The Gang of Five

The Land Before Time => LBT Fanfiction => Topic started by: RainbowFaceProtege on April 14, 2020, 04:29:26 PM

Title: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: RainbowFaceProtege on April 14, 2020, 04:29:26 PM

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Title: Re: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: Goldenwind on April 14, 2020, 05:49:14 PM

I feel so sorry for Chase.  :(petrie He really needs a friend. This is a nice start! Can't wait to see more!  :Mo

Title: Re: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: RainbowFaceProtege on April 16, 2020, 04:09:49 PM

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Title: Re: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: rhombus on April 25, 2020, 07:51:07 PM

Poor Chase.  It is never easy being the weakest physically in a group or to be the subject of bullying, but it is even worse when you are in a situation where you must either eventually become the hunter or be hunted.  It is quite understandable why he would seek out companionship among flat-teeth under such circumstances, though the obviously has done little to improve his lot with the pack.  Though now with his thoughts turning towards freedom, I can only assume what he is going to do next.

This is quite a nice start that gives us a good overview of Chase as a character and his life situation at the moment.  I look forward to seeing what happens next. :)

Title: Re: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: RainbowFaceProtege on April 25, 2020, 08:26:05 PM

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Title: Re: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: RainbowFaceProtege on May 15, 2020, 04:00:52 PM

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Title: Re: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: Goldenwind on May 20, 2020, 10:59:14 AM

This was a adorable chapter!  :chompysmile Now Chase has a flattooth friend!

Title: Re: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: rhombus on June 01, 2020, 03:16:15 AM

This chapter moved things along quite nicely.  Despite not being particularly long in length this chapter certainly did give me a few things to ponder.  For one, the behavior of Chase's father implies a prayer of some kind to the ancestors or a particular star.  Considering his own concerns for his son, I do wonder if perhaps he was praying for his well-being.  If so, then that prayer might have been answered in a way that he could never have foreseen.  The most intriguing part of this chapter for me, however, is the interactions between Chase and Kendra.  Though Kendra is open to befriending Chase I do wonder if her parents will see things the same way.  I look forward to seeing where things go from here. :)

Title: Re: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: RainbowFaceProtege on June 02, 2020, 08:23:58 PM

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Title: Re: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: RainbowFaceProtege on August 17, 2021, 04:48:03 PM

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Title: Re: Herd Animals and Pack Hunters
Post by: rhombus on August 29, 2021, 09:25:59 PM

Interesting, so it turns out that Kendra and Chase ended up living with one another for nine years, if I understood that correctly in the story. It would be interesting to see how the valley itself reacted if the duo took the clubtail up on her offer to join the herd. Somehow I suspect a certain threehorn would object though (if this is this is set in the television series timeline) then a certain sharptooth in the valley might be quite thrilled.   :OhYou