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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 06, 2008, 06:08:32 PM »
Chomper was in 2nd place until Kai tripped. "Ha ha! Can't catch me!" Chomper called

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: October 06, 2008, 02:48:00 PM »
Chapter 2: The Sharptooth Valley.


Chomper didn't know what to think.  Over the course of one nap, apparentally history had been rewritten so all his flattooth friends were now sharpteeth, as well as all the other Great Valley residents!  He needed to figure out what had happened, and he figured his new/old friends could probably tell him. "Hey, I forgot how all of us sharpteeth eneded up in this Valley, how did that happen again?" he asked.

"You're younger than us, so you weren't there," Ruby began. "But before now, we all lived in the Mysterious Beyond, where food was scarce."  "But then the biggest sharptooth of them all (The one from the original) figured out what the problem was," Littlefoot continued. "Sharpteeth back then were too self-centered and unwilling to share.  He figured if every type of sharpteeth came together, we could stop starvation problems."

"So the big sharptooth and some of the other grown ups found this valley and drove the flatteath out of it." Cera than commented. "To bad you weren't born yet, you missed a great buffet." she added with a laugh.  "so now," Littlefoot continued "All of the main sharpteeth herds live together in this valley, and we have exits to the Mysterious Beyond whenever it comes time for hunts." "Cool," Chomper said, quite impressesd.  

Because of what he wished, Chomper deduced, he know had worldwide peace between all the sharpteeth herds. "And now I have more sharpteeth friends," he smiled.  But it seemed weird that he couldn't see Rory, Rita, or Myra anywhere. "They're probably just in another part of the valley," Chomper figured.  All of a sudden, he heard another familiar voice yell "LOOK OUT BELOW!"

Chomper looked up, and saw a flying sharptooth (Imagine the ones we saw in 5) falling from the sky, and he recognized the voice. "Petrie! Be careful!" Chomper and Ruby called.  When Petrie was only about a foot above the ground, he quickly went into flight mode and glided gently throughout the air. "Surry guys, you knew I love doing that." "Well, that scared me Petrie," Chomper began, and suddenly realized "Did you just say "I"?"  Chomper never knew the flyer to have correct grammar, but he suddenly did now.

"Of course, I've been saying I since I could speak," Petrie replied. Chomper had now noticed that his wish must've affected their personalities, but he didn't know what granted his wish.  "So what do you guys wanna do next?" chomper asked. "Hunting? Playing?"

"Like I said, Mr. Belly Dragger is going to tell a story to us kids," Littlefoot said. "Cool," replied Chomper. "For a storyteller, he's not bad," added Cera. "For a non-fast biter."  Chomper sighed happily. Some things never change, no matter what....

That's chapter 2. Unlike most fanfic writers, my chapters aren't that long, but I hope you enjoy them. Currently, my idea is about 10 more chapters long, unless I get more ideas or come up with more.

Again, comments/suggestions appreciated

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: October 06, 2008, 12:33:05 PM »
Here's the first chapter, comments and suggestions are highly encouraged!

"The Land Before Time: Sharptooth Valley."

Chapter 1: Something New and Something Familar

Chomper started to wake up. He felt like he had been asleep for quite a while. He roared a little as he woke up, and then he noticed something odd. His parents were there, sleeping right next to him, but he knew that he had fallen asleep in his secret spot. "Must've sleep-walled," Chomper thought with a chuckle.  His parents' eyes opened up. "Good morning son," his father said tired.  "Morning dad," Chomper replied. "I'm gonna go play with my friends. "You do that," Papa Sharptooth replied. "And by the way, tell that belly dragger friend of yours to stop swiping our food."

"Belly dragger?" Chomper thought to himself. "None of my sharpteeth friends are belly-draggers."  He took a few steps out of the cave his family was sleeping in, then he noticed something. "What the..?!" he gasped. He, along was his family, were in the Great Valley! He also saw that there were no other dinosaurs in sight. Actually, there were no leeafeaters, just various sharpteeth!  He also noticed that unlike before, there were multiple passages into the Mysterious Beyond. "Don't tell me they got into the valley and ate everybody!" Chomper panicked, running further into the valley.

But Chomper noticed something else. All the sharpteeth seemed to be having fun and getting along. Young rexes, fast biters, and others all seemed to be playing together, playing cames like the pinecone game and hide-and-go-seek (Or as sharpteeth called it, Hide and go Hunt.)  Chomper sniffed the air, and realized that there was not a trace of leafeater nearby, as if they were hardly ever here.  Suddenly he heard a familiar voice. "Hi Chomper!" called the voice of....Littlefoot?! There was another weird thing: It was Littlefoot's voice, but it was spoken in sharptooth language. Chomper turned around, and saw another rex, same type as him but more of a gray color and slightly taller than him came up to him. "Did you sleep well, you look confused."

Chomper didn't know what to say. "Probably just a weird sleep story," he laughed mentally, and decided to play along. "I slept good, just bumped my head," Chomper laughed in reply. "So what's everyone doing?" Chomper asked. "While, Ducky's been winning all these races in the waterhole, Petrie's flying all crazy, Cera and Ruby are still trying to figure out who's better." "Same old stuf, huh?" Chomper said, though he had no idea to how this "sleep story" was going on.

Suddenly, two fastbiters were approaching Chomper and Littlefoot, apparentally in the middle of a race. One fast biter was orange, another was a dark, almost "ruby-ish" red. They stopped in front of the two rexes. "Yeah, I beat you Cerea, Cera, I beat you," said the fast biter,,with Ruby's voice. "No, I won!" bragged the fast biter with Cera's voice. "Oh not this again," Littefoot laughed.

"This is the weirdest sleep-story I ever had," Chomper laughed. "This iosn't a sleep story," replied a confused Littlefoot. "Oh never mind," replied Chomper.  Then, a young belly dragger walked up, chewing on a flattooth flyer it had caught, and seemed to be very untalkative. "Hey...Spike," Chomper guessed, hoping he guessed correctly.  Spike of course couldn't reply, so Ruby spoke up. "So what are we gonna do todsay." "I heard Mr. Belly Dragger (Mr. Thicknose) is going to tell us a story," Littlefoot replied.

Chomper laughed a little. "Probably time to wake up. I've probably missed dinner." he thought. He took his claw, and pinched his arm. "Ow," he said as he felt the pinch. Then he realized. "This isn't a sleep story, it's real!"

(Here's a thought I have about the sharptooth language: Even though all the roars and stuff sound the same to the viewer, I think to other sharpteeth the sounds sound different, that's why the sharpteeth versions of the gang sound like the leafeater versions, just speaking the other language.)

Reviews?comments encouraged! :)

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LBT Fanfiction / Land Before Time: Twilight Valley
« on: October 05, 2008, 06:44:31 PM »
I can't wait to see what happens next. I just kope Chomper makes it out OK :(   This is the second fanfic I've read where he's been kidnapped, the little sharptooth doesn't deserve it :(

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: October 05, 2008, 05:53:17 PM »
While, here's the proluge of my fanfic. I don't know how long it'll take me to post the whole thing.

Prolouge:

"I got it! I got it!" Roarey (pronounced like Rory) called. Chomper had tossed a pinecone to him for a game the two sharpteeth were playing against two more of their friends.  "Not yet you guys," simultaneously called Myra and Rita, two little girl sharpteeth. Rory was heading for the goal, but Myra pounced him and the pinecone fell.  "Hah! My turn," laughed Rita who quickly grabbed it her mouth and ran toward the opposite team's goal.

"It's not over yet," Chomper laughed, and went to tackle Rita, but she gave him a look that he couldn't resist: she gave him a very fancy smile, and Chomper stopped running with a blush on his face. Just as he stopped, Rita crossed the goal. "We won!" called Myra, and she and Rita did a high-5.  

"That's the same thing every time Chomper," Rory said slightly annoyed. "She justs has to smile at you and you'll do eveything she wants." "It's not my fault," replied Chomper. "You know I think she's....cute," he whispered to Rory. "Maybe if our teams were bigger someone would'nt be able to fall for her looks."  Chomper sighed at that comment.

After spending several months in the Great Valley, the grownups decided Chomper was getting slightly bigger and that he should leave. Chomper obliged, and reuniteed with his parents at the exit.  The thing Chomper missed most was his friends. He had lots in the GV, but he knew when he got older he probably wouldn't be able to see them again.  It was hard to find friends in the MB, due to Redclaw always causes separation of sharpteeth herds. He did meet Rory, a fastbiter when they tried hunting the same prey unkowningly at the same time, and Myra, a girl fastbiter Rory likes, and then there was Rita...

Rita was a t-rex who lost her parents when a big longneck tried to kill her to prevent another sharptooth from growing up. He parents tried to save her, and payed the price. She managed to escape and met Chomper's parents. They adopted her, and chomper liked her. But he never thought of her as a sister, always someting more..

Rita came up to Chomper. "You aren't as tough as you look," she laughed, still bragging of her victory.  "That's OK<' Chomper replied. "I can always outhunt you," he laughed.  " I just wish there were more sharpteeth are age around, our games would be funner if there were more friends to play them with." "You can't help that," Rita replied. "With Redclaw and all the other big meanies after all.." Rita walked off. "I'm heading home." "Tell mom and dad I'll get my own dinner, I want to spend some time to myself." "OK!" she replied running off.

Chomper walked over to a spot he found one day that hardly anyone knew about. It was a small cave with a weird shaped and colored rock in it.  He was tired, so he lent up against the stone. "Man, I wish I had more sharpteeth friends," he said tired, as he fell asleep, not realizing the stone behind him began to glow...

That's the prolouge, what do you guys think?  (I hope people will accept the fact that I want the gang to remain as sharpteeth, I don't want my story to be a repat of The Lonenly JKourney, if that's OK with you guys.)


(Ahead of time, just so you know, it's NOT going to be a dream sequence.)

(And, in case that's the majority opinion, I have an ending in mine that will satisfy both me and some of you.)

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic idea
« on: October 05, 2008, 04:10:06 PM »
And also Malte279, not saying you had a bad suggestion or anything, but we already have an episode of the series with that moral for Chomper. It'd be funner if it went the opposite way

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic idea
« on: October 05, 2008, 03:58:57 PM »
I think a dream sequence is kinda cheap actually, and I hate it when movies/books/games/shows resort to that.  I was thinking about Chomper telling that about the previous reality, but of corse they wouldn't believe it. Plus it would put Chomper in another troublesome scenario: because his friends were now "always" sharpteeth (The stone would have the power to rewrite history in my fanfic), instead of being one sharptooth living among some leafeaters who probably don't trust him but they know he's nice, He'll be the only sharptooth in a group of many who likes leafeaters (As friends, of course.) When he tries to save his fromer sharptooth-now flatooth friends from getting eaten

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic idea
« on: October 05, 2008, 02:38:28 PM »
Here's what the gang's appearance and personalities would be like:
Littlefoot: Same type of rex as Chomper, slightly bigger than him, and still has the leader role of the gang.

Cera: Fast biter, Has the same kind of ego (Fastbiters are the best.) Tries to outhunt or out-anything the rest of the group.

Petire: Sharptooth flyer (Forgot the exact term.) Since in the alternate reality, he's a predator, he isn't as nervous, actually quite brave, but prone to do dumb things (though he's not dumb.)

Ducky: Swimming sharpotth (Again, forgot the term, could someone remind me.) Due tobeing bound to water unlike the leafeater version, she's not with the group all the time.  She's probably the calmest of them all.

Spike: belly dragger, suffers same lack of speech.  Likes to swipe the rest of the gang's food sometimes,  possibly the physically strongest, and though he can't talk, knows a lot, and good at coming up with plans.

Ruby: Also  a fastbiter, though different color than Cera.   Since there both sharpteeth now, has romantic feelings for Chomper. (Might make her his girlfriend, and his former sharptooth girlfriend just a friend.)

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic idea
« on: October 05, 2008, 02:00:57 PM »
I have the main synopsis for a fanfic I was considering writing, but I want to know what you guys think of it beforehand, or if you any suggestions.

One night in the Mysterious Beyond, a slightly depressed Chomper wishes he had more sharptooth friends, as he only has a few. Unbeknownst to him, when he wishes this, he is leaning against the Stone of Cold Fire, and when he wakes up: something is seriously weird: he's back in the Great Valley, and all the leafeaters have been transformed into sharpteeth! Vice-versa, all the sharpeeth (except for Chomper and his parents) have been transformed into leafeaters.  No one except Chomper has any memories of the previous reality except for Chomper.  At first, he's enjoying having more friends of a smilar species, but a problem arises when he realizes his former sharpteeth friends (including his love interest) are in danger of becoming a meal for someone, he has to find and save them.

Notes: Unlike most works of fiction involving wishes, I don't plan to have the wish reversed at the end, so all the main characters would remain sharpteeth.

Any ideas or suggestions? I'd be glad to hear em.

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 05, 2008, 11:46:20 AM »
"GO!" Roared Redclaw, and both races began. At first, the runner race was pretty even.

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 04, 2008, 03:33:45 PM »
"On the count of 3," said Redclaw, serving as the judge. "Veli vs. Longtail in the flyer race, and Chomper, Kai, Racnar, and Cayso in the runner race. 3...2...1...GO!" he roared

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 04, 2008, 02:44:09 PM »
"How about two races: one for runners, and one for flyers. The losers have to hunt for the winner's next meal for them." Chomper wagered. "I'm in," said Veli

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 04, 2008, 02:06:28 PM »
Though Chomper had respect for Redclaw, he joined in the high-5-claw. "Let's go," Chomper smiled. "Bet I can beat you guys to the top!"

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 04, 2008, 08:32:26 AM »
Redclaw only laughed. "Ha! Even if he is alive, there's7 of us sharpteeth, we'd be more than able to take him"

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Role Play Discussion / RP idea: Total Drama Valley
« on: October 04, 2008, 12:05:49 AM »
Thanks lbt lover. Do you want to play a canon character also?

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 03, 2008, 09:41:27 PM »
"Observe," Redclaw snickered. An unfortunate flyer just happened to fly by, and Redclaw quickly grabbed it with his claws. "ahh, breakfast," he said, as he gobbled it up. "So, was that impressive?" he asked Kai. "Let's go guys," Chomper called, who was beginging to ascend Black Rock  


(BTW, have you guys looked at my idea for "Total Drama Valley?")

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Role Play Discussion / RP idea: Total Drama Valley
« on: October 03, 2008, 08:37:40 PM »
Additional note: Playing multipe characters is encouraged, also, the OCs won't necesarily be favored over the canon characters, and vice-versa

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Role Play Discussion / RP idea: Total Drama Valley
« on: October 03, 2008, 08:32:43 PM »
Here's a fun little RP idea I had: In a parody of the show Total Drama Island http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Total_Drama_Island  22 of the younger dinos (Mostly canon characters, some OCs would be split into two teams of 11, and do various challenges and after each challenge, the losing team would vote someone off. The grand prize: A lifetime supply of tree stars (If a leaf eater character wins) or meat (If a sharptooth wins.)  There would be 2 OCs; the dino host and his assitant who come up with the challenges. (I'd be the host.)
CANON Characters:
Littlefoot- (lbt_cty_lover)
Cera-Great Valley Guardian
Ducky-
Petrie-
Chomper-brekclub85
Ruby-
Tippy-
Shorty-
Rhett-
Ali-
Guido-
Spike-
Tricia- (This would be set maybe 1-3 years later, so she'd be old enough.)
 
OCs: Velinor-lbt/cty lover Longtail-GVG (8 OCs remaining.)

I need 9, and only 9 OC players, and I'll be the host and I'd need someone to be the assistant.  
Try to keep the canon character's personalities the same, but we'd need to add drama, not just from Ocs.

Also, the main 5 won't be the main ones necessarily. Quite possibly, Littlefoot could be the first one to go and Tippy could be the winner (hypothetically.)  Anyone want to join?

Update: (10-10-08) Everyone can player up to 6 characters, whether it be OC or canon. (Though,m the amount of OC players can only be 9 still.)

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General Land Before Time / Was Chomper eating bugs..
« on: October 03, 2008, 08:20:36 PM »
Do you think Chomper ate insects normally before coming to the Great Valley, or do you think he ate meat alot before moving there?

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 02, 2008, 10:43:50 PM »
"Let's go!" Chomper cheered, and pointed to a path that led up the side of Black Rock. "I'll fly ahead and see what's up," said Veli.  "I remember Black Rock," chuckled Redclaw. "Supposedly a blind flyer lives here, but I hunted him down," he chuckled

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