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Starday Wishes / Happy Starday hoin1585
« on: March 06, 2008, 02:15:24 AM »
Happy starday :D I hope you will have a good day. We will be having a big party in here :birthday .. :lol
Nice age by the way  :wow  :rolleyes:

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The Written Word / The injustice of power.
« on: March 06, 2008, 02:10:29 AM »
Hmm Chapter 2

Tony’s mother, Flora, saw her son playing with his friends. She smiled while watching them. Slowly she walked in the direction of the waterplace. She was about to drink something, when she saw a large group of dinosaurs in a big circle. They were busy arguing. She made her way through the crowd and listened what they were talking about. ëI am sorry for those of you who have no choice, I do not have one either.’ Flora said: ëI’m sorry to interrupt, but I must have missed something. What are you talking about?’ ëI will repeat it’ ,the messenger said, ëThe master has told me to let everyone know that different classes are not allowed to speak, see or do anything with each other. The master wants to divide the whole canyon in two classes, the upper and the lower class. The upper class will be living in the west, and the lower class will be living in the east. Everyone has got 10 days to move to the right place. If you don’t know where you belong you can ask me or if you want to the master.’ Flora slowly walked forward to the messenger. ëO, messenger, can you tell me in which class I and my son belong to?’ She waited as the messenger observed her. ëAre you Flora, the mother of Tony, widow and once married to Archilles?’ ëYes I am.’ she answered. He thought very hard. After a few seconds he replied: ëYou and your son belong to the upper class, don’t be afraid, it will be ok. Go, and travel to the west.’ Flora looked disappointed, probably because she was not satisfied with this new rule. ëWhat is the difference between someone from the upper and lower class?’ Flora asked. ëIt is loyalty miss, your husband gave his life while defending our master. You are part of the upper class.’ She walked back to her home while thinking about a lot of things. Once she was back she saw her son playing again, in tears she wondered how long it would last.

I'll be back in 8 hours, hope you guys have fun with reading. :unsure:
(ok it took me 12 not 20 hours to post a new one..  :rolleyes: )

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The Written Word / Chapter One of something i'm writing
« on: March 05, 2008, 03:18:03 PM »
hehe ok.. I can speak english, like it is my second language, but I still do make a lot of mistakes. I can speak french a bit, and german too. And dutch of course. Might learn some other language when I grow older, I hope so, I like it a lot :)

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The Written Word / The injustice of power.
« on: March 05, 2008, 02:57:42 PM »
That is true indeed. Any comment or edit is welcome, because my spelling/grammar could be VERY bad. And of course I am a human so I am used to making a lot of mistakes  :P: Well thanks for showing interest guys, I am think of posting the second chapter in 20 hours or so  :rolleyes: ..

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The Written Word / Chapter One of something i'm writing
« on: March 05, 2008, 02:43:54 PM »
1 thing you can clearly see, you are english and I am not. This kind of writing is of my knowlegde yet. I might write such sentenses in dutch though. My stories normally were halflength of what this story is. Interesting subject, really. Thanks for sharing. (Took me 20 minutes to read it.. omg.. xD)

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The Written Word / The injustice of power.
« on: March 05, 2008, 02:15:40 PM »
Hehe I always make long chapters too, but I think of switching my style of writing. Just so it would be easier for the forum. And for my friend who, I think, always needed 1 hour to read one chapter of mine. Though she likes a lot to read my stories :) .

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The Written Word / The injustice of power.
« on: March 05, 2008, 02:10:14 PM »
This is chapter one,, I make short chapters so it is easy to read.

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The Written Word / The injustice of power.
« on: March 05, 2008, 02:05:49 PM »
Thanks for the idea Chile. I'm really bad in think of those things. =P and Claw that why i didnt post it all at once  think it is too much.

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The Written Word / The injustice of power.
« on: March 05, 2008, 01:39:18 PM »
Ok.. Well I am a bit unsure about this. I never published one of my stories before. I only showed them to a friend and most of the time that's it. But still I thought of something a long time ago, and now I am going to write it. Even with dinosaurs as main characters. I don't know if it is good or not, I have told Nimrod that I was going to write something earlier. Well I've started on it now. Here is the first chapter of 'The injustice of Power'.

Ch. 1
ëThe Canyon has always been protected by our Master. We’ve always obeyed him and will never turn against him. Our Master is like our father, we should listen. I won’t become a good dinosaur if I do not obey. The Canyon will….’ Tony turned his back to the young Triceratops and took a good look at his friends. They all were growing older. But Tony has always said he doesn’t want to say the oath to the master. His friends knew this, and they have got the same interpretation. They all think the master is bad. Now their friend was promising the oath to the Master. ëWhy is he doing that, I thought he was one of us, and I thought he didn’t want to grow up either. Now he is saying the oath and is becoming an adult… Why?’ asked Tony to his friends. They shook their heads, they didn’t know either. All they knew was that they should promise full loyalty to the Master once. And if they have done that, they should work every day from the time that the big circle rises until it goes down again. They don’t want this, they actually want to be young forever. If they were, they could play under the waterfall until they die, or roll down the hillside like they have always done. Or of course ran after the butterflies with their pretty colors. They don’t want to go working all day, they want to keep on playing until they are too old to play.

I've also got chapter 2 and 3 but I am going to post those later. First I will see if this gets some attention.
Some things I have to note: I didn't have any idea what kind of dinosaur Tony will be, does anyone have a good idea?
And this is just an introduction, the story hasn't really started yet. :unsure:

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The Fridge / MSN Virus Warning!
« on: March 05, 2008, 01:21:18 PM »
Thanks for the warning.

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LBT Projects / I have to remove my vids
« on: March 05, 2008, 11:56:02 AM »
ooo that's not nice.. I've always watched your videos before I came to this forum.. It's sad but I do understand it... Too bad for us. -_-  :unsure:

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Starday Wishes / Happy Birthday Littlefoot Fan!
« on: March 05, 2008, 11:45:29 AM »
:D Happy birthday  :birthday

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LBT Projects / Foreign versions of songs...
« on: March 04, 2008, 01:15:31 PM »
Quote from: Akiko,Mar 4 2008 on  06:00 PM
Ah, sorry^^;; *sits in the corner with her 'stupid hat'* :DD
Hehe doesnt matter.. I just wanted to let you guys know :D

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It's Party Time! / Word Connection
« on: March 04, 2008, 12:50:53 PM »
Very sorry lain. my fault.

Round

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LBT Projects / Foreign versions of songs...
« on: March 04, 2008, 12:43:42 PM »
Akiko, that isn't dutch it's german. I know deutsch and dutch look similair but they are different.. =P deutsch is the german word for german.. =P If I see some dutch ones I will post them here though.

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It's Party Time! / Word Connection
« on: March 03, 2008, 03:15:31 PM »
invisable

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The Party Room / The False Facts Game
« on: March 03, 2008, 03:14:07 PM »
#4?

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1988 Theatrical Release / Littlefoot's Egg
« on: March 03, 2008, 10:13:45 AM »
I think there could be many reasons for the broken eggs. And actually I don't think we will ever know the real reason, unless it will be told in one of the upcoming movies. But they surely don't seem hatched, more like destroyed.
Malte I think the reason that they are a bit darker is that they shouldn't get much attention(from the watchers), and maybe they became dirty by mud... Why littlefoot's egg wasn't dirty, I think because his mother/grandparents wanted to keep their only egg clean...

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The Welcome Center / Hello there Comrades!
« on: March 03, 2008, 10:04:43 AM »
Welcome to the GoF :lol:  Hope you enjoy :)

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1988 Theatrical Release / Littlefoot's Egg
« on: March 02, 2008, 03:45:34 AM »
It actually would be very weird if the egg came from another nest. Because his egg actually didn't travel really far. And his grandparents (and mother?) probably followed the egg and even saw it hatching. So I don't think he's from a nest of others. Above all, you don't see any other longnecks in that area. So it would be hard to be from another nest.

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