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Finally caught up..took forever...

I'll just review the lastest chapter otherwise by the time I finish reviewing all the others this story will be long completed,I'm that slow with these things.

I love this,so much.

You are seriously the first person ever to make a LittlefootxRuby,all the others are LittlefootxCera or there is 100 million LittlefootxAli. Congrats on being original.

I got a good laugh about the whole 'mountain thing' and Shorty being called 'boulder'. Seriously,that made my otherwise dull day.

Nice parents,prank your daughter and her beloved for your own amusement..if I had a child I would never do such a thing...nope..not me...never....ok I totally would  :lol love that,Ruby and Littlefoot don't seemed to be too amused about it though,don't blame them but it gave everyone else a laugh (at their expense).

The reunions were well written,though for poor Littlefoot it ended up being pretty embarrassing,oh well thats families for you.

The battle draws near it appears,I know blood will be shed,just hope it ends with Red Claw getting his ass kicked,bout time he got what he deserved..him and his little minions too.

Also,I'm all for  CeraxTaunt,they suit each other,totally.

Keep it up,parallelogram.

The end is near no? I recall you saying before Christmas and Christmas is only a few weeks away-crazy right?

I'll admit I'll be sad when this story is finished,will have to find a new fic to follow  :lol.

You're doing really awesome,I still can't believe this was your first fanfiction attempt.


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Thank you very much for the feedback and kind words.  :)

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You are seriously the first person ever to make a LittlefootxRuby,all the others are LittlefootxCera or there is 100 million LittlefootxAli. Congrats on being original.

Yeah, the Ruby x Littlefoot relationship is one that I have heard mentioned before (in terms of friendship) but I have yet to see a story where it was fully explored.  They both are compatible in many ways as Littlefoot is curious about the world and Ruby has more worldly experience due to living in the Mysterious Beyond.  Likewise, Ruby's deeply introspective side is something that I can see Littlefoot relating to deeply.  Even though the films tend to overlook Littlefoot's lingering thoughts on his mother's death, you know that he must dwell on it from time to time.  Since in my story they are now the same species (I would not do a Ruby x Littlefoot fic if they were different species) it seems quite obvious that they work well for one another.

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I got a good laugh about the whole 'mountain thing' and Shorty being called 'boulder'. Seriously,that made my otherwise dull day.

Yeah, Arial and Orchid's childish innocence is quite fun to write. :smile  They think like children and (like children of that age) they had no filter.  It is humorous to see how they think about the massive longnecks.

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Nice parents,prank your daughter and her beloved for your own amusement..if I had a child I would never do such a thing...nope..not me...never....ok I totally would dino_laugh.gif love that,Ruby and Littlefoot don't seemed to be too amused about it though,don't blame them but it gave everyone else a laugh (at their expense).

The reunions were well written,though for poor Littlefoot it ended up being pretty embarrassing,oh well thats families for you.

I am glad that you enjoyed that.  :smile It seems like the grandparents enjoyed pranking their grandson just as much as Ruby's parents.  But it is nice that they are accepting of their children's (and grandchildren's) choice for a partner.  Obviously if a person who is willing to fight and die for you then they are probably dedicated enough for a long-term relationship.

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The end is near no? I recall you saying before Christmas and Christmas is only a few weeks away-crazy right?

Yep, yep, yep!  This story will have 5 more chapters (69, 70, 71, 72, and 73) and an epilogue.  If I am able to keep my schedule then the last chapter should be posted on Christmas Eve and the epilogue will be posted on New Year's Eve.  Right now I am in a groove in terms of writing so hopefully that means that I will continue to be able to write without writer's block rearing its ugly head.

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I'll admit I'll be sad when this story is finished,will have to find a new fic to follow dino_laugh.gif.

You're doing really awesome,I still can't believe this was your first fanfiction attempt.

Thank you very much.  :) I hope that I can keep the quality of the subsequent chapters at the same level that people have come to expect from me.  Although I plan on writing some original works after this year, I do have a few LBT short stories that I am considering as well.  I will keep everyone informed of my plans after this story is finished.


Go ahead and check out my fanfictions, The Seven Hunters, Songs of the Hunters, and Menders Tale.


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Review of chapter 66:

Shorty seems to be caught between two motivations: Going after his idol and brother Littlefoot and trying to remember him, doing things he would have done back when he was a leafeater & Protecting the children and serving the safety of the valley.
Bron reminds him not to risk anything or anyone successfully. Shorty's fear of losing somebody due to his own failures is strong so his actions needn't to be punished  :)

Well, the meeting did go well indeed *insert sarcasm here*
Petrie's visit is generally seen as unproblematic by the residents. However, the idea of allying with the Hidden Runners meets some resistance at first until Redclaw's crimes (or rather Calin's crimes, shall we say) are revealed and Redclaw's intentions lay open. The reaction was kind of... obvious :p

Ahh, swimmers, when put into a dangerous situation, are more likely to react with the flight instinct rather than the fight instinct. Shorty has kind of taken Littlefoot's role in the valley - the leader of the young ones.
Preparing a cave the sharpteeth can't enter sounds like a plan with minimal risk for everybody involved.

Terri's and Dein's behavior is kind of unexpected :smile Since when are they altruistic? :p

Ah, Calin has realised the fate that awaits him. I can imagine very well that he is enraged to the point of snapping :smile

Aww, Ruby's siblings aren't quite as brave as their big sister, huh? :lol Well, but they appear to be integrating well into the children's rows though.

Harthron is acting like a man, admitting his mistake and ensuring to undo his wrong decision. I have this feeling that they will be very important when the battle is closing in its final turn...

I'm totally in favor of your change in schedule, considering my own struggle to stay somewhat updated on your fanfiction :p

Just keep up the high quality of your writing (especially with a battle upcoming which mustn't be rushed in any way) :yes That is more important after all...
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Shorty seems to be caught between two motivations: Going after his idol and brother Littlefoot and trying to remember him, doing things he would have done back when he was a leafeater & Protecting the children and serving the safety of the valley.
Bron reminds him not to risk anything or anyone successfully. Shorty's fear of losing somebody due to his own failures is strong so his actions needn't to be punished smile.gif

Very true.  It is interesting that by being apart from his brother, Shorty has actually grown closer to him in a way.  He had matured greatly due to his experiences.

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Ahh, swimmers, when put into a dangerous situation, are more likely to react with the flight instinct rather than the fight instinct. Shorty has kind of taken Littlefoot's role in the valley - the leader of the young ones.
Preparing a cave the sharpteeth can't enter sounds like a plan with minimal risk for everybody involved.

Yep, indeed.  They don't want a reprise of when the children were nearly eaten when the sharpteeth discovered their scent.

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Terri's and Dein's behavior is kind of unexpected Dino_grins.gif Since when are they altruistic? dino_tongue.gif

It is only a momentary lapse for them, I swear!  :p

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Ah, Calin has realised the fate that awaits him. I can imagine very well that he is enraged to the point of snapping Dino_grins.gif

Yep, yep, yep!  The old adage "Beware he who has nothing to lose." is very apt here.  Calin knows that he is not long for the world, so he plans to take everyone down with him as well.

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Aww, Ruby's siblings aren't quite as brave as their big sister, huh? dino_laugh.gif Well, but they appear to be integrating well into the children's rows though.

Yeah, they haven't developed Ruby's sense of adventure yet.  But despite their initial fear of the "talking mountains" they seem to be relating to Ducky's siblings quite well.  Well.. except for losing a feather due to their curiosity.

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Harthron is acting like a man, admitting his mistake and ensuring to undo his wrong decision. I have this feeling that they will be very important when the battle is closing in its final turn...

Indeed.  The valley needs all of the help that it can get.  :yes

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I'm totally in favor of your change in schedule, considering my own struggle to stay somewhat updated on your fanfiction dino_tongue.gif

Just keep up the high quality of your writing (especially with a battle upcoming which mustn't be rushed in any way) in-yes.gif That is more important after all...

Thanks.  :) I am trying to keep the quality of my writing up to my usual standards and this required some extra time due to increasing work and the upcoming holidays.

Thanks for the review.  I hope that you enjoy the next chapter.  :)


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Review of chapter 67:

Pterano's demons return to him for there seems to be yet another task that he is going to fail but then it looks like they have found the Carrion Flyers (who seem to have an odd sort of thinking and society...)

The hidden runners might not be a threat to the fastbiters in open fight "claw-to-claw" but they are very good at preparing strategies and tactics.

Children... :smile Ever so excited, curious and carefree :p
Well, the scene with Ruby's parents and <The Mountains> is really good, covering a lot of things which just needed to be said... like indicating that Ruby might have a lover :p
These Sharpteeth they have spotted could only be... Chomper's parents? Scouts of Seeker's pack? Redclaw can't be it since he's two days late, isn't he? :unsure:

Wow... Pterano can be scary :DD Well, he performs a masterful act of manipulation. Even I as a reader was a little influenced by his words aka. by your words ;)
May the fight come. The Flyers of Redclaw shall be ridded of! :yes
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Pterano's demons return to him for there seems to be yet another task that he is going to fail but then it looks like they have found the Carrion Flyers (who seem to have an odd sort of thinking and society...)

Indeed.  Pterano's own fears of failure are not helped by the prospect of dealing with such an alien culture.  A society based upon scavenging leads to some odd traditions.  Obviously his current predicament has caused him to dwell on his past failings.

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The hidden runners might not be a threat to the fastbiters in open fight "claw-to-claw" but they are very good at preparing strategies and tactics.

Yep, yep, yep!  :yes Their skills in that regard will be useful in the days ahead.

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Well, the scene with Ruby's parents and <The Mountains> is really good, covering a lot of things which just needed to be said... like indicating that Ruby might have a lover  :p

Oh yes.  It will be interesting to see how Ruby's family deals with that particular revelation when she returns.  The longnecks are at peace with Littlefoot's love interest, but will Detras be okay with his daughter eloping with a <boulder>?  :p

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Wow... Pterano can be scary dino_happier.gif Well, he performs a masterful act of manipulation. Even I as a reader was a little influenced by his words aka. by your words wink.gif

Yeah, the old Pterano is back... at least for this once.  Now we will see if his talk with the carrion flyers has come soon enough or if he is too late to help the valley in its time of need.

Thanks again for the review.  :) I hope that you enjoy the next (and current) chapter.  Several plot points will soon be coming together for the inevitable conclusion.


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Chapter 69   Skirmishes

“If your enemy offers you two targets, strike at a third.”
― Robert Jordan, Crossroads of Twilight


Two fast biters...  Wait!  I recognize those two!

In the ravine below stood two juvenile fast biters.  The two fast biters appeared to be lost as they darted their heads from side to side in a desperate attempt to find their way.  The male appeared to be smaller and had a nervous look upon his face, whereas the female's larger build seemed to exude fury at some unknown entity.  It was a curious combination that the flyer couldn't immediately decipher.

Wait...  didn't these deserters meet up with Seeker's pack?  Then why are they out... That was when the flyer put the pieces all together.  Oh!  Oh...  Calin is going to enjoy this.

As Rinkus shifted his wings against the wind, he began to soar in the direction of the advancing pack.  He had quite the interesting report to deliver to his benefactors...

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In a ravine outside of the valley:

"I think the flyer bought it!"

Swift allowed herself to look in the direction where her brother was gazing.  Sure enough the pink flyer was soaring and moving away from them at a rapid rate of speed.  Heading back towards his master. She mused.  So far, so good.  She allowed herself a deep breath before turning and questioning her brother.

"Do you think that they will act like Seeker anticipated?"

Leap sighed as he began to kick at the dusty ground.  That is the big question, isn't it?  He mused darkly.  He paused as he considered the possibilities and tried to keep his fear at bay.

"I hope so... The entire plan depends on it, doesn't it?"  He looked back towards his sister with an unsure expression.  

Swift shifted uncomfortably as she sniffed the air.  The wind was blowing in their direction which would provide them with some advance notice of any approaching dinosaurs.  Such an advantage would be quite important in the narrow ravine.  With that in mind she again spoke.

"We know Calin... that sadistic bastard!  The only ones he wants to kill more than us is Seeker...  If he gets an opportunity to go after us then I know that he will take the chance."

Leap too sniffed the air as he began to resume his charade of acting lost.  They had to make it look like that they had been kicked out of Seeker's pack and not simply trying to misdirect their nemesis.  Just because there were no flyers visible did not mean that they were not being observed at that very moment.  As he began to follow swift away from the valley, feigning uncertainty, he asked his sister a question that troubled him greatly.

"But what if Calin is instructed to ignore us?  Calin may be too deluded to see through our charade, but Red Claw may not."

Swift smiled.  Leap had come to the same conclusion that she had reached a few moments prior.  However, she had considered that possibility and decided that was probably what Seeker had been banking on this entire time.  With the underlying strategies and counter-strategies playing in her mind, she decided to fill Leap in on what she had determined.

"Well, brother, we know how Calin behaves don't we?  How he initiates an attack?"  At Leap's nod, she continued.  "The first step was to inspect, which the flyer has already done.  The next step is to assemble the pack, which he is more than likely doing.  Which inevitably leads to..."

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Some distance away:

"We are ready to attack, sir!"

Red Claw smiled with anticipation.  The final conflict was finally here.  The forces were assembled.  Flyers were prepared to take the battle to the valley's skies.  Fast biters were prepared to invade the valley's interior and distract its defenses.  Finally, he and his two new two-footer recruits were ready to assault the defensive lines themselves.  A blitzkrieg against the valley looked ever so appealing, but Red Claw knew the first rule of battle.

Know your enemy.

He had fought with the valley's residents and those pesky children enough to know that the valley was well defended against outright attack.  If he simply launched a full-frontal assault against the valley on all sides then they could possibly withstand the onslaught despite massive casualties.  When dinosaurs were in the thick of battle they would entrench and fight.  No... He cautioned himself.  The second rule of battle will be very useful here.

A single act of misdirection is worth a thousand blows.

The valley was no doubt expecting a full-fledged attack.  They would have placed their best fighters at the entrances in the hopes that their nerves would hold up during a single, brutal attack.  However, if he were to attack them at multiple times to varying degrees, then that would sow confusion amongst their ranks.  He could have the fast biters probe for any weaknesses, while the flyers decimated their surveillance from the air.  Then, when they were devoid of their aerial scouts and responding to enumerable attacks from periphery, the lines would begin to falter.  Perhaps they would even reorganize themselves to react to a feigned attack of his own creation.  In either case that would be his cue.  He would attack in force and enter the valley.  Once the defensive lines were breached the fate of the valley would be sealed.

But before the initial probing attacks could begin, he had to deal with a diversionary tactic that was currently being used against his own forces.

"Calin, you are to chase the deserters, but only to where the ravine forks."

Calin growled in frustration, but did not interrupt.  Red Claw smiled at this.  His minion was in just the mood that he wanted him.

"They are trying to lead you away from one of the entrances, but you are to defy their expectations.  Harass the other entrance, whichever one that may be.  That will confuse their forces and force them to show us their plans."  He grunted in concentration as he considered the options.  "After you do this we two-footers will secure the fork in the ravine and the flyers will attack.  Our second attack will be from a position of strength."

Calin bowed low as he hissed a question.  "But if we do catch them before the fork in the ravine, can we kill them?"

Red Claw grinned.  "I suppose you may kill one of them, but we need to see where the other is going so that you can go in the opposite direction."  As Calin began to turn away, Red Claw growled once more.  "...and Calin?"

The fast biter stopped and slowly turned towards his benefactor.  "Yes, sir?"  The contempt was clear in his voice.

Red Claw gave him a malicious grin as he made sure there was no misunderstanding his explicit orders.  "Do complete the mission I have assigned for you... it would be a shame to lose you at such an early juncture."

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High above the Great Valley:

The two fast biters continued to sniff the air from time to time as they meandered from rock wall to rock wall in faux confusion.  The periodic glares in the direction of the advancing horde was the only hint that the duo had an ulterior motive and that particular signal would have been lost on anyone who wasn't doing a thorough watch over them.

"The waiting game continues."

Volant nodded at her daughter's whispered words.  From their hidden vantage point they had seen the sharptooth flyer spot the duo and then take off in the direction of his leader.  Despite the apparent discovery of Leap and Swift, however, the attack had not come.  Volant hesitated to think about what that could indicate.  Was Red Claw not planning on taking the bait?  Was he planning on a long siege and waiting for the valley to become complacent?

No...  She shook her head.  He can't wait that long.  He will need to feed his followers and that means either leaving this place for more fruitful hunting grounds or... She didn't finish the thought.  It was obvious that he did have one particular hunting ground in mind and she had no interest in letting Red Claw roam freely in the valley.  Everything depended on preventing that.

"Yes, Valaria.  We must wait until we see something."  Volant then turned towards her daughter.  "Do you all remember your mission?"

A chorus of "Yes, mommy!" followed from the hidden flyers as they each began to repeat the tasks that had been assigned to them.

"I will go warn Littlefoot if they attack the Hidden Canyon."

Another feminine voice spoke next.

"If they go to the main entrance then I will go warn Whitehorn."

Volant nodded with pride at her dutiful children.  The crevice that they were hiding in was too small for but one adult flyer and a few children to fit into.  Otherwise, she would not have risked her children in this endeavor.  However, she was quite prideful in their sense of responsibility.  Every child volunteered for this spy mission, but she could only pick two.  As a result, she selected Valaria and Flap, the two swiftest flyers in her family.  Their speed would give them the best chance of a clean getaway.

And I will give the alert call if the sharptooth flyers attack... Volant thought to herself.  But first we have to... wait...

Suddenly the situation changed in the ravine.  Both of the fast biters rose to a standing position as they placed all of their weight on the back of their hind feet.  Their eyes were focused intently on the narrow ravine in the distance and the supposed horde just a few miles away.  They stared for several moments at nothing in particular, but that is when they all saw it.

Fast biters.  Dozens upon dozens of fast biters.

Volant stared agape at the sight.  The number of predators in this group alone must have dwarfed Littlefoot's allies by at least four times.  The fast biters were mainly juveniles, but several young adults also were apparent in their ranks.  

Her heart sank.  This was far worse than they had feared.

The two fast biters seemed to stare at the approaching horde for several moments in shock as the combined footsteps on the sprinting horde sounding like a stampede of spiketails.  After a few moments, however, they seemed to regain their wits and did the only intelligent thing that they could do in that situation.

They bolted.

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"I'm scared, mommy!"

Pearl looked down at her daughter with sympathetic eyes.  She was most certainly not the only scared dinosaur on this day.  Ever since the alert call had came from the flyers it was a mad rush to send the children to the assigned place.  Now she and the children were in a cave that was just as dark and foreboding as their feelings at this moment.  Their shelter felt just like a tomb though she would do everything in her power to prevent it from becoming one.

"I know, honey."  Pearl softly spoke to her pink daughter.  "So are your friends..."  Pearl looked over at the swimmers and Tricia who were shivering in agitation.  "...so is your brother..."  She smiled slightly as Orchid tried to puff out his chest and act brave.  She could see right through his act.  "...and even me.  Everyone is sacred, dear.  But do you remember what your daddy and I taught you about fear?"

Despite her fearful shakes Arial nodded.  "It... It's okay to be afraid as... as long as you don't let it control you."  She recited from memory.

Pearl smiled.  "Very good, dear."  Looking over at the others, she realized that they needed her reassurance as much as her daughter did.  "It isn't cowardly to be afraid, children.  We just need to be sure to do our part."

One of the swimmers called out.  "...and what is that?"

Pearl smiled.  "Staying safe in the caverns until your parents have saved the valley.  We have to take care of ourselves right now so that they can take care of the valley.  Then you can see them again."

Another scared voice called out.  It was choked with unshed tears.  "But what if we don't see our mommies or daddies again?"

Several of the swimmers began to cry openly at that affirmation.  This caused poor Tricia to begin to cry as well.  She was only barely aware of what was going on.  All that she knew was that everyone else was scared and upset.  Now she was as well.

Pearl reached out to the swimmer and placed a comforting hand on his shoulder.  "We have to trust in them, child.  Has your mommy or daddy ever let you down?"  With reluctance he shook his head no.  "Well then... we need to trust them here.  They will do everything that they can to see you again.  But in order to do that we have to be strong."

Pearl was surprised to hear the voice of her son from behind her.  "Yeah.  We need to be like Ruby.  She has been through a lot and is still going strong!"

Pearl had to smile at Orchid's affirmation.  Even after his sister had grown sharp teeth and feathers he still looked up to her.  She did not expect the cascade of responses, however.

"Yeah!  Or like my sister!"  One of Ducky's brothers called out.  "She hasn't let us down yet!"  Affirmative nods and calls came from the numerous other swimmer children as well.  They too had found support in the example that their sister had established.

"Or wike Cerwa!"  Tricia affirmed, quickly forgetting her fear.

Pearl smiled.  She was about to agree with the sentiments of the children when another voice called from behind her.

"Or like Littlefoot.  I trust him with my life."

Pearl turned.  Shorty had appeared at the threshold of the cavern that they were in.  Beside him was the violet form of Pearl's mate who was carrying a bundle of sticks of some kind.  She immediately recognized it as branches from the trees which produced stinky fruit.  It seemed that the two had been busy while she was keeping the children calm.

Pearl smiled.  She knew just what would help the children take their mind off of the dangers outside.  "Okay, children.  Do you want to help our families defend the valley?"

She was greeted by a chorus of affirmations.  The children were ready to do anything that would help.

"Good!"  Detras's voice echoed from the other side of the chamber.  "Everyone grab one of these and put it by one of the entrances to this chamber.  It will trick the bad sharpteeth from getting in here."

In mere moments the multitude of swimmers, Tricia, and the fast runner's own children were gathering sticks and placing them around the chamber in a scene that looked like ordered chaos.  In this brief moment of respite Pearl took the opportunity to nuzzle her mate.  For all that she knew it could be one of the last times she would have the opportunity to do so.

"This is a good idea to keep the kids occupied."

Pearl looked up from her embrace to see Shorty looking ponderously at the entrance nearest to him.  He was not falling for the rouse that had been set up.  In fact...  She thought to herself.  He must have helped plan this!  The realization struck her as soon as she pieced together that Shorty had helped bring the sticks inside the chamber.  This child was a bit more knowledgeable than the others.

"I used to do similar things when I was caring for the little longnecks who followed me."  Shorty continued as if he were speaking to someone in front of him.  "I would watch while they played...  they got to be carefree while I got all of the fear..."  He looked down as he continued.  "I began to hate them for that... even after Bron found me I began to bully some of them... I just couldn't stand it."

Pearl frowned as she approached the green longneck.  "Littlefoot told me a bit about you.  He said that it took you a while to trust other people."  She then placed a hand on his back in a sympathetic gesture.  "It can be hard to trust when you have no one to trust.  It can be hard to relate to children when you never had a chance to be a child."  

Shorty nodded sadly at this as Detras approached and began to speak.

"Littlefoot said that you changed since he first knew you.  You began to let your guard down, but then when he found you after his change that you were not quite the same."

Shorty sighed before speaking hesitantly.  "I thought my brother was dead.  That the only one who I trusted, except for Bron, had be taken from me...  I had to be an adult again."  

Detras shook his head in sympathy.  "It is easier losing your childhood when you never had one to begin with."

Shorty simply nodded.  Pearl looked over at the children to make sure that they were all where she could see them.  Seeing that they were not placing themselves in harm's way, she took this as an opportunity to address the longneck.

"Is that what you want?  Because if it is then all you..."

Shorty shook his head and looked towards the other children.  She took this as her cue to stop.

"I... I see them being happy and that makes me happy.  I don't need to be a child as long as they can be."

Pearl laughed, which earned a confused glance from the longneck.  She quickly clarified.

"Well, Shorty.  At least in that regard you are a fast learner."

Shorty looked at her with a confused head tilt.  The term fast runner and his name were almost never used in the same sentence.  She quickly filled in the gaps for him.

"Many adults never learn that lesson."  She sighed.  "Now the details... the details are where it gets tricky."

The two fast runners and the juvenile longneck watched the children mark the chamber with their sticks for several more moments.  It was a welcome respite from the terror of the unknown that awaited them all.  For while they waited in their cave, the initial skirmishes of the battle were underway.

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"Keep pace, Leap!"

Swift shouted at her brother as she struggled to keep ahead of the rampaging onslaught.  She had expected a significant attacking force, but nothing like this.  A pack of this size only existed in the legends of old.  Such a thing could only be maintained through hunger, desperation, and fear.  Only a personality like Red Claw or Brekan the Cruel could lead such a force.

"I'm trying..."  Leap huffed through gasped breaths.  "Which way are we going?"

Swift tried to think about her brother's question as they neared where the ravine forked towards the two entrances.  The first one hidden within the Hidden Canyon and the other a bit more conspicuous.  They had been given clear instructions by Littlefoot on how to proceed.

"If they attack with a lot of fast biters then go towards the Hidden Canyon so that we can weaken them... but if they attack with a few then go to the main entrance."

"But..."  Leap had asked in confusion.  "If they attack with only a few then that means they must be holding back for a larger strike.  Why would we lead them to the main entrance then so that a bigger force can attack us at our weakest point?"

Littlefoot smiled at Leap's question.  "Good question, Leap.  Let's just say that we have some plans for them if they should attack the Hidden Canyon."

Swift nodded as both she and her brother were quite aware of the hidden runners' preparations.  "But where will the pack be, Seeker?"

Littlefoot shrugged.  "Wherever the bigger force is.  We need to help keep the fast biters out of the valley so that the adults can deal with the big guys.  The rainbowfaces will need to know where the main attack is coming as well."

Leap looked confused.  "What good could two rainbowfaces could do?"

Littlefoot looked away.  "I don't know about doing much good for the fighters... but they may be able to help the survivors..."

Both siblings stared at one another.  They had no idea what Littlefoot was muttering about but that didn't sound good.


Swift shook her head.  This situation was far different than what they were preparing for, however.  This was a massive force, but the two-footers were nowhere to be seen.  This meant that not only was this a sizeable force, but more was on the way.  They couldn't simply rely upon Littlefoot's orders here, they would have to take initiative.

"Leap, you go left and I will go right!"

Leap paled.  "What?!"

Swift breathed deeply.  "You heard me!  This is different than what we expected.  We need to divide and conquer."  She looked in his direction one last time as the forking of the paths came upon them.  "Good luck, brother... I will see you in the valley."

......

Volant was agape when the two fast biters broke into different directions, with Leap heading towards the Hidden Canyon and Swift heading towards the main entrance.

"What are they doing?  This is not what was planned!"

That was when the enemy pack's actions showed the intelligence of Swift's decision.

......

The stampede of raging fast biters neared the fork in the ravine with tremendous speed.  There was no way for the various sharpteeth to hear one another over the clamor of stomping feet.  Nor was there much room to maneuver around your counterparts to the front and sides.  The masses of predators were forced to follow whichever path their packmates at the front chose to pursue.  The results were inevitable.

"To the main entrance, you fools!  To the main...  Damnit!"

Calin roared in rage as he directed what remained of his forces to follow him towards the main entrance.  Nearly half of the fast biters at the front had simply followed Leap and the followers behind them had dutifully followed.  Now the entire attempt of a diversionary attack was in disarray.  With equal attacks on both entrances, neither defensive line would be compelled move to the other side in order to give Red Claw an opening.

Calin grunted in annoyance and exhaustion as he regained his position at the front of his force.  He had to have something to show for his efforts or else he knew that he would be doomed.

He would attempt a breakthrough at the main entrance even if it was the last thing that he did.

......

"Children, it is time to..."

Volant stopped as she looked to her sides and noticed that her children had already departed.  Their fluttering forms could be seen departing in their respective directions.  Each entrance would know that a battle awaited them.

We don't have an idea of where Red Claw's main force will strike now though...  I wonder if...  That was when she saw something that made her blood grow cold.

The sharptooth flyers were appearing across the horizon.  Ten large forms were clearly visible, including two that she remembered all too well.

"Sierra and Rinkus..."

But as the flying horde continued its journey towards the valley, and not realizing that Red Claw's original strategy had already been sidetracked, Volant suddenly came up with her own idea of what Red Claw's strategy was at that moment.

Attack us on all fronts so that we have no idea where the main attack is coming...  She took on a grim expression.  Well... two can play at that game!

Wasting no time, she gave the alert call for her fellow flyers who were hidden on top of the rock walls.  The enemy could not preempt what it couldn't see.

Caw!

......

Entrance to the Hidden Canyon:

"They're doing what!?"

Littlefoot couldn't believe his ears.  Under normal circumstances, having the attacking pack split up would be a good outcome, but this was not a normal time.  Swift and Leap had violated his very explicit orders of leading them to one entrance or the other.  Having seen Red Claw in action before, he knew that a diversionary attack would more than likely be followed by an actual attack at another location.  Now they had no idea where the inevitable strike would come.  The entire purpose of their diversion had been ruined.  

That was when Flap changed Littlefoot's view of the situation.

"There were many of them!  About four times as many as all of you!"

Thud's mouth went agape at the flyer's announcement as he let out a surprised yelp.  Littlefoot's expression was equally shocked at this news.  So that is why they went in both directions!  Calin probably didn't plan on doing that from the beginning and our friends tricked his forces.  Littlefoot knew what that meant.  This gave them a chance at averting disaster, whereas a full-fledge attack on one entrance would have doomed them.  Swift and Leap, you are brilliant!  We have to weaken their forces through all means necessary and leading them towards both entrances certainly does that.

Caw!

Littlefoot turned his head towards the rock wall with a concerned expression.  Now came the aerial battle...  They would lose their eyes in the sky for the foreseeable future as the flyers tried to defend the skies over the valley.  If the aerial battle was lost then the consequences would be too terrible to contemplate.  Without any secrecy to their defensive arrangements, Red Claw could react appropriately and easily overwhelm the valley with his superior forces.  Neither the battle for the skies or the ground could be lost, lest the valley itself would fall.

"Oh no!  Mommy!"

Littlefoot looked up at the distraught flyer.  Flap, he could have sworn her name was...  one of Petrie's enumerable siblings.  Though acting as a messenger in the battle, she was little more than a child.  A child who was now being forced into the horrors that lay ahead.

"Do not worry, Flap.  Oh, no, no, no!"  

Littlefoot smiled as the ever-caring green fast biter again addressed the distressed flyer.

"The best way you can help your mommy is by helping the valley."

Littlefoot nodded.  That was his cue to give the flyer her orders.  With that in mind, he addressed her with a question.

"Which group was larger?"

Flap seemed frozen for a moment, but then she regained her composure and spoke.

"The one heading for the main entrance..."

Littlefoot nodded in the direction of his packmates, who immediately sprung into action without a word being exchanged.  His order to Thud was a bit more overt, however.

"Thud?  Help out your packmate when he arrives!  We will be heading to the top of the rock wall!"

Thud nodded but nonetheless asked a question as Littlefoot joined the rest of his pack in sprinting back into the valley.

"What good will you do up there?!"

Littlefoot continued to run with his pack as he yelled out his answer.

"A lot!  Calin will soon learn that the flyers aren't the only ones who can attack from the air!"

......

"We lost Calin!"

"Have we gone the wrong way?!"

Kader frowned in annoyance.  Yes, they had lost track of Calin.  How could they not when it was all anyone could do to just avoid being trampled by the packmates behind them?  Now that the advance had slowed and everyone could hear the ruminations of their comrades, it was obvious what had happened.  Calin had ordered them to go in the opposite direction of the two deserters, which gave them two possibilities when the duo had split up.  Now they found themselves alone in the narrow ravine, the smaller of what was now two groups.

He looked around at the fast biters around him.  Artac, Biter, Sickle Fang, Orange Tail, Razor Bite, the two new fast biters that I couldn't be bothered to remember...  None of those who remained were of his rank.  Without a leader they had slowed and were moving uncertainly through the barren path that lay before them.  He knew that if the group did not have any success here then he would be held personally responsible as the highest-ranked member.  It would be up to him to take control.  Or else.

"Listen up, everyone!"  Silence reigned as Kader spoke with a booming voice.  "I am taking control here!  Red Claw gave us orders to attack the entrances and that is what we are going to do!  Follow!"

Kader sprinted ahead as he could hear the others follow and eventually match his pace.  Wonderful... now if we can live through breaking into the valley... They had not done very extensive scouting of the valley's defenses as their flyers would have to destroy the valley's aerial defenses for that.  Once the leaf-eater flyers were dealt with then a more planned-out assault could be conducted.  However, that did not resolve the issue that now faced him.  Somehow he had to lead his meager force of one dozen sharpteeth into the unknown canyon that lay beyond.  A mysterious land of trees and streams that seemed to disappear into the distant rock walls.  According to Red Claw the valley had a secret entrance that he entered through once that was somewhere in those walls.

However, finding that entrance would only be half of the battle.

As he and the others passed the green of innumerable cold-tolerant trees, he could feel a chill go up his spine.  The valley would certainly have defenses of some kind even if they managed to find the entrance.  He would have to lead an all-or-nothing sprint through the defenders in order to enter the valley's interior.  Only then could they cause the desired disruption to the valley's defenses by attacking them from within their own walls.

"Oh!  What is that stench?!"

The fast biter turned in annoyance as he saw two of his packmates stop and cover their nostrils with an overwhelmed expression.

"Come on, you two!  We are made of sterner stuff than..."

That was when it hit him.  A stench unlike any that he had encountered before.  It was rancid in a way that made even decomposing meat smell appetizing by comparison.  It was a unique mixture of fruitiness, rot, and smokiness that caused the senses to revolt.  His eyes watered as he fell to one knee in confusion.  Where is that stench coming from?!  

Kader sucked in a breath but immediately regretted it as the stench now assaulted him full force.  It was the Cold Time and according to Red Claw this meant that they should be safe from the foul-smelling fruits of the canyon.  But there were no fruits to be seen.  If the smell wasn't coming from the non-existent fruits then where.

Thud!

The fast biters jumped in surprise as a sharpened stick landed behind them, impaling itself into the hardened soil.  In addition to the rising fear of the unexpected attack, their nostrils were assaulted with an even stronger scent of the foul-smelling trees.  The sudden realization that the smell was in the wood did not calm his nerves.  They had a very real threat now.  An attacker had tried to use a sharpened stick against them and only one pack of dinosaurs had been known to do that.

Seeker's pack.

Shifting to his right and assuming a stalking pose, he carefully examined the area around them.  The monumental trees stood impassive under his examination as silence reigned amongst the petrified sharpteeth.  There were no signs of life in those trees.  No signs of malice.  There was only green.  Undoubtedly one of the green fast biters had attacked them, he deduced.  In any case they had little time to deal with Seeker, they had to get moving and find the entrance.

"Okay, everyone..."

Whoosh!

He turned to stare at where the sound had originated only to see a swaying branch.  It was obvious that someone had moved across that way but a mere second prior, but now no sign remained.

Whoosh!

The entire group turned at the new sound which came in the opposite direction from where they had been looking.  If he were a paranoid dinosaur then he would think that they were trying to surround...

Whoosh!

A flash of green appeared and then disappeared between two of the massive trees.  It had only been there a moment, but in that split second he saw something that made his blood freeze.

Feathers.

Green feathers.

Kader knew exactly who these mysterious dinosaurs were.

"Everyone, follow me!  It's the..."

Schluck!

"Ahhh!!!!"

Pain.  Terrible pain permeated his hip as he collapsed to the ground in agony.  His ears were awash in the sound of his own heart beat as throbbing jolts of agony pulsated through his entire body.  For several moments he simply lay there as the sounds of bone-chilling screams hurt his sensitive ears.  In his confused state he could not recognize the confusing jumble of sensations that his mind was registering.  His eyes could only see green, while every breath seemed to convey agony to every part of his body.  Finally, there was an odd scream echoing in his ears.  It almost sounded like the screeches of a dying flyer.  Starting off low pitched and then progressively rising and becoming more hoarse as they went on.  It was only after several moments that his pain-addled mind finally realized what was happening.

He had been grievously injured.  He was the one who was screaming.

With a pained groan that caused convulsions of pain to flow through his body, he rolled onto his uninjured side.  Shuddering with pain, his vision slowly began to clear as he again became aware of the sounds around him.  However, recovering his wits only made him aware of the living hell that was occurring all around him.

"Please.... somebody help me..."

An orange female whom he initially couldn't identify moaned for help only a few feet away from him.  Two large sticks were embedded in her abdomen as she appeared to be pinned to the ground.  It was obvious that her wounds were mortal from the stench alone.  The smells of excrement and partially digested meat were interspersed with the stench of blood.  Such a disembowelment was not survivable.  Steeling himself and ignoring the rising panic, he turned his gaze to the fighting in the distance.

Growl...

Crack!


Before Kader's eyes could focus on what he was looking towards, his ears could pick up the sounds of screaming and the cracking of bones.  It was a symphony of rage and agony, and he was simply an unwilling audience member in this theatre of despair.  Finally, however, he could see the sight that lay before him.

A massive green fast biter stood between six hidden runners.  Biter... He recognized her immediately.  She was probably the strongest of what made up his group and by far the bravest.  The fact that she was still standing and fighting was a testament to that.

The fearsome predator held the limp body of a hidden runner in her jaws.  Blood oozed from the broken body as the other hidden runners hesitated before the one who had killed their comrade.  Two sticks stuck out of Biter's back, but yet she still stood firm.  Even though others were retreating all around her, she was not going without a fight.

"Everyone, gather around me!  We all need to defend one another's flanks!"

Those were the last words that she spoke.  Suddenly, one of the hidden runners advanced and as she tried to slap the stick out of his hand, another embedded a spear into the side of her throat.  In a sickening instant her voice went from a low commanding tone to a high pitched squeal until it finally went silent as her vocal organs were ripped away by the intruding weapon.  Her final moments were spent clawing at enemies in front of her that she could no longer reach.  The successful hidden runner held the spear firmly and as she simply flailed in place in a pitiful display of futility.  After a few horrifying moments her thrashing finally ended and her glazed eyes focused on nothing in particular.

Biter was dead and so was any hope of the fast biters regaining the initiative.

Kader struggled to get up as the sounds of screams, cries, and running feet began to die down around him.  However as he tried to rise from the ground, his feet suddenly slipped on the blood-soaked ground and landed upon the spear-pierced side.

As he again convulsed with pain, he could smell his own blood ooze from the reinjured wound.  Furthermore, he could no longer feel his left leg.  It was at that instant that he realized that his injury was not just a severe one, it was mortal.  Knowing that his end was near he closed his eyes and awaited the end.

"Are they all gone?"

"All but one!"

Kader didn't open his eyes as he could hear the hidden runners converge around him.  This was it.  His misery was finally going to reach its conclusion.  That was when he heard something that made him open his eyes.

"We didn't have time to use the Orange Death here...  Perhaps this one would make for a good test?"

Kader had no idea what the hidden runner was going on about, but it didn't sound good.  That was when another hidden runner walked by with a commanding presence.  His mannerisms and expression communicated power and authority, which even the fast biter could recognize.  This was their leader.  The same hidden runner who had killed Biter.

Harthron looked at the fast biter with an unimpressed expression.  "Yes, I suppose we need to make sure that we have a good batch."  

At this he grabbed an orange bulb from one of his hidden runners and smashed it upon the tip of his already bloodied spear.  Seeing that it now was a mixture of orange and red, he nodded in approval before handing it to a hidden runner to his right.

"Well Banton, you lost family in Red Claw's attack, didn't you?  Perhaps you should do the honors?"

The last thing that Kader saw before his world exploded into unimaginable agony was the hidden runner smile with a sickening expression that was reminiscent of Calin.  Then, without warning, the spear was thrust straight into his back.

It wasn't until several minutes later that the Orange Death finally killed the broken fast biter.  It was only then that his screams ceased to echo across the canyon and silence again descended upon the land.  Then just as suddenly as the hidden runners had appeared and destroyed the hapless predators...

They disappeared back into the forest.

......

Just outside of the valley:

Breath in... breath out...

The flyer's breath came out in short gasps as she waited until the right moment.

Breath in... breath out...

Volant's call meant that it was time to carry out what they had all been preparing for days.  Ever since Valaria came up with the idea of using sticks covered with small rocks to hide flyers on the rock walls, Volant had realize the defensive applications of that trick.  Flyers were not known for being stealthy when they flew in the sky so a surprise attack by many flyers coming out of nowhere would be devastating on any invading force.  They would be looking ahead and expecting attacks from the front or from above, but an assault from the rear... an attack from an area they will have already passed over... that they would not expect.

From her vantage point she could see the flyers begin to fly over head.  She couldn't see much under her covering, of course, but their shadows were clear enough.  They were flying slowly as they approached the valley, obviously using the thermals in order to carry them aloft.  They expected to have plenty of time to reorient themselves against any threat.  They thought that their ability to fly would grant them the initiative.

They thought wrong.

The flyer began to panic.  What if I don't get the order?  What if the order has already been given?  I don't want to fail here! Her pulse began to race as this possibility raised its ugly head.  The order to rise from their hiding spots would be non-verbal as to avoid detection by their enemies.  No...  They would watch the small puddle in the center of their bluff.  Once their group leader threw a small rock into the puddle that would be their signal to begin to flap as silently as possible.  Then would come the attack.

Come on, it should be any time now!  Has she already given the order?  Did I miss it?  Did I...

Splash!

There it was.  That was the signal.

With as much speed as she could muster, she emerged from her personal lean-to.  As she escaped from her claustrophobic shelter, she could now very clearly see her comrades.  They looked just as scared as she was.  But there was no time to reflect upon that.  Their mission started now.

Her gaze shifted towards the clear blue sky.  The silhouette of ten flyers were clearly visible.  One sharptooth flyer for each valley flyer on the rock wall.  One for each adult flyer.  If they failed to take out their enemies then the remaining flyers would not stand a chance.  Children would not stand a chance against these fiends.  Her fear was soon replaced with rage as she flapped her wings and silently took to the air.

Flap!  Flap!

The take off was always the most taxing part of any flight.  It took massive amounts of energy to propel oneself off into the air.  Far more than soaring flight.  In these moments of exertion it was hard to think of anything else.  

Flap!  Flap!

Had she been looking below her, she had no doubt that she would see the rock wall begin to shrink in the distance.  The wind whipping against her crest and the feeling of acceleration clearly indicated that her speed was approaching that of the enemy flyers, but that would not be enough.  No...  To catch them she would have to go much faster.

Flap!  Flap!

She could feel the shockwaves of the others flying on either side of her, but she dared not look.  Her target could not be ignored even for a moment.  

Flap!  Flap!

Then without warning all of the flyers stopped flapping and let the thermals carry them upwards.  They were now several hundred feet above the enemy, but were still some distance behind.  But that would not matter.  From this point on they would let gravity do the hard work.  When they struck the enemy would have no warning and no hope.

She allowed herself to look in Volant's direction as she went to the front of the aerial line.  They were now in a V formation with every flyer having their wings locked in place for soaring flight.  Though she was a caring mother, Volant looked utterly horrifying in her current role.  She was like a Valkyrie ready to choose the dead.  Much like how death would strike many without warning, she brought her wings to her chest and began to descend with great speed.  That was their cue.  This was it.

The sharptooth flyers didn't stand a chance.

......

A massacre of unimaginable proportions occurred before the flyer's eyes.  In a split instant, flyers emerged from the clouds and collided into the heads and necks of the unprepared attacking force.  Eight of the attackers fell helplessly from the sky without ever knowing what had hit them.  Much like the ground fuzzies that sharptooth flyers would often eat, they had met their end from an unseen killer.  From his vantage point he couldn't hear his comrades hit the rocks below with a sickening thud, but he didn't really need to.  The consequences of falling unconscious from that height carried only one outcome and it was an irreversible one.  With a sigh, he turned his head and looked at what remained in the skies above the valley.  With ten defenders now facing off against two surrounded and panicked attackers, the result was inevitable.  The battle was over in less than 30 seconds.

As the last of the sharptooth flyers lifelessly crumpled to the ground, Rinkus spoke nonchalantly to his friend.

"Just like I thought, they had a little surprise for us."

Sierra looked at Rinkus with a befuddled expression.  His response was irreverent as ever.  

"A little surprise!  The sapsuckers just wiped out our first wave!"

Rinkus smiled as his voice turned cold.  "Just like I planned."

Sierra looked at him with a disbelieving expression, which Rinkus reveled in for a moment before addressing his obvious question.  It was quite a new experience seeing Sierra observe him with apprehension.

"Those ten were our most worthless comrades... and most importantly the ones least loyal to us...  keeping them was no benefit and losing them was no loss."  Rinkus noted humorously that Sierra looked approvingly at his brutality, but it was obvious that his erratic friend still did not understand his grand scheme.  "I did this in order to find out what their surprise was and to find the defenders of the valley.  Now they have used their one advantage on the most expendable of us..."  Rinkus smiled as he looked into Sierra's eyes.  "Now it is time for us to finish the job and to reap the rewards!"

Sierra grinned maliciously.  "Time to get the others?"

Rinkus nodded.  The others were indeed dim-witted, but that would also make them easy to manipulate and use.  With twenty flyers against the valley's ten, the valley would not stand a chance.  Now it was time to call up the reserves.

"Get the rest of the flyers!  We have some work to do!"

......

The Mysterious Beyond:

"There is the valley!  Keep on course and we will be there in no time!"

As Nunti finished reassuring the impatient group, Pterano looked pleased at the tell-tale sight of the Mountains that Burn.  They were so close.  So very close.  It felt like that it had taken ages for them to reach this place, but in reality it had only taken the better part of two days.  However, Pterano was as aware of anyone else that two days were a lifetime when sharpteeth were involved.  He could only hope that he wasn't too late.  

That was when he saw something that made his blood run cold.

"Red Claw!"

Nunti turned his head upon Pterano's exclamation and immediately moved closer to his mentor.  If Red Claw was outside of the valley then that meant that it had not yet fallen, but that also meant something else.  Something quite sinister.

It meant that his sharpteeth flyers were here as well.  They had no time to spare.

Pterano frowned as he tried to increase his velocity despite the uncooperative wind.  As images of those whom he failed began to flash in his mind, he could taste the adrenaline in his throat.  The precursors to the waking dreams that often haunted him.  But then he did something that he had never done before.  He fought back against the inner darkness.

As suddenly as they had appeared, the mental images stopped.  A disturbing sort of clarity reigned in his mind as his flight continued.  No one who was near to him could have seen the inner struggle that had just been waged, but in a way Pterano had fought his first battle of the fight ahead.  His battle against himself.

Hang on, nephew.  I will not fail you.  I will not fail again!


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Chapter 70   Battle for the Hidden Canyon

“Appear weak when you are strong, and strong when you are weak.”
― Sun Tzu, The Art of War


"Hold the line!"

Whitehorn looked out at the massive horde in the distance.  He had seen battle in his time.  He had been there when the herds had found the Great Valley and he had been present in the battles that the threehorns had faced in the journey to their home.  But in all of his years he had never seen anything like this.  Even with a solid line of nine threehorns making a defensive line, there were at least three times as many fast biters facing them.  Juveniles... adults... every age of predator was present.  Even with their reserves guarding the back of their line there was no way that they could hold them all in the event of a full-fledged attack.  They had never anticipated something like this.

But it could have been so much worse had Valaria not informed them of what was coming.  She had given them just enough time to call their reserves from the interior of the valley.  As a result, the longnecks stood in the distance.  They were ready to tail swipe any predator who managed to bypass the threehorns.

Growl...

Several of the threehorns edged forward as a pale tan fast biter threatened the line with a ferocious growl.  This earned an immediate response from Topps.

"Hold the line!  They want us to overreact!  Make them come to us..."

Whitehorn looked towards the battle-tested veteran.  He was still acting like he was the leader of the herd despite the fact that he was now but a deputy under Whitehorn's command.  Nonetheless Whitehorn did not mind the elder's orders to his comrades.  That was part of the reason that Whitehorn had kept him as a deputy in the first place.  He needed a stern voice who would do what was necessary without fear of the social consequences.  He needed someone with the courage that came from age.  Topps was just that individual.

"Right!"  Whitehorn affirmed.  "Make them come to us!  Cover the threehorn next to you!  Trust the others to have our backs!"

The herd settled down immediately at this.  It was a testament to how much trust the valley residents had in one another that they were willing to trust the others in covering their flanks.  This solidarity seemed to disturb the fast biters.

I don't think that they were expecting our response.  Now it is time to take the initiative.

"Everyone, advance in pace with me and then retreat!  Let's see if these baby-eaters are stupid enough to get trapped in our wake!"

......

Calin gave a series of two clicks to indicate that his forces should retreat two threehorn lengths behind.  He had no idea what these stupid beasts had in mind, but he did know that staying in place was not a wise idea.

Damn horn faces!  We need to get to their flanks if we are going to do anything!

The fast biters retreated with mixed results.  Several of the fast biters in the front of the line were nearly crushed as the threehorns advanced with great speed.  A clear testament to the danger of having so many predators in such an enclosed space.  The fast biter's greatest weapon, their speed, could not be realized in such close quarters.  Calin considered ordering a more extensive retreat when he saw something that confused him.

They're retreating?  But why...  He then saw some of the more hot headed members of the pack begin to advance.  It was in that instance that he knew what the threehorns were planning.

"No!  Wait to advance as a group!"

The three who had advanced began to retreat just in time as the threehorns advanced in a coordinated charge.  With Calin giving a claw gesture and one click, the rest of the pack stayed in formation.  Shortly thereafter the threehorns stopped at the same location that they had halted their charge previously.  It was obvious why this was the case.

The ravine widens passed this point... they don't want to give us an opening into the valley.  Hmmm...

"They can't go past this point without making us an entrance!"  Calin exclaimed.  "Froth's Group, prepare to make a charge from the left!  As soon as you see an opening attack according to plan!"

Upon Calin's barked orders, Deputy Froth rushed to an area just behind the narrowest part of the ravine.  It was an area where the threehorns would not be able to directly see him until they rushed past the narrow spot.  Of course if the threehorns did that then he would have his opening.  Calin's plan was beginning to come together.

Calin smiled internally.  If there was one saving grace to his plan it was that threehorns were stupid.  "Okay, when the threehorns charge again I want everyone to retreat five threehorn lengths, then follow Froth's group into the valley!"

Calin was bursting with anticipation now.  It was just a matter of moments until he could complete his first objective: make inroads into the valley and scatter its defenses.  Once that was complete and Red Claw was in the valley, it would be as good as over.  Victory would be his.  Not even his hated enemy could stop him now, wherever he was.

"Hey, Tan Ass!  Catch!"

Calin jerked back as he looked into the sky.  That voice!  That hated voice.  How could he have tracked him down and what did he have planned?  As if to answer his question a cascade of sticks fell from the sky like rain.

"Ahhh!!!"

"My shoulder!!!"

Calin seethed.  The damn pointed sticks were being used again!  Worse yet, from his vantage point he could not really see Seeker's pack or attack them.  They were being attacked from an area where they could neither defend nor regroup.  As his fast biters began to retreat back some distance from the narrow part of the ravine, he realized that he would have to retreat and regroup.  He was in an indefensible position.  He began to raise his arm in order to give the order.

But that was when everything changed.

......

"They're retreating!  Let's take them out!"

Whitehorn looked at the voice with grave concern as the entire line began to move forward of their own accord.  It seemed that the entire line had been overtaken with the rage of their species.  Despite the futility of his words, Whitehorn could see this debacle in the making for what it was.

A disaster.

"No!  Hold the line!  Hold!"

But it was too late as the line charged into the ravine.

......

Cera's mind recoiled at the scale of the debacle below her.  The threehorns had charged ahead in their exuberance at possible victory and had ignored the deeper mission at stake here.  Even before the threehorns had crossed the threshold into the ravine, she realized the magnitude of what she was seeing.

The defensive line was failing.

She could hear a choked sob from behind her as the fast biters poured behind the advancing threehorns and began to sprint into the valley.  All of her packmates could realize what this meant.  The longnecks would only be able to stop a few before the others would enter the valley's interior.  Then no one would be safe.

She collapsed to the ground in despair as she could feel Taunt's arms wrap around her body.  The valley was going to be destroyed and it was all because her former people couldn't hold their act together!  Was this how it was going to end?  After all of their suffering and struggle did it have to end like this?  Her friends deserved so much more.  

She sucked in a deep breath as she could see Chomper begin to whisper something to Littlefoot.  It was obvious that the battle was more than likely lost and with it their families and friends.  As much as she detested the thought, she knew that if it came to that she would ensure that her pack survived no matter what.  They had been through so much together and had stuck together even when no other companionship could be found.  She would fight beside them to the death or, if it was the pack's decision, she would retreat to the Mysterious Beyond.  With tears in her voice she asked a question that shamed her to even contemplate.

"Seeker?"

Littlefoot continued to listen to Chomper as it seemed that their leader had mentally shut down at the scale of the defeat that lay before them.  She repeated using a name that she knew would grab his attention.

"Littlefoot?"

Littlefoot seemed to shiver for a moment as he slowly began to turn around.  It was only then that she noticed that Ruby was behind him and had also been trying to reach him.  Such were the depths of Littlefoot's despair that only now he was aware of his friends.  Finally the brown fast biter's tear-filled eyes looked into her own.

"Littlefoot, we need to decide right now.  Do we retreat or do we end this?  The other entrance is open, but our time is running out."

Littlefoot opened his mouth in shock at this as he looked down in stunned realization.  This was it.  Life and death.  Honor and expediency.  Living another day or dying with one's family.  They were all faced with the most horrible of choices.  If they all died here then no one would even remember their names, but if they escaped without defending those whom they loved then would they be worthy of survival?  Did they even really have a chance to save the valley anymore anyway?

"I say that we stand and fight."

All of their eyes turned to Breeze, who had a resolute expression on her face.  For his part Spike nuzzled his friend and nodded his approval of her words.  He didn't need words to convey the depths of his love for his former home.

"We should not leave behind our mommies and daddies!  Oh, no, no, no!"

Ducky then took her place beside Spike.  She would fight beside her brother, no matter the costs.

"My mommy and daddy are here and I plan to fight beside them!"  Chomper exclaimed.

"My mom and dad are helping people they don't know."  Ruby affirmed.  "Who would I be if I didn't help people that I do know?"

Taunt nodded his head as he continued to comfort Cera.  "I say that we end this today.  Skytail sacrificed himself because he believed in all of us.  I will not tarnish his memory by turning tail and running."

Littlefoot frowned grimly.  "None of us are running.  We have to end this today.  We have to save whoever we can."

Cera nodded.  That was the spirit.  "Then give the order, Seeker."

In that instant Littlefoot seemed to come back to his senses.  The battle was more than likely lost and he had been crushed with the burden of what to do now that the safety of his pack was contrary to his mission.  However, they had all made the choice for him.  Between the choices of retreat and death, they had all chosen death.  Now that they no longer had any hope of survival in their minds this meant that they could do anything without fear.  Calin could take nothing from them that they were not offering up anyway.  A familiar lesson rang in Littlefoot's head at that moment.

Beware the sharptooth who has nothing to lose.

Littlefoot frowned with determination.  He knew what they had to do.

"Alright, everyone!  Let's fight them until we can't!"

The entire pack ran down from the rock wall with tremendous speed as Littlefoot continued to shout out orders.  The pack doubted that they would survive what lay ahead but they were resolved to take as many of the enemy out with them.  If they were going to die today, they would make sure that they had plenty of company.

......

Shit!  That was too close!

Volant shifted to the right as the sharptooth flyer barely missed ripping into her wing.  She had no idea where this second wave of flyers had come from but they much more numerous than the defenders that joined her in the sky.  What had initially looked like a victory had quickly degraded into a rout in the making.

She swerved to her left in order to dodge an attack from another flyer that approached her from below.  She frowned as she realized what the enemy's strategy was.

They're attacking in pairs!  One to distract and another to press the attack!

With this knowledge in her head, she realized that their current situation was untenable.  If they continued to defend from outside of the valley then they would very quickly be overwhelmed by the superior force.  However, a retreat to the valley would entail risk to the valley residents and the flyer messengers, including her own children.  However she was now left with little choice.  They had to retreat and regroup otherwise there would be no defenders left in the air.  With great reluctance, she gave the order to retreat.

Caw!

......

"To your left, dear!"

At his mate's words Grandpa Longneck whipped his tail with a thunderous crack at the offending fast biter.  As the crumpled body of the predator went flying into the rock wall with great speed, a resounding crack confirmed that it was no longer a threat.  That was the third fast biter that they had killed on this day.

However, it clearly wasn't enough.

For every fast biter they had stopped several more sprinted into the valley's interior.  There was no doubt now that the weaker residents of the valley were vulnerable to the terrible attack.  The defense of the valley had failed.  Now it was simply a matter of limiting the damage.  Even if the valley did survive then some of its residents would not.

"Dear, look out!"

Grandpa Longneck bellowed in pain.  A terribly stabbing sensation erupted from his abdomen as a terrible ripping sound reached his ears.  In the seconds that followed he could not move or think.  The pain was too much.  A searing agony that destroyed all reason and sense.  It was only when a familiar voice reached his ears that he regained some measure of awareness.

"Grandpa!  No!!!"

With blurry vision the massive longneck looked towards where the voice had arisen.  A small fast biter stood there.  He felt that he should recognize this predator for some reason, but the pain was making thinking rather hard.  The fast biter's features were distinctly brown with a very prominent crest of crimson red on his head.  A color that matched the ground around him.  His pain-addled mind tried to make sense of that.

Red... Why is the ground red?

That was when he realized the origin of the red substance on the ground.  

It was blood.  His blood.

It was only then that he noticed that the brown fast biter, his grandson, was approaching him with a pointed stick.  This filled the longneck with more than a little confusion.

"Littlefoot... Why..."

Without warning Littlefoot threw his spear with great accuracy and Grandpa looked with great confusion at where it seemed to have landed.  It appeared to have embedded itself in his abdomen, but yet the spear did not cause any additional pain.  A most odd finding.  However, the mystery soon resolved itself when a fast biter fell off of his side with a resounding thud, with the spear embedded in the fiend's belly.  Littlefoot and his friends quickly dispatched the attacker with multiple stabs.

It was only then that Grandpa Longneck got a good look at his abdomen.

The fast biter had landed towards the top of his abdomen and rode down the longneck's side, causing a massive tear in his body.  The smell of blood and viscera was overwhelming as his ripped abdominal muscles greeted his sight.  He had been ripped open.  He had only been spared disembowelment by the smallest of margins.  However, the significance of his injury was immediately clear to the longneck and everyone else present.

It appears today might be my last...

"Dear!"

He turned his head with a pained expression as his mate touched his neck with hers.  As he felt her racing heartbeat against his body the pain seemed to ebb away, simply to be replaced with a sense of loss.  At best his mate would be left alone after this day and at worse they would join one another in death.  It was then that the panicked voice of Littlefoot reached his ears again.

"Grandpa!  You have to lay down!  Maybe one of the rainbowfaces..."

With a pained groan, the longneck shook his head.  "No, Littlefoot.  The valley comes first."

Littlefoot looked to be at the verge of tears as he approached his grandfather.  His friends stayed behind as Chomper seemed to be barking out orders of some kind.  After a few moments, only Ruby and a fast biter that Grandpa remembered was named Swift remained on the scene as they began to approach Littlefoot from behind.  Knowing that his grandson's friends were going to make the moment between grandfather and grandson short, he nuzzled his son and gave him a sad smile.

"Your dad is by the other entrance, Littlefoot.  That is where we will be going.  Help your friends drive the enemy in that direction."

His grandson looked up with a pained expression.  "Grandpa..."

Grandpa Longneck teared up at this, but he held firm.  "Go, Littlefoot!  I will be alright!"  As if to prove his point he began to move forward despite his grievous injury.  "The best way that you can help me is to help the valley!"

Littlefoot teared up at this.  "Alright, grandpa!  I will send them your way!"  He then turned and rejoined his two friends as they prepared to follow the enemy into the valley.  Before he did so, however, he shouted one last thing to his grandfather.  "I love you, Grandpa...  Grandma... stay safe..."

As his grandson disappeared into the thick foliage of the valley, he could hear the muffled cries of his mate against his neck.

"You're a terrible liar."

Grandpa smiled a sad smile.

"I know, dear... But I still have some fight left in me."

His mate looked at him with a serious expression as she willed her tears away.  

"Good.  But don't think that you're dying without me!"  Her voice betrayed her emotion, but each knew that they had no choice but to carry on and fight the battle that had been given to them.  "Let's show the sharpteeth how the valley fights!"

......

Guido looked at Valaria with a distressed expression as the longnecks began to walk in the direction of the Hidden Canyon entrance.  Each of them had heard the order to retreat from Volant and each of them remembered her orders to stay put if the sharptooth flyers got into the valley, but these developments were not anticipated.  The defensive line had been broken and with the threehorns being forced to maintain their line in case Red Claw decided to attack, this meant that the valley's best fighters would be unaware of the threat inside the valley's walls.  That is, unless someone told the defenders in the Hidden Canyon entrance.

"We have to tell Bron!  The longnecks won't get there in time, but we can!"

Valaria appraised Guido with an agreeing expression.  "You took the words right out of my beak."  She then seemed to age several years in one moment as she took on a deeply contemplative expression.  "You fly low and I will fly high... hopefully one of us will make it..."

Guido gulped.  This was truly it.  The battle had come to them and now they were in mortal peril.  However, Guido knew that he would not fail the valley.  If Petrie could risk all for the good of his friends, then so could he.  With a final glance at the aerial battle in the distance, he gave encouraging words to his friend.

"May the winds guide you, Valaria."

Valaria smiled a radiant smile.  

"You as well, Guido."

It would be the final words that they would ever say to one another.

......

"You know, Petrie.  I don't think that Thud or... what was his name again?"

Petrie smiled at Flap's momentary lapse of memory.  It was obvious that she had more important things to do than to catalog all of the various sharpteeth that her brother had befriended in his travels.

"That would be Leap."  Petrie answered.

Flap nodded at this.  "Alright...  Well I don't think Thud or Leap are really helping the camouflage situation.  Do you?"

Petrie considered the situation for a moment before realizing that his sister was correct.

"Thud?  Me think you should go back to entrance.  You not hidden like hidden runners."

The green fast biter paused for a moment before nodding.  With a firm pat on the shoulder he directed Leap to join him as well.  They could always enter the fray if the hidden runners needed backup, but they would be more of a hindrance than a help when it came to surprise attacks.  In silence, they moved back into the valley from the Hidden Canyon entrance.  From there they would reinforce the defense provided by Bron and Chomper's parents.

"Petrie!"

Petrie nearly jumped at the exclamation.  A lull had arrived at the Hidden Canyon after the retreat of the fast biters and the sudden interruption by the two flyers was the first action that had occurred in several moments.  

The implications of having his two of his brother's join him were immediately apparent in his mind.  They were the backup messengers, which were only to be used if communications broke down between the two entrances.  Brother was supposed to be at midway point.  This not be good!  With an agitated voice, he went straight to the heart of the matter.

"Brothers!  Why you fly to Petrie?  Other entrance okay?"

The closest of his two brothers, a light colored flyer named Cloud, spoke in a hoarse voice.  That was the first time that Petrie noticed that he was out of breath.  His brothers must have flown as fast as their wings would carry them.

"We don't know!  Mother gave an alert call..."  

Concern dominated Petrie's expression at hearing this news.  He had not heard the alert call from his position in the ravine so this was the first time that he had heard that the flyers were in battle.  Had his duties not demanded his presence here then he would be out there assisting his mother.  But his concern soon turned into trepidation at the next words out of his brother's beak.

"Then we heard an alert call from the threehorns, but we have not heard from sis or Guido..."

Petrie's mind nearly broke at this news.  This could only mean one of two things.  Either the alert call was called off and no messengers were sent out to warn the other entrance, which did not seem likely as his brothers had not heard the all clear... Or the messengers were unable to send out the warning...

A choked gasp from Flap indicated that his sister had reached the same horrifying conclusion as well, though Petrie was too fixated on his own thoughts at that moment to dwell on Flap's emotional state.

Guido... Valaria...  Petrie's expression turned to one of rage.  His beloved sister and his best friend might very well have been fighting for their lives in the sky above because of the damned sharptooth flyers.  Despite his assigned duty to the Hidden Canyon, he would not allow himself to sit by while his friends fought alone.  No...  He would get to the bottom of this.

"Riser... Cloud... stay here and be messenger for Hidden Canyon..." He quickly ordered his brothers as he turned towards his sister.  "...Flap, follow me!  We got to help Valaria and Guido!"

As the flyers departed quickly over the rock wall, they did not hear Dein growl his concerns to his mate.

"I guess that Spotter forgot that he was the only one here that can speak both languages."

He then turned towards Bron who, based upon his concerned expression, must have come to the same conclusion.  It would be difficult to coordinate an effective defense without a translator.  Thankfully, but as yet unknown to the assembled dinosaurs, they had several dozen potential translators to fill that job.

"Need a translator, huh?"

Dein looked down at the small green feathered dinosaur.  It was one of the hidden runners.

"You can speak both?"  Dein spoke with incredulity, but he soon realized the stupidity of being surprised of this discovery.  After all, many omnivores could speak both out of necessity, so why not hidden runners.  With that in mind he spoke again and followed the sharptooth tradition of knowing who your allies were.  "What is your name, hidden runner?"

The hidden runner seemed to puff out her chest in a prideful way before answering.  

"I am Ignis, the daughter of the great leader."  She then looked at the poor longneck who was obviously deeply confused by the sudden turn of events.  "Now let's talk to the longneck so that he knows what is going on."

......

Calin rushed through the underbrush with a wide grin on his face.  They had finally entered the valley!  Now they would have the opportunity to put Red Claw's diabolical plan into operation.

"Look!  Swimmers!"

Calin frowned at the exclamation from his deputy.  Around the large stream in the center of the valley stood nearly a dozen adult swimmers.  They appeared to be gazing into the water, but then quickly shifted into a defensive position as they fast biters were discovered.  At first the logistics of having defenders stay behind in the valley seemed quite foolish from Calin's perspective, but then he realized what they were probably doing.

Ah!  They must have been looking for bellydraggers.  A shame we don't have a few of those...  they would have come in handy!  His face then contorted with concentration as he considered their next move.  He had to give his forced orders soon otherwise the would begin to attack targets of opportunity.  Now was not the time for that...

"Chase them into the water, but do not press the attack!"  Upon hearing groans of protests from his group, he continued.  "We are to attack the other entrance from behind!  We can't do that if we are bogged down in the middle of the valley!  Now come on!"

With terrible efficiency the predators advanced upon the helpless swimmers.

......

"Everyone, retreat!"

This was exactly what Ura was concerned about.  Though she could not fault the strategy of searching for bellydraggers coming into the valley from its water supplies, this mission did have one drawback: it weakened their defensive lines.  Now fast biters had apparently entered in the valley.  Their worst fears had been realized.

As her sister followed her into the water, she could hear the others follow as well.  This was their best strategy in fighting a horde of fast biters.  On open lab the swimmers were not particularly fast, strong, or brave, but in the water they had far more options.  With that in mind she barked out orders for the others.

"If they try to come in the water, drown them!  They are not the swimmers here!  We are!"

This seemed to calm some of the frayed nerves of the panicking swimmers as most of them turned towards the predators as they approached the water's edge.  It was a show of strength that even a dumb sharptooth could understand.  If they wanted the swimmers' meat then they would have to fight for it.  They were in their element now.

Much to Ura's surprise, however, the fast biters then turned and continued into the valley.  They were ignoring the swimmers and heading towards the north.

"Yeah!  Retreat, you cowards!"

"Die in a dung pit, murderers!"

Ura did not join in the euphoric enthusiasm of her kind after seeing this display.  This was too easy.  Far too easy.  The fast biters must have been after something else entirely.  That was when she noticed the direction that they were taking and considered the ramifications.  A terrible thought entered her mind.

Oh no!  They are heading towards the Secret Caverns!

......

"Ha!  What do we have here?"

Valaria flapped her wings as hard as she could.  She and Guido had attempted to fly out and warn the other entrance, but the aerial battle had now moved into the valley itself.  It was only a matter of time until they were discovered.

And now that time had come.

"Come closer, kid!  I don't bite!"

Valaria continued to fly as the sharptooth flyer's unintelligible taunts came closer and closer.  Despite her best efforts she simply couldn't match his speed or maneuverability.  Worse yet, it seemed that enemy flyers were coming from all directions, whereas her mother and the others were nowhere to be seen.  Had they been wiped out?  Was she about to join in her mother's fate?  Terror flooded the flyer as she heard a yell from below.

"Hang on, Valaria!  I can..."

Choking back a panicked sob, she interrupted her friend.

"Don't you dare, Guido!"  Guido was a better glider than a flyer and in any case he would be useless against what she was facing.  "Just go warn the Hidden Canyon!  Ahhh!!!!"

A terrible pain exploded through her wing as the flyer's claws ripped into her delicate flesh.  The sound of shredding flesh and the wetness of warm blood greeted her perception as her entire body spasmed in pain.  As she thrashed about under the powerful grip of the predator, she could feel his breath upon her neck.  His flapping was the only thing keeping his prey airborne as his talons compressed her chest with tremendous force.  She knew in that moment that her brief life had come to an end.  The valley may survive in the end but she would not be part of it.

"Valaria!  No!!!"

Valaria barely heard Guido's grief-stricken yell.  It seemed so far away somehow.  As if someone was speaking to her through a tremendous cloud.  In fact, everything felt that way.  Her breathing... her pain... her awareness...  it all seemed to be fading away.  As if she were about to fall asleep.  It was then that she had her final thought.

I'm sorry momma...  I tried... I tried so hard...

She never felt the bite which decapitated her.

......

Guido stared at the scene in shock.  A moment before Valaria had been alive... flying.  He had grown quite attached to Petrie's siblings after Petrie and his friends had been presumed dead and though Valaria was Petrie's sister, she had been like a sister to him.  A flyer who would never leave you without making you smile.  A flyer whose calm reasoning had been instrumental in preparing the defenses for the flyers.  A natural leader in the making, just like her mom.  Now she was gone.  No time for a goodbye.  No time to tell her what she had meant to him and everyone else.  Valaria was no more.

In his mind Guido knew that he had to carry on... that he had to deliver his message.  It was Valaria's last order.  It was the only thing that she could do for her now.  With tears in his eyes and trembling wings, he again took to the air.

Minutes passed as Guido flew on.  

Flyers could be seen everywhere, engaged in combat and fleeing.  The sharptooth flyers were well on their way to establishing aerial control over the valley.  The only reason why he yet lived was because he was too insignificant to be noticed.  But Guido couldn't focus on any of that.  One of his best friends had just died before his eyes.  Her head bitted off and body discarded.  It was a terrible image that would haunt him for the rest of his life.

"Guido!"

He could almost still hear her voice.  I'm so sorry, Valaria...

"Guido!"

Guido looked up.  That wasn't a memory!  It was Petrie!  Now the grim task fell upon him to deliver the news to his best friend.  In despair and exhaustion he plummeted to the rock wall and landed with a thud.  Petrie and Flap were upon him in mere moments.  Petrie's voice did not hide his concern.

"Guido, what in the hell happened!"  Petrie seemed to look him up and down for a split second.  "Where is Valaria?"

Guido shook with a sob as he turned his gaze to look into Petrie's eyes.  His expression brokered no confusion on what had occurred as Flap broke down into tears.  Petrie, for his part, seemed to remain in control as his sharptooth physique gave little away, but Guido could see the rage building in Petrie's eyes.

"How?"  Petrie asked.  His deep pain was apparent in his voice.

Guido tried to speak, but only a pained sob came out.  It was only on the third try that he was able to speak coherently.

"Valaria dead!"  Guido finally confirmed verbally what they all knew.  "Sharptooth flyer kill her!  Sharpteeth flyers attack other flyers!  Fast biters in the valley!"

Petrie reared back at this onslaught of horrible information.  Based upon what had occurred in the Haven Valley, he had assumed the battle was going well, but now it seemed that the battle had actually turned against them.  Their defenses were broken through and the enemy was in the valley itself.  Guido spoke before Petrie could even verbalize a response.

"Your friends are chasing the fast biters...  They will try to force them towards your entrance."

Petrie closed his eyes in a mix of concentration and emotional turmoil.  Yes, trying to force the invading force into a pincer attack by the Hidden Canyon would be the best strategy.  But Petrie couldn't shake the feeling that they were all being played for fools somehow.  As if his pack's response wasn't playing into the enemy's hands.  But in this terrible moment he knew that he had little choice but to take the logical course of action.  Choking back his own emotion, he gave his distraught sister and Guido his instructions.

"Flap?  Guido?"  Both were slow to respond, but they eventually looked his way.  Both were still trapped in the throes of grief, but he had little choice but to force them to carry on.  "Go to Hidden Canyon and let them know what happened."

Guido interjected in a mix of grief and confusion.  "And what will you do?"  The small teal flyer was obviously fearful of losing another friend today.  Petrie answered immediately.

"Me will cover your retreat.  Now go!"

As his sister and dear friend took to the skies, Petrie looked to the skies in front of him.  The sharptooth flyers were the only flyers that could be seen as the valley flyers had either retreated or...  Petrie couldn't finish that thought.  There would be time to mourn after the battle was over, but now was the time to fight.  There were times when he lamented his sharptooth instincts, but now was not one of those times.  He would do whatever was necessary.

As if on cue, two sharptooth flyers began to head in the direction that his companions had traveled.  Petrie frowned in determination as he took to the skies in one swift burst of energy.

"If it a fight you want then Petrie give it to you!"

......

The swimmers having been sidelined, Calin and his nearly thirty comrades continued their run through the valley.  With the exceptions of a few of the valley's smallest residents, the fast biters had not stopped to engage into battles.  They had simply done their best to make their presence known and struck down a few residents in order to strike terror into the valley.

First crush their morale, then crush them!

Calin couldn't help but smile.  With the valley in a panic this would make what would follow all the more easy to accomplish.  Now all that they would need to do is to loop back towards the Hidden Canyon entrance and then...

Wait!  What is that smell?

The other fast biters looked amongst themselves in confusion as their leader stopped suddenly.  They had not been fully briefed on Red Claw's master plan and thus only Calin and his deputies were reacting with confidence.  The surest way to ensure that the underlings followed orders without question was to make them dependent on their leaders for guidance.  If he had given everyone the orders then they could have implemented their own interpretation.  However, Calin's sudden stop surprised even his deputies, which lead to one of them swallowing his fear and addressing his leader.

"Sir?  What is it?"

Calin smiled.  "Children... They hid their children in those caves..."

The others looked at the cave entrances in surprise.  It was a reasonable choice to hide the children in one location, but it also had a major disadvantage.

It made it easier to kill them all.

Calin had not prepared for this possibility.  He had assumed that the children would be protected very well and that they would simple have to wait to massacre them when the two-footers and adult fast biters entered the valley en masse.  But now the valley had given him a prime opportunity.  An opportunity to kill the valley's morale in one swift move.  Even though it went against their orders, Calin simply couldn't pass this up.

"Arvil?"  As his deputy went to Calin's side, he continued.  "Send a few fast biters into the caves... If the parents are distracted for their children then that will make our job all that much easier."

Without a word, Arvil gestured to three of his comrades and then sprinted into the open cave.  The invasion of the valley was looking like an unparalleled success.  But he still had a mission to complete.

"Alright, everyone!  Now we need to head to the Hidden Canyon and..."

The sound of thundering feet interrupted Calin's words as the massive forms of two longnecks and innumerable swimmers came into view.  He could recognize one of the longnecks as one that they had injured in their initial assault.  Normally the appearance of three longnecks would be an unwelcome development, but in light of what he was planning this worked out quite well.

"This is the end of the line for you, Calin!"

Calin turned just in time to see one of his followers be struck down by a spear, which caused the speaker of the threat to yell at his own forces.

"Hold your sticks, runners!"

Beside Littlefoot was a large collection of hidden runners, each one donning the same vines that the members of Seeker's pack were wearing and holding the same spears.  Calin could not have known it at the time, but the unexpected attack had led to half of the hidden runners assisting the leaf-eaters in defending the valley.  All Calin could see were the two hidden runners that had disappeared into the Secret Caverns and the masses of them that had congregated around his forces.

Calin did not drop his smile.  Hidden runners, longnecks, swimmers, and Seeker's pack... perfect!  Surely there aren't many left defending the Hidden Canyon now! vvv The tan fast biter licked his lips in anticipation.  These developments were unexpected but they certainly worked into his advantage.  He gave his orders with a sense of rising euphoria.

"Now, everyone!"

As Calin's pack sprinted away from the advancing dinosaurs, both leaf-eaters and Seeker's pack gave chase.  None of the valley dinosaurs realized that they had fallen right into Red Claw's trap.

......

"Ha!  Look Kralle!  This little peon wants to play!"

Kralle smiled at his companion's taunt.  After driving back the adult flyers into the protective walls of the valley, the sharptooth flyers had little resistance in the vicinity of the rock wall.  They had been ready to press the fight into the valley's interior when the first young flyer had come by.  Kralle had quickly dealt with the puny specimen and dropped her pitiful body to the ground below.  Her sweet blood still lingered in his mouth.  Now it seemed that another flyer was asking for similar treatment.

Without saying a word to his companion, he flapped his wings and adjusted his course to intercept the pathetic upstart.  That was when another voice called out to him.

"Don't even think about it!  He is mine!"

Kralle stopped his forward progress at the other flyer's command.  It was not wise to challenge Sierra.

......

Petrie dropped several feet in shock at seeing the pale flyer appear between him and the other flyers.  This was a flyer that he had hoped to never see again.  A flyer that had cause him nothing but misery.

"Well... So we meet again Sandstorm."

Petrie adjusted his flight pattern, which was met by a similar change in direction by Sierra.  Before either knew it each of them were circling the other in a wide arc.  It would take a shout by one for the other to hear, but neither seemed ready to close the distance.  Petrie out of fear and Sierra out of an emotion that seemed disturbing coming from him.

Curiosity.

"You tricked us!  Everything that you did was a lie.  Every promise... every decision..."

Petrie swallowed as he prepared to speak to the specter of insanity that was flying in pace with him.

"Yes.  Me trick you all.  Now you know what it be like!"

Sierra seethed.  For a moment Petrie expected the flyer to press the attack, but he still held his place in the circle.  This actually unnerved the small flyer more than an attack would.

"Do you like what we have done to this place, Sandstorm?"

Petrie turned with surprise at the voice from behind him.  It was Rinkus.  In Petrie's distracted state Rinkus had joined into the foreboding circling of flyers.  Quickly adjusting his flight path, Petrie changed course as the two fiends followed close behind.  The circling had now turned into a chase.  A chase that Petrie could not allow them to win.

"We have destroyed your precious valley.  The flyers have fled in terror...  The land-walkers have met our fast biters...  The natural order is righting itself.  It is a shame that you were too blind to see that."

Petrie seethed at the flyer's insinuation as he spoke a taunt of his own.

"Natural order?  Nothing be natural if Red Claw behind it!"

Petrie quickly dived into the ravine below in order to gain speed then with a terrible twisting motion he made a sharp turn so that he was flying in the opposite direction that he had been flying previously.  He had hoped to gain some distance on the two predators, but the voice that echoed in his ears confirmed that he had not been quite as successful as he had hoped.  They were still gaining on him.

"Oh?"  It was Sierra's voice.  "The strong crush the weak seems like the natural way to me, kid!"

Petrie grunted with exertion as he struggled to gain speed.  He had wasted much of his potential energy by diving from a great height.  The fact that the duo was still gaining on him did not bode well.  Still he had one chance that he could take...

"You think you strong?  You nothing without help!"  Petrie mocked as he continued to flap with all of his might.  "Me trick you easy, just like you trick Uncle Pterano!"

He heard sputtering from the flyer.  Yes... this working...  Petrie then began to clutch the orange plant that he held in his talons.  Get closer Sierra...

"What do you know about him?!"  Sierra raged.  

Petrie smiled as he could hear the wing beats of the two flyers get closer and closer.  He would only have one chance at this and he would have to time it masterfully.  The longer he could distract them the better.

"You not figure it out already?"  He could hear the flapping of the flyers behind him.  They were quickly advancing on him.  "Me know things only leaf-eaters know.  Me know you history with uncle.  Me know all your secrets, but you not know mine!"

An enraged shriek came from behind him.  "I know that you are about to be dead!  That is all that I need to know."

Petrie could now feel the wing beats near him.  All that he needed was a momentary distraction to make his move.  With that in mind he spoke to the fiend one last time.

"Me never told you my real name..."

The breathing of the flyer could be heard behind him as he advanced through the ravine.  Petrie could see the shadow of the flyer advance towards his own on the ground below.  It was only a matter of moments.  As soon as he saw the flyer's shadow project its talons from its body, Petrie made his move.

"Me Petrie!"

In a swift movement that pushed his body to the limit, Petrie rolled in the air and blindly struck out his talons towards the flyer which had been pursuing him.  Without warning a blinding cascade of orange mist enveloped the air between them, covering them both in the noxious cloud.  It was at that moment that the pain began to register in the flyer's mind.

"Ahhh!!!"

Petrie's pain scream echoed across the ravine as Sierra's shriek nearly deafened the flyer.  Petrie couldn't think.  He couldn't speak.  He couldn't even move due to the terrible pain the inundated his eyes and face.  It was only when he saw the ground approaching that he began to flap his wings wildly in a desperate attempt to cushion the coming crash.

......

Ruby sprinted beside Littlefoot as they chased the fast biters through the valley.  With longnecks on either side of the pack and swimmers backing up the large force, the fast biters were wisely not engaging them in battle.  However, something was eating at Ruby's mind.  For some reason that she couldn't place it all seemed too easy.

"Something isn't right here!"

Littlefoot gave a slight glance in Ruby's direction as she made her feelings known.  Yet he continued leading the others towards Calin's pack.  He gave no other indication that he had heard her, but that was to be expected.  He was the leader and had to limit himself to giving orders in the heat of the moment.  He could not allow himself to confuse the others through useless chatter.

The mass of dinosaurs soon passed through the thick forest and entered into the Dark Ridge, where the overhanging bluffs of the rock wall cast shadows on the surrounding land.  This was their cue that they were approaching the Hidden Canyon entrance.  Soon they would drive the enemy towards Chomper's parents.  Then it would be a matter of pursuing them and finishing the job.  Littlefoot's orders were to be expected, but were nonetheless necessary.

"Chase them out of the valley!  We must show no mercy here!"

Grandma Longneck was the first to speak.

"But Chomper's parents will be in the way!"

Littlefoot nodded.  "I will tell them to let us through!"  The brown fast biter then sucked down a breath.  He had not run like this is quite a while.  "But first we need to catch them in our trap!"

......

Calin smiled.  This was going just as he had planned.  The entrance to the Hidden Canyon was beginning to come into view as they sprinted towards the narrow opening in the rock wall.  The large leaf-eaters would only be able to enter one at a time and that would ensure their escape.

Then their plan could fall into place.

Calin gave the order to proceed.  "Advance into the Hidden Canyon!  All is going to plan!

In a few short moments the pack approached the well-hidden passage in the rock wall.  Had Calin not been here then the others would have most likely missed it.  Red Claw had entered it once before and had told Calin and his deputies.  Only Red Claw's inability to fight the combined forces of the valley prevented an attack on its residents, but now he had the forces to do the job.  Now the valley would see how useless their so-called 'secret passages' were.

Calin elicited an excited yelp as they entered the narrow crevice.  He couldn't believe how well things were going.  He watched as several of his deputies proceeded to run in front of him into the canyon beyond.  Everything was perfect.

Roar!

Calin watched in horror as two of his deputies were suddenly picked up by the massive jaws of two predators that he had hoped to not see again.  The sounds of running feet stopped as the pack looked in horror at the fate of their two comrades.  As if to punctuate their situation, Dein and Terri threw the crushed fast biters in front of the pack.

Thud

Calin looked back at his packmates.  Maybe if they had enough time they could find another path out.  That would not fit into Red Claw's plans but at least they could survive for another day.  Perhaps...

"Attack!"

Screams rose from the back of the pack as Calin could see spears fall from the sky.  No casualties could be seen from his vantage point, but the sounds of gurgling and pained screeches hinted at what was occurring.  This was punctuated as a massive tail came into view and the bodies of several of his comrades were hurled into the air.  They had been caught in a pincer attack.  The pack was prepared for an attack by smaller forces, but not from Red Claw's own kind.  Nonetheless, racing the sharpteeth out of the valley seemed as good of an option as any.  

Or else there would not be a pack left to lead.

"To the Hidden Canyon!  It is our only chance!"

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Now for the continuation...


The pack cheered as their spears tore into their enemies.  Thus far they had no casualties while the enemy had lost at five of their number.  Between the combined rage of Littlefoot's father and grandmother and the ingenuity of his pack, Calin had been met with unexpected force.  Before they could complete the massacre, however, Calin's fast biters began to run headlong into the Hidden Canyon.  Between the valley and Chomper's parents it seemed that they had chosen the two two-footers.

Littlefoot considered his forces.  Bron and grandma looked exhausted from their run but were in good shape, whereas the hidden runners were just now catching up with the other dinosaurs.  His grandfather on the other hand...

Littlefoot frowned.  He had joined Grandma from where he had been resting by the rock wall.  The fact that he couldn't join in the chase of the fast biters poke volumes.  His grandfather was hurt very badly.  But yet he knew that Grandpa would fight beside Grandma now no matter what.  He would not be separated from her no matter what it would cost himself.

Littlefoot closed his eyes.  Ruby would do no less for me...  I will fight beside you Grandpa.  The valley stands with you.

Littlefoot opened his eyes to see Ruby staring within their watery depths.  Her look spoke volumes.  I am with you in this.  Let's finish the job.  He did not hesitate to do what the situation required.

"Press the attack!  Follow them into the canyon!"

With no delay, the combined force of leaf-eater and sharptooth emerged through the entrance in order to chase the traumatized survivors of Dein and Terri's rampage. As he emerged from the rocky entryway, he had to fight in order to regain his balance on the slick ground.  The blood of the fallen had painted the entryway red.  He could even hear the stumbling footsteps of the rest of his pack as they swerved to avoid the carcasses that littered the ground.  It was a morbid sight that both horrified and excited him.

Entering the Hidden Canyon, Littlefoot could see the narrow chasm in front of him.  The stream was small, yet overflowing with the plentiful snowmelt as the vegetation in the canyon still offered some hope of security for those wishing to hide.

Littlefoot smiled as the pack quickly began to gain on the fast biters.  Several of them had moved to the sides of the canyon in a feeble attempt to hide from their forces.  This would prove futile however with their trusted hidden runners available to keep watch in the hidden crevices of the Hidden Canyon.  Any attempt to outflank them would come to naught.

That was when the realization came to him.  A realization that stopped him dead.

Most of the hidden runners must have helped them retake the valley.  They could not expect much reinforcement in the canyon.

"Crap!  Everyone retreat!  It's a trap!"

The pack stopped as the longnecks and hidden runners followed suit.  However, much to Littlefoot's dismay, the rest of the leaf-eaters continued to keep chase.  They were blinded by rage for the defilers of the valley.  Ruby was the next to sound the alarm.

"No!  Stop!  We have to..."

Her voice was soon interrupted by the sounds of thundering feet coming from in front of the pack.  The thundering feet soon became a crescendo as the trees in front of the advancing swimmers were trampled to the ground.  It was only then that the pack realized the depths of their misfortune.

Standing in front of them was Red Claw and two other two footers.

"Retreat!"  Came the refrain of one of the swimmers as they struggled to get away from the surprise threat.  This was echoed by the others as they turned to retreat back into the valley.

Only to see the majority of Calin's pack blocking the entrance in front of Chomper's parents.  Worse yet was the sight that greeted them at the front of the pack.

Three adults fast biters with a familiar fast biter leading the group.

"As you can see, Seeker.  I have a surprise of my own."

Littlefoot looked at each of his pack in turn as the scale of their miscalculation came into focus.  They were now caught in the very trap that they had attempted to catch Calin's pack within.  They were stuck in the Hidden Canyon and surrounded on all sides.  They all knew what this would mean for them.

Even if they won the battle, life would not go on for all of them.  The battle for the valley was about to exact its toll.

......

"You fiend!  I will die before I let you hurt my son!"

Petrie came to gradually as the pain of his terrible crash began to register in his mind.  That was not as bad as the pain from the orange death, however, which reached his mind a split second later.

"Urgh..."

"Petrie!  Are you alright?  Ahh!!!"

The sound of scuffling could be heard as Petrie struggled to regain consciousness.  What had happened?  Momma here... me crash?  But where here?  Why everything hurt?  Why she scream?  That was when the images of the moments before greeted his mind.  Rinkus.  Sierra.  With dawning horror Petrie finally pieced together what had happened.  He had attacked Sierra with the orange death and had crashed in the process.  Which meant that his mother was being attacked by...

"Momma!"

Petrie fought through the pain as he struggled to his feet.  It was only then that he opened his eyes and could see the horrific scene before him.

His mother stood with both wings raised in a protective posture around her son.  But she was not like he remembered her.  Her wings were covered in streaks of blood from numerous large gashes that scoured her figure.  Her worst injury that was immediately visible was a cut on her neck that appeared to be hemorrhaging blood at an alarming rate.  

Petrie turned his gaze to the flyer she was confronting and shivered with rage.

Sierra stood with his eyes fixed upon his mother.  He had a terrible gash on his head and numerous minor wounds, but that was not what caught Petrie's attention.

His right wing was completely shredded.  Sierra would never fly again.  That was a death sentence for a flyer.

Growl...

"Ahhh!!!"

Petrie watched in horror as Sierra charged with feral intensity and ripped into his mother's right wing.  With a sudden surge of energy that could only come from rage, he lifted the flyer with his shredded wing and propelled her into the rock wall.  Petrie was helpless to watch as Volant hit the wall with a sickening thud and then fall unconscious to the ground.  His mother was still.

Petrie could only stare at his mother's still body with horror.  No words were necessary, nor would they do any good.  For all Petrie knew his mother could never wake up.  He had already lost a sister today and now his mother had fallen as well.  Petrie shook in unrestrained rage.  If it meant the end of Sierra then he would gladly be the third of his family to fall.

"Hurgh..."  Sierra grunted in a mixture of pain and rage.  "You have killed me, flyer!  Even if I live through this then my own will put me down!"  Sierra looked upon Petrie with a crazed expression.  "At least I gave you what you deserved you, weakling!  Did you enjoy watching your mother die?  I think it is time that you joined her."

Petrie continued to look at his mother for a moment.  All was still.  But then, just out of the corner of his eye, he could see it.  Movement.  His mother was simply incapacitated for the moment.  The family would not die tonight.  At least his mother would survive.  It was then that Petrie's shaking stopped.  

Because he had made a decision.

If it meant protecting his mother, then he was prepared to die.

"Your friend not stay with you?  Me guess he have no need of flyer who can't fly."

As expected this cause Sierra to advance on Petrie.  In light of his own betrayal of Sierra it was liberating to let the pale flyer know that Rinkus had betrayed him.  In the end the loyalty of the sharptooth flyers was just as transient as the shifting winds.  It gave Petrie a moment of joy to see pain reflected on Sierra's face.  In light of what he and his ilk had done to his family it was the least that he deserved.  With a deep sigh he looked down.

Petrie looked down at his small talons.  They were still covered in the terrible orange substance.  He had not had a chance to strike Sierra directly during his initial attack, but that was something that he was prepared to remedy now.

Even if that meant his end.

"Come at me, Sierra.  We end this now."

As Petrie watched Sierra's ragged form rush at him in a mindless charge, Petrie smiled.

"This for Valaria!"

Petrie screeched in pain as Sierra slammed into his head during his headlong charge.  As waves of terrible pain rolled over the young flyer's body, he dug his sharp talons into Sierra's soft abdomen.  The effects were nearly instant as Sierra's body began to shake violently.  Screams of pain emanated from the flyer as the orange death entered his blood.  Within mere moments the beast was helpless and left flopping as his seizure turned into back-breaking convulsions.  Gasps of pain and shock erupted from the flyer as his life slowly fled from his body.  In the end he couldn't even scream as his own body rebelled against him.

Petrie slid to the ground with little ceremony.  He could not see his injuries but the pressure in his head indicated to the flyer that they must have been severe.  The pain in his body seemed to be lifting as his consciousness was beginning to fade.  Me feel sleepy... Petrie thought to himself.  If he were to fall asleep here then he was unsure if he would ever wake up.  Maybe me see Valaria...

"Petrie...  Petrie!"

He could see the face of his mother over him suddenly.  He found that he could not speak, but he could give her a small smile.

"Petrie, stay awake!  Please stay awake!"

Despite his mother's orders, however, everything seemed to be getting too heavy.  He knew that he would lose consciousness soon and that there wasn't anything that he could do.  In the end the darkness came for us all.  At least he would not face it alone.  His gaze became fixed on the sky as his body lay prone on the ground.  He reflected that it was fitting that he would spend his last moments looking at the sky.  To a flyer the sky represented life and the promise of life.

"Petrie!"

Don't cry, mommy.  Me keep Valaria company.  The sky appeared so blue.  So clean.  It was as if the battle that was going on around him was far away.  There was nothing to be seen except blue sky and white clouds.  But that was when something entered the periphery of his vision.  There was a flyer high in the sky and he was not alone.

Uncle... You make it...  You bring flyers...

Me got Sierra for you...

You get Rinkus...

Don't be sad...


Then everything went black.


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I found a couple of errors I think.

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Isn't that supposed to be he?

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"I never told you my real name..."

Since Petrie is saying this, shouldn't the I be me?


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Well well well, thank you oh so very much for giving me a good reason for me to be unable to sleep tonight.  :lol

I have two theories as to what may happen following this latest development. To be safe, just in case either one of them is a future spoiler, they are in black.

First theory (if Petrie's "death" is actually a cliffhanger and he is simply unconscious for the moment): Doesn't really matter much. The battle will simply continue its course.  :p

Second theory (if Petrie actually is dead; a really sad thought for me): The battle should, of course, end with the deaths of Red Claw and Calin, but in the process, taking away the lives of the other six members (with the possible exception of Chomper), among others (because I know there will probably be others). Of course, they all know that Red Claw and Calin will die eventually. They all are willing to die for their families and if this indeed happens, as a result, the stone may not only give their lives back following the battle, their former leaf-eater bodies may also be revised.

Now I don't know if either of these (particularly the second one) are going to happen, but that's just my take.


All in all, I can't wait for the conclusion of the story. I'll be kind of sad when it's over, but then, who knows what other fanfics I might be following next?  :D


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@DarkHououmon

Thanks for the corrections.   :) I have made the necessary revisions.  The one where Petrie says "I" really should have been caught by me during my proofreading session.  :bang

@The Anonymous Person

I would say that I am glad that you enjoyed the latest chapter, but as I may have given you a sleepless night I am not sure that "enjoy" would be the correct word.  :p As for your theories, those are certainly interesting ones.  The only thing that I can tell you is that a clearer picture of the battle's toll will become apparent in the next chapter...  This chapter was tame by comparison.

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Review of chapter 68:

The chapter starts nice :) The Seven Hunters and their allied forces meet the other group of hidden runners (which leads to quite some confusion and concern in Ruby's case.)

How neat! Ignis and Harthron have reunited and the help has arrived in time :smile

Wow, the attitude of the Great Valley residents sure has changed! I would have expected them to be less welcoming towards Chomper's folks and all the hidden runners. But under these circumstances, they must be seen as powerful allies rather than a threat.

Nice reunions! :smile

What the rainbowfaces describe sounds like they're about to cause an explosion the strength of a nuclear blast...

Okay, this is utterly hillarious! :lol Ruby's parents and Littlefoot's grandparents are up to some mischief, aren't they? :smile Poor Littlefoot :D It's only good that he is a FASTbiter though his opponents are FASTrunners ^^
Shall be an interesting race after all...

... which gains the interest of several others, apparently :smile
The scene with Tricia is really cute and Topsy's pleading to Cera quiet touching. I hope it won't come that far...

Haha! Dein and his thinking about food first... :lol: The banter between everyone involved is lovely!

It's good to see that the hidden runners appreciate the vines they've been offered.
Also, it's nice to see the actual reason for Ruby's and Littlefoot's parents chasing their children :smile Lovely!

Redclaw has been spotted... the inevitable battle is approaching. Imagining myself to be a Great Valley resident is a scary picture. The emotional and psychological pressure is immense!

Redclaw's last words or Littlefoot's last words? We shall know soon... and I'm terribly excited to find out about it! :yes
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I'll post some more later, just caught up on the two chapters I had been behind on.

Dang! We've already lost a few characters! Seems Petrie might be out too, which was a thing I had been wondering this whole time. Were any of the seven hunters going to die in this? I know lots of characters are going to die, but I was mostly wondering about them. I know you won't give me an answer, but just sayin it! :p

You're keeping this battle very tense, too. Great job! It's very close right now, whith no one knowing how it's gonna turn out, yet.

The pack now thinks that it's hopeless, but they're fighting anyway! It's like you said, be afraid of a sharptooth that haa nothing to lose.

I guess I'll just end this little dump of mine by just saying there's gonna be a ton of food for whichever side that ends up winning. I already know that much! :p
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Thanks for the reviews, Ducky and Von!  :)

@ Ducky:

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Wow, the attitude of the Great Valley residents sure has changed! I would have expected them to be less welcoming towards Chomper's folks and all the hidden runners. But under these circumstances, they must be seen as powerful allies rather than a threat.

Indeed.  It helps that Whitehorn made the decision before a meeting could be held on the matter.  Even if the rest of the valley would not be completely comfortable about the situation, Whitehorn realizes that they cannot turn away their essential help.

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What the rainbowfaces describe sounds like they're about to cause an explosion the strength of a nuclear blast...

Exactly.  A few grams of antimatter would generate a blast in the kiloton-range, about the same level as a low-yield tactical nuclear weapon.

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Okay, this is utterly hillarious! dino_laugh.gif Ruby's parents and Littlefoot's grandparents are up to some mischief, aren't they? Dino_grins.gif Poor Littlefoot biggrin.gif It's only good that he is a FASTbiter though his opponents are FASTrunners ^^
Shall be an interesting race after all...

Also, it's nice to see the actual reason for Ruby's and Littlefoot's parents chasing their children Dino_grins.gif Lovely!

Yeah, both Ruby's parents and Littlefoot's grandparents are accepting of their children's choice in significant other (as they are too young for mating, obviously) though they still had to pester them a bit first.  Shorty, in particular, seems to have found the entire episode hilarious.  :lol

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Redclaw's last words or Littlefoot's last words? We shall know soon... and I'm terribly excited to find out about it! in-yes.gif

I am glad to hear it.  :) I hope that you enjoy the next chapter.

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Dang! We've already lost a few characters! Seems Petrie might be out too, which was a thing I had been wondering this whole time. Were any of the seven hunters going to die in this? I know lots of characters are going to die, but I was mostly wondering about them. I know you won't give me an answer, but just sayin it! dino_tongue.gif

Perhaps I should start a betting pool so that the fans can bet on which dinosaurs they think will die in the battle ahead.  :smile I am curious to see what everyone thinks the future probably holds for my victims... uh, I mean characters.  :smile

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You're keeping this battle very tense, too. Great job! It's very close right now, whith no one knowing how it's gonna turn out, yet.

The pack now thinks that it's hopeless, but they're fighting anyway! It's like you said, be afraid of a sharptooth that haa nothing to lose.

Yep, yep, yep!  The groups are now about evenly matched.. or they were until Redclaw and his minions arrived.  We will have to see how this situation develops.

I hope that you enjoy the next chapter.  :) I should have it posted on Sunday.


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Review of chapter 69:

Hmm, I wonder what Leap and Swift are up to... respectively what the idea behind all this is :yes

Red Claw's strategy sounds dangerous to me :unsure:

Volant has quite some dutiful children... The sight of the stampede must be intimidating...

Keeping the children busy is a good way to keep them in good spirits.
Shorty is acting very mature here. He's had to be an adult for too long to act like a child too much :yes

Splitting up might be a good idea as it might mean splitting the massive army of pursuers as well. I'm also kind of curious about Littlefoot's strategies and plans. We know that the Hidden Runners are going to inflict harm on any fastbiter entering through the Hidden Canyon and we also know that the better part of the defending residents of the Valley are protecting the main entrance. The Rainbowfaces could indeed care for the injured :)

Calin's forces have split up which is a positive developement :) However, the appearance of the sharptooth flyers is a thing to worry about as they could prevent the Great Valley Flyers from spreading news...

How effective! Spears + Orange Death + body armor = catastrophy for the attacking fastbiters. The first battle of the battle ended in a massacre of the enemy :)

The Flyers have a good plan there... It's against their nature to attack the meateaters so it must feel horrible knowing you might as well be killed...

Oh uh... this was a fake attack :unsure:  But at least force shall be met by force once Pterano arrives...

The battle has unevitably started and nobody of significance died so far. I reckon that won't last much longer though :angel
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Review of chapter 70 (that means I've caught up, right? Woohoo! :DD):

So here's the main front. Threehorns are facing a horde of fastbiters. Longnecks and other dinosaurs deal with any intruder... hopefully :p

Both Calin's and Whitehorn's plans are good. Seeker is attacking from an unknown position (he did have a plan, didn't he? :p), causing fear among the enemy. If it weren't for the stupidity of threehorns... :neutral They are working towards Calin's plan...

Well, crap... Our beloved dinosaurs are in a very precarious situation. Fighting means risking the life of those you love and live with; retreating means exposing their loved ones to certain death not to mention the shame of betraying the valley and everyone they pulled into fighting against Redclaw. Glad Seeker decided to fight. KILL 'EM ALL!!! :yes

The flyers are in big trouble too. Where's Pterano anyway?...

Looks like the first named victim might be Grandpa Longneck... :(

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Now that's a cliffhanger! :o It spoils the death of one of them or even of both... so it's a spoiler yet a cliffhanger as well. I like that although I hate to say I don't like the developments... which doesn't include your writing of course. After all, who likes the valley to fall? Yeah I sound like Guido right now... my last tribut before he dies? Who knows? :p

I have a bad feeling about Petrie engaging in battle... but it's understandable that Petrie wants to help his sister and his good friend. If it wasn't for the language skills of the Hidden Runners, Bron and Chomper's Parents would have trouble to communicate and cooperate in battle.

At first, Calin's order seems odd. After all, why not kill 'em while you can? But then again swimmers aren't as easy a catch as it seems so Calin's orders are reasonable... not to mention that he's after the kids, apparently...

Oh no! Poor, poor Valaria :cry First she almost gets killed in the RP and now she actually dies here (I wonder if the RP inspired you to use her in your fic too?) At least Guido is alright... for the time being.

The kids are still save but now the defenders have left their assigned defensive position... which means. Uh oh... :unsure:

Oh no... Petrie! Looks like he tried to get rid of Sierra using the orange death but he also hit himself...

Calin has quite some casualities but it looks like that's going to happen on the other side now :unsure:

What a brutal battle! Both Petrie and Volant are severely injured, their survival is... endangered. Sierra was abandoned by Rinkus (deserves him right!) as he gained a crippling injury. Petrie stroke him down, luckily. Now it's up to Pterano to recapture the skies :yes

Well, this chapter matches my expectation of a good battle! And still no prominent casualities (aside from Sierra, maybe) now that's likely to change! I'm scared :p
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Thanks for the review, Ducky!  :) I am glad to see that you were able to catch up on my chapters, though I am afraid the next chapter might take a while to get through at 18,000 words.  :blink:

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Keeping the children busy is a good way to keep them in good spirits.
Shorty is acting very mature here. He's had to be an adult for too long to act like a child too much in-yes.gif

Yeah, we are seeing the effects of Shorty's past on his outlook on life.  In a way from his time taking care of the small longnecks, to never fitting in with the others until he was formally adopted by Bron, to dealing with the effects of Littlefoot's change, Shorty has never really had a normal childhood.  This is a trait that he shares with Detras, which leads to some bonding between the two characters.  They will all need to be mature in order to deal with what is coming.

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The Flyers have a good plan there... It's against their nature to attack the meateaters so it must feel horrible knowing you might as well be killed...

Indeed.  The valley flyers are going against their instincts in engaging the enemy.  Part of what I wanted to demonstrate in the flyer scene is what a normal flyer (not a main character) would actually feel as they prepare to fight the enemy.  The confusion... the fear... the excitement...  All of that is part of the personal turmoil that those who engage in battle face.  

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The battle has unevitably started and nobody of significance died so far. I reckon that won't last much longer though dino_angel.gif

Quite correct.  :DD

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So here's the main front. Threehorns are facing a horde of fastbiters. Longnecks and other dinosaurs deal with any intruder... hopefully dino_tongue.gif

Both Calin's and Whitehorn's plans are good. Seeker is attacking from an unknown position (he did have a plan, didn't he? dino_tongue.gif), causing fear among the enemy. If it weren't for the stupidity of threehorns... dino_neutral.gif They are working towards Calin's plan...

Yep, Whitehorn's excellent plan (like many others in history) has been ruined by a lack of discipline in the threehorn ranks.  Had they simply stopped and not allowed an opening, then the attack could have been repulsed.  But the breaking of the line greatly changes things.  Now it will be up to the defenders in the valley to repulse the attack.  However, Calin's scheming isn't finished yet.

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Well, crap... Our beloved dinosaurs are in a very precarious situation. Fighting means risking the life of those you love and live with; retreating means exposing their loved ones to certain death not to mention the shame of betraying the valley and everyone they pulled into fighting against Redclaw. Glad Seeker decided to fight. KILL 'EM ALL!!! in-yes.gif

Yeah, Seeker's choice is (as a plot point) simultaneously obvious and difficult.  He knows that his choice will almost certainly doom his pack to destruction, but his sense of honor and duty compels him to seek the pack about their choice.  It is very telling that the rest of the pack decides to keep fighting.  They would rather die now in the valley then to die later in the Mysterious Beyond.  They have gone too far to give up now.

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Now that's a cliffhanger! ohmy.gif It spoils the death of one of them or even of both... so it's a spoiler yet a cliffhanger as well. I like that although I hate to say I don't like the developments... which doesn't include your writing of course. After all, who likes the valley to fall? Yeah I sound like Guido right now... my last tribut before he dies? Who knows? dino_tongue.gif

I have a bad feeling about Petrie engaging in battle... but it's understandable that Petrie wants to help his sister and his good friend. If it wasn't for the language skills of the Hidden Runners, Bron and Chomper's Parents would have trouble to communicate and cooperate in battle.

Yeah, Petrie's choice is a bit rash, but understandable considering that he just heard about his sister's death.  Thankfully the hidden runners are there to relay orders.

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At first, Calin's order seems odd. After all, why not kill 'em while you can? But then again swimmers aren't as easy a catch as it seems so Calin's orders are reasonable... not to mention that he's after the kids, apparently...

The kids are a desirable distraction as that will confuse and disrupt the adults, or so Calin hopes.  Notice how he only uses a few fastbiters on that mission.

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Oh no! Poor, poor Valaria dino_sad.gif First she almost gets killed in the RP and now she actually dies here (I wonder if the RP inspired you to use her in your fic too?) At least Guido is alright... for the time being.

There is a funny story about that.  I had a character named Valaria in my original plan for my story, but she was not going to be a sibling of Petrie.  Rather, she was going to be a love interest for Pterano.  However, Nunti eventually entered into the picture, which allowed for the exploration of Pterano's issues without the need for a romantic plot line, and Valaria never materialized.  However, I decided that it was still a good name for a flyer, so I used it for Petrie's sister in the RP and I have reused it here.

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The kids are still save but now the defenders have left their assigned defensive position... which means. Uh oh... unsure.gif

Yep, yep, yep!  Calin's plan comes into view.

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Well, this chapter matches my expectation of a good battle! And still no prominent casualities (aside from Sierra, maybe) now that's likely to change! I'm scared dino_tongue.gif

Don't worry, you won't have to wait long to see who is on the menu.  :p I should have the next chapter posted in about 4-5 hours.

Thanks again for the review.  :) I hope that you enjoy the next installment.


Go ahead and check out my fanfictions, The Seven Hunters, Songs of the Hunters, and Menders Tale.


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Just to let everyone know, this will be a three-post chapter due to the character limit per post.

Fanfiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/72/The-Seven-Hunters

Chapter 71   Cataclysm

“Now, I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds.”
― J. Robert Oppenheimer


Pterano stared at the scene in front of him with utter surprise.  Was he already too late?

The defenders of the Hidden Canyon entrance appeared to be caught in a trap, as a confusing mass of dinosaurs filled every conceivable place in the narrow ravine.  Fast biters blocked the passageway back into the valley and were facing off with the hidden runners at the front.  Meanwhile, two solitary two-footers, whom he immediately recognized as Chomper's parents, were the lone defenders of this critical entrance into the valley.  Now with Red Claw and his two new two-footers joining the fray from the other side, the situation looked dire.  If the defense were to be broken here...

Pterano shook his head.  He could not immediately help out the defenders on the ground and his unscrupulous companions would only have eyes for those whom they blamed for the deaths of their long lost family members.

The sharptooth flyers.

No...  He would have to help were he could of some use: the sky.  If he could accomplish his task then hopefully the others could handle what the battle had brought them.

"Look!  There they are!"

Pterano turned in the direction that Nunti was staring.  Over the valley's interior the sky were darkened with flyers of every description.  Sharptooth flyers and valley residents were engaged in combat at every altitude.  However, it was obvious which side was winning.  The valley flyers were difficult to find in the riving mass of talons and teeth.  Worse yet, bodies could be seen falling from the skies.  The bodies of flyers that he hadn't seen since his exile.  The bodies of flyers he would never see again.

Rage built in Pterano as he gave the order to attack.

"There are the monsters that attacked your kin!  Slaughter them all!"

No further orders were necessary as the carrion flyers rushed ahead at the throng of enemy flyers.  For his part, Pterano was about to join them when he saw something in the ravine below the demanded his attention.

No...  Volant?  Are you alright?

"Pterano, are you alright?"  Nunti's voice called from behind him.  "Is that someone that you know?"

He did not answer as he descended in a near vertical dive towards his sister's location, leaving a confused Nunti to try and catch up.

......

Harthron stared at the unstoppable horde that stood around them.  Fast biters stood in the way of the entrance into the valley and their salvation, whereas Red Claw and his two new companions appeared ready to attack them from the other side.  The high walls on either side of the Hidden Canyon completed their envelopment.  Despite the fact that they had not yet sustained heavy casualties in this battle, it seemed certain that one thing awaited them:

Their annihilation.

He sucked in a deep breath as the consequences of this sunk in.  He had decided to join with his daughter's crusade as he felt that it was the only way to prevent Red Claw's evil from again causing havoc in hidden runner lands.  However, now it appeared that he had led his best trackers and most of his own children to their doom.  His reign would come to an end like that of many leaders: at the claws of someone stronger.  He only regretted that he had taken his loved ones down with him.

With contemplative eyes he looked towards his daughter.  Even now is this moment of tranquility before the coming storm, she stood firm with her fiery eyes staring at her enemies.  He had no doubt that she would fight to the bitter end.  Not for her pride or even for her duty, but simply because she felt it was the right thing to do.  He had become so lost in trying to maintain his power base and keeping the pack's squabbles in check that he had nearly lost sight of that.  Even though it now seemed that his daughter had led him to his end, he did not regret regaining that side of himself.  If his rule came to an end here then he would face it with courage.

Daughter and father locked eyes for a brief moment as the growls of the fast biters grew.  They knew that this was it.  The battle had come.  And neither of them planned on facing the end on their knees.

"Let's give them hell, daddy!"

Harthron grinned with determination.  "Indeed!"  He then made a hand gesture that only the hidden runners understood.  "Runners!  Guard our allies' flank!  Protect your comrades to your sides and don't let anyone through!"  He then clasped his hands over the sharpened stick that he had made under the instructions of Thud the day prior.  With no hesitation, he grabbed the orange bulb of the toxic plant that he had been keeping for just such a moment like this.  It took only a few moments to crush it upon his spear's sharpened tip and to raise his tainted spear into the air.  It was time for Calin's pack to taste the orange death.  Expressing more bravado than he actually felt he gave one last rallying cry to his pack.

"Hidden runners, stand to your duties!"

A chorus of affirmative roars echoed from the pack as the enemy broke into a charge.  The hidden runners held their spears out to create a wall of spiked death as the enemy approached.  Harthron could only wait as the onslaught came closer and closer.

Prepare to die, fast biter scum!

......

"Okay, everyone!  We have to hold these three off..."

Littlefoot shouted his orders with imperiousness as the three massive beasts approached with thunderous footsteps.  Trees and branches slammed to the ground as they crashed into them.  Red Claw and his two adolescents were indeed horrifying sights to behold.  However, Littlefoot's plan of attack was interrupted by his grandmother's stern voice.

"No, Littlefoot!  You focus on the fast biters!"

Littlefoot turned towards his beloved grandparents.  In many ways they had been the main parental figures in his life after the moss of his mother.  Even the return of Bron had not changed that dynamic.  This made their insistence to face the beast without their help all the more difficult to take.  He could not allow them to throw their lives away.  Three longnecks and several swimmers would be no match for the three seasoned killers that stood in their way.

"Grandma, you need our..."

He did not get far as the voice of Ducky's mother called out.

"We have to do this, children!  Help clear a path to the entrance!"

As if to punctuate this situation and to prevent any dissent, Grandpa Longneck spoke as well.  His gravelly voice betraying the extent of the damage to his body.  As he spoke, it broke Littlefoot's heart.

"We are big enough to slow them down... We have to protect the valley now."  He then turned back towards Littlefoot's position, a sad expression on his face that made Littlefoot's skip a beat.  It was the expression of a dinosaur who did not expect to survive.  "Give the order, Littlefoot.  The valley must go on even if we do not."

Littlefoot's voice was lost in his throat at his grandfather's request.  So it had come to this.  For a long time Littlefoot had believed that he would never see his grandparents again, only to finally be given the opportunity to once again bask in their love.  But that now made the probable parting all that much harder to take.  Would they ever speak again after this?

A choked sob emanated to Littlefoot's left as he could see Ducky struggling to keep her composure in order to face the battle ahead.  If she could do what was necessary then so could he.  With great reluctance, Littlefoot gave the order.

"Very well...  Gang...  Prepare your claws...  Let's show Calin what we are made of!"

As the remainder of the pack began to roar in unison as a show of force and crushed the toxic bulbs upon their claws, Littlefoot spared one last look towards his grandparents.  As their eyes met on this most dark of days, he gave them the slightest of nods.  It was the best that he could do under the circumstances.  A gesture that could mean both "good luck" and "goodbye".  For all that he knew this could be the last time that they saw one another in the land of the living.  It was only when they returned the gesture that he allowed himself to focus on the charging fast biters who were fast approaching their hidden runner allies.  Now was the time to meet force with force.

"Charge!"

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"Volant!"

Pterano landed on the ravine floor with a resounding thud.  As he rushed to his sister's side.  One of her wings looked horribly torn, whereas her neck was oozing blood from a large gash.  She had obviously been in a fight and not on the winning side...  It was enough to fill him with guilt and regret.  Had his inability to get the carrion flyers in time led to his sister's death?  Would the valley now fall due to his failure?  It was enough to make him break down as the flyer that he assumed to be dead raised her head.

"Pterano?"

He raised his head in surprise at his sister's weak voice.  She was alive!  

"Sister... I have come back and I brought help with me."  He responded with extreme gentleness to an extent that even he was not even aware that he was capable.  "Are you able to fly?  You should go to a healer."

Volant shook her head sadly.  "I will go to no healer while the valley fights."

Pterano opened his mouth to speak, but then quickly closed it.  If his sister was in this state then it would not be wise to intervene, he knew her well enough to know that her stubbornness was more than a match for even his rhetorical skills.  Knowing this he quickly decided to help the carrion flyers with their mission.  They would need little help due to their numbers, but he still owed it to the valley to share in their risks.  They had sacrificed so much for their home, it was only fitting that he as an exile do his part to support the residents who he had let down so long ago.

"Alright, sis.  You stay here and be safe... I will go and help clear the skies..."

His words were short-lived, however, as he looked upon the small form that she held in her wings.  It was the body of a familiar sharptooth flyer.  A flyer that was silent and still.

Pterano froze as everything seemed to go into slow motion for the flyer.  Petrie... No... It can't be...

"My son tried to protect me from Sierra..."  His sister spoke softly as she continued to rock the flyer's body back and forth.  "Your nephew killed the bastard all by himself..."  A sob escaped from her beak as Pterano closed his eyes in anguish.  Only one of Nunti's wings alerted the poor flyer to anything going on in the outside world.  It was the only small comfort that his protÈgÈe could offer him in that terrible moment.

Pterano approached his nephew with an outstretched wing as he looked upon his broken form.  There were cuts and abrasions on the small flyer, but no obvious fatal injury.  This filled Pterano with no hope, however, as it was obvious that his nephew was gone all the same.  There was no breath in his body and no...  

Wait.

In a flash, Pterano placed his ear against Petrie's chest.  He could hear Volant begin to question him in her grief as he found what he was looking for.

The slightest of movements.

"He is breathing!  Petrie lives!"

Volant looked surprised, but then placed her head against the same place in Petrie's chest.  Upon hearing the same weak pulse, a yelp of happiness left her.  She had only lost one child on this day.  Petrie was not dead yet.

"Sister."

Volant continued to cradle Petrie in her wings, as Pterano tried to get her attention again.

"Sister!"

Volant sprung to attention at Pterano's raised voice.  Now that her grief was overtaken by hope, she was again aware of the world around here.  Pterano quickly spoke again.

"You need to send him to a healer now, sister... Nunti will help you."  Nunti began to protest, but Petrie raised a wing which stopped him immediately.  "The carrion flyers are more than enough to deal with Red Claw's flyers, Nunti, but my nephew needs your help now."

Volant quickly began to secure Petrie in Nunti's grasp as she looked up towards her brother.  Now that she was filled with genuine hope for her son, she turned some of her concern towards her brother.

"Brother, where are you going?"

Pterano took on a grim frown as he looked in the sky.  The battle for the skies may already be as good as won with the forces that he brought, but he still had a mission to perform.  A very personal mission.

"My nephew killed Sierra.  A monster that I helped to create.  He paid the price that I should have paid."  He looked at the two flyers with a fierce glare that made Nunti stare at him with actual fear.  There was no doubt that Pterano was serious about this.

"I will take care of Rinkus myself."

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The Hidden Canyon:

Chomper ran with the rest of the pack as the front line came into view.  And what a view it was.

Despite approaching their allies from the back, details could still be seen by the purple sharptooth.  Hidden runners stood two lines deep with their spears outstretched towards the advancing fast biters.  Fast biters could be seen slashing into thin air as the spears impaled them in their places.  The visage of green, blue, and black bodies thrashing on the ground could be seen as the deadly neurotoxin of the orange death did its work to those who had been caught by the hidden runners effective defense.  Elsewhere, a confusing mix of yelling hidden runners, growling fast biters, and glistening spears was complemented by blood which was falling like rain onto the battle field in front of them.  It was like a personal manifestation of hell and it awaited them all.

Chomper sucked in a few quick breaths as he attempted to keep up with the rest of the pack.  They were not running at full speed as the vines restrained them from their full potential, but they were moving at a very rapid pace.  It was all that the small Tyrannosaurus could do to keep pace.

"We are coming behind you, Harthron!  Prepare to make a hole!"

At Littlefoot's yell, Chomper could see one of the green hidden runners give a nod as he continued to stab at the enemies in front of him.  He and the hidden runner to his side appeared to be getting the brunt of the action if the amount of spear movement was any indication.  The enemy had clearly identified the leader of the hidden runners and was struggling to kill him at all costs.  No organism would survive without its head, and the same went for packs as well.

"Ahhh!!!"

A hidden runner was suddenly thrown into the air as a fast biter grabbed the spear in its mouth and hurled its unsuspecting holder into enemy territory.  A symphony of hellish sounds then followed.  The sounds of grinding teeth on delicate flesh.  The gushing of blood and ripping of viscera.  High pitched screams of the disemboweled.  A sudden cut off as the victim's windpipe was ripped from his still living body.  It was horrifying how the sounds of four seconds dragged out in his mind to seem like an eternity.  But still, that was not as bad as the scene that awaited his eyes.

As the victorious fast biter stood where the hidden runner had once been, his comrades turned their attack towards the hated fiend and stabbed him with their sharpened spear.  The green fast biter gave a choked gasp as blood leaped from his mouth.  Further stabs ensued until the fast biter was face down in a puddle of its own blood.  However, the hidden runners, in their haste to avenge their friends and remove the breach in their lines, had forgotten a very basic rule of warfare: never overlook what is right in front of you.

The results were inevitable.

The two hidden runners who had attacked the invader of their defensive line were then leaped upon by a sudden surge of fast biters.  As their comrades were ripped to shreds in front of them by the multi-pronged attack, the rear line of the hidden runners began to falter and retreat towards the center of the canyon.  The line was being breached.

Chomper shifted his course immediately.  It did not take a genius to figure out that they would need to drive the invaders back and that meant that the breach in the line would be their target.  Littlefoot's orders a moment later were safely ignored by his friend as his objectives were already clear.

"You back us up, Path!"

Chomper nodded as Thud, Leap, and Swift passed in front of him towards the edge of the canyon.  The rest of the fast biters made two lines a bit further away from the canyon's edge, towards the center of the hidden runner line.  Chomper understood his friend's strategy immediately.  In order to allow the hidden runners to regroup they would need to press the attack.  Sometimes the best defense was a good offense.

Blood pumped through Chomper's body as he ignored the chaffing of the vines against his flesh.  The enemy was in sight and the stench of the battle was imprinted on his nose.  The smell of blood and death permeated everything.  Only time would tell if he and his friends would join those who had already fallen.  He could see Thud and his companions tense up and he instantly knew what was coming.  As they leaped into the air, Chomper bared his teeth and hurled himself at the mass of fast biters that appeared in front of him.  With the orange death on his claws, he only focused on making contact.

Roar!

With a sickening thud Chomper crashed into the massive fast biter in front of him.  A bluish-green monster that had entered his young adult days.  As body collided with body, Chomper found that he couldn't think of what lay ahead or even what strategy to use.  In the heat of battle, instincts simply took over... and Chomper was well prepared by his ancestry for the butcherous job ahead of him.

Claw collided with claw... Tooth grinded against tooth... Body slammed against body... A confusing torrent of sensations greeted his senses as Chomper slashed and bit with all of his might.  He could barely feel his enemy's strikes against his body in this moment of frenzy.  He could not tell if his armor was working or if he was simply ignoring grievous injuries.  In the heat of the moment he simply did not care.  So he simply continued to slash until the green bastard fell to the ground in a crimson heap.

Roar!

Blood ran down the sharptooth's jaw as the taste of meat and sinew filled his mouth.  With the fallen fast biter's chest being shredded like leaves in a hailstorm and the ground being covered a thick blanket of crimson, Chomper looked like the monster that leaf-eaters warned their children about.  His appearance made several of the nearby hidden runners hurry back to the frontline in a mix of awe and horror.  Despite the fact that he had saved them, in that moment he scared them just as much as their enemies.

Chomper stared at the scene around him for the first time since he started his assault.  With battle-crazed eyes he saw much, but understood little.  His brain was simply focusing on survival now and any concept more complex than 'ally', 'enemy', or 'kill' were seen as superfluous and immediately dispensed with.  Even had he been thinking clearly, however, he would have been challenged to make sense of the confusing jumble of sights and smells in front of him.  All that he knew was that his allies were pressing forward into the wall of teeth and claws and that the secondary line was preventing the enemy from outflanking them and attacking from the back.

Just like what that fast biter was trying to do to Thud right now...

Chomper roared and charged ahead.  There was still more killing left to do.

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"Bron!"

Grandma Longneck rushed to the aide of fallen longneck as she slapped the advancing Tyrannosaurus with her tail.  With a thunderous crash the predator crashed to the ground.  It appeared that Red Claw's new minions were new to fighting longnecks.  

Finally some luck going our way... She thought to herself as she held back from advancing to Bron's aid as the younger longneck slowly rose to his feet.  She and her mate were currently faced with the other two-footers and she could not spare any time for Bron at the moment.  Her mate was in no condition to fight on his own.

Roar!

The thunderous roar of the carnivore refocused her attention on the quandary that she now faced.  A tyrannosaurus nearly equal in size to Chomper's parents stood before them.  Despite obvious malnutrition from the unforgiving Mysterious Beyond, he was ripped with muscle on account of his adolescence.  As a team she and her mate could deal with predators like this in past, but Grandpa's injury and the other predators in the vicinity made this a far trickier proposition.  As a result she was extremely cautious.

She walked to the side with her tail dragging behind her.  Her tail muscles were primed for another strike if the sharptooth dared to approach.  For his part, the sharptooth matched her motions.  They two followed in a semicircle as Grandpa Longneck joined beside her.

"The old strike and follow technique?"

She nodded at her mate's suggestion.  Let's hope this one is as inexperienced as he looks.

With deliberately slow steps she advanced to the left, with her mate taking a position just to her right.  All she had to do is wait for the lumbering behemoth lose his patience and attack.

She didn't have to wait long.

The predator charged with disturbing speed on its two massive legs.  It was advancing quickly upon the elderly longneck and she did not waste any time to make her move.  With all of the strength she could muster she struck out with her tail.

Only to hit thin air.

Fearing what her miss could mean she circled back around to see the predator's location.

Slam!

Her mate's tail struck the predator in the legs as he could not maneuver around the both of them.  However, what followed next surprised them both.

The predator remained on his feet and completed his charge.

"Ahhh!"

"Dear!"

Pain emanated from her rump as the massive predator sunk into her flesh with his razor-sharp teeth.  Instinctively, she thrashed from side to side to dislodge the attacker, but her tail could not make contact.  He was already at the base of her tail so its impacts would do little.  A cascade of pressure and misery seemed to radiate up her spine as the predator held on despite her struggles.  That was when the pressure suddenly stopped.

A primal roar the likes of which she had never heard echoed across the ravine.  This was followed by the sounds of stomping feet and deafening  crashes.  It was as if a mountain were making war with another mountain.  The ground shook and the air cracked with the sounds of discord and fury.  Then, with a sudden sickening crack, the pressure went away.  Now only the pain remained.

"Dear!  Are you alright?"

Grandma Longneck looked in the direction of her mate's voice and paused in stunned silence at the sight that lay before her.  Her mate's feet were covered in crimson from their base to his shoulders.  The source was easily ascertained at the horribly mangled body of the Tyrannosaurus could be seen on the ground below.  Its neck bent at an unnatural angle and the body had the appearance of the ground after being trampled by spiketails.  The predator had been pulverized into oblivion.  But what stopped her in her tracks was the sight of her flank.

Blood oozed from the horribly torn flesh as muscle hung from the serious wound.  The sharptooth had put all that he had into his attack and though it had meant his doom, the consequence for her was equally grave.

"No... No, I don't think I am..."  She replied sadly as her mate pushed his equally mangled body against hers in order to give her support.  In the orgy of death and violence around them they had a moment of respite, though both of them knew what their respective injuries most likely entailed.

This battle could very well be their last.

......

"Stay together, everyone!"

Ura retreated backwards towards the longnecks, but she knew that they would find no respite from their troubles there.  The sounds of the battle raged behind them.  The sound of slapping tails, mangled cries, and angry roars.  Whether the elder longnecks were still alive or long since gone was uncertain to her.  She had no choice but to focus on the fiend in front of her.

Red Claw.

His massive form was the thing of nightmares.  A large scar was present by his left eye, which gave that orb a disturbing appearance in the bright sun.  Whereas his other eye glowed with the radiance of the morning sun, his other eye, having its nictitating membrane destroyed, stared outwards with the glow of blood.  His entire body was ripped with prominent muscle and the scars of battles gone by.  The swimmers could not be blamed for retreating from the beast.  They were out of their league here.

With thunderous steps that echoed across the ravine, Red Claw advanced with slow deliberate steps.  He did not hurry.  He did not attempt to hide his intentions.  He simply moved forward with deliberate intent.  This was enough to make the swimmers begin to panic.  Ura was horrified to see her aunt be among the first to attempt a retreat.

"Tranquil!  No!"

Ura's protest was in vain as the swimmer sprinted as fast as she was able towards the side of the ravine.  Being hemmed in on all sides a swimmer would naturally retreat towards the path of least resistance, which in this case was the wide gap to Red Claw's right.  This proved to be a terrible mistake.

"Ahhh--urk."

Ura watched helplessly as the beast grabbed her aunt by the neck.  In a split instant that seemed to stretch into eternity, the beast crushed the poor swimmer's windpipe with his terrible jaws.  A choked gasp was heard as blood splattered the beast and the ground around him.  Then, with a horrible twisting motion, the beast ripped the swimmers head from her body.  With a sickening sound her headless body fell to the ground and her aunt's head rolled on its side.  Her face remained in an expression of utter terror as her body began the spasms that come with death.  Her aunt was no more.

Ura's aunt had been her tutor during her youngling days.  From her she had learned how to swim from danger, when to retreat, how to treat buzzer stings, and a multitude of other things.  But it seemed that knowledge was no match for instincts in her kind.  Swimmers were not made for fighting and they were now paying for their carelessness in charging into the Hidden Canyon.

Ura suppressed a sob as she saw another swimmer try to make a retreat in the other direction, only to be set upon by one of the other two-footers.  A pained cry and screams for help could be heard, but she could not tell if they were from him or another dinosaur in this canyon of death.  All that she knew was that she had to get the other swimmers to safety anyway possible.

But was that even a possibility now?  Her mind raced as the thundering steps of Red Claw could be heard approaching.  That was when she heard something above the sounds of battle.

"Over here, swimmers!  Get behind us!"

It was Grandma Longneck!  With utmost haste she and the other swimmers ran in the direction of the sauropods, nearly not noticing the dead sharptooth until they stumbled over him.  Despite this obstacle, however, the surviving swimmers quickly retreated to behind the massive longnecks as Red Claw's angry roar could be heard in the distance.  From her vantage point she could see Bron holding one Tyrannosaurus as bay to their side, but with the roar from Red Claw coming from the only outlet out of the canyon that could only mean one thing.

They were being pinned in.  The sharpteeth were going in for the kill.

......

"To your right, Haven!"

Ducky rolled to her left as the leaping fast biter landed right where she was a moment before.  Quickly righting herself, she dodged a strike at her neck and allowed his bite on her shoulder to proceed.

Time to let the vines work their magic.

As the fast biter bit down upon her vine-covered shoulder she ignored the pain and struck out at her enemy's neck with her tainted claws.

It is not a good idea to leave your neck exposed.  Oh no, no, no! Ducky mocked internally as she saw the first hints of the toxin's work in the stricken fast biter.  Within moments the pressure on her should was gone and the offending predator was writhing in agony on the ground below her feet.  That was until a spear embedded itself in the fiend's neck, putting an end to its misery.

"Thank you for the save, Stern Claw!"

She simply gave an affirmative grunt to her friend as she began to engage the fast biters to her left.  Ducky decided to do the same as her immediate threat was dealt with.  

Which meant she was just in time to see Spike's predicament.

"Brother!  Hang on!"

......

Spike struggled to protect his throat as the fast biters descended upon his prone form.  As their bodies piled against him he could feel their teeth and claws begin to clash against his vine armor.  It was a horrifying experience as he knew full well that the strikes would have been fatal if not for the durable vines.  Despite his best efforts, however, he could not right himself with the combined weight of the fast biters upon him.  The slashes and cuts began to accumulate as he struggled through the swiftly building pain.  All that he could do to protect his neck from strikes...

But that left his face open to attack.

"Ahhhh!!!"  Spike screamed as one of his foes bit down upon skull.  He could feel the blood trickle down his face as the fiend bit down with tremendous force.  Despite the agony, however, he had enough foresight to wedge his claws into the fiend's jaw, which caused him to weaken his bite somewhat.  This was enough to buy him time until his friends arrived.

Shluck!  Shluck!  Shluck!

"Ahhh!"  

Spike could feel the pressure on his body dissipate as his vision began to brighten.  The beasts were off of him!  He could breath again!  He was free!

"Finder, are you alrigh... your face!"

Spike blinked at Cera's exclamation as he touched his face where the enemy had bitten down.  A stinging pain greeted his senses and as he pulled the hand away he could see the crimson gleam of blood.  They had done quite a number on him, but he was still alive thanks to the vine armor.

"I'm alive."  Was Spike's gruff answer as he tried to ignore the taste of blood on his tongue.  "Thanks..."

He was interrupted as he dodged an incoming attack from another fast biter.  As he parried another attack, he retreated to where Cera and Ducky were located.  They seemed equally overwhelmed by the enemy forces.

"Hang on, guys!"

Spike turned his head slightly, and smiled at what he saw.

It was Littlefoot and Ruby!  And it looked like that they brought reinforcements.

......

Ruby glared at the advancing fast biters as she raised her sharpened stick in unison with the others.  She, Littlefoot, Breeze, and Taunt made a makeshift phalanx formation to their side as the enemy fast biters wisely kept their distance.  By now all of them knew that those sharpened sticks contained more than sharp points.  No one wanted to be the first one to attack the formation.  No one wanted to be the sacrifice for the glory of Red Claw.

She called out to the others in leaf-eater so that their enemies could not hear.

"You should go behind us!  Behind us you should go!  We are retreating to where the hidden runners are!"

There were no disagreements with the rest of the pack as they retreated behind their comrades.  There was something confusing though, if their friends were here then where were the rest of them?  Littlefoot vocalized her concerns before she could even raise them with her dearest friend.

"Thud, Swift, Leap!  Retreat!  Retreat to the hidden runners!"

She looked upon the scene with concern until a familiar face appeared in the center of the enemy.

It was Thud and he was not alone.

......

"Awww... Don't want to leave anyone behind...  How beautifully pathetic!  Is this one your lover or something?"

Thud sneered at the contemptuous fast biter.  He was face to face with the one who had taken his place in Red Claw's pack.  The one who had made Leap and Swift's lives a living hell.  The one who represented the biggest threat that they had ever faced.  With anger rising from deep in his being, he responded.

"I will not permit you to hurt my packmates, you fiend!"

Calin clinched his claws tightly as he prepared for what was to come.  He would only get one attempt at this.  Only one chance to make it work.  He owed it to everyone to do it right.

"Father!"

Thud tilted his head and looked to the distance behind him.  He could clearly see the form of his son behind the enemy fast biters that were now four rows deep between them.  All that he could do was to give his son a sad smile.  He was not certain that this would work or not, but he owed it to everyone to try.

"Oh, how utterly delightful!  Your son is here too!  What fun we can have!"  Calin sneered.  "He can watch as you are dismembered and then me and him can spend quality time together afterwards."

Thud smiled.  "Do you know what your biggest flaw is, Calin?"

Calin seemed to stare at the fast biter with a calculating gaze for a moment, but he did not answer.  As he did this his Deputy, Froth, edged closer to the fallen fast biter in front of him, being mindful of the range of Thud's spear.  This was noticed by Thud.  They couldn't make a strike on Calin due to his cautiousness, but his deputy was another story...   It was time for Thud to give the signal.  

"You look down on everyone.  But threats can always come from below."

Calin stopped.  He appeared to be at a loss at understanding what the fast biter was rambling about.

Slash!

"Ahhhh!!!"

Leap rose from his prone position and slashed into Froth's underbelly with his tainted claws before sprinting off in the direction of his pack leader.  Seeing that their plan had worked, Thud gave the order to retreat.  In the confusion that followed Thud had no doubt that he would succeed in escaping through the confused predators.

......

Calin stared at Froth's anguished form.  The claw marks did not appear to tear too deeply into the skin, but it didn't take much for the poison to do its terrible work.  Even if he lived, Calin knew that his most competent deputy was out of commission for this battle.

And his forces had let it happen right under their noses!

With an angry roar he grabbed the pointed stick that Thud had dropped in his retreat and gestured to his fast biters.  If Seeker's forces had chosen to retreat behind the hidden runners then he had only one choice in order to reach them again.

"Charge the hidden runners!  Show no mercy!"

......

"Make a line two runners deep!  Those in the back will protect those in front!  We cannot fail again!"

Harthron quickly gave orders to his forces as the enemy began to advance again.  Despite the bodies of nearly a half dozen fast biters littering the ground, well over two dozen remained.  Worse yet, the orange death was obviously losing its effectiveness as their spears became drenched with the blood of their enemies.  They would simply have to rely upon brute force here.

And that was something that they were fast running low on.

He looked at what remained of his once powerful force of fighters.  The breakthrough of his lines had directly led to the deaths of well over a dozen of his best packmates.  Healers... fighters... mothers... fathers... sons and daughters... all had been felled under the brutal assault of their enemies.  Now only two thirds of what used to be remained.  He knew that he would be lucky to bring anyone home from this terrible battle.

He looked back towards the enemy lines.  Fast biters... easily three deep in an irregular formation greeted his eyes.  They advanced at a slower pace at first but then began to approach faster and faster as they got closer to the defensive line.  He had seen this before in the initial attack and gave the appropriate order.

"Pointed sticks up front!  Second line, put them in between the front!"

Accordingly, two interlocking rows of spears emanated from the hidden runner line as they braced for the coming onslaught.  They were well-prepared for any attack against their line.  But they had not planned for what happened next.

"Father!"

Upon his daughter's cry, he looked up to see the most curious sight.  A spear was flying through the air in the same manner as a sharptooth flyer would dive upon their prey.  And like most prey he was trapped.  Trapped by his own defensive line and the spears that extended from either side of him.  It seemed that one of the enemy had decided to use their dropped spears against them.  In that split moment he knew exactly what his fate would be.

Ancestors... Help my people find their way...

The spear killed him instantly.

......

"Daddy!"

Ignis fell to her knees as she cradled the fallen body of her dear father.  This vibrant dinosaur that had just moments prior been so full of life now lay dead in a pool of his own blood, the spear having impaled itself through his right eye.  This was the dinosaur who had trained her in the ways of life... who had guided her through the trials and tribulations of childhood... who had given her love and affection even when she wasn't appreciative of it... who had been there for her throughout her life... He was gone.  Gone forever more.

As the sound of roaring footsteps approached her location she grabbed the spear in her hand and let out a choked sob.  Despite the tears falling from her eyes, she gazed upon him with a powerful expression.  The expression of a natural-born leader.

"He's dead!"

"The leader is dead!"

She ignored the panicked and mournful cries of her comrades as she continued to stare into her father's vacant eyes.  She had one final conversation to make.  Even if it was one way.

"I'm sorry, daddy... I'm so, so sorry..."  She choked back a sob as the sounds of thundering footsteps got louder.  "I can't bring you back... I can't bring mommy back...  I can't bring anyone back..."

The panicked cries of some of the hidden runners continued.

"The great leader is gone!  We should retreat!"

Ignis ignored the growing panic as she looked upon her father with compassion.  Absentmindedly, she gripped her spear with her other hand.  "I couldn't save any of you, but I won't let you be in vain...  I promise that I will fight to the bitter end..."

The other hidden runners stared in awe as she rose to her feet and placed her spear beside the others in the defensive line.  She had the mannerisms of a Valkyrie as she stared at the advancing enemy, who were mere moments away.  Gone were the signs of sadness.  Gone were the signs of naivetÈ.  What remained was the cold stare of a dinosaur on a mission.  Her voice caused dissention in the ranks to stop in their tracks.

"Stand to your duties!  We will hold the line or die trying!"

......

A crevice in the rock wall of the Hidden Canyon:

"The main attack has begun!"

Logos looked at the small flyer with grave concern.  That was the signal.  Depending on where the main attack occurred that would affect where the Repressor was finally used one last time.

"Where?!"  The panicked shout of her mate echoed in the cave.

The flyer struggled to catch his breath as he tried to answer the rainbowface's question.

"The Hidden Canyon!  The defenders are trapped there!"

Logos paled.  "What?!"

"We can't use this when they are trapped there!  That would kill them all!"

The flyer didn't seem to know what to say.  He obviously had not been told about the powers that the rainbowfaces were about to unleash upon the valley.  For all that he knew, they were just going to cause a rock slide by messing with some rocks.  He had no idea about the terror to come.

Logos looked down.  "Flyer... Tell Thicknose to take us to the rock wall as planned..."

Chronos interrupted.  "Dear..."

Logos insisted.  "We have to do this!  Maybe they can escape in time..."

The flyer began to fly off but was stopped by Logos.

"Flyer?"

The flyer turned and looked at the rainbowface with haggard eyes.  He flinched slightly when she looked at his feathers, which were covered in blood.

"Flyer, are you hurt?"

The flyer looked down and shook his head.  He silence spoke volumes.

Logos stroked his wing with compassion.  "It's from someone that you loved?"

The flyer nodded as it choked back sobs.  Its pain was evident.

The rainbowface sucked down a breath as she closed her eyes.  She then looked into the flyers eyes with a fierceness that surprised them both.  

"I can't promise you much, flyer, but I can promise you this: we will put an end to this madness.  You have our word on that."

As the flyer turned one last time to leave, Chronos asked a final question.

"What is your name, flyer?"

It paused only for a moment before speaking.

"Guido."

Then without a further word it departed into the sky.


Chronos tried to ignore the memories of a few moments ago as he attempted to make the trigger mechanism work.

Let's see... if the containment unit is here then the force will need to come from over here...

"How is it coming, dear?"

Chronos looked over at his mate with tired eyes.  Despite his knowledge of the Repressor being extremely broad, he had never used one in this way before.  This was incredibly hypothetical stuff.  It was known that if the containment unit failed then the shockwave would kill ally and enemy alike, but few ever attempted to intentionally detonate one...  But yet, here they were.

"I think that I almost have it.  Do you have the communicator?"

Logos nodded and handed him the device, which also looked like a black rock.  Chronos immediately took it and began to flip through its settings.  As he called forth a series of instructions that seemed unintelligible to her a sudden noise echoed in the cave.

Repressor Interface Established.

Chronos explained to her what he was doing.  "I am using the communicator to translate the Repressor's computer code so that we can 'communicate' with it."

Logos deadpanned.  "So you are using a computer to talk to a computer because you don't understand how to use the computer?"

Chronos nodded.  "Pretty much, yeah."

Containment Field Setting Locked.  Override?

Chronos commanded the machine with cold efficiency.  "Yes, override lock."

Moments passed as the two rainbowfaces stared at the black stone.  It was hard to believe the destructive potential of such a small object.  It was the stuff of nightmares, but sometimes one had to use terror to fight terror.  The only question was: what the price would be for the valley?  Would it include the brave defenders in the Hidden Canyon?  For the matter, would it include...

Containment Field Override failed.

Chronos sucked down a breath as he placed his head into his hands.  So that was it then.

"Dear... does this mean..."

Despite the fact that his mate already suspected what it meant, Chronos confirmed the worst.

"It means...  It means that we have to do this the hard way..."  He gave her a sad smile.  "The valley will go on... but it will not go on for everyone."

As the two rainbowfaces joined hands and embraced one another, Mr. Thicknose stepped into the scene.  Totally unaware of what the rainbowfaces were trying to accomplish or the tragic discovery that had just been made.

"Are you two alright?"


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Part 2 of the chapter...

The Secret Caverns:

Shorty watched the chamber entrance with wary eyes.  So much time had gone by yet no word had reached them about the situation outside.  Every instinct in his body told him to run from the Secret Caverns and see what it was like outside, but he quashed that impulse with one thought.

I can't be selfish here.  They are fighting and probably dying for the valley.  The least that I could do is not give our secret hideout away.  Regardless of his commitment to duty, however, the situation still troubled him greatly.  Why did it have to come to this?  Why couldn't the kids be permitted to be kids?

"The wait is terrible, isn't it?"

Shorty looked beside him at the darkened form of Detras.  He had a grim expression on his face that betrayed no emotion.  However, Shorty could hear the inner pain.  Just as Shorty was concerned about his father, Littlefoot, and Guido, Detras was concerned about his own flesh and blood.  His own daughter.

"Yeah..."  Shorty whispered, as the sounds of snoring could be heard from where the children had been congregated.  Considering how hard it was to get them all to take a nap, he didn't want to undo all of that progress.

Detras sat beside the longneck and gave a few sniffs in the direction of the entrance before settling down.  Shorty often wondered what his brother and his friends could smell with their improved snouts but he was afraid to ask.  Now he simply hoped that he would have the opportunity to ask anything to them.  For all that he knew they could all be dead right now.

"The fear of losing my daughter... is something I have had to deal with for a long time."  Detras admitted.  "Eventually we decided that if my little girl was going to be brave enough to face the dangers, then we had to be brave enough to accept them as well.  But it is so damn hard..."

Despite his agitation Shorty couldn't resist teasing the fast runner.  "Such language... what would your children say?"

Detras gave him a teasing look.  "I'm not sure... but at least they wouldn't call me an ass... they have that name reserved for you."

Shorty shook his head.  "I can thank Ruby for that one..."  Despite himself he let out a little laugh.  It was the most inappropriate moment for levity in a way, but at the same time it was what they both needed at the moment.  They were faced with something that they couldn't fight against and any respite from that was a welcome relief.

Detras chuckled.  "Yeah, I guess being called an ass is what I deserved after pranking her and Littlefoot like that.  Though I wish the little ones would have gone a few more seasons without learning that particular word."

Shorty nodded.  "I hope that we are able to see both of them again."

Detras smiled a sad smile.  "Same here, Shorty.  Same here."

Crash!

Shorty rose in surprise.  "What the hell is that?!"

The sound of awakening children could be heard as Pearl began rousing them in a hurry.

"Time for us to go, children..."

"Huh?"

Roar!

The screams of the children could now be heard as Pearl rushed them out of the side entrance of the chamber into the evacuation route.  It was at this time that Detras grabbed Shorty.

"Go with the children, Shorty...  I need to stay here and distract them..."

In response Shorty ran into the front entrance and proceeded to rub himself against the rocks.

Detras hissed.  "Shorty, what are you doing?!"

Shorty took on a grim expression.  "They want the children, sir.  Otherwise they wouldn't have followed our scent in here.  If it's children that they want then I will be the perfect decoy..."

Detras ran up to the longneck.  "No, Shorty!  You need to..."

Splash!

Both looked back in horror as the snout of a fast biter came into view.  It was soon followed by the head of the raptor.  In a split second the glowing eyes of the predator were staring directly on the duo.

Shorty gulped.

Detras breathed in a short gasp as he considered his options in that split moment.  In an instant he determined his plan.

"Follow me!"

The two dinosaurs sprinted through the passageway mere seconds before the fast biters decided to follow.

The chase was on.

......

Viscond quickened his pace as Westron followed.  The scent of children was getting stronger as they advanced into the mysterious caverns.  Until they finally encountered a rather large chamber.  A chamber that contained the telltale scents of both children and fast biters.  Scents that were both recent in their origin.

"Did they get them?!"

Viscond looked at his deputy as he considered the evidence.  Yes, the smell of children was quite recent, but it seemed to trail off somewhere...  He followed the trail and ended up at another entrance.

"There is not fast biter scent here!  The children escaped!"  Viscond shouted with great relief.

"Not all of them!"

At his deputy's interjection, he ran to where he was sniffing and took a deep breath.  The scent of a young longneck and a fast runner greeted his nose... as well as the stench of the two fiends that they had been chasing all this time.  Two dinosaurs were in danger because they had risked their lives in order to defend the children.  A noble sacrifice... and one that he would not allow to be carried to its logical conclusion.

"Two of them led the sharpteeth away... We have to help them!"

......

The skies outside the Great Valley:

"Die, scum!"

Rinkus barely dodged another diving attack by a carrion flyer as he struggled to regain altitude.  Things had been going extremely well for his forces.  The valley's flyers were in full retreat... the valley's defenses were collapsing... even his unstable friend was out of the picture so he could take all of the glory for himself... but now things had changed.  He had no idea why the carrion flyers were attacking or where they had come from, but he was sure that they were outmatched.  With little hesitation he gave the call to retreat.

Caw!

Sharptooth flyers of every description were flying from the valley like a stampede in the air.  Carrion flyers were seemingly coming from everywhere to strike at them.  There was no shelter... there was no respite.  There was only terror.  The irony of Red Claw's flyers being on the receiving end of terror was not lost on Rinkus, but that did not make it any easier to take.

"You monster!"

Rinkus looked up just in time to see what was about to collide with him.

"Ahhh!!!"

Both flyers descended into a vertical dive as talon locked with talon and wing batted against wing.  As a result, the two flyers were falling like rocks to the ground below.

"Pterano?"  Rinkus questioned in a mixture of fear and surprise.  The larger flyer's brown face looked down upon him with contempt as the sky and ground alternated being in his field of view due to the uncontrolled spin of their descent.  

Pterano gritted his beak. "Remember me, Rinkus?"  A terrible pain emanated from his right eye as Pterano impaled it with the tip of his beak.  A second and a third strike followed making the eye completely useless.  As waves of debilitating pain flowed across his body, Rinkus began to convulse in pain.  That was when what remained of his vision was soon filled with the image of a brown talon.

"Ahhh!!!  Stop it, I beg you!"

Pterano growled, a horrific sound coming from a flyer.  Rinkus could no longer see his former 'ally' and current nemesis, but he could still hear his anger and feel his talons embedded in his flesh.  The spinning of the dive seemed to become more violent as they began to flip head over tail in an unseen sky.

"I will do anything that you want!"  Rinkus finally begged.  He was at the mercy of his enemy and he knew that bravado would get him nowhere.  He would have to do what he always did to ensure his survival: say whatever needed to be said.  The truth did not matter; the only thing that mattered was the consequences for himself.  Nonetheless, with Pterano's fury he fully expected a sharp rebuke or another attack.  But he did not expect the response that he received.

Laughter.

"Can you save my nephew, Rinkus?"  He could hear the sneer in the flyer's voice as the air whooshed by his ears at a painful volume.  They were truly in an uncontrolled dive now.  "Can you save Petrie?"

Another bite caused convulsions of pain to overwhelm Rinkus's body.  He was desperate now.  He would do anything to survive.  Anything to continue on.

"If you kill me then you will be no better than I am!"  He choked out.  "What will your nephew think of you doing that?"

The wind zipped by as the dive continued.  For several seconds, Rinkus thought that he had made some headway with Pterano and was struggling of thinking what else to say when Pterano suddenly spoke directly into his ear.

"My nephew tricked your people into attacking the hidden runners... he killed mother flyers and babies for food... he did every kind of vile, disgusting thing when it was necessary for the wellbeing of those he loved."  Pterano sucked in a breath as the air noticeably became thicker.  They were approaching the ground now.  "Have you ever cared about anyone that much, Rinkus?  Anyone other than yourself?"

He had no idea what the flyer was rambling about.  Pterano couldn't be the uncle of one of another kind.  But at that moment he didn't particularly care about all of that.  The ground was approaching, but he could not see it.  He could not maneuver.  He was completely helpless.  Because of this he did something that he sparingly had done in his life.

He told the truth.

"No!  I care only for myself... please don't do this!"  He realized how pitiful that he sounded, but he didn't care.  He would do anything to survive.  "Please let me live!  Please don't kill me!"

The flyer continued to whimper until Pterano finally gave a response.

"I won't kill you, Rinkus."

Rinkus couldn't believe his ears.  Pterano was willing to let him go?

"I will leave you in peace... good luck flying blind!"

Suddenly the pressure was gone.  He was free!  But which side was up and which side was down?  All of the spins had confused him and without eyesight he couldn't make any sense of what was happening.  He was utterly helpless.  Just like all of the victims that he had killed for his own benefit.

With tremendous effort he forced his eyes open struggled to see anything out of his badly assaulted orbs.  Only hazy shapes greeted his vision.  Blue and white... brown and gray... Everything seemed to merge together as he rolled uncontrollably.  Struggling to extend his wings, the spinning finally stopped and the colors began to stabilize.  Thinking quickly, he steered towards the blue sky.  

Rinkus seethed internally.  Pterano had planned to put him in a situation where he would be killed by his own actions, but Rinkus had outsmarted him.  Despite still being unable to perceive what was up and what was down, he had followed his instincts and righted himself.  Now he would survive and be able to right this terrible wrong that had been brought against him.  He would get his revenge on the bastard that had done this to him.  But his thoughts of vengeance were interrupted by a sudden realization.

The sky shouldn't smell like water.

......

Pterano stared coldly at the lake below as Rinkus crashed head-first into its depths.  When the body finally surfaced with its head at an impossible angle, he knew that his work was done.

The last of his nephew's two attackers were dead.

As he stared at the visage of the Great Valley in front of him, he could see the last of the carrion flyers leave its vicinity.  They had done what they wanted to do and they had left without further concern.  Such were the antics of carrion flyers.  They cared for themselves and no one else.

Kind of like the flyer that he had just sent to his doom.

...and kind of like the flyer that he used to be.

Pterano sighed.  His own personal demons had helped to cause this entire mess.  Rinkus and Sierra used to be his minions before they found new management.  Now his own nephew was on the verge of death and the valley itself was under siege.  No doubt assisted along by the flyers that had just been killed and maimed in the carrion flyer's assault.

But the valley is not gone yet... A voice called in the flyer's head.  You failed your nephew... don't fail to protect what he loves.. .

Pterano sucked in a breath and raised his wings in a determined gesture.  The battle wasn't over yet and he would ensure that he did his part to defend what his nephew valued and stood for.  He would prove that he was different from the flyer he had just slain.  He would prove it through his deeds.

I will help his friends or die trying.

With a forceful flap of the wings Pterano rose into the air.  He had no idea what he would see when he entered the Hidden Canyon, but he did know that he would either leave it victorious or dead.

......

The Secret Caverns:

"Oh no!  We're trapped!"

Detras and Shorty stood at the end of a long tunnel.  The brilliant bright circle shined through the opening at the other end of the tunnel, but a large chasm with briskly flowing water greeted them.  It was nothing that a fast runner would have trouble navigating and swimming, but it would prove to be too much for a longneck.

"Come, Shorty!  We need to find another path!"

As the two began to retreat down the passageway, the sounds of running feet greeted their ears as the terrible forms of two fast biters sudden appeared out of their only possible exit.  They were trapped.

"I'm so sorry, Shorty..."  Detras spoke sadly as the two fiends began their final approach towards them.  The waters below were not an option for Shorty and Detras refused to leave a young one behind.  The only thing that was left to do now was to wait to die.

Shorty took a deep breath. I may be doomed, but Detras is not... A small tear left his eyes as he determined what he was going to do.

"I learned something important from my brother: sometimes sacrifices are necessary."  

The eyes of the two dinosaurs locked as Shorty gave the elderly fast runner a sympathetic expression.  He knew that Detras would blame himself for what was about to happen, but Shorty would not permit himself to sacrifice himself unnecessarily.  No, one of them would have to live in order to tell the tale.  With that in mind Shorty finished his speech.

"Tell my brother that I died brave."

Detras realized what the longneck was about to do, but could not react in time.  "No, Shorty, don't..."

Shorty didn't give him time to finish as he pushed the fast runner over the edge of the chasm and into the water below.  The protests of the fast runner could be heard as he struggled to guide himself down the stream.  Detras had achieved safety.  At least Ruby and her siblings would not be left without a father.  

Shorty closed his eyes and awaited the end.  Only know did he allow himself to break down and cry at the fate which had befallen him.  His short life was coming to an abrupt end.  His only solace was that many others would live because of his sacrifice.  But now was the time for him to pay for his bravery...

Schluck!

Roar!

Shorty turned around in surprise to see that one of the fast biters had been impaled by a spear.  The beast was beginning to jerk and spasm as the terrible toxin began to enter the fiend's system.  

Shorty stood in amazement.  He might not die here after all.

......

"Westron, let the stick go!  He is trying to throw you!"

The next second seemed to drag on as Viscond's worst fears came to pass.  

With a trembling arm, the fast biter gripped the pointed stick with his clawed hand and jerked back.  With the stick still impaled in his thrashing body, Westron was thrown with tremendous force into the cavern ceiling.  The poor hidden runner fell with a tremendous crash into the cavern floor below.  

"Westron!  No!"  Viscond screamed as he sprinted towards his ailing friend and deputy.  But he was already too late.

Crack!

With terrible force, the fast biter struck the prone hidden runner with his powerful feet.   With the sound of cracking bone and the sudden thrashing of the remainder of his friend's body, Viscond knew that his friend was dead.  Killed by the same fast biter that he had condemned to oblivion.

Viscond quaked in anguish.  His trusted deputy and companion...  the same dinosaur who had helped him manage the pack during his one-dinosaur mission against Red Claw...  the same dinosaur who gave him an outlet for his thoughts even in the darkest days... his best friend... was no more.  A mixture of rage and shame filled him.  Rage at the injustice of the world and shame that his friend had to die fighting what he thought of as his battle.  Viscond knew that if anyone should have to die for the valley then it should be him, the same one that took the battle to Red Claw in the first place.  It was in this dark place that Viscond snapped.

And charged the two fiends.

"You bastard!"

With uncontrolled rage, the hidden runner struck the ailing fast biter with his spear with all of the self-control of a threehorn trampling an enemy underfoot.  Stab after stab impaled the fallen fast biter and splattered its blood across the long passageway.  He would not merely allow the poison to kill his friend's murderer.  No, he was hell-bent on taking that step himself.

Viscond grinned with unbound malice as he watched the fast biter writhe in agony.  He could not bring his beloved friend back but he could put an end to his killer.  Unfortunately for him, however, he did not see the other fast biter apprach...

"Look out!"

Viscond regained focus as Shorty's words reached him.  With sudden concern he turned in the direction of the longneck's voice.

Only to see the fast biter already in mid-leap.

Viscond rolled to his right as the predator landed in his original location, but quickly realized his mistake as the stick went rolling off of the precipice of the passageway and into the flowing waters below.

"Shit!"

......

Shorty stared in horrified silence at the plight of the hidden runner.  His friend laid dead in a bloody mess on the cavern floor, while the predator proceeded to close the distance on the defenseless dinosaur.  Viscond had no weapon and his armor would provide little defense against a full-fledged attack by a vengeful fast biter.  He was as good as dead.

But Shorty now had a way out.  While the fast biter edged closer to the fiend, he was leaving the exit unguarded.  Shorty could leave right now and leave Viscond to his fate.  No one would blame him for making that choice and no one would even know...

No.  Shorty resolved.  I have to help!

Shorty looked from side to side for anything that might help the hapless hidden runner.  However, all that was present in the narrow passage was the gore of the recently killed, the dead hidden runner's stick, and fallen rocks.

Shorty blinked.  The stick!  That could work.

......

Viscond retreated slowly through the darkened passage.  There was no escape here.  There was no hope.  His only options were to either meet his doom at the claws of the massive predator in front of him or to take his chances in the swift currents of the waters below.  A swimmer or a fast runner could navigate those, but a hidden runner?  It would be suicide.  Nonetheless he prepared to launch himself into the dark abyss.  A small chance of survival was still better than none...

Dink... Dink... Dink...

Viscond looked in amazement as a sharpened stick, his friend's spear, came flopping his way.  But how?  Who could have...

"Hey, tooth-for-brains!  Forget about your lunch, did ya?!"

Viscond couldn't believe what he was seeing.  What was the longneck doing?  Why wasn't he making an escape?

"Forget about me?"

The fast biter turned with an enraged expression.  The audacity of a leaf-eater challenging a nearly full-grown fast biter was too much for the predator could bear as he lamented at this situation.

"I will enjoy gutting you!  You pathetic sap-sucker!"

Viscond knew that the longneck could not understand the predator's words, but he certainly could.  Since the fast biter was distracted that meant one thing: he could strike with impunity.  He did not let the longneck's bravado go unrewarded.  

With as much speed as he could muster Viscond grasped the spear and placed it under his arm.  Then with tremendous force he charged headlong towards the fiend's backside.

Roar!

A tremendous roar emanated from the fast biter as the spear pierced through his lower abdomen and ripped through his entrails.  A sickening splashing sound could be heard as the mortally wounded fast biter's bowels fell out of his body and onto the rocks below, filling the entire area with the foul stench of blood and excrement.  Viscond's strike had not been in vain.  The beast had been mortally wounded.

But that did not mean that he was dead yet.

"Ahhhh!!!"

Viscond looked in horror as the dying fast biter landed upon the green longneck as it thrashed about aimlessly in agonizing pain, sending both Shorty and the dying predator rolling towards the precipice.  

"Hang on, kid!"  Viscond ran with all of his might towards the troubled longneck as he continued to roll down the uneven ridge towards the abyss below.  This child had just saved his life and he would do anything to return the favor.  As the fast biter fell into the water below, Viscond struck out with his hand and reached for the longneck's hind leg...

Only to miss it entirely.  The flailing body of the falling longneck paid testament to his failure.  The longneck had saved his life, but he could not save his.  He would share the same watery grave as the fallen fast biter.  He could only watch as the child descended into the dark waters below.

As the falling child's scream echoed in the cave, the sound of a splash and the thrashing of legs could be heard in the water.  Screams were then replaced with panicked cries and gasps for air, which became lighter and lighter as the child was pushed away by the swift current.  Then finally there was silence.  Viscond was all alone in the empty cavern.  No friends, no enemies, and no children could be heard in the darkened tomb.  

Only silence remained as his companion.

......

The Hidden Canyon:

"Leap over them!"

"Ahhhh!!!!"

Ignis braced herself against the ground as the sharptooth's body impaled itself on her spear.  With two rows of spears, this meant that a fighter in one row could defend against fighters from above or below.

But it also meant that her spear would be out of commission while it was stuck in the dying fiend.  With as much strength as she could muster she placed her weight on her front foot and then shifted it swiftly to the back, leveraging as much force as she could muster.

Shluck!

With a swiftness that could only come in the heat of battle, she raised her spear to greet the enemy.  The line had to be maintained, no matter the costs.  That was when she noticed something interesting.

The enemy was retreating back... and an opening was appearing in front of the defensive line.

Ignis smiled.  It seemed like their steadfast defense was working.  The enemy had lost so many of the members that they were losing cohesion.  In such a circumstance every instinct in her body told her to press the attack... to drive the enemy into Chomper's parents... to end this battle once and for all!

But she hesitated...

Daddy always told me to see under the obvious...  what could they be planning?

As she examined the seemingly retreating fast biters things began to fall into place in the hidden runner's mind.  The retreat is orderly so they are not panicking...  This revelation led to the next logical insight.  So the retreat must be planned... and if the retreat is not made in panic then it is made to increase distance... She nodded as the pieces began to fall into place.

"Ignis?  Should be we press the attack?  They seem to be retreating..."

Being transfixed by her thoughts, Ignis ignored the deputy.  Had she been more aware of his words, she would have realized that he technically was the next-in-command for the battle, whereas she was merely another fighter.  The fact that she was being sought after for orders was not lost on everyone else, however, as they paused in wait of her orders.
 
Her ponderings continued.  ...or they could be retreating in order to buy time... but why would they... Her eyes went wide.  The dropped pointed sticks... oh crap!

It was at that moment that she noticed that Seeker's pack was pressing the attack once again.  Only Spike and Leap's injured forms could be seen behind their lines.  As the fast biters leaped over the defensive line and back into enemy territory, Ignis realized that she was too late to warn them.

"The pointed sticks!  They're going to use the pointed sticks!"

......

Unfortunately, Littlefoot and his companions could not hear the yelling over the roars of the enemy or the moans of the dying.  

It took all of their concentration in order for them to navigate around and over the dead and dying.  The ground was slick with blood and viscera as the canyon's stream began to flow red with the lifeblood of the fallen.  The resulting sight was overwhelming even for a sharptooth and made it difficult to process everything at once.  Under the harsh bright circle, living and dead both looked demonic under the blanket of crimson.  The cascade of smells made the situation worse, as the blood of dozens intermixed with the smell of death, excrement, fear, anguish, and pain.  In the resulting hellscape it was hard to identify friend or foe... living or dead... it all bleed together in a horrific waking nightmare from which only the dead could hope to awaken.

The orders that Littlefoot had given before their renewed assault still echoed in his own mind.

"Okay, Leap and Finder?  You stay here..."

Spike protested this.  "No, Seeker, I can..."

Littlefoot shook his head.  "No disagreements!  You both are badly injured.  You can help the hidden runners if the line is breached..."  He looked over at the others as he continued his speech.  "And Swift?  Thud?  You stay here as well.  The hidden runners need all of the help that they can get."

"What are we doing?"  Came Cera's impatient response, preventing Thud and Swift from making similar objections to Spike's.

Littlefoot took on a grim expression.  "Thud killed his deputy, now we will kill Calin.  With him dead the fast biters should be left confused and vulnerable."

Chomper nodded at this.  The little biter was now covered in blood from head to toe, with the nictitating membranes of his eyes giving them a crimson glow.  He looked more like a creature that one would see in their nightmares as opposed to a youngling sharptooth.

"What then, Seeker?"

Littlefoot grinned at Chomper's question.  It was a horrific sight coming from the bloodied fast biter.  It carried no delight at all.

"Then we have the hidden runners advance.  Time to kill them all!"


Littlefoot charged a bit ahead of his packmates.  The plan was simple: launch a single brute-force attack on Calin and then flee.  The hidden runners could then press the attack and maybe, just maybe, they could open up a path to the entryway.  Then they could evacuate into the defenses of the valley.  But first they had to find their hated nemesis in this sea of retreating bodies.  That was when he smelled it.

Calin...

Littlefoot turned slightly as he traced the scent of his hated enemy.  A lone fast biter stood in-between two columns of fast biters, a conspicuous sight in the otherwise disorganized mass.  He could not see his true coloration under the layers of blood and grime, but he could assume with some certainty that this was their target.  No one else would be organizing the forces in such a direct way.  This had to be him.

With renewed motivation Littlefoot sprinted ahead further, unwittingly displacing himself from his allies.  He had no idea that he was running faster than they could keep up.  His eyes were simply focused on one dinosaur... one kill... with all that the fiend had put him through he wanted to be the one to strike the killing blow...

Littlefoot never saw the spear coming.

"Ahhh!!!"

Suddenly fast biters gather one either side of him as another fast biter forced him to the ground with his spear.  In his terrible pain it took a few moments for Littlefoot to realize what had happened.  Calin's own voice confirmed his worst fears.

"How does it feel to be on the receiving end of a trick, Seeker?!"  

Littlefoot tried to suck down a breath as the pain in his chest became unbearable.  He knew that he had been speared, but he did not yet know of the severity.  But he could only assume the worst as the sound of fighting erupted around him.

"Seeker!  No!"

The scream of his beloved Ruby seemed to confirm something in his mind.  Looks like this is the end for me... The pain only continued to grow as Calin's grip on the spear did not waver.  He was stuck on the ground.

"Your sticks come in quite handy, Seeker!  The hidden runners are just about to see that first hand!"

Littlefoot growled despite the pain that this caused in his burning torso.  "Do you honestly think...."  Littlefoot choked out.  "...that Red Claw will keep you alive?  He will dispose of you just like he does everyone else."

Calin laughed.  A cold, bitter sound.  "You don't think that I know this, Seeker?  He will kill me once I have done my job, but you know what?  I don't care anymore!"  

Calin pushed in hard on the spear as Littlefoot choked out a gasp.  The pain was overwhelming now and every heartbeat made Littlefoot shiver in pain.

"What does it matter anyway?!"  Calin was in a crazed frenzy.  "You live and then you die!  Only some of us, the strong, get any recognition, power, or influence!  That is all that matters!"

Littlefoot coughed as he began to taste something metallic in his mouth.

"In the end no one will remember you, you insolent fool!  I will kill and torture everyone you love and when Red Claw finally kills me at least I will now that it is I, Calin, will live on in song as his deputy."  Calin had a horrifying look on his face as he looked into Littlefoot's eyes with malicious intent.  "But I will have some fun with all of you first!  Perhaps starting with the pink one that loves you so much..."

Littlefoot closed his eyes at Calin's threat.  As the sounds of battle erupted around him, he had to admit that this was probably the end of his pack.  

No... I will not let it end like this...

Something snapped in Littlefoot as he grabbed the spear which was pinning him to the ground with a firmness that seemed impossible for one as injured as him.  

"What the hell?!"  Calin struggled to keep the impaled fast biter pinned to the ground, but without success.

I will put an end to this... Littlefoot was not operating on logic now, nor on instinct, he had simply made up his mind.  

"This is impossible!"  Calin screamed as Littlefoot rose to his two feet shakily and, with power that seemed to come from out of nowhere, began to life the base of the spear.

Your pack will know fear....  Regardless of the risk to himself, he would ensure that his friends got to safety.

"Die!  Why won't you die?!"  Calin flailed wildly as he refused to drop the spear.  As Littlefoot continued to rise onto both feet, both the spear and Calin were raised off of the ground.  It was a sight that made the fighting around them stop in horrified silence.  It was then that Littlefoot spoke with the assurance of one who knew that he was already dead and who no longer cared.

"You may have killed me, but how many of you will die before I fall?!"  Littlefoot roared with a fury that made even the fast biters advancing on the hidden runners freeze.  They seemed to be asking themselves the same thing: how was he still alive?

......

Red Claw advanced upon the gravely injured longneck with growing bloodlust.  They fell too easily.  After the young male was out of the way then the elderly female would follow... The elderly male was already as good as dead...  Then he would finish off all of the swimmers that remained.

Swoosh!

Anticipating the longneck's move, Red Claw moved to the right.  His assistant, however, was not as savvy to fighting longnecks as he was.

Thud!

The sharptooth rolled his eyes at the incompetence of his new minions.  The first one had been killed by the elderly male, a rather pathetic end, and the surviving one was now falling for the most basic of techniques.  Red Claw knew that he could not lament the incompetence of his underlings in the heat of battle, however, as he prepared himself for the strike that he knew would come.

He didn't have to wait long.

Swoosh!

Crack!


The longneck screamed in pain as Red Claw dodged his tail strike and then bit down on the exposed tail.  The cracking of bone confirmed that he had made his mark.  Now he would make short work of the longnecks and the rest of the defenders would fall quickly.  All he had to do was finish off this healthy one and...

Caw!

Red Claw closed his eyes as he ducked his head away from the sudden intruder.

A flyer?  Damned annoyances...

Red Claw opened one of his eyes only to see the flyer attempt to strike at his eye again.  A quick dodge to the left prevented that outcome.  A flurry of dodges and missed attempts to bite the flyer failed as he saw what the flyer had attempted to achieve.

The longneck had been given time to retreat.

"Wha... Pterano?! thanks..."

Red Claw could not understand the gibberish that the longnecks were muttering, but he could see that their 'savior' flyer had only bought them time.  This he would soon remedy by advancing on his prey.  With a quick roar from himself, the other two-footer quickly began to advance beside Red Claw.  Now they would finish the job...

As he again approached the longneck, however, he heard the sounds of battle suddenly come to a stop in the distance.  A roared threat followed that echoed across the canyon.

"You may have killed me, but how many of you will die before I fall?!"

Red Claw paused.  

What in the hell is this?

......

Ruby stood in amazement at the sight in front of her.  Between the heartbreaking scene of her friend being stabbed by the spear and his stunning return to his feet, her mind could not comprehend what was taking place.  But even that paled in comparison to what happened next.

With both hands firmly on where the spear entered his chest, Littlefoot swung his body to the left.  In a flailing motion, Calin was slammed headfirst into the rock wall, knocking him unconscious.  Leaving Littlefoot, with the spear still stuck in his chest, alone between the amazed fighters.  Littlefoot may have been gravely injured.

But he was not dead yet.

"How many sharpteeth have fallen at our claws?  How many of your brothers and sisters have we eaten?  How many of your sleep stories have we crushed?"

Ruby approached Littlefoot now, who almost appeared to be in a trance.  What are you doing, Littlefoot?!  Come back to me and let's get out of here! Despite her thoughts, however, Ruby did not speak to him.  Some part of her mind told her that Littlefoot had a plan.

And she was right.

"Do you think that we will stop now?  Do you even know who we are?  Do you Red Claw?!"

It was only know that Ruby saw the full extent of what was happening around here.  All fighting had ended at the disturbing sight and even the adults on the other end of the field of battle seemed to be holding back because of the stunning turn of events.  That was when Ruby caught a surprising sight of her own.

Red Claw is watching this... Both he and a smaller two-footer appeared to watching with a mix of confusion and bewilderment.  

She turned back to Littlefoot and saw that he was giving her a knowing look in his eyes.  That caused her to examine his chest.

The pointed stick is barely in... but then how is it...  That was when she realized the answer.  The vines!  The vines have the stick wedged in place!  Waves of relief washed over her as her initial impression of his injury had proved unfounded.  Littlefoot might still live through this after all!  But that was when the other aspect of this revelation came to her. But the enemy doesn't know about any of this!  They think he is invincible... The logical consequences of that were not lost on her.  If they couldn't win through force then they could win through fear.

And the smell of fear that was now coming from the enemy fast biters was overwhelming.

Very quickly, Ruby made claw gestures to her injured packmates behind the hidden runner defensive line.  It was time for the leaf-eaters to take advantage of the situation.

Little did she know that help was already on the way.

......

"They are trapped in the Hidden Canyon!"

Whitehorn was haunted as Guido's warning continued to echo in his mind.  Their best defenders were probably being slaughtered while the threehorns guarded a peaceful entrance.  Keeping the smallest of forces at the other entrance, he and the rest of the threehorns sprinted towards the other entrance.

Hang on, everyone!  We are coming!

......

Red Claw stared at the fast biter in the distance.  So this was Seeker...

"You cannot beat us!  You cannot kill us!  We have been chosen by the Stone of Cold Fire to destroy you!"

Red Claw sneered at this in a mixture of rage and disgust.  He could not believe that his fast biters were being scared into inaction by another dinosaur's dying words.  His response came immediately.

"We shall see, Seeker!  I fear no stone!

In his single-minded rage, Red Claw did not notice the longnecks and swimmers quietly evacuating to the other side of the battlefield.

......

"We shall see, Seeker!  I fear no stone!

Littlefoot smiled.  He had gotten Red Claw's attention.  Now it was time to use his mind game for full effect.

Thanks Calin... you unwittingly gave us the perfect opportunity.  Littlefoot took a closer look at what Ruby had noticed earlier: the spear had only made superficial wound and was being wedged in place by the vines.  This will hurt, but it will be worth it. Gritting his teeth, Littlefoot again grasped the spear.

And pulled it out.

As the spear fell to the ground with a soft thud, the fast biters quickly backed away from the blood-soaked fast biter.  Facing away from the retreating fast biters, Littlefoot could not see the fearful expressions on their faces, nor could he see that several of them had laid down in an act of submission.  But the scents of fear and confusion were enough to confirm to him that his ploy was working wonderfully.  Now to distract Red Claw for a few more moments...

"Oh, but you should, Red Claw!  For we are the chosen...  Soon we will finish what we started long ago."

Red Claw's massive form could be seen slowly approaching the insolent fast biter as swimmers could be seen running passed the hidden runner lines.  The evacuation to back within the Great Valley had begun.

"What do you mean?"  Came Red Claw's roared response.

Littlefoot smiled as he could see that Red Claw had taken the bait.  But where were the longnecks?  And what about Thud and the others?  He brushed that aside for a moment as he responded to the malicious sharptooth.

"You remember how your son died, do you not?  I'm sure the other sharpteeth have mocked you about it.  Being killed by leaf-eater children...  Do you ever regret raising such a worthless son?"

Gasps of shock erupted from the enemy fast biters at Littlefoot's pronouncement.  None of them would have ever dared to speak to Red Claw like that.  The fact that he had willingly done so only added to the impression that there was something unnatural about him and his followers.

"I will enjoy killing you, fast biter!  My son was strong!  You are weak and feeble!"

Littlefoot made a dismissive gesture with his clawed hand.

"And the leaf-eater children were smart.  Even when he chased them across the Mysterious Beyond they did not give into their fear.  We followed the trail and kept moving forward."

Red Claw paused in his advance.  "We?"

Littlefoot looked out of the corner of his eye.  The swimmers were now where his pack was and being urged forward by Bron, but his grandparents and the injured members of his pack were nowhere to be seen.  Where in the hell were they?

Littlefoot sighed and then continued.  "Do you ever wonder what happened to those five leaf-eater children?"  The rumble of the feet of Chomper's parents could be heard as presumably Bron took over defense of the entrance.  "The ones who beat you time and time again?"  The towering forms of the two sharpteeth were now casting shadows over him.  Littlefoot now knew that he had the forces that he needed.  "The ones that other sharptooth treat as legends to scare their children into behaving?  The leaf-eaters who killed the strongest of them all?"

Red Claw roared, but said nothing.  He was thoroughly enraged now.  His two dozen fast biters were incapacitated due to their fear of these dinosaurs and several of the leaf-eaters had now escaped into safety.  Now the fast biters were heading his direction out of fear of this charlatan.  His plan was quickly coming undone.

That's right, Red Claw... move closer...  Littlefoot thought to himself.  Just get into range...

That was when he saw it.  His grandfather had collapsed near where the hidden runner line still stood, Ruby and Cera appeared to be attending to them.  They were all in the danger zone...

The voice of Thud suddenly spoke into Littlefoot's ear.

"Seeker, your grandparents..."

Littlefoot did not wait for him to finish.  "Get Swift, Leap, Finder, and the others out of here."  Littlefoot began to break into a trot.  "I have to finish this."


Go ahead and check out my fanfictions, The Seven Hunters, Songs of the Hunters, and Menders Tale.