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Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on January 25, 2008, 09:37:53 PM
Coming soon to an RP thread near you..

first, there was The Bashful One
Second, Blackclaw's Dark Ambitions


and now the third and final chapter

are you ready for the war?
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 25, 2008, 09:39:06 PM
The war of the 2 plots?
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 25, 2008, 09:42:03 PM
Nice idea for suspense, but I ask the same question as Kor.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: The Great Valley Guardian on January 25, 2008, 09:48:38 PM
Hmmm...what do you have planned? <_<
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 25, 2008, 09:49:48 PM
I'm in for a war, though.
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Post by: Kor on January 25, 2008, 09:51:12 PM
With all the plots being added in, Maybe the group should go and try to find Ducky's vanished father, and Mim's herd, and bring them to the great valley.  With 2 plots going on at the same time, why not add in 2 more, it'll make the rp even better.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: The Great Valley Guardian on January 25, 2008, 09:53:41 PM
This is what Longtail was built for! I look forward to the war!
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on January 25, 2008, 09:54:48 PM
quiet a bit, really...

one thing is for sure, Blackclaw will be returning with his followers... and a few bigger unexpected surprises.

But lets also please try to avoid taking over plots

one spoiler though, GVG, I'd like to use your character Korr in this final chapter.. its adds a third level to the climax
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 25, 2008, 09:54:49 PM
If anyone whips out any powers all of my characters including the fc's will whip out powers too.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 25, 2008, 09:59:15 PM
Vylor and Argaya going elvish and dragon!
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 25, 2008, 10:01:34 PM
If they do then Littlefoot, Ducky and Mim WILL have powers for at least that scene and every other character should too, it is only fair.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: The Great Valley Guardian on January 25, 2008, 10:03:52 PM
@ Kor: Don't worry, my OC doesn't have any powers, but he is trained to handle a really bad situation

@Aves: DEAL! Take him!
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on January 25, 2008, 10:07:23 PM
What's everyone think of the title?
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 25, 2008, 10:12:29 PM
I like the title.  

Though I am serious about the powers thing.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Chiletrek on January 25, 2008, 10:31:42 PM
Hello:
 This is a good trilogy I may say, with the first chapters to build up everything and been the third part the big conclusion of a big story that have been unfolding since some good time already.
 I do look forward to know what are you all up B) .
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 26, 2008, 11:27:57 AM
I think that it should have a better ring to it. In my opinion, it should be suitable for a Dragonforce song title.

Examples of titles
Through the Fire and Flames
Operation Ground and Pound
Revolution Deathsquad
The Flame of Youth
Cry for Eternity
Storming the Burning Fields
Fury of the Storm
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: LBTFan13 on January 26, 2008, 05:27:03 PM
lol, nice. i like the title just fine.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: The Great Valley Guardian on January 26, 2008, 05:44:14 PM
I like the title...it's okay!
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 26, 2008, 05:46:55 PM
On second thought, the title does have a name that could be used as the title of a Dragonforce song. I like the title.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 26, 2008, 05:53:36 PM
I like the current title personally.
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Post by: Chiletrek on January 27, 2008, 12:00:46 AM
Hello:
 I like the title too, it looks like it has some real power in it.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 27, 2008, 01:09:11 AM
The title should stay as is.
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Post by: Chiletrek on January 29, 2008, 01:25:43 AM
Hello:
 I just saw Aves' reply in the RPGs, and all I can say is that this RPG will begin with something big :yes .
 You got me very curious indeed :)
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on January 29, 2008, 01:30:14 AM
Like the eirie ending?
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Chiletrek on January 29, 2008, 01:33:21 AM
Hello:
 Yep, I liked it a lot.
 Just when everybody thinks there will be peace...... the storm is coming
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 29, 2008, 02:08:30 AM
That was a good ending.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: LBTFan13 on January 29, 2008, 07:17:25 AM
that was a nice ending. i couldn't help but notice the Terminator reference.

man: he said there is a storm coming

Sarah: I know
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: The Great Valley Guardian on January 29, 2008, 12:07:59 PM
That ending was great...but I gotta know one thing...WHY does Denton keep wandering off? You would think he'd want to be part of the adventure...Oh well, I'm sure we'll see more of him in the final chapter! Can't wait for it to begin!
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 29, 2008, 01:14:54 PM
Maybe part of him hates being around people for to long.
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 29, 2008, 01:44:22 PM
Denton is Aves's OC. Aves probably designed Denton to be like that.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on January 30, 2008, 12:30:38 AM
Quote from: lbt/cty_lover,Jan 29 2008 on  12:44 PM
Denton is Aves's OC. Aves probably designed Denton to be like that.
Oh har har

my theory is that Denton has severe ADD... one momment he's interested and having fun with the group, the next his mind is caught by some random distasnt thing and he wonders off without a momments thought..

He has to keep wondering off apaerently because I myself have a hard time keeping up due to my busy life =P

poor Denton
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 30, 2008, 02:08:00 AM
SOunds like his mother may need to put him on a leash to keep him out of trouble.     :lol   I recall seeing years ago, every once in a while a kid on a leash with his mother holding the leash.  I think the leash was usually connected to one of the child's wrists.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on January 30, 2008, 09:05:41 PM
The ending has begun
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: LBTFan13 on January 30, 2008, 09:11:36 PM
i am pumped!
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Chiletrek on January 30, 2008, 09:24:01 PM
Hello:
 I look forward to know more ;)
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 30, 2008, 09:53:10 PM
Should prove interesting.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on January 31, 2008, 01:31:09 AM
just a few posts in, and already, a plot twist is developing =)
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 31, 2008, 02:06:09 AM
Indeed it is.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 31, 2008, 01:45:10 PM
I found a way to explain why Vylor and Argaya didn't appear in the previous RP.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 31, 2008, 03:29:22 PM
They grew in the few days or week it's been since their last appearance?
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 31, 2008, 03:32:46 PM
Their age is not known. If they grew, what age range would you expect them to be?
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 31, 2008, 03:56:33 PM
Aves is the best one to ask about that stuff since he's the one running the rp.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 31, 2008, 03:59:41 PM
The thing is, the most growth occurs in the teenage years. Since they had a growth spurt, wouldn't it make sense for them to be in their teenage years?

I think it does. That is actually their age range. I can't give an exact value. I need to find a way to convert elf/dragon years (Vylor and Argaya's natural races, respectively) into longneck years.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on January 31, 2008, 07:58:41 PM
Made a few slight booboos in the RP, just try to ignore them, guys

also one of them was a mixup on Stripetail/Longtail... this is the first time I got those two succesfully mixed up on these forums
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 31, 2008, 09:05:18 PM
Somewhat similar names I can understand them getting mixed up.  

As for the sizes of Vylor and Argaya and age ranges you can talk them  over with Aves by here or pm so you both can reach a decision if discussion is needed.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 31, 2008, 09:06:36 PM
I modified my original post. They only grew about 2 inches.

That was how much I grew in a week once.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on January 31, 2008, 09:26:54 PM
this has to be one of my better RP's to date. what y'all think of the events so far?
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: LBTFan13 on January 31, 2008, 09:28:41 PM
pretty nice so far.
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Post by: The Great Valley Guardian on January 31, 2008, 09:30:44 PM
I am so enjoying this RP! I can't wait to bring the red horns back into this!
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: LBTFan13 on January 31, 2008, 09:32:22 PM
i'm interested to see how Korr and Zaine interact this time. i remember seeing in GVG's last post with Korr that he was thinking, "we will meet again little longneck", so i am excited to see what happens
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on January 31, 2008, 09:47:08 PM
It has been an interesting rp so far.
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on January 31, 2008, 09:52:56 PM
The storm is good. And Denton's thoughts.

I must remember to get Vylor and Argaya into fighting form.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: LBTFan13 on February 03, 2008, 01:04:45 AM
uh oh. zaine is calling out for kor?
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on February 03, 2008, 04:05:08 AM
It does seem strange.  And likely he'll run into Mim and Littlefoot as well so he'll likely have 3 hostages now.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on February 03, 2008, 11:43:18 PM
My congrads to the character Zaine, the first ever witness to see the five offspring of Maganog.

Hope the poor little longneck doesnt have a heart attack or goes into shock xD
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Post by: Chiletrek on February 04, 2008, 12:14:09 AM
Hello:
 I don't know if Zaine will be happy or not because of that :blink: . But that sight he had is really terrifying... I really want to know more :)
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: LBTFan13 on February 04, 2008, 04:33:08 PM
Zaine is terrified at the moment. Not only did he witness that army, but a tree branch has fallen onto his tail and pinned him to the ground. Another tree branch is about to fall ontop of his head now, so he's pretty much screwed unless Korr answers his call for help :bang
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on February 04, 2008, 05:57:49 PM
He seems to be meeting Korr a lot, maybe they'll be buddies by the end.
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on February 04, 2008, 05:59:15 PM
That would be very interesting for later in the RP, in my opinion.
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Post by: LBTFan13 on February 04, 2008, 09:57:49 PM
i wouldn't mind seeing that happen.
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Post by: Kor on February 05, 2008, 02:27:07 AM
I guess we'll have to wait and see what happens.  Would be a big turn of events if the character of Korr did change that much, but with certain events it is possible.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: lbt/cty_lover on February 20, 2008, 04:58:59 PM
As of now, I'm just waiting for Aves to respond.
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Post by: Kor on February 20, 2008, 05:46:25 PM
I'm guessing he's pretty busy with various things.
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Post by: AvestheForumFox on February 20, 2008, 07:57:31 PM
yeah, sorry

had three days overtime at my job, 12 hours a day, so I've been exhausted and too tired to concern myself with posting.

so... in a silly rich british accent : "Start the whacky music, boys... I'm about to start posting something."
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on February 20, 2008, 08:04:35 PM
We forgive you.

We do, right?

Right?
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Post by: Kor on February 20, 2008, 10:08:55 PM
It best to rest after something like that rather then coming here while you are tired and posting.
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Post by: AvestheForumFox on March 07, 2008, 11:09:06 PM
It just keeps getting better. Granted when I can post.

Anyone like my take on the Lone Dinosaur bit?
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on March 08, 2008, 06:45:45 AM
I liked it.  It was a long post, like a short story, but I enjoyed reading it.
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Post by: AvestheForumFox on March 10, 2008, 06:33:07 AM
I've just added a massive explanation of things in my latest post in Maganog. It would also give in full description my current fanfiction literature The Land Before Time; The Etheras Stone Which serves as a prequel long predating the time of Littlefoot and his friends.

Let me know what you think, I gave it one hell of a description in the story note part of my post in Maganog =)
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Post by: Kor on March 10, 2008, 01:02:54 PM
An interesting story, similar to some other fantasy stuff I've read a long time ago.  Though doubtless  not on the same earths as the LBT seen in movies and tv series.
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on March 10, 2008, 02:48:02 PM
I give your story two thumbs up and a 10 out of 10.

I can't wait for the fanfic to come out.
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Post by: AvestheForumFox on March 12, 2008, 10:22:35 PM
Quote from: lbt/cty_lover,Mar 10 2008 on  01:48 PM
I give your story two thumbs up and a 10 out of 10.

I can't wait for the fanfic to come out.
It is in progress =)

Also, I've been in a bit of a debate. I'm wondering whether the final battle scene should be posted i an RP all its own. Or should it remain in Maganog?

I should make this a poll...

and in fact, I think I will
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Post by: DarkHououmon on March 17, 2008, 01:40:20 PM
I'm kind of stuck.. Since I've been absent for almost a week and the RP has made considerable progress, any idea on what I should do with Ateo next? I'm kind of lost. ^^;
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on March 17, 2008, 03:03:24 PM
You could hear the kids talking, and walk over to have a look at what they are doing.  Maybe since you hear a voice that does not sound familiar (Torgo). That is one idea.
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: AvestheForumFox on March 24, 2008, 02:14:00 AM
IMPORTANT UPDATE

The battle has been decided to take place in a separate thread, a fourth chapter so to speak, but there's more in this chapter than just the final battle, the events that lead up towards the battle including a group vision that reveals more prequel bits.

For this, I will require the full attention of those who wish to battle in this epic struggle. There are some massive chunks of information that is to be exposed on my part to make the story all the more interesting.

That's right... there will be recruitment for the final battle sequence. And mind you, this is a pretty large piece.

Also, for the sake of the valley, I believe the major portion of this battle is to take place outside the valley. the scale of this event I fear could destroy the valley, so I, the author have decided for the sake of the valley's continual existence, and the safety of the valley children, this mega event will not take place in the valley.

So far, these are the fighters that I'm aware of who are automatically recruited in the fight against the mighty five
.
Longtail - GVGuardian
Longtail's mentor (I forget his name, sorry) - GVGuardian
Korr - GVGuardian
The Redhorn Clan - GVGuardian
Syrius - Avesthefox
Blackclaw - Avesthefox
The fastbiter Packs (will have to join with the good guys eventually) - Avesthefox
Meyla - Avesthefox

The Valley Guardian Spirit (will be battling Maganog on another plane of existence) - Avesthefox

Doc - Avesthefox (volunteer)
Littlefoot's Grandfather - I forgot who plays him, I think Kor

Further recruitments will take place in this thread I'm sure there are some names I've left out, it isn't on purpose, these names just came from the top of my head, so forgive me, and make a note of it here so I can note it myself.

The Final and Fourth Chapter title?
1.) The Final Battle
2.) The Resurrection of Maganog
3.) The Return of the Lone Dinosaur
4.) Armegedon of the Mysterious Beyond
5.) Shadows of Maganog
6.) Rise of the Mighty Five
7.) Maganog's Revenge
Title: Disc: The Children of Maganog (not thelast chapt)
Post by: Kor on March 24, 2008, 04:24:24 AM
No, I've never played grandpa longneck.  The only parents of the gang I've played are the current ones in dinorawr's rp thread.  GVG is the only one who played Grandpa Longneck in this thread.
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Post by: The Great Valley Guardian on March 24, 2008, 02:30:51 PM
Longtail's 'mentor' is his Uncle Cyrix.

And yes Kor is correct I do play Grandpa longneck in this RP thread.

I'm also inclined to go with for the 4th chapter title:

4.) Armegedon of the Mysterious Beyond

and

6.) Rise of the Mighty Five
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Post by: Kor on March 24, 2008, 06:21:45 PM
The only adults I've played in this rp is Mim, more of a philosopher who has knowledge of how to fight, but not a figher who philosophies.    And Mr. Thicknose (for 1 scene), also not a fighter, but more of the wise elder type.  Looks like I'll be sitting out of this one.  

How about inviting in StarfallRaptor for the final chapter if you want another player.  I think his character is a fighter type, though some sort of sharptooth as I recall, but no reason he can't be on the good side.
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on March 25, 2008, 09:30:51 AM
Can you add my OC's to the list?
Vylor and Argaya are born warriors.

Starfall would be good for this.

I would vote for 4 or 7.
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Post by: LBTFan13 on March 25, 2008, 04:37:54 PM
Could you add Zaine to your fighters? I know he is young and all, but I think it would be fun to have him fight.

As for the title, I definitely like number 4. Although, you could just have "Armageddon", but it's your decision.
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Post by: Kor on March 25, 2008, 04:39:08 PM
Maybe he is the 70's western Clint Eastwood type, or wondering ronin.  Between him and Aves, but those are some ideas I had.
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Post by: LBTFan13 on March 25, 2008, 05:41:36 PM
lol :D  :D  nice Clint reference ^^
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Post by: AvestheForumFox on March 25, 2008, 08:18:53 PM
When in this comvo did Clint Eastwood come into the fray? Something concerning my use of Doc?

ah well.. we'll need to wrap this RP up tonight so I can start the fourth chapter. I may take LBTFan's idea and just go with Armageddon... we shall see though
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Post by: lbt/cty_lover on March 25, 2008, 08:33:05 PM
I think I just gave a good ending point.

Aves, check it out HERE! (http://www.gangoffive.net/index.php?topic=2661&view=findpost&p=8971136)
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Post by: Kor on March 26, 2008, 12:17:06 AM
The rest of you folks have fun in the battle conclusion.  Since I don't have any fighter types none of my characters really fit in to well.
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Post by: AvestheForumFox on March 26, 2008, 12:19:02 AM
Aye, Kor, not all the characters in this one will be fighting, there will be substories along side of the outer valley battle

so dont feel like you have to leave =)