The Gang of Five

The Land Before Time => LBT Fanfiction => Topic started by: Chomper on July 10, 2009, 01:36:36 PM

Title: char page for story of cody
Post by: Chomper on July 10, 2009, 01:36:36 PM

Cody

species: ceratasaurus

age: juvenile

colors: greenish black

hight: about 10 ft tall and 15ft long, kind of cumbersome since he is still growing, strong jaws and an unusually sharp nose horn

personality: usually friendly, very loyal, has regrets sometimes, but lets most things roll off of his sholders, he does have a dark side though and should warn littlefoot and his friends if it starts to break through, has the potential to be a great killer, if his dark side takes over

Vector

species: utahraptor

age: juvenile

colors: red and black

height: 6 ft and 10ft long, strong back legs and sharp teeth and claws

personality: vector might have seemed nice as he was younger, but as he got older he became more vicious and pushy, he loves to pick on anyone and everyone, has the potential to be a killing machine.

Mr. Grins

species: spinosaurus

age: adult

colors: grey and black with a hint of red

height: 17 ft and 45 ft long

personality: might be persuaded if the deal is in his favor, but for the most part he is an apex predator.

Title: char page for story of cody
Post by: Vilstrup on July 10, 2009, 05:43:55 PM

The character sheet are only there for you to use, Chomper. If you get confused, or can't remember something about a certain character, you can go through your character sheet and see what it was you decided from the beginning.

Second off, I would advice you to give some more infomation about the characters. You write specie, age, colour of skin, height and personality.
Now, I don't find that satisfying, as you might. I would go deeper with, gender, eyecolour, background story and maybe even the voice of the character. I would probably also go a bit deeper into the personality of the character. What you've written so far is a bit too thin I think.

You don't need to add all what I have said, but consider it. It might help you more than you think.

oh, and lastly, do outline the whole plot of the story to yourself, before you begin. Makes it easier to write a longterm story ;)

Title: char page for story of cody
Post by: Chomper on July 10, 2009, 07:18:10 PM

thx i've been wondering what to do about the story, but i think i will redo the whole story once i outline the entire story

Title: char page for story of cody
Post by: Vilstrup on July 11, 2009, 04:54:43 AM

do, what you you find nessecerary, and don't rush it. Nothing good is gonna come out that.