The Gang of Five
Beyond the Mysterious Beyond => The Arts => Visual Art => Topic started by: Megatoph on March 30, 2008, 05:09:30 AM
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the cover for the Pilot.
(http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p32/Megatoph/ThaidaMassacre.png)
after the fight with the firenation, Toph's planet is visited by the USCM, and she joins the Marines. her first mission is to figure out why a colony on the Planet "Thaida" has not communicated for weeks. but is this Earthbender ready for a life as an advanced soldier. the Original Pilot for a short series of Comics.
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Looks like it could be interesting. Though likely very dark and bloody, if it is like the typical alien movie.
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the pilot of a show or a comic is usualy dark toned.
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Just a quick suggestion, I think "The Thaida Massecre" could benefit from moving a little away from the edge, and also from being spelt correctly (you were meaning "massacre", right?)
Generally, so far so good. It simply radiates potential.
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no its Massecre.
anywho this is just the cover, the full comic won't be posted here.
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no its Massecre.
Is "Massecre" an Americanism or something? What does it mean?
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Massive killing in one place. look it up.
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Yes... that's spelt "Massacre"... definately... rrrr... to prove I'm not just April Foolsing you now:
Massacre (http://www.thefreedictionary.com/massacre)
There.
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btw, I think I'll have Toph die in the final comic.
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Up to you. I'm sure it does occur in fiction. Fits in with a dark theme I would think.
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nah just kiddin. not gonna kill her off.