The Gang of Five

The Land Before Time => LBT Fanfiction => Topic started by: RainbowFaceProtege on September 03, 2020, 01:59:03 PM

Title: Greens, Eggs, and Shams
Post by: RainbowFaceProtege on September 03, 2020, 01:59:03 PM

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Title: Re: Greens, Eggs, and Shams
Post by: Anagnos on September 04, 2020, 05:29:56 AM

This story has an interesting start. From the films alone, we could surmise that the relationship between Ozzy and Strut was anything but brotherly love, and this trend is closely followed in fiction as well. But under that tough exterior Ozzy must care for his brother at least for a bit, for he has allowed Strut to accompany him to their next meal. I think he tries to hide this fact from him by disguising his intentions so that he only needs a replacement. Now Strut begins his life as a newly-appointed Egghead. I will be looking forward to how things develop from here. :)

Title: Re: Greens, Eggs, and Shams
Post by: RainbowFaceProtege on September 05, 2020, 05:50:34 PM

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Title: Re: Greens, Eggs, and Shams
Post by: rhombus on September 08, 2020, 11:34:16 AM

Now this is certainly an interesting start!  We get a clear feel for Ozzy ans Strut's uneasy sibling relationship, and Ozzy's pathological fixation on eggs.  :OzzyAngry We also get to clearly see Strut's point of view and his more appeasing personality through his thoughts and his conversation with his parents.  I do wonder how his time as an Egghead will go, and if this might perhaps show us how the dynamic in the second film came to be.  I look forward to seeing how this develops. :)

Title: Re: Greens, Eggs, and Shams
Post by: Goldenwind on September 09, 2020, 10:58:12 AM

Oh wow! A Ozzy and Strut prequel fic!  :MommaSmile I really like how it's going, as I always wanted to see more development on these two. I expect things might go down in choas in the next chapter.  :rhett_smile