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The Swimmer Trials

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You know u can also copy and paste ur chapters on fanfic too, right?



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What a week it has been. I've been very  busy but now I have time to continue writing. The next few instalments will focus and Ducky, Trough, Sura, Bluey and her mother as well as bear host to some exciting action.

Also SilhahShadow01 sorry I have kept you waiting and that I have not responded lately, I've just been so busy recently. And thank you for the dedication episodes. I am truly flattered :). I wish you luck with your writing and will be keeping an eye out on your instalments.

I never expected to have as many people interested in my story but thank you all for your support that helps keep me going. And don't forget to review, I would like to have some chapter reviews (especially in the later chapters) as I haven't gotten any in a while. I'm still open to and appreciate any constructive criticism you might have so feel free to review and comment.

And Thank you all for your support. :yes
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Aye, it's no prob, I'm excited to whatever chapter u have in mind for them. This is awesome! And Thank You for the shout out. Got them the sneak preview cuz I'm working on ch.1 right now.
Hope u like it.

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Chapter 39: Teachings Into Practice


It was an utterly new sensation to swim in almost complete darkness. In the dark things seemed to take on a new light, everything looked on edge or rather felt that way as Ducky made her way through the labyrinth of caves in search of Noon who was in the process of making her sonic calls from the centre of the cave system, somewhere out in the dark where anything could possibly be. That was what make Ducky especially afraid. It was an unconscious fear of the unknown, her instincts were against her going into this dark, cold, watery cave. Through there was a bit of comfort for Ducky as the constant sonic calls created by Noon acted like a beacon, something that she could follow and although she could not see them she knew by feel that her mother was swimming beside the right of her while Mo swam on her left like two guards guiding her through the blackness and protecting her from any unseen predators that lay in quiet wait in the dark recesses of the cave.

In a way the cave reminded Ducky of her previous night terror of swimming through the Crescent Caves with the Swimming Sharptooth after her. She felt the same creepy feeling that somewhere in the expanse of black that covered her vision was something strange and sinister looking back at her. It was also a lot colder in the interior of the cave then the exterior, the cold sent powerful shivers run up her body as she tried desperately to keep herself warm. She remembered what it was like, being almost frozen to death as she had experienced it before on two occasions.

The first being the snowstorm in the first big freeze of The Great Valley, she knew that if her mother hadn’t made her sleep in the nest that night after her angry outburst then she probably would not be alive as she hardly managed to survive even when she was in the nest. The second time was when she dived into the recently de-iced fast water near the end of the Cold Time in order to save the young Spiketail Tippy, the freezing water was nearly the death of her if it had not been for her mother keeping her warm after she and the other grown-ups rescued her and Tippy.

The fact that her temperature was now starting to reduce to a similar level of coldness was not helping her, it stiffened her limbs and made her whole body slow down. But despite of all this she was still heading in the right direction, the direction that Noon’s calls were coming from. The silence was pressing around her as if it was a great beast of the night but she felt a great deal better when her mother gave her an encouraging nuzzle as she reached her third junction of two paths.

Listening closely to Noon’s calls she deducted that the sound was coming from the right path. She swam as quickly as she could down the path as it was just a straight path then she started to hear another sound. A cold chill of fear gripped her as her thoughts immediately rested on a Swimming Sharptooth. She listened closely to the new sound. It was the sound of surface water on rocks from above her.

“An air bubble!” thought Ducky in relief. She quickly rose to the surface of a small underground air pocket. She took a deep breath of the stale air and called her mother up. Sura surfaced right next to her and Mo surfaced in front of them. There was no light in the cavern but they were all in close proximity to each other and they could easily hear each other’s breathing and feel each other’s comforting warmth.

“Mama?” asked Ducky uncertainly, her body shivered and her teeth clicked with the cold.

“Yes dear, I’m here” came her mother’s soft reassuring voice.

“You going very well Ducky” said Mo “You at least half way there” His tone was friendly and encouraging. A very welcome respite to the empty silence.

“I……am” Ducky shivered uncontrollably. “So……cold” she said in a small voice.
Sura responded by lifting Ducky up out of the water and holding her next to her warmer body and tried to warm her up.

“Will the water…in the Trial be this cold?” asked Ducky.

“I’m afraid so dear” came her mother’s voice above her as she cuddled her daughter to her chest where Ducky snuggled up to her body and soaked up her mother’s life giving warmth.

After a while Ducky’s shivering slowed and stopped. She kept her eyes open and held on tightly to her mother as if she was holding onto a cliff face. “Better now?” asked her mother softly after her shivering died down.

“Yep yep yep” said Ducky, nodding her head even though Sura would not be able to see her.

“Ready” asked Mo.

“Ready” said Ducky. She felt better now that her body was once again all warmed up. There was a sharp intake of breath in the small cave as they all drew a deep breath before plunging back into the icy waters of the cave. Ducky followed Noon’s call straight along the passage, even though she could not see she could still hear and smell. Every now and again she would take a deep sniff of the water and in the instant she knew what was around her. The underwater tunnels she was in were very wide and had very little life aside from a few fish but Ducky did not stop but continued following the sound of Noon’s voice which was now getting even louder as she steadily drew nearer to the heart of the caves.

Finally after turning into another tunnel she thought she saw a fient light ahead. Ducky increased her pace with the joy that this venture would all be other soon. Suddenly the sharp movement of a tail caught her eye and in that instant she saw herself back under The Crescent Caves with the Sharptooth. Ducky’s heart skipped a beat and the flight instincts that she had so far kept in check overran. With a loud underwater cry she turned tail on the large fish that was what she actually saw and swam at full speed in the opposite direction, back into the darkness when she suddenly felt something grab onto her tail. Her body went into a complete panic as she remembered having her tail bitten after she tried to flee in her dream. She struggled frantically, panic overriding her senses. When she felt a hand gently grasp her back. Ducky turned back and saw the dim form of her mother holding onto her back and Mo holding onto her tail, both had worried looks on their faces.

Ducky stopped moving and tried to allow some calm to enter her body but unfortunately for her was that she hardly had any air left after her panic attack. Her lungs burning plea for air sent her swimming as fast as she could toward the light and Noon’s sonic calls. Her guardians hurried behind her. Ducky was struggling to hold her breath as she swam. Her head was feeling the incredible dizziness rise with every passing second and she slowed down as her last remaining air and energy was being used up. But suddenly she rounded a bend at the end of the tunnel and saw the surface.

Not waiting any longer she rocketed upwards to the air bubble and broke the surface of the water and took in huge gulps of air as she replenished her strength with the much needed Oxygen. She hardly noticed anything else as she breathed gratefully from the surrounding air.

“Well done Ducky” said a voice.

Ducky turned her head and beheld Noon swimming toward her. Ducky looked around she had not noticed the surroundings. She was in the centre of the cave system. The cave was rather large, stretching over a Longnecks length in both length and width and was two Longneck lengths in height. There was a rocky shore on the right side of the cave and a large hole in the ceiling of the cave which was obviously responsible for the light.

Ducky quickly swam to the shore and crawled onto the dry bank where she lay sprawled on the ground, gasping for breath.

Sura hoisted herself onto the bank and lowered herself to the ground beside her daughter who had now entered a violent fit of coughing which thankfully did not last long. Sura nuzzled her and held her in her arms and waited patiently for Ducky to regain her breath as did Mo and Noon.

Sura pated Ducky gently on her back. “You alright dear?” she asked in her compassionate voice.

Ducky nodded.

“What happen back there” inquired Mo quietly to Ducky.

Ducky took a few more deep breaths until finally her breathing regained its normal rhythm. “I just got scared-ed” she said.

“What scared you dear?” asked her mother gently.

Ducky looked up at her mother with a frightened expression. “I saw a tail and I just…just……” Ducky closed her mouth and looked down and shivered.
“You thought you were seeing the Swimming Sharptooth from your sleep terror” Sura finished to which Ducky nodded. Sura gave her a comforting nuzzle, which Ducky greatly accepted.

“Thank you mama” said Ducky.

“You ok Ducky, no Sharptooth hurt you” said Mo in a reassuring voice.

Noon nodded in agreement with her son “We would never allow that" she said in a voice that contained equal amounts of humour and resolve. Ducky could not help but smile at her.

I’m proud of you Ducky” said her mother. “You did it, you made it to the centre of the caves”.

Ducky grinned widely, she had almost forgotten in her fear that she had managed to navigate an entire cave system on her sense of smell and hearing. “I did do it I did I did!” celebrated Ducky. She felt more pleased with herself than ever. “I can do this” she thought “I can do the Trial”. That thought gave her a warm feeling of confidence that she had not felt since she mastered using her sniffer.

“Yes dear you did it” chuckled Sura “and I’m so happy for you but I think we had better get going before the tide comes in”. Everyone nodded in agreement and Ducky grabbed hold of Mo’s fin and they all dived back beneath the caves. Now that Noon and Mo could utilise their speed they quickly made it out of the caves just as it reached high tide.  

They surfaced into a beautiful day. The Bright Circle blazed bright directly overhead and the sky was filled with white fluffy Sky Puffy’s. It was the right weather to be out and about.

“You can feel free to swim with my Water Kin you two” said Noon. “We might as well enjoy the rest of the day” she added.

“I would love too!” cheered Ducky enthusiastically.

“So would I” agreed Sura “But” Ducky looked at her mother with worried expression. “After we tell Cyrest what happened and get some lunch” she said.

“Can’t we go now mom?” asked Ducky.

Sura chuckled. “Now dear we don’t want Cyrest to begin searching all over the Big Water for us now do we and besides I’m sure that you are hungry after swimming through those caves” she said.

Ducky nodded. Though she could not help but to giggle at the thought of Cyrest looking for them but she did know that her mother was referring to her little disappearance earlier in the week when she went off with Mo. Ducky could also hardly stop her stomach from grumbling, she was indeed hungry. “Let’s go then” she said and dived into the water and headed for the cove. Her companions quickly following her, unknown that they themselves were being followed.

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The creature saw the group of Swimmers on the surface and quickly dived to the sea bottom where it watched them without being spotted as it was still trailing them. The Megalodon Shark watched his prey with cold, calculating eyes. He saw Mo and Noon and decided that they were not worth the trouble as they could easily escape his jaws but the large form of Sura caught his attention. He had never seen a land swimmer but judging by her looks he believed he could take her and she was also very large which meant a big feast to satisfy his growling belly, he did not see her tiny daughter swimming beside her though as he was sourly concentrating on Sura's massive form, she would be easy to catch. They were right where he wanted them, at the surface where he could make his ambush and capture his prey without them even knowing he was there until he had the Swimmer in his jaws.

The Megalodon flicked his powerful tail and in a few strokes he was going at an impressive speed through the water along the bottom until he was beneath Sura. When he was in position he accelerated using all the strength his muscles could put into the giant strokes of his tail and he rocketed up to the surface with his mouth wide open, the teeth beckoning for the blood soon to wet his jaws. Everything was going perfectly he would easily have his prey but it was at that moment that Noon looked down and saw the Megalodon speeding towards them intent on nothing but tearing them apart. It mattered not to the Megalodon that he had been spotted, he was already too close, and he would make his kill of this hapless Swimmer.

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“SURA! WHACH OUT! BENEATH YOU!” shrieked Noon at the top of her lungs when she saw the Megalodon charging up toward them and heading straight for Sura.

Sura looked down in time to see the colossal jaws come within a few meters of her and Ducky was right next to her, oblivious of the unseen peril rocketing it’s way up towards them. She only had a split second to react. Sura did the only thing that she could do in the little time she had. Push Ducky out of the way and put herself into a vertical position. Just as the jaws came up to envelop her.

SPLASH!

SHLUCK!

It all happened so fast to Ducky. She heard Noon’s yell and suddenly felt her mother push her away then there was a giant splash and a loud snap then blood filled the water. Ducky gasped as the Swimming Sharptooth, the same kind as the one she had seen when she and her friends tried to escape Chomper’s island appeared from the depths and appeared to swallow her mother whole.

“MAMA!” screamed Ducky in horror. She could not believe that her mother was gone, just like that. It all happened too fast, this was not what she journeyed here for or for what Sura had survived her injuries for. Ducky screamed in pain and despair as the Megalodon vanished beneath the waves, taking her poor mother with him.

*

Sura lay inside the Megalodon on its tongue. She had angled herself just right to enter the Sharks jaws as she knew she could not avoid it. But despite of her perfect entry angle she still acquired many shallow cuts on her back and belly, but they were not life threatening even though they stung like hell. Sura had also grabbed hold of two of the shark’s teeth so as two avoid being swallowed but now the shark was closing his jaws.

SNAP!

The two teeth that Sura was holding onto snapped out of the gum just before the shark closed his mouth. His tongue licking her belly, trying to swallow her. But Sura had the Megalodon’s teeth and with them she thrust them into the Sharks tongue. The Megalodon opened his mouth in a silent roar of pain. Sura took her opportunity and sped out of his maw and swam toward the surface.

*

Ducky sobbed uncontrollably into Mo’s body as he came to support her. How could this happen? Why did her mother have to be eaten? Noon gently nuzzled Ducky understanding that she had just experienced a really heavy loss.

SPLASH!

Sura emerged from the water with a gasp and to the astonishment of everyone present.

“MAMA!” yelled Ducky in equal amounts of delight and relief and rushed to embrace her mother’s beak. But Sura spoke up in an alarmed voice that made her stop and listen.

“Quickly! We must get out of here!” cried Sura. “That Sharptooth is after us!”

No one needed telling twice. They all swam as fast as they could down the shore, there were a lot of rocks and arches here so it would help to throw the Megalodon off. Ducky swam beside her mother her heart working overtime. She risked a look back and saw the monstrous behemoth open its jaws and rush toward her and her mother. She noticed that it did not go after Mo or Noon, it had specifically targeted her mother and was not going to stop until he had her in his belly.

Sura could not outrun the shark so she switched to performing quick manoeuvres around the rocks and the Sharptooth’s constantly snapping mouth. Ducky held on to her mother’s side for dear life, it was the only thing keeping her from falling back into the Sharptooth’s open mouth. Unconsciously she took a sniff of the water around her. There was a slight head current bringing in a few scents ahead. Ducky also observed that the visibility was much poorer here, they could only see a metre or two ahead and at the speeds they were going, there was hardly enough time to avoid the rocks that came there way.

Suddenly Ducky smelt a large mass ahead, it was like many scents that Cyrest had taught her to smell but they all seemed to be making a wall ahead of them. “A wall of rock” Ducky realised. In addition to her sense of smell she also felt that there was no longer a current facing them except to her right. Ducky deduced that that must be a hole in the formation but it was to her right and at their present speed they were quickly heading for a massive rock wall.

But neither Sura nor the Megalodon was aware of this. “They are too focused on each other to notice what’s in front of them they are they are” thought Ducky with rising horror. At the speeds they going a crash would probably mean certain death. The wall was only ten metres away, she could smell it.

Ducky was not going to watch her mother come close to dying again so with all the speed she could muster, she made her way to the left side of her mother and then with enormous speed and strength for the little Swimmer, Ducky broke off from her mother by at least a metre then swam with all her heart and collided into the left side of her mother’s beak, causing her to change direction to the right and go straight through the hole in the wall. The resounding crack on the other side told Ducky and Sura that the Sharptooth pursuing them was no more.    

The two broke the surface with a gasp. Noon and Mo quickly joined them having swam just ahead of them. “You okay?” Mo asked anxiously. Ducky and Sura nodded breathing very fast. Sura turned to her daughter and smiled at her. “I know what you did back there Ducky and I know I would not be here if it weren’t for you” she said in a voice filled with love and pride as she embraced her daughter.

“I thought I lost you back there” sobbed Ducky in a small voice as she held on tightly to her mother.  

“Come” said Noon “Let’s get you two back on dry land then you can tell us how you managed to escape that Sharptooth”

Everyone nodded in agreement and quickly made their way back to the cave where Cyrest was waiting with Jane. He looked glad to see them but he become worried when he saw how heavily they were all breathing and when he saw Sura’s wounds. “Not again” he thought “What has happened this time?”
Cyrest helped Sura to the shore “What happened?" he asked.

“A Swimming Sharptooth attacked mom and ate her but she escaped and we got away from him by knocking him into a rock wall” said Ducky.

“What!?” cried Cyrest looking at Sura’s wounds.

Sura held up her hand for silence “I’ll explain after I get these wounds patched up” said Sura. Cyrest shut his mouth somewhat reluctantly as Sura walked past him and after applying a few of the left over healing herds to her wounds she bound them tightly with a long fern.

She then joined then back at the water’s edge. “Right Sura I think you better tell us how you survived being eaten by a Swimming Sharptooth” said Cyrest.

Sura sat down and said “I let the Sharptooth get me because I knew I would never escape, so when I was in its mouth I pulled out two of its teeth and thrust them into its tongue and then swam out when he opened his mouth then he chased me and Ducky. I tried to get away but it was Ducky who used her own senses to locate the opening in the rock wall ahead of us. If she had not pushed me into it then I would probably be dead now” said Sura.

“Sheesh, you are one lucky girl” said Cyrest when she finished ”and totally mad” he added “How much gore do you have? Letting a Sharptooth almost swallow you is totally insane even I would rarely go that far” said Cyrest is shock.

“It probably saved Sura though” said Noon in a considerate voice. “If she had tried to get away then she would probably have been skewered on those teeth”.

“But I didn’t” said Sura “and I have my little one to thank for saving me from that wall” she said giving Ducky a loving nuzzle before turning to Cyrest. “Not only did Ducky successfully complete Noon’s challenge but she also saved my life today, that’s definitely a good sign that she can take on the Trial” said Sura to which everybody nodded.

“Can I please have some green food now? I am hungry I am I am” complained Ducky, causing everyone to laugh heartily.

“Alright dear, let’s go and have some lunch and thank for your help in the cave Mo and you too Noon” said Sura turning to the two Big Water Swimmers.

The two Swimmers nodded proudly “See you soon Sura” said Noon before Swimming off with Mo hot on her tail. "Goodbye!" called Mo as he left.

Sura laid down on the warm rocky surface and bathed in the warm afternoon sunlight. Being saved by her daughter was a humbling experience for Sura but she was still extremely proud of her daughter. “She’s growing up nicely, I’m sure that she can survive the Trial even if there is a Swimming Sharptooth in the caves” thought Sura. But if only she knew about the Swimming Sharptooth in the Crescent Caves era she spoke of it as a joke, then she might have been a bit more serious in her outlook but now she was just set on enjoying the rest of the day as it was. Without any more trouble from any Sharptooth from land or sea.      




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Chapter 40: A “Warm” Welcome


“Can I please visit Trough today mama” said Ducky in an excited voice that was just full of longing. Since the previous day’s excitement with Ducky saving her mother’s life from the rock wall in the desperate flight from the Megalodon that attacked them, Ducky had been allowed the day off, to do what she liked as a reward for her efforts. When Ducky heard this she immediately thought of the Swimmer herd and of seeing Trough again. Now she eagerly awaited her mother’s reply.

“Of course you can dear” said Sura.

“YAY!” cried Ducky, jumping up and down in happiness. “I can go see Trough now I can, I can”

“Just don’t forget to keep away from the adults and to make sure that you don’t tell anyone that you are doing the Trial of Destiny dear” came Sura’s cautionary words.

“Do not worry mama, I will be careful and I will not tell anyone about the Trial nope, nope, nope” said Ducky, stopping on the threshold of the cave as she reassured her mother that she would keep her promise.

“Okay then dear, now go along and have fun, you’ve earned it” said Sura in a positive voice as she watched her daughter jump out of the entrance and into the late morning sun.

Ducky did not waste any time in getting to the Swimmer herd, she took the short cuts that Cyrest mentioned, keeping well clear of the designated Sharptoothh territory that Cyrest had warned her about and jogged at a brisk pace under the tall trees and through the open shrub until she caught sight of the massive Swimmer herd. Now she slowed her pace and carefully, silently made her way to the tree line and hid in some bushes and watched the many Swimmers as they ate morning meals, held conversations, played games, basked in the sun and just had a pleasant time on the shores of the Big Water.

Ducky was not very much interested in the adults or what they were doing unless one came close to her hiding spot, she focused on the many Swimmer children of various ages play. She noticed that all of the herds children seemed to congregate around the stream that they slept by. She also noticed that many of the young Swimmers were congregated around the three bullies that she confronted in order to stop them hurting Trough. The girls she noticed seemed to hang on their every word and go into silly giggling fits when one of the three bullies talked to them and that the boys nearby were looking at them with envy, they all appeared to wish that they could be like them. Ducky shook her head dismissively, she could not understand why those Swimmers liked the three bullies after what they did to Trough.

Losing interest with The Trio, she looked around at the other Swimmer kids scattered around the stream in an attempt to find Trough but she had no success. Then something caught her eye, a sight that she had never witnessed before. She saw on the other end of the stream two Swimmers, one appeared old, as old as Cyrest and was a brown and for some reason looked a little familiar to Ducky but it was the other Swimmer next to her that really caught her attention. She had never seen a Swimmer quite like her, instead of the usual shade of brown or green she had a dazzling light blue colouration.

Ducky stared open mouthed at the blue Swimmer, she was an adult and looked a bit like her aunt Merri in everything except for her unusual colour. Ducky could not help it, she felt drawn to these two Swimmers, so she went further upstream and when she was sure that she was out of the sight of any watchful eyes then she started wading across the stream and back into the canopy and silently made her way behind the Swimmer herd until she was behind the two Swimmers. They weren’t looking in her direction and appeared to be in the midst of a very fruitful conversation.

“Now this is what you call relaxing” said the blue Swimmer as she basked in the sun.

“Too right dear” replied the older Swimmer who gave a content sigh “This makes a pleasant change to the usual roaming life of a herd” she finished.

“Do you think that it will be just as good in the Great Valley when we get there?” asked the blue.

I’m sure Bluey dear, the only difference will be the lack of The Big Water and the absence of Sharpteeth” said the older one.

“Now that just made my day” said the one called Bluey. The two Swimmers sighed and seemed content on enjoying the rest of the morning in silence.

Ducky was also losing interest in the conversation and started to sneak away in order to find Trough when the old Swimmer asked a question that caught her attention.

“How’s Trough?”

Bluey appeared to look at the older Swimmer with a blank expression. “He appeared very beaten up the last time I saw him, he told me that those three bullies Barge, Storm and Whirler beat him up in the evening by the open stream mouth when everyone was off making their nests, he looked very badly bruised and had a few cuts but apart from that he appeared okay. He told me that he was saved from further pain by another young Swimmer, a girl that appeared to just come out of the blue” explained Bluey.

“Was she in the herd?” asked the older one with interest.

“No, as I said she appeared to come out of the blue, and it appears that she stood up to the bullies for Trough and told them to leave which they did”. Bluey chuckled “Trough was all over her, he would not stop talking about her, her light green colour and her ëbeautiful’ blue eyes that he said looked more beautiful than any body of water in the whole world”.

Ducky felt her cheeks blush bright red as she heard this, did Trough really like her?

Bluey continued “He said that she was at the age to take the Swimmer Trials and that she had a peculiar speech”

“How so?”

“Well he said that she says ëyep, yep, yep’ and ëno, no, no’ a lot” said Bluey.

Ducky realised they were discussing her catchphrase and listened intently to their talk.

“As long as he is okay with it then I don’t have a problem” said the old brown.

“Mother” said Bluey “I think that our little friend has finally found himself a girl that he likes and who accepts him” she said in a delighted voice. "He appeared totally dazed when describing how selfless she was and his cheeks” Bluey laughed heartily “they were redder then a red tree star” she chuckled. “He really does like her”

The mother of Bluey turned to face her daughter, a lingering smile on her face. “Then I am happy for him, he deserves a whole lot more then what he gets, it will be good for him”

“But what about the fact that she is not from the herd and that he does not know this Swimmer well or even know her name for that matter?” asked Bluey
“It might create a little unrest” said her mother “but not much” she added. “Besides I don’t think a herd will keep them apart, by your description Trough sounds like he’s in love and love knows no boundary” she said.

“I wish Trough and his new friend the best of luck” said Bluey happily.

“As do I, by the way where is Trough? I haven’t seen him all morning”

“Probably off alone some place, the watering hole near the stream I think, but that’s a loner for you” said Bluey.

Her mother nodded her head and appeared to place her head down and go to sleep while Bluey appeared to turn her head back to the younglings, content to sit and watch them play.

Ducky meanwhile was shocked by the revelation “Is Trough actually in love with me?” she thought to herself. She quickly reflected back to Trough and their first meeting, he looked as if he was in a trance, as if Ducky was all that mattered in the world and judging what Bluey had said about Trough in her discussion she thought that the evidence all pointed to love, it was obvious that he had strong feelings for her and she knew in her heart that she liked him to just as much as Petrie. But there was something more with Trough though something Petrie did not seem to have.

A loud splash broke Ducky out of her present train of thought as she saw the young Swimmers head towards her side of the stream. Wasting no time Ducky stealthily made her way back upstream to where the stream branched off into two paths. The main one going left and the minor one going right. Ducky knew from what Cyrest had said that this leg of the stream ended up in the large watering hole.

Ducky stood on the bank, feeling conflicted. Was she really ready for this? To face love? She knew the depth of Trough’s newly formed feelings for her but she remembered her mother’s warning about not rushing in with such things. This made her feel a little more cautious but the fact that Trough was at the very least her friend and that she wanted to visit him caused her to take the right path and dive beneath the water and swim swiftly with the current into the secluded watering hole, there was no sign of any large dinosaurs but there were plenty of hoppers and birds drinking at the watering hole and a light brown Swimmer staring intently at his reflection in the water with a ponderous look on his face.

Ducky swam silently to the shore and placed her feet back on the bank and proceeded to walk slowly over to Trough who was to intent on looking at his reflection to notice his surroundings let alone Ducky.

As Ducky closed the distance between her and Trough, she heard Trough mumble to himself “Wish I knew more about you my friend, my first friend” he said softly to himself.

Ducky felt her heart rate increase as he said that and she stopped several paces from Trough, all doubt and hesitation drained from her where she stood. She smiled softly and finally raised her voice and spoke in a kind friendly voice “Hello Trough”.


*


Earlier In the Morning


“Trough! .....Trough!” The voice sounded like it was coming from a very long distance away as the light brown Swimmer completely ignored it.

“TROUGH!”

Trough jumped as his mother resorted to shouting to get his attention. Trough looked up at his mother with an annoyed expression.

“Do you have rocks for ears?” questioned one of his brothers to the amusement of his other siblings.

“That’s enough from you” said his mother to the offending brother as she turned back to Trough. “Your breakfast is waiting for you dear” she said.

“Okay mom” replied Trough as he made his back to the nest to where the pile of green food was waiting for him.

He hesitated before taking a bite out of the tree star he grabbed as his mind drifted back to the young Swimmer girl he had met the day before. He sighed and seemed to forget about his breakfast.

“What’s happening with you Trough?”

Trough turned to the sound of the friendly voice of his sister, Shelly. She was one of the few siblings he had that respected him for who he was and often had pleasant conversations with him when he was at home.

“I don’t know” he replied pathetically.

“You’ve been off your head ever since you talked about how that strange Swimmer girl saved your neck from Barge and his friends”

“I just can’t believe what she did for me and she had no reason to do it even when Barge told her that I was a loner she still helped me” Trough gazed dreamily into the distance and smiled foolishly. He was broken out of his trance by his sister’s laughing.

“You look like a love struck Flyer” she laughed. “You obviously like her”

Trough rolled her eyes at her. “I’m just glad that she helped me that’s all” he said simply.

“Yeah right” said Shelly “Trough……I’m also glad that you found a friend but don’t you think you’re going to fast?” she asked.

“What are you talking about?” said Trough sharply.

“You know full well what I’m talking about brother, you have feelings for this Swimmer” she said “I can see it, you don’t seem to think about anything else but her” said Shelly.

“Trough sighed in defeat “Alright you read me well enough sister, I just don’t know what to think about her that’s all. I mean I like her but I feel that there is more to it than that do you know what I mean?”

Shelly nodded “Trough I just don’t want you to push this relationship to hard if she ever comes back, you hardly even know anything about her except that she is a cold time older then you and is here with her mother and does not appear to have a herd, don’t you find that a bit suspicious? How do you know if you can trust her?” speculated Shelly.

“I just know Shelly, she did not seem like the type of person who would try to hurt me in any way” said Trough, finally taking a bite out of his leaf but discarding it with an aggravated shake of his head “I will be at the watering hole if you need me, I just need some time alone to get my thoughts in order” said Trough and left before his sister could say anything else.

Trough quickly made his through the shrub, making sure to keep well away from The Trio and any of the more moody adults as he quickly transversed the distance to the watering hole where he sat down by the quite banks and looked into the water. There was not much movement on the surface of the water so he could see his reflection quite clearly. He sighed and stared at his face. “Why would she want me?” he asked. Sure he looked handsome and was a pleasant soul but he was a loner and who would want to hang out with a loner? Not that Trough was not grateful for the Swimmer girl’s friendship but he did not understand why she helped him, especially after spending his life in a herd that shunned him for being himself.

He sighed again and muttered under his breath “Wish I knew more about you my friend, my first friend” he said quietly  to himself and closed his eyes and envisioned the young Swimmer girl again, her blue eyes, her smooth, warm body and her friendly nature and strange speech pattern. How he wished he could see her again.

“Hello Trough” came a friendly voice from close by. A voice that he recognised and thought that he might not hear again. He immediately looked up and there standing by the bank was the same young Swimmer girl who had so selflessly protected him from Barge’s wrath.

His face immediately pricked into as smile as did hers. Trough jumped up and covered the distance between them in a few short bounds while giving a happy call “Your back!”  And before he could stop himself he pulled the girl into a tight hug. He was even more surprised when she returned the hug but he quickly disengaged looking awfully embarrassed.

They both took up sitting positions beside the bank. Trough stuttered awkwardly “I-I d-did not expect to see you here” he said quickly regaining his composure.

“Oh my mom said I was allowed to come here today yep, yep, yep” said the young Swimmer girl.

“I’m glad you came” replied Trough “Oh and by the way I didn’t catch your name before you left” said Trough in a very interested voice to the Swimmer.

“Well, my name is Ducky yep, yep, yep” she replied in a lively voice.

Trough smiled “Ducky” he said. Yes he liked that name. He looked at Ducky closely and the same question he had been pondering all morning rolled off his tongue. “Why did you help me back there?” he asked slowly, but his voice still contained much curiosity.

Ducky looked a little surprised by the question. “I helped you because they were hurting and you do not deserve to be hurt nope, nope, nope” said Ducky.
Trough looked down thoughtfully “I don’t understand” he said. Ducky gave him a confused look. “I’m a loner why should you like me?” he asked.

“It does not matter to me if you are a loner or not, I like you not because you are good looking or kind, I like you because you are yourself despite what others say about you and that makes you special, that makes you who you are and I like you the way you are” said Ducky. Trough’s eyes glinted as her warm words washed over him making him feel much better. “But Trough” said Ducky “You are what you chose to be and I think you are only a loner because you have no one to go to but not with me you aren’t, with me you are my friend”. She said.

Trough opened his mouth but closed it again, her words rang in his ears and deep down in his heart he knew that she was right, he smiled at his new friend. “Thank you Ducky” he said, pulling Ducky into a gentle hug. It felt like the best moment in Trough’s life to him, he finally had a friend who cared for him because he was himself. But unfortunately there moment of peace and tranquillity was not to last.

“Well, well, well what do we have here” said an arrogant voice.

Ducky and Trough broke out of their embrace and sighted Barge and his pals Storm and Whirler come out of the bushes behind them.

Trough glared at them but Barge spoke before he had the chance to tell him to go away. “So the loner is trying to win the affections of a gorgeous Swimmer girl, who is way above him” said Barge.

Ducky blushed at being called gorgeous, it seemed that Trough was not the only Swimmer who fancied her. “Go away Barge, can’t you see we are not interested in your antics” said Trough coldly.

Barge ignored him and walked up to Ducky and asked in his usual arrogant voice. “Why don’t you came and join our group? The most popular group in the herd, you don’t need a pitiful loner to boss you around surely?” asked Barge.

Ducky frowned at him and spoke in a firm voice “I do not want to join your group nope, nope, nope. Trough is my friend and friends stick together” she said defiantly “no matter what”.

The Trio cast surprised looks at her, her reaction was not the one they were used to from other girls. “Why can’t you leave Trough alone, he is a good Swimmer he is, he is. I don’t understand why all your ëfriends’ stand you if that’s what they really are, you are just a bunch of mean bullies you are, you are” said Ducky.

“It’s because we are cool and he is not” said Storm firmly “It’s far better to hang around cool kids them upstarts like Trough”.

“I happen to like Trough, I like him much more then I like you bullies. Trough is kind, friendly and fun and a real friend, a true fried yep, yep, yep” said Ducky in an equally firm voice. “I don’t even think you consider the other Swimmers your friends but tools, you should try talking to them and get to know them rather than bossing people around, you should” continued Ducky.

“Why would we lay off?” asked Whirler “we like being bossy and as long as we are the top guys everyone will do what we say, we can get all the girls and look desirable to the boys and the best part is we can beat some sense into anyone who says otherwise”.

“You can’t get all the girls to like you” said Trough speaking up bravely “you can’t get ëher’ too” he gestured to Ducky “And frankly I’d say that she has got more brains then any of you or most of the other children in the herd”.

Barge smiled mischievously “Thanks for the idea Trough “he said “We’ll just have to get this girl to like us and I don’t care how we do it, perhaps by getting rid of you”. And without the slightest warning Barge rammed Trough in the stomach while Storm and Whirler charged towards Ducky with Barge quickly following behind them.

“LEAVE HER ALONE!” shouted Trough as he tried to get back up but he was too badly winded to walk far.

Ducky thankfully was running from the bullies but they were quickly gaining ground on her then a thought popped into Ducky’s head. “Maybe if I cannot outrun then perhaps I could outswim them”.

Ducky turned into the water and dived in and quickly started swimming away. She heard the three resounding splashes of the bullies following close behind. She looked behind and saw that she outclassed then greatly. The fitness swimming sessions with Noon had put way more speed and strength into her limbs, more than she ever had before. She glanced behind and saw the Trio left in her wake but still swimming after her, determined to catch her. She also spotted Trough lying winded on the bank. That’s when her second idea came. Ducky took a deep breath and dived under the water and swam along the bottom, the water was very murky down here which was very good in Ducky’s case if she wanted to ruse them like she was planning. She took a sniff of the water and caught the scent of underwater plants a short distance ahead.
Having found what she was looking for she surfaced to take another respite. The bullies were still a fair distance away, panting with the effort of swimming this hard. This allowed Ducky to take several deep breaths of the air around her then she yelled out to the bullies in a sing like fashion. “You cannot catch me no, no, no!” she sang loudly.

This certainly did the trick in provoking her adversaries as they started to growl angrily and swim faster. Ducky took her final breath then dived and disappeared beneath the water.


*


Barge was startled by just how fast this Swimmer could swim, she completely outran them and they were not slow Swimmers. Gasping for breath and gnarling his teeth viciously he swam after her as hard as he could, his temper was not improved when she sang out to them that they could not catch her. Barge opened his mouth to yell out but coughed as a whole lot of water entered his mouth. He coughed angrily and continued his pursuit, hardly aware of the furious glares made by his companions as they swam towards the Swimmer who had stopped in the water and seemed to be taking several deep breaths.

“Ha! She’s pooped out” thought Barge “I’m so going to pummel this smart Alec for insulting me” he thought.

Barge watched as Ducky dived under again. He followed suit along with Storm and Whirler. The water was murky and hence visibility was incredibly difficult, but they had seen where she was heading and swam in that direction, past a collection of underwater plants and into the connecting stream. There pace slowed as they did not find Ducky and the murky water made it to tricky to see so the three boys surfaced.

“Where is that girl!” hissed Storm furiously.

“She can’t just disappear” said Barge firmly.

“She hasn’t look!” shouted Whirler and pointed to an object disappearing behind the corner of the stream, they could not tell what the object was but it was definitely light green.

“You can’t get away from us you dirty little trick star!” yelled Barge and swam downstream along with Storm and Whirler.


*


SPLASH!

Ducky surfaced as the bullies rounded the bend and out of sight. She chuckled to herself. The three bullies had fallen for her rouse. She had dived down and camouflaged herself against the underwater plants and after the bullies had past she made for the surface with a handful of the light green plant and let it float downstream so the bullies will think that she headed that way instead of back to the shore where Trough was waiting.

Trough grabbed her hand and helped her out of the water when she arrived back at the bank. “Hurry we should get going, those bullies will be back soon” he said as he led Ducky into the bushes and ran until they found themselves in a small clearing near the main stream.

There they settled down panting with exhaustion from running from the watering hole. They both collapsed onto the ground, their backs on the ground and there bellies facing skyward. Ducky looked up at the sky, she saw the sky puffies litter the blue background that was the sky. And let out a sigh of content as she saw a cloud that resembled a Spiketail. Ducky felt a tear fall down her cheek as she thought of Spike. How she missed him, she even missed his constant snoring at nights and she especially missed his constant companionship. He was her brother after all and Ducky was sure that he missed her as much as she missed him. Ducky sniffed solemnly.

Trough noticed this, he also noticed the tear run down Ducky’s cheek as she gazed up the sky. “What do you see?” he asked quietly.

Ducky knew that he was inquiring what shape she saw in the sky puffies, so she replied quietly “My brother”

“Oh” was all Trough could say as he had no context for what Ducky was thinking.

“I miss him I do, I do” she said.

“Where is your brother?” asked Trough cautiously, he did not want to push Ducky in any way.

“He is at home with the rest of my family and friends he is, he is” replied Ducky in a saddened voice as she thought back to her wonderful home in the Great Valley and the joyful life she had lived there.

“Where is home?” asked Trough, his curiosity getting the better of him.

“The Great Valley”

Trough raised and stared at Ducky open mouthed. “You live in The Great Valley” he asked in astonishment.

Ducky nodded “mmm hmmm” she said.

“Whoa” said Trough “I’m going there after the cold time” The effect of this statement on Ducky was surprising to Trough. Ducky swayed as if in a daze and gasped at him, but there was something in her eyes, something that indicated pain. Ducky looked away and took a shuddering breath and closed her eyes sadly, appearing to fall into a state of melancholy. Ducky had almost forgotten that Trough was going to the Great Valley but she knew that there time there might be awfully brief if she failed the Trial.  

Trough did not know that he had reminded Ducky of The Trial of Destiny but he could tell that she was upset, so he rubbed his body up against hers and held her in his warm embrace. “I’m sorry if I hurt you in any way” he said in a soft, apologetic voice.

Ducky shook her head sadly “It is not your fault Trough no, no, no”

“What happened?” he asked “Why are you all the way out here if your home is in The Great Valley?”

Ducky looked a little worried, she was not up to lying to Trough but she also could not break her promise to her mother “I-I cannot tell you Trough oh no, no, no”

“Why” asked Trough in surprise “Is it a secret or something, if it is I’m sure I can keep it”

Ducky shook her head sadly “I made a promise” she said.

“To who”

My mommy. It is a promise I cannot break, that I will not break yep, yep, yep”

“What was your promise?” asked Trough inquisitively, hoping to get a clue from Ducky.

I cannot even tell you what promise I made Trough, but you should know that I am going through a hard time at this moment I am, I am”

“I’m sorry” said Trough, putting a hand around Ducky’s shoulders in support.  

Ducky sniffed and stood up “Maybe I should go” she said. Trough got up quickly with an alarmed look in his face but before he could a word of protest or apology another voice interrupted him.

“Oh I don’t think you’ll be going anywhere you filthy little brat!” said the voice fiercely.

Trough looked turned towards the sound and barely had time to jump to the side in order to avoid the talons of the grey Sharptooth Flyer bearing down upon them. Ducky was not as lucky as the Flyer snatched her up in his talons and gagged her with his toe in order to stop her screaming. Ducky struggled but no matter what she tried, she could not escape from Sierra’s grip.

“LET HER GO!!!” shouted Trough at the top of his lungs a furious rage coming over him as he watched the Flyer tighten his grip on Ducky’s small body, making breathing difficult for her.

“Or what?” said the Flyer which Ducky recognised as Sierra.

“I’ll get you! If you so much as scratch her then you’ll be VERY SORRY!” Trough shouted. He jumped up at Sierra but the crazy flyer hovered just out of his reach and laughed at Trough's pathetic attempts to reach him.

“So” he said “does this count as a scratch?”

Sierra twisted Ducky’s right leg until a mild crack was heard that caused Ducky to scream loudly in pain, it was audible even though her mouth was gagged.
Trough looked horrified at watching this happen to Ducky and at the same time he felt his blood boil in anger so he picked up a nearby stone and threw it at Sierra but the Flyer dodged it and said mockingly “How does it feel watching this little brat suffer?” he laughed.

“You filthy monster!” yelled Trough in helpless fury as he watched from the ground, he could not bear to see Ducky in pain and after what she did for him he felt it was only right for him to return the favour.

Unfortunately Sierra had his own plans for Trough, he looked down at Ducky and said in a deadly whisper “You like this Swimmer?” he asked. Ducky struggled harder and tried to yell a warning to Trough but she could not pronounce a syllable with her mouth gagged. Sierra watched her and gave her an evil smile. “Well say goodbye to your friend” he said viscously.

Ducky looked horrified as she realised what Sierra was going to do and bit down hard on his toe causing Sierra to take the toe out of her mouth.

“RUN TROUGH, RUN!!!” she screamed at the top of her lungs before Sierra kicked her with his free foot leaving her dazed.

Having dealt with Ducky, Sierra swooped down toward Trough who dived to the side just in time to avoid Sierra’s attack. Sierra turned again and this time he had Trough cornered by a tree, he dived at him with his jaws wide open for the kill. “You’re MINE!” he shouted.

“Not yet!” cried a voice.

THUD!

“AHHHHH!”

CRASH!

Sierra smashed into the ground face first and tumbled. Ducky fell out of his grip and he came to a stop feeling dazed. He turned his head and saw two Swimmers, one old brown and one blue were standing in between him and the children, they looked livid.

“Leave them alone you son of Sharptooth” yelled Bluey fiercely.

Sierra righted himself and with a furious chain of curses muttered under his breath, took off and left the Swimmers as he knew that it would be foolhardy to risk a fight against two adults. As he flew away he turned to Ducky and yelled at her “You haven’t seen the last of me you little brat, I’ll get you soon!” Sierra then departed on swift wings.

“Bluey” said Trough in relief “You arrived at the right time that crazy Flyer attacked us and tried to eat me!”

“Yeah” agreed Bluey. “Good thing we got here when we did” she said.

“We heard the commotion and screams so we came to see what on earth was going on” said Bluey’s mother.

“Thank you” Trough said gratefully but he was cut off from saying more by a pain full wail behind him. Trough scolded himself for forgetting that Ducky was hurt, he turned around and ran to where Ducky lay prone on the ground. Tears fell from her eyes and her right leg was twisted at an awkward angle.

“Are you okay Ducky?” asked Trough in a worried voice.

“My leg” sobbed Ducky, holding her trembling hands onto her right leg.

“Oh my!” exclaimed Bluey’s mother as she saw Ducky in pain and settled herself down next to her and gently took her up in her arms. Ducky grimaced with pain as she touched her leg and held on to the Swimmer’s hands tightly.

“This is Ducky” said Trough to the two adults “She’s the Swimmer I told you about”

The two Swimmers nodded and then focused their attention on Ducky. “You’ll be okay little one” said Bluey softly, holding out a finger for Ducky to hold while her mother examined her.

After a short examination of Ducky’s leg Bluey’s mother announced “Her leg not broken but it is dislocated” she said “Thankfully I can get it relocated” she added at seeing Trough’s shocked expression.

“Now, little one” she said to Ducky “This will hurt but it will get your leg back into place”

Ducky nodded, though she was not looking forward to the prospect of feeling more pain. “Hold on to me Ducky” said Bluey. Ducky closed her hands around the finger that the blue coloured Swimmer offered and braced herself for the pain.

“Okay, ready?” asked Bluey’s mother.

“Ready” said Ducky quietly.

CRACK!

Ducky gave a yell of pain as her leg realigned and held on tightly to Bluey’s finger. But thankfully the pain did not last long and she was able to move her leg again.

“Thank you” said Ducky to the two Swimmers.

“You’ll be okay but you should stay off that leg for a while dear” said Bluey’s mother.

Ducky nodded. “But how will I get back to my mom?” she asked.

“We’ll take you” said Bluey to which her mother nodded.

“I’ll come too” said Trough eagerly.

“Oh no Trough, not this time” said Bluey firmly.

“But I want to come” insisted Trough.

“No Trough” repeated Bluey. “I don’t want to risk another attack by that Flyer, you go on off home where it is safe”.

“Oh come on” said Trough in an agitated voice.

“No, go on you, we will be back soon” said Bluey’s mother as she passed Ducky to her daughter and gave Trough a gentle nudge with her beak until Trough reluctantly left the clearing.

“Okay Ducky” said Bluey in a friendly voice. “Show us where your mother is”

Ducky nodded and began guiding them back toward the cave. She did not have to tell them twice about where they had to go as Bluey’s mother was familiar with the terrain to a certain extent though not as familiar as Cyrest. But she still made swift progress to the cave. Finally as the came to the shore Ducky spotted her mother eating some tree stars behind a few trees near the cliff.

“That’s my mom” she said pointing in her direction. The two Swimmer walked over to Sura.

Bluey’s mother called in a kind, non-hostile voice “Hello there”

Sura looked up from her meal. “Hello, who’s there” she responded in the same caring voice.

“Friends, we have your daughter with us” said Bluey.

“Ducky!?” explained Sura in shock.

“Yes mama I am here, I am” said Ducky.

There was a flurry of movement behind the trees as Sura emerged from the trees and caught sight of Ducky.

She advanced forward quickly but was suddenly stopped.

“Sura?” said Bluey staring at Sura with her mouth open in shock as if she had just seen a ghost. Sura froze and looked at Bluey and a look of pure astonishment emanated from her face. She walked forward slowly until she was a few paces away from the two Swimmers who were gave gazing at her with shocked expressions.

She looked at the blue Swimmer and asked in an uncertain voice “Bluey?”

Bluey nodded a smile appearing on her face as Sura turned to look at the other Swimmer with an expression of radiant joy on her face and to Ducky’s astonishment Sura gave a happy cry and ran into the older Swimmer’s embrace.  

“Oh Sura” said the old Swimmer as she embraced Sura in a loving hug.

“Oh mother” replied Sura from within her embrace.

Ducky opened her mouth in astonishment and stared at the old Swimmer whom Sura just called ëmother’. Could it really be true? She did not need much confirmation after an explanation from the older Swimmer.

“Oh my beautiful daughter, I never thought I would see you again” she said.

“Mama?” asked Ducky looking between the Swimmers.

Sura looked at her with a smile. “Ducky” she said in a loving voice “I would like you to meet my sister, your Aunt Bluey and my mother, your grandmother”    


*


The Great Valley, Earlier In the Day.


Ariel was taking her morning flight around the Valley as she did every day, it was her way of waking up from her night’s slumber. She took in a deep breath of the cool morning air and let the refreshing breeze carry her thoughts away as she was bathed in golden light from The Bright Circle. “Now this is how to relax” she thought as she glided effortlessly through the air above The Great Valley. Looking down upon the magnificent sight that was The Great Valley she could see almost every resident. She could see Mr Threehorn just stirring from his nest, she could see Grandma and Grandpa Longneck waking Littlefoot and Ali before going to wake the younger of Sura’s children.

Ariel chuckled to herself “Those two” she said, Littlefoot and Ali were getting along fluently with each time, she would not be surprised if they ended up as mates one day. She glided over the river, flapping now and again to retain her altitude but mostly she glided. She spotted a few Clubtails drinking from the stream and Mrs Mia waking up her children, but her eye could not help but catch on the Swimmer’s nest. She saw Merri sleeping beside the nest of eggs that Sura had laid before she left, the children were resting alongside their father’s bulk. The most notable think about this family was Spike the Spiketail sleeping with the Swimmers.

“He could not have ended up with a better family” thought Ariel to herself. She looked at Ruphus, he was awake but not active and his eyes appeared to be resting on an empty area of the nest. Ariel sighed inwards. She knew well why Ruphus was acting like this. Having been told that Sura was dead by Sierra still affected the mournful Swimmer. Ariel could imagine how he was feeling, he did not know whether Sura was alive but he could not leave The Valley, which left him feeling helpless and depressed for the past few days.

Ariel shook her head as she aligned herself in the direction of her nest and headed for home. She could not bear to think of Sura, she was a great friend to her and the two would often have friendly conversations about the children and other day to day affairs, Sura’s children were also a jubilant and happy lot particularly Ducky but that had all changed as soon as Sculra chose Ducky to take The Trial of Destiny.

Ariel could not help but feel a pang of anger at that Swimmer for causing all this trouble but she was utterly helpless in working matters in the Swimmer herd. Feeling unsatisfied with her morning flight but wide awake she flew back to her nest but as she approached she got a tremendous surprise.

At the side of the nest watching the sleeping children was an orange adult male Flyer with a tall crest. Ariel recognised her brother Pterano immediately and dived down to meet him, her mind buzzing with questions but at the forefront of them was the question “What is Pterano doing here?”

Pterano saw Ariel coming and made room for her to land beside him.

“Pterano?” said Arial in astonishment when she touched down and looked at her brother.

“Hello my dear sister” replied Pterano in a lively voice as he went up to her and pulled her into an enveloping hug of his massive wings. Ariel stuttered in astonishment at her brother behaviour but she did remember that it had been three cold times since they last saw each other.

“Pterano what are you doing here” she asked after disengaging from her brother. She could not understand why Pterano was back before serving his sentence, if the other grown-ups knew about this then he would be chased out.

“I’m not going to be here long dear” said Pterano “I’m just here to pass on a message”.

“Message?” asked Ariel in surprise “What message?”

“A message from one of the Valley residents that I happened across a few days ago in The Mysterious Beyond”

“Who?”

“The Swimmer, what was her name” said Pterano “Ducky’s mother….”

“Sura!” shouted Ariel in astonishment and joy. Pterano however was taken aback by her sudden outburst. “You’re not making this up are you” asked Ariel in a stern voice.

“I am not making this up” replied Pterano “and yes, Sura, that was her name” he said.

“Is she okay?” asked Ariel eagerly. Pterano looked at his sister’s anxious features.

“She’s fine, why?” he asked curiously.

Ariel took a deep breath and said “That foul Flyer Sierra turned up a few days ago”

“What!?” exclaimed Pterano.

“He said that Sura was dead” she said.  

Pterano looked very angry “That cursed Flyer” he hissed under his breath.

“So Sura is alive?”

“Yes”

Ariel let out a joyful screech that succeeded in waking up her children.  

“She said that they reached the Big Water and that Cyrest is training Ducky now…and that Ducky is well on her way to mastering the wisdoms”.

Now it was Ariel’s turn to hug Pterano as she was overjoyed to hear the good news.

“Pterano!” cried a voice behind them and they turned to see Petrie fly out to meet them followed by his other siblings as they all embraced her uncle.

“I need to tell the rest of the Valley” said Pterano to Ariel.

“But what about your sentence?” asked Ariel in concern as Pterano was smothered by all of her children.

“I have proof from Sura that she sent me here and that it is Sura I talked too, she told me something that only her mate would know, even Mr Threehorn cannot deny that”.

Ariel nodded “He’s changed” she thought, she knew Pterano and he never used to be so considerate. “I’ll get everyone together” she said and took off but before she flew off she called down to Pterano “It’s good to see you again brother”.

“And you” replied Pterano as Ariel flew off.

“Oh Uncle me sooooo happy you back” said Petrie while doing a few loop the loops.

“And I’m happy to see you too Petrie, all of you”

“But why you back?” asked Petrie in confusion.

“I’m just here to pass on a message Petrie but that does not mean I can’t be with you for a little while” said Pterano as he finally caught up with his nieces and nephews.


*


Ruphus walked slowly toward the Stone Circle, his mind was still in turmoil over Sura’s supposed death hence he hardly felt like attending a meeting but Ariel had been very specific when she said that he had to be there, she appeared to be in a good mood, something that Ruphus did not share. Nevertheless he quietly took up his spot at the meeting.

Ariel started the meeting with a very booming voice “Morning everyone, I have called this meeting because we have received a very important message from The Mysterious Beyond that concerns us.”

There was a little curious murmuring throughout the crowd of adults at this. Ruphus however was hardly moved.

“So here is our messenger” said Ariel in a nervous voice.  

It was at that moment that Pterano landed in the middle of the Stone Circle and as expected Mr Threehorn did not take to Pterano’s appearance very well.
“What is he doing here!” he shouted at Ariel but it was Pterano who responded.

“I’m the messenger”

“Pah!” hissed Mr Threehorn, stomping on the ground furiously “like we would believe anything you say”.      

“Mr Threehorn please, calm down” said Grandpa Longneck lets at least hear what he has to say”. Mr Threehorn looked livid but he stayed in place.

“Very well Pterano go ahead, state your message” said Grandpa Longneck.

“First I need to know if Mr Swimmer is here” said Pterano.

Ruphus looked at the Flyer cautiously “I’m here Pterano, what do you want to say?”

“My message is directly for you from Sura-“

“SURA!” yelled Ruphus, practically jumping to attention, all weariness forgotten.

“Yes and I know about what Sierra told you thanks to my sister but I’m here to tell you that Sura is alive and well and that Ducky is mastering the wisdoms under Cyrest’s guidance” said Pterano.

The meeting basically exploded into happy shouts as the residents rejoiced at the news that Sura was not dead.  Unfortunately for Pterano was that Mr Threehorn was not convinced. “Hold on here, your banished Pterano so give us one good reason to trust you”

“I was kind of hoping you’d say that” replied Pterano “Because I have proof that it was Sura I talked to in The Mysterious Beyond. I was told a story only her mate would know, the story of how they met”.

“Fine” said Ruphus “give me your proof and for all our sakes I hope it is sufficient”. However after Pterano told him of how he saved Sura from the whirlpool when they first met with perfect detail and accuracy, all his doubt was washed away from his mind ”Sura is alive” he announced to the meeting. “The Story Pterano says is true and only me, Sura and Merri know of it”.

Even Mr Threehorn could not deny the evidence presented but he was still not in a good mood mainly due to Pterano’s return.

“So she’s okay?” asked Ruphus.

“Yes…but”

Everyone looked at Pterano in concern. “She looked very different then when I last saw her, her whole body was covered in scars, a laceration of the leg, a bite to the back and shoulder and a belly puncture with the biggest scar appearing to be a large cut on the throat”.

Everyone looked worried. “So that Flyer was telling the truth about Sura’s injuries” said Ruphus. He felt shocked that Sura had indeed survived such an ordeal as such injuries were usually fatal.

“She is just fine though, the scars have healed and she appears perfectly okay” reassured Pterano.

Ruphus nodded, although he still wished that he could have been there to protect Sura and Ducky from the danger that they obviously encountered on their journey, but at least Sura was okay and Ducky was getting the training she needed.

“Thank you Pterano” he said “I must go now, Merri has to know this news” And with that Ruphus left the meeting at a brisk pace in order to tell Merri the good news.

“Now get out of here Pterano” said Mr Threehorn but he was given a firm glare by Grandpa Longneck.

“Actually Pterano you may stay in the Valley for the week, I’m sure that you
want to catch up with your family” he said respectfully.

“Thank you Mr Longneck” said Pterano in a grateful voice and went to join Ariel.

Mr Threehorn did not look very happy as he left the Stone Circle when the meeting disbanded but even if he didn’t admit it, he was still glad that Sura was alright but none of the grown-ups knew that Littlefoot and Ali had heard what Sierra had said when he came and had not yet been informed of her survival and the news of Sura’s survival was only being spread around the other adults and not the children.
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Chapter 41: Family Reunion  

“You are m-m…my……Grandma?” asked Ducky, the astonishment present in her voice as she looked up at the old Swimmer smiling down at her. She nodded once. Ducky turned her head to Bluey “And are you really my Aunty?” she inquired to Bluey who also nodded, she like her mother also had a wide smile on her face.

The words just died in Bluey’s throat as she tried to address the situation. It had been quite a large shock to see her older sister again but to find out that she was also an aunt and that Ducky was her niece had left her utterly speechless, the situation was just so unprecedented and unexpected that Bluey just burst into open, uncontrollable laughter which was joined in by the other adults but it left Ducky looking awfully confused.

All she had done was asked a simple question and instead received laughter as the answer. Bluey regained a sense of control over herself and turned to Ducky “I’m indeed your aunt little one and this is indeed your Grandma,” she gestured to the older Swimmer beside her.

Ducky felt a smile come on her face as she accepted the absurdity of the situation, she gave happy laugh as she joined in the grown-up's mirth. Ducky’s laughter was cut off as she was nuzzled by her Grandma and Aunt. Bluey tickled Ducky with her fingers after she disengaged like she would with a hatchling, Ducky laughed as Bluey tickled her belly. Bluey nuzzled her again and this time Ducky returned her nuzzle by hugging her beak.

Bluey broke off and smiled lovingly at Ducky as she smiled back from within her embrace. Sura approached them with a smile on her face and grabbed Bluey in a strangling but loving hug. “Oh my dear sister it’s been to long” she said before she broke off from the contact.

“Too right Sura,” said Bluey “It’s good to see you again dear”.

“And it’s good to see that you have a daughter” added Grandma Swimmer.

Sura smiled broadly at her mother “One of sixteen," she said proudly "and that’s not including my third clutch of eggs” she said.

Both Swimmers opened their mouths with astonishment. “Oh Sura, I’m so proud of you” said Grandma Swimmer as she nuzzled her daughter.

“Why don’t we go and meet your other little ones Sura?” asked Bluey.

But Sura shook her head slowly “I’m afraid not Bluey” said Sura. Both Swimmers gave her confused looks.

“My brothers and sisters are all at home in The Great Valley” said Ducky solemnly.

“The Great Valley?” asked Grandma Swimmer in surprise “You live in The Great Valley?” she inquired to which Sura nodded.

“What are you doing out here all alone then?” asked Bluey.

Sura sighed and gestured with her head in the direction of the cave. “That will take a bit of explaining, come we’ll talk back at the nest” she said. The two Swimmers nodded and followed Sura back towards the cave.
 
Ducky was still in Bluey’s arms which she found rather enjoyable at the present but the sheer torrent of questions and coupled with the feelings of curiosity and confusion she quickly felt herself getting uncomfortable. She looked from her aunt to her grandma in confusion. She never knew that she had another aunt and she had never met her grandma nor had her mother ever even spoken of them during her time in The Great Valley. It did not surprise her in a way because she knew that Swimmer’s tended to have a lot of children so there was bound to be some aunts and uncles that she had never met before and her mother had to have a mother of her own and that made perfect sense but she was also very curious. “Why weren’t they there when I hatched? Why did my mom never talk about them before? What are they doing here?” Her questions seemed endless and she was no closer than she was to finding the answers then she was as close to The Great Valley at the present moment.

Ducky did in a way feel comforted, she believed what her mother had said without a doubt. The physical features shared between her aunt, mother and grandma were all very close. There only difference was age and skin colour. They also appeared to have similar personality traits. “The Swimmers in my family must all be very kind yep, yep, yep” thought Ducky as she thought of how these three adults all showed the same kindness that was present in herself.

The small company of Swimmers arrived at the cave, Cyrest was basking outside the cave in the sun as he often did when he had the time and with Sura and Ducky absent and Jane taking a nap he chose to have some down time of his own with Jane curled up beside his belly and sleeping soundly. He turned his head when he heard the sound of footsteps heading in his direction and not just one set but multiple. His body tensed itself in preparation for either fight or flight and he put his hand protectively around Jane but he quickly realised that he had just worried himself for no reason when he saw Sura come into sight but his relief turned to surprise when he saw two other adult females walking behind her, one as old as himself and the other who appeared slightly younger then Sura and had an odd light blue colour and she was carrying Ducky in her arms.

“What’s going on here?” he asked Sura in an aggravated voice “I don’t recall saying that you can invite just anyone here Sura,”

“Good thing I did not bring just ëanyone’ as you put it Cyrest” said Sura “This is Bluey” she gestured to the light blue Swimmer “and she’s my younger sister”.
Cyrest blinked in surprise at Sura’s explanation “and this is my mother” Sura gestured to the older Swimmer beside her. “And this is Cyrest” introduced Sura “and if you’re wondering he is not my mate” She added firmly.

Cyrest rolled his eyes. “I never thought he was dear, anyway he’s too old for you” said Grandma Swimmer.

“You got that right” said Cyrest “But how in the blazes did you meet up with them?” he asked.

“We migrated here with the Swimmer herd” said Bluey.

“And how did you come across Ducky?” asked Sura, realising that she had forgotten to ask why they had brought Ducky to her.

“Well Sura,” said Bluey “we first heard of her from Trough" Sura nodded. “But when we found them together earlier today they were in trouble”.

“Trouble? What kind of trouble?” asked Sura in a worried voice.

“Well, a scarred grey Sharptooth Flyer with lots of old burns on his body was trying to abduct Ducky and kill Trough. We saved them but the foul Flyer had dislocated Ducky’s right leg “said Bluey in a grim tone but quickly finished when she say the worried look on Sura’s face as she strocked her little one” but mom put that right and then Ducky led us to you and here we are”.

Sura was still gaping in horror. “At least you’re okay” she whispered to Ducky. She should never have let Ducky go, she could have been eaten for all she knew and what’s worse she had a sickening feeling in her stomach that the Flyer was one of Sculra’s agents and if he was here then that could only mean one thing. “She knows” said Sura, her fear rising rapidly, Sura looked from side to side as if she feared she was being watched.

“Who knows?” asked her mother curiously, though she also looked worried at her daughter’s shift in behaviour and walked over to her and put a comforting hand on her shoulder while Sura seemed to be breathing very shallow. “What’s the matter dear?” she asked with concern.

“Sculra knows what I’m doing with Ducky, I’m sure of it, I’m sure she sent that Flyer to take Ducky” she said with fear.

“Are you sure Sura?” asked Cyrest, sounding apprehensive” It could have been just any old Flyer, what makes you think he was working for Sculra?”

“It was not just any Flyer no, no, no” said Ducky. Everyone looked at her curiosly “He was one of the Flyers who helped kidnap me, he was with Pterano then, he always hated me he does, he does” she said in fear.

“There’s no doubt now” said Sura “Sculra was behind this I’m sure of it”

Grandma Swimmer cleared her throat loudly “Well when you remember that we are also here, perhaps you can tell us what on earth is going on?” she asked.

Sura nodded. “Of course mother, but let’s sit down it’s a long tale” she said.  
The three Swimmers made themselves comfortable as Sura began her story. Ducky sat down by Bluey’s belly and listened to her mother.

“You see the reason Ducky and I are out here is because she was chosen to take The Trial of Destiny” said Sura. She sighed as the expected gasps and looks of horror were directed at Ducky.

“Oh Ducky” said Bluey in pain, she wrapped her hand and tail around her protectively.

“Are you serious?” said Grandma Swimmer “Is Ducky really supposed to take that Trial?” she asked. The two Swimmers were just horrified they had only recently met Ducky but already she had already made her mark on them by helping Trough and she struck them as a very kind, friendly Swimmer. It had been a wonderful shock to see Sura again and find out that Ducky was family to them but now a sense of terrible foreboding descended upon them.

“I’m afraid so,” said Sura “When we were in the Valley I tried to teach Ducky the Swimmer Wisdoms and my mate tried to stop The Trial from taking place but we both failed so I came out here with Ducky to enlist Cyrest’s help in training her in the wisdoms because he has survived the Trial” She explained her sister and mother stared at her as if she was the only thing that existed. “And Sculra is the high elder of the Valley's herd but she is evil, it was she who selected Ducky to take the Trial, she has also threatened to kill her if we refused and to smash my third clutch of eggs and she took it up to a whole new level when she attacked my little Ducky at my own nest, she is just evil” said Sura.

Bluey and Grandma Swimmer were both glaring now, by the sounds of it, Sculra was a nasty fiend. “How dare she!” hissed Grandma.

“How could she do this to you two, why would she do it?” asked Bluey.

“Because of me” said Sura in remorse. Cyrest, Bluey and Grandma all looked at her attentively. “You see I’m also in charge of the Swimmer herd in The Great Valley and not just Sculra”

“You’re a herd leader?” asked her mother in startled delight. Sura nodded and her mother gave her a friendly nuzzle ”I’m so proud of you” she said happily before she broke off. Sura smiled brightly and a small tear ran down her eye but she brushed it away and continued with her story.

“Anyway, Sculra does not like how I run the herd and she generally hates me because I took the mate she wanted and because of the fact that I abandoned many of our darker traditions” The three Swimmers nodded their approval. “But she especially does not like Spike.”

“Spike?” asked her mother.

“Spike is a Spiketail and my adopted son” said Sura.

Her mother nodded though she was clearly surprised, but that surprise quickly turned to understanding. “And she does not like you because you took him in?” she asked.

“Yes, but Spike is a son to me and a brother to Ducky and my other children and he has no family but us” explained Sura quickly, apparently worried that her mother did not approve but her mother put a reassuring hand on her back and nodded “You did the right thing dear”

Sura looked relieved that her mother approved and finished off her story. “And that is why Sculra chose Ducky, she doesn’t mean for her to survive, it is all to torture me and my family for not complying with her” she said sadly, looking down at the ground as she sobbed.

“I can’t lose my little Ducky, I just can’t lose you dear” said to her sister and mother then to Ducky. “But this stupid trial……I hate it, it’s just cruel and Sculra is just evil to do this to my little Ducky” sobbed Sura” and I’m so scared for her”.

Bluey and Grandma both went to lay down beside either side of Sura and tried to comfort her in her moment of need. Ducky meanwhile stared at her mother in shock, she had not realised how badly her mother had been affected by all this madness but her love for her was still on display and just as strong as ever, Ducky now knew in her heart how much her mother cared for her and the rest of her family and that she would protect her no matter if it cost her mother her own life.

Ducky walked slowly up to her mother, her leg still hurt a little but not enough to stop her from walking, she ended up hugging her mother’s beak and saying softly “I will be okay mama and so will everyone else yep, yep, yep”

Sura gently nuzzled Ducky and said in a soft voice “Your right dear, we will all get through this okay”. Sura raised herself onto her haunches and gazed at Bluey and her mother. “So how have you two been?” she asked.

“Hey, that’s what I was going to say!” said Bluey “You’ve already started on your story so tell us about your home and how your life has been since we last spoke long ago”.

Sura chuckled at her sister “Alright” she said and spent the better part of an hour talking about her all that had happened since she left, she also spoke of her home in the Valley, describing her children and mate and when she mentioned Merri her mother laughed “I should have known Merri was with you, you two are almost inseparable”.

Sura continued talking about The Great Valley and all its various residents and places of interest. When Bluey inquired about Ducky’s life, Sura gave her details of her hatching and how she had grown up so far and of her various adventures which left everyone apart from Ducky and Sura staring wide eyed at them, especially after how Ducky told them of how she and her friends defeated The Great Sharptooth and about raising Chomper.  

After the initial shock there were a few objections about Ducky being friends with a Sharptooth. “I never would have believed in a million cold times that leaf eaters and Sharpteeth could successfully get along without killing each other, even less that we could possibly friends and even less that the one who actually does befriend a Sharptooth is my own Granddaughter” stated Grandma Swimmer who looked at Sura and said “She’s even worse then you in terms of adventurous spirit”.

This caused Sura to laugh in response. “You’re not wrong there mom, but at least Ducky has great friends and I know that they would risk their lives for her” she said.

“Yep, yep, yep” agreed Ducky.

“I suppose I have said all I have to say,” said Sura “So now you can tell me what you two have been doing these last few cold times” she asked with curiosity.

“Well apart from all the rest of our siblings either leaving to make their own way or else dead by some other means not much is new” said Bluey.

“We have not heard from any of your other siblings Sura, they’ve all left a long time ago, about two clod times after you left dear” said Grandma Swimmer.

“There has got to be some other things that you have done?” inquired Sura.

“Well” said Bluey nervously.

“Your father has made his journey to The Great Beyond Sura” said Grandma quietly.

Sura stumbled as if she had tripped and started breathing awfully fast. “You mean-“ she said in horror. She could not finish off the sentence.

“Yes dear” said Grandma Swimmer, walking other and putting a comforting hand on Sura’s shoulder but her daughter bowed her head and sniffed as her tears started to fall. “Come here dear” said her mother as she wrapped her arms around her daughter and gently nuzzled her in a comforting fashion. Sura held onto her mother tightly and let out a few chocked sobs.

“How?” she asked in pain.

“He caught a breathing disease and that coupled with his old age claimed his life before we could find a cure” said Bluey. “He said that he was sorry for what he had said when you left Sura, he regretted it deeply”.

Sura closed her eyes tightly and after a short silence she spoke sadly “I never got the chance to say sorry to him, I should never have said those things” she said. “I miss him, I missed you two as well” she said.

“Well Sura I thank you for dampening my day with your tears and past really thank you, I mean it was a nice sunny day before you’re mother here told us about your father’s death” said Cyrest. This earned glares from Grandma Swimmer and Bluey however Sura knew Cyrest was only joking. She could hear the sarcasm in his voice but it was also coupled with agitation and a bit of understanding.

Sura sniffed “Well I believe Cyrest is right about leaving such subjects behind” said Sura to which the others nodded.

“I am happy to see you again dear,” said Grandma Swimmer “but we must go, we don’t want the herd to get worried about us do we”.

Sura nodded. “But promise you’ll visit” she added.

“Of course we will,” said Bluey happily “and we might take Trough with us Ducky so you can play with him as it seems there are no other children for you to play with here”.

“Oh I would like that yep, yep, yep” said Ducky in excitement “But I am not alone no, no, no. I have Jane with me I do, I do”.

“Jane?” asked Bluey.

“My niece” said Cyrest, raising his tail and showing the sleeping Jane to everyone.

“Awwww,” said Bluey “she looks like such a lovely little one”.

“She is indeed” agreed Cyrest with a gentle glance at his niece.

“Well, see you later Sura, Ducky, Cyrest,” said Grandma Swimmer as she turned to leave “We’ll visit soon dear and good luck Ducky it was wonderful to meet you dear”

Ducky smiled “Thank you Grandma” she said softly.

“See ya” called Bluey as she and her mother disappeared out of sight.
There was a long silence after they left, nothing could be heard but the sound of waves striking the shore.

Finally Cyrest broke the silence “Well that’s something that you don’t see every day”. Sura and Ducky chuckled but they were still shocked about meeting Bluey and Grandma Swimmer.


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Later At Night    

Sura stood on the rocky shore under the full moon and looked out to sea. Cyrest and Jane were already asleep but she just could not close her eyes for even a few seconds, such was the turmoil of her mind. So Sura abandoned trying to get to sleep and raising carefully so as not to wake Ducky, she walked out of the cave and onto the rocky shore near the cave. She sat on her haunches and stared out into the distance as if she was trying to spot an elusive star in the distance. However Sura was just trying to relax and get the events of the day out of her head but no matter how hard tried to just sit back and let the cool salty air calm her it never worked. Seeing Bluey and especially her mother again after so long was a hell of a shock for her.

Bluey was one of her friendliest siblings but her life had been hard with the constant bullying when she was a kid at that time Sura was around Ducky’s age and preparing for her Trials but Bluey was at least three years younger than herself and had been contemplating suicide because of all the pain she had to endure because of her colour, which everyone found to unusual to be a blessing and teased her about it. Sura saw how hard Bluey was suffering and had gone to comfort her on the issue, she still remembered that conversation from long ago.

“I don’t belong here,” said Bluey in tears “I just want it to stop, it’s just too much”

“You can’t end it like this Bluey” said Sura in alarm. She put her arms around her sister and held her close.

“Why shouldn’t I Sura?” questioned Bluey. “No one wants me, NO ONE NEEDS ME!” she yelled out the last part in suppressed rage but her pain was evident in her voice and demeanour, tears were streaming down her eyes.

“That’s not true, you still have your family,”

Bluey looked hard at Sura “I’m not so sure Sura, I see how they look at me, like I’m a stranger and they are always act uneasy when I’m around them” she said calmly.

“Not me, not Merri and certainly not mom and dad, we care for you” said Sura.

“You don’t know what it’s like Sura, you’ve never been bullied like this, you have had no trouble in your life, you’ve never felt like I have nor has anyone of our siblings” retorted Bluey.

“That’s not true Bluey, I have felt the way you have after I lost Bright and Clover, you were too young to remember, you were just a hatchling but I led Bright and Clover to their deaths at the sinking sands and I blamed myself for the whole incident” Sura saw Bluey watching a look of shock on her face having never really been told this particular tale. “I wished I was dead after that, I wished I could take back my actions and I wished to end it”

Bluey hesitated then asked “What stopped you?”

Sura looked hard at her sister “I just couldn’t do it Bluey”. Sura saw a look of confusion spread across her sisters face “I guess my heart was telling me that it was not my time but in the end I realised that it was the earthshake and the belly dragger that was responsible for their deaths and that it was not me who actually made the killing blows but I knew I was at fault and I swore to myself then that I would never let such an event occur again and that really helped through it. I may not have gone through the same hardships that you have Bluey but I still want to help you, I don’t want you to go nor does mom or dad” said Sura.

Bluey looked down. “I promise you,” continued Sura" that I will never allow anyone to hurt you when I’m around”

Bluey looked up at her sister “You would do that for me?” she asked.

“You’re my sister and I love you, I don’t want you to go Bluey” said Sura softly and pulled her sister into a loving hug “I will always be there for you, to help you through your hardships” she said as she disengaged.

Bluey looked at Sura and smiled. “Always?”

“Always”

“Thank you Sura” said Bluey, she felt much better now, she felt wanted, this drove away her depressing suicidal thoughts and it was replaced with the warm feeling of love that her sister had given her and like what Sura had once done Bluey vowed to herself to never ever, no matter what let these thoughts take her down again.

Sura sighed as she remembered that day in her childhood. She then thought about her mother, her loving mother, how she had missed her during her long absence. She was the first to leave the nest out of any of her siblings at her age but it was not with her father’s blessing. Sura felt a few tears fall down her eyes when she thought of her father.

She never had the chance to reconcile with her father after she left having never seen or even heard from again at least till today and the revelation that she never could forgive him tormented her but at least he had forgiven her. “Oh father,” she said out into the night sky “I’m so sorry I ever said those things, I’m sorry for leaving you” Sura put her hands into her hands and sobbed uncontrollably for a few minutes.

“Mama?” came the soft voice of Ducky from behind her.

Sura did not turn but asked in a calm voice “shouldn’t you be asleep dear?”

Ducky did not answer but instead she walked slowly up to her mother until she was sitting right next to her, she could see the silver tears falling down her mother’s cheeks. “What is wrong mama?” she inquired in concern but she kept her voice calm and comforting.

Sura closed her eyes and opened them again and this time she looked at Ducky, her daughter’s expression showed how worried she was about her. “It was about earlier today when you brought your grandma and aunt here” she said.

Ducky looked confused “I do not understand, why that should make you sad? You were happy then you were, you were“ she said.

“It’s not that” said Sura a little harsher then usually talked. She looked at Ducky and saw the hurtful expression on her face “Oh, I’m sorry little one, I didn’t mean to yell at you” putting a hand on Ducky’s back and lifted her gently onto her lap.

“Then what is it?” asked Ducky in a slow concerned voice.

Sura sighed sadly and closed her eyes and did not saw anything. Ducky thought that she had pushed her mother to hard but she responded. “It was the news about my father, your grandfather, about how he’s now gone” she sniffed.

“I’m so sorry” said Ducky holding on tightly to her mother’s finger “I am, I am”

Sura shook her head “It was not just his death that upset me dear, you see a long time ago when I first became a grown-up, I was very quick minded and rushed into things very often, I thought I knew what was best for me, I was arrogant and I wanted to leave the nest and head out and see the world but my father thought I was too young and told me to stay until I was ready and things got ugly, we were yelling at each other, insulting each other, I said the most horrible things to him Ducky and I yelled at him in front of my whole family that I wished that he was not my father” Sura sobbed” I told him I wished he was dead before I left” Sura closed her eyes tightly and struggled to regain her composure and said in a highly trembling voice. “He was furious with me he bellowed that I was a hot headed and a beak face, that I was still the same Swimmer that killed Bright and Clover and he chased me out and I never saw him again”.  

Sura completely broke down, she sobbed hard into her cupped hands. Ducky was shocked, never had she seen her mother break down in such a way…….and it broke her heart and caused her to tear up too.  

The two lay there for a few more minutes, weeping until they had both calmed down. “At least……“ Sura sniffed “He forgave me and that makes me feel a little better at least” she said.

“What was Grandpa like?” asked Ducky.

“He was a very good father, he was often firm but he always had a gentle touch to him that always showed with his family, though not with everyone else” said Sura as she looked up and thought of her father “He certainly was not a Swimmer to cross as he had a considerable amount of experience in holding his own against fast biters”

Ducky looked amazed at that statement “He spent a lot of his youth travelling and adventuring where he learnt how to survive and I suppose that is why your grandma liked him, plus she also had the same interests as him and that was the main reason they became mates. He was wise in his old age but just as firm when he had to be and” Sura chuckled “He had a similar speech to yourself dear”

“He did?” asked Ducky in astonishment at hearing that her Grandpa talked like her “well I guess I know where I get it now” she thought.

“He certainly did, he often got his words wrong which was very funny and he had the tendency to say “Yeah, yeah, yeah” a lot, especially when he was agitated” Sura laughed gaily at the memories of her father.

“He sounds like a good grandpa” said Ducky.

Sura smiled “He was a good father and I miss him dearly but I still have my memories of him” Ducky nodded in agreement. A calm silence descended upon then as the both watched the Night Circle continue on its agonisingly slow journey over the star lit sky.

“Come on dear” said Sura “let’s get some sleep, it’s been a long day” Ducky nodded and let her mother carry her back to the cave where they could both sleep in peace.


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At Bluey and Grandma Swimmer’s nest

The two Swimmer lay in their own separate scrapes gazing up at the Night Circle just as Sura and Ducky had done outside of the cave. They both reflecting on the day’s events, seeing Sura again was the happiest experience that had befallen them in a very long time to both of them. It was as if it was only yesterday to Bluey, Sura was exactly as she remembered, still the same friendly, thoughtful Swimmer she had grown up with and helped her through her childhood hardships. The only difference was Ducky’s presence meaning that Sura was mated and now a mother. Bluey was overjoyed that Sura had enjoyed the fruits of a good life and Ducky was such a kind young Swimmer, she was in many ways a reflection of her mother as they both had the same caring composures. The setback was the fact that Ducky was going to take the Trial of Destiny.      

Bluey could hardly believe it, she had only just found out that she was an Aunt and had met her niece earlier in the day but only to hear that her niece was doomed to die in the Trial of Destiny. It was very hard to comprehend meeting your niece and hearing on the same day that she would only have a limited time with her before she would fall in the Trial. It was unfair in so many ways, Bluey could easily relate to Sura’s situation. She was faced with losing her precious daughter at the hands of a vile fiend and terrible traditions, she was doing the only thing she could do, teach Ducky the wisdoms and prepare for the Trial and all that it entailed but even then there was still no guarantee that Ducky would survive.

Bluey sighed “How am I supposed to watch that Trial now that I know Ducky is taking it? How could this happen to her, it’s just so cruel” thought Bluey and she resumed looking up at the Night Circle, train of thought continuing on the same path as before, still trying to contemplate how this could all happen to Sura and Ducky.

Grandma Swimmer however was confronted by a different set of thoughts which were directed at her daughter Sura. She felt so proud when she heard that her daughter had prospered in The Great Valley with sixteen wonderful children and a mate who loved her for who she was and in the company of her sister Merri, whom she was glad to hear that she was also prospering even though she had never mated or borne children. It was lovely to meet her little granddaughter Ducky but it was also a big blow to hear that she would soon be taking the Trial of Destiny. However her thoughts kept coming back to Sura and how painfully she had reacted to the news of her father’s death, it almost broke her heart to see Sura suffer like this at their reunion, so she had attempted to comfort her as best as she could in her time of need.

She still remembered that day when Sura left, the day of the big row between her and her father over what should have been a small issue but which escalated into a full on confrontation between father and daughter.


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Many Years Ago In the Mysterious Beyond  

“I don’t understand you Sura, why on earth do you want to leave now? You’re not ready to leave the nest even though you are an adult” said Sura’s father with a startled look on his face, he could not believe that Sura had just asked to leave the nest and go her way when she knew she was not ready.

“I don’t want to stay here indefinitely dad” said Sura “I want go out there and see what the real world is like”.

“You will have what you want in time Sura, you just have to be patient” said Sura’s father in a diplomatic voice “You know you’re not ready to leave the nest yet dear”

Sura’s mother nodded in agreement “There is still much that you must learn here Sura” she said in support of her mate.

“When will I be ready then,” said Sura in a highly agitated voice “most of my friends have left the nest to make their own lives and you allowed Merri to leave, so why can’t I” Sura protested, her anger was rising rapidly at being denied the freedom she so badly wanted.  

“Listen Sura” said her father in a calm but serious voice as he put his hands on her shoulders ensuring that they were both facing each other directly. “We don’t want you to get into any trouble out there” Sura tried to turn her head away but her father held her head in place with his hand. “This decision is hot headed, just because your friends have left not mean that you are ready and Merri is a whole other case” he said in a harsher voice then he intended.

“I am not the same kid I was once daddy, I’ve changed since the sinking sands incident” she said in a voice designed to reassure him but her father was not buying it.

“You have dear but I want you to complete your learning of the Swimmer Wisdoms before you leave, that way I know you’ll be responsible enough to survive out there”. Her father pointed out into the distance in emphasis of his point.

Sura gave an angry groan. “Come on!“ she cried “I am more than cap-“

“Yeah, yeah, yeah I know you think you’re capable but I worry that you will end up in the belly of a Sharptooth or drowned at the bottom of some river” said her father in agitation. “I am doing this for you dear” he added in the kindest voice he could muster.

“At this rate I won’t be leaving until the next Cold Time” groaned Sura “Those wisdoms are really difficult, I can easily look after myself out there even if I don’t know the wisdoms” argued Sura.

“Please dear” said her mother in a worried voice but Sura was already angry.

“You’re just trying to watch me, you never forgave me for the sinking sands incident didn’t you!” Sura yelled at her father “Have you forgotten that I blamed myself for losing my brother and sister or don’t you trust me” said Sura quickly, an old pain was resurfacing after a long period of suppression but a sense of betrayal was also present in her voice.

Sura watched her father as his face turned into a firm glare “I can’t forget that incident Sura that much is true but you go too far, I do trust you, you’re my daughter and I am just trying to do what is best for you, please at least prove to me that you’re not the same Swimmer who led that fateful venture to the sinking sands Sura”.

“I know what is best for me dad,” said Sura firmly “and it is not staying here, it is time for me to leave, I am more than ready, that Swimmer who led that venture is gone Daddy”. Sura turned away from her father.

“Oh no you don’t young lady” he said grabbing hold of her, he didn’t notice the rest of his family come and watch, apparently attracted by the row taking place between them. “You’re not leaving until you are ready Sura and that’s that do I make myself clear!?” her father yelled in suppressed rage.

“I am not a child anymore father, you can’t hold me against my will now let me go you heartless bastard, I don’t need you babying me, now let me GO!” yelled Sura struggling against her father but he held her firmly in place.

“What’s going on?” asked Bluey who had just arrived on the scene to see her sister yelling at her father and her father holding her firmly in place with her mother watching the scene with horror.

“Please stop it!" cried Sura’s mother in alarm, she had not expected this rebellious reaction from Sura and now she could tell that Sura had pushed her father too hard, things were about to get ugly. But surly it would not go that far but to be on the safe side she gestured to Bluey and with a receiving nod they both walked behind each of the two Swimmers in preparation to break up any fight that might break out between them. “Please you two, you both being unreasonable” she cried.

However the two Swimmers appeared to be oblivious to anything other than each other “What did you say to me?” said Sura’s father in a low tone, filled with menace.

“See you don’t care for me!” yelled Sura, completely losing herself in her anger, unaware of her mother grabbing her tail “You would not need to ask again if you listened and understood how I feel, you are just a heartless Swimmer!” she yelled. “And I…I wish you were not my dad, I wish you were dead” she said in a slow condemning voice that was filled with seething anger.

Silence fell over the nest and everyone froze, silent gasps visible on every one of Sura siblings and her mother who had let go off Sura’s tail and stared at her daughter in numb shock. Bluey had also released her father to stare at Sura in horror. None of Sura’s siblings had expected this, they all stood paralysed to the spot and stared open mouthed at her. There was only one who had not reacted to Sura’s condemnation: her father.

He was expressionless, he stared at his daughter just as Sura glared at him breathing heavily which was the only sound in the nest but apart from that nothing audible could be heard. Everyone held their breath as they waited for the response from their father. It came, his expression turned into a look of rage, he appeared as if he had seen his mate killed by Sharpteeth and wanted vengeance.

Everything after that comment seemed to go in slow motion for Sura and yet she could not stop her father from pushing her to the ground with a fierce yell. Sura recovered and looked at her father, a feeling of horror, regret and fear flashed through her like lightning as her father suddenly charged at her, yelling like maniac.

Sura gave an alarmed cry and ran from her father as fast as her legs could carry her, she heard her father yell at her from close behind but she dare not look back “Your still the same Swimmer who killed Bright! Go on get out of here, you don’t deserve this family! You’re no daughter of mine! Get out of here you hot headed beak face! I never want to see you again, GET OUT OF HERE!” he yelled at the top of his lungs and Sura did as she was told, she ran from her home, her family, her father. She never looked back.


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Back To the Present

Grandma Swimmer felt very sorry for Sura, her father had been distraught after the incident, going into a shocked silence that lasted for over two days, he blamed himself and he believed that he had pushed Sura too hard but Grandma Swimmer had to wonder whether Sura had felt the same way about her father after being chased away from the nest. At least her mate had forgiven Sura and made his peace but his daughter was not so lucky, not having the chance to reconcile with her father before he died had hit Sura pretty hard when she was told. Grandma Swimmer hoped that she would find her peace soon just as her father had found his.

“Sura sounded so happy” said Bluey, breaking the silence between them.

“She certainly does” agreed her mother. “She has lots of children a great nesting sight and this Ruphus sounds like a very good mate to my daughter, I could not be more proud of her despite what I thought when she left”

“She has a lot more scars though” added Bluey “and those were only recent and if it had not been for Cyrest then we would not be so happy today I’ll tell ya, at least she’s okay”.

Grandma Swimmer nodded “And Ducky”.

Bluey also nodded then she said proudly. “You’re a Grandparent”.

“You’re an Aunt” replied Grandma Swimmer to which her daughter smiled.

“It feels great,” said Bluey ”I’ve rarely know such an affection from anyone, Ducky is such a kind little one”.

“Yeah, but she is taking that foul Trial and Sura has told us more than enough about the trouble it has caused her. What I would give to kick this Sculra
where it hurts after what she has done”.

“I wish it were different but we can also give Ducky our help, I mean the more help the better and I don’t want her to die, she’s too young and she does not deserve this torture” said Bluey.

“We will help her dear and we will help Sura as well” there was a slight pause in the conversation then Grandma Swimmer continued “I can’t wait to see the rest of my Grandchildren when we reach the Valley” she said eagerly.

“Me too mom, me too” said Bluey.

The two Swimmer watched the oceans hypnotic waves as the crashed against the beach then a rustling in the bushes nearby caught there attention. Both Swimmers turned to the sound of the noise then the form Trough emerged from the bushes and walked to the two Swimmers, a worried look on his face. “How’s Ducky?” he asked before anyone could through their accusations at him.

“She’s fine little one” said Grandma Swimmer softly.

“You found her mother?” asked Trough.

Both Swimmers nodded. “Yes we certainly found her but it was a shock to find that her mother is actually my daughter” said Grandma Swimmer.

“And my older sister” said Bluey.

Trough’s mouth fell in astonishment as his mind digested what it had just heard “You mean Ducky and her mother are a part of your family?” he said, hardly believing his own words.

“They certainly are” said Bluey. “It was great to see my sister again, I have not seen Sura since she left the nest and finding out that Ducky was my niece was the best feeling I have felt in a very long time”.

“How does it feel to be an Aunt?” asked Trough “It must feel very good” he added.

“It feels wonderful Trough and Ducky is such a kind Swimmer and don’t worry we certainly approve of you and her” she said humorously to which her mother laughed while Trough blushed foolishly.

“Thanks for saving me and Ducky” he said in a respectable voice.

“Hey, you’re my friend and that’s what friends do” said Bluey “Now run along now back to the nest, it has been a long day and it is late and we all need to be well rested before Bright Circle rises in the sky”

“Okay Bluey, see you tomorrow” said Trough with a hint of sleep in his voice as he turned to leave.

“One more thing Trough” said Bluey’s mother, Trough turned and faced her. “We are going to visit Ducky and her mother tomorrow and you are more than welcome to come” she said.

Trough’s face lit up in a wide smile “Oh yes, I would like to come with you and see Ducky again” he said in excitement.

“Good, we’ll pick you up in the morning and then head out” said Bluey’s mother.

“Thanks” said Trough as he disappeared through the pushes looked a whole lot happier.

“Are you sure that was a good idea mom?” asked Bluey when Trough was gone “If he comes and sees Ducky training and finds out about the Trial….”

“It’s good for him and for her” said Grandma Swimmer “Besides, he can’t truly help her if he does not know what she is up against, right now they need each other and its best that Trough knows so he can support Ducky, he likes her and I know he will look after her”

Bluey pondered on this for a short while. “I hope your right about this” she finally said.

“It’ll be fine Bluey” replied Grandma Swimmer.

“Goodnight mom” said Bluey with a calm smile.

“Goodnight dear” replied Grandma Swimmer. With that they both settled down for the night under the cool pale rays of the Nigh Circle.


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The Great Valley

Cera ran quickly from the rock where Ali was currently counting down from twenty in their game of hide and seek. Cera was in no mood to be the seeker so she ran into the woods and hid in a large bush which she was sure would hide her adequately.

Close by everyone else ran to their chosen hiding spots. Chomper ran to a freshly dug hole in the ground and began to hastily cover himself with leaves in a poor attempt to hide himself.

Petrie flew up to the top of the tree canopy and hid behind a particularly broad branch and held onto a nearby stick in order to prevent himself from falling.

Ruby meanwhile ran to hide behind some tall rocks, which lay closely packed together and would hence allow her the chance to out manoeuvre the seeker.

Spike meanwhile ran into the tall reeds near the watering hole and Littlefoot ran into the woods but unlike Cera he hid behind a fallen tree trunk which was hollow but Littlefoot reframed from going inside as he wanted to see when Ali comes and hide when she came and he could not do that if he was hiding in a hollow tree trunk.

“Eighteen tree stars………nineteen tree stars………twenty tree stars. Ready or not here I come” called Ali as she finished counting and began to search for her hidden friends. She began by walking towards the watering hole and searching around the banks. Spike retreated deeper into the reeds, his green colouration helped him to blend in but it was a darker green then the surrounding reeds. Ali proceeded into the reeds, causing spike to walk into the water and hide beneath it, his colour blended perfectly with the surrounding algae invested water and his back spikes made it look like he was a rock. He kept his head just above the water so he could breath and as Ali approached he closed his eyes so as to avoid showing his purple coloured eyes to Ali.

Ali came closer and closer advancing through the reeds slowly and carefully, keeping her eyes focused for any sign of her friends, her head turned left then right as she walked slowly through the reeds. Getting even closer to the water line until she was almost standing on Spike.

The young Spiketail held his breath as Ali stood above him, he guessed that she was looking directly at him yet she did not seem to recognise this green algae encrusted rock as Spike and she soon moved on and out of the reeds in search of her other friends.

“Where are you guys” she said to herself as she headed towards the rocks where Ruby was currently hiding. Ali peered behind every rock in the area but failed to find the elusive Ruby who moved from rock to rock when Ali was not looking. Ali proceeded past Chomper’s hole, not really looking at it. Her attention was directly focused on the woods and the numerous trees and bushes that lay in their shadow. She was sure that her friends were hiding in there somewhere.

Littlefoot, Cera and Petrie all saw Ali coming from their respective hiding spots and quickly concealed themselves. Ali meanwhile was getting increasingly frustrated, her friends were obviously very good at this game she however was a bit out of practice as she rarely got the chance to play this game as the adults did not like the children disappearing on them in The Mysterious Beyond when there could be Sharpteeth on the prow, they did not want to risk anything bad happening to the children but at the cost of any fun the children might have, for the tight set of rules in Ali’s herd made it very difficult to have much fun apart from the conversations she had shared with a more mature Rhett it was awfully tedious in the herd.  

“I’ll find you sooner or later guys” she thought to herself as she entered the wood and slowly advanced into the shade but carefully peering at ever bush, ever tree and branch and any nook and cranny that her friends might be hiding behind. Littlefoot ducked behind the log and stayed silent while Ali was on the prow, he and his friends had been playing a lot more games than usual, it was a way of coping and temporarily forgetting the troubles that had happened of recent. Littlefoot and Ali were both carrying the burden of knowledge on Sura’s supposed death. Of course they had no idea that the ruse was false but they had never been told over wise and since Petrie had not really heard what Pterano was saying when he was talking to his mother, he could not relieve them of their burden. The games they were playing was a way in which to have fun and forget their troubles but unfortunately in a game like hide and seek Littlefoot’s thoughts wondered further the usual.

He had been considering the option of going out and finding Ducky but to do so what not only put himself in danger but it might also compromise any supposed training that she was doing, so he remained undecided on the course of action.

“Hi Littlefoot” said a voice behind him which caused him to jump in fright and stumble on a root and fall painfully on the ground and seeing stars. He heard a deep boyish laughter behind him that sounded familiar. He got and turned almost expecting to see Ali but the laughter was not a girl’s laugh, he turned and was almost nose to nose with last face he expected to see at the moment.

“Shorty?” he said in a slow, astonished voice.

“Don’t you recognise your own brother?” joked Shorty back which caused
Littlefoot to laugh but before they could exchange any news, Ali’s voice rang out.

“Found you Littlefoot!” called Ali as she trotted down to where Littlefoot stood. She stopped when she saw Shorty and stared at him in surprise, immediately feeling a little shy at seeing the young green Longneck.

“Oh Ali,” said Littlefoot stepping aside and gestured for Shorty to come next to him “This is my brother, Shorty” he said “Shorty this is my friend Ali”.

Shorty smiled at Ali in a friendly way and stepped forward saying “Hi Ali”

“Hi Shorty” said Ali in a quiet, shy voice.

“What’s going on here?” came Cera’s annoyed voice. Cera appeared from the behind the bushes and spotted the group of Longnecks. “Oh” she said in surprise when she saw Shorty. “Hi Shorty, didn’t expect to see you here”.

“No surprises there” replied Shorty and led the way out of the wood. Littlefoot was in for a happy reunion out in the open as his father Bron was waiting for him.

“DAD!” cried Littlefoot happily when he caught sight of him through the underbrush and ran out to meet him. He was met by a loving muzzle.

“Hello Littlefoot” said Bron, breaking off from his nuzzle with his son.  

“Oh it’s so good to see you again and Shorty” said Littlefoot happily.

“And you too son” agreed Bron.

“What are you doing back though?” asked Littlefoot. He had not expect to see his father until after the cold time, his early arrival was unexpected but no less welcome.

“Well” said Bron calmly “we have returned because of Shorty”.

Littlefoot frowned, why would Bron be returning to the Great Valley because of Shorty along with his whole herd? “He didn’t do anything bad did he?” asked Littlefoot in a worried voice.

Bron chuckled heartily. “No, he is in no trouble Littleoot it’s just-“ Bron cut himself off and gestured to Shorty to continue.

“We’ve come back to The Great Valley because I’m going to do The Big Longneck Test” said Shorty proudly.
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Long overdue catch-up...

Review of chapter 36:

Ducky trying to beat Mo's water kin... that was a race she couldn't win of course but it was an excellent test to improve her speed and maintain it for a longer time. Going against stronger people usually makes you run (or swim) a bit faster :)
Now Cyrest is finally opening up. He has lost everything yet he  keeps going and helps others. He is a very great and good-hearted dinosaur. :yes Just what is Sierra gonna do now? I'm scared :D

Review of Chapter 37:

Hmm, the idea with the fish didn't work so far (poor fish! :cry) but Cera and Ruby's competition was hilarious :DD

Aww, Littlefoot being romantic how sweet :wub: Note to Ali: He's the right one ^^

Sierra you ***.... That was a very mean act.... Interesting though that Pterano is on his way to the Valley to say the very opposite of Sierra's message. Who will they trust? ;)

Review of Chapter 38:

Poor Trough :( He's a good guy but everybody just hates him for no reason at all (as opposed to Bluey who has that skin colour).
He gets beat up quite bad (why don't the grown-ups do something about it? :bang)
Ducky coming to the rescue was so awwsome and unexpected. Great move of yours ^^
Also... love is in the air :smile The thought of Ducky having a crush on another swimmer is kinda sweet :D Sura sure noticed that, hehe.

I'm glad that Ruphus and Merri decide to stay with their children and abandon the thought of searching for Ducky and Sura to find out the truth (the journey there would take a long while to begin with...). They still doubt Sierra so they're still likely to believe Pterano :yes
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Lucky Yes for him.

He that Lucky, cuz we all know that this sit is serious. Hope the others are trying to figure out a way to get rid of that swimming sharptooth.


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Review of Chapter 39:

Wow, this was an eventful chapter! Ducky mastered the challenge despite all of difficulties and saved Sura from a Swimming Sharptooth. Thumbs up, Ducky, yep, yep, yep! :DD

Sura's idea to escape by allowing herself to be eaten instead of getting teared apart was brilliant... she sure is a lucky swimmer and a smart one too :smile

Review of Chapter 40:

Ducky and Trough are so sweet together! :D They really seem to fit together very well :yes

Ducky really showed these bullies! Well done, Ducky! :D

Can somebody kill Sierra? PLEASE?! Nobody hurts Ducky and gets away with it! :angry

Pterano has successfully completed his mission. Now Ruphus knows Sura is still alive :)

Very exciting chapter :)

Review of Chapter 41:

The part about Sura's past was very interesting to read. It sure is a pleasant surprise that the swimmers Trough always hangs around with are actually long-lost relatives of Sura. It's also very surprising that Sura acted like that towards her dad. It seems so totally out of character for her but we all know how foolish people can be in their young years :p

I wonder how Trough is going to react when he finds out that Ducky is going to take the Trials... I have a feeling Trough is going to be shocked about it and then give Ducky a warm hug...

Oh, and you keep surprising me with unexpected reappearances of many characters. :lol
So Shorty is going to take the Big Longneck Test then? A sort of tradition too but totally unlike the cruel Swimmer tradition of the Trial...
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Chapter 42: Compromise

Littlefoot guzzled a fair amount of water from the watering hole, letting the refreshing liquid pour down his throat and raise his head and saw Shorty waiting patiently for him to finish. Littlefoot was very interested and happy for Shorty when he had heard that he was going to do The Big Longneck Test. “But of course just being ready to do the test does not mean he’ll pass it,” thought Littlefoot, his thoughts briefly went back to Ducky and what was expected of her but he quickly ended that gloomy thought. “I hope Shorty passes this test” he thought.

He walked over to Shorty, the two brothers exchanged friendly looks between them, his friends were also here with him and were also eager to hear how Shorty had been doing since they last spoke, well almost everyone was here.  
Littlefoot noticed someone missing and voiced his concerns to the rest of the group. “Hey where’s Spike?” he said in surprise.

Everyone looked around hastily but they could find no sign of the green Spiketail, Littlefoot knew he was not hiding as he came out of his hiding place like the rest of his friends when Shorty and Bron arrived.

“Don’t know, don’t care” said Cera in an agitated voice. “He’s probably wondered off to eat some green food” Spike’s habit of wondering off and constantly glutting himself really annoyed her “and I am not going looking for him” she added.

“Your probably right,” said Littlefoot ”for once" he added a cheeky grin on his face.

“Hey!” said Cera ”don’t push your luck Littlefoot” she hissed in annoyance although she knew Littlefoot was only playing around.

Littlefoot turned back to Shorty and asked what his friends had been wanting to hear: how had he been?

“Well I’ve been good, same old life an all, wondering around with Bron. Not much is new”.

“Well can Shorty tell us how you been chosen to do Big Longneck Test” said Petrie in excitement.

“Okay” said Shorrty and settled himself down into a comfortable position which the others mirrored. “See there are a few younger kids in the herd now, they are newcomers and they were really mischievous” said Shorty. Everyone nodded.

“I thought you said that nothing worth mentioning happened during your travels Shorty” said Cera sceptically.

“Well apart from a longneck family joining with four children that are about Chomper’s age and are very cheeky and trying to keep them in order while I watched them because Bron gave me the job of keeping watch of some the younger Longnecks then there was not much that happened….actually that’s not true a lot happened” said Shorty.

Cera interrupted “you could have mentioned that a bit sooner” she stated.

“Cera be quiet please, please be quiet Cera so we can listen to Shorty” said Ruby.

Cera closed her mouth after a long role of her eyes and remained silent for Shorty.

“Now as I was saying the journey was actually rather eventful mainly because of the new kids who loved playing tricks on people and me in particular, those troublemakers tripped me as I walked passed them and I fell into a mud hole” said Shorty angrily but only laughter met his ears. The friends laughed at Shorty finally falling to someone else’s pranks.

“So someone finally beat you at your own game?” chuckled Littlefoot.

“Of course not” said Shorty firmly “I got back at them earlier but anyways I went out exploring after we arrived near The Smocking Mountains and that is where I suppose Bron thought that I was ready to take The Big Longneck Test” said Shorty. And continued.

“See I did a lot of climbing when I was exploring and found those four kids arguing at the base of the cliff I was on and then I saw two Sharpteeth approaching in the distance and the kids were too busy arguing to notice them”. Petrie let out an audible gasp when Shorty mentioned Sharpteeth and indeed everyone else looked worried.

“What happened then?” asked Chomper, currently enthralled in Sharty’s narrative.

“I tried to warn them but the silly flat heads thought it was just a joke and ignored me while the Sharpteeth got closer and closer” said Shorty in a dark, slow voice in order to build the suspense, he paused and continued.

“So I ran down the path and got to the children just as the Sharpteeth came in to view, I yelled a warning and they escaped being a meal. We then ran with the Sharpteeth in pursuit and we hid in a cave which I had found when I was exploring and led them into it then I told than to run back to the herd after I distract the Sharpteeth. They protested but I still ran out and drew the Sharpteeth away so the kids could make it back to the herd". Everyone gasped and waited in anticipation for Shorty to continue.

“I ran back to the cliff I was on before climbed the slope which was very steep, too steep for the large two footers to climb and got out of reach of the Sharpteeth. When the Sharpteeth gave up the pursuit I got back to the herd to find that Bron had already heard what had happened and I guess he thought I was ready to take the test then, so we came here, because we knew it would be safe for me to do the test here” finished Shorty.

He received a good reception of compliments from everyone present at the conclusion of the story. “Wow that was so brave Shorty,” commented Ali “The way you saved those Longnecks even after all the trouble they caused you” she said.

“I know” replied Shorty proudly.

Littlefoot smiled, Shorty had earned the right to take The Big Longneck Test after that venture and Shorty’s selflessness really impressed Littlefoot for he knew that those children had bothered Shorty on more than one occasion before.      

“I missed you and dad Shorty, I’m glad your back” said Littlefoot happily.

“I am too” agreed Shorty “It’s always good to be in The Great Valley”.

“Usually” said Cera.

“Usually” agree Shorty.

The friends stared at each other in an awkward silence. Littlefoot broke the silence “Hey why don’t we go find Spike, we don’t want him missing out on anything”.

“Okay” said Shorty “but how are we going to find him? He could be eating any bush in the Great Valley by now”.

“I’ll just follow his scent” said Chomper.

“And we’ll follow Chomper while he follows Spike’s scent till he finds Spike” said Ruby.

Shorty shook his head in confusion, Ruby never failed at succeeding in confusing him with her tell-tale sing song speech. It annoyed him as it got old really quickly but he also accepted that this was one of Ruby’s unique characteristics that made her who she was.

“Alright, let’s go already” said Cera.

Chomper took a few sniffs of the air around him until he found Spike’s distinct scent heading into the forest. “Follow me” he said and led the way into the forest after Spike. His trail headed through the forest and out onto the plains. Chomper took another sniff of the air and continued across the plain.  
Shorty meanwhile had his eyes on Ali, there were other girl Longnecks in Bron’s herd but none of them were as old as Ali nor in Shorty’s opinion as beautiful as her. He could not stop himself looking at her features. Her long slender tail, and purple body and those startling blue eyes. Shorty felt excited, he wanted her but had he stopped to think for a moment that Ali was already engaged with Littlefoot he might not have disturbed her but Shorty did not know and he really wanted to impress Ali.

However Shorty was not completely devoid of sense for he noticed that Ali was walking next to Littlefoot at a very close proximity. Shorty hesitated and paused to think about the situation. He had not known Ali for that long and by the looks of it Ali and Littlefoot already knew each other and they appeared to know each other well but he sensed there was something more between them. Could it be that Littlefoot had his eyes on Ali too? Shorty stopped for a second and in so doing causing Cera to crash into his tail with a muffled yelp of surprise. Shorty quickly regained his bearings and quickly trotted ahead of Cera who gave him an annoyed look “Watch where you’re going Shorty” she said.

“Sorry” said Shorty and looked back at Ali and Littlefoot and considered the imposing situation that he found himself in. He resumed the same train of thought and continued where he left off. In answer to his unspoken question he thought that Littlefoot certainly had eyes on Ali and was it also possible that Ali had her eyes on him as well? Shorty felt his stomach sink in disappointment, he decided them that he would just try to be a friend to Ali and not try to interrupt Ali’s relationship with Littlefoot even if it did turn out as he thought it would.

Shorty’s train of thought was once again interrupted by Chomper who had stopped and looked back at his friends who also stopped to look at him. Chomper quickly explained “Spike’s scent heads in the direction of the Crescent Caves” he said with an expressionless look on his face.

“Why would……Oh yeah” said Petrie, there was something in Petrie’s voice that was unlike his usual excite full self and Shorty noticed it nor did he like it, he wondered what was going on.

“Well” said Littlefoot “We might as well go and see him, he might need some help”. Everyone beside him nodded and walked on.

Shorty quickly edged over to Ali and walked beside her. “So” he said feeling unsure of himself “When did you come here Ali?” he asked.

Ali looked at him shyly. “I came at least two cycles of the Night Circle before now”. She stated.

Shorty pondered, this meant that Littlefoot had already spend a significant time with Ali. However Shorty’s cautious thoughts went astray and where replaced with longing and a boastful feeling. “What did you think of how I earned the right to take The Big Longneck Test?” he asked without thinking, his voice contained a lot of pride.

“Well I thought it was really good that you can take The Big Longneck Test now and you deserve to take it and you sounded very brave and cool minded when those Sharpteeth came” she said in a friendly voice.

“Thanks” said Shorty raising his neck to the fullest extent, looking very proud.

“Oh please” said Cera from behind.

Shorty looked back at her looking very annoyed “What?” he asked, stopping his forward walk to face Cera.

“There’s a time and place Shorty and they are neither here nor now” she said. “Also Ali and Littlefoot, Me Ducky, Spike and Petrie all journeyed to The Land of Mists long ago to get The Night Flower for Littlefoot’s Grandpa to cure him of a terrible sickness, we’ve all known her longer then you, even Chomper and Ruby have known her longer”.

“So” said Shorty, pretending to be ignorant but in truth he knew now that Littlefoot and Ali had a close, personal friendship with each other.

“So” said Cera, sounding very irritated and tired “don’t go and do anything stupid Shorty, too much has happened recently and we’d all prefer a break from it all rather than have more stupid events happen” Cera moved off ahead in order to catch up with the others.

Shorty stood still for several more seconds before running back to the group though he felt more confused by Cera’s remark and wondered what had befallen her and the rest of The Gang recently. Shorty shrugged and continued his run to catch up to his brother and friends, he would find out later he thought to himself.


*


Meanwhile in another part of the Valley, at The Stone Circle the adults where busy deciding what should be done about Pterano at Grandpa Longneck and Ariel’s insistence, it was not at all to the liking of Mr Threehorn who had never been on good terms with Pterano and was completely opposed to the idea of reducing Pterano’s sentence, a few other residents who had relatives in the first herd Pterano had led to their deaths also sided with Mr Threehorn here but the majority of the residents were undecided, a few sympathetic dinosaurs like Ruphus sided with Grandpa Longneck on reducing the sentence but like usual in these meetings there were opposing residents and many undecided residents. The overall winner of the debate would be the side that could get the most support from other residents.

“I will have no part in granting Pterano a reprise from a sentence that was to light in the first place” growled Mr Threehorn to Grandpa Longneck. He felt that Pterano had been lucky in receiving the sentence he had when he would have made his sentence a lifetime sentence but he was overruled by the residents after they heard of how Pterano saved Ducky from falling to certain death. Now however Mr Threehorn vigorously protested to any reform of Pterano’s sentence.

Granpa Longneck sighed inwardly, he knew that this debate was inevitable with the way Mr Threehorn acted towards Pterano but that did not mean he had to like it. He had been hopeful that Mr Threehorn would see past his old prejudices but he was greatly mistaken.

“My friend, I think Pterano has changed for the better and he has done us all a good service by giving us the news that Sura lives, surly you can allow him a little leeway?” said Grandpa in his usual calm, diplomatic voice.

“No” said Mr Threehorn simply. “I don’t trust him and he has been nothing but trouble since the beginning” he countered.

“That’s not true, heës my brother” said Ariel firmly "so don’t you dare tell me that he is trouble for everyone”.

“I agree with Ariel,” said Ruphus “Pterano may have done some bad things but he always had the right motives.”

“Motives!” cried a nearby Hollow Horn furiously. “Tell that to my sister when she followed that fiend and died as a result of his incompetence.” There was a fluttering of agreement among many of the adults.    

“He also saved my daughter” added Ruphus.

“Who sneaked away in the dead of night,” said Mr Threehorn “You could not even keep an eye on your own kid”.

“Your one to talk!” retorted Ruphus “how many times has Cera slipped away in the dead of night as you put it” Mr Threehorn glared at Ruphus. “It was not Ducky’s fault that she accidently stumbled upon the Flyers meeting and was captured as a result”.

"Huh!” bellowed Mr Threehorn “how can you side with him? He kidnapped your own daughter Ruphus, yes he may have saved her but he was also the one who put her in danger in the first place”.

Ruphus nodded “Your right but that was several Cold Times ago, he might have changed since then and he also informed us of Sura or does that mean nothing? I thought I lost her and was debating on whether to find her. If the same had happened to Tria or your first mate would you have left? Don’t tell me that you would not be desperate for news on them” Mr Threehorn looked a little taken back but quickly went back to his harsh, cold demeanour. “Pterano did a good thing there and I am willing to forgive him for the past and if I am allowed I would like to completely lift his punishment”.

There was a lot of shocked murmuring now as the Valley residents discussed the most recent arguments. Ariel smiled gratefully at Ruphus, she knew that he had more reason to hate Pterano then most. She knew that he had lost a few good friends to the Sharpteeth that killed the entire herd of which Pterano was the sole survivor. He also had his daughter kidnaped and put in tremendous danger by her brother. If anyone Ariel would have expected Ruphus to be one of the first to disagree with Grandpa’s suggestion of raising his sentence a little but Ruphus had just proposed to lift Pterano’s sentence completely. “He must be really grateful for Pterano for giving him the news on Sura being alive” thought Ariel.

“Pterano has changed,” said Ariel in support of Ruphus “he deserves another chance”.

“I’m not so sure” said a voice. Everyone looked up to see Pterano land in the middle of The Stone Circle.

“What do you mean brother?” questioned Ariel in confusion.

“I mean I have had a long time to think about what I have done Ariel and I’m not sure I should be excused so lightly. I may have done some good things but I also did bad things too. I abandoned an entire herd to death and kidnapped an innocent child for my own selfish purposes, that is inexcusable and it still haunts me, seeing the members of the herd I was leading die because I failed to be the leader I should have been and I am still haunted by what could have happened to young Ducky after I took her, Sierra wanted to kill her, she fell from high in the sky into a torrent of water in the rapids and She almost fell to her death on the summit of Threehorn peak” said Pterano there was a lot of guilt and pain in his voice.

Many of the residents felt sympathetic for him, even Mr Threehorn listened without interrupting him.

“I did the thing I failed to do with my herd but what I succeeded at doing at Threehorn peak, I saved someone that I had put into that situation in the first place but I still can’t forget the wrongs I have done” said Pterano quietly.

There was a long silence as everyone digested what Pterano said then Grandpa Longneck stepped forward and spoke directly to the orange Flyer. “Pterano,” he said slowly “You were originally banished for condemning your herd to death while you ran and you served that sentence until you came back to the Valley a few Cold Times ago.” There were a few nods from the adults, Grandpa continued.  

“No one myself included trusted you because of what you did, our suspicions were confirmed when you kidnapped Ducky and by doing so putting our kids in danger when they went to rescue her but unlike before you saved Ducky’s life when she fell and because of that we agreed to reduce your punishment and banish you for five Cold Times and so far you have kept to that sentence until now” Pterano nodded.

“But,” said Grandpa Longneck “you bring good news to the Valley, by telling us all that one of the Valley’s most well liked residents, Sura is still alive and relieving much pain from us in The Valley. This alone might have reduced your sentence by at least another Cold Time” Grampa Longneck paused, everyone stared at him, waiting for him to continue. “Now however it’s different. You have revealed beyond all accounts that you have changed, the Flyer I once knew would not have so plainly stated his faults and a heartless fiend as some have called you would not be haunted by their actions. Today you have shown me that you have fully comprehended your actions and in my opinion have reformed into a different Flyer”.

Everyone stared at Pterano then at Grandpa Longneck.

“You have shown us today that you have seen the error of your ways and have no intention of repeating past mistakes, you have changed for the better Pterano and because of your welcome news about Sura’s demise being false I would like to reduce your punishment further. I propose that Pterano be banished for one more season and may return to The Great Valley after the Cold Time where you will be allowed back into the herd but if you misbehave then you will have the rest of your banishment to complete but if you keep the peace then you will be welcome back to The Valley” said Grandpa Longneck.

“Any objections?” asked Ariel. She looked around at the residents, none of whom raised any objections. Everyone turned to Mr Threehorn and awaited his verdict. Topsy looked conflicted to Ariel, she hoped that he would see sense. Topsy turned his head and looked at her. He could see the desperation in her eyes and sighed and then said calmly ”I don’t object, though I will not like it”

Ariel gave a happy screech. “But if you do put a toe out of line Pterano then you know what happens next” he added in his usual cold voice.

“That settles it” said Grandpa Longneck “Pterano will leave the Valley in the next five days and serve out the rest of his sentence then he may return”.

“Thank you Mr Longneck“ said Pterano gratefully “you have given me more then I deserve and I thank you for it” he added in a respectful voice.

Grandpa Longneck nodded in response then took his leave as did everybody else until only Pterano remained with Ariel who hugged him happily, chocking him in the process. “Careful sister” he cried out.

“Come on Pterano” said Ariel, looking utterly thrilled as she took flight with Pterano raising up on the thermals behind her “Let’s go and find the children, I’m sure they’ll want to hear the good news” said Ariel as she and her brother took flight through the Valley.


*


“Yeah right, you would not even be able to outrun a turtle” said Rapid to Echo when he said that he was perhaps the fastest Swimmer in the family now, after his fitness training and regular speed races that he had done to maximise his, speed, strength and endurance. Rapid however did not take on to Echo’s boast, he had not really done much training in the area of speed since he already believed that he was the fastest Swimmer in The Valley.

“You really believe that you’re the best Swimmer in The Valley don’t you?” said Echo who was too sick of Rapid’s arrogance to back down.

“I don’t believe it, I know it, no one can swim as fast as me least of all you Echo” retorted Rapid. He was the troublemaker in the family, Echo had often wondered if he was part Threehorn because he exhibited the prideful, boastful and aggressive attitude they did, he was also a natural born trick star. He loved scaring people when they weren’t looking and he had once been responsible causing Opal and Ducky to wet the nest when they younger when he snuck up to them while they slept and shouted in their ears which scared both of them out of their skins. Rapid may have been punished harshly for that incident but he never led either Ducky or Opal forget the looks on their faces after he scared them.

However recently Rapid’s bragging had reached a new height which was almost unbearable and had already caused several verbal sparring matches between him and his other siblings, Echo being just one of them. “I bet I could beat you in a straight out race now that I’m stronger I’ll leave you in my wake” said Echo aggressively to his brother.

“And I bet twenty tree stars that you’ll be left in my wake Echo” said Rapid confidently or rather arrogantly in Echo’s opinion.

“And if I remember correctly it was you who was left in Ducky’s wake the last time you raced her” said Echo sarcastically.

“I was tired and off that day” retorted Rapid.

"No you weren’t, you were up and excited like we all were and Ducky still beat you, she’s still the fastest Swimmer of any of us” said Echo angrily.

“It’s not about Ducky now, it’s about you and me and even if I’m not the fastest Swimmer in the family, I’m still the fastest boy so there’s no way you’re going to beat me Echo” in annoyed voice, glaring at his brother. “Now let’s race” he said.  

The two Swimmers waded into the water next to the nest.  “To the base of the waterfall and back” said Echo.

“You’re on” replied Rapid. He didn’t know however that Echo had been racing back and forth from the nest to the nearby waterfall with Merri timing his run several times and hence he knew what the water was like.

“On the count of three” said Echo to which Rapid nodded and started to count.

“One……two…….-“

Rapid stopped the count and took off as fast as he could but Echo knew his brother and had expected such a response and hence had also started at two. Rapid swam fast, even faster them many of his other siblings but when he looked to his side he was surprised to see Echo keeping up with him and starting to overtake him. Rapid pushed himself to the left and rammed into Echo’s side and knocking him off course. Rapid took the advantage and sped away leaving Echo in his wake.  

Meanwhile Echo banked right in order to avoid a rock before he was back in open water and swimming toward the waterfall but Rapid already had a large head start. However Echo was determined and pushed on, kicking his legs fiercely “You’re not getting away this time Rapid” he thought.

Rapid was the first to reach the waterfall where he did a sharp turn instead of a wide turn and swam easily back from the waterfall, completely sure of a victory. He stuck his tongue out to Echo as he swam past.

Echo dismayed, he would never beat Rapid now but then he was reminded of something Merri had told him: “Sometimes it is not always strength or speed that decides a race though they are both important but using your brain is also very important, it’s what you do when you try to get away from Swimming Sharpteeth, you anticipate where they strike and while races are different if you keep an open eye and mind then you’ll spot something your competitors miss. It could be a current that you detect first and hence have time to prepare yourself for a suitable response while your competitors get caught flat footed. So overall you need speed, strength, technique and brains to win a race”    

Echo looked at the waterfall there was a strong current coming from it. But he knew there was a small cave behind and all of a sudden an idea struck him that might just win him the race. He battled the current and dived under the surface and swam beneath the waterfall until he emerged within the cave which was little more than a shallow crevice and started to climb the back wall as fast as he could until he was at least two metres up then he took a breath and dived into the rushing torrent of water which pushed him down with furious strength but Echo held his dive angle and splashed back into the main body of the river but now he had taken off with phenomenal speed thanks to his perfect dive and now had the extra current pushing him along plus the speed he had gained from the waterfall he swam along the bottom, kicking his legs as hard as he could and keeping the constant powerful strokes of his arms going. Finally he surfaced for air and was level with an astonished Rapid who started pushing himself furiously in order to regain the lead.

The brothers were neck and neck with only a few more metres to go. They were so close and neither relented their speed then both collided painfully with the bank at what an outside viewer would have said was at exactly the same time.

Both brothers panted in the waist deep water and held onto the dry land.

“Beat you” said Rapid between breaths “so pay up”

“You didn’t beat me” said Echo “I’m sure I came first. You’re just sulking because I beat you!” he added angrily.

“No I’m not!” hissed Rapid indignantly then he pointed and accusing finger at Echo. “Don’t think I didn’t see you go into the waterfall and dive into it after having climbed the side of the cliff” he said though he could not see through the waterfall but he had guessed at what Echo had done. “You said this was supposed to be a straight out race but you didn’t play to the rules which means your disqualified and I win!” Rapid raged furiously.

“If it was a straight race then you should be disqualified, you knocked me in the side so you would beat me before I went to the waterfall” counted Echo.

“Liar. I won and that’s that” said Rapid firmly.

“You didn’t beat me you're just a sore loser Rapid I won that race and you know it!” cried Echo angrily, he was getting increasingly frustrated with his brother but that was an understatement, he was very angry with Rapid and even more worse Rapid chose to take it to the next level.

“Go fall in a dung heap Echo” he said coldly.

“Go get eaten by a Swimming Sharptooth Rapid” hissed Echo in return, his blood boiling at Rapids insult but evidently not as much as Rapid.

“Take that back Echo” he said menacingly looking eye to eye with his brother.

“Call me the winner first Rapid” replied Echo climbing back onto the bank “till then” he said turning and shaking his tail at Rapid “you can kiss my tush” he said coldly, he had had enough of Rapid’s boasting.

Rapid gasped as Echo waved his tail at him then he silently charged and quite literally kicked Echo in the ass. “Owwww!” he cried falling on his knees then getting up and tackling Rapid causing both of them to roll into the shallow water where they preceded to pummel each other senseless.

“Rapid! Echo!” came a firm voice behind them.

The two boys froze in position. Echo had been about to punch Rapid in the face while Rapid had been about to kick Echo in his privates. They both looked up into their father’s firm face. He had his hands on his hips and was glaring at both of them. Echo and Ray disengaged and looked up at their father nervously, they had both been busted yet they still tried to look as innocent as they could.

“Would one of you two mind telling me what on earth is going on here?” he said calmly but his voice was still very firm as he looked at each of his son’s faces.

There was a short silence which was soon broken by a nervous Echo.
“Um…Well Rapid started it by bragging that he was the best Swimmer in The Valley” he said, trying to keep from making his father any more agitated but Rapid had to interrupt again.

“Which I am” he said proudly.

“Shut Up!” hissed Echo furiously.

“Boys!” shouted Ruphus above the rumpus his sons were causing. “No arguing
you two, now please continue Echo and no smart remarks from you Rapid” he added to Rapid.

Echo continued. “We challenged each other to a straight out race”

“Which I won” said Rapid.

“No, you didn’t I did!” shouted Echo fiercely.

“You cheated!” replied Rapid, also in a yell.  

“Did not!”

“You did that waterfall trick!”

“Yeah?! Well you hit me off course!”

“You waved your tail at me!” shrieked Rapid, working himself into a rage.

“It was no more then you deserved after all you are an ass!” retorted Echo who had completely forgotten his dad’s presence as he and Rapid exchanged comments and insults at a lightning pace.

“Why you foul mouthed son of a Sharptooth!” yelled Rapid and leapt at Echo just as Echo leapt at him but they both fell to the ground in mid leap when their father grabbed their tails, preventing them from touching each other. Though the boys were still yelling insults to each other.

“ECHO! RAPID!” yelled there father furiously, his voice cut through them like a knife and they both quailed before their father’s anger. "Quiet your tongues you two,” he said firmly. “Now to what I can tell you are both at fault”. Both Echo and Rapid looked nervous. “Rapid your bragging has been very distracting and annoying to your siblings these past few days and I have already received complaints from your other brothers and sisters”.

Echo nodded firmly. “And you Echo” said his father, turning to him, his voice was a mixture of disappointment and anger. “What you did to Rapid was unacceptable, inexcusable and rude. Waving your tail at someone will certainly make the receiver angry” said Ruphus firmly.

“He farted at me too” commented Rapid in an ashamed voice.

Ruphus fixed a furious glare on Rapid which caused his son to step back in fear, under his father’s scrutiny when Ruphus spoke he sounded disgusted “Don’t ever let me catch you lying again Rapid, I know a lie when I see one”.

Ruphus shook his head at the two boys ”Also if that was a straight race that you had been under judgement during the Trials then you both would have been disqualified”. This caused both Echo and Rapid to open their mouths in surprise. “Echo that was a great move you did with the waterfall but in a straight race no such moves like the one you did are allowed, they are in a freestyle race where you can use your surroundings to you advantage but not in a straight race” Echo nodded. “And Rapid hitting someone in races is unacceptable and will mean immediate disqualification if you are caught”.

“Humpth” said Rapid indignantly.

“And you both need to learn manners, the way you spoke to each other is just disgraceful” said Ruphus to which his sons looked down in shame. “You are both grounded for the rest of the day and will go to bed without super” he said firmly.

Echo and Rapid nodded slowly, keeping their heads bent in shame.

“And I want you both to apologize for insulting each other” said Ruphus.

“No way!” cried Rapid.

“I’m not apologizing to him!” said Echo.

Even with their father glaring at them they refused to even look at each other. They both stared in opposite directions with their arms folded and glaring into the distance.

“Fine” said Ruphus simply and settled himself beside his disobedient children and wrapped his tail around the space they were in so they could not leave. “You are not leaving until you apologise to each other” said Ruphus.

“I would sooner apologise to a Sharptooth for eating the way it does” said Echo persistently.

“I’m not apologising to that worthless whiney-“

Whack!

“Owwwwww!” cried Rapid in pain as his father slapped him on the back with his tail, it was not hard to a grown-up but to a child it was incredibly painful. Rapid sobbed and messaged his back with his hands.

“I’ll have no more insulting of each other and that goes for both of you. Do I make myself clear?” questioned Ruphus his voice was very firm and strict, as he disciplined his children. “I don’t want to hear you calling each other names or you will be in big trouble, understood?” he said.

Echo nodded and Rapid gave his father a hurtful expression but nodded all the same. Yet still they did not apologise to each other, rather they sat at opposite ends of the space they were encased in and refused to acknowledge each other. Ruphus did not expect either Echo or Rapid to apologise straight away so he waited for them to react.

The hours flew past but neither side relented but Ruphus was persistent and continued to wait patiently even after it was evening. Nothing had happened between Echo or Rapid apart from Rapid poking his tongue at his brother, a gestured which was repeated by his brother. They might have continued exchanging faces and gestures but Ruphus put his hand down in the centre of the two, it was not an aggressive gesture but its meaning was clear. “Don’t even think about it” added Ruphus in order to make his gesture’s meaning perfectly clear, that ended any activity between them.

Now however as their father and clutch mates ate their dinner both Echo’s and Rapid’s stomachs started growling, complaining as their hunger was not satisfied like it usually was, the fact that they were to go to bed without any supper did little to improve their moods and when Merri asked what had happened Ruphus told her and all the older children what had transpired. This certainly embarrassed Echo, to say the least about Rapid who looked away from his siblings.

“Ha, it’s about time we had a night free of your endless bragging Rapid” taunted Opal. Rapid ignored her. “I speak for all of us when I say that we’d all prefer to be chased by a Sharptooth then listen to your bragging one more time and like you’re the best Swimmer in The Valley Ducky beat you on the-“

“I was having an off day” interrupted Rapid.

“You were beaten fair and square Rapid” retorted Opal.

Oh yeah! Well Ducky is not here now so I am the best Swimmer in the family and even if she was here and we had a race and I actually tried to win then I would win” said Rapid stubbornly.

“Enough!” said Ruphus firmly, every one of his children present and Merri looked at him. Ruphus looked sharply at Rapid and Opal then at the rest of his young ones “Children” he said his voice calm and reasoned “I don’t care who wins a single race in practice and I don’t care if none of you even win a single event in The Swimmer Trials”. Everyone stared at Ruphus in surprise, even Merri looked doubtful “What I care about is that you try. That’s what I want. I want you to try your absolute best and to never give up no matter what happens” His children silently listened to his encouraging words.

“Winning is not truly earned if you don’t push yourself and try your best and that is what The Swimmer Trials demands, I don’t care if you win a race or not but as long as I see you Swimming your hearts out there then I will be proud of you, now remember that Ducky is taking her Trial after the main events in The Swimmer Trials and you all know what she is up against” said Ruphus quietly.

All the Swimmers looked down sadly they hardly need to be reminded that Ducky was going to take The Trial of Destiny. “She will be fighting for her life and I know that she will try her very best and I’ll be dammed if you don’t try just as hard as she is…….” A silence descended on the nest as the children digested their father’s words. “Just try your best kids that’s all I care about” finished Ruphus the pain evident in his voice as he talked about Ducky's Trial.

The silence descended again but this time everyone nodded silently in agreement. Opal let out a sniff, her father looked at her and his expression softened when she saw the tears in her eyes. “Oh honey” he said gently, stroking Opal’s back. Ducky was Opal’s favourite sibling and she had been very badly affected by the recent changes in her life.

Opal let out a few chocked sobs and sat on the ground, her sisters ran to her side to comfort her. “I want Ducky home and s-safe,” she sobbed painfully “and I want mommy back too” she started to cry openly.

Ruphus picked Opal up and cradled her in his arms and gave her a comforting nuzzle. Opal hugged her father’s beak tightly while she wept “Oh my little one, you will see Ducky again and your mom” he said gently.

Opal nodded “I just want them home” she said.

“We all do” said Echo, finally speaking up. “Dad’s right, Ducky’s taking her Trial and she will try her very best so there’s no reason why we shouldn’t either” He said in a mature voice. Echo then got up and walked over to Rapid and looked him in the eye. "I’m sorry for what I said earlier Rapid it was disrespectful and
I’m sorry for waving my tail at you” he said.

“Hey, I’m sorry too,” said Rapid “for being the ass you said I was” everyone laughed at his statement, “I’m sorry for hitting you in that race Echo” he added more respectfully.

“No worries Rapid” said Echo.

Ruphus smiled as his son’s finally made up “A lesson learned” he thought to himself as he lifted his tail and releasing Echo and Rapid. “Go and have some supper you two” he said.

“Thanks dad” said Echo and Rapid in union then they both headed to get their dinner.

Ruphus gently placed Opal on the ground. “It’ll be alright Opal, they’ll come home and Ducky will be just fine” he said, giving his daughter a parting nuzzle.

“I hope so” whispered Opal.

Ruphus raised his head to look at Merri who gave him an appreciative nod. Ruphus then looked back at the nest and noticed something that he had missed before.

“Hey, where’s Spike?” he asked.
             

*


Earlier In the Day

Spike sat beside the stream that ran into the Crescent Caves, the fish that his friends had caught was hooked onto the makeshift fishing line which Spike had tied around the trunk of a nearby tree and sat down in the shade of the tree next to the line, ready to pull should the Sharptooth fall for his trap. Normally he might have sat down and eaten but now he felt very unsatisfied by just eating and while Littlefoot was trying to get his head around their present troubles by playing endless games which helped a little but Spike chose to do something, he just could not be idle, not this time.

So after he had stopped playing and said a brief hello to Shorty then he left for The Crescent Caves to try some more fishing. Spike sat by the tree, nothing seemed to satisfy him. Ever since Ducky left he had felt more alone than ever. He had felt alone before when he had left with Tippy but he still had his friend’s company as well as the company of his own kind but now he felt empty. The fact that Ducky’s life was in peril didn’t help, it made him feel more depressed so he decided to spend some time fishing. “I might as well do something productive” he had thought when he began but so far he had no luck and he desperately wanted Ducky to be safe. Ducky was his sister, no she was more than that she was the one person he could turn to, she was a friend and she almost felt like a mother to him. Ever since he had hatched he had known Ducky, she was a constant in his life, something that would never go away no matter what.

But now that she was gone he felt like he was not fully himself without her, normally the second person he would turn to was Sura, while she was not his birth mother she still held a special place in his heart, she was older then Ducky and had more experienced hence she could always provide counsel and comfort to him even though she was not always sure of how to treat Spike’s position. She always tried to better understand him and do what was right for him though and Spike loved and respected her for that. However Sura was also absence this left the next closed dino’s being his friends whom he had been through so much together with them but they were not exactly doing the things he was interested in that’s why he wondered off here.

Spike blinked when his eyes began to close in order to keep himself awake because he was badly sleep deprived. Ever since he had heard what Ducky was expected to do he had been subjected to continuous night terrors that always woke him in the middle of the night. Spike was extremely scared for his sister, the bond between them was very strong and he was not sure if he would survive if Ducky died in the Trial, he just could not bear to lose his beloved sister.

Spike sighed inwardly “You’ll be safe Ducky, I won’t let this Swimming Sharptooth hurt you, I never will, you’ll be safe soon my dear sister” he thought to himself and imagined Ducky standing in front of him, smiling in her own positive way. The thought of Ducky brought tears to Spike’s eyes. He was determined that he would not leave this place until he had killed that Swimming Sharptooth.

He waited patiently by the stream. However he did not notice his friends appear behind him and stare at him. Littlefoot quietly ushered them away until they were a safe distance away from Spike. “Should we help him?” asked Cera in an uncertain voice.

“I’m not sure if he wants to be alone or not because he would try to tell us that he doesn’t want to be alone yet he’s here and he looks very alone” speculated Ruby.

“Poor Spike, he still hasn’t got over Ducky yet” said Ali.

“Err hello! Will someone tell me what you’re talking about and why Spike is here?” said Shorty, sounding very annoyed.

Everyone looked at Shorty. “Well Shorty, Spike is fishing for a Swimming Sharptooth” said Chomper grimly.      

Shorty laughed in disbelief at Chomper although no one else laughed. “You’re pulling my tail” chuckled Shorty but when he saw the grim looks on his friend’s faces “Are you actually serious?” he asked.

“Do we look serious Shorty?” asked Cera rhetorically. She gestured to the river and the rock on the river. “That is the Crescent Caves Shorty and beneath them is a Swimming Sharptooth that we’ve all seen and have been trying to get rid of for the last few days” she explained.

“This is the craziest thing I have ever heard you do and you have told me of the crazy things you've done before but why on earth are you trying to catch a Swimming Sharptooth?” said Shorty, it was unbelievable that his friends and brother actually appeared to be trying to reverse the circle of life.
 
His friends sighed “What do you mean by Spike hasn’t got over Ducky yet what’s going on and where is Ducky anyway?” said Shorty in a mixture of curiosity, annoyance and confusion as he eyed them.

Littlefoot stepped forward looking very troubled as his brother asked the question he had most dreaded. “Shorty” he said “What would you do if I was in danger” he asked cryptically.

“I would try to save you like you would for me” replied his brother in confusion.

“And would you still try to save me if you knew that I would have to face a Sharptooth in The Big Longneck Test” asked Littlefoot.

Shorty looked taken aback “enough of these riddles Littlefoot you know I would help you no matter what and like you faced a Sharptooth in The Big Longneck Test” said Shorty, sounding very agitated.

“Shorty, it’s not me you need to worry about. It’s Ducky” said Littlefoot.

“What about her?”

“She is doing The Swimmer Trials which are like The Great Day of The Flyers and The Big Longneck Test”

“Oh” said Shorty in understanding.

Littlefoot continued “And she has been selected to do a trial called The Trial of Destiny but no one has ever survived it because it takes place here in the lair of a Swimming Sharptooth”.

Shorty appeared dumbstruck.

“Spike is trying to help her the only way he can but she is not here, Ducky left The Great Valley to find a Swimmer to train her to survive this Trial but she doesn’t know about this Swimming Sharptooth but we do” said Littlefoot calmly but Shorty could see the pain in Littlefoot’s eyes and it was present in everyone else's demeanour's.

“Then I think we should help him” said Shorty. Everyone agreed and they walked back and made themselves known to Spike who acknowledged them with a welcoming grunt. Shorty sat beside Spike’s right side and looked at him. He understood why Spike was doing what he was doing. Ducky was his sister and he was trying to protect her and he knew that he would do the same for Littlefoot, they were brother’s after all.

He looked Spike directly in the eye. “I understand Spike” he said, giving him a firm nod “You’re doing the right thing”. Spike smiled in gratitude.

The friends stayed with Spike for the rest of the day, providing him with the comfort and companionship that he missed. They may not have had any bites but they gave each other comfort that they would soon catch that Swimming Sharptooth. Littlefoot spent most of the time bringing Shorty up to pace with the recent happenings in The Great Valley as well as discussing various ways they could solve the present problems, Shorty in particular excelled in thinking of multiple methods of killing Sculra.

When The Bright Circle started to disappear below the mountains, casting The Valley in twilight the friends decided to disperse but when they turned to leave Spike stayed put. Littlefoot thought it was useless in trying to get him to follow so he nodded to Spike and left but he would however inform his father where he was so as not to worry him.

"Goodnight guys” said Cera as she passed her nest.

“Goodnight” called out her friends. Petrie took wing a short while after that as did Chomper and Ruby leaving only Littlefoot, Ali and Shorty to tell Ruphus where Spike was. It was a good thing they chose to inform Ruphus for they found him looking very anxious when they arrived at the Swimmer nest.

“Kids” said Ruphus, keeping his voice calm but there was no denying that he was worried about Spike. “Have you seen Spike? He hasn’t come home yet” he said.

“That’s what we’re here to tell you” said Ali.

“Spike is at the Crescent Caves” said Littlefoot.

“What!” cried Ruphus in shock.

“He won’t leave until the Sharptooth is gone, he’s wants to protect Ducky” said Shorty.

“Thank you children” said Ruphus and he walked off into the night, obviously going to Spike.

“Come on guys” said Littlefoot and they all left for their nest.


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Ruphus swiftly made his way to The Crescent Caves. “Not now Spike” he thought as he jogged through the woods that lay around the river and soon spotted Spike sitting by himself in the darkness of the night next to the tree closest to the river.  

“Spike?” said Ruphus gently as he approached. Spike looked up at him. “What are you doing here, it’s time for sleep” said Ruphus.

Spike protested, shaking his head while grunting negatively. He sat defiantly on the ground. He would not leave until that Sharptooth was gone.

Ruphus took on a look of pity and sat on his haunches next to Spike and put a hand on his back. “I know” he said. Spike looked up tearfully into his father’s eyes. “I’m worried about them too Spike but that’s no to reason to neglect your sleep”.

Spike looked down. He was not sure he wanted to leave, he loved his sister too much to worry about himself and he just wanted her to be safe but Ducky would not be safe until that Sharptooth was dead.

“Spike, neither Ducky nor your mother would want you to do this to yourself, you know that don’t you?” asked Ruphus.  

Spike sighed and closed his eyes but he nodded. “You can come back tomorrow when The Bright Circle rises” added Ruphus. Spike nodded sadly.

“I know dear, you’re worried for Ducky” Spike sniffed a few tears forming in his eyes. “I’m scared for her too dear but have hope, Ducky will get through this, you’ll see” said Ruphus and gave Spike a nuzzle which was accepted. “Come on son, let’s go home” he said when he disengaged. Spike looked a little hesitant but he still got up and pulled the fish out of the water and wrapped it in its leaves and then followed his father home.


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Littlefoot sat on his haunches and looked out at The Night Circle, his mind had been knurling at him for the past hour when he thought of an idea that he really wanted to put into action. He had not rubbed off the feeling that Ducky had gone through the same pain that he had gone through when his mother died. If Ducky lost her mother then how would she even be able to train? She was a very emotional dinosaur and Littlefoot knew that she would have no heart for training if her mother died.

But had that all even happened? Littlefoot didn’t know, he knew that Sierra was untrustworthy and devious but he heard what he said and there was something in Sierra’s voice, he knew of what he spoke of so was it possible that he might have been telling the truth?
 
Littlefoot sighed inwardly. He felt compelled to go and find Ducky, she would need her friends close if she had lost her mother to give her comfort but he didn’t know where Ducky was but when he had been talking to Shorty he had found out that his dad’s herd was going to The Big Water after Shorty completed The Big Longneck Test. This gave Littlefoot the excuse he wanted but he was conflicted, if he left with his father then he would leave his friends behind in The Great Valley and his Grandparents and he had no idea when he would return.

Then another idea pushed its way into his mind. He would go with Bron and try to find Ducky but only if he could successfully compromise on the time he stayed with the herd so that he would be able to find Ducky and get back to The Great Valley before anyone missed him.

But should he go? Should he stay? Littlefoot stood and looked over The Great Valley and closed his eyes and tried to search for the right path. He remained in that position for some time until his Grandpa called him back to the nest but by that time Littlefoot had made his decision.





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I don't see why Littlefoot can't talk about his concerns to his grandparents at least.   :unsure:  Or would that just be too easy?


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I started Catching sad feelings for Spike. Hope they catch... Ducky will do- gonna do... Gosh!
Hope Things'll work out... Ish. I'm also catching a feeling that it's not...


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There is still a lot to come before The Trials begin but there  are going to be some really big action packed and heart breaking scenes in the future and in terms of Spike, I personally thought that I hadn't developed his character as much as I should have so I'm trying to put his views into the fray as well. But yeah I really want to show that Spike is not just an observer in the next few chapters but also a participant.

Also with Littlefoot not bothering his Grandparents at the time of the chapter was because they were in the meeting with Pterano but at other times I thought that Ali was more of a closer confiner to Littlefoot at the present not that Littlefoot's Grandparents don't understand what was going through but I guess I haven't had the time to write about that issue yet.
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This story is coming along wonderfully😊.

Poor Sura, having to live with her regret about her father.  I can understand how she feels...but at least my case has no regrets.  That has to be hard for her😒.


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Just posting a list of a few of the character names so you know how to pronounce them as I have noticed that a few proof readers I associated with had trouble with some of the characters names. Here now is the list of names and how to pronounce them.

Cyrest - Kirest, the name starts with a K like sound and the Y is pronounced like the Y in Sky.

Sura - S-u-ra, not Soora.

Ruphus - Roothus

If you want to know how to pronounce the name of a character that is not on this list then feel free to let me know and I will gladly show how to pronounce the name properly.  
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Ah, that's a really cool chapter again! :yes

I'm glad that Pterano's punishment was lifted. The way Ruphus and Grandpa Longneck in particular argued in favor of him was quite nice.

Oh... Shorty has an eye on Ali. That is a tricky situation :lol
It came really surprising that Cera of all dinosaurs in the world would be the one to prevent the unevitable crisis between Shorty and Littlefoot.

And Ducky's siblings have a nasty fight, how amusing :smile Just reminds me of me and my sister when we were younger...
Echo and Rapid learned an important lesson there though. Ruphus managed to find the right words. :)

I must say I really love how you portrait Spike here in this chapter. He's often forgotten and just "an observer" as you put it. Here, however, you really give a great insight into what's going on in his mind. I also think that if something terrible happened to Ducky, Spike would not want to live anymore. He just couldn't bear it to lose her. The comparison you made that Ducky is like a mother to Spike is excellent! That really totally makes sense :)
The gesture of the Gang is also really nice. They give Spike just the support he needs in times like this :yes

Littlefoot is up to something... I guess it'll be revealed what decision he's made in the next chapter so... can't wait for that :p
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Chapter 43: The Traits of a Good Leader

Littlefoot watched as his grandparents, father and Brace all ate at the same tree for their evening meal, the Night Circle was already out and raised high over the mountains, shedding cold white light into the Valley. Tomorrow was the day that Shorty would take The Big Longneck Test but before Shorty took the test Littlefoot had to put his plan into action. He was the only one still outside of the nest as Ali and Shorty were also having dinner near the grown-ups, Littlefoot knew that his plan would probably shock them all but he had made up his mind and was determined to see it through.

Littlefoot walked over where the Longnecks grazed and stopped short of the trees and bushes, not feeling very hungry at the moment. Littlefoot looked at Ali, he sighed for his plan would more than likely result in there parting but he was willing to do what he thought was necessary. So taking a breath the young longneck walked over to the hulking form of his grandparents and father.

“Um…Grandma, Grandpa, Dad can I talk to you for a moment please” said calmly, betraying none of the turmoil in his mind. The three Longnecks turned their heads to look at him Bron and Grandma still had a mouthful of green food but Grandpa thankfully had just finished his mouthful.

“Of course Littlefoot, what is it?” he asked patiently.

“I need to tell you all that I would like to come to The Big Water with you and your herd dad” said Littlefoot. The effect this sentence had on the gathered sauropods was not surprising to Littlefoot, he had expected it. Grandpa looked at Littlefoot in astonishment which Grandma’s eyes widened in shock. Bron also looked astonished he had certainly not expected this from Littlefoot. There was a sound of fierce coughing nearby as Ali chocked on her food, she fell to the ground coughing like crazy and gasping for breath until Shorty gave her a whack on the back with his tail and sending the remains of Ali’s breakfast out of her mouth.

Ali turned to Littlefoot her mouth agape in astonishment. She could hardly digest what Littlefoot had said. Was he really proposing to leave the Valley, his Grandparents, his friends, her?

“Littlefoot?” she said in shock but Littlefoot persistently avoided her gaze.

“I would like to come with you and learn how to live in a herd outside The Great Valley” said Littlefoot.

Bron exchanged a look with his parents in law and then returned his gaze to Littlefoot. “Are you sure son, you know you can wait a little longer, you don’t need to go if you don’t believe your ready” said Bron.

Littlefoot shook his head “I want to come with you after Shorty finishes The Big Longneck Test but I just want to see what it is like in your herd” Littlefoot then looked at his grandparents who both stared at him in amazement they certainly had not expected this. “I will come back” he said to them “Dad was going to come back after the Cold Time so I’ll stay out with him and come back after The Cold Time, I just think that it’s time I spent a bit more time with my Dad” he added.

The three adults exchanged looks and appeared to be holding a silent conversation with each other.

“Littlefoot?” said Ali uncertainly. Littlefoot clenched his teeth and closed his eyes so he would not have to see Ali’s heartbroken face, he could not help but feel guilty about doing this to Ali, she was his friend. “No, she’s way more than that” thought Littlefoot “But I can’t risk her, this is something I must do myself”.

The grown-ups returned their gazes to him and Grandma spoke, her voice sounded accepting but sad. “It is up to you Littlefoot, if you are ready to go with Bron then you may” she said.

“And don’t worry Littlefoot If you want to return to The Great Valley to visit after the cold time before we move on again then you can” said Bron.

Littlefoot looked up at Bron in shock and quickly spoke. “I mean I will return and live in The Great Valley when I come back Bron I didn’t mean I was ready to leave everyone behind just yet I just want to know what it’s like” said Littlefoot.

Bron nodded his approval “That’s fine son, I understand that you’re not ready to leave The Valley just yet but I to want to spend more time with you as well”.

“Thank you Dad” said Littlefoot quietly and turned and quietly walked away with everyone’s eyes bearing hard into his back especially Ali’s. She quickly ran after Littlefoot to find him at a nearby hill overlooking the nest and eating a few tree stars from a short tree, eyes fixed on the ground.

“Littlefoot?” she said uncertainly as she sat next to him.

“What happened to you Littlefoot? Asked Shorty who appeared behind Ali and stood next to her, eying his brother in confusion.

Littlefoot sighed and looked at Ali “Please don’t be mad at me Ali” he pleaded.

Ali tilted her head in confusion then shook her head. “I’m not mad at you Littlefoot, I just want to know why you did it” she said.

“You would never ask something like this without a reason” agreed Shorty.
Littlefoot nodded then looked hard at the two Longnecks. “I’m going to find Ducky” he said.

“WHAT?!!!” cried Ali.

“Why?” asked Shorty.

“Because” said Littlefoot calmly “I can’t get over the feeling that she went through the same thing I did when I lost my mother, I can’t let her suffer like I did, I have to help her” Littlefoot gave a firm look, his eyes showed nothing but raw determination, it was obvious to both Ali and Shorty that Littlefoot would not be swayed from his course of action but that didn’t stop them from tyring.

“But Littlefoot you don’t even know if Ducky lost her mother, that Flyer is not trust worthy, he probably made the story up just to stir up trouble” said Shorty, he had already been informed of Sura’s supposed death by Littlefoot when they were at The Crescent Caves.

“We don’t know for sure and I must know” corrected Littlefoot. “Do you think she would even be up to training if she lost her mother?”

Shorty and Ali exchanged worried looks.

“Exactly,” said Littlefoot “Ducky is very emotional and there is no doubt that she would be broken and if she doesn’t train then she will not survive the Trial. I have to help her and so can you Shorty” Littlefoot said the last part firmly.

“But what about me Littlefoot?” cried Ali, she looked at him indignantly.

Littlefoot spoke to Ali slowly. “I would like you to stay here Ali, in The Valley where it is safe”.

“Where it is safe?!” Cried Ali in outrage “While you go out adventuring and leaving me behind! You hell are not leaving me here, not now!” cried Ali, almost begging him but Littlefoot shook his head.

“Please stay here Ali” he said again softly but Ali stomped her foot on the ground hard. A silence fell upon the three. Ali and Littlefoot stared at each other, locked in a battle of wills while Shorty watched them both, feeling as if he was witnessing something he shouldn’t.

“I am coming with you Littlefoot whether you like it or-“

Ali never got to finish her sentence as Littlefoot suddenly pressed his muzzle to her cheek then kissed her on the lips. Ali’s initial look of shock suddenly dissolved into content as she suddenly felt a warm, excited feeling come over her, she could feel her heart beating twice as hard and the heat created by her and Littlefoot, closing her eyes contently, she returned the kiss. It was her first kiss just as it was Littlefoot’s first. Shorty stood silently on the boundary of the couple, he hardly breathed in that moment for he knew that Ali was unavailable to him, he still felt the bite but in his heart he was happy for Littlefoot and Ali.

The two broke off and nuzzled each other contently then Littlefoot whispered in Ali’s ear “This is why you must stay, I can’t risk you, I can’t lose you I-I” Littlefoot looked Ali directly in the eye in those beautiful blue eyes and said what he had just been dying to say in a whisper for Ali’s ears alone. “I love you Ali”.

Ali was speechless she gaped at Littlefoot with wide eyes as her heart skipped a beat yet she felt herself accepting of the idea, it just felt so right. Her mouth split into a loving smile and she licked Littlefoot on the cheek and crossed her neck with his. The moment of love seemed to last forever, it felt like nothing could possible disturb them, they both smiled lovingly at each other but Littlefoot’s gaze became full of sorrow, he restated his request to Ali.

Ali gave Littlefoot a very thoughtful look, she realised the depth of his emotions for her and she knew that she too felt the same thing for him. “He only wants to protect me” she thought, so with a sad sigh Ali closed her eyes and nodded silently. Littlefoot sighed with relief but Ali gave him a cold look “You had better come back Littlefoot,” he expression changed and she looked down then whispered to him in an anxious tone “Please stay safe out there Littlefoot”.
“I promise I will Ali and I promise I will come back” Littlefoot replied, crossing his neck with Ali’s and nuzzling her flank. Ali nodded and smiled, then she turned to Shorty.

“Look after him for me Shorty” she said.

Shorty nodded in resolve and crossed his back foot in a gesture of his word. “I promise Ali” he said.

“Good” said Ali “Now let’s get some sleep we all need to be up early tomorrow”. With that the three Longnecks headed back down to the nest where the adults were preparing to turn in.


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As the night fled to bring the light of the early morning The Great Valley seemed to suddenly become alive, all over the many insects began their daily commutes while elsewhere huge dinosaurs began to stir from their night time slumber. Shorty however had been up since before the crack of dawn when the Valley was eerily quiet, it was a time of limbo between day and night where nothing seemed to be living and instead appeared to be in a state of deep dormancy.

However Shorty had woken up feeling very nervous and anxious about the coming test. This was it, he was going to do The Big Longneck Test today, but yet he was shivering as if he had just come out of freezing water. Shorty could hardly recall a time when he was this scared and nervous, there was only one time that he had been more nervous and way more frightened than this and that was- “No, I can’t go there again” thought Shorty, pushing his dark memories aside so that he could  better order his thoughts.

He observed his surroundings and deduced that he was the only one awake at the present. The adults hulking forms lay prone a short distance to the right. Although Shorty could not see them he was still aware of Ducky’s younger siblings sleeping beside Grandma Longneck’s warm body. Shorty looked to his left and found Littlefoot and Ali sleeping by his side. Shorty’s thoughts immediately went back to last night where he had witnessed their love. He was also still amazed with Littlefoot’s request but he would be glad to be spending some more time with him.

Shorty looked up at The Bright Circle as it began it’s ascent into the morning sky and remembered when Littlefoot took his test. Was he also this nervous? He didn’t know about The Big Longneck Test yet Shorty thought that Littlefoot had been much calmer on the lead up to the test then he was right now.    
“How did you ever manage your nerves Littlefoot?” he thought as he settled his neck back on the ground.

 Suddenly he heard a long yawn come from beside him, Shorty looked to his left and saw Ali raising, opening her mouth and giving off a long yawn, she was lying on her side while Littlefoot was lying next to her, his neck was next to hers while they slept. Ali stretched out her legs and tail to their full length then opened her eyes drowsily. She nuzzled Littlefoot’s flank and suddenly noticed Shorty.

“Good morning Shorty” she said in a friendly way, though she still sounded tired. Shorty smiled and got up from his sleeping spot and walked next to Ali and sat down beside her. He tried to look composed but he still bore an anxious composure. Ali gave him a contemplated look before voicing her concerns. “Are you alright Shorty?” she asked gently.

A younger Shorty might have said that he was perfectly fine but Shorty could not do that to Ali, she was his friend and she clearly saw that his feelings were eating away at his composure. “Just nervous Ali, very, very nervous” he said.

“You’ll do fine Shorty I know you will” said Ali, resting her neck against his in a gesture of support. Shorty closed his eyes and allowed Ali to nuzzle him before looking back at the sky.

“I haven’t felt like this since before I met Bron” he said quietly.

“I’m sure you’ll get though it Shorty” said Ali.

Shorty shook his head, “I still haven’t got over ëthat’ yet” he said sadly.

“Got over what Shorty? Asked Ali curiously.

Shorty closed his eyes and told her what he kept to himself for all this time.


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The young Green Longneck ran for his life through the wasteland, his mother, a tall light Green Longneck ran alongside him urging her son on. Blood drenched her left flank from a wound made by a claw near the top of her back, she was also carrying a cargo of a dozen young Longnecks on her back, the remainder of the herd’s children. They squawked with fear and held on to the Longneck’s back with all their might. “Go Shorty Go, Keep Running Dear!” she cried out urgently. Her voice usually sweet and comforting now contained much fear for her and her son as well as the remaining children in her care. Behind them they both heard a twin set of roars. Shorty dared to look back.

What he saw sent shivers running up his spine. Two full grown Sharpteeth, Sailbacks were giving chase to them. In the distance a large forest grew and possible salvation to the pursued Sauropods. Right now however they were still in a deserted wasteland, their herd was left dead far behind them when a pack of Sailbacks ambushed them in their sleep and killed off nearly all of the herds members before they could even mount any form of defence.

Shorty remembered being woken by a firm push of his mother and seeing the chaos around him as the Sharpteeth tore through every Longneck in the herd that was still able to stand. His mother had rescued him and as many children that she found that were still alive then fled but not before a Sailback dived at her and managed to give her a nasty gash on her left flank which continuously oozed blood at a constant rate.

Now however the two Sailbacks pursued them, both vent on leaving not one of their little group alive and uneaten. Shorty ignored to the best of his ability the furious burning of his legs and the aching of his heart as he pushed their physical limits to the breaking point but while he had looked over his back he hadn’t noticed a stone in front of him. His right foot hit the stone and he tripped to the ground with a loud cry of pain. “Mother!” he cried.

His mother stopped her headlong sprint and looked back and saw her son fall onto the ground with a strained front foot. “Shorty! Hang on, I’m coming!” she cried and turned back and charged in the direction of her fallen son. The Sharptooth rapidly gained ground on them and by the time Shorty was placed on his mother’s back with the other children the Sailback’s where only half a longnecks length away.

Shorty saw his mother turn around and run as hard as she could toward the forest. Which was now only ten Longneck lengths away now. She was getting closer, determined to keep the children safe despite her wound which was protesting fiercely to her vigorous movement. Spasms of pain ran up her body as she ran but she was determined not to let that stop her. She was only five Longnecks lengths away now.

SHLUCK!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!”

MOTHER!!!

CRASH!

Shorty’s mother came crashing to the ground sending Shorty and the other kids tumbling off her back with less than three Longneck lengths away from the forest. The Sailback that had dived for her had wrought impressive damage upon her. He had dived and bit into her abdomen causing her to fall to the ground but his partner had run straight into him and causing a spectacular rolling crash, when they came to a stop they were both unconscious on the ground.

Shorty himself had a large graze on his right flank from the fall as well as dozens of bruises all over his body but he couldn’t think about that now. “Mother!” he yelled getting up and quickly limping over to the body of his downed mother while the other kids ran to the safety of the forests in fright.

The parched ground beneath her was now drenched in crimson, Shorty’s mother raised her neck but as Shorty approached she felt her precious life blood flow from her body, her injury was mortal and she knew it. Yet surprisingly she didn’t feel very much pain even though her abdomen was ripped open and now that she looked back she saw to her horror that her own intestines where pouring from the wound and even more worse her left back leg was broken, there would be no escape, she was a dead Longneck now.

“Mother, come on get up!” cried Shorty pushing her head gently “Please we have to go, before the Sharpteeth get up” he said in distress. Shorty’s mother however felt surprisingly calm under the circumstances as severe blood loss began to numb her pain.

“Shorty, go” she said quietly, her voice faint.

“No, not without you” said Shorty, he was sobbing now as he realised the extent of his mother’s injuries.

“Shorty please, go, look after the children and live a good life” said his mother weakly.

Shorty shook his head vigorously “Your coming with us mom, just get up” he said, his pain rising into a torrent, threatening to drown him.

“Shorty, my leg is broken, I can’t move.” Said his mother, looking deep into her son’s eyes. “Run dear, I will keep the Sharpteeth occupied”.

“Mom” said Shorty in horror.

There was a growl from the Sharpteeth as they started to regain consciousness.

“Shorty I love you, please don’t die with me, go and live a good life and look after the children. She paused “Please my son” said Shorty’s mother, her tears were starting to fall now.

Shorty for the most part was paralysed to the spot, he knew his mother was doomed but his heart just couldn’t accept it. Finally however he found his voice and looking down at the ground, tears pouring for his eyes. “I will mother, I promise I will look after the kids and live a good life” His voice was broken and he was trembling all over.

His mother smiled gently and gave him a soft push in the direction of the forest. The other younglings had already run into the forest and were watching the scene in frozen fear. “Go my son, my beautiful Shorty, go, live a good life and remember me” she said gently, closing her eyes, she was still alive though.

Shorty sobbed. He heard the sounds of the approaching Sailbacks but he didn’t want to leave but he promised he would. “G-Goodbye mother” he said before running as fast as his strained leg would allow towards the forest with a broken heart. One of the Sailbacks charged at him but he was stopped by his mother’s whip like tail as it came to her son’s rescue. Shorty ran on and entered the forest and relative safety for now as the trees grew to close for big Sharpteeth to pass through. Shorty looked back and his mother locked eyes for the last time even at that great distance they could almost see the tears in the other’s eyes.

“Goodbye Shorty” she said sadly and lowered her tail allowing the two Sailbacks to deliver the fatal bite to the neck, it was all over to quickly for her to feel the pain as her life ended but at least Shorty was safe.  
Shorty could not close his eyes, he was utterly immobilised by what just happened, yet now the Sharpteeth began to feast on his mother’s body. Shorty fell into a snivelling, sobbing heap. He had just experienced the worst of losses and he was left utterly inconsolable and grained of his will. He didn’t know how long he lay there crying but he was aroused from his grief by the whimpering of the other young ones who had also been crying with him.

Shorty looked at the children and remembered his promise, all of a sudden he felt a new strength assert itself over his limbs, it was a strange feeling of determination and purpose that the last promise with his now deceased mother had given him and all of a sudden Shorty rose, grim faced and hard but determined he locked at the other young Longnecks and roused them. “Come on there’s nothing we can do here” he said with a strange calmness in his composure as he led the other Longnecks away from the scene of blood and gore, he would look after them no matter what happened to him in the process. “I promise I won’t let you down mother” he thought as he left his past behind in the hopes of a brighter future.      


*


Shorty was sobbing after he told Ali the story. “I looked after the children as best as I could but I was always scared I would do something wrong and that we’d all die. Those were the scariest times of my life”. Shorty lost himself in his pain. Ali nuzzled him in a vain attempt to comfort him but in a way it was better for Shorty to talk about that incident and finally get over the trauma of that event.

Shorty was sobbing hard when he felt another muzzle press against the other cheek and then heard Littlefoot’s voice whisper in his ear “She would be proud of you Shorty”.

Shorty turned to his brother in surprise, had he heard the whole story? He was even more surprised to see Littlefoot crying as well. “I lost my mother to Sharptooth himself Shorty, she also died protecting me, I know she is proud of me and I know that your mom is proud of you too” He said in support.
I know you’ll complete The Big Longneck Test Shorty you just have to believe in yourself” Littlefoot said in resolve.

Shorty dried his tears and smiled at Littlefoot “Thank you…Brother, I know I can do it. I just hadn’t felt this way since-“                              

“I know Shorty” said Littlefoot. Ali nuzzled Shorty’s cheek once more. Shorty greatly accepted it.

“Come on Shorty, Littlefoot lets go get a drink then we’ll have breakfast we’ve got a big day ahead of us” said Ali. Littlefoot and Shorty nodded and followed Ali’s lead as she led the way down to the stream. It certainly was going to be a big day and even though Shorty still remembered his mother’s death he knew that she loved him and that she would be proud of him. Shorty felt a new determination run through his veins, he would take anything that came in his way this day because today, he was ready to take The Big Longneck Test.


*


“It’s time Shorty” said Bron a few hours after Littlefoot and Ali had comforted Shorty, now Bron was waiting for Shorty to follow him to the testing area.

“Okay” said Shorty, he still felt a little nervous but this time he also felt a little more confident that he would succeed.

“Can I come and watch Dad” said Littlefoot since he had finished The Big Longnecks Test, although Ali would have to stay since she had not taken the test yet.

“Of course Littlefoot, you have already taken the test and I’m sure Shorty would appreciate your support” said Bron.

“Thanks Dad” said Littlefoot and took his place beside his brother.

“Good luck Shorty” called Ali as they left. She sincerely hoped that Shorty would pass the test, he was a good friend and she knew that he was more than ready for the challenges the test would throw at him.

The three Longnecks walked for a while until they came over to the base of a very steep hill with a path winding its way up to the summit which was awfully high. There was also a large rock with a whole load of vines tired around it at the base where Bron was standing.

“Now Shorty” said Bron looking own at his adopted son. “The test is comprised of three separate tasks that will each end when you find a red tree star”.

“Okay” said Shorty.

To Littlefoot this speech was almost exactly the same as he had remembered it from when he had done the test.

“Your first task will test your strength, bravery and your endurance,” continued Bron. “Your task is to pull this rock up to the summit of this hill”.

Shorty looked awfully nervous now when he spotted the rock he had to carry, it was just as large as him and looked awfully heavy, he doubted that he could do it but that thought disappeared in an instant as Shorty thought of Ali, she believed in him so he should be able to do it.

Without a word Shorty wriggled his way into the vine harness and looked at Bron for the starting signal. He turned his head to Littlefoot. “You can do it Shorty, I know you can” his brother said encouraging him on.

“You may start when you’re ready Shorty” said Bron.

Shorty nodded and looked up at the steep track up the hill that he would be following, it was not a vertical track and hence a climb would be very easy but carrying a weight would really push him. Shorty closed his eyes and took a deep breath and pulled himself forward, hauling the massive boulder behind him. Short grimaced and gritted his teeth. The boulder was indeed heavy, he could already begin to feel his legs begin to burn with exertion.

The two Longnecks below watched his progress. Shorty had got off to a good start, he had hauled the massive boulder a quarter of the way up.

“Come on Shorty” said Littlefoot “you can do it”.

Shorty panted, his speed had greatly decreased and his deep breaths applied a constant rhythm while his heart was running a marathon. His legs felt like they were on fire, he breathed deeply in a desperate attempt to supply his body with the much needed oxygen for the next step of the journey. Shorty looked back down and saw to his astonishment that he was much higher than he had thought the hill was. He quickly pulled his head back and focused on the task at hand. Shorty had never had to push himself like this before, sure he had gone through periods of exertion before but nothing like this. His whole body was screaming for him to stop but Shorty pushed on, reaching the half way point.

However when the young Longneck gazed up he was dismayed by how far he still had to go. But he also felt more confident, he had made it half way, so he could make it all the way as well. Taking another deep breath he pushed himself forward, keeping his eyes focused on the ground.

His tongue hung limply out of his mouth as the exertions took its toll on his body. His body was now going through sudden spasms as he fought to keep going. His legs felt drained of energy with the boulder weighing him down. Tears of pain started to cloud Shorty’s vision but he had to keep going. “If Littlefoot can do it then so can I” he thought. “You can do it Shorty” he thought to himself again and again. He was now three quarters of the way to his destination. Now however as the path reached the summit, there was a sharp increase in steepness of the track. Shorty didn’t notice this having kept his eyes angled down, watching the rocky trail pass slowly under his feet.

He felt the strain on his back and legs increase and finally saw the steepness increase with the final ten metres to go. Shorty dismayed he tried moving but he seemed to be moving even slower than before his feet were starting to slip on the ground and he tumbled to the ground in utter exhaustion, he was barely conscious. He was panting at fast, irregular intervals.

“Oh no” said Littlefoot from below when he saw Shorty fall to the ground and seem to lose consciousness. What had happened? Had his brother failed?

“Are you alright Shorty!” shouted Bron from the ground but there was no response or movement from Shorty “I’m going up to get him” said Bron and started to climb the slope.

Shorty however lay defeated on the ground a glance back had showed him that Bron was on his way up, he knew he had failed and it felt terrible but he had been so close. Shorty’s eyes snapped open and a growing anger suddenly come over him, he was too close to fail, he simply made up his mind, and he would not fail. So with shacking legs he got to his feet and with a loud yell of fury he pulled with all his might at the cursed rock and felt himself moving forward. Shorty felt his determination sky rocket, giving him new strength, he pushed on.

Down below Bron had stopped halfway up and gasped in amazement and pride as Shorty got to his feet and continued the trek up the hill. On the ground Littlefoot was beside himself “You can do it Shorty!” he yelled, cheering his brother through those last painful metres.

So it was with a great heave that Shorty pulled himself onto the summit. He paused to get free of his harness and grabbed the red tree star which lay underneath a stone to stop it blowing away then he showed it too both Bron and Littlefoot. However a great dizziness had begun to overwhelm him. He swayed on the spot and fell on his side and into unconsciousness.


*


SPLASH!

Shorty felt a large amount of cold water fall over his face and body.

“Shorty……..Shorty? Wake up Shorty!” called an anxious voice however it sounded very distant and quite to Shorty’s ears. Nevertheless Shorty opened his eyes drearily, he saw blurry brown images in his field of vision, he blinked a few times to clear his eyes and the images came into focus. Littlefoot and Bron were both looking down on him each with a worried expression on his face.

“Hey guys” said Shorty in a light headed voice.

Littlefoot and Bron both shared a chuckle at Shorty’s recovery.

Shorty got up only to be overwhelmed by a wave of dizziness. He swayed and leaned on Littlefoot’s body. “Here Shorty, drink this” said Bron and pointed with his foot to a stream that they were now next too. How he had got there Shorty didn’t know, all he cared about was the water. He walked to the water’s edge and promptly slid into the water, immersing his entire body in the cool liquid before quenching his parched mouth and throat by guzzling whole mouthfuls of water down his throat.

When he was done he walked to a nearby bush and proceeded to gauge himself on as much green food as he could stuff into his mouth, such was his ravenous hunger and thirst. Littlefoot and Bron waited patiently until he had finished drinking and eating before addressing him.

“How do you feel Shorty?” asked Bron in a concerned tone.

“Better,” replied Shorty, then his eyes narrowed as he thought back to the first test. “What happened?” he asked.

“You collapsed” said Littlefoot “just after you completed the test, Dad had to get you down and bring you here”.      

“I completed the first test?” said Shorty in amazement.

“Yes you did Shorty” said Bron proudly. “You did the best you could and came through it, I’m proud of you”.

Shorty smiled foolishly then got to his feet and closed his eyes and took in a long breath. “I know you’re proud of me too mom, I’ll finish the test for you” he thought. “Well I hope that the next task does not try to kill me like the last one” he joked to which the others laughed.

“Now then Shorty let’s move on to the second test” said Bron and let the way over to a nearby forest. “Your second task is a test of intelligence, you are to successfully find a single red tree star that is hidden somewhere in this forest”.
Shorty’s mouth fell open as he stared at the forest. “How am I supposed to find a red tree star in there?” he cried in annoyance.

“You must listen closely to these directions that will allow you to find the red tree star” explined Bron.

“Okay then”.

With that Bron cleared his throat and said in a slow clear voice:

“Green and orange lay the stars at my base”

“A plant of different origin is upon the side of the correct face”

“What I hold hidden lies near my source, look hard to find your star of course”.

Shorty nodded and repeated Bron’s riddle first out loud then in his head then headed out into the forest. The second task had begun.


*


“Dad?” asked Littlefoot after Shorty had headed into the forest.

“Yes Littlefoot” replied his father.

Littlefoot was hesitant about this subject but he did wonder if Bron knew of Shorty’s past. “Did you know of what happened to Shorty’s Mother?” he asked cautiously.

Bron looked at Littlefoot in puzzlement. “Why do you ask?”  

“Because Shorty told me and Ali what happened when we all woke up today, but did you know?” said Littlefoot.

“Littlefoot I knew what happened but it was not Shorty that told me” said Bron.

“Was it one of the other Longnecks that was with Shorty when you found him?”

Bron nodded then looked back into the forest. “Shorty has never opened up about it, I’ve tried talking to him about it but he always avoids it, he never fully recovered from losing his mother I don’t think but the fact that he is starting to open up is a good sign”.

“We are so similar” said Littlefoot.

“Yes, yes you are” said Bron “Maybe that’s why you are brothers” he said thoughtfully.

Littlefoot nodded thoughtfully then looked down at the ground.

“Littlefoot?” questioned his father in concern.

“One of my friends may have lost her mother”

Bron looked on his son in sympathy and gave him a comforting nuzzle. “It happens sometimes Littlefoot” he said. “All you can do is try and help your friend”.

“But I can’t,” said Littlefoot in a trembling voice “She left the Valley then we got news that her mother had died and she is already going through a hard time” Littlefoot looked saddened. “I pity her and Shorty and Cera, we all lost a mother” he said.

“Littlefoot I went through the same thing that you are going through now when I heard what happened to your mom” said Bron. Littlefoot looked up at his father “I felt utterly helpless and at fault for all that had happened but I am sure that your mom and indeed your friends parents all wanted what was best for you kids and I’m sure she’s proud of you son, in the end all we can do is remember then fondly”. Bron gave son another comforting nuzzle.

“Thanks Dad” said Littlefoot calmly, though he was not dissuaded from his current course of action. The two Longnecks looked back into the forest and waited for Shorty.


*


Shorty stood on a fallen log a short way in the forest, he had heard all Littlefoot and Bron had said between them, though he tried not think about it at the present now that he was in the middle of the second test. He repeated the riddle in his head, concentrating on the first verse of the riddle.

“Green and Orange lay the stars at my base”.

Shorty thought about what that meant. He knew that there were no green or orange stars in the sky, this was obviously referring to the colour of the tree stars at the base of something, and a tree was his best guess. So Shorty looked around the trees and for a tree with orange and green tree stars at its base while he played over the second verse of the riddle in his head.

“A plant of different origin is on the side of the correct face”.

Shorty had great difficulty trying to understand this part of the riddle. A different plant? Perhaps a plant was growing next to the supposed tree? Or was it on it? Correct face what did that mean? Shorty debated what that meant and in doing so almost missed a short tree nearby. Shorty stared at this tree, there was something different about this one. Shorty approached it and suddenly realized what made it different. It had a pile of green and orange tree stars at his base.

Shorty feel his heart leap, he had to be on the right track. Shorty looked hard at the tree. It was short and its branches were utterly devoid of tree stars, there was a fair amount of roots sticking out of the base in a confusing mess and as Shorty circled the tree he saw some tree fuss growing on other side.
Suddenly it hit him. The plant of different origin was obviously the tree fuss and it was only growing on one side. The correct side? Shorty replayed the last verse of the riddle in his mind.

“What I hold hidden lies near my source, look hard to find your star of course”

Shorty quickly pieced the parts of the riddle, the red tree star was hidden at the tree’s source. But was the tree’s source? “The base obviously” thought Shorty and looked hard at the base but found nothing. He replayed the entire riddle in his mind. Then noticed the error “Not at the base, near the base”. Shorty looked down at the confusing tangle of rots at his feet. He was on the side of the tree fuss so that meant that the red tree star had to be under one of these roots.

Shorty looked under every root in sight and finally he found his prize, the red tree star was nestled between two roots.

“Yes!” shouted Shorty triumphantly, picking up the red tree star in his mouth and then headed back out to where Bron and Littlefoot were waiting.

Littlefoot was delighted to see his brother emerge with the red tree star clutched firmly in his mouth. “You did Shorty!” he cried happily.

“Well done Shorty” said Bron as Shorty laid the tree star down at his feet.

“Thanks, I’ll have this done in no time” said Shorty proudly.

“Don’t get cocky” warned Bron to which Littlefoot nodded in agreement for he knew that last task was certainly the hardest of all the other tasks. “Now let’s move on to the final test” said Bron and led the boys back to a fire pit, the same one that Littlefoot had been tested at.

Shorty looked nervous for the first time now, what was he supposed to do now?

“You final task is to find a safe way across the fire pit”

“Alright” said Shorty, though he sounded very conflicted.


*


The Bright Circle was getting awfully low now and still Shorty could not find a possible solution to this puzzling predicament. He had thought about the rocks but what if he were to fall? There also the matter of the fire bubbles which often splashed onto those rocks making that route unavailable. He spotted a log near the fire pit but he knew it was foolhardy to use a log to cross the fire pit when it would simply catch on fire and take anyone that was on the log into the boiling lave with it.

Shorty cursed angrily under his breath, this task certainly was the hardest and he found that his temper was not improving, the longer he had to wait for a solution to present itself to him. Suddenly he had an idea and immediately ran over to a boulder that was lying close to the fire pit and started rolling it into the fire pit. “Perhaps if I could collect enough rocks I can make a bridge. Beside him Bron stood expressionless while Littlefoot looked slightly worried. Shorty didn’t see this but he found out his plan was folly after he pushed the first boulder in the lava which created a huge splash, causing Shorty to jump clear the boulder however was completely covered with the boiling mixture.

“Drat!” hissed Shorty and began to pace back and forth in an uneasy motion. For hours he had tried and so far he had nothing to show. He was considering a stop and to just give up but he knew that if he gave up he would fail the test and he didn’t want that, not in front of Littlefoot. After all he had passed the test before, there had to be a simple solution. Shorty looked back at his brother, trying to see if he could gain any clue of what to do from his expression but he could not detect any change in Littlefoot’s expression, he would not get any hits from him either.

Shorty circled the fire pit if only to keep himself occupied while his blood boiled in anger. Finally he sat down on the grass, trying to think of a simple solution, since he had already tried the outrageous out of the box solution he could think of.

“If it was up to me I would not even try crossing a fire pit” thought Shorty, no herd leader with common sense would risk his or her herd to cross a fire pit if there was another way, but there wasn’t. “Or perhaps there is” thought Shorty thinking back to when he had asked Bron what this test but Bron had only said that he could not tell him for it was part of the test. “Perhaps if……” Shorty’s eyes brightened as the answer presented itself. So taking a breath at the great risk he was going to take, but he trusted his own logic and common sense. He turned to Bron and said tonelessly:

“I’m sorry Bron but I can’t find a way to cross the fire pit and if it was up to me I would not bother. Have I failed?” he added nervously. Bron’s expression remained as imperious as before. Shorty turned his head away from the Longneck in shame he knew in that instant that he had failed but he didn’t notice Littlfoot’s excited expression when he said those words as his attention was focused solely on Bron.

So it can as a great surprise when a red tree star was dropped beside him. “Huh?” he said in surprise.

“Congratulations Shorty you have passed The Big Longneck Test” said Bron who was positively beaming with delight.

“What? How? I failed the third task, how could I pass?” asked Shorty in astonishment.

“Shorty” said Bron this test was not a mere test of strength or intelligence, it was a test of judgement. Strength and intelligence are vital qualities for any leader but they are all wasted if the leader cannot make the correct choices,” said Bron. “And by choosing not to cross the fire pit despite thinking that you would fail you have proven that you have the ability to make the correct decision in a difficult situation”.

Shorty’s mouth opened wide, the final test was so simply and so very clever that no one would suspect that you would have to fail to succeed. “You did it Shorty” cheered Littlefoot.

Now both brothers had passed the test. Shorty was still feeling a little disoriented but slowly the situation sunk in and he found himself grinning in triumph “I did it,” he said “I passed The Big Longneck Test”.        
       
         

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I just wanted to point out that Ducky doesn't use contractions in her sentences, and yet I'm occasionally reading Ducky say them in your story. She says "won't" instead of "will not," for example.