Changing it to the way Caustizer requested.
Here's Chapter 1 (note: I've added an extra line and paragraph)
Littlefoot and Cera are walking through the Great Valley without Ducky, Petrie, Spike, Ruby or Chomper, they didn't wake up when Littlefoot and Cera did.
Littlefoot says, "When do you think that the others will wake up? It's boring just walking around the valley all morning."
Cera responds, "I know, too bad Ali and Shorty are here, then we wouldn't be bored, and we have something to do 'till others wake up."
Littlefoot exclaims, "Cera!"
Cera nevously says, "Jeez, Littlefoot. I mean play hide and go-seek or..."
In a bored voice Littlefoot says, "Okay, I just wish that we had something..."
He is cut off a female voice, "Well, why don't you turn around, and your wish will come true?"
Littlefoot and Cera turn around, they see Ali standing behind them with Shorty.
Littlefoot and Cera both exclaim, "Ali! Shorty! What are you doing here?!"
Littlefoot calms down, and says, "If you guys are here, then why are you herds?"
Ali sadly responds, "We got seperated from them in a big earthshake, but last time we saw them, they were still alive."
Shorty interrupts, "Yeah, are herds met up, and joined together."
Ali continues, "Yeah, and to make things worse, the Old One was attacked by a large grey sharptooth with a red-scar from his eye down to his hand, and it killed her."
Littlefoot glumly says, "Red Claw."
Confused, Ali responds, "Who?"
Cera states, "Red-Claw is the biggest and the meanest sharptooth alive."
Littlefoot continues, "He seperates familes, steals food from other dinosaurs, and sometimes kills other dinosaurs for no reason."
In a slightly joking voice, Shorty says, "Sounds like someone that you don't really want to mess around with."
The screen fades black, then Littlefoot, Ruby, Cera, Ali and Shorty are seen running around kicking a pineone around, while "
Lies" by Evanescence plays.
Ohhh oohh oohh oohh ahh ohh ohh oohh oohh oohh ohh ohh oooh ohh
Ohhh oohh oohh oohh ahh ohh ohh oohh oohh oohh ohh ohh oooh ohh
Ohhh oohh oohh oohh ahh ohh ohh oohh oohh oohh ohh ohh oooh ohh
Deep Heavy Speaking:
Bound at every limb by my shackles of fear
Sealed with lies through so many tears
Lost from within and persuing the end
I fight for the chance to be lied to again
You will never be strong enough
You will never be good enough
You were never conceived in love
You will not rise above
They'll never see
I'll never be
I struggle on and on to feed this hunger
Burning deep inside of me
Deep Heavy Speaking:
But through my tears breaks a blinding light
Birthing a dawn to this endless night
Arms outstretched, awaiting me
An open embrace upon a bleeding tree
Rest in me and I'll comfort you
I have lived and I died for you
Abide in me and I vow to you
I will never forsake you
They'll never see
I'll never be
I struggle on and on to feed this hunger
Burning deep inside of me
They'll never see
I'll never be
I struggle on and on to feed this hunger
Burning deep inside of me
Ohhh oohh ahh oohh ahh ohh
Ohhh oohh ahh oohh ahh ohh
Ohhh oohh ahh oohh ahh ohh
Ohhh oohh ahh oohh ahh ohh
Heavy Scream:
Rest in me and I'll comfort you
I have lived yet died for you
Abide in me and I vow to you
I will never forsake you
They'll never see
I'll never be
I struggle on and on to feed this hunger
Burning deep inside of me
Ohhh oohh ahh oohh ahh ohh
Ohhh oohh ahh oohh ahh ohh
Ohhh oohh ahh oohh ahh ohh
Ohhh oohh ahh oohh ahh ohh
(fade out)
The screen comes back, and several names appear on the screen as the camera zooms back in on them.
The title card is show:
THE LAND BEFORE TIME XV: THE QUEST OF THE LONGNECK PRINCESS
Then the main cast is shown.
Starring:
Jordan Nagai
Nika Futterman
Chlo” Moretz
Grey DeLisle
Brandon DePaul
Madison Pettis
Jim Cummings
Zachary Gordan
and
Frank Welker as Spike
Ruby, Chomper, Duck, Spike and Petrie have arrived at the spot where Littlefoot is at.
Petrie excitedly says, "It good to see again, Ali. I sorry about the Old One."
Ali sadly says, "It's good to see you too Petrie, yeah, Red Claw came out of now where, and broke her neck in one bite. Me and Shorty were the only kids in the heard besides Rhett, and we ran away from the herd when he chased after them."
Shorty, in a confident voice says, "Last time we saw them, they were still alive, I don't even Red Claw could handle that many longnecks, he probaly gave up chasing them."
In a concerned voice Ducky says, "Your herd is probaly worried sick about you though."
Cera asks, "If your here, and your herd dosen't know if your dead or alive, then how are they going to find you?"
In a sad voice, Ali says, "I guess they won't find us."
Shorty loudly says, "What are you talking about Ali? They'd surely know we'd go to the Great Valley if we every got seperated from the herd, so they'll probaly show up here in a few days."
Ali says, "I hope your right Shorty."
Littlefoot, to calm her down, says, "Yeah, Shorty's right. Your herd knows that you have friends here, so you'd come here for safety."
Cera asks, "So what happened before you ended up heading for here?"
Ali says, "How about I tell you later alright? I really need some sleep, I walked for about three days, and only slept for one of those days."
Ali and Short walk off to Ruby's cave to go sleep, and Ruby asks, "If they're sleeping our cave, then where are we going to sleep?"
Post, and tell me what you think.
I changed it so when some talks it is on a new line.