New untitled fanfiction

Campion1 · **Reply #20 on:** August 05, 2010, 08:00:42 AM

that is questionable, but I'll send it via your request

Quote from: ScratteLover3,Aug 5 2010 on 06:28 AM

If you read Out of the Shadows, then you'd know what that's a reference too.

Another thing is, you didn't write that fanfic. So I'm not reading it... Sorry.

Adder · **Reply #21 on:** August 09, 2010, 01:35:29 PM

Quote from: Campion1,Aug 5 2010 on 07:00 AM

Another thing is, you didn't write that fanfic. So I'm not reading it... Sorry.

Why? Its very good, better than my story by a long shot. Very discriptive, characters are like themselves (expect spike), hard not to read. If you read it, you'll like it. I'm serious, anyone else here would say the same thing.

Campion1 · **Reply #22 on:** August 09, 2010, 02:04:44 PM

Quote from: ScratteLover3,Aug 9 2010 on 12:35 PM

Quote from: Campion1,Aug 5 2010 on 07:00 AM
Another thing is, you didn't write that fanfic. So I'm not reading it... Sorry.
Why? Its very good, better than my story by a long shot. Very discriptive, characters are like themselves (expect spike), hard not to read. If you read it, you'll like it. I'm serious, anyone else here would say the same thing.

Because I have an unhealthy obsession with reading flawed stories compared to better ones. I also love writing line-for-line reviews for them, even though no one will ever read them except my friends. I will make more in the future

Another good question is, when is your next chapter coming?

Adder · **Reply #23 on:** August 09, 2010, 02:07:38 PM

Quote from: Campion1,Aug 9 2010 on 01:04 PM

Another good question is, when is your next chapter coming?

I'm still trying to get the first finished, I don't even know what I'm gonna do for 2-60 yet. I've still got a little more to write for the first chapter.

Oh, and I don't want to hear about the profanity problems in reviews, I already know what the mean (blame my friends for that, their rough talkers).

Campion1 · **Reply #24 on:** August 09, 2010, 07:58:53 PM

Quote from: ScratteLover3,Aug 9 2010 on 01:07 PM

Quote from: Campion1,Aug 9 2010 on 01:04 PM
Another good question is, when is your next chapter coming?
I'm still trying to get the first finished, I don't even know what I'm gonna do for 2-60 yet. I've still got a little more to write for the first chapter.

I'm open to help you know. *cough*

Adder · **Reply #25 on:** August 09, 2010, 08:01:16 PM

Quote from: Campion1,Aug 9 2010 on 06:58 PM

I'm open to help you know. *cough*

Okay, well with Chapter 1, I still need it to get to 2500 hundred words, so I need 192 more.

Once you get that written (if you choose to) send it to me in personal message.

If I'm ever having trouble writing a chapter, you can help with writing. I'm doing 2500 words a chapter. So I might need some help. I will credit you as a writer on chapters that are done so with. I'm just not used to writing long chapters, but that's why I'm doing this. So I become a better writer.

Campion1 · **Reply #26 on:** August 09, 2010, 08:53:35 PM

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Okay, well with Chapter 1, I still need it to get to 2500 hundred words, so I need 192 more. Once you get that written (if you choose to) send it to me in personal message.

As in some review? I'll do it when you add more stuff

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If I'm ever having trouble writing a chapter, you can help with writing. I'm doing 2500 words a chapter. So I might need some help. I will credit you as a writer on chapters that are done so with. I'm just not used to writing long chapters, but that's why I'm doing this. So I become a better writer.

Hey! Don't sweat yourself on quantity bro. Write as much as you feel comfortable with. I understand wanting to write a long story, but good stuff takes time. Spend weeks on it if you have to. I can help with writing in story sure, I guess, although I'm not sure what to think if this relative of other fanfiction, as you have stated. I can try coming up with cool stuff if you ask

Adder · **Reply #27 on:** August 09, 2010, 09:14:40 PM

Acutally, what I meant was. Can you write the last 192 words for me, and send it to me in a personal message? Try and keeping going like the start of the story, okay?

Campion1 · **Reply #28 on:** August 09, 2010, 09:39:57 PM

Quote from: ScratteLover3,Aug 9 2010 on 08:14 PM

Acutally, what I meant was. Can you write the last 192 words for me, and send it to me in a personal message? Try and keeping going like the start of the story, okay?

That's a huge favor. Why not come up with some ideas, send them to me, and I'll tell you what sounds nice? Maybe even spice them up a little, or recommend some of my own.

Adder · **Reply #29 on:** August 13, 2010, 03:22:31 PM

Quote from: Campion1,Aug 9 2010 on 08:39 PM

That's a huge favor. Why not come up with some ideas, send them to me, and I'll tell you what sounds nice? Maybe even spice them up a little, or recommend some of my own.

How's this sound:

Have it mostly about the survivors trying to get back to the part of the valley where the adults are. But try and only write 192 words.

Campion1 · **Reply #30 on:** August 14, 2010, 03:48:32 AM

Quote from: ScratteLover3,Aug 13 2010 on 02:22 PM

Quote from: Campion1,Aug 9 2010 on 08:39 PM
That's a huge favor. Why not come up with some ideas, send them to me, and I'll tell you what sounds nice? Maybe even spice them up a little, or recommend some of my own.
How's this sound:

Have it mostly about the survivors trying to get back to the part of the valley where the adults are. But try and only write 192 words.

Survivors of what? Are you talking about my fanfic?

Adder · **Reply #31 on:** August 14, 2010, 07:46:06 AM

Quote from: Campion1,Aug 14 2010 on 02:48 AM

Survivors of what? Are you talking about my fanfic?

Remember, Hyp, Mutt and Nod got killed, leaving Littlefoot, Cera, Ducky, Petrie, Spike, Ruby and Rhett. That's who I was talking about trying to get back to the adults.

Adder · **Reply #32 on:** August 16, 2010, 03:32:23 PM

Chapter 2's been started, but thank Campion1 for that. He gave me the plot idea for the second chapter, he even did a spell and grammer check for me. I removed the fanfiction from the website for a while, but I'll send anyone chapters 1 and 2 if they request them. I added alot more to chapter 1, and only 1/3 of the second is written so far.