Ada’s wings look fine to me (though her right hand looks sort of misshapen :blink:), and I think that both her and Pterano’s facesóexpression-wiseóare very well done. However, there seems to be a blank space between Pterano’s claw and Ada’s chin (unless that’s supposed to be one of his claws).
The sunrise colors are nice, but I think the sun itself would look better if you made the whole thing look like it was glowing, rather than just having a corona around it.
The second picture is incredible.
Ptyra, in particular, looks fantastic, and I love how you drew Pterano with his hands on her shoulders (judging by the caption, to help her contain her excitement
). I’m also awed by how all of the characters have different expressions, yet they all convey emotions appropriate to the atmosphere of the scene.
I will say that Petrie’s mother’s hands look a little too “mittenlike”, and her crest is longer and more crooked than it should be. Ptyra’s left arm also looks kind of jointless, and her feet are rather asymmetrical (though her left foot looks great).
By the way, Petrie had eight siblings in LBT XII. (For the record, he had five in the original movie, and four in the seventh.) Also, my opinion for if and when you color this piece in: just in case you weren’t planning this already, I think it would look great if you used the same sort of color palette for the background (particularly the sky) as that of the wasteland scenes in the first LBT.
