ichy but could not find him. Soon the Falling Sky Water became to much for them and they had to seek shelter.. Pino sat with her hands on her chin. She felt guilty because of not holding onto Ichy's wing tightly enough and was worried that he might have been blown off the island or into a place with many sharpteeth.. Chomper felt the same way. He wanted to help, but he could not let go of Strut's tail otherwise everyone might have gotten lost..
Dil wandered through the jungle, ignoring the falling sky water. she tried to listen to see if there were any sharpteeth around but the loud booming sounds made it hard for her to hear anything. "I hope i dont have trouble hearing as well.." Dil thought to herself. Then she felt the ground shake. She looked around and saw a large sharptooth charging at her when a bright light flashed followed by the loud booming sound..
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Awesome! I just hope Ichy is safe!
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Another Chappy! atleast it's longer then the last chapter :p Unfortunately the "Battle Scene" Isn't really a Battle Scene at all :( And Plus: I wanted Ichy and Dil to have a slight soft spot.. Any goof-ups let me know :)
Chapter 26: Back Together
Dil snarled at the charging sharptooth, which stopped at the sight of Dil. "Who are you?" Growled the Sharptooth. "Who are you?" Dil growled in reply. "Listen, Belly Dragger! You better get off this island or you'll be desert!" The sharptooth roared and charged at Dil. Dil snarled and bit the nose of the Sharptooth. The Sharptooth whacked Dil with his tail, and she released him from her death grip. The Sharptooth backed away and shook his head. "Your pretty tough for a Belly Dragger." The Sharptooth growled. Dil tried to look at the sharptooth, but glared at a tree instead. "What did you expect?" Dil snarled in reply. The Sharptooth roared again, but to other meat eaters it would sound like a laugh. "My eyes might be scared, but atleast i can see." growled the sharptooth. Dil jerked her head to look at the sharptooth but looked at another tree. "Oh yeah? Well..!" Dil began, but could not find the right words. "pathetic.." The Sharptooth growled silently to himself and turned around and walked away. He turned to look at Dil and roared.. "My name is Acro! And you better come back when your more then a match for me!"
Pino raised her head and looked around. The Sky Water seemed to be falling less harder then before. "Must have fallen asleep." Pino thought to herself. She looked around and saw the others were still asleep. She lowered her head again and closed her eyes..
Ichy still held onto the tree branch, shivering. He looked around to make sure nothing was going to sneak up and eat him, but he did not feel like moving. He felt like going to sleep when he heard a voice.. "Ichy!" The voice cried out. Ichy slowly raised his head and looked around to see where the voice was coming from.. "Ichy! Where are you?" The voice yelled out again. When he heard the voice again, he knew for sure it was not the two Egg-stealers or the two Sharpteeth kids. "Dil?" Ichy whispered to himself..
"Ichy!" Yelled Dil, looking around for Ichy. She had been looking for Ichy all night and her throat was beginning to hurt. She frowned when she did not hear a reply and began to search in a different place..
"Dil?" Ichy said again, looking around to see if he could find Dil anywhere down below. He spotted Dil and almost fell of the tree branch. "Dil!" Ichy yelped loudly..
"Ichy?" Dil said with an almost confused tone to her voice. She looked around to see where Ichy was but could not find him. Suddenly she heard a strange thump sound come from infront of her..
"Ow.." Ichy mumbled to himself. He sat up and looked around. Infront of him was Dil, she looked confused and almost worried. "Ichy?" Dil said with a tone of voice Ichy would never have thought she could have. "Ichy!" Dil said with a happy tone to her voice. She charged at Ichy and knocked him down with her nose. "Ow!" Yelped Ichy. "I cant believe i found you!" Dil said, smiling at Ichy. "I was worried!" Dil said, nuzzling Ichy with her nose. "Wait a minute.." Ichy thought to himself.. "You were worried?" Ichy said. Dil nodded and frowned. "You were right. I cant do anything without 'the eyes'" Dil said with a sad tone to her voice. Ichy began to feel slightly bad and put a wing on her nose. "Im sorry Dil.." Ichy said. Dil smiled happily and began to lick Ichy. "Dil! Stop it!" Ichy yelped..
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Great chapter! I wonder if you're going for an IchyxDil pairing?
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Kinda yeah, Kinda no. If i did do an IchyXDil pairing they'll still probably argue alot. I kinda like that pairing though ^_^
In Other news: I did another chappy and not sure what to title it.. Any Goof-ups, let me know :)
Chapter 27: The Plan revealed
Chomper openned his eyes and looked around. He noticed that the Sky Water was not falling as hard like before and the booming sounds were quiter. he was going to go back to sleep when he heard voices. he got up and went to where the voices were coming from..
"If it wasn't for you my plan would have worked!" Ozzy growled at Strut. "If im not mistaken, you wanted revenge as well!" Ozzy said. "But Ozzy-" Strut began, but was cut off. "But what?" Ozzy said with a sinister tone. "Well.." Strut said, but was unable to find the right words. Ozzy shook his head and continued.. "When we go, we're going to go to a high enough cliff and drop them!"
Chomper almost froze when he heard what Ozzy said. He immediately ran over to where Pino was and tried to wake her up. "Pino! Wake up!" Chomper said in a whisper. Pino raised her head and yawned. "What's wrong?" Pino said, rubbing her eyes. "We have to go, they're going to try and kill us!" Chomper chirped. Pino's eyes widened up when she heard Chomper's words..
Both Chomper and Pino snuck out into the rain, they thought they were safe when the bumped into Ozzy..
"Ozzy!" Yelled Ichy. "Ozzy?" Said Dil, trying not to bump into anything. "Who is Ozzy?" Dil asked. Ichy looked down at Dil and said.. "Ozzy is an Egg-stealer.." "An Egg-stealer!?" Said Dil with surprise. "Yes, Dil. an Egg-stealer. He has a brother with him called Strut. they both want revenge.." Ichy said with a grin. "Revenge? Against who?" Dil asked. "I sharptooth called Chomper, and a Longneck called Littlefoot." Ichy said. "Littlefoot!?" Dil replied, bumping into a tree..
"Well, well. Where do you think you're going?" Ozzy said with a sinister tone. Chomper and Pino tried to run away, but Strut was also blocking their way. "What do you want with Pino?" Chomper said, walking up to Ozzy. "If it wasn't for her, Strut might have died!" Chomper said, reminding Ozzy about the time when Strut was sick. "She said so herself, it wasn't as bad as it looked!" Ozzy replied with a venomus tone. "Bad or not, is that the thanks she gets?" Chomper said, looking at Pino then back at Ozzy. "He does have a point." Strut said, but was silenced by one of Ozzy's evil glares. "Let Pino go." Chomper said. Ozzy looked back at Chomper and replied. "How do i know this isn't one of your tricks?" Ozzy said with a questioning tone to his voice. "Let Pino go, she has not done you any harm has she?" Chomper replied again..
Pino frowned and walked up next to Chomper. "Im not going anywhere!" Pino said, looking at Ozzy with a mad look. "Im sticking with my friend till the end." Pino said. "Pino do you know what he might do?" Chomper whispered to Pino. Pino looked back at Chomper and replied. "Yep, but i cant leave you here with these guys! besides i might have a plan.." Pino said, grinning. She looked back at Ozzy and said.. "Besides, i think i might know of a place where theres eggs.." Pino said, smiling at Ozzy. "Cant you come up with a better plan then that?" Ozzy said with a dry tone to his voice.. Pino looked back at Chomper and whispered. "Is there a plan B?"
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Good chapter!
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Its really Cool. Keep going!
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Yes, it's a good chapter.
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Trying to keep up with the story, unfortunately im starting to get slower now :( But i dont want to get slower!
In other news: Another chapter, another cliff hanger. Next chapter, someone might get hurt.. :o And you know what to do if you find any goof-ups :)
Chapter 28: Escaped
Ichy and Dil continued their search for Ozzy, Strut, Pino and Chomper, but did not find them.. Ichy was beginning to feel uneasy with the environment and was beginning to hear strange thumping sounds. "Hey Dil?" Ichy said, looking down at Dil. "Yeah?" Dil replied. Ichy looked around and continued.. "Is it me, or should we not be here?" Ichy said, looking at the different bones in the area. "Why? What is it?" Dil said, now with a slightly worried tone to her voice. "You really need to work on seeing better.." Ichy said, shaking his head. "The area is filled with bones!" "Bones!?" Dil stopped all of a sudden, almost sending Ichy flying off her back. She looked around but could not see anything. "Next time let me know when your going to stop like that!" Ichy growled, rubbing the back of his head. "Im starting to hear that thumping noise you were talking about!" Dil said in a scared voice. Ichy looked around the area, then back at Dil. "Lets continue, no sense standing around talking about thumpings and bones!" Ichy said, trying to laugh but it only came out as a fake chuckle. Then, Ichy and Dil continued through this strange place..
"Psst, Chomper!" Pino chirped silently to Chomper while Ozzy talked to Strut about the plan to get rid of the two sharpteeth. Chomper turned his head and listened.. "While they're talking, we're going to make a run in different directions" Pino said..
"... And like i said before, we take them to a cliff and drop them!" Ozzy said, stomping his foot. "But what if the sharpteeth come back again?" Strut said, itching his head. "That was then, this is now!" Ozzy said, shaking his head. He went to look back at the two sharpteeth but they were nowhere in sight..
Chomper ran as fast as he could. He was beginning to remember that time when his parents battled the spined sharpteeth. He wondered if they were still alive..
Pino stumbled when she hit her toe on a rock while running. She was able to get her balance, but wont be able to run as fast now. Her toe was beginning to hurt badly and she had to hop. She suddenly stopped when the area grew dark, and looked up at the large sharptooth infront of her..
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Good as always! :DD
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Thanks again :) and once more another chapter. Be Warned! Someone gets hurt! :o surprised they still have their leg in tact though..
Chapter 29: I cant just leave you there!
"Ow!" Dil yelped, stepping on another bone. "Would you stop scarring me like that?" Ichy growled. He looked around to make sure nothing nearby heard them. "Ow!" Ichy jumped again when he heard the next yelp. "How many times do i have to tell you Di-" Ichy began, but was cut off when he saw Chomper infront of Dil..
Ozzy searched for where Chomper had went. He was beginning to hate Chomper and was starting to think plans over.. Suddenly he heard a scream, but it was not Chomper. He followed the sounds of the screaming..
"Help!!" Cried Pino as she ran away from the sharptooth called Acro. She accidently stepped on a small tree crawler's tail and stumbled. When she regained her balance, she ran into someone and fell. She looked up and saw that it was Ozzy, looking down at her with that sinister look..
"Now your going to..!" Ozzy began, but was cut off when he heard something coming. He looked up and saw the sharptooth, charging twords them..
Both Pino and Ozzy ran as fast as they could away from Acro. Pino tried hard not to stumble again, but it was hard with her toe..
Ozzy was beginning to think being around sharpteeth kids was bad luck..
Suddenly they ran into what seemed to be a dead end. They stood infront of a large cliff, but Pino knew that it was climbable. Pino immediately ran over to the rocks and began to climb. She knew Ozzy would follow Pino, and was not sure what he would do to her if another dead end awaited on top. She almost lost her balance when she heard a painfull yell. She looked back down and saw Ozzy being dragged down by Acro who had bitten Ozzy's leg..
Ozzy tried to hold onto the rocks, but was unable to. He struggled to get free but was unable to. Suddenly, Acro let go of Ozzy's leg and growled. Ozzy looked up and saw Pino throwing small stones at Acro. Ozzy quickly climbed up just in time for Acro to try and bite Ozzy only to smash his head on the rocks..
Pino helped Ozzy climb to the top. They both looked down at Acro who roared at them angrilly, and walked away..
"Why did you help me?" Ozzy said, looking at Pino with confusion. Pino looked up at him and smiled. "Call me a fool, but i couldn't just leave you there to get eaten! It just doesn't seem right.." Pino said, now looking down at her feet. Ozzy wasn't sure if he should be angry or thankful. finally he walked past Pino and said "Thanks." with a dry tone to his voice..
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Pretty intense chapter.
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Thanks :) Sorry it's taking so long for the next chapter. I've been taking a break for some time now, hopefully i should have the next chapter done in a couple :)
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No hurry babidi :)
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I Just finished next chapter, things will hopefully be getting a little more interesting now :) hopefully i wont take so long next time :p Any Goof-ups, let me know! :)
Chapter 30: Through Darkness
Ozzy walked away from Pino but stopped when he saw something. "What's wrong?" said Pino, walking up to Ozzy. She looked to see what Ozzy was looking at and jumped up. "A Cave!" She yelped happily, but thought about where Chomper could be. "I hope he's okay.." Pino thought to herself. "Follow me." Said Ozzy, walking forward. Pino looked up and followed..
"Sure is spooky in here." Whispered Pino. "Do you think we'll be safe in here?" Pino said, looking in the direction Ozzy is in. "No. But, Shh!" Ozzy replied, looking back at Pino with a glare. "Sorry." Pino replied..
Ozzy and Pino continued through the dark cave, struggling to see. Pino was starting to feel a slight chill and thought she could hear something moving up above. Suddenly she tripped on a rock and landed infront of something that sent a shiver down her spine. She blinked in confusion until she finally found out what it was.. "Skull!" Yelped Pino, Running away from the skull and bumped into Ozzy. "Two words, Sharptooth." Ozzy began with an annoyed tone to his voice. "Shut. Up. And be quite!" Ozzy said, continuing forward. Pino looked down at her feet, then back at the skull. If there's a skull in the cave there must be something bad..
"Ow! Who hit me?" Growled Dil, staring down at the small blue blur which was Chomper. Chomper began to back away slightly from Dil until he noticed Ichy. "Ichy!" Chomper yelped. "Hey! How do you know about Ichy?" Dil said with a tone of voice that was both Angry and Confused. Ichy flew off of Dil and landed infront of Chomper. "This is the Sharptooth kid i've been telling you about, Chomper." Ichy said with a grin. "And your Dil?" Chomper asked, looking back at Dil. "Ichy! Since when were you friends with a sharptooth?" Dil growled, trying to look at Ichy but turned her head a little to far and stared at another tree. "Im over here Dil.." Ichy sighed, poking the side of Dil's nose. Dil turned her head a little to fast and knocked Ichy over. "Would you stop doing that?" Growled Ichy, getting up and rubbing his wings. "And no, im not friends with this sharptooth." Ichy said. "Then what about those Egg-stealers, Ichy?" Dil asked with a dry tone to her voice. "Pino!" Yelped Chomper. He turned around but was stopped by Ichy. "What about her?" Ichy said. "Ichy! How many sharpteeth are you friends with?" Growled Dil again. Ichy looked back at Dil and said. "For the last time Dil, im not friends with any sharpteeth!" Dil snorted, almost insulted at what Ichy said. Ichy looked back at Chomper and continued.. "Now tell me, what happened to Pino? And what about Ozzy and Strut?" "Ichy.." Dil began but was cut off when Ichy held her mouth shut with his wings..
Strut looked around, wondering which way to go. "Chomper?" Said Strut, but there was no reply. He continued forward looking for either Chomper or Pino but could not find them. He was beginning to get that feeling that he was lost. Suddenly, he felt the ground shaking and made a run for it to get away from whatever was making the ground rumble..
Ozzy and Pino continued their way through the cave. For some reason though, everything was starting to get lighter, then they saw why. This part of the cave they were in had strange sparkles all over the walls and above, unfortunately that wasn't the only thing that was above..
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Oh, neat! Good chapter.
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Thanks :) Probably going to read up a little bit more about the critters appearing in the next chapter. The only thing i saw them in was in the game (Disney's) Dinosaur and im not sure how big they are. Hopefully i'll have next chapter up tomorrow :)
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Yay! Another Chapter! :) Has a refrence to Lion King(Strut uses a quote). Any Goof-ups, let me know :)
Chapter 31: It's gonna eat me!
"Ozzy? What is that strange chattering noise?" Pino asked, looking around. Ozzy turned around and grumbled. "That chattering noise is you chattering your teeth!" Ozzy said. Pino tried to stop chattering her teeth but to no avail. Suddenly they saw a strange glow coming from up ahead. "What's that over there?" Pino said, tipping her head. Both Ozzy and Pino went in the direction the strange glow was in and saw something they never thought they would see. All over the cave were strange shining stones of many shapes and sizes. Pino walked up to a small one and picked it up. "Look at this, Ozzy!" Pino said happily, walking over to Ozzy. "I never would have thought we would see these! It's a shame Chomper, Ichy and Strut aren't here to see these." Pino said. She looked up and pointed to the other shiney glows from above. "Their even up there!" She said, smiling. Unfortunately, the glowings from above were the eyes of many, many creatures. "I dont think those are the shining stones.." Ozzy said, backing away slowly. Pino looked up again and saw that the creatures from above began to fly after them. "Run!" Yelled Ozzy..
Ozzy and Pino ran away from the strange flyers, not daring to look back..
"Ozzy! Wait for me!" Pino yelped, trying to keep up with Ozzy but tripped on another rock. She got up and began to run after Ozzy, but noticed she did not have the shining stone. She turned around and saw the stone a few feet away. "Ozzy! The Stone!" Yelped Pino, running over to get the stone. "Just forget about it!" Yelled Ozzy in reply, but it was to late. Pino had reached the stone, but was hiddin from sight when the strange flyers surrounded her, and before Ozzy knew it, he to was surrounded..
"Ozzy! Strut!" "Pino!" Yelled both Ichy and Chomper. "Ichy, im hungry!" Dil said, her stomach growling. "Your hungry? I've only been able to eat small crunchy flyers!" Ichy replied, folding his wings. Suddenly they heard a voice yelling out. "Help!" It said. Dil looked in the direction where the voice had came and began to follow it, unfortunately she walked into a tree..
Strut ran as fast as he could away from a Sharptooth. Strut did not look back to see what the colors on the sharptooth were but by its reaction on seeing Strut, it was probably one of Chomper's parents. Suddenly he tripped on something, which growled..
"Hey! Watch where your going!" Growled Dil. Ichy and Chomper got up to see who had tripped. "Strut!" Both Ichy and Chomper said at the same time. Ichy got up off of Dil and went over to Strut. "What's going on?" Ichy said. Strut looked back at Ichy and replied. "IT'S GONNA EAT ME!!" "No, Ichy told me not to eat two Egg-stealers called-" Dil began, but was interrupted by a loud roar.. Ichy, Dil and Chomper looked in the direction where the roar had come from. "Mommy!" Chomper said, getting up off of Dil..
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All right! Chomper's parents are coming back! :)
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Kinda short but i did not want to keep everyone waiting again. Next Chapter will probably be about Ozzy and Pino's little adventure in the cave. After that, hopefully it will be about Chomper's parents.
Chapter 32 Verse 1: Strange Flyers
"Mommy!" Chomper chirped out loudly at the sound of a sharptooth's roar which he knew to be his mother. Ichy imedietely flew over to Chomper and tried to stop him from chirping anymore. "Quite! If she comes here we're going to be dinner!" Ichy said, hearing another roar. Chomper looked down at Ichy, then back at where the sound of his mother were. "Remember, we have to find Pino first!" Ichy said again. Chomper thought for a moment, then nodded in agreement. Ichy flew back onto Dil and asked Strut, who was still shacking, if he was alright. "Yes, but i almost lost my tail!" Said Strut, shivering at the thought of Chomper's mom lunging at him almost biting off his tail. Both Ichy and Strut looked over at Chomper(Dil tried to look but looked at a nearby tree stump.) "Can i tell her i am alright?" Chomper said, looking back at Ichy. Ichy thought for a moment, and nodded. "Just dont lead her to us!" Said Ichy. Chomper chirped loud enough for the sharptooth to hear, then went over to Dil and climbed ontop..
"Ozzy! Help!" Pino yelped, trying to use the Shiney Stone as protection from the strange flyers. She heard Ozzy saying something but could not make out what he was saying thanks to the flyers..
"Go away! Go!" Ozzy growled, trying to whack the flyers away with his claws and tail. He heard Pino yelling out for help and replied "Im a little busy at the moment!" but was not sure if Pino would be able to hear..
Pino held the shiney stone up for protection against the flyers. She waited for one of them to fly down and snatch her up but they did not..
Ozzy tried to see if he could see Pino anywhere, but she was not found. Ozzy then saw a tunnel and ran inside it get as far away from the flyers as possable..
Pino lowered the stone when she could no longer hear the flapping of wings and the screeching cries of the flyers. She looked around and saw Ozzy was gone..
"Ozzy?" Pino said in a squeeky voice. She looked in the direction the flyers went and thought to herself. "Did they take him away?" She shuddered at the thought of what they would do. Even if he tried to kill her, she still did not want anyone to get hurt. She turned around when all of a sudden something flew into her face.
It yelped on impact and flumped to the ground. Pino held the stone up in defence but thought for a moment. Whatever flew into her face, it was small. She lowered the stone again and looked down at the creature that flew into her. It had long clawed fingers with webbings and pointy ears and it did not have the face of a usual flyer. She sat the stone down and picked the flyer up. She gently rubbed her finger on the flyer's belly to make sure it was alright and noticed that the flyer had soft ticklies all over. "These little guys weren't attacking us, they were fleeing from us." Pino thought to herself. The flyer then began to stur and yelped in fear when it saw Pino. Pino jumped when she heard the little flyer yelp and dropped it. "Oops, im sorry!" Pino said. The flyer backed away but flopped down. Pino moved closer and the flyer held it's wings up in defence. "Dont hurt me!!" The flyer squeeked. Pino gently held her hand out and pat it on the head with her finger. "Dont worry, i wont hurt you!" Pino said, smiling. The flyer looked at Pino and gulped at the sight of her smiling. Pino noticed that the flyer was still afraid and that her smile, which showed her teeth, probably scared it even more. "What is your name?" Pino said, now smiling without showing her teeth. "My name Eris." Said the flyer called Eris. "Eris huh? Funny name!" Pino said, patting her finger on Eris' head again. "What's wrong with my name?" Eris said, frowning. "No, i wasn't making fun of your name, it's just.. Well.." Pino began but stopped for a moment. "I've never seen a flyer like yourself before.." Pino said, gently putting Eris down. "Welp, we call ourselves Night Flyers." Eris said, folding his wings. "Night Flyers, huh? but how can you see in the dark?" Pino said, itching her head. "Welp, we.. Can see in the dark! It's not that hard." Eris said, trying to crawl away. Pino looked around but could not see anything. "It's way to dark!" Pino said, frowning. "Welp, guess we're just born with it.." Eris said, crawling up onto a rock and sitting down. "Welp, i guess we dont really see in the dark.." Eris said, itching his ear with his small thumb, which was not long like the other fingers and not webbed either. "Ya see.." Eris began but was interupted by Pino. "No, i dont see." Pino said, sitting down and feeling around for the shiney stone. "Har har, very funny. Ya see, we dont really see in the dark. When we screech, we can hear what is infront of us or.. We can hear what's here and what's there.." Eris said. Pino thought about what Eris had said and was not sure if she understood or not. Then she shrugged and yelped loudly..
Ozzy wandered through the tunnel and was having trouble seeing where he was going. Suddenly the cave shook and he heard a loud yelp coming from behind..
Eris flew over to Pino's mouth and quickly closed her mouth. "What are you trying to do, burry us?" Eris said with a squeeky voice that tried to sound like that of a sharptooth. "Sorry." Pino said with a quite voice. Eris sighed and hopped off of Pino's nose. Pino looked down at the stone in her hands and looked around to see if she could find any light anywhere, but she could not find any. "If your looking for a way out, an Egg stealer just went-" Eris began, but was cut off again by Pino. "Really? You saw him? Where did he go?" Pino said, hopping up and down. "Calm down, he just went over there in that tunnel." Eris said, pointing his wing in the direction of the tunnel Ozzy went through. "Where?" Pino said, looking in the direction Eris is pointing in. Eris sighed again and flew over to the tunnel. "See now?" Eris said in a grumpy tone. Pino walked over to where Eris was and saw the tunnel finally. She went inside and looked back but Eris was gone. "Thanks.." Pino said, then entered the tunnel..
Chapter 32 Verse 1: Strange Flyers
"Mommy!" Chomper chirped out loudly at the sound of a sharptooth's roar which he knew to be his mother. Ichy imedietely flew over to Chomper and tried to stop him from chirping anymore. "Quite! If she comes here we're going to be dinner!" Ichy said, hearing another roar. Chomper looked down at Ichy, then back at where the sound of his mother were. "Remember, we have to find Pino first!" Ichy said again. Chomper thought for a moment, then nodded in agreement. Ichy flew back onto Dil and asked Strut, who was still shacking, if he was alright. "Yes, but i almost lost my tail!" Said Strut, shivering at the thought of Chomper's mom lunging at him almost biting off his tail. Both Ichy and Strut looked over at Chomper(Dil tried to look but looked at a nearby tree stump.) "Can i tell her i am alright?" Chomper said, looking back at Ichy. Ichy thought for a moment, and nodded. "Just dont lead her to us!" Said Ichy. Chomper chirped loud enough for the sharptooth to hear, then went over to Dil and climbed ontop..
"Ozzy! Help!" Pino yelped, trying to use the Shiney Stone as protection from the strange flyers. She heard Ozzy saying something but could not make out what he was saying thanks to the flyers..
"Go away! Go!" Ozzy growled, trying to whack the flyers away with his claws and tail. He heard Pino yelling out for help and replied "Im a little busy at the moment!" but was not sure if Pino would be able to hear..
Suddenly the flyers landed around them. They did not look like the normal flyers like Chomper's friend, Petrie. They had strange wings that looked like arms with very long fingers with webbings on them and they had long ears..
Pino saw one of the flyers crawling over to her. She held the Shiney Stone up to protect herself from the 'flyer' but to no avail. She felt it sniffing her and then finally, it spoke..
"What are you and your.. Egg-stealer friend doing here?" Asked the flyer. "Friend?" Ozzy said out loud. He must have overheard what the flyer had said and was suddenly silenced by loud screeching noises. "Speak when you are spoken to!" The Flyer said with a threatening voice. He looked down at Pino again and repeated. "What are you and that Egg-stealer doing here?" The Flyer said with a louder tone to his voice. "We were just trying to hide from Acro!" Pino said with a shakey voice. To her surprise, the Flyers began to chirp and screech silently until the same Flyer said. "You will follow us to the main chamber where Lune will judge you.." The Flyer said, crawling away..
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Chapter 33 verse 1: Unfortunate Enimey
Eris flew out of the cave and looked around. The night circle was now in the sky and there were no signs of his other brothers and sisters anywhere, meaning he could now roam the island alone..
He flew in search of slimey crawlers and crunchy flyers to feast on. he was about to screech until something closed it's jaws on him.
Whatever he was in, it was laughing a very mean sounding laugh. Finally, it openned it's mouth and Eris flew out but stopped when the thing that almost ate him said.. "Your family is not enough to satisfy my hunger, i am looking for an egg stealer and a spined sharptooth." Said the creature who Eris knew the creature was Acro. Eris shuddered at the thought of what Acro did to his brothers and sisters but decided to say nothing about them. Instead he told him about Ozzy and Pino..
Tyra continued her search for the Egg stealer she had seen. She could not forget the memory of him, he was the one who held her son by the neck at the great valley. At the same time, she was thinking about the chirping noise. Was it Chomper or was it Pino? She wasn't exactly sure who it was..
Strut kept an eye out for anymore sharpteeth. He was almost eaten by Chomper's Mom and the thought gave him chills, and being around Dil did not help at all..
"Hey Ichy? Im tired. How about we rest the eyes for a few?" Dil said, yawning. Ichy nooded in agreement and said.. "Yeah, i'll take a snooze for a few while you continue walking." Ichy was about to curl up until Dil stopped and growled. "Oh no, im not doing that again!" Ichy sat up again to say something but was interupted by Dil. "Ichy, your outnumbered. A sharptooth, An Egg stealer and Me against you. A small little twittering and squawking sharp beak." Dil said. Ichy looked at Strut, who was still keeping an eye out for Sharpteeth. Then Chomper who was watching, then at last he looked at Dil, who grinned sinisterly. "You know, she's got a pretty good.." Chomper began but stopped when Ichy poked him in the nose. "It will be very importent that you do not finish that sentence.." Ichy said with a grumble..
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Chapter 33 verse 2: The Nightflyers
Ozzy and Pino followed the strange ones to their main chamber. It also had the strange shiney stones in the main chamber as well, but somehow the main chamber seemed darker.
"The Great Nightflyer is in there.." The Strange Flyer, now called a Nightflyer said, pointing his wing in the direction of a dark tunnel. "Nightflyer! I've heard about you!" Pino yelped suddenly. Ozzy looked down at Pino with a glare and said. "Now is not the time to get excited.." Pino looked back up at Ozzy and smiled. "Right, sorry." Pino said.
Ozzy and Pino went inside the dark tunnel. The ground they walked on was beginning to feel rough and sharp, both Ozzy and Pino were beginning to feel that their feet were getting scratched and bruised. Finally they stopped when they heard a voice coming from all directions..
"Who enters the lair of the Great Nightflyers?" Said the voice. The voice sounded old and wise and whatever the voice belong to, it was female..
"Let me do the talking!" Pino whispered to Ozzy. Pino walked up and looked around. The chamber had many tunnels where one could easily get lost. "Oh great nightflyer!" Pino began. "We did not mean to intrude, Honest! We we're only looking for a place to hide from Acro!" Pino said. "Acro? That old scar scale?" Replied the voice. Pino nodded and then from one of the many tunnels came a large Nightflyer. It was larger then the others and was gray with pale eyes that seemed to glow. "Little Spined Sharptooth, i will offer you a test. And same goes for you, Egg-stealer." The Great Nightflyer said, looking at both Ozzy and Pino. "There are two tunnels you must take to exit the cave. Little Sharptooth, you will take the tunnel next to the one i came from and you must face a terrible sharptooth, almost as bad as Acro." Said the Great Nightflyer, looking at Pino who gulped. "Egg-stealer, you will take the tunnel next to the one you came from.." The Great Nightflyer said, looking at Ozzy. "Within the tunnel, are the same shining stones that you saw. However, if you luck at the stone you will see yourself and something very deadly.." The Great Nightflyer said, shuddering. "And what is this very deadly thing?" Ozzy said, folding his arms. The Great Nightflyer shook her head and crawled back to the tunnel where she came from. "Go through the tunnels alive and you will both meet eachother again on the other side. Do not come back here again, you will not be welcome on your second visit.." Said the Great Nightflyer.
Pino walked over to her tunnel and looked inside. She could only see darkness which made her shudder. "If there's one thing i hate, it's dark tunnels!" She thought to herself. She looked back at Ozzy, who was just about to enter his tunnel and yeld out. "Good luck! here i go!" Pino yelled with a smile. she looked back at her tunnel, gulped, and entered..
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Unfortunately i have no new chapters, but i had to go back to chapter 32 and make another verse(Will do another verse of chapter 33 because that one was a tad but to unrealistic.) The Boo-boo on both chapters were bugging me and i had to go back to fix it. The new version of chapter 32 can be read at the top, version 2(Which was actually the first but not as realistic) can be read at the bottom. Reason why i had to change it: Critter was 14 inches big and i made them seem like their pretty big which their not! Anyway's, enjoy the newer, better version of chapter 32! :)
EDIT: Alrighty, i did another verse of Chapter 33. Ichy and Chomper have a quote from Lost World: Jurassic Park.
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Ozzy is my favourite character.... namely because hes angry all the tme when everyone else is so happy and light hearted. Produces a nice character contrast between him and the others.
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At long last, another chapter! :) What are the chances of Chomper's home having a whole cave full of Crystal? And yes, a cliff hanger :p
Chapter 34: Through darkness through mirrors
Ozzy wandered through the tunnel, stopping every time he heard a noise or seeing something stur within the darkness. He was about to turn back when he saw a shining up ahead. He went closer to where the shining was coming from and saw a chamber full of more of those shiney stones. He looked around and saw that the chamber now had three pathway's. One could lead to the exit hopefully, just as long as he picks the right path. Finally, he decided he chose the path on the left..
Just as Ozzy left the chamber, Pino entered the chamber next. Her jaw dropped at the sight of the chamber, never before has she seen anything so beautyful in her life. She looked down at the shiney stone in her hand and held it close. "I cant wait to show Chomper and my Mommy and Daddy." Pino thought to herself, smiling. She walked forward but stopped when she saw the three tunnels. "Oh.. Daddy always had me troubled with this game." Pino thought to herself, remembering the games Spino played with her. He took a hopper and hid it under one rock and mixed the three rocks up for Pino to guess which one the hopper was hiding under. "Always wondered he Daddy never squished the hopper's, oh well.." Pino thought to herself. She looked at the three tunnels and entered the middle tunnel..
Ozzy turned around when he thought he heard a sound coming from behind. Seeing nothing, he turned around to continue walking only to be startled by a creature infront of him. He looked at the creature and noticed that it was making the exact same movements he was making. Not only that, but it looked exactly like him. He moved closer and the creature did the same thing. He put his hand on the creature and it did the same. Ozzy then noticed that there was no creature and that the creature was only his reflection. Ozzy growled in anger and continued his journey through the tunnel..
Pino continued to stare in awe at the tunnel full of shiney stones. Then her look of awe changed to confusion as she saw creatures that looks almost like her. One creature, which made her even more confused, looked like a small, chubby version of herself. She moved closer and the creature did the same. She went to touch the creature but saw that it was only her reflection. She iched her head and saw the reflection doing the same. Suddenly she thought of an idea. She put her fingers in her mouth and pulled her cheecks and saw her reflection make a funny face. She laughed at the sight and tried another trick. She held her upper lip up and saw her reflection doing the same thing. She began to laugh harder, but then noticed more unusual reflections of herself on other shiney stones. "This is going to be fun!" She thought to herself..
Ozzy folded his arms and growled to himself. He was beginning to get tired of seeing himself in different shapes and sizes and seeing his reflection with a small body and a big head with even bigger eyes didn't exactly help one bit. Suddenly he heard a small laugh from behind. He quickly looked back but could not see anything. He listened for it again and he heard the laughing again, which sounded almost like Pino. Ozzy gulped and continued his journey..
Pino hopped up and down watching her reflection having a big head to big feet as it hopped up and down as well. Pino stopped when she heard a growling noise. She frowned and looked down at her stomach. "Im hungry.." She thought to herself. She looked back at her reflection and waved goodbye and continued her journey as well..
Ozzy kept an eye out for the nightflyers or anything else that will look at him and think of him as Food. Just then he heard a loud growl coming from behind and he slowly turned around. He saw a very small reflection of himself, but saw that a huge, gient, ugly creature looked down at him. It seemed to almost grin which made his stomach churn. "S-s-s-SHARPTOOTH!" Ozzy screamed in terror and ran away as fast as he could. The Gient Sharptooth moved forward but began to shrink until Pino walked out from behind the shiney stones. She looked around and gulped. "Sharptooth?" She said to herself, backing up but tripped and fell down a dark tunnel..
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Another chapter, expect this one is pretty rushed and i ran out of ideas. I promise next chapter will be better! :)
Chapter 35:
Pino tumbled down through the darkness and finally landed with a thump. Then she began to slide and she was beginning to feel awfully dizzy. She yelp when she began to slide acrost the wall and over to the next. Then she prepaired for the worst when she saw a large gap and many other tunnels that were acrost the gap. She tried to stop but to no avail and before she knew it, she was flying over the gap, screaming..
Ozzy quickly looked in all directions when he heard a loud scream. Suddenly the screaming was replaced by "oof!" and "Ouch!" And then he felt something hard slam into the back of his head..
Pino leaned back and forth and rubbed her head. She suddenly heard a low moan from where she was sitting and looked down to see Ozzy, laying on the ground with a look that seemed like he was hit in the head by a rock. "Ozzy!" Pino said, happily..
Ichy struggled to keep himself from falling asleep while he flew. He was tired, and he was angry at Dil who had finally made him go see if he could find a suitable place to stay while Chomper, Strut and Dil rested. His eyelids gradually got heavier and heavier until he could no longer keep his eyes open, until suddenly, something flew into his face..
Ichy tumbled down and landed on a few tree branches and then finally landed on the ground with a thud. He rubbed his head and looked to see what had flew into him and saw a small unusual looking flyer which rubbed its head as well..
"Who in the land of mist's are you?" Ichy said, folding his wings. The Flyer looked at Ichy and gave a silent yelp. "Eris!" The Flyer called Eris said. Ichy walked closer to Eris and examined him and added in. "What in the land of mist's are you?" Ichy said, rising an eyebrow. "Im a Nightflyer!" Eris said, folding his arms as well. "Never heard of them." Ichy said. "Welp, better get going!" Eris quickly said but was interupted by Ichy. "Hey wait!" Ichy said before Eris quickly flew away. "Know any good places to rest for the night?" Ichy said. Eris looked at Ichy and said "Welp, there is a cave just up, a couple minutes walk or flight and there you are." Eris said then quickly flew away. Ichy looked in the direction where the cave would be and followed Eris' directions..
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It made sense at the start but its starting to wander a bit without reaching any real conclusion. Are you approaching a climax? A big meeting? or just dragging on your story? :confused
I write a lot and a word of advice that always helped me was:
"Always know the beginning and the end of your story before you attempt to fill the inbetween"
Other then that keep it up! Even if you end this story you can always fit new ideas into a sequel. :smile
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Just dragging on the story. I have to say it, it's starting to become a story that should not be called "Journey to the Island" But i admit, it will probably come to an end sooner or later.
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Wahoo! I've finally conjured up the courage to writing another chapter! So sorry to keep everyone waiting. My brain hurts from thinking :lol:
Chapter 36:
"We made it!" Pino said with a victorious tone and holding her fist up as she saw the great circle shining above. "It was alot of fun though, wasn't it Ozzy?" Pino said, looking back at Ozzy with a smile but noticed Ozzy had a look of utter fear on his face. "Ozzy?" Pino asked with a confused tone to her voice. Ozzy held up a shaky hand and pointed at something behind Pino. Pino then noticed the area around her grow dark all of a sudden. She slowly turned around and saw Chomper's Father standing behind her..
Ichy continued to fly in the direction Eris sent him in. Having flown all night, he was tired and could not fly any longer. He landed on the ground and yawned. "Gosh, now i know how Dil feels.." Ichy thought to himself. Just as he began to curl up he heard a loud familier scream. "Pino?" Ichy said as he heard the screaming. Just then, Ozzy came jumping over a nearby bush and landing right ontop of Ichy. Ichy sat up with a dazed look and was quickly squished when Pino came running after Ozzy. "Ozzy, wait for me!" Pino cried out as she got up and ran in the direction Ozzy went. Ichy sat up again with a now angry look on his face. Just then he heard a loud roar coming from where Ozzy and Pino had emerged and he to screamed in fear and quickly flew away as he saw a sharptooth charging forward..
Chomper, Dil and Strut awoken when the bright circle shone high above. They were glad to have some rest, but were worried about Ichy who had not returned to tell them of anyplace safe to rest. "Bah, he probably fell asleep somewhere." Dil said with a grumble. "Maybe we should go look for him?" Chomper Suggested. Luckily, his question was quickly answered when Ozzy came running as fast as he could, but ended up tripping on Dil's tale. Next to follow was Pino who ran into Dil's side. "Hey! Im not something you get to walk through here!" Dil said with a snap.
"Sharptooth!" Ichy said, flying as fast as he could. He dove in and hid behind Dil.
"Oh, your still awake?" Dil said with a laugh, but was quickly silenced as they all heard the sound of a Sharptooth's roar..
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Sorry, double post. Okay, so the source of all the ideas? They come up as im writing them. Why didn't i think of that before? :p Not exactly as long as last one, but hey! It's something! ^^
Chapter 37:
The Sharptooth emerged from behind the trees, roaring. It looked around at the many would-be dinners when it all of a sudden saw Chomper.
Chomper made some sort of chirp sounds which caused Pino to turn around. Ozzy got back up and rubbed his sore chin. He turned around but then fell stiff as a tree at the sight of the sharptooth.
The Sharptooth bent down and sniffed Chomper. It then roared loudly and Chomper continued the chirp.
"Pino? What are they saying?" Strut asked with a frightened tone to his voice.
"It's his Mommy!" Pino said with a happy tone to her voice as she saw the sharptooth gently nuzzling Chomper. Just then, another sharptooth emerged from behind the trees. "And his Papa too!" Pino added in.
"We thought you were dead." Chomper's Mother growled, happy to see her son alive and well. "Im alright Mommy!" Chomper said with a smile as he climbed up onto his mothers snout. "We're glad your safe Son!" Chompers Father growled, also happy to see their son alive. "Acro told us that Pino killed you." Chompers Mother growled. "What?" Chomper chirped with surprise. "Pino's my friend, she would never do that!" Chomper Chirped.
Ichy, Dil, Pino, Ozzy and Strut continued to watch as Chomper and his parents had their 'conversations'. Every once in a while, Ozzy jumped when either one of his parents roared angrily. He was beginning to wish he could understand what the sharpteeth were saying, when all of a sudden Chomper's Mother bent down again to let Chomper down.
"Well? What did you tell them, Sharptooth?" Ozzy said with an irritated tone to his voice. He made a quick movement twords Chomper but stopped when Chomper's parents growled threateningly at him.
"Mommy and Daddy said that they wont eat you." Chomper said to Ozzy, He looked back at his Mother and Father who growled again. Chomper looked back at Ozzy and added in: "Yet."
Ozzy grumbled as he heard Chomper's words, but he didn't say or do anything in fear of being eaten.
"We have to go visit Pino's Parents next." Chomper said. Ozzy felt stiff again when as he heard Chomper's next words..
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Awe poor Pino, getting accused like that.
Now that I have such a good picture in my head of her, this story is a lot more interesting. You should thank Darkwolf for his art!
Caustizer.
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How long has it been, How long has it been since i wrote a chapter?
Chapter 38:
Acro wandered around the Island, sniffing around for anything to eat.. Ever since those sharpteeth arrived, food has been hard to find. Bad enough the sharptooth was blind, scarce food made living even harder..
"Hey! Acro!" Called out Eris, flapping his tiny wings and landing on the tip of Acro's nose, panting. "Chomper's parents found them!" Said Eris.
"Good.." Said Acro, grinning evilly to reveal the rows of sharp, jagged teeth.
"You mean it's good that Chomper's reunited with his parents?" Asked Eris, itching his ear.
"WHAT!?" Roared Acro, Angrilly. Eris fell off of Acro's nose and fluttered over to a nearby tree branch so he wouldn't fall down and likely get crushed by the angry sharptooth's feet. "Where are they?" Acro growled.
"Th-th-their, um.." Eris stuttered but was interupted by Acro.
"Enough, i shall search for them myself." Acro growled in response, turning around and bumping into a tree and knocking it down. Acro longed to be the only sharptooth on the island again, and he would make sure it stayed that way..
Ichy, Dil, Ozzy and Strut followed Pino, Chomper and his Parents to wherever Pino's Parents lived.. Ozzy still felt very uncomfortable traveling with sharpteeth that knew him from before. He almost lost his tail to one sharptooth, he wont lose it to these ones..
"Hey Dil?" Said Ichy.
"Yeah?" Replied Dil.
"Wanna play 'I Spy'?" Said Ichy. Dil grumped in irritation at the sharpbeak's words.
"Ichy, you know my sight is bad!"
"I know, im just bored." Replied Ichy, laying back down on Dil's head.
"Alright, fine. What do you spy?" Said Dil with another grumble.
"Alright, i spy.." Began Ichy, looking around for something he could 'spy'. "Something that is white and puffy?"
"One of those white puffy things in the sky?" Guessed Dil.
"Correct! How about.." Ichy looked around for another thing he could spy. "Something big with green food all over?"
"Tree."
"Jeez, Dil! For someone who has trouble seeing, your pretty good at seeing things!" Said Ichy, patting Dil on the nose.
"Why thank you Ichy! That's the nicest thing you've ever said to me." Replied Dil.
"Okay, we're almost there!" Said Pino happily. She ran ahead past Chomper and his Parents towards the place where she lived. However, she stopped in her tracks when she saw the scene before her. Tree's had been pushed down and the rocks on the cliff nearby had fallen, but what stuck out more was the next. The eggs that were in the nest had been crushed, whether it was from one of the fallen rocks or someone else, she wasn't sure. Pino went forward to the nest and picked up one of the broken egg shells. By now, the others had arrived to the scene. Chomper was familier with where Pino lived, but now it looked compleatly unrecognizable. Chomper went next to Pino and picked up one of the other broken egg shells.
"It's.. It's all part of the great circle of life.." Pino said to herself with a sniffle. Chomper looked at her and went over to her. He placed his hand on her shoulder.
"Im sorry.." Said Chomper. Pino then threw the egg shell that she held away and cried.
"I hate the circle of life!" Pino said before she ran away.
"Wait! Pino!" Called out Chomper, chasing after her. Strut had also went after Pino. Ozzy watched as Pino ran away and he couldn't help but feel bad. After a moment, he too followed..
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Aww... I wish I could reach in and give Pino a hug.
It's so sad that she lost her siblings to be, and I'm glad Chomper was there to comfort her.
Short installment though, surprisingly short. It's almost as if you had it on hand and just wanted to push it out to show that you will were commited to the story, which is nice but also unfurfilling. Next time I would go for a full chapter so us readers can get into the story a little more :angel
Caustizer.