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Eating in the Great Valley

The Friendly Sharptooth

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I was bored during my lunch break at the university, so I decided to write another poem. It's nothing special, just a little piece about some things to expect when eating in the Great Valley.

Eating in the Great Valley

There’s lots to eat in the Great Valley.
When meal times come, expect a rally.
Wow, the food is good!

Tree stars are a snack of choice.
They cause the children to rejoice.
Boy, they are a treat!

When a dessert is much desired,
A tree sweet is what’s required.
Yes, they are the best!

Living in the valley is a little Sharptooth,
Though his eating habits are a bit uncouth.
Mm, the bugs are spicy!

The very best of the berry bushes,
Were there for the risers of their tushes.
Yeesh, they don’t leave much!

All love the time of the great giving.
It’s a tradition that keeps on living.
Oh, the sharing is grand!

When the snowy cold times come,
The sweet bubbles are more than yum.
Gosh, they’re hard to find!

When a red tree star ends with a pluck,
Petrie will be there, talking of luck.
Ugh, that is so annoying!

When others visit, looking for food,
They’d best be wary of old Three Horn’s mood.
Yikes, he can be mean!

These are a few samples of what may be,
As with eating in the valley, there's much to see.
Yay, it sounds like fun!


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When a desert is much desired

Make it "dessert" and the poem will be flawless!!  :smile

This is soooo cute and it doesn't help that I'm hungry when I read this. And it reminds me of visiting a friends house for dinner: there's lots of choices, but beware the grumpy grandpa who isn't about to share. :lol And the rhythm is once more awesome and consistent enough for this to be a song!! I'mma memorize and sing it now! :D I still very much admire your poetic abilities, and I hope I see more to come!! :DD

P.S. I loooooooove your new avatar! Calumon is so adorable!


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Make it "dessert" and the poem will be flawless!!

Thank you. My poems are a reflection of my life in that there are always problems.  :p  I fixed it.

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And the rhythm is once more awesome and consistent enough for this to be a song!! I'mma memorize and sing it now!

I'm sure you'll make it sound beautiful.

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I still very much admire your poetic abilities, and I hope I see more to come!!

I'm flattered. Having that come from someone of your writing status is high praise indeed. And I don't plan for my production to stop here, so more will definately be seen in the future.

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P.S. I loooooooove your new avatar! Calumon is so adorable!

Aw, thanks. I plan to keep this one for a while. The subtitle is actually a line he spoke during the series.


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I liked this poem TFS!

I agree, your new avatar is cute, though I'm not sure where it comes from.

Something tells me a Mysterious Beyond version of this would be considered "too bloody."  :DD  :lol


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Awesome poem, TFS! ;)  Just when I thought no one could make a poem about eating sound good, you have proved me wrong! Great work! :)


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This was quite humorous :lol.  Reminds me of when I visit the kitchen to figure out what to eat...since most of what I eat comes from plants :p.