The Gang of Five

The Land Before Time => LBT Fanfiction => Topic started by: chomperrules1993 on February 25, 2015, 12:15:03 AM

Title: Corrupted opinions
Post by: chomperrules1993 on February 25, 2015, 12:15:03 AM

How many of you liked Corrupted? It"s under "New Fanfic"

Title: Corrupted opinions
Post by: Ducky123 on February 25, 2015, 11:25:29 AM

Sharptooth having super powers kind of ruined it for me but that's just my opinion, others might like this. I would have preferred a really vicious fight which is better described with more details and also longer and more exciting.

Title: Corrupted opinions
Post by: DarkHououmon on February 25, 2015, 01:52:12 PM

I'll be honest, I haven't read it from start to finish. But I do agree with Ducky123 regarding Sharptooth having superpowers. I don't think that was really necessary, personally. He was terrifying enough without them. I think it would have been better if he was just portrayed how he was in the movie; just a really strong sharptooth with high durability.

Title: Corrupted opinions
Post by: chomperrules1993 on February 25, 2015, 03:51:14 PM

Well Sharptooth is a demon in my story. Him having powers made sense to me at the time