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General Land Before Time / Superior Kids or Incompetent Adults? Both!
« on: April 27, 2011, 09:45:42 PM »
Is it just me, or do the adults tend to react to things immaturely while the kids constantly portray vast wisdom beyond their years? It is a most unrealistic portrayal of life. With age comes experience, and these movies are getting the message across that children are superior. This could make young viewers enter a hesitant state at the thought of growing up, while giving them a false sense of security about their youth and a lack of respect for their elders. Don’t follow me? Fine. I will elaborate on examples that undervalue the adults while glorifying the likes of youth.

In movie number three, there was a problem in the Great Valley- a lack of water. The adults handled this by arguing for an extended period of time, which accomplished nothing. The kids also had a problem- their peers, or, the bullies, were heading into danger. Littlefoot did not hesitate, left the valley, then saved the mean teenagers. So, in retrospection, the adults couldn’t handle their problem while the kids jumped right into theirs and solved it. Isn’t that teaching kids that careful planning is a waste of time and rushing into danger is the solution? Furthermore, it might make kids not worry about being reckless, as their parents will just fix everything. I mean, I once made a thread in this section comparing The Lion King to The Land Before Time. Well, here’s a difference, making The Lion King’s example of this more appropriate for developing minds.

In The Lion King, Simba recklessly charges into the unknown, and because of that, he was nearly killed. The gang of five was also nearly killed for wandering off. So what was the difference, you ask? Simba got a royal scolding from his father. Mufasa gave a huge lecture that taught kids what can happen if you head into danger. The adults in The Land Before Time? Hm. “This is no time to go exploring.” Really? Is that all? Just like the adults failed to respond to a problem, they failed to chide their children and reveal just how wrong it was for them to leave like that. Hyp got reprimanded the worst, but the only complaint his father made about him leaving was that his departure was a distraction to solving the water problem. “Duh, dad?” “Yeah?” “I’m going to enter a near death situation.” “Nah, don’t do that! It might distract me!” The full concept of the danger was never passed down from parent to child. The parents simply took care of the sharpteeth, and all was fine. So, kids were glorified as being the ideal characters and the authority and wisdom of adults was thrashed in this film by making it seem like not planning is the way to get things done, and doing dangerous things will simply cause your parents to bail you out. Did the head writer have parent issues…?

In movie number four, a resident faced death. Yet, no adults would go because it was too dangerous. Wait, what did I just say!? In movie number four- No, I heard myself! I just couldn’t believe my ears. What better reason to face danger than to save a loved one! Some cousins they were! Here is another example of how The Lion King shines and The Land Before Time, well, doesn’t. When Simba was in danger, his father risked everything to save him. He was the ideal adult, holding life sacred enough to put his own well-being at stake to save that of another. I mean, TLBT was laughable! The adults just murmured to themselves, and the Old One felt it was too risky. Well, she wasn’t as smart as some thought she was, because if a pack of kids can handle it, it would have been cake for adults to retrieve the healing flowers. In the end, the kids are shown to be exemplary for going off to the Valley of Mists, while the adults are portrayed as ninnies. Sure, it wouldn’t have been as great an adventure for adults to help, but there are tactical ways to prevent the adults from helping without making them seem likes heartless meanies! Maybe there was a cave in where the only big entrance to the VoM was, so adults couldn’t fit through. Heh, I thought of that, and I’m not even some big time, paid writer. This shows kids that adults just don’t care, so when they want something, they should get help from other kids. What a wonderful message! Don’t go to your elders, go to your peers! So sad…

In movie number five, the adults argued to the point that they decided to split. It was the kids that kept everyone together. Oh my gosh! Are the children and parents role playing that their roles are switched? I mean, this is one of the most blatant reversals of how families work. Kids fight and tension rises, yet the wise parents settle things and bring ties back together. It’s almost like the writers forgot which characters were the grownups and which were the little ones. This shows kids that children are peacemakers and adults cause tension that has to be fixed by the younger generation. Let me guess. When Littlefoot grows up and has children, he’s going to get in fights and HIS kids will set things right. This was just a total role annihilation.

In movie number six, the adults were going to run Doc away because of their superstitions. Littlefoot realized how silly this was. See the role confusion again!? Sure, his grandfather didn’t believe it either, but still, while practically the whole Great Valley felt that the weather problems were caused by a dinosaur, Littlefoot knew better. Huh, who’s there? Oh, hello there! You’re professor Xavier, from the X-Men, right? I knew it! What’s that you say? You’ve been trying to find Storm’s X gene at the source, and you traveled back in time after tracing it to a dinosaur? Wow. Oh, and you say his name is Doc? Oh my. Boy, do I feel silly for criticizing the grownups now. It makes perfect sense. Doc is really a mutant who can manipulate the weather. Thanks, professor X! No, but seriously, they were foolish for thinking Doc was the cause of their trouble. Once again, adults + LBT = incompetence while children + LBT = sense.

In movie number seven, Ducky is kidnapped. Do a bunch of adults rush to save her? You guessed it- nope! It’s the kids who leave to find Pterano. Adults didn’t show up to help until the very end. The kids save the day but nearly perish from the nearly-too-late arrival of those grownups. What is this teaching kids? Adults procrastinate, and kids are the real ones to turn to when there’s trouble. Good night, can’t you get adults and kids straight one single bloody time!?

In movie number eight, a herd nearly starves, but one child senses food and saves them all. This shows young viewers that kids are more resourceful than grownups. They even literally say that Spike saved the herd. It was like he has a super dinosaur sense of smell. Is this showing that adults don’t smell very well? Heh, get it? Anyway, the leader of the spiketail herd, the bloody leader for crying out loud, was totally lost but a little kid lead them all to safety. This may make kids undervalue the perception of those in authority, thinking they can possibly do a better job. As usual, the adults were incompetent compared to youth, and the kids were portrayed as the superior characters. Can they ever get roles- Okay, you know what? Forget it. They will never get roles straight so I’m just going to stop asking.

In movie number nine, it made adults seem like coldhearted folks who don’t care about helping those in need. The kids politely ask for help with Mo, and they get a refusal simply because Mo is a stranger and they’d have to venture to the Mysterious Beyond. Okay, I can kind of get the wariness of strangers thing, but they lived in the MB for most of their lives, so what harm is a little journey, especially if someone needs the assistance? The adults just seemed mean here. Now, guess what! I bet you’d never imagine, based off of all the things I’ve said thus far, who actually does the right thing and helps. The kids! Told you you’d be surprised. Now, the what this teaches can be taken two ways, actually. It not only shows that it’s not right to withhold help from those who need it, which the adults did, but it teaches kids that going with strangers is safe, which the children did. Littlefoot and company left their home to travel with someone they’d never met. Kids should never do this! So this time, the kids strength of heart is also a weakness. The writers mixed up the elements of helping those in need and trusting strangers. So the children did the right thing and the wrong things at the same time. Uhhh… Okaaay… It was nice to make the kids have a blatant fault and all, but if you’re going to make their behavior wrong, then make it wrong! Don’t add a hidden positive in the background of their deed that makes the concept confusing.

In movie number ten, eh, well, I think that they actually got the roles right here. Littlefoot got upset and his father comforted him. Cera couldn’t cross a river without the help of Pat. Littlefoot would have died if not for Sue. I think that the adults and children were finally portrayed as they should be. And there was much rejoicing. Yay!

In movie number eleven, things went right back to the role confusion. Why, oh why, couldn’t you keep things right when you had them that way? Oh well. What’s done is done. Let’s take a look at the damages. Hm, not much to really say about this one. The kids accepted the tinysauruses while the adults feared them and wanted to drive them away. The kids were like John Smith from Disney’s Pocahontas, the tinysauruses were the Indians, and the adults were the other white men. Both groups could not accept the other on equal terms and wanted to be as far away from each other as possible. The white men (the LBT grownups) wanted to drive away the Indians (the tinysauruses) while John Smith (the kids) found peace with both sides at once. Whoa, hold the phone. This isn’t LIKE the Pocahontas movie. It IS the Pocahontas movie. The savages song from Pocahontas is just like the creepy crawlies song from the LBT movie. I can just see the director, trying to think of a plot for movie eleven, then his little daughter tugs on his pants and asks him to watch a movie with her. He refuses for days, then finally accepts, having found no ideas. As he watches Pocahontas, his eyes lights up, and he calls the writer team up. Sadly, the father never finishes the movie with his daughter. I mean, seriously, the plot theme was just like that Disney movie, although they kept the original formula of the kids being superior in intellect to the adults. The movie downright mocks adults. One chases her tail, and one gets stuck. This just piles on the incompetent notion of adults to young viewers, and also shows them that adults look for trouble while it’s the kids that want peace with things. Another example of the bad role reversal of adults and kids, and to make things worse, the plot isn’t even original. Okay, I stand corrected. There really IS a lot to say about this one- sadly.

In movie number twelve, there is a system erected to be followed by young flyers. When they start acting out of line, Petrie’s mother says that the day of the flyers will never be the same. How awful! This is showing kids that they can bend rules set by elders and they’ll just be amended to fit. The adults foolishly let the kids take charge, not judging like they were supposed to. Sure, it’s nice to show that kids can make a difference too, but it’s not so great when they go against the parameters of the guidelines that authority has prepared for them. The judges were just too passive, showing that kids can get away with things. As for the kids being too adultish, it was Guido who gave Petrie the best advice, not his own mother, showing that parents aren’t the best source to turn to for sage counsel. Nice going, writers!

Finally, in movie number thirteen, whew, this was probably the clearest role reversal of them all. The adults acted like five year olds and Littlefoot acts like an old man. Need I say more? Eh, I will anyway. The adults were totally lost without the kids. Littlefoot and company showed them the right way to go. Having adults being the lost souls and the kids being the guide is a silly thing to show young viewers. Sure, there are kids that know places that adults don’t, but this went beyond knowledge of the area. The grownups just had no common sense and no sense of direction. The kids were shown as being more logical and leaderly than the adults were. This could cause insecurities about the judgment of elders in young viewers. Sure, there would have been no adventure if the yellowbellies knew where to go, but such a loss wouldn’t sadden many people.

I got two words for you: wow. Okay, okay, so it was just one. I’m tired; cut me some slack. After the original, there have just been far too many role reversals that can give kids the wrong idea. In some cases, it makes a bit of sense, but in most, it’s just silly and uncalled for. There can be many adventure while kids act like kids and adults act like adults. They didn’t have to degrade the name of adults and give the children an exaggerated sense of superiority over their elders. I find this to be a flaw in The Land Before Time series. Say what you will, but that is my stance.

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LBT Fanfiction / Heart of a Sharptooth
« on: April 22, 2011, 09:33:23 PM »
I was orignally going to name this, "A Sharptooth's Heart," then I remembered that there is already a fan fiction of that title, written by a member of this forum, no less, so I changed my idea slightly. I hope it flows okay. I haven't much experience with free-writing stuff.

Heart of a Sharptooth

I am a Sharptooth.
I live off the lives of others.
With my sharp teeth,
I tear into flesh and dine.
I am hated by my diet,
But I have to live.
My source of food,
Is not an option.
There is no denying,
I am a Sharptooth.

I am not heartless.
Sure, I take lives.
Perhaps even family lives.
But what about my family?
The cycle of life,
Is their loss, my gain.
I didn’t make things that way.
They just are.
There is no argument;
I am not heartless.

I feel pain too.
Do you think it’s fun,
Eating some parents,
In front of their children?
I have to harden my heart,
In order to survive.
I have to ignore emotions,
And let instincts be my guide.
You cannot disprove,
I feel pain too.

I don’t hate my life.
You might think that killing,
Makes me miserable.
Well, one gets used to it.
Some circumstances are,
Not the most pleasant,
But I prefer this kind,
Of living out life.
I really can’t refute,
I don’t hate my life.

I love the training.
Quality time with my kids,
Is the best part of my life.
Teaching them to hunt,
Helping them to take down,
The prey they come across,
Really brings us together.
I am a happy fellow.
You can’t say that I don’t;
I love the training.

My life is dangerous.
Don’t think for a moment,
That I don’t worry,
About making it through,
A hunt for my next meal.
I always remember,
That each day could be,
My very last day of all.
It goes without saying that,
My life is dangerous.

My heart is true.
I am a killer,
But I am full of love.
I love nature and family,
My life and what it entails.
Despite the dangers,
I awake with a smile,
Wondering what today may bring.
Don’t you ever think otherwise;
My heart is true.

Thank you for listening.
I hope that my story,
Has taught you more,
About my kind,
And what we feel.
We aren’t as bad,
As we may seem.
Oh my, I got so hungry…
I appreciate you staying.
Now, any last words? Chomp!

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LBT Fanfiction / Tear of Acceptance
« on: April 18, 2011, 08:37:55 PM »
Tear of Acceptance

Mo:

“Fun fun fun!
Mo love to play!
Mo will join game,
At any time or day.
Mo hope that not annoy Cera…

Laugh laugh laugh!
Mo love a good joke.
Mo tell them sometimes,
And listen when they spoke.
Mo hope that not get on Cera’s nerves…

Swim swim swim!
Mo love to move.
Mo do jumps and stands;
Mo really in the groove.
Mo hope that Cera not get disturbed…

Help help help!
Mo love to be of use.
Mo save the day,
When bad swimmer on loose.
Mo hope that Cera appreciates it…

Blow blow blow!
Mo love making bubble face.
Mo’s will be biggest!
Yeah, it’s a race!
Mo hope Cera doesn’t mind…

Squeak squeak squeak!
Mo love to talk.
Mo talk to anything!
Well, maybe not a rock.
Mo hope Cera doesn’t get irritated…”

Cera (having heard):

“Mo! I see you love fun,
And enjoy to play.
That you exchange jokes,
During any old day.

It’s clear you like to swim;
You really get going.
You offer your help,
Without ever slowing.

Creating lots of bubbles,
Is something you do.
You never cease to talk,
All the day through.

Well let me tell you!
(Mo cowers in fear.)
If I had to name,
A friend who was dear,
That I love and admire,
I’d name one who’s here.
Can’t guess who it is?
Then let me be clear.
It’s you, Mo, I adore.
So don’t worry or fear.”
With that, they did hug,
Both grinning from ear to ear.
As Mo’s heart leapt with joy,
Down his cheek, flowed a tear.

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LBT Fanfiction / Set of Four Poems
« on: March 27, 2011, 11:58:54 PM »
I wrote four poems the other day. I thought I’d share them all at once since none of them are special or anything. I mean, if I posted them all separately, I’d feel a bit silly since their simplicity doesn’t exactly merit individual attention. I’m not going to explain any styles since a member suggested that they be figured out by the reader. Then again, they are so simple that there isn’t a need to explain them anyway. If anyone feels up to the challenge of the last poem here, be my guest, heh heh.

Diversity of The Land Before Time

When comes the time for longnecks to dine,
They are always in for a wonderful treat.
They reach way up high, nearly touching the sky,
And it’s a tradition that just can’t be beat.
The only downside is having to stand,
So they just can’t recline as they eat.

If there is a kind who gets angry,
It’s definitely the stubborn threehorn.
Even when being shown kindness,
They so often respond with much scorn.
I bet when comes time for new eggs,
Folks moan, “Great, even more will be born?”

There is a small race that does have,
A limit to travel as big as the sky.
Their freedom is as good as it gets,
Causing jealousy and many a sigh.
Flyers look from above down below,
And gleefully call to their friends, “Hi!”

Here is a type that stays short.
Their bodies in contrast are slimmer.
They are aquatic masters of escape,
Whether it’s bright or things have grown dimmer.
In case you wonder about this origin,
Who else could it be but a swimmer?

The true lover of food is quite clear.
They like nothing more than to munch.
No matter where the bright circle is,
To them, it’s always time for lunch.
So when things are scarce in the Great Valley,
Mr. Threehorn doesn’t like spiketails a bunch.

The fastrunner wasn’t shown a whole lot.
Still, they really seem to be quite clever.
When a child wondered about a lost tooth,
One really knew all about the endeavor.
And what makes them really good friends,
Is that the bonds they make just don’t sever.

We all know of the carnivorous sharpteeth.
Each one is a dangerous fellow.
Folks truly have fear strike their heart,
When one opens his mouth to bellow.
Fortunately, there is a strong hope,
As one has already grown to be mellow.

Longneck, threehorn, flyer, swimmer,
Spiketail, fastrunner, and the meat-eating kind-
The diversity is found all around,
And beyond that, they all have a unique mind.
Yet there is one thing that does not differ:
Every species will make ties that bind.

Aspects of Life

Longnecks, threehorns, swimmers,
Domeheads, and flyers too.
They all depend on eating plants,
And adults dine all day through.

Tree stars, flowers, berries,
Grass, and tree sweets too.
They just taste so delicious;
Nearly all agree it’s true.

Earthshakes, sharpteeth, sky fire,
Bad luck, and buzzers too.
Life can be quite dangerous.
What is a child to do?

Many games, stories, journeys,
Dreams, and make believe too.
There are just so many forms of fun,
Even playing in bubbly goo.

Comforting, singing, advising,
Being there, and encouraging too.
Ways to help a friend are common;
Caring for others is nothing new.

Death, sickness, getting hurt,
Mean words, and stealing too.
Everywhere, things make folks sad.
Tragedy will even come to you.

There are many aspects of having life.
Some are good, while some are hated.
But living is a grand adventure,
So you’ll always end up sated.

Living for the Moment

My father can be such a pain.
He always makes me very mad.
All my complaints are said in vain.
Life with my father can be so sad.
When I fell and hurt my knee,
His attitude got really rough.
He didn’t even want to see,
Just said I need to be more tough.
He doesn’t like my choice of friends.
He criticizes my every action.
His string of rudeness never ends,
Yet he wonders about my gruff reaction.
He never avoids an argument;
He always has something to say.
Dad deserves all the rude sentiment.
I’d take Littlefoot’s grandpa any day.
I just want to scream and cry,
And I bet he wouldn’t really care.
I doubt he’d even ask me why.
He’d just grow silent and stare.
He worries much, but that doesn’t prove,
That he is a suitable father.
When I grow up, I’ll surely move,
As I bet I’m just a bother.
Uh oh, here he comes now.
Huh? You got tree stars for me?
These sure taste good, wow.
My love for you will always be!

Who am I?

I have a role model,
That has influenced me.
I work hard to hide,
The softer side of me.
Who am I?

I want my independence,
Yet enjoy being a child.
When trying to help out,
My ideas can get wild.
Who am I?

I try to do as I am told,
Even with pointless arguing around.
Taste isn’t all that makes food so good;
Tree stars make the nicest sound.
Who am I?

My jumping skills are really good,
And I’m also proud of my great size.
Yet sadly I had a horrendous day,
As a threehorn’s shove led to my demise.
Who am I?

My name was only mentioned once.
I put a little one in slight danger.
My scene was very short but cruel,
And sadly, to many, I’m just a stranger.
Who am I?

A long, lost relation is what I am.
My heart is good but my actions bad.
My life is full of much regret,
And I’ve gone and made old threehorn mad.
Who am I?

At times I fear heights,
And sometimes I don’t.
If you think I’ll get angry again…
I tell you, I won’t!
Who am I?

I am usually quite fearful,
But act tough when bullies abound.
And I have a knack for irking Cera;
With me, her anger is always found.
Who am I?

I saved some kids from a bloody death.
And the fight was really scary.
I admit that I too wanted a snack,
But the smell made me quite wary.
Who am I?

Some kid approached me, speaking weird,
And the nerve- he threw a rock!
I got so mad, I called my parents,
And as he ran along, I’d mock.
Who am I?

My life is very restricted.
I have no say in what I eat.
If I take just a little bite,
My face would just get beat.
Who am I?

I am extremely intelligent.
Yet my experience is not my own.
One time I was greatly humiliated,
And went off to be alone.
Who am I?

I can really worry some folks,
With some of my comments and diet.
It can be hard being someone like me.
It’s true! You just have to try it!
Who am I?

I love to help, but it makes HER mad.
She is always arguing with me.
I just want her to see the bright side,
Of delivering food from a tree.
Who am I?

I am serious in danger,
But mostly playful and fun.
If you need a good friend-
Pick me! I’m a great one.
Who am I?

If I went and touched you,
I bet that it would tickle.
Sadly, I’m no great speaker-
My thoughts just tend to trickle.
Who am I?

My choice of food is anything!
Talk about being free.
If you ever have a question,
You really ought to try me.
Who am I?

I don’t stay anywhere very long.
I travel both far and near.
I often fall prey to deception,
As my trust is far from mere.
Who am I?

I am frequently spoken to harshly.
Yet I always respond as polite.
Saving Mr. Threehorn from fire,
Was truly a heartwarming sight.
Who am I?

I am small but I eat a lot,
And I really adore Spike.
I wish he’d come away with me.
Yes, that I’d really like.
Who am I?

I am loving but can be strict.
I have yet to act all rude.
When it comes to my kid eating,
I insist he not play with his food.
Who am I?

Some of these are quite easy,
But others will make you think.
Just try and understand the clues,
And avoid a big headache. /Wink

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LBT Fanfiction / It wasn't my Fault!
« on: March 21, 2011, 01:41:48 PM »
Today I’m trying something unique again. I know that many people have written six line per verse poems where the odd lines rhyme, but the creativity here is in the patterns I place throughout. Every verse begins with “When.” The second lines always begin with a first person promise, except the last verse. The fifth lines always begin with a second person assurance of being innocent using different wording, save the last verse. The sixth lines are literally the same in all, save the last verse. Every single rhyme is of the long E sound. As you can see, only a few things change in each verse, as I’ve built up a number of walls to confine my writing.

It wasn’t my Fault!

When I had lead that herd away,
I promise I did so blissfully.
When we were victims of attack,
My heart was struck with melancholy.
I say to you, it wasn’t my fault!
Oh woe to one such as me.

When I questioned that young boy,
I promise I did so carefully.
It was my friends who had come along,
And spoke to them all so cruelly.
I assure you, it wasn’t my fault!
Oh woe to one such as me.

When I had coerced my nephew,
I promise I did so pleasantly.
It was he who made his friends angry,
So the blame’s his for departing painfully.
I pledge to you, it wasn’t my fault!
Oh woe to one such as me.

When we took the one who had heard,
I promise I did so very gently.
On her, I wouldn’t allow a bit of harm,
And when she fell, I moaned so ruefully.
I guarantee you, it wasn’t my fault!
Oh woe to one such as me.

When we gave chase to the kids below,
I promise I was dragged so unintentionally.
It was I and I alone who ignored the taunts,
Yet my friends were the ones who rushed angrily.
I swear to you, it wasn’t my fault!
Oh woe to one such as me.

When I at last found the stone,
I promise my intentions flowed positively.
I had the greater good in mind.
I meant not for things to go so dreadfully.
I ensure you, it wasn’t my fault!
Oh woe to one such as me.

When comes the time for you to judge,
Promise to do so considerately.
My heart is noble in every way,
And for good, I acted consistently.
Believe me, nothing was my fault!
Don’t you feel sorry for me?

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LBT Fanfiction / A Loved Threehorn
« on: March 16, 2011, 01:29:17 PM »
Okay, now you can see that I’m REALLY trying to be exotic here. Poetry may seem to have a lot of guidelines, but in college we are learning about all kinds of writers who broke literary norms and tried to be unique, such as Sophocles, the writer of Oedipus Rex. Today I wrote a poem that does not have an automatic start to the beginnings of each sentence of the verses. You have to place the beginnings manually in your head as you read them. To explain further, at the beginning of each verse is a phrase. That phrase begins each sentence of the verse it goes with as long as that sentence is dialogue. Keep in mind, my intent is NOT to have you reread the opening phrases before each sentence. My aim is for you to keep them in the back of your mind to give the verses meaning. So you literally just read it the way it shows up, all the while remembering the opening phrase. I know this may sound over the top and too weird, but I am not displeased at the way it turned out. Though I usually don’t have to expend any effort to be different,  :p  I am now trying to be my own writer in every sense of the word. I mean, I may do some common styles again later, but today, my theme is originality (at least, I hope it is). Here is what popped into my head during my lunch break at college today:

Cera:

"I cannot stand:
My really bad mood sometimes.
How you’re nearly always right.
The way I get in trouble so much.
The fact I just can’t win a fight.

I am sad that:
I can be so mean to others.
My friends can really fear me.
I just won’t admit when I’m wrong.
I want attention, but others don’t see.

I just want to:
Be with my friends when times are tough.
Cry sometimes, wash my worries away.
Show my softer side, but don’t.
Laugh and run and play.

I wonder:
If my friends truly like me.
That perhaps they’re being polite.
If all their kindness,
Is just to prevent a fight.

I think to myself:
Is there just no hope for me?
Am I really a bad Threehorn?
No matter what actions I choose to do,
Will there always be reason to scorn?”

Littlefoot:

“I wish:
That you wouldn’t be so hard,
On someone as great as you.
You’d know when in my thoughts,
I think of all the good you do.

You came:
To help save the bullies,
Even though they were quite mean.
On a journey to guide the Yellowbellies,
Because their wisdom was not so keen.

You tried so hard:
To rescue me, when I went along with Ali.
To protect Guido, when we all thought he’d fall.
To comfort me, as we neared dear Chomper’s home.
And succeeded when you heard your sister’s call.

You didn’t give up:
To come and find me on my quest,
When times were really unlucky.
When you heard of her problem,
And so gave much advice to Ducky.

I know:
That you’re a good Threehorn,
And more than that, a friend.
We’ll have much more time together,
And I hope it’ll never end!”

Cera:

“How can I know:
You aren’t just being nice?
That you aren’t lying of this?
If you words aren’t guarded,
To give me a sort of bliss?”
To that question, Littlefoot did lean-
Then gave her a great big kiss!

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LBT Fanfiction / Strut's Lament
« on: March 14, 2011, 06:39:11 PM »
I keep trying slightly new styles to keep a sort of variety and lack of dullness with my poems, even if the differences are very small. I’ve tried lines two and four rhyming a few times in four line verses that have minor changes here and there. I’ve tried all two line verses and a few others. Today, I came up with something different. I call it my “staircase style,” as I have never seen a poem like this before, so I have no official name for it. The reasoning behind my title should become clear shortly as the poem is read.

FlipperBoidSkua, one of my favorite writers, this poem is dedicated to you and your love of this egg-stealing couple.

Strut’s Lament

I love my brother will all my heart.
When he has a job, I do my part.
No matter the time, together we start.

His obsession with eggs can be a pain.
He hunts them down, even in rain.

Our life is never easy.

I can’t understand why he doesn’t see,
The kind of brother I’d like to be.
Not in his image, but just being me.

He makes me eat his favorite food;
He won’t ask my preference in any mood.

I always feel so trapped.

I try my hardest to make him glad,
Yet whatever I do, to him it’s bad.
I dream of the happiness we never had.

I care a lot for that brother of mine,
But things between us are far from fine.

We seem to drift farther apart.

His violent tendencies are always here.
My brother is sadly a guy to fear.
I look for kindness, but it’s nowhere near.

I had an idea for that Longneck’s death,
But oh, it ended with huge Sharpteeth breath.

I can never please my brother.

He despises every kid we meet.
His answer to disputes is just to beat.
The amount of cruelty is quite a feat.

I wish in peace we could settle down,
Yet every day he greets with a frown.

Ozzie should never be a dad.

I only wish my brother the best.
I always give him most of the nest.
After just a few bites, I give him the rest.

He never thanks me for the things I do,
But no matter the case, I see things through.

If only he would seem pleased.

This is my story, but don’t get me wrong.
Though I’d love our life to sing a new song,
I will follow my brother, since he is so strong.

I will wait forever for him to show love.
Someday, his heart will have light from above.

Until then, I will suffer in silence.

If it wasn't clear, I call it my "staircase style" because the number of lines go:
***
**
*
just like a staircase does.

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LBT Fanfiction / I Need You
« on: March 12, 2011, 06:51:21 PM »
Well, here's another low quality poem from yours truly. Honestly, though, I like this one better than my other ones, at least. So, here is my latest and personal favorite poem about life in The Land Before Time.

Oh, by the way, for people who prefer listing to recitals over reading, I added a link at the bottom to me reading it aloud. I uh, well, I drank a bunch of mountain dew shortly before reading to help me get worked up, as this poem is mostly being spoken out of anger. Without further delay, here is my latest work:

I Need You

Ichy:
At times I cannot stand you.
You can really be a bore.
Trying to sleep’s a nightmare,
As you always have to snore.

You always move so slowly,
When I really want to go.
If you are truly hungry,
It certainly doesn’t show.

At times I have to wonder,
Is your sight as bad as you say?
Maybe you’re just being lazy,
So I can search all day.

You always take the nicest parts,
Of every meal we earn.
If I could only taste a few,
Much less I’d surely spurn.

You are the rudest one I know.
Your words are never nice.
I sometimes wish you’d take a walk,
And slip and fall on ice.

Your tendency is violence.
Can’t you be gentle with me?
Whenever there’s an argument,
Your tail is what I see.

If you tried just a little bit,
To be how a friend should,
Maybe we’d be less hungry.
Yeah, I really bet we would!

I’m better off without you!

Dil:
You’re the laziest guy I’ve ever met.
You know not a thing of work.
Although you spot our dinners,
It’s I who battles in the murk.

You toss and turn throughout the night.
How is a girl to rest?
The world has plenty of space to use,
Yet on me you make your nest.

You actually think you’re better,
Like I’m a good for nothing critter.
You really wonder what that does to me?
It’s why I’m always bitter.

You spot a meal then sit around,
As if that’s all you need to do.
Your laziness appalls me.
Better change or else we’re through.

You never say a thing about me,
Unless it is really bad.
Your insults truly hurt me,
And I am getting very mad.

You have a knack for trouble,
And we get in lots of jams.
Like falling rocks or crumbling caves,
Full of pain and shouts and bams.

You never take me seriously.
My complaints mean nothing to you.
Though I have needs and wants as well,
You act like it isn’t true.

I’d do better on my own!

(Silence for a little while as they think a bit more.)

Ichy:
Well, I guess you are quite useful.
You always do your part.
Your job is completed every day,
As you finish fights you start.

Dil:
I suppose your role is crucial.
You never fail to see,
Luscious meals that come about.
Be they on ground or in a tree.

Ichy:
What I am really trying to say-

Dil:
Why I think that you should stay-

Together:
I need you every day!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CmS2xKJPZNQ

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LBT Fanfiction / The Arrival of Friendly Deceit
« on: February 21, 2011, 05:59:21 PM »
Plot holes aren’t a pleasant filler for thoughts. I, as I often get before starting a story, grew bored so thought I’d try my hand at explaining a data gap in the series. I scrounged around fanfiction.net but didn’t see any other attempts at what I had in mind. Therefore, I went ahead with my plan- to somewhat fill the gab between The Land Before Time IV: Journey Through the Mists and The Brave Longneck Scheme.

My story takes place a little while after the movie ends and ends a little while before the episode starts. Those who are used to FlipperBoidSkua’s quality, I apologize in advance for falling short. If you want some real mind candy, check out her stories. Nonetheless, I did my very best at this story, from beginning to end. So as not to delay you any further, here is my take on Ali and Rhett’s meeting:

The Arrival of Friendly Deceit

   “What’s the matter, dear?” a mother asked her daughter. “You’ve been hanging your head and remaining silent for quite a while now.”

   “I’m sorry, mother. I’m just so tired of being the only kid in this herd. I know that you and the Old One are the only female Long Necks here, but I just wish that there was a way of having more kids around.”

   Ali’s mother nuzzled her gently. “I’m the one who’s sorry, my little one. I shouldn’t have let your father go scouting the area alone. If I’d only insisted he bring some of us along, he’d still be-” but then she stopped speaking, beginning to get choked up as she thought about her late husband.

   Ali reared up and hugged her mother’s leg.

   “Don’t stop walking you two. This is no place to be taking a rest. We’ll come to a halt when we reach the lake that’s not far from here,” the Old One called back to them.

   Ali stuck out her tongue, but her mother quickly put her leg in front of her so the Old One wouldn’t notice it.

   “Now, now, none of that, Ali. I know that she can be a bit overbearing, but she is our leader after all.”

   “Yes, mother.”

   “Would you like to ride for a bit?”

   “Would I!” Her mother lowered her head and scooped Ali up in her lips, setting her down on her back.

   The winds began to pick up, causing the few nearby trees to start swaying abruptly back and forth. The Old One sniffed the air. The weather was just going to get worse, she just knew it.

   “We’re picking up the pace,” the Old One called to the others. They groaned, but she ignored them.

   Ali clung tightly to her mother’s back. The wind was getting strong enough to blow her off if she wasn’t careful.

   “We’re nearly there,” the Old One called back. Since she had turned to her followers for the announcement, she temporarily wasn’t looking where she was going. A tiny dip in the ground caused her to stumble and she fell onto her side.

   “Old One!” one of the males called out, rushing to help her up. When she tried getting back on her feet, she grimaced. She had managed to injure her ankle.

   “It looks like we’ll be stopping early after all. I need to rest my foot for a bit. It doesn’t seem too serious, but I can’t walk on it much right now. However, we should move away from these trees. I can limp just enough to get enough away from them. Come on.” With that, the hobbling leader began moving away from all the trees in the area, and everyone followed her.

   The winds were getting even more violent, and the Old One’s fear came true. A large tree broke free from its roots and went hurdling through the air and was going to land on Ali’s mother’s back. She would have normally let it happen, as even a large tree would barely faze her strong body. However, she had a passenger…

   She quickly jerked her head around so it took the full force of the wooden plant. Ali was saved, but the impact dazed her, and she stumbled to the ground. Ali jumped off right before she would have been crushed by her mother’s body and started to panic.

   “Mother? Mother? Mother!” she cried out.

   Though her eyes were open, she did not respond to her daughter. The concussion was still in full effect. Three males stepped forward, each lowering his head against her back as they started pushing her against a cliff wall, well away from any more trees. Ali was ecstatic, but the Old One calmed her.

   “She’ll be just fine. A bump on the head injury doesn’t last very long. Why, when I was a youngster like you, I fell off of a ledge and hit my head pretty hard. I was up and about within minutes.”

   “Thank you, Old One.” Now Ali was feeling guilty about sticking her tongue out earlier.

   After Ali’s mother was safely situated, everyone else gathered around her and lied down. Ali went right beside her mom and cuddled beside her.

   “Get some rest, little one,” the Old One instructed. “There is no reason to stay up and worry. We’ll look after her.”

   “Okay, I’ll try.”

   As the young Long Neck tried to sleep, she was haunted by guilt. It increased her heart rate and made her restless. If she hadn’t been on her mother’s back, she wouldn’t have had to move her head to protect her. Much as she found it hard to accept, her mother was hurt because of her. She clamped her eyes shut as hard as she could, but that only made it harder to fall asleep. Eventually, her list of reasons for being unable to rest increased. Loud noises could be heard not far from there. Dinosaurs were fighting.

   Several of the males started to run in the direction of the action. The rest of them stayed with the Old One, Ali, and her mother.

Off into the distance…

   “That’s it! Drive these vicious Sharpteeth away!” an adult, male Long Neck was coaxing as he and two other males were fending off two grown Sharpteeth. One of the beasts lunged at one of the Long Necks, but he dodged, and the meat-eater ran head first into a cliff wall. The other Sharptooth leapt onto one of their backs and was about to bite down, but another Long Neck came over and head butted him off. It wasn’t enough force to completely knock her off, but she soon lost her balance and tumbled off of the Long Neck. Before she could get up, another Long Neck slammed into her with his tail. She scooted back abruptly and managed to stand up. Her and her mate gave up the fight and started to run away. However, the herd of Long Necks wasn’t about to abandon a fight where they had the upper hand.

   They gave chase and two of them whipped their tails along the ground, knocking the two Sharpteeth down once again. They continued thumping their tails down with great force until the Sharpteeth no longer took breath. By then, the males from Ali’s herd had caught up to them, but they quickly saw that their help was not required. When the two groups were gathered together, a discussion broke out between the adults. Eventually, the only child in the herd, a young boy, stepped forward and looked at the fallen Sharpteeth. He grinned deviously and climbed up one of them, starting to jump up and down on his chest.

   “Cut that out, Rhett!” his father scolded.

   “Aw, I’m not hurting anything, and he’s dead, so there’s no danger,” he replied.

   His father sighed. The fact that there was no danger was irrelevant. He told his son to do something so he should be doing just that. He wished his son was a bit more mindful of authority.

   Little Ali couldn’t take it anymore. She wanted to know what was going on around the bend ever so badly. Some adults were looking after her mother, she wanted something to get her mind off of her guilt, and was awfully curious, so she took off in the direction that those grown-ups had gone. When she finally arrived, she saw some members of her herd talking to some other Long Necks, but what really caught her attention was a young boy pouncing on a dead Sharptooth.

   “What happened to these Sharpteeth?” Ali asked him. The boy was startled and nearly fell off. After regaining his footing, he slowly climbed down and came over to her.

   “Oh, they were killed,” he told her.

   Ali wanted to roll her eyes. Obviously they were killed! But she remained polite and added, “Okay, but how?”

   “Well, my herd-” but then he stopped. He hadn’t met a Long Neck his age in a long time. He wanted to make a good impression. Instead of explaining that his herd killed them, he had another idea… “My herd was in terrible danger, so I took down those pesky Sharpteeth myself.”

   “How?” Ali asked, not sure whether or not if he was joking.

   “Uh, well,” he began, then eyed the cliff. “I climbed up on that cliff and jumped down on oneës head. The force killed him right away. When you came by, you were watching me jump on him some more to make sure he was really dead.”

   “Wow! But, how did that other one die then?”

   “Oh, right. Well, um, this huge tree was uprooted by the wind, and I saw it hurdling through the air. After jumping on this guy, I tail-whipped a rock at the other one, getting her attention, and when she came at me, she got right in the way of the tree, just as I had planned, and it took her out.”

   Ali was clearly impressed. She had never met a kid that could take out grown Sharpteeth.

   “What is your name?” she asked the boy. “Mine’s Ali.”

   “I’m Rhett.” Then he paused. “Rhett the brave, scarer of the Sharpteeth.”

   Ali giggled at his grandiose title.

   “It’s nice to meet you, Rhett.”

   “I’ll bet,” he replied, putting on a heroic expression.

   This time, Ali didn’t hesitate to roll her eyes, but Rhett didn’t notice. Just then, the adults stopped talking and approached the children. Rhett cringed slightly, hoping no one from his herd would say anything about the Sharpteeth fight. He had nothing to fear.

   “Well, kids, we have some news,” one of the adults from Ali’s heard spoke up. “We’re going to merge with this herd. It is relatively small, and they’d been hoping to increase in number someday.”

   “What does ëmerge’ mean?” Ali asked. Rhett wondered too but was glad that Ali had asked. He didn’t want her to know that he didn’t know something. His first impression was going perfectly.

   “It means to combine, Ali,” the adult replied. “We’re all going to be migrating together from now on.”

   Both Rhett’s and Ali’s heart leapt for joy. They had always been the only child in their herd, and now, now they’d have someone their own age to play with. The lot of them started walking back to the others from Ali’s herd. When they got back, Ali’s face brightened all the more. Her mother was up and moving around. The Old One was right; she was fine.

   “Mother!” she cried happily. She ran over, and her mother nuzzled her gently. Rhett walked over to them and Ali introduced him. “Oh! Mother, this is my new friend, Rhett. Him and his herd will be traveling with us from now on.”

   “Eh?” the Old One cut in. “What’s this about others coming with us?”

   The male who had explained things to Ali spoke to the Old One as well.

   “We came across another herd, a small one, and both of our groups thought it best to merge.”

   “I see…” the Old One replied. Then she slowly walked over to him and got in his face. “Never, ever make a decision that big without talking to me first! I’m the leader of this herd, not you, not anyone else. You’re fortunate that I’ve wanted to increase too.”

   “M-many apologies, Old One,” he stammered.

   Rhett shivered slightly. Something about that old Long Neck scared him. He’s never seen an adult talk that way before, especially to another adult. He was going to have to be careful with her in charge.

   The bright circle was nearly out of sight at this point, so any more traveling would have to be done quickly. The Old One turned to her old herd and the newcomers and said what was going to happen.

   “There isn’t much light left of the day. If we’re going to get to that watering hole then find a safe place to rest, we need to keep moving now and at a brisk pace.” The pain in the Old One’s hurt ankle had been walked off, and so she started making way as the others followed.

   Ali sighed. She hated when they moved quickly, as she had to nearly run to keep up. She didn’t dare ask her mother to carry her for a while, as guilt still lingered in her heart. As they all started to move out, Rhett came over and walked beside her. Ali was relieved to have someone her age to talk to as they went along. Rhett started the conversation.

   “That wasn’t the first time I saved my herd from Sharpteeth, you know,” he began. He had made a great first impression but didn’t want the prestige he’d gained to stop there.

   “Oh?” Ali replied, having genuine interest.

   “Yeah. One time, my herd was being chased by a group of Fast Biters. At first, I didn’t know how to save the others. But just then, a bolt of sky fire struck a tree and it burst into flames. So I went over, broke off a burning branch, and started running into that Fast Biter herd with the stick in my mouth.”

   “Wow! Were you afraid? What happened then?” Ali was really impressed.

   “Well, I ran right into their group and started waving the branch around. Some of the cowered and backed up, but some tried to bite me. I flung the stick around and managed to burn most of them. Realizing they couldn’t get to me with my fiery branch, they retreated, and my herd was saved. And no, I wasnët frightened at all.”

   “You’re amazing, Rhett!”

   “I know. Another time, my herd was walking through this deep ditch for some shade when we were attacked by a huge Sharptooth. They all started to run back, as there wasn’t any place to climb out nearby. I, however, ran right through that Sharptooth’s legs and continued moving forward as he chased my herd.”

   “Why would you do that?”

   “Stop interrupting!”

   “Sorry…”

   “You see, there were puddles of water on the ground, so I just knew that this ditch used to be a deep river. Therefore, something must be blocking the water, and I was determined to get it flowing again. I finally found a large pile of rocks sitting on top of a fallen tree. I looked back and saw the last of my herd climbing out, and the Sharptooth wasn’t far behind. There was a bunch of water stopped up on the other side, so I pushed and shoved on the pile and it finally broke free. Water began gushing out and it quickly started filling the ditch. By then, my herd was safely out, but as for the Sharptooth… He was swept away, never to bother us again.”

   Ali hesitated, not wanting to interrupt again, but unsure if he was finished speaking. After a few seconds, when he turned to her and grinned, she was certain that he was done and said what was on her mind.

   “You have to be the bravest kid I know!” Ali exclaimed. “Tell me more, please! Your adventures are just so fascinating.”

   Rhett paused, struggling to think of another story. His imagination was getting really worn out. Thankfully, the herd finally came to a stop at a large lake, and Ali’s thirst stole her attention away. She ran over and started lapping up water so fast until she hiccupped and started to cough.

   “Easy there, Ali,” her mother told her with a laugh. “The lake isn’t going anywhere.”

   “Hee hee. Sorry mother. I just hadn’t been this thirsty in a long time.” Then she hiccupped once more.

   “Today has been quite a day, dear. Both the Old One and I got hurt, we nearly doubled the size of our herd, and you made water give you hiccups instead of helping to make them go away.” Both Ali and her mother giggled at that account.

   Rhett had grown bored from listening to Ali and her mother chat. He had gotten a big drink of his own and finally walked over to them, eyeing Ali as if he had something on his mind.

   “Oh, mother, before we move on again, may I play with Rhett?”

   “Of course, dear. Have fun.”

   Ali trotted over to Rhett and gave him a smile.

   “Ready to play?” she asked him.

   Rhett tried to be cool about it.

   “I don’t play with kids I don’t know, but now that we’re in the same herd, I’ll be getting to know you whether I like it or not, so I guess so.”

   Ali grew silent. She wasn’t sure if he was trying to be funny or if he was being rude, so she ended up just replying with an short, awkward laugh before they moved a little ways away from the herd.

   “What shall we play?” she asked him.

   Rhett paused in contemplation. He had rarely even spent time with other kids, so his knowledge of games was rather limited. Tag isn’t much fun with two dinosaurs, and there weren’t enough places to hide in this area for hide and seek. Then it dawned on him.

   “Let’s play rescue.”

   “How do you play? I’ve never heard of that.”

   Rhett was making this up as he went along, so he hoped he would end up with a good idea.

   “You pretend to be being attacked by Sharpteeth, and then I’ll come over, and then we’ll make believe I’m taking them out.”

   “Sounds like fun!”

   Rhett let loose a sigh of relief.

   “Okay, now move a little ways away and shout for help, but not too loudly, or else the grown-ups will think you’re really in trouble and might get mad.”

   “Got it!”

   Rhett moved behind a tree as Ali stepped farther away from the herd.

   “Ah, help me!” she cried. She muffled her voice slightly so the shout wouldn’t be heard too far away.

   “Don’t worry, I’ll save you!” Rhett exclaimed. He ran over and reared up then swung his tail around over and over.

   “Nice job, but here comes a Fast Biter!” Ali continued to role play.

   “Not a problem!” Rhett replied as he rammed his head into thin air. Then he turned around and stood on his front feet, kicking his two back legs up.

   “Ooh, you got that Fast Biter good!”

   “Of course I did! I’m Rhett the brave, scarer of the Sharpteeth!”

   “Uh oh, two Flying Sharpteeth are heading our way!”

   Rhett grinned. “She’s good at this,” he thought to himself.

   He started wiping his tail along the ground then moved away and repeated.

   “What are you doing?” Ali asked him.

   “I’m gathering a pile of rocks. Those Flying Sharpteeth won’t know what hit them!” He then started whipping his tail around abruptly.
   
   “Yay, you got one!” Ali cried in delight.

   “Now for the other one. I’ll smack two rocks at him at once!” Rhett pulled his tail back and let loose so hard that the air made a whooshing sound.

   “Wow, you got him with both rocks! Nice shot, Rhett.”

   “Why thank you.”

   “Kids?” a voice called from the lake.

   “Yes, mother?” Ali asked back.

   “The Old One says it’s time to find a sleeping place for the night. It’s getting pretty dark.”

   “Okay, coming!” Ali replied.

   The two of them ran back to the herd, and they all started moving again. They didn’t go far though. They soon came across a small group of trees growing near a cliff wall. The adults immediately began settling themselves in, finding a comfortable spot that wasn’t too close to anyone else. Rhett started to go to his father’s spot, but Ali stopped him.

   “Thanks for the great time,” she told him, and nuzzled him slightly before laying down beside her mother. Rhett stood there a moment, his face’s redness being hidden by the lack of light. Then he shook his head abruptly to return to his senses and went to sleep by his father.

   Several weeks went by. The two children played rescue everyday, and while Rhett was enjoying it more and more, Ali had begun losing interest in it. He continued to awe her with stories about how he saved his herd, but as he began running out of ideas, his imagination started getting wilder and wilder, and so his tales began getting less and less realistic. Nonetheless, Ali hung on his every word. She loved to have finally found someone her age that could keep her company on her migrating journey, and her elation kept her from even considering to challenge Rhett’s accounts. One day, the Old One had an announcement.

   “Everyone, I have made a decision. We’ll be spending a little time in the Great Valley. I’d like to visit with our cousins.”

   Ali’s eyes widened. She’ll get to see Littlefoot again! Then she frowned. “Rhett doesn’t like playing with kids he doesn’t know,” she remembered. “I hope everything goes okay when Rhett meets the others. Oh, what am I saying? Iëm sure itëll be fine.”

   Little did Ali realize that that visit wouldn’t be as pleasant as she had thought it would be, as tensions will rise, and her eyes will be opened for the first time about what her new friend Rhett is really about…

To find out what happens to Rhett and Ali as they meet up with Littlefoot and his friends in the Great Valley, simply watch the episode “The Brave Longneck Scheme.”

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The Fridge / The Friendly Sharptooth's Guide
« on: February 18, 2011, 02:36:01 PM »
I have been chatting online for years. In my travels, I have learned a great many things about how to handle myself in a chat window with people. No things in this thread were read somewhere by me or were told to me. All of these things are my personal observations from dealing with situations firsthand. I’m not a chatting wizard, but I have broken down some situations. Socializing is a science. Heh, there’s even a college class called Social Science. There are many tricks of the trade, and the ones I’ve learned I am here now to share with you. From actual testing, I can verify that this tips work at least under most circumstances.

Correcting someone- First of all, if the mistake isn’t a big deal, I would avoid correcting people at all in chats. It generally adds a bit of tension in the person being corrected, making the air a bit heavy, even though the person who corrected may not even notice. I mean, it is extremely rare to find a person who jumps for joy at being told he or she is wrong. Now, if you feel it is important for the person to know that he or she made a mistake, it is important that you do something to remove any possible tension that the person may feel. There are a number of choices to choose from:

1. Tell a joke. Making the person laugh is a good way to get him or her to relax from any possible tension.

2. Counterbalance it with a compliment, By making someone feel smaller from being corrected, you can build the person back up by pointing out one of his or her strong points.

3. Talk about something you know the person is very interested in. This is a very pleasant way to change the subject, making the person forget about his or her mistake as the person starts getting involved in the topic he or she likes.

4. Ask a question. You see, by correcting someone, you just shows that you know something the person did not, or at least, that you know something better than the other person. By asking a question of your own, you are expressing a weakness too, a lapse of knowledge. By having the other person teach you something, you two become “even.”

There are likely other ways to smooth over a correction, but I find these four to be the best choices.

Sharing troubles- Everyone does this at one time or another. When you chat with someone, you are very likely to hear a problem or complaint from the person you are chatting with. Now, probably the worst thing you can do is bring up your own troubles. When someone is grieving, he or she doesn’t need your troubles added to his or her plate. Let’s just say I am chatting with Saft, and she says, “Michael, it was horrible. These girls were picking on me at the university and I didn’t know what to do.” Then I say, “I’m sorry to hear that. My math teacher was picking on me, I just know it, and I was very embarrassed in class.” The good thing I did in my response was expressing my sympathy at the start. My flaw was adding more troubles to her mind. When someone is sad or angry, it is best to focus on that person’s troubles, and that person’s troubles alone. People don’t come to you for help because they want to think about even more problems. They come to get help for the problems that they have.

Now, let’s look at this backwards. Say that you express your troubles, then the person you are speaking to brings up his or her own. The polite thing to do is to put aside your own troubles for the remainder of that chat and focus on those of the other person. You may think that bringing up your own problems may make the other person think less of his or her own. However, that is not the case. You are just fanning the flames of turmoil. When someone is sad, it is the mature thing to do to forget about what’s troubling you and to try and help the other person.

Saying good-bye- When you feel the need to leave the conversation, it is important that you don’t simply say, “Bye!” then log off. It also isn’t good to say that you need to go, wait for the other to say good-bye, then log out. The reason being is that the other person may want to say something more to you. If you just log out, the person gets no chance to add any closing thoughts. If you say good-bye then wait for the other to, there is still an issue: If you say that you need to go yet the other person has more on his or her mind, that person may feel like he or she is keeping you against your will by saying more. Out of discomfort alone, he or she may just say good-bye even if there is more to say. The way to fix this is by asking at the end if the person has any more to say. “I have to go for now, but is there any more you wish to say before I leave? I have the time to finish up any thoughts you have.” The invitation to continue wears away the discomfort of keeping the person longer.

Getting bored- Yes, there will be times when the person you are chatting with bores you. It will easily offend the person to know he or she is being boring, but there are ways to seem interested:

1. Make sure that you don’t drastically decrease your response size. If you’ve been typing sentences then suddenly switch to one or two liners, the person will likely get suspicious.

2. Ask questions about what the person is saying. Few things show as much interest as inquiries.

3. Make comparisons. Linking the topic to other things shows that you are actively analyzing what the person is saying. (It also acts as a subtle transition to change the subject at a later point.)

4. Don’t abruptly change the subject unless it is clear that the person has finished saying all that he or she wants to. A possible way of changing the subject is switching to something mentioned in the person’s responses. If someone is talking about a war then mentions the types of guns used, and wars bore you but you like guns, you can try talking about guns, but don’t forget to make it connect to the original topic. If I’m talking to Malte279 about World War I, and I’m getting bored, I can do this: Malte279: “World War I was a very gruesome battle. The primitive weapons made the fight all the more grueling.” The Friendly Sharptooth: “Yes, I heard that that war was just a nightmare too. I’m impressed that you know so much about it. Speaking of the guns they used, what all can you tell me about them?” You can see that I started by talking about his topic, then changed to a subtopic in his statement that I had more interest in.

Overloading a chatter- If someone is taking a long time to reply to you, it could very well be because the person is chatting with several people at once. This can easily and harmlessly be discovered by asking the person about it. If you have nothing important to say, and there are plenty of other things to occupy your time, it is polite and responsible to stop chatting with the person. Multitasking lowers quality and adds stress. If you really care about the person’s welfare and there is no strong reason to stick around, be mature and lighten the person’s load. The person will appreciate it.

Making an awkward statement- Most of us do this occasionally. You can easily say or ask something that is too personal or that the person isn’t comfortable disclosing. Don’t let the awkwardness in the air linger! Change the subject right away, but do it gently and casually. Don’t say things like, “Sorry for the awkward comment. Do like birds?” There is no need to say that things are awkward bluntly, and an obvious subject change is even more uncomfortable. Act like you just had a sudden idea. Following an awkward comment that clearly made the person uncomfortable: “Oh, I nearly forgot! I wanted to ask you something. I saw a really cool show about turkeys, and I was wondering, do you like them too?”

Dealing with an angry person- At times, you will begin a chat with an angry individual. Don’t fuel his or her fire by bashing the one responsible! Explain why the source of the anger is wrong without speaking directly about the person. Let’s say I’m chatting with Mumbling, and she’s fuming because Action9000 bought her a dress that was way too big and she took it as him calling her fat.

What not to do- “Yeah, that guy is a real jerk. What sort of guy makes his girlfriend seem overweight? He doesn’t deserve you or your kindness anymore. Someone like you should have better. Ugh, he just makes me sick.”

What to do- “Aw, that’s really sad. I’m sorry that such a mistake happened and that it bothers you so much. You’re actually have a very slim figure, but most guys don’t know a whole lot about female clothes sizes. I mean, I couldn’t pick out the right size for a girl if my life depended on it. I’m sure it wasn’t intentional, and you should try telling him your size for future reference.”

That is all I can think of for now. I may add more later as I come up with new ideas.

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Land Before Time Captions / Pucker Up!
« on: February 17, 2011, 05:34:42 PM »
“But, Yittlefoot, you and Mo, so- different. Maybe we shouldn’t…”

“Aw, come on, Mo! We’ll just do it once. There’s no harm in a one time thing. At least, I’m pretty sure there isn’t.”

“Mo could never tell water kin about this.”

“Yeah, and I could never tell my grandparents nor friends. They just wouldn’t understand.”

“Well, if Mo can be perfectly honest, Mo no really understand either.”

“That’s alright! We don’t have to understand our feelings. They’re involuntary; we can’t control what emotions pop into our heads. And most things that happen on their own we have little understanding of. We can’t control the bright circle, nor sky puffies, nor smoking mountains, and as such, we know very little of how they work. The beautiful thing is, we don’t have to understand them, nor do we need to comprehend the inner workings of our hearts. When they burst into song, all we should do is follow their lyrics. They’ll guide is into what we should do. So please, let’s not think about it anymore. Let’s just do it, quickly, before anyone finds us.”

“Well- okay. But just this once.”

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LBT Fanfiction / I am a Yellow Belly
« on: February 13, 2011, 07:25:52 PM »
If a Yellow Belly of Fooby's herd gave an account of his/her life, I'd guess he'd/she'd have this to say:

I am a Yellow Belly

I am a Yellow Belly.
I have lots and lots of fun.
I play and dance my heart out,
Be it night or under the sun.

Life is fun!

When danger comes my way,
I rely on my wonderful tush.
It lets me hide in safety,
Making me look just like a bush.

Life is safe!

Boy, I sure get hungry,
And when I want a meal,
Berries are the food of choice.
So good, they’re just unreal.

Life is tasty!

Lightning can be quite scary.
It gives me such a fright.
When a storm is happening,
I run with all my might.

Life is scary!

I have never, ever worried,
Of what the future may bring.
Instead of thinking of tomorrow,
I just stand up and sing.

Life is carefree!

I don’t do a lot of thinking,
Just follow the good old wise one.
We do very well for a traveling herd,
As our troubles are close to none.

Life is easy!

That’s the story of my life.
I hope I didn’t bore.
If you ever join us,
I’ll bet you’ll shout for more.

Life is great!

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LBT Fanfiction / Eating in the Great Valley
« on: February 11, 2011, 01:36:19 PM »
I was bored during my lunch break at the university, so I decided to write another poem. It's nothing special, just a little piece about some things to expect when eating in the Great Valley.

Eating in the Great Valley

There’s lots to eat in the Great Valley.
When meal times come, expect a rally.
Wow, the food is good!

Tree stars are a snack of choice.
They cause the children to rejoice.
Boy, they are a treat!

When a dessert is much desired,
A tree sweet is what’s required.
Yes, they are the best!

Living in the valley is a little Sharptooth,
Though his eating habits are a bit uncouth.
Mm, the bugs are spicy!

The very best of the berry bushes,
Were there for the risers of their tushes.
Yeesh, they don’t leave much!

All love the time of the great giving.
It’s a tradition that keeps on living.
Oh, the sharing is grand!

When the snowy cold times come,
The sweet bubbles are more than yum.
Gosh, they’re hard to find!

When a red tree star ends with a pluck,
Petrie will be there, talking of luck.
Ugh, that is so annoying!

When others visit, looking for food,
They’d best be wary of old Three Horn’s mood.
Yikes, he can be mean!

These are a few samples of what may be,
As with eating in the valley, there's much to see.
Yay, it sounds like fun!

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LBT Fanfiction / The Land Before Time Limericks
« on: January 25, 2011, 05:33:10 PM »
For those who don't know, limericks are five line poems where the first, second, and fifth lines rhyme, and the third and fourth lines rhyme. The third and fourth lines tend to be a bit shorter than the first, second, and fifth lines, and the poem as a whole tends to be rather light hearted. I wrote ten for now and plan to write more. Since not everyone here has seen all the movies, there is an explanation about the basis for each of my limericks directly follwing them. I hope my quality is decent enough and that my explanations don't disrupt the flow of thought.

The Land Before Time Limericks

Five very young children did chase,
Two egg-eaters at a very swift pace.
Little did they know,
That the egg did not go,
But instead was still quite in place.

(In the second movie, the kids gave chase to two egg-eaters thinking they had Ducky’s egg, but it was back at the nest.)

It took Cera a while to know,
But she learned and it really did show,
No matter how dismayful,
He got when was playful,
What’s not to love about Mo?

(Cera for a while did not like Mo, but as the ninth movie continued, she came to appreciate him. Notice my usage of the poetic license: dismayful is not a real word.)

Ozzie and Strut did not know,
As they ran very fast to and fro,
The thing they had feared,
Was not as appeared,
But instead was a baby’s shadow.

(In the second movie, Ozzie and Strut kept running from a Sharptooth’s shadow thinking it was an adult, when it really belonged to baby Chomper.)

Here is a tale about Ducky,
A young little girl who was plucky.
With her brother in trouble,
She attacked on the double,
And lived- boy was she lucky.

(When Chomper’s parents came in the second movie, Spike froze and was nearly gotten, but Ducky jumped onto the parent’s head which caused Spike to snap out of it and get away, and Ducky managed to survive the ordeal too.)

The Yellow Bellies were plenty of fun,
And they lifted their rears to the sun.
But what came as a shock,
Was learned on the walk,
That Foobie was really the wise one.

(In the thirteenth movie, the Yellow Bellies were about having a good time, enjoying the moment and often his with their rears in the air. They spoke of a wise one, and the shock was that it was Phoebe all along.)

Chomper was a very good friend.
To save, the stinky place he did send.
While they came to a song,
The peace didn’t last long,
So his powerful teeth he did lend.

(In movie number five, Chomper was a good friend to the others, hiding them in a stinky group of plants to hide their sent. However, a Sharptooth eventually did find them and Chomper bit his tail, buying enough time for his parents to step in.)

The Great Valley had a lot of new faces.
They were migraters who took many paces.
With his grandfather ill,
Littlefoot couldn’t sit still,
So to save saw a number of places.

(In the fourth movie, a herd of Long Necks migrated into the valley. Littlefoot's grandfather grew ill so he traveled across the land to find the cure to save him. Again, see the use of the poetic license: migraters is not a real word.)

Littlefoot made a friend known as Ali.
Over time, they began to get pally.
With rocks keeping him in,
He just couldn’t win,
But his friend saved the day with a rally.

(In movie number four, Littlefoot befriended Ali and they grew close. He got stuck in a cave it, but Ali gathered his friends who saved him. Yet again with the poetic license: pally is not a word.)

The bullies were a rude little bunch.
They liked to threaten, be greedy, and punch.
Yet Littlefoot didn’t give in,
And sang with a grin.
They’re just like them was his hunch.

(In movie three, there were bullies who were violent and mean, but Littlefoot didn’t give up on them, singing how the bullies aren’t much different than he and his friends.)

There was a legend of a lone dinosaur.
He would fight and fight then fight more.
Littlefoot saw a hero,
And his doubts were zero,
That this was the one from the lore.

(In the sixth movie, Littlefoot’s grandfather told the story of a lone dinosaur that fought to save others. Littlefoot believed that his new friend Doc was the one from legend.)

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LBT Fanfiction / My Inner Turmoil
« on: January 21, 2011, 04:38:09 PM »
Cera is constantly being mean to characters like Littlefoot. Yet, we really don't see him lashing back for the most part. He charged Cera in I, got in a fight in V, argued back in Through the Eyes of a Spiketail, and so on, but those were rare occurences, and Cera is mean almost all the time. I wonder if he is bottling up some negative feelings about her constant treatment towards him. We seem him brush her harsh behavior aside a LOT. That is what inspired this poem.

My Inner Turmoil

I try to hide it everyday.
My emotions swirl in a negative way.
Cera the Three Horn is my friend.
Nonetheless, my heart does rend.
With constant abuse, it cannot mend.
What am I to do?

I knew the proper path to take.
My confidence was not a fake.
I wanted the left but she went right.
Her decision almost a tragic sight,
We nearly did not survive the fight.
What am I to think?

I gained a friend but lost a mother.
With her loving tongue, she did smother.
Now I’m left with a rude little jerk.
Each passing day, I meet her smirk.
I just can’t see her as a perk.
What am I to feel?

She argues with me all the time.
Her company should be a crime.
I try so hard to show her kindness.
But it’s like she suffers from a blindness.
Her constant anger is so mindless.
How should I react?

I try to treat her with respect.
Yet to her dad, I’m just an insect.
What good is coming from my toil?
My kindnesses she just does spoil.
She tramples my feelings just like the soil.
How should I continue?

For mother’s sake, I try to be strong.
But maybe in this, I’m doing it wrong.
About other kinds, maybe mother was right.
I grow weary from this endless fight.
When I’m with Cera, there’s so little light.
How should I behave?

All I can do is harbor my feeling.
To lash out would not be appealing.
Oh, Cera, why are you so mean?
Is cruelty to you so keen?
A bright future I haven’t seen.
I can only take so much.

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LBT Fanfiction / Fear of the Future
« on: January 18, 2011, 08:02:00 PM »
A few fan fictions I've read have addressed the issue of what awaits Chomper when he gets too big to be sustained off of insects alone and will have to eat dinosaurs to survive. However, I have yet to find a poem about the issue. I therefore took the liberty of writing a short piece about what Chomper may feel at some point.

Fear of the Future

Fear is welling up in me.
The future, I don’t want to see.

Just for now, it’s bugs I eat.
Boy, they sure are quite a treat.

But soon a time will surely come,
When meals aren’t such a measly sum.

To live on, it’s meat I need.
May such a time come without speed.

I can’t imagine what my friends will think.
My terrible dilemma does really stink.

For what awaits, what can I do?
My life here is surely through.

When my friends leave, my life is gone.
I can never again embrace the dawn.

I’ll have to live with my own kind.
I’ll have to accept my carnivorous mind.

Oh, my heart aches with pain.
All my worries are made in vain.

My darkest fear will come to light.
Someday, I will have to fight.

Soon my life will fill with blood.
I will battle in the grass and mud.

To all my friends, I’ll wish them well.
My time with them was surely swell.

So for now, I can only wait.
Though life is cruel, I accept my fate.

Fear is welling up in me.
My future is sadly going to be.

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1988 Theatrical Release / The Land Before Time Versus The Lion King
« on: January 17, 2011, 06:09:58 PM »
The Land Before Time and The Lion King are great movies, no doubt. On that note, however, they didn’t perform much differently than each other. Watching one of those is almost like watching the other. The formulas which make up each of these movies don’t have too much variety when looked at side by side. While this probably won’t make for very good discussion, I do believe that this thread will be food for thought. I am going to explain why I believe that these two movies follow the same rode from beginning to end. Disagree with my logic if you will, but here goes:

They both start around the time of the main character’s birth. Both Littlefoot and Simba are born just shortly after the film starts.

A creature tried killing the heroes in each of the movies, also towards the first segment. Someone tries stealing Littlefoot’s egg for a meal, and Scar tries killing Simba via the hyenas.

Each of the main characters lose one parent entirely, while getting separated from the other. Littlefoot’s mother dies and he loses his father not long before the film starts, and Simba’s father dies, and he gets separated from his mother when he runs away.

After losing contact with both parents, each character is depressed until making some new friends. Simba meets Timon and Pumbaa, while Littlefoot meets Cera, Ducky, Petrie, and Spike. The new friends help the heroes to overcome their self pity and move on.

Each of the main characters gets advice from an older character that is trying to help them. Littlefoot gets Rooter, and Simba gets Rafiki. After each of them gets a talking to, it takes a while for the information to sink in, then it is accepted later. Littlefoot was still down for a bit after his talk with Rooter, and Simba still wasn’t ready to go back for a little bit after his talk with Rafiki.

The villains are unable to be stopped by the main heroes alone, but with help from a friend, the anti heroes fall at the last minute, when things were looking the worst. Just when that Sharptooth was about to get Littlefoot, Cera rushed in and knocked into that rock just in time. When Scar was nearly about to get Simba, the move that Nala taught him allowed him to win just in time. So without friends like Cera and Nala, neither hero would have had the strength to overcome their final obstacle.

The circle of life theme is discussed in each film. Grandma Long Neck in one, and Mufasa in the other. (Then again, this point may not really count since the grandma instance was in movie four.)

Both characters spent the majority of the movie away from where they needed to be, but finally reached their appropriate home at the end. Littlefoot finds the Great Valley, and Simba returns to Pride Rock.

Each hero loses one parent due to the villain. Littlefoot’s mother dies from that Sharptooth, and Scar orchestrated the death of Mufasa.

Each of the main characters have a troublesome moment between one friend that later gets resolved. Littlefoot has a falling out with Cera who goes her own way, and Simba gets into an argument with Nala and they separate for a bit.

Both of the characters wander off prior to their parents’ deaths. Littlefoot runs off to play with Cera where they meet the Sharptooth who kills his mother, and Simba goes off into that valley where Mufasa dies trying to save him.

Those are all the similarities I can think of at the moment, but as you can see, those movies have a ton in common, making one almost wonder if one inspired the other to a degree. They both flow in pretty much the exact same manner on many occasions. I’m not really sure what there is to add to a thread like this; I just wrote it to show people who weren’t already aware of just how similar those movies are. Being an aspie, I am known for making connections between two things rather frequently. At least, I’m pretty sure that’s an aspie trait. Well, I hope my comparison has been enlightening.

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The Fridge / What Did You Get For Christmas?
« on: December 25, 2010, 03:03:49 PM »
I got mostly Land Before Time related items.

A Littlefoot Christmas ornament.


The Pizza Hut hand puppets.


A glass LBT night light. (I mentioned it is a LBT item because the engravings are too hard to make out from a photo.)


The Long John Silver's LBT collection.


The Halloween Cera doll.


A box of four LBT puzzles.


A LBT art set.


A LBT bed sheet.


And as for the non LBT stuff...

A coin holder.


And lastly, a box of hygiene supplies. (Hm. Is my family trying to tell me something...?)


Merry Christmas to you all from The Friendly Sharptooth

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LBT Fanfiction / Chomper's Dilemma
« on: December 20, 2010, 09:55:25 PM »
Not too long ago, I set out to write a Land Before Time poem. I was a clueless about ideas for a while, then I came up with the idea of retelling a past event in the Land Before Time world as a poem. I ended up choosing the events of the episode "The Mysterious Tooth Crisis" to retell as a poem. Below is what I ended up with. For those that don't enjoy reading so much but instead prefer to have things read to you, I am also providing a link of me reading it aloud.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YG1HTRGRn-M

Chomper’s Dilemma

It happened one day,
When Chomper was playing.
He found that his tooth,
Was clearly not staying.

He started to panic,
And be quite dismayed.
Though he didn’t feel pain,
It might be delayed.

Mr. Three Horn came by,
And what did he do?
He gave Chomper a fright,
Made him think he was through.

Chomper didn’t give up,
And sought one who’s wise.
He tried fixing the tooth,
With a great many tries.

Things didn’t look good.
While they came to a song,
That tooth would not stay,
Something had to be wrong.

Ruby came to their mind,
She may be of help.
But she was off soaking,
So they couldn’t yelp.

They set out to find her.
Chomper’s sniffer did guide.
But things were still tough,
As the valley was wide.

They looked quite a while,
Then found a small cave.
But they soon had to run;
Buzzers just don’t behave.

They climbed a tall rock,
But then they all stopped.
Ducky started to stumble
And very near dropped.

Chomper managed to save,
But it came at a cost.
He dropped his dear tooth,
And all was thought lost.

Brave Petrie didn’t think;
He hadn’t time to waver.
He flew down that cliff,
And became quite a saver.

They found the mud pool,
And began making way.
The thought on their mind-
Will Ruby save the day?

Things quickly went bad,
When Chomper fell into sand.
As he started to sink,
Clutched his tooth in one hand.

Littlefoot held out his tail,
Which Chomper did take,
But with only one hand,
Couldn’t pull from the lake.

With shouts all around,
He finally let go.
But without his dear tooth,
His fear started to grow.

While the others got Ruby.
Petrie stayed very near.
Chomper was sad,
And ready to tear.

 When they all got back,
They brought quite the news.
Chomper was normal,
Though all teeth he’ll lose.

When one does fall out,
A new one takes place.
Chomper was relieved,
And it showed on his face.

Chomper burst into song,
What was plain to see,
“It’s like the Bright Circle
Is shining inside of me.”

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LBT Fanfiction / The Land Before Time: Dawn of the Seven Heroes
« on: December 18, 2010, 01:30:57 AM »
We all know that I’ve not been very active on the forum, but in my absence, I’ve not just be twiddling my thumbs. I’ve been writing a lot in the form of fan fictions. I did a few kinky one shots that aren’t really worth making a thread about, but there is one with chapters that took me around a year to write. Even so, the quality is not that great. It is the first fan fiction I ever finished that isn’t a one shot. I did proofread it, but with my inexperience, I likely made a number of grammatical errors, plot holes, contradictions, confusing parts, and so forth, but I really did my best.

I feel that it’s decent for a first attempt at this sort of thing, but still, it’s a far cry from the stories of the veteran writes of this forum. I would also like to add that this isn’t a “pure” Land Before Time story. The content of this would never be considered in the making of a LBT movie. I blended a lot of Final Fantasy elements into it, so it’s a pretty crazy story. If you only like stories that could have been made into one of their movies, this story is certainly not going to interest you at all. I gave it somewhat of an RPG feel.

Anyone, let me continue by saying that it won’t bother me if no one has anything to say about it. I am well aware that it is very amateurish, so I give myself plenty of negative feedback as it is, heh heh. If you absolutely love reviewing and/or commenting, I won’t try and stop you, but my feelings won’t be effected if this thread is only littered with my own statements. I hope you fantasy lovers enjoy this a little bit. I’ll put up new chapters often, so at least there won’t be much of a waiting game to reach the end. So, that all being said, here is what my brain came up with over a year’s time. Oh, and because the prologue is very short and doesn’t really advance the story itself, I’ll start by posting the prologue along with chapter one. Have a nice day.
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The Land Before Time: Dawn of the Seven Heroes

I can face the world through a different light. Though it pains my heart, all I can do is fight, fight, fight! With the power of my mind, and the strength of my friends, I’ll put a stop to destruction ends.

I will follow my destiny no matter the path. Though danger looms within, I will find the courage to win, win, win! I’ll protect who’re close, and save who’re dear, and stop all the perils that keep drawing near.

I won’t give up and I can’t lose hope. Though the troubles are many and eases are few, I won’t stop till the job is through, through, through! As I gaze up and look all around, I wonder, is there really evil to be found?


Prologue: Read Me a Story Please

In which bedtime leads to an epic struggle.


   The sun started to retire for the day, and the moon began to take its place. A warm, gentle breeze whistled through the fields of grass and tall trees. No children roamed about, playing and laughing gleefully as they tend to do; it was the time that they were tucked in for the night. A tall, stone castle stood above all else in the kingdom. From even its lowest tower, the entire kingdom could be viewed with watchful and caring eyes. Inside the window of one of the highest towers, a dim glow could be seen, as well as two shadows moving about.

   “Okay, daddy, I'm going to bed now,” a small child declared.

   “Now son, I know how much you like to stay up, but- wait, you want to go to bed!?” his father asked incredulously.

   “Yep!” he answered cheerfully, jumping into his bed and pulling up his own blanket.

   “My, you sure are growing up. This is the first time you've willingly gone to sleep.”

   “I didn't say I was going to sleep, daddy,” he replied with a grin. “I said I was going to bed. Read me a story.”

   His father had to keep himself from chuckling. “Where did he learn that one?” he thought to himself. "All right son, but remember your manners."

   “Oh yeah! Read me a story please.”

   “Good boy. Now, which one would you like to hear tonight?” he asked him.

   “Well,” he began, “Is there one I haven't heard yet?”

   His father pondered this. He walked over to his son's bookshelf, scanned over its contents, and then replied, “I'm afraid I've read you all of your books.”

   “Oh... Well, what about one of your books? Got any interesting ones?”

   “Hmmm. I'm pretty sure that what I find interesting, you would find boring.”

   “Any story'll do. Don't you have just one story book?” he pleaded.

   “I do have one, but you might find it boring at your age. Besides, it is quite long. How about I just make one-”

   “Ooh! I love long stories! Read it! Read it!" the child exclaimed, getting very excited. His father hesitated, so the boy added, "I can just ask if I don't understand something.”

   “Very well, but I can't guarantee we'll finish it tonight.”

   “That's okay. You can just read the rest some other time then.”

   “I only wish my wife was this agreeable,” he thought to himself. “I'll be right back,” he said aloud as he went to his quarters to retrieve the book.

   He did not have to go far, since his room was just a little down the hall from his son's. His wife was snoring loudly, which blocked out the noise he made as he got the book down. He couldn't light a candle for fear of waking her, but he grabbed the right book with ease since it felt different from any of his other ones. He crept back into his son's room, only to see him fidgeting immensely.

   “I was only gone a few minutes,” he said with a laugh.

    “Yeah but, I've never heard anything that wasn't from a child's book before. I've never even opened one for adults before.”

   “Probably because you can't read yet," he replied with a grin. "But who is to say if a story is for youth or the elderly? If you enjoy it, then it's right for you; it doesn’t matter whether you're young, old, or something in between.”

   “Wow, I never thought of that.”

   “Well, as you get older and experience things for yourself, you will also learn a great deal. Now, let's get started, shall we?” With that, he drew attention to the book.

   It was covered in dust, yet appeared brand new- an odd combination. It had a golden inscription in bold lettering on the cover.

   “What does that say?” the child asked.

   “It says, ëLegend of the Seven Heroes,’” came his father’s reply. He opened it up to the first page. The book seemed completely new, from its binding, to its pages, to its lettering.

   “How old is this book?”

   “It’s many years old.”

   “Wow, you sure take good care of it then.”

   “But of course. This book is my most prized possession. Well, besides you and your mother, of course. It is the only copy in existence.”

   “Wow. It must be super valuable!”

   “You’re probably right. Now then, shall I begin?”

   “What is it about?” he wondered aloud.

   “It's about an epic struggle of young, well, why not have me start reading and see for yourself?”

   “Yeah, that's sounds more interesting. Okay, I'm ready.”

   With that, his father took back the book, and began to read.
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Chapter I: A Friend in Need, Makes a Friend Indeed

In which friends are left, and a friend is made.


   The brilliant star known as the bright circle had been up for quite some time. It wasn't yet evening, but the day had already passed its brightest point. It was a warm day, and a cool breeze roamed through the trees. They began to dance back and forth, and a single leaf, called a tree star, broke free from its high branch and began drifting down slowly to the Earth below.

   It was rather beautiful, with its deep green coloration and the way it fluttered about as gravity called it down. It teetered back and forth as it neared its destination, and drops of dew on its blade began falling off, like it was crying. It was almost like the little leaf was afraid of some impending danger, as it trembled through the air. As it neared the ground, the final contribution of its life became clear.

   Chomp!

   “Spike! It Ducky's turn to get first tree star of day!” Petrie exclaimed.

   “Oh, that is alright. It is. It is. Spike is probably much hungrier than I am,” Ducky reasoned.

   “Uh huh,” Spike agreed with a nod while chewing. He finished then knocked against the tree his snack had fallen from, causing many more to fall down, resulting in a pile big enough to fill the whole gang.

   “Okay guys, let’s get some tree stars too!” Littlefoot exclaimed to the others.

   “I’m gonna get some, but not because you told me too,” Cera responded.

   “Huh? Did I say something wrong?” he asked her, confused.

   “You’re not our boss. Whether I eat or not is not your decision.”

   “Uh, it was just a suggestion; I wasn’t ordering anyone to eat,” he shot back, getting a little worked up.

   “Sure didn’t sound like a suggestion.”

   “Two berries say Spike finish off that bush before they stop arguing,” Petrie whispered to Ducky.

   “You are on.” Turning to her brother, she said, “There is plenty Spike. You do not need to rush.”

   “Hey, that no fair!” Petrie huffed. Ducky just giggled.

   Spike simply continued eating, wishing that everyone would just get along.

   “Would you like me to say ëOkay guys, I suggest we all get some tree stars, if that’s okay with all of you?’” Littlefoot asked, getting quite angry.

   “Sounds good to me,” Cera replied with a shrug. “You just solved your own problem.”

   Littlefoot sighed, knowing that this could go on all day if one of them wouldn’t be the bigger dinosaur.

   “I’m sorry for starting this argument. I’ll try to be more careful in the future with what I say,” he said meekly.

   “Uh, good,” Cera replied slowly, a bit taken back at his surrender.

   Petrie picked Ducky two berries.

   “Hello my friends, my friends hello. What is up besides what is normally up?” a familiar voice called as its owner approached.

   “Oh hi, Ruby,” Littlefoot said. Seeing her alone, he asked, “Where’s Chomper?” When Ruby’s around, Chomper tends to be also.

   “He’s still back at the Secret Caverns; he isn’t feeling well.”

   “Huh? Is he okay?” Littlefoot questioned her, quickly concerned.

   “Worrying is something you don’t need to do.” She sighed. “It’s his teeth again.”

   “Did he lose another one?” Cera asked.

   “No, Chomper didnët lose one, two is how many he lost. That is not a bad sign though; it shows how much he’s maturing. He even said he’d be okay by himself and that I should go ahead without him. Sometimes I wonder if he even needs me to look out for him anymore,” she finished with a low tone. “Even though it wasn’t yesterday that his parents asked me to take care of him, it certainly feels like it.”

   “Do not worry, Ruby. Chomper will always need you. He will. He will,” Ducky added in a comforting voice.

   “Thanks Ducky, but Chomper becoming independent is not a bad thing, but a thing that is good. All Sharpteeth, actually, all dinosaurs, one day learn to take of themselves. It’s part of the great circle of life. Still, it will be sad for me when he’s ready to be on his own. He may even end up leaving the Great Valley. That’s why I want to enjoy him as much as I can while I know I still can.”

   Chomper had gotten used to his most recent mouth trauma and had headed toward the others. There was now only a short distance and a small bush between them.

   “I wish Chomper’s parents had let someone else be his caretaker. I certainly don’t feel comfortable doing it, even after all this time.”

   Chomper froze. He had done so right behind the bush, so no one had seen him yet.

   “Ruby doesn’t like taking of me?” he said to himself as a small tear formed in his eye.

   “I still regret agreeing to look after him.”

   That was all Chomper needed to hear. He quickly took off, running back down the hill he had just climbed up, all the while wiping away tears.

   “You see, I really care about Chomper, so I just want him to have the best care, and the best care is something I don’t think I can give.”

   “Don’t say that Ruby! You’ve done so much more than just keep an eye on him, and even with that you’ve done great!” Littlefoot exclaimed. “Remember the first time he lost a tooth? He was so depressed but you were able to cheer him up when we couldnët. You have done so many things for him, and so well, that I can’t think of a better dinosaur to be his caretaker.”

   “Me think so too. You do whole bunch of good for Chomper, like how helpful you been when he and Ducky trapped with Thud in Mysterious Beyond,” Petrie chimed in.

   “Or the time when Chomper flooded your guys’ old cave. You did not get angry with him like many would have. Oh no,” Ducky added. “In fact, Chomper tolded me later that you were still nice when he broke those stone teeth, and that made him feel much betterer.”

   “Thanks guys, to all of you I thank,” Ruby told the group. “Well, I’d better go see how he’s doing.” She stooped over to pick up a crawler she had spotted, explained “In case he’s hungry and his mouth is feeling better,” then headed back to her cave.

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   “I guess I’d better go back to my parents’ place. I’ll just tell them I was ready to go home. I don’t want them to think badly of Ruby,” he thought to himself as he trudged off into the Mysterious Beyond. “Maybe I’ll get lucky and see Elsie again.” He slid down a small decline that led up from the valley then continued his somber trek.

   He was a bit nervous. After all, last time he came out to the Mysterious Beyond on his own he was nearly killed by some other Sharpteeth. He wished that he didn’t have to walk all by himself, but he didn’t know anybody way out here; his far-off parents were it. However, that was about to change…

   Dark clouds had begun looming overhead. The sky puffies bulged with the large horde of evaporated water they had collected. They rolled in from all directions, shielding the Earth below from the warm, brilliant rays of the bright circle. It had been a while since it had rained, so plant life was sure to appreciate such an oncoming event. Chomper, on the other hand, would not be so happy about it.

   The winds began to pick up slowly, but gained speed as the minutes passed by. The trees swayed back and forth, while smaller plants like grass and flowers shook violently. Flyers in the area sought land as the skies became unsafe for travel. The clouds wasted no more time and small droplets began to descend upon the land.

   At first, Chomper was too fixated on the news he’d stumbled upon earlier to care about the bad weather very much. As things continued to worsen though, he came to his senses and looked for shelter. Try as he might though, he could not. A tree, having had its support uprooted by the strong winds fell over, nearly hitting him.

   “Wah!” he exclaimed as he jumped out of the way just in time. More and more trees began to lose their hold and come crashing to the ground. They were fairly small, barely big enough to scratch a full-grown Sharptooth, but to a very young one…

   “Look out!” a voice roared through the air. Chomper turned around and stood dead in his tracks. Another tree had lost its grip and was about to crush him when he was knocked back a good distance. The tree crashed to the ground and splintered off into several pieces- a safe distance from him. He looked up to see another Sharptooth, black, and about twice his size. He seemed to be around Littlefoot’s age and stood just a bit taller than him.

   “Who’re-?”

   “No time. Come on!” the mysterious Sharptooth ordered. He grabbed one of Chomper’s arms and raced towards a large rock formation that towered high up and over at an angle. He got underneath, pulling Chomper in with him. “We’ll be safe here. It would take a lot more than wind to knock this place over,” he roared gently but loudly enough to be heard over the storm.

   “Th-thank you,” Chomper roared to the stranger as he shivered.

   “You’re welcome,” he answered. Then he noticed Chomper’s discomfort. “Hey, you’re gonna freeze like this. You don’t have enough fat to keep you warm at your age. Come ëere,” he offered, holding out his arm. Chomper happily obliged and huddled in close to be somewhat protected from the chill. He had been much afraid, but with this new Sharptooth, he felt at ease.

   Despite it not yet being even midday, Chomper was exhausted. The combination of traveling and his emotional trauma had drained him. It wasn’t long before he fell asleep, leaning against the stranger.

   The storm raged on for a while, but fleeted as daylight took its rightful place. The bright circle broke through the clouds and one of its rays shined directly onto Chomper’s face. “Ungh,” he moaned while shielding his eyes with an arm. He didn’t stir right away, but when the realization of the day sunk in, he awoke with a start. He looked around, but he saw no one; the Sharptooth from last night was gone.

   He got to his feet and walked out from under the rock formation. There were several small trees scattered across the ground, but the area didn’t look too bad. There was a squishing noise as he walked on the soggy grass while he got his bearings. While he wasn’t very far from the course he had been on, the fallen foliage completely threw him off.

   “Where am I?” he wondered aloud.

   “Not far from where you were before,” came a voice.

   “Wah! Oh, it’s you!” Chomper said, relieved at the sight of the Sharptooth from earlier. “Where did you go?” he asked him.

   “I’m sorry for not telling and startling you. You seemed very comfortable so I didn’t want to wake you. I was just getting these for us,” he replied while revealing a large, folded leaf he was carrying. Opening it, Chomper’s eyes fixated on a wide selection of buzzing buzzers, none of which flew away.

   “Wow! These are for me too?” he asked as he began salivating.

   “I said ëus,’ didn’t I?” he answered with a laugh.

   “Oh boy, I love those! But, how did you get them to stay on that leaf?”

   “Ah, that’s one of the tricks I’ve picked up in my travels. A buzzing buzzer nest is full of a sweet-tasting liquid called honey. I’m not keen on eating that stuff, but it works wonders on catching these delectables. You take a large leaf, break open one of their hanging nests, get the goo all over the leaf, then when these little guys fly in to attack you, you start swatting the leaf at the swarm, and there you have it- they all get stuck to it,” he explained.

   “Wow, youëre so smart!”

   “Heh, I’ve just been around, that’s all,” he replied, handing the buzzer-covered leaf to him. Chomper took it with a hearty round of gratitude. He picked some off and munched on them gingerly, so not to aggravate his mouth pain from earlier.

   “Anyway,” the stranger continued, “if you don’t mind my asking, what’s someone as young as you doing out here all alone?”

   Chomper had been warned by his parents against telling too much to strangers, but he had really warmed up to this one. He had saved his life after all. “I just found out that one of my best friends wished she’d never met me, so I ran away,” he replied gloomily.

   “Oh, I’m so sorry. That’s just awful. I shouldn’t have asked such a thing. How about something more pleasant, like, what’s your name?”

   “I’m Chomper, but I don’t mind talking about what happened. I was just about to meet up with my friends when I heard one of them say that she isn’t comfortable looking after me.”

   “Oh my, that must have really hurt.” He paused, trying to think of the best thing to say next. “You know, Chomper, that story sounds pretty hard to believe.”

   “What!?” Chomper asked incredulously. “It’s all true! I’m not lying!”

   “I dunno. You seem too mature to need someone to look after you.”

   Chomper now turned red at his outburst. “Oh, uh, thank you. I didn’t mean to-”

   “Don’t worry about it,” the stranger roared gently. “I should have said that in a better way.”

   “May I ask you something?”

   “Sure.”

   “What’s your name?”

   “Oh, you’re right. It was rude of me to ask about you without introducing myself first. The name’s Dusk.”

   “Will you be my friend Dusk?” Chomper asked him.

   “No, I will not be your friend because it looks like I already am,” he replied with a grin.

   “Thanks,” was all that Chomper could think of to say.

   “Anytime.”

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