The Gang of Five

The Land Before Time => LBT Fanfiction => Topic started by: rali_chopfoot on February 10, 2012, 03:24:49 AM

Title: DINO-LOVE
Post by: rali_chopfoot on February 10, 2012, 03:24:49 AM

This is my first fanfiction.Hope you'll enjoy it.  :)
                           
                                             DINO-LOVE
The sun was rising over the Great Valley,Littlefoot was awakened by his grandma's
                                           sweet voice.

''Good morning,Littlefoot'',Grandma Longneck said ''Someone's here to play with you''.  To Littlefoot's surprise it was ALI,little did anyone know they liked each other (okay....the gang knows but,Ali & Littlefoot each other's feelings). The 2 longnecks raced each other to the falling water.they met the rest of the gang & played until lunch.



Okay,I'll try to make the rest very soon.'Til the next fanfic  :wave bye.

Title: DINO-LOVE
Post by: Dr. Curzon on February 11, 2012, 01:03:15 AM

Please make your chapters longer. And I doubt you can finish this by Valentines Day. If you need help, just ask.