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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 27, 2008, 02:55:02 AM »
"It is," Tyra smiled, wrapping her arms around him. "Then me and Rita next!" Chomper smiled. Veli flew on, he'd be beside Longtail. That left Red Claw and Chomper's parents. "Maybe we should be right behind the leaders in case something happens," commeented Red Claw

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: November 27, 2008, 12:55:30 AM »
(Hope you like the next part.)

Chapter 26: The River of Life Part 2

Before embarking on their quest, the 6 sharpteeth in good health had one task to complete: They had to gather up every bit of prey they had in the Valley and gather it in the central area.  (In this reality, sharpteeth only eat leafeaters, not other sharpteeth, since it seems like Redclaw wanted to kill Chomper just as much as his friends in the previous reality.)  Luckily, they had had  a lot gathered for the Time of the Great Giving. It was about 5 day’s worth of food, if everyone ate only what was necessary. “You’ll be fine Ducky, I promise,” Petrie said, flying to the swimmer. He let out a smile, he wanted to try his best to improve the mood of the moment. “Here, I grabbed this one just for you.” Petrie handed Ducky a rather decent-sized swimmer corpse. “That’s nice Petrei, it is, it is,” Ducky said. “Yup yup yup.” Petrie tried to smile even though he could tell there was a tickle in the swimmer’s throat. The swimming sharpteeth managed to swim into an area of the water where the current went in an opposite direction, so they could avoid the toxins.

It was time to depart. Sharptooth, Chomper, Petrie, Ruby, Guido, and Pterano gathered in front of everyone again. “We will get read of these bad plants,” Chomper promised his friends. “I believe in you Chomper,” Littlefoot said. The two rexes shared a brotherly smile.  Dein and Terri weakly walked over to their son.  “W’ve seen you grown since you were a hatchling so,” Terri comforted. “We have faith in you.” Mother and son shared another hug.  “Thank you mom,” Chomper cried slightly.  “We have to go now, because we can’t go later,” Ruby commented. “Yeah,” said Guido.  Everyone sick sharptooth took a look at the 6. They said their goodbyes, and Sharptooth led them back to his cave. “This wall here…” Sharptooth said, pointing towards a rock with little cracks on the side. Sharptooth then used all his strength to move the rock. It was revealed a large tunnel was hidden behind it. “And to think I thought I would never have a use for this,” he commented. Pterano and Petrie flew ahead.

“So what’s the plan?” Chomper asked Sharptooth as they walked through the secret tunnel to the Mysterious Beyond. It’s about half a day’s walk to the leafeater valley,” Sharptooth explained. “Once we get there, we’ll find Refoot or one of his cronies when they’re alone, and force them to tell us where he planted those deadly plants and where we can get the antidote.” “But how will we find that out?” Ruby asked.  “Simple,” Sharptooth replied. “I have the ability,” he said in sharptooth, “to speak flattooth,” he said…..in flattooth! Chomper looked amazed. “You can speak leaf-eater too?” h said surprised. “Of course, it’s a talent I learned before coming to the valley with all the herds.” “As can I,” added Pterano. “You don’t think physique is the only talent I got from traveling the world.” “But first we need to find Doc for another ally in our journey.” Chomper wondered about that. He was afraid of Doc in the previous reality ever since he left the GV, so what was he like now, as a big t-rex?  Chomper knew he’d find out eventually. Soon, a light was seen in the distance. “The Mysterious Beyond..” commented Ruby.  The 6 emerged into the wide open space. None of the other exits faced this side of the Valley, so the Fearsome 14 were unaware that six sharpteeth managed to escape.  “So where’s the Lone Dinosaur?” asked Guido. “Give me a minute young glider,” Sharptooth said. Sharptooth stood perfectly still, and concentrated. He began sniffing the air very carefully. He didn’t want anyone else making a noise or movement. Scent after scent went through Sharptooth’s sniffer until one very one was traced. The smell of the order was small, meaning Doc was a distance away, but the odor was still there. “Follow me,” he ordered his group. Pterano could also track Doc so he stayed ahead too.

A DISTANCE AWAY…..

A grinning Redfoot, Platy, Ozzy, and Kevin returned to the leafeater valley. “What are you smiling about?” asked Rita, who was playing with Greg, Myra, and Rory. “I’ll tell you soon young one,” he chuckled in his slightly evil tone. Rita shrugged. Redfoot acted like this all the time, so it didn’t bother her now more than usual. “Redfoot’s sure been happy lately,” commented Rory, who had just been found in his hiding place by Greg. “Ever since I found those black plants for him, he’s always been in a good mood.” “Maybe he got over Screech and Thud’s deaths,” suggested Myra.  But a weird feeling was coming over Rita. “What’s wrong Rita?” asked Rory. “You ever….feel like something bad’s happening around you?” “Why do you ask that?” Greg asked confused. “I…don’t know,” Rita replied honestly.  She decided to ignore the feeling.

Meanwhile, in a small canyone in the Mysterious Beyond, a BIG (rivaling the size of Sharptooth) sharptooth was practicing his fighting skills. He smashed big rocks with his tail like they were nothing.  “No sweat,” laughed Doc. Then, the big dark-green rex had a scent reach his sniffer. “Could it be?” he asked with a smirk, recognizing the smell.  Surely enough, Pterano, Sharptooth, Chomper, Guido, Ruby, and Petrie came into view. “Sharptooth!” Doc grinned. “Haven’t seen you in a while!” Sharptooth gave a little smile towards his old friend, but his expression turned serious again. “I’m afraid we can’t catch up on old times now,” Sharptooth said, “We have a major crisis on our hands.” As the two big rexes were talking, the kids were sharing a conversation. “I can’t believe that any leaf eater would do something this terrible,” Guido said. “They just don’t understand the Circle of Life, Ruby muttered. “We don’t kill just to kill, we kill because we need to survive, but none of those leafeaters understand that.” Chomper was surprised, how Ruby knew so much on a deep suggest.  “Ruby, can I talk to you for a second?” Chomper asked. “Sure Chomper,” Ruby replied.

A few moments earlier, Chomper had found a unique rock, and it looked even more nice than a shiny stone.  But one neat thing about the rock was that there was a tiny hole in it. “I wanted to show you this,” Chomper said. He took a long, thin vine from a tree and put it through the hole. He then tied the vine. “A gift,” Chomper said. Ruby smiled. “Chomper…I’m flattered,” she said. “It’s a shiny stone you can always have with you. It’s like always having a part of me with you.” The fast biter and rex grinned at each other, and kissed. However, Petrie and Guido saw them. “Oooh…” Petrie laughed. However, they didn’t look embarrassed.  “We have to stop Redfoot,” Chomper said, remembering their goal. Chomper took this mission very personally. In the previous reality, he and Ruby’s efforts to save the Mysterious Beyond proved unsuccessful, so maybe he could make up for it now and save every sharptooth in the Great Valley.  Sharptooth and Pterano meanwhile had finished explaining the situation to Doc.  

“Sounds like something Redfoot would do,” Doc commented, “I just never imagined he’d be able to accomplish it.” “We’ll need your help to infiltrate their Valley and find some answers.” Pterano. “You didn’t even need to ask,” the scarred-eyed rex said.  “Children, it is time to leave,” Sharptooth called. Chomper, Ruby, Guido, and Petrie nodded. “What’s that Ruby?” Sharptooth asked, noticing the rock attached to the vine. “A gift from Chomper,” Ruby smiled back.  Sharptooth remembered the discusiion they had a while back about Chomper, so he knew what this meant.  Petrie then asked “Where are we going to spend the night?” Pterano knew the answer. “A short distance outside their valley is a place called Pointy Canyon. It was one of my first stops on my world travels with Rinkus and Sierra,” he explained, “and in that area there are many big caves we can rest in.”  Everyone nodded. As the 7 kept walking, Chomper looked up at Doc. This rex’s strength was just as impressive as the longneck-version of Doc in the previous reality. And best of all, in this reality he’s on Chomper’s side.  :- )

MEANWHILE…..

In the leafeater valley, Redfoot had called a meeting for all the flatteeth dinos. “What’s this about mom?” Rita asked confused. “I heave no idea dear,” Julie replied.  Redfoot stood on a place that made him higher up the rest of the dinosaurs, except for the flyers of course. Redfoot took a second to clear his throat. “My fellow leafeaters,” Redfoot called loud. “I’m sure you’ll be pleased to know that in a matter of a few short days, the Great Valley will be ours again!”  A lot of the dinos looked confused, they didn’t get how. “Myself, Ozzy, Platy, Icky, and Kevin recently infiltrated the outer wall of the Great Valley and found the water source.” Everyone listened intently, however, Greg, Rory, Rita, and Myra wondered one thing: what about Chomper? “Then, with the help of the Black Plant of Death, we infected the water there. Now, all of those stupid predators are sick from the pollen released. And if they try to leave, one of the members of the Fearsome 14 will kill them.” The reactions of the crowd were mixed. Some were overjoyed, some doubted the plan would work, and a few looked shocked. Rory was one of those ones. “What’s wrong Rory?” Myra asked. “He….used me,” Rory said wide-eyed.

Meanwhile, back in the Great Valley, the land sharpteeth could still walk around, even if their strength wasn’t that high. “”This is hopeless,” sighed Cera (Who I believe in both realities was a bit of a pessimist.)  “You can’t give up on your friends Cera,” said Shorty who had just walked over. Shorty liked to tease most of his brother’s friends, but he knew that this was jokes. “How are mom and dad doing?” Littlefoot asked. “Good, they’re sharing their portion of the rations,” Shorty explained. Littlefoot looked around. The kids were doing their best to entertain themselves by playing verbal-only games in an effort to keep happy.  Tricia was being cuddled by her parents, Cira singing a fast biter lullaby. At this point, the sharpteeth were noticing that their voices were changing. This was another sign of the sickness. Littlefoot took a little drink from the small water sources they could find. Everyone had to be careful to not take anymore that necessary. “Wherever you guys are, we believe in you,” Littlefoot thought.  He was the optimist typically.

Eventually, Chomper, Ruby, Guido, Sharptooth, Doc, Pterano, and Petrie arrived at Pointy Canyon. “Here we are,” said Pterano. Sharptooth and Chomper squinted, and in the distance, they could see big stone walls. “The flattooth valley…” Chomper said.  “Correct, young biter.” Sharptooth responded. The 3 adults looked at each other. “When we were right outside of the Valley, we could recognize the scent of 5 leafeaters who most likely were the ones who poisoned our waterholes.” Pterano explained. “Really uncle?” Petrie asked, surprised his uncle was able to figure that out. “Correct nephew.”  “Now we should gather inside and rest,” said Doc. “We’re going to need all our power for tomorrow.”

(Hope you liked Part 2.)

Next time on TLBT: Sharptooth Valley: The 7 make their strategy to break-in to Redfoot’s valley, Chomper and Ruby get some time alone (while acting as spies.), and the identity of Tippy’s secret admirer will be revealed!



A LITTLE BONUS……(Just something I thought would be cute, and holiday appropriate.)

The sharptooth version of the gangs walked on stage and faced whoever is reading this.

Chomper: Happy celebration time everyone!

Ruby:  Over here, it’s the time of the Great Giving, and we hear from some human called “Brekclub85” that you humans are celebrating a celebration called “Thanksgiving.”

Cera:  We hope you and your family and friends and any other sharpteeth you now have a safe and happy celebration time.

Ducky: Yup yup yup!

Spike: (Grins.)

Littlefoot: And as a little gift to you, we had Brekclub85 send a fresh, prepared, good tasting longneck carcass to each of your families for a nice Time of…I mean Thanksgiving meal.

Petrie: Happy Thanksgiving to all, and…

EVERYBODY (Shows their teeth.) To all a good bite! (They all laugh happily, and walk off.)

(Read and review!)

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 27, 2008, 12:27:30 AM »
"Good point," Rita said, and gave Chomper another hug randomly. "You should lead the way Longtail," Chomper suggested

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 26, 2008, 11:11:35 PM »
Chomper looked at Longtail. "Maybe you should seal that tunnel off again," Rita suggested. "So Doc can't follow us." Tyra shivered at the mentioning of thta name

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 26, 2008, 10:39:16 PM »
"Here it comes!" Recclaw called to everyone. "Hang on Rita!" Chomper called, and they both held onto Chomper's mother's back tight. The end of the tunnel was here now

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LBT Fanfiction / Link to my Total Drama Valley fanfic
« on: November 26, 2008, 03:34:41 PM »
Brekclub85 presents:

TOTAL DRAMA VALLEY Episode 9: The Disaster-Filled Egg Adventure

In the Super Sharpteeth boys’ cabin, Shorty, Rhett, and Petrie were trying to cheer up Rory. “It’ll be ok Rory,” Petrie said. “Me know you’ll see Myra again when the game’s over.” “Thanks guys,” Rory replied. Guido meanwhile, hadn’t gotten to like Rory, Shorty, and Petrie.

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Guido: They’re still big jerks.

That night, when everyone was snoozing, a mysterious figure entered the Fighting Flatteeth girls’ cabin.  He dropped something off near Tippy’s bed, then dashed out. One of the spiketail’s eyes shot open. “Who’s there?” she called, not wanting to wake up Rita, Ali, Cera, or Ducky.  No response.

THE NEXT MORNING……

Since it would be a while before the next challenge started, some of the players were just having some fun. Littlefoot, Nod, Rory, Shorty, Chomper, Rita, Ruby, and Petrie were playing a game of Pine Cone. (Rules explained in my other fanfic, Sharptooth Valley.)  “I got it!’ Rory laughed, on Chomper, Rita, and Nod’s team. “You can’t get it if I got it,” Ruby taunted, grabbing it out of his hands and dashing towards the goal. Chomper and Nod tried to tackle her, but they missed.

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Ruby:  This game is what my family and I used to play all the time in the Mysterious Beyond. And I’m the King…..I mean Queen of this game!

Cera huffed at the sight. “Shouldn’t they be getting ready for the next challenge?” she laughed to Ali and Tippy. “Cera, some of us are here just to have fun you know, it’s not always about winning.” “Maybe that’s what you longnecks think,” Cera replied. Ali and Tippy, despite not being a longneck, was furious at that comment.  “Tippy is gonna make sure Cera pays for that remark,” Tippy said angrily.

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Cera:  So what, I’m the only one in this contest with common sense, I’m bound to be the winner.

Chris eventually came into view. “Ok everybody!  Follow me to your next challenge.” “What, you can’t tell us here?” Littlefoot asked.  “No I can not,” was all Chris replied with. The dinosaurs who had shoulders shrugged them.

Chris led the 15 remaining players to the top of a cliff that overlooked a different part of the valley, with some spots marked as the “Competition Area” in the Mysterious Beyond could be seen in the distant. Also on the cliff were 15 different types of dino eggs. “What are these for?” Shorty asked. “Not eating, even though it’d be better than those cruddy treestar dishes Chef calls food.” Chris then explained the rules:

“Each player will be given one of these eggs. Each egg must be returned to it’s correct nest. You have 2 hours to complete this challenge. At the end of the time limit, the team with the most returned eggs wins invincibility, as well as these!” He held up 2 thermostats.  “What are those?” asked Ducky.  “These devices control the hot and cold in your cabins.” Everyone looked excited at that.

Littlefoot looked a little concerned at something. “You were allowed to use all these eggs right? Their mom and dads said it was OK, right?” Yup dude,” Chris replied.

FLASH BACK…….

An intern was holding a walkie-talkie.   “You sure this is legal?” He said nervously, swiping a swimmer egg from it’s mother. “It’s prehistoric times, there’s nothing illegal,” Chris laughed from the other side. “Ok…” the intern said.

THE PRESENT……..

“Ok, everybody select their eggs, and then the challenge can begin!”  Chomper used his sniffer to examine the eggs. He was looking for a particular one, which he eventually found. “Hey, a sharptooth egg!” he smiled. Chomper wanted to handle this one, as he had been in a similar position before.

Everyone else collect an egg. None of the 15 eggs were of the same species. “We’re gonna beat you!” Cera laughed to the Super Sharpteeth team.  “Me will see Cera, Petrie called back. Nod and Chomper were the first to take off, which started the time limit. The Adventuring song was sung yet again, but the producers and Chris decided to cut that out.  “You have no idea how much that sucks,” Chris assured the dinos watching back home in the GV and MB.

Tippy, Littlefoot, Ali, Cera, and Ducky were walking together. “This is kinda hard, it is, it is,” Ducky commented, rolling her egg down the path. “Ah, don’t complain,” Cera said.  Ali smiled at Littlefoot but shot an angry glance at Cera. “It’s all your fault we lost the last challenge, “ she said. Cera looked offended.

“Oh please, it was that dumb fast biter Myra who betrayed us.” Cera said. Now Ali looked offended.

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Ali: And she is one of Littlefoot’s friends how?

Meanwhile, Tera was assisting Petrie move his spiketail egg, since the flyer’s a bit too small to move it by himself. “Thanks Tera,” Petrie smiled. “Don’t mention it,” Tera replied. Petrie looked confused. “Why would I not mention it?” he asked, misunderstanding the question. Guido glided over. “Hey Tera, could you go p to Shorty and find out why he’s being so mean to me?” he asked politely. Tera agreed.

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Tera:  Petrie may be a meanie to Guido sometimes, but he’s still pretty cool.

Tera flew over to Shorty, who was carefully maneuvering his egg over a log. “Hey Shorty,” Tera commented. “Agh!” Shorty said, just barely managing to keep his egg. “What do you want?” he asked. “I want to find out why you’re so mean to Guido.” Shorty sighed, he knew Tera wouldn’t quit pestering him until he told.

Elsewhere, Chomper was heading towards the exit to the Mysterious Beyond with his egg.  He waved to a nearby threehorn. Unfortunately, the threehorn never saw the show, so he thought Chomper was a threat! “A Sharptooth?! Stealing an egg?! You’re get him!” he yelled to his mate. ”Uh oh..” Chomper said. “AGH!” he yelled, still carrying his egg.

Nod meanwhile was on a slanted hill in the MB. (His egg was Ruby’s type of dino.”  “Need a rest,” he panted.

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Nod: Even when you’re big you can get tired once in a while.

But unfortunately, his egg started rolling down the hill! “Oh no!” he yelled dashing towards it. The egg hit a rock and was sent flying to the ground below. “No no no..” he muttered. He got down, and saw that the egg was in good condition. “Oh thank goodness,” he sighed, and continued moving the egg. After this comment, however, the cameraman pulled back and revealed Nod’s egg in a different location. A confused mother fast biter came into the scene, looking panicked. “You think we should tell him about this?” one of the cameramen asked. “No, it’s not like we’d get paid more,” the other replied.

Shorty started explaining his story: “Look, when I was little I didn’t really have a father, so I got protective to those I liked and tough to those I didn’t like, it’s that simple,” he muttered. “And as you can tell, I don’t like Guido.” Rhett meanwhile, managed to return his egg, scoring the first point for the SS team.  “Can you just back off from him?!” Tera complained. “Make me,” Shorty laughed back. “Ok,” Tera laughed, giving Shorty a push…that accidentally knocked him into the fast water! “AGH!” Shorty screamed. Tera horrified tried to catch him, but she got dragged down too! Rory, Petrie, Guido, Rhett, and Ruby looked shocked.. “We got to do something!” Rory yelled.

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Guido: That was both awesome and terrible at the same time.

Tippy, meanwhile, called Ali off to the side. “Tippy has a great plan,” she snickered. “What is it?” Ali asked. “Look up there,” Tippy said, pointing to LOADS of insects. Ali smiled, she knew that non-sharpteeth found them creepy. Ali and Tippy set their eggs aside and climbed the cliff.

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Ali: I don’t mind bugs as long as I don’t have to eat them.

“Hey Cera!” Tippy called from an edge about 10 feet above her. “Huh?!” said Cera. Tippy and Ali then knocked several bugs off the edge with their tails, all landing on Cera. “Eww!” Cera yelled.

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Cera: OK that’s it, I’m going to tell.

“I’m so giving it away now!” Cera yelled. “In case your watching Tippy’s mom, she used to steal the treestars from your herd!”  Tippy looked embarrassed. “Moe bugs Ali?” she asked. “Agreed,” replied Ali, and knocked more insects down. When they came back down laughing, Cera saw a mud puddle and grinned. “Take this!” she snickered, and soaked the two in mud. “Why you..” muttered Ali, spying another mud puddle.

Rita managed to score a point for the Fighting Flatteeth. “That was easy,” she smiled. “But I bet no one else had any trouble.”

Back along the fast water, the 5 were trying to come up with a way to save Tera and Shorty. “Me don’t know how long they can stay afloat!” Petrie panicked. “I have an idea,” Rory said, pulling a big vine off a tree up ahead. “Grab on Shorty and Tera!” he called, tossing a portion of it into the water. Shorty put the vine between he two front pads, and Tera held onto him.  The flyer, glider, fast biter, longneck, and fast runner (I think that’s the term for Ruby’s species) put all their effort into pulling them out. “Come on…” Rhett strained.

Shorty held on tight. He looked and noticed something. “Hurry! The vine’s breaking!” he called. Guido decided to help his foe, because he didn’t want to see this happen.  “Just a few more…” Rory said, holding the vine in his mouth. With a tug, the group managed to pull them to safety. “Oh thank goodness,” Tera said. “I can’t fly at ALL when I’m in fast water.” Shorty looked relieved, but then he sighed. “The other team’s probably beaten us, we only have 20 minutes left.” Ruby was about to agree, when she saw that all the nests were visible within walking distance. By sheer luck, the nests each of the Super Sharpteeth’s eggs were in close proximity to each other! “Oh boy!” cheered Petrie, flying up and doing some mid-air spins.

“HELP!” Chomper roared, being chased into the Mysterious Beyond, the nest where he had to return his egg was in sight, but the threehorns were in hot pursuit!  Chomper was cornered. “This is it sharptooth,” the threehorn said. Chomper was about to cry when suddenly a BIG sharptooth roared! The triceratops turned around and saw it was Redclaw! “Oh no!” he yelled, and he and his mate ran off. Redclaw looked down at Chomper, but then he started to smile. “Here’s your egg back Uncle Redclaw,” Chomper smiled in his native tongue, putting the egg back in the nest. “Glad I could save you from the big leafeaters,” Redclaw replied. “Your aunt says hi.” “Chomper laughed and looked at the egg. “Can’t wait to see my cousin,” he grinned, and ran back.

(Bet you didn’t see that coming, eh?)

Littlefoot and Ducky also got caught in the mud war between Cera, Tippy, and Ali. “This is gross,” Ducky frowned, trying to dodge mud balls.  “Guys, can’t we talk this out?” Littlefoot said, trying to be the natural peacemaker.  They had pretty much forgotten about the challenge.

Nod meanwhile, reached his required nest. He dropped the egg in, but he didn’t hear the sound indicating he scored a point. “How come that wasn’t a point?” Nod asked confused. Then he looked up and saw Chris’ helicopter. “You see man…” Chris called from a loudspeaker, but Nod soon figured it out. The fast biter mother soon appeared. “This…egg….was…yours?!” he laughed nervously. He got his answer. The fast biter attacked, slashing Nod a few times. Chris laughed. “Too bad we can’t show this violence, that would bring in more kid dino viewers.”

Ruby, Shorty, Tera, Guido, Petrie, and Rhett managed to score points by returning their eggs. (Rory had already returned his.)  “All right!” cheered Rhett and Guido.

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Shorty: No sweat, I just hope those eggs grow up to be great dinosaurs. I don’t want to have nearly drowned for nothing…..

SOME TIME LATER…….

The 15 dinos returned to the cliff where the challenge atarted, the Super Sharpteeth looking happy. “What a day,” Chris said. “Shorty and Tera nearly drowning, Chhomper getting pursued by angry threehorns, Nod getting mauled by a fast biter…” it was revealed that Chris had to take Nod back in his helicopter, he was badly beaten up and could barely move. “And Ali, Cera, Tippy, Littlefoot, and Ducky basically saying screw it to the competition.” Most of the Fighting Flatteeth looked embarrassed. “However, since only Rita and Chomper scored points for the Fighting Flatteeth while everyone got their eggs back on the SS team, it looks like the Super Sharpteeth are our winners!” “Yes!” Shorty laughed triumphantly.  “Fighting Flatteeth, you know the drill.” He handed the SS team their prize. “So how do these work?” Tera asked confused.

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Tippy: Who did Tippy vote off? Cera’s been annoying since episode 5, but Tippy has to say….Nod.

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Chomper: Yeah, Nod… (chuckles nervously.) Not exactly helpful anymore…….

THE BONFIRE CEREMONY….

Chris came out with a plate of 7 sweet bubbles. “I only have 7 sweet bubbles on this plate. These little treats decide who stays…..and who leaves.” He chuckled with his creepy smile. “If I do not call your name, you must walk down the Tunnel of Shame, and you can’t come back EVER.  There was an 8-way gulp among the players.

“The first sweet bubble of the night goes to Tippy.” Tippy smiled and collected her prize, sticking her tongue out at Cera. “Littlefoot……Chomper……Rita……Ducky.” It was down, to cera, Nod, and Ali.

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Cera: I had Ducky vote with me. Ali’s going down. Ha!

“Ali.” Chris called next. Ali looked happy while Cera looked shocked. “Cera, Nod, down to you.” Chris said. Both looked nervous, though Nod was bandaged up by Chef you couldn’t really see his facial expression. “The final sweet bubble of the night goes to……..Cera.” Cera smiled while Nod looked sad. “Sorry Nod, goodbye,” Littlefoot said, trying to cheer him up. “Tunnel of Shame awaits dude,” Chris said. Nod said, albeit muffled “I Can’t Move!” “Tippy will help Nod,” she smiled. Tippy, Chomper, and Rita carried the stretcher Nod was on to the Tunnel. “Bye Nod, take care,” waved Chomper.

Ali shot a look at Cera. “Next time, Cera,” she whispered. She wasn’t going to let the arrogant threehorn win those wishes!

Next time: A series of interconnected challenges in the waterhole put the 14 remaining dinos to the test, Petrie tries to find out more about Tera, and one player’s feelings cost his/her team the game…

(Read and Review. Hope you liked the Redclaw thing, it’s something I thought of that I thought would be cool!)


From now on, I'll be posting the episodes here directly, in addition to fanfiction.net

(Yeah, I edited some of the misspellings.)

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 26, 2008, 01:01:41 PM »
"This is fun!" Chomper laughed, cralwing up to the to pof his mother's head. "I can see the bottom!" Rita noticed

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 26, 2008, 03:47:30 AM »
"See you at the bottom," Redclaw waved. Veli was ahead of everybody, since he was flying close to the ground."Ha! I'm gonna beat you!" he taunted. But then it happened. A slightly angled rock made Redclaw go faster and a bit into the air. He landed....on Veli. For a few seconds, Redclaw's bum slid over Veli, but Veli was quickly free again. "Don't sasy anything," he called to his friends, knowing what their reaction would be

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 26, 2008, 02:38:20 AM »
"That was incredible!" Tyra laughed as she and Kai began sliding again. "You're simply amazing Kai, you're brave, tough, clever, resourceful, and cool!"  

Redclaw looked back at Kai "You did that just in time kid!" he said. Veli managed to get out of the way. Chomper and Rita managed to dodge, and they jumped onto Chomper's mom back. "We need to do this more often," chuckled Rita.

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 25, 2008, 11:36:47 PM »
"I haven't had this much fun in many cold times!" cheered Tyra. The two sharpteeth hit a slanted rock which sent them in mid-air for a second, but then they kept slidin down.

"Get outta the wall!" Redclaw called, soon followed by Chomper's folks. "Controlled by Starfallraptor.) It probably would've been a better to have the big sharpteeth go first, but oh well

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: November 25, 2008, 09:37:35 PM »
(This is it. The “Redfoot’s plan” Chapter arc.  I got the title and the concept of the plan from a Fraggle Rock episode.)

Chapter 25: The River of Life Part 1

Redfoot, Icky, Ozzy, Kevin ( a spiketail), and Platy (A swimmer) were walking through the Mysterious Beyond. “So when are they supposed to show up Redfoot?” Icky asked.  “When we need them,” the longneck grinned back. “How do you know they won’t get hunted down or anything?” Kevin asked. “Don’t worry, I’m sure,” Redfoot grinned. ”This is their “Time of the Great Giving”, they’ll all be gathered in the valley today.”  On Redfoot’s back were all the black plants from chapter 20. “So what are here for?” Icky asked. “You out of all the leafeaters knew this place the best before the sharpteeth took it over.” “Icky, I need you to stay high in the sky and make tell me if any of the sharpteeth look like they’re about to leave the Valley.”  “Got it,” nodded Icky flying off. Redfoot smiled. His plan would go down as one of the greatest moments in leafeater history, in his mind.

Petrie, meanwhile, was very happy. After several weeks, the little flying sharptooth had finally recovered. “I’m back in action!” he cheered. “That’s great to hear,” Littlefoot smiled. He and his friends were now all perfectly healthy now, so they could play and go on more exciting adventures. “This is the life,” Cera sighed happily, floating in the water. The gang was watching the grownups prepare for the Time of the Great Giving, gathering prey for a big feast,  setting up games for themselves and the children, and preparing the waterhole for the annual Big Swim.  Chomper took a big look around the Great Valley, and let out a big smile. Life has been good since he made his reality-altering wish.  He had more friends of his own kind, he was still able to see Rory, Rita, Myra, and Greg once in awhile (there meetings were done in secret), he had a girlfriend now, and bes of all, if he said he was having friends for dinner, no one would be creeped out or find that comment odd!

Littlefoot was hanging with his grandparents now, as well as his parents and Shorty. The two brothers looked embarrassed when Ali walked past, waving “hi” while holding Rhett’s hand.   “What’s wrong boys?” Saura asked, curious about her children’s lifes. “Nothing special mom,” Littlefoot replied, laughing a bit at the memory of the Ali incident.  Petrie, his siblings, as well as his mom and Pterano were flying all around. Petrie was staying around the waterhole, showing Ducky  some tricks he had thought up while in was in his state of dino-crippledness. “That’s amazing Petrie, it is, it is,” Ducky complimented. “I know,” the flyer blushed.   Chomper was eating with his parents. “Thanks for catching this mom and dad,” Chomper said. “Thanks for helping us son,” Dein replied. In the middle of chowing down, Ruby came into the cave. “Hey Chomper,” Ruby said. “I wanna show you something.” Chomper looked at his parents. “You can go son,” Terri smiled. “Thanks mom!” called Chomper, waving and running off with Ruby. Terri smiled: seeing her son and Ruby reminded herself of a younger her and Dein, minus the fighting part.

Outside in the Mysterious Beyond, Redfoot, Ozzy, and Platy were secretly patrolling the outside of the GV. “So where’s this secret spot?” Ozzy questioned. “Hidden in the southern most side of the valley,” Redfoot explained. “It’s a spot none of the sharpteeth know about.” He let out a chuckle….a laugh of evil, to better describe it. Soon, footsteps could be heard. Eventually, 14 big longnecks came into view. The leader of the group stepped forward.  “Been awhile since we heard from you Redfoot,” he said sternly. “But my sources tell me this strategy of yours can’t fail?” “You got that correct,” Redfoot replied. “While, we’re glad to do our part,” another one of the longnecks in the group said.   Redfoot took a look at the valley walls and laughed. “Those bloodthirsty dimwits won’t know what hit them until it’s too late. Now, go guard all of the exits to this place,” he said to the longnecks. They nodded and walked off.

Cera was hanging with her sister, father, and Cira. Veli had always been slightly overprotective to her daughters, and since the night Cera got attacked by the longneck, that quality went into overdrive. Even though Cera was fine, Veli kept her oldest daughter with them for now. Tricia was jumping up and down happily. “Swimming! Swimming!” she cheered. The baby fast biter was starting to learn words (in her native tongue, of course.)  Petrie meanwhile, smelt Guido coming up behind him. “Hey Petrie!” Guido laughed, zipping past him. “Hey Guido,” Petrie laughed with a side back. Ducky’s plan had worked: Petrie was eager for stunts again, because he wanted to prove to Guido that they weren’t easy.  He could tell by the flyer’s expression what he wanted to do.  They flew off, and Tera caught a glimpse of her son. She heaved a sigh. Pterano was nearby. “Brother…you just make sure they don’t do anything stupid again.” “Of course,” Pterano smiled, and flew after his nephew.

Ruby showed Chomper to a secret wall in the valley. “I’ve been working on it for a while,” Ruby commented. “Working on what?” Chomper asked, eager to know. “You’ll see,” Ruby smiled. As they walked along the path, Chomper noticed a lot of smashed tree sweets in the ground. He soon found out why. On the wall in front of them, there were several stains from the tree sweet bubble juice. The marks seemed random,  but then Chomper looked closer.  The markings looked like a rex and a fast biter….kissing.  Chomper was still young, but her knew what this meant.  “Ruby…it’s beautifu,” Chomper smiled. “I call it a wall marking,” Ruby said back. (I think the term “picture” doesn’t exist in the LBT universe.)  Chomper then gave Ruby a kiss. But for the first time, it was him who gave the initial kiss. They suddenly heard footsteps. “How cute,” smirked Sharptooth, who had just come by. “Sharptooth? How come you’re not with everyone at the celebration?” Ruby asked.  Sharptooth chuckled a bit. “You know I’m always busy being one of the leaders of the valley. Now that I know everyone’s having fun, I like the opportunity to relax.” “Good point there,” Chomper smiled. The 3 decided to take a walk. Chomper smelled a longneck in the far distance, but he decided it wasn’t important.

Icky, meanwhile had kept to the skies. Staying in the shadows, he noticed that pretty much all of the sharpteeth had gathered in or around the waterhole.  He flew to the southern-most wall where Redfoot, Kevin, Platy, and Ozzy were. “All clear,” Icky said. “Thanks, you can head back to our valley Icky,” Redfoot said to his associate. “But that won’t be our valley anymore” he laughed mentally. Icky saluted Redfoot and flew off.  Aqfter a few more minutes of walking, the group arrived at their intended destination. “None of the sharpteeth know about this location,” the scarred-eyed longneck explaine. The 4 had arrived at what seemed like one wall, but Redfoot knew more.  As he was doing his job, Kevin kept placing fruits around the area so they couldn’t be traced by anyone. Redfoot then applied all his muscle to lift up a giant rock. Under that rock, in a little cave, was a small stream of water. “What’s so important about this?” Ozzy asked angrily. Redfoot chuckled, still holding up the rock. “What you don’t know Ozzy, is that water from this little bit flows into the rest of the valley’s waterhole.” Ozzy thought for a minute, then he finally figured out Redfoot’s plan. “Ingenious….” He complimented in an evil tone. “Now drop the plants in!” Redfoot ordered, straining. Ozzy, Platy, and Kevin agreed. The black flowers fell into the water. When they did…. A weird pollen began flowing out……

In the water hole, everyone was having a good time swimming. Littlefoot, Cera, Ducky, Spike, Tippy, Shorty, Ali, and the rest of the kids were splashing each other and having “who can hold their breath underwater the longest” contests. The only ones not near the water were Chomper, Ruby, Sharptooth, Petrie, Guido, and Pterano.  Tippy swam up to the gang. “Can anyone tell Tippy who keeps giving Tippy these heart-shaped stones?” the belly dragger asked.  Everyone nodded no. “Oh well,” smiled Tippy and swam off. At this point, Ali noticed something. “What’s that?” she asked Rhett, noticing weird specks appear in the water. “No idea,” Rhett replied.  Ali started feeling weird. “Something wrong Ali?” Rhett asked. “I think I need some rest…” Ali replied. The two sharpteeth helped each other out of the waterhole. Soon enough, Rhjett began to feel odd too. But they weren’t the only ones.


“On the count of 3,” Guido began. He and Petrie’s next stunt was this: The had placed a dead swimmer high on a cliff at an angle where it would eventually fall off. They were trying to see if an, for lack of a better word, in-flight meal was possible. “You two!” Pterano called, laughing a bit at the sight “You’re missing the celebration. Stop this nonsense at once.”  Petrie looked a bit disappointed, but he was still in a good mood. “Ok uncle, you’re right,” he admitted. Pterano planned to do more stunts when he returned to traveling the Mysterious Beyond, but he didn’t want his nieces and nephews following in his foot steps quite yet. Flying near ground level, they eventually saw Sharptooth, Chomper, and Ruby. “Hi Petrie! Hi Guido! Hi Petrie’s uncle!” Chomper smiled, waving to his friends. “We’re heading back to the celebration,” explained Pterano. “So are we,” responded Ruby.  But when the 6 got back to the main valley, something was wrong. Everyone was on the side of the waterhole, looking sick and weak!

“Chomper…? Ruby….?” Littlefoot called, tired. The friends rushed up to him. “What’s wrong?” Chomper asked nervously. “Tippy doesn’t know…” Tippy replied. “We were just swimming in the water when these weird specs started showing up,” Cera finished, coughing a little. “And we don’t feel so good, we don’t, we don’t,” Ducky finished, still in the water. Sharptooth and Pterano soon had an idea of what’s going on. “Don’t tell me…” Pterano whispered horrified. He flew inches over the water, making sure none of it got in his mouth. He noticed the specs everyone mentioned. “Mom?! Are you all right?” Petrie said, flying over to his mother. “I don’t feel too good son,” Tera replied. “I feel very dizzy.” Pterano examined the specs, and noticed they were black. “No…” he muttered, “The Black Plant of Death?” “The what?” Ruby asked. “The Black Plant of death,” Sharptooth replied. “It’s a rare plant in these parts. If you ingest it’s pollen, you get sick, and if you eat the flower directly, you die in 24 hours without the antidote.” “But how’d it get in our water?” Chomper screamed. Sharptooth had a bad feeling he knew. “Wait here,” he ordered everyone.

Sharptooth dashed over to one of the Valley’s exits, staying beside the wall. When he got close to one of the exits, he eyed out of it carefully. He could see several big, yellow longnecks. “I was right,” Sharptooth thought. He quickly returned to the herds. “The Fearsome 14.” He muttered. A lot of the adults gasped, but the kids mostly looked confused. “Who?” asked Chomper. “Tfe Fearsome 14,” Sharptooth said again. “A group of evil longneck who devote there lives to killing sharpteeth.” The children gasped. “That’s horrible, it is, it is,” Ducky coughed.  Sharptooth and Pterano looked at each other. “It has to be Redfoot  behind this,” Pterano muttered, “He’s always been trying to get rid of us.” “BUT WHAT ARE WE GONNA DO?!” Guido panicked. “There’s only  of us in good condition to fight, but there’s no way we can take them all on!” “Then we have to solve this problem at the source,” Sharptooth said. “We have to track down Redfoot and make him get rid of these flowers. He knows that if one of the sickened sharpteeth try to live, the 14 will kill them.” “But how do we get out of here?” Chomper asked. “Petrie, his uncle, and Guido can fly, but us…” “There’s a secret exit to the Mysterious Beyond from my cave,” Sharptooth explained. “Chomper, you, I, and Ruby can take it.”  Sharpteeth looked at all his fellow valley members.

“Everyone, you must stay strong,” he said, sounding like a true leader. “You must not give up hope and surrender to the enemy. The 6 of us WILL solve the problem, and save your lives.” “But we’ll need help,” Chomper said. Sharptooth thought a moment. Most of the sharpeeth who lived in the Great Valley area gathered here and got sick. Then he remembered… “We could find Doc.”


(Hope you like it.! Read and Review, or PM me with your comments. From this point on, it’s all plot development.)

Sharptooth-version of Doc comes next chapter!

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 24, 2008, 08:04:23 PM »
(Whoops, I meant Kai.)

"Whee!" Rita cheered. For her and Chomper, this was awesome!

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 24, 2008, 05:52:47 PM »
(OK, I'll tempoarily control Chomper's parents until you come back. We'll say that Cayso and racnar just do te same thing as everyone else.)

"We're ready son," Chomper's mother smiled, watching her son and rita take th plunge. "We haven't done stuff like this since we were kids, eh?" Papa S. commented. "That's right. Here we go!" the parents said, jumping down

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 24, 2008, 08:49:35 AM »
Veli soon flew down, following them. "Let's go Chomper," Rita smiled, and the two rexes took the plunge. "Coming mom and dad?" Chomper asked before he slid down. Redclaw decided to wait for everyone else to go down becuase he was big.


"Nowhere special, just taking a walk."  the spiketail replied.  Suddenly a scent came to his sniffer. "Do you smell tha? Sharpteeth........about 12 of em too!"

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LBT Fanfiction / Link to my Total Drama Valley fanfic
« on: November 23, 2008, 04:14:37 PM »
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4612919/9/Total_Drama_Valley

Episode 8, a little more action (In addition to drama.)


Brekclub85 Presents…..
TOTAL DRAMA VALLEY Episode 8: Game Over, Dude

“Bye everyone!” Bridgette waved, getting into the time machine to head back to 2008. “Bye Bridgette!” Littlefoot, Ruby, Chomper, Tera, and Petrie called, and everybody waved to her, even Cera. Even Cera liked that human.

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Tippy: Tippy wants to know: Does anyone in the Great Valley know who gave Tippy those heart-shaped rocks? Seriously, Tippy would appreciate that.

Shortly after Icky’s “elimination” and Bridgette’s return to the future, the 16 remaining dinos were back in their cabins. In the FF girl’s cabin, Ali and Tippy were having a friendly chat, Rita and Myra were talking in their native sharptooth tongue so the others couldn’t understand them. “Cera’s got to pay,” Myra said angrily. “The more I remember that night, the more I feel bad for Spike.”

“I know what you mean,” Rita replied. “Cera’s been mean to Chomper before, I heard. I’m on your side Myra.” Myra looked over at Cera and Ducky, who were sharing treestars…which Cera had Ducky collect all by herself. “Pitiful,” Myra muttered in disappointment towards Ducky.

LATER THAT NIGHT………

A few of the interns were talking with Chris. “You sure these things are safe?” one intern asked. “Dudes, were on a budget. This will probably bring up the ratings.” “Whatever,” Chef replied. Everybody was holding weird metallic helmets. All of these helmets had cords. And all of the cords were connected to a main computer mainframe. “OK, let’s get this show on the road man,” Chris smiled in his sadistic-type of smile.

Chef snuck into the Fighting Flatteeth Boy’s cabin. He rather roughly threw one on each of Littlefoot, Chomper, and Nod’s heads, but they didn’t wake up. Another intern went into the Super Sharpteeth girls’ cabin and put one on Tera and Ruby. A third went into the SS boy’s cabin, putting a helmet on Shorty, Guido, Rory, Rhett, and Petrie. A rather nervous intern entered the FF girls’ cabin, not trying to awake the 6 girls who were inside it currently.

Chris, meanwhile, was enjoying a soda. “Aw…the tasty flavor of Fizzy Master.” He then gave the camera a look. “What? The company from the future’s allowing us to have product placement.” Chef and the interns returned. “We got the stupid helmets all set up,” Chef said. “Now what?” Chris let out a chuckle. “Now…..let the game begin.” He flipped a switch.

A computerized voice began speaking. “Scanning dino DNA….Virtualization.” Everyone was sleeping throughout this. Soon, they would wake up….

THE NEXT MORNING………..

Te 16 remaining players’ eyes slowly opened. After everyone blinked for a few moments, Petrie finally shouted “WHERE ARE WE?!” Suddenly, a giant screen turned on. “Whoa,” everyone screamed, than Chris’ face appeared. “Morning dudes,” he laugh in his minor-psychopathic way. “What’s going on Chris?” Littlefoot asked. “Your next challenge my man,” Chris replied. Everyone looked around at what happened next.

“You’re in a video game, players,” Chris laughed. “What’s a video game?” asked Ruby. “It’s sort of like a sleep story that your in control of,” Chris explained Suddenly, flat rocks were digitized in front of Cera, Littlefoot, Ali, Nod, Shorty, Rhett, and Tippy. Little virtual swords appeared in front of Ducky, Petrie, Tera, Guido, and Ruby. Little ray blasters appeared for Chomper, Rita, Myra, and Rory. “What are these for?” Chomper asked.

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Chomper: This challenge was very weird. I mean, in this “ved-Eeoh game” my senses wouldn’t work. I bet humans find these things stupid.

Chris kept explaining the rules. “Using those weapons, you must fight each other.” Everyone looked shocked. “But we’re friends!” called Ali. “We wouldn’t hurt or fight each other.” Chris chuckled. “Don’t worry Ali,” Chris replied. “Your bodies aren’t in this video game, just your minds.” The footage suddenly stopped.

Chirs walked in front of the camera. “ello viewers, it took us about 30 minutes just to explain the whole concept of video games to them, so we had to cut that part out. The footage then resumed.

“Each of you has a life point meter. Every time you’re hit, it goes down. When it reaches 0, the game’s over for you and you will reawaken in the real world. Last team with players still standing wins.” At this point,. The concept of video games sounded fun to the dinos.

Suddenly, a big virtual wall emegerged from the ground and separated the FF and SS teams. “Just so this game won’t end in a minute, you have to navigate this game world to find everyone.” Chris said. “And so I can have more time for hair care products” he added mentally.

Rory picked up his ray blaster. “How does this work?” he asked. He pressed the button while unintentionally facing Petrie, and a big ray suddenly hit Petrie. Petrie wasn’t hurt, but he started to flicker like whenever a character in a video game takes damage. “Me ok,” Petrie said. “Just don’t do it again Rory,” “Got it,” the fast biter replied. Petrie lost half his life points because of that blast.

Players began taking off different paths. “Good luck Rory,” Myra waved to her fellow fast biter. “Hey,” Cera said angrily. “He’s on the other team, you’re supposed to wish us good luck.” Myra fumed a bit. “You’re not even a team player,” she said under her breath, walking off.

Meanwhile, Ali and Littlefoot were walking down a path. ”Can you believe all the things we’ve seen for the first time since humans arrived?” Littlefoot commented amazed. “I know,” Ali smiled back at Littlefoot’s face. When Littlefoot turned his head, Ali quickly turned hers.

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Littlefoot: Ali and I have been friends since we first met. I just don’t get why she spends most of her time here with me.

Ducky was practicing swinging her virtual blade. “This is heavy, it is, it is,” she commented, using her strength just to keep holding it up. “Never mind that,” Cera replied “we have to make sure we win this challenge.” “But how?” Ducky asked. “Go help our team fight? “No,” Cera chuckled. “That’s too risky. “Let’s just hide here and wait to every one else devirtualizes themselves.” Myra huffed overhearing that while she walked off.

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Myra: I can’t believe that threehorn! The next time we lose, she is so voted off!

In the Super Sharpteeth team, Petrie and Rhett were going together. Rory was going by himself, as was Shorty. Tera was helping Guido just so he wouldn’t be picked on again. “We won’t win, it’s 7 on 9,” Guido sighed. “Don’t be a pessimist Guido,” Tera laughed.

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Tera: At least Petrie isn’t negative, even if he can be a fraidy-flyer sometimes. (Giggles a little.)

Rhett and Petrie rounded a bend, when Littlefoot and Ali entered the corner of their eyes. “How are we gonna get them?” Rhett asked. “I can hit them from afar, but you’d need get close up.” “Me thinking,” replied Petrie. But then, Ali had seen them.

“Let’s get ready,” Ali said in a battle-ready voice. “Uh oh,” Petrie and Rhett said. Ali tossed her flat rock out of her mouth and towards Rhett, it grazed Rhett’s head and took about one-fourth of Rhett’s life points off. The rock than came back like a boomerang.

“Awesome!” laughed Ali. “Let’s go,” Petrie called to Rhett. Meanwhile, Chomper and Rita were walking down a tunnel together. “This is sooooo cool Chomper,” Rita laughed, when suddenly they saw 2 flyers nearby. It was Guido and Tera. “On no,” Guido sighed.

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Guido: Ever since Shorty, Rory, and Petrie have started being jerks to me, I’ve really lost self-confidence.

“I’ll take em Guido,” Tera laughed. Chomper fired his laser, and the two flyers barely managed to dodge it. “You go find Shorty or Rory,” she advised. Guido nodded and glided off.

Myra, meanwhile, was on a higher path. She looked down and saw Cera and Ducky, still in the first virtual room, not doing anything. “That tares it,” she mumbled. She looked ahead, and saw Rory. Suddenly, she had an idea of how to get back at Cera. “Hey Rory,” she called. Rory turned, aiming his blaster, but Myrs quickly said. “Wait, wait, I give up.” “Huh?” asked Rory.

Shorty, meanwhile, was in the middle of a battle with Tippy and Nod. “This is bad,” Nod said. Since the 3 were all four-legged flatteeth, they were all using the boomerang rocks. Shorty ran up some digital steps to dodge Tippy’s attack. “Shorty got lucky that time,”
Tippy taunted. “We’ll see spiketail,” Shorty laughed. Nod went to attack, but Shorty jumped onto his back. He tossed his rock at Nod at point blank range. The damage did enough to wipe out all of Nod’s life points.

In the real world, Nod’s helmet came off automatically. “That felt weird,” commented Nod. “So what now?” she walked out of the Fighting Flatteeth Boy’s cabin, when he saw Chris. “Hey Chris….” Nod began to say, but saw that Chris was completely glued to blow drying his hair. “Nevermind,” Nod said, and walked off to the Mess Hall.

In the Rhett and Petrie Vs. Ali and Littlefoot fight, Petrie was nearly out of lifeponts. Rhett managed to get a direct hit on Littlefoot, wiping him out. “all right Rhett!” cheered Petrie. But cheering on his teammate distracted him enough for Ali to attack him head on. “Ah man…” Petrie muttered. Rhett was about to attack Ali, but even though it was just a game, he couldn’t do it.

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Ali: I can’t hit Ali, she wouldn’t like me then…right?

Ali giggled a little at Rhett, then hit him with the rock. Now only 12 players were still in the world.

Tera meanwhile, was having trouble with Chomper and Rita. It was a bad idea to face them head-on, so she tried to flee. “You can’t get away Tera,” Chomper called playfully. “Us sharpteeth are as great hunters here as we are in real life.” Tera tried to fly in a zig-zag pattern, but Rita managed to get a good laser blast in. “Darn it,” Tera said. Chomper and Rita gave each other a hi-5 as they won. “What next?” asked Rita.

In the entrance hall, Ducky and Cera were still staying put. “I really think we should help our team, I do, I do,” Ducky commented. “And risk being defeated, no way,” Cera said in return. Ducky thought that this was part of the alliance, so she stayed put.

“What’s going on Myra?” Rory asked. “Look, I want to take Cera down, and I can tell you where to find her, she’s getting on my nerves.” Rory thought about this for a second, if this was anyone else on the Fighting Flatteeth team, he would think it was a trap, but for some special reason….he trusted Myra. “Sure, I’ll help ya get Cera back,” Rory laughed. As the two fast biters began to take off, Rory noticed something. It was something that Chris explained was called a “powerup,” Rory walked over to it, and suddenly a computerized voice said. “Super Blast collected. It automatically destroys every opposing team member in sight.” “This sounds awesome,” Rory said.

Tippy managed to take down Shorty. “Darn it,” Shorty complained as he returned to the real world. “Don’t underestimate Tippy,” the spiketail laughed successfully. She soon met up with Ali, Chomper, and Rita. “So what comes next?” Ali asked. “Tippy doesn’t know,” Tippy replied. “Maybe we should head back into the Entrance Hall.” Chomper nodded, and the 4 set off. The were ahead of Rory and Myra…..neither was aware of what the other group was doing.

Ruby meanwhile had no luck finding anyone the entire game. “This challenge was boring, boring was this challenge,” she sighed, when suddenly she bumped into Guido. “Agh!” shouted Guido. “Shh…it’s me,” Ruby whispered to Guido. “Oh thank goodness. Ruby, it’s just you,” Guido panted in relief. Then, they saw Rory walking with Myra. “What’s she doing here?” Ruby called suddenly. “Myra is one the other team, isn’t she?” Rory explained the situation.

“Selling out a teammate, well, we’ll come with ya.” Guido laughed, and the 4 took off. Back in the entrance hall, Cera and Ducky saw Tippy, Rita, Chomper, and Ali arrive. “Where have you been?” Ali complained. Ali still hadn’t forgiven Cera for the incident in episode 5. “Using good strategy,” Cera replied. “Looks like we’re gonna win,” Chomper smiled. Suddenly, they heard Myra’s voice say, “She’s in here.”

Everyone turned in time to see Rory charging up the Super Blast. Myra’s vengeful smiled turned into a shocked expression to see her ENTIRE team in the entrance hall. “Oh, crud..” Myra said. He scheme went array completely. She didn’t want this. Try as they might, Rory’s blast was large and Ali, Cera, Chomper, Ducky, Tippy, and Rita’s life point counts all hit zero. In the real-world, everyone was wide-eyed. “Tippy can’t believe it,” Tippy said in shock. “Myra betrayed us!” In the game, Myra sighed, everything had went wrong.

Myra then hit herself with her own sword, devirtualizing herself and ending the game. Rory, Guido, and Ruby jumped up in victory, though Rory felt bad about Myra. “The Super Sharpteeth win!” Chris called as the final 3 SS teammates returned back to the valley. “Fighting Flatteeth, looks like you have to vote someone off.” Myra tried to explain the situation.

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Ali: I just can’t believe that fast biter.

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Rita: Though Chomper is awesome, Myra was one of my closest friends in the Mysterious Beyond. I’m siding with her.

THE BONFIRE CEREMONY……

6 of the Fighting Flatteeth looked fine, while Myra and Cera exchanged mad glances, and Ducky looked nervous. “Well, after a day of pure relaxation for me, it’s time for the fear-inducing Sweet Bubble Ceremony,” Chris laughed. “I only have 8 sweet bubbles of safety on this plate. If you don’t receive a sweet bubble, you must walk the Tunnel of Shame, and you can never ever ever come back.” Everyone gulped. “Ali.” Chirs said, and the girl longneck collected her prize.

“Rita…..Littlefoot….Tippy….Nod…..Chomper.” Every dinosaur whose name was called looked relieved. Chomper and Rita let the others eat their sweet bubbles. Down to Ducky, Myra, and Cera. “The next name I’m going to call is………..Ducky,” Chris announced. Ducky smiled, but looked a little scared. “Cera, Myra, down to you…” Chirs commented. The threehorn and fast biter exchanged angry glances. “The final sweet bubble of the night goes to……………………………Cera.” Cera laughed, as Myra looked angry. “Tunnel of Shame time for you,” Cera laughed. Myra huffed and began to walk towards the tunnel.

As Myra was about to walk out, she turned and faced Cera and Ducky. “I may be out of the game,” Myra said. “But I promise…I’ll make sure you pay for everything you’ve done cera,” she vowed. Cera didn’t look scared. Myra turned to Ducky. “Ducky…get out of that alliance while you can. She’s just using you.” Ducky gulped.

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Ducky: Cera doesn’t use me. We’re friends, we are, we are. (looks unsure.)

As Myra was about to walk away, she heard Rory call “Wait up!””Bye Rory,” Myra smiled at the male fast biter. Suddenly…Rory gave her a big kiss! “See you in the near future,” Rory waved. Tippy, Rita, and Ali awed at this. Tippy and Ali now felt bad about voting her off.

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Ali: Cera will pay, Myra. We promise.

NEXT EPISODE: The teams must return eggs to various nests in a game version of “The Great Egg Adventure,”, Tippy and Ali team up to make Cera’s life miserable, and a mix-up spells disaster for a certain player……


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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 23, 2008, 01:57:06 PM »
Tyra held onto Kai tight. "I'm ready to do this," Redclaw said. He would go down by himslef, because he was big. Veli would also go down by himslef. "You ready mom and dad?" Chomper smiled at his parents.

(In case you don't remember, Starfallraptor you control Chomper's parents.)

Meanwhile, the spiketail was still talking to Doc. "So, you manage to get rid of any more sharpteeth lately?" he asked

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 23, 2008, 10:15:26 AM »
Chomper and Rita held each other's hands as well. "Wanna hold hands Kai?" Tyra asked, as Redclaw put them back on the ground

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 23, 2008, 04:32:24 AM »
"Just close your eyes and image it's a water slide on a very bright day," Veli suggested. Rita looked at Chomper. "That sounds awesome!" the love-biters smiled




Meanwhile, the spiketail looked up at Doc. "Oh, it's you," he said amazed "The Lone Dinosaur. I'm fine, how you've been?

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: November 23, 2008, 02:03:11 AM »

(This is the point in the story when the plot really starts picking up. Hope ya like it.)

Chapter 24: Inspector Cera Part 2

Ruby was looking all around the Great Valley, panicked. “It can’t be gone!” she cried. “It just can’t!”  Chomper felt bad for his close friend. “Even though they are always in my memories, if Howler’s tooth is gone, it’s like another part of him is gone.” A tear began to form in Ruby’s eye.  “Ruby…” Chomper said, not knowing any other words to say.  Ruby managed to sniffle the tear. (At this point, she sang the Remembering song, but I just don’t like retyping the songs, ok?) Chomper came up to his fast biter friend and gave her a hug. “It’ll be ok,” Chomper tried to comfort. He gave Ruby a hug, as did Sharptooth who had to lean down greatly, but he still attempted it. “Thanks guys,” Ruby smiled. “Don’t worry, we won’t give up on finding that tooth,” Sharptooth explained. “Ok, let’s go,” Ruby smiled, gaining confidence, and the two little sharpteeth and the one big one took off again.

Meanwhile, Cera caught up to Littlefoot and Spike. “You look mad Cera,” Littlefoot said, noticing the mad look on his friend’s face. “Something happen?” “Yeah, I met this really rude fast biter when I went to clean this mud off of me,” Cera replied.  “He wouldn’t answer my question.” Spike laughed a little. “Don’t tell me you suspected some random dino of being the thief,” Littlefoot said. “Good mystery-solvers don’t jump to the conclusions.”  “I AM a good mystery-solver,” Cera replied.  “We just haven’t had results yet.”  Spike made a noise that suggested, “Let’s go.”  Cera and Littlefoot agreed with him there. “Maybe Chomper’s parents and Petrie’s mom have been more successful than we have been,” Littlefoot suggested.  “Couldn’t hurt to find out,” Cera smiled, and the trio took off. (Hey, two consecutive paragraphs ending in the same two words. Gets repetitive, doesn’t it?)

The friends met up with Dein, Tera, and Terri back at Chomper’s cave. “Nothing?” the grownups asked, forwing slightly. “Nothing,” Littlefoot and Cera sighed. The two groups of mystery-solvers did decide to share the information each one found out. “So, there wass leafeater blood on Guido’s foot claws and Hyp’s claws were completely broken,” Cera and Terri said in unison.  Tera flew over to the weird print outside the cave. “This is odd,” she soon deduced. “Look at this everybody.” “What is it?” Cera asked. “This print came from something dragging across the surface.” “You mean a belly dragger did this?” Cera asked, again jumping to conclusions. “No, too small to be from a belly dragger,” Tera replied. “Looks like a foot print.”  

“Ah ha,” Cera said confidentally.  “We can just match the footprint size to the size of our suspects’ feet and we have our answer.” “Alight problem Cera,” Litllefoot commented. “This print is too small to be from either the bullies or Guido.” Cera frowned. Her investigation wasn’t bringing any results.  “Oh just great…” she started to complain. “My friends’ stuff is missing, our suspects have both been proven innocent just now, and we have no leads whatsoev…..AGH!” This entire rant, Cera was walking around in angry circles, so she failed to notice the entrance to a hole hidden amongst the grass, so she quickly fell down it. “You OK Cera?” Littlefoot called, Petrie’s mom flying down to check on her. “Yeah, don’t worry,” replied Cera. “Where’d this stupid hole come from anyway? “ However, in the back of Cera, Spike, and Littlefoot’s minds, this felt somewhat familiar…

Chomper, Ruby, and Sharptooth meanwhile, were continuing the hunt for Howler’s tooth.  “Who else knows that you live with Sharptooth Ruby?” Chomper asked. Sharptooth responded to this question. “Your friend Littlefoot’s grandparents do,” he explained. “But we know them, they’d never do something like this.”  Ruby thought about that comment, as it raised another question: Why would anyone swipe her brother’s tooth in the first place?  It didn’t make sense at all. “Let’s split up,” Chomper suiggested, and Ruby and Sharptooth agreed with this idea.

MEANWHILE…..

A flash of insight hit Cera, Littlefoot, and Spike. “I think I know what happened,” Cera laughed in a small bit of triumph. She looked up at Littlefoot. “You thinking what I’m thinking?” “Yeah,” Littlefoot nodded and smiled in response. “Hey Petrie’s mom,” Cera said. “Could you do me a favor?” “What is it?” Tera asked, not figuring out what the children had figured out. Cera whispered something into Tera’s ear (Mainly so I don’t tell you the solution beforehand.) “Sure,” Tera replied, and flew deeper into the underground caves. Terri lowered her big t-rex tail, and Cera climbed up it to get out of the hole. She and her friends had figured out who the thief was, and the proof would be arriving shortly. “So what’s our next move, Mystery-solver Cera?” Terri asked as if it were a game. The young rex, fast biter, and belly dragger all shared a similar smile. “Our next move is catching the culprit,” Cera laughed in silent victory.

A FEW MINUTES LATER…..

“Hey what’s up guys?” Guido asked, as Littlefoot, Spike, Cera, Dein, and Terri gathered around him. “We know it was you Guido,” Littlefoot said. “Who? Me?” Guido laughed. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” “You might want to change your story boy,” Dein laughed in a stern way. “But how could I have taken the shiny stone and Petrie’s snuggling stick without anyone noticing?” Guido retorted. ”Someone would’ve seen me since I can’t fly right now.”  “Simple,” Cera replied. “You used the underground caverns to navigate without being seen or sniffed.” “It was such a simple trick,” Littlefoot went on. “And you planted the treesweets to cover your tracks.” Guido clapped his hands. “Nice mystery-solver work, but two more things: Where’s your proof and how did I cover my footprints?” Soon, they heard a voice coming from underground. “That’s coming right up kid,” Terri laughed.

“Hey! Lemme go!” a voice said. Tera flew up from the underground caverns…..holding a little t-rex. “You had our friend Lizzie help you.” “You stood on her back when you got out of the caverns, and she put her feet together and dragged them across the ground to confuse us with that footprint.” Guido looked nervous at this point. “But where’s your proof?” Spike made a noise suggesting “Right here,” and the belly dragger pointed to Lizzie’s shoulder. There was a little cut on it. “Mrs. Chomper’s mom, please sniff and compare.”  Terri put her sniffer next to Guido’s foot, than the cut on Lizzie’s shoulder. “A match,” she confirmed. Guido sighed. He walked over and pulled off some leaves that were covering a hole. He took out Petrie’s stick and Terri’s shiny stone, and threw them to the gang. “Here ya go,” he gave up simply. “But why did you do it?” “Because of Petrie,” Guido replied. “Huh?” went everyone.

“A few days ago, I was in the waterhole when Ducky came up to me. She told me that Petrie considered giving up stunt flying, and she wanted me to help him convince him not to.” “I don’t get it,” replied Littlefoot. “Even if you didn’t find me out, I was going to tell him that he wouldn’t get his snuggling stick back unless he could do something really impressive. It wasn’t that mean.” “But why did you take my shiny stone also?” Terri asked. “Just so it wouldn’t be obvious.” Guido replied.  Soon afterwards, Guido was given a punishment by the leader of the feathered flyers, and Cera began jumping up and down happily. “All right! I AM a great mystery solver. I’m the smartest fast biter there is!” Dein was about to make a comment, but Littlefoot said. “Eh…let her brag. She deserves it.” Cera ran off, still bragging over-cheerfully.

Meanwhile, Chomper, Sharptooth, and Ruby were slowly losing faith in their efforts. “It’s no use,” Ruby sighed, looking up in the sky watching the flying sharpteeth herd return from the daily hunting trip. “I’ll never find…huh?” she looked inside Sharptooth’s cave. Howler’s tooth was there!  “Oh my goodness,” Ruby said, running over to it and giving the little fang a hug, even. Chomper and Sharptooth smiled.  “Glad whoever took it was gracious enough to return it,” Sharptooth smiled, but he still didn’t know who took it.

Cera meanwhile was still laughing in victory. The Bright Circle had gone down, so she decided it was time to  return home. “This has just been the most perf…..AGH!” Suddenly, a big tail swooped out of nowhere from one of the exits to the Mysterious Beyond and slammed Cera against the stone wall! “What the?” Cera said, in pain and shock, looking up and seeing a big longneck! She screamed in terror as she just managed to roll out of the way of a stomp. Chomper and Ruby, now glad about finding her brother’s tooth, were having a nice csual stroll, when Cera, getting a scrape on her stomach recognized their scents. “CHOMPER! RUBY! HELP!” she wailed. Chomper and Ruby heard their friend’s scream and came running. When the longneck realized that reinforcements were one the way, it gave one final tail swipe, slamming Cera into the wall, and then it quickly retreated into the Mysterious Beyond.

Chomper and Ruby arrived just in time. “Cera?!” they both screamed, and ran over to her. Ruby checked her breathing. Cera was still alive, bleeding from the head and stomach a little. “Some….psycho longneck attacked…..me,” she huffed, still conscious. “And I…..don’t even…get why.” Cera then passed out. “We gotta get her help!” Chomper panicked. Sharptooth soon arrived, and they high tailed cera over to Mr. and Mrs. Belly Dragger.  Littlefoot, Spike, Ducky, Petrie, Veli, and Cira soon arrived. Veli was horrified at the news. “If I find that longneck…” Veli vowed angrily. “I am gonna kill him so painfully for what he did to my innocent daughter!” Mr. belly Dragger looked at Cera’s parents. “She’s going to be OK Veli,” he assured. “The herbs I’ve collected will heal her wounds, and she’ll just need more rest.” That comment helped with the pain, but it didn’t take Cira and Veli’s anger away.


MEANWHILE, IN THE MYSTERIOUS BEYOND……

The longneck that attacked Cera walked over to a shadowy spot. “There…I took care of it,” he panted. A mysterious figure in the darkness laughed, in a “yeah right,” tone of voice. “You’ll let my family free now?” the longneck asked. “Pitiful fool,” the figure responded. “Not only is that girl fast biter still alive, but you didn’t even attack the right one, I guess I can’t trust your type for simple plans….or my overall goal.” “NO!” yelled the longneck “You can’t!” “Oh, but I can…” the figure replied, and before the longneck could do anything, the figure attacked it.


(By now you’re wondering: What the heck’s going on? Well, just keep Reading and Reviewing and you’ll eventually find out….)

Next time, on The Land Before time: Sharptooth Valley: Petrie and Guido finally recover, and it a multi-chapter story arc, Redfoot puts his master plan to eliminate all the sharpteeth into action….

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Starday Wishes / Happy Birthday Kor!
« on: November 23, 2008, 01:15:47 AM »
Happy 41, and many more to come.    :)

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