Hello everyone to "A New Start; The Rewritten"

So i decided to post this story on here, don't worry "A New Guide" won't be abandoned.

You can always give me tips on how to improve or point out things i do wrong

Lets begin the rewritten!

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Chapter 1: Prologue
Nieuwegein, The Netherlands 4:00PM

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*RIIIIIINNNGGGG*

A school bell rang and children were running out of school, eager to go home.

One of these children was Jordy, he was a kid 1.71 meter tall, dark brown/black hair, dark brown eyes and was always watching unemotional.
This however did not come because of anything bad, he just didn't like showing his emotions his family could always bring out his emotions and he was happy to others though he seemed cold, uninterested and closed off.

If you didn't know him you might think he couldn't speak any language because of the amount he spoke; almost nothing except if something got asked to him.
This was only because of his social skills which is basicly non-existant.

His days on school were always boring; Class in - 50 min - class out, sometimes he wished he can just be somewhere fun.

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Meanwhile in the Land Before Time Universe.

"Littlefoot you're it!" a yellow triceratops shouted to the brownish apatosaurus who was looking at the sun, as if daydreaming it. (Get the pun? No? Oh, atleast i tried.)

"Huh, What were you saying Cera?" the apatosaurus named Littlefoot replied.

"I said that you are it!" Cera shouted annoyed while running away.

"Oh okay, you better run!" Littlefoot shouted while he ran after her.

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End of Prologue, how did you like it?
if you have any tips like take it slower etc i will gladly accept it!
If you hate this fanfic dont just say 'I hate it' give me a reason to why you hate it.

Well this is me signing off Thank you from reading the prologue and until the next time!

Oh hello! I didn't see you there. (ClichÈ much?)

so Pokemon GO comes out soon, because there isn't an exact release date, however will you get it once it gets out?

please let me know so i know if there are more Pokemon GO fans

Thanks for reading this!

Note! this story will have Character death so don't read if you can't handle it!
So guys this is something i wanted to post with the help of someone (who know's who it is)
and i hope you can enjoy this little one shot

Lets begin!
Prey:
“C-chomper what are you doing?” Littlefoot asked to the hungry sharptooth that was walking towards him. “Are you hungry? We can find some ground crawlers if you want.”

“I’m sorry Littlefoot but those ground crawlers can no longer  fill me.” Chomper said as he walked towards Littlefoot. “I need bigger food. I was going to go for Ducky, you know but she was protected by Spike and I know I can never slip unseen past Spike besides if I could get her she wouldn’t be much of a meal anyway.”

“B-but Chomper we raised you! You don’t have to listen to your instincts! I’m sure we can help you in s-some way?” Littlefoot asked terrified of Chomper as he took a couple steps back. “W-wait Chomper did you come straight to me after Ducky or did you eat someone else?” Littlefoot could hear his heart thump in his head as he was scared out of his mind.

Chomper chuckles darkly which made shivers go up Littlefoot’s spine. “Yes Littlefoot, I ate some of your friends want to know who? Well I ate Petrie, Ruby and the next one is going to be you.” And with that he began to run to Littlefoot “Oh and let me say Ruby and Petrie were delicious.” And with one ferocious bite Littlefoot’s body made a *crack* sound.

“Chomper! Why did you do that!” a sceptical voice shouted from the bushes turning he saw Cera emerge. “Chomper! Did you just eat Littlefoot!?” she shouted after seeing Littlefoot laying lifeless on the ground.

“Well, yes Cera my first bite was a delicious one however I can’t have someone seeing what I did so I must kill you as well.” And with that he began to charge towards Cera.

Cera being filled with the anger and sadness of seeing one of her friends laying on the ground lifeless made her blood boil and she began to ready herself to headbutt the sharptooth for killing her friend.

Charging towards the threehorn while being hungry didn’t help Chomper because he forgot 1 critical thing, the horns that a theehorn has and while she may have been safe before Cera began to grow her other 2 horns so she was now deadly, he forgot this and charged head in to Cera who was expecting this.

Cera began to charge to Chomper readying her nerves for impact however in her rage she hit him so hard that he didn’t survive the hit and one of her horns impacted his heart, killing him instantly.
Deciding she would give Ruby, Petrie and Littlefoot a proper burial she went over to the grown ups to tell them the story, they all decided to give them a burial their friends and their parents were all destroyed.

Suddenly they felt a warm wind coursing through them turning their heads to the direction it as going they saw something that made them feel  happy all of a sudden.

They saw Ruby, Petrie and Littlefoot smiling at them and saying together “We will never leave you.” Cera, Ducky, Spike wanted to rush over and nuzzle them, play with them and saying to themselves that it was all a dream, but they knew it was not.

The Great Valley was going through a huge change from now on, without the guidance of their friends they felt lost, for the first time in their life.

And their friends wouldn’t be there to help them get back up anymore.

-THE END-

So, what do you think of this little one shot? Liked it? if you saw any mistakes don't forget to comment them and if you hate or dislike the story and you comment: 'i hate it' then give me a reason to why you hate it.

I'll see you soon!  

Sup guys, i decided to make a Human in The Land Before Time fanfiction
Which someone else also does *points at CybertronianBrony*

So my OC is someone you do not know because it is me

Okay so to be original my OC and my family (im using them in it) are talking dutch but i will add a translation for it, so you can still read it
Note: The text my family says will be dutch, however only the text will be dutch
and my OC (Jordy; thats me, i will add stuff of what i want and stuff, it will kinda be a

Land Before Time: A New Guide: Prologue

October 28 - 2016 - 1.57PM - Jordy POV

"GEFELICITEERD MET JE VERJAARDAG! (Happy birthday)" My family shouted together happy, well guess what day it is? My 14th birthday that means PARTYY!

So the whole day it was busy with everyone saying happy birthday to me and stuff, the gifts i got was just money (Thats what i always want lol)

After a couple hours of feasting and drinking, eating, cake the usual routine (I still do the 'do a wish' haha in this fanfiction it was to 'Meet real life dinosaurs'

After the visitors were gone, I went on my chromebook (Handy school computers and went to my favorite site to go on when I was home: Gang of Five; The land before time forums read some topics, answered some, watched some youtube, nothing much until it was time for bed, looking at his new fancy watch he saw a program called 瞬移(1) deciding he wanted to look at what it was he clicked on it.

What happened next though was something he didn't expect, he blacked out and woke up at the beginning of a cave, deciding to go see what was in it he walked into the cave.

What he saw in the cave.....

Cliffhanger's for the win!

(1) Discover what it is...

So this is my new fanfiction called: Land before time: A New Guide
Correct me on my mistakes and i will see you soon!  

Hello! I decided to post a fanfiction on here, if you find any mistakes i made please correct me on them.

Note!: There will NOT be any pairing in this fanfiction only true friendship between Littlefoot, Cera, Ducky, Spike, Petrie like i think it should be

Land before time: Tight Bonds Chapter 1: Problems part 1

This story takes place between Land before time 1 and 2  !

- The Great Valley, night time, Littlefoot's sleeping place.

"WAAH!" Littlefoot shouted, cold sweat on his face "Oh, just another bad sleep story. I should probably go back to sleep." However Littlefoot could not fall asleep again, deciding to drink a bit he walked to the drinking place.

'Why do these sleep stories feel so real? It's like they are, but at the same time aren't'
Littlefoot pondered while walking to the drinking place. He thought he would be alone, but he wasn't, Cera also was drinking out of the drinking place

"Hey Cera! What are you doing here?" Littlefoot asked out shocked that she was here. "Aren't you supposed to be asleep?"

Cera looked up. "I could ask you the same question Littlefoot, what are you doing here? And to answer your question, i couldn't sleep,"

Littlefoot began to drink, after getting some water he asked "Bad sleep story? I had one, it was about how my mother died protecting me, and how Sharptooth survived the water and is searching for us again. I just want us all to be safe." He then began to cry silently, watching his mother's death over and over in his head, not being able to change his thoughts.

Cera walked over to Littlefoot and rubbed her frill to his neck, trying to comfort his pain. "I'm sorry what i said about your mother Littlefoot, she's not stupid, she was the bravest i ever met, and i should have never said she was stupid." Cera silently kicked herself for calling his mother stupid

Littlefoot looked over to Cera then smiled and rubbed his neck against her frill "It's okay Cera, yes she was the bravest i ever met too, but it gives us reason, without her we wouldn't be here. And i wouldn't have the best friends i can ever hope for." And with that he hugged her
(Dont ask me how they hug , i just made it possible  

Cera looked to Littlefoot and smiled "I couldn't ask for better friends than you and Ducky, Spike, Petrie. And to answer your earlier question my sleep story was about the same, how Sharptooth killed your mother." And with that she hugged him back.

"Come Cera lets go back to our sleeping spots, we should sleep more, we need enough energy to play tomorrow." And with that they parted, to their own sleeping spots.

So! How do you think the first chapter was? I had alot of fun making it  
Don't forget to point out any mistakes to improve my writing, or any grammar mistakes
I hope i see you again soon.

Funfact about writing this story: I was listening to "Always there, Never alone and how do you know" During this story, it gave me inspiration to make this

You can ask me anything (personality whatever, but please dont mention my family but everything else is fine  



May the treestars be with you!