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Land Before Time Captions / Ruby and the tunnel
« on: August 17, 2010, 01:20:47 PM »
Ruby To Littlefoot: Hey littlefoot, I found the tunnel to the Decepticon's Underground HQ!

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Land Before Time Captions / Ali to Littlefoot Caption
« on: August 17, 2010, 03:23:19 AM »
Ali: I am realy your daughter from the future, the series got cancled.

Littlefoot: aw man!

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Land Before Time Captions / Ruby and the tunnel
« on: August 17, 2010, 02:54:42 AM »
Ruby: HELLO!!!!!!

Rubys Eco: HELLO!!!!!!

Ruby: hmmmm? OH YEAH!

Ruby sticks her head in.

*starts thumping her tail on a log for rythem*

Ruby and her Eco: "When The Night. Is Young. And The land is Dark. and the moon, is the only, light we see."

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Land Before Time Captions / Ali to Littlefoot Caption
« on: August 17, 2010, 02:22:32 AM »
Ali: Go See The Passion.

Littlefoot: Whaaaa....

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Land Before Time Captions / Ali Loves to Bite
« on: August 17, 2010, 02:12:13 AM »
in truth, this is how young dinosaurs choose their mates. This is how Grandma got Grandpa interested in her.

Ali: I call dibs on this longneck! *NOM!*

random Valley Dinosaur: DUDE! THATS YOUR COZEN!!!!!!

Ali: YOU THINK I GIVE A DAMN!!!!????

Littlefoot: OH NOES!!!! I IS PAIRED!!!!

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Land Before Time Captions / Grandpa & Grandma Longneck Caption
« on: August 17, 2010, 01:21:04 AM »
Grandpa: Back in MY day we didn't have these dang old new fangled gismos, like Compooters, or Cers. then I went to Vietnam, and I saw some things MAN I saw some Stuff MAN! and we didn't call the sun up there the sun, we called it 'The Real bright Circular thing in the sky!" and we used to take the Trolly for FIFTEEN Miles to the city. then we'd have to walk FIFTEEN Miles to the store. and walk FIFTEEN miles back to the Trolly station, and go FIFTEEN miles to go home.

Grandma: Dear, your rambling again. for Fifteen hours!

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Land Before Time Captions / Littlefoot and Ruby Caption
« on: August 17, 2010, 01:11:58 AM »
Ruby: Littlefoot, Look! I found the TransFormers Cube!

Littlefoot: MAN this is gonna be a fun night! my grandpa has an old Gran Torino we can Bring to life in Universal's Parking Lot!!!

heres another one...

Ruby: OMG! Its Its!!!! the keys to an old 1973 Volts Wagon!

Littlefoot: they don't even MAKE that car anymore!

Ruby: I know.

last one...

Littlefoot: OMG RUBY! You Stepped on The Tinysaurus's!!!! YOU KILLED EM!!!!!!!

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Land Before Time Captions / Angry Adults!
« on: August 17, 2010, 12:51:39 AM »
Grandma: Adults! Lets form Dinotron!!!!

*put Transformers Transformation noice here, and play it five times*

Dinotron SMASH!!!! Dinotron wants Vengiance, Dinotron wants Universal to Make more Movies!!!!

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Land Before Time Captions / Bron Pic
« on: August 16, 2010, 11:47:40 PM »
Bron: ROUND HOUSE KICK!!! HYAAAAAH!!!!

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LBT Fanart / Pangaea's LBT Artwork
« on: August 16, 2010, 10:41:28 PM »
Quote from: Pangaea,Aug 16 2010 on  08:16 PM
Thank you very much for the advice, DarkWolf. :) I'll have to learn to draw shapes and masses before I can work on focusing on them, though. :oops I do use references A LOT when I'm drawing (often multiple ones for any single picture). I haven't done a lot of life drawings, though, precisely because I don't know how to draw shapes that look three-dimensional. Also, an unfortunate thing about me is that I tend to see almost everything I do as a task; something I need to do and want to do well. :rolleyes I guess I'll have to learn to overcome my perfectionist instincts. It's exactly like I said about not being a very confident artist; for all of the compliments I get, my methods have many flaws, and my own skills and talents are actually very limited.

Quote from: TITANOSAUR,Aug 16 2010 on  08:16 PM
Dude! I love your art. your way better then I am. Lystrosaurus looks great.
Better than you? Oh please! :rolleyes: Even your ALIEN drawings from three years ago were more detailed than my pictures! You're WAY ahead of me in the shading and texture departments. (You're great at making SPORE critters, too. :yes)

Nevertheless, I'm flattered. Thank you. :)

Quote from: Rat_lady7,Aug 16 2010 on  08:48 PM
I saw this in your pb account. ^^ All of it.

This is way too awesome. Your attention of detail when it comes to dinosaurs really shows. :yes
Aw, you've already seen all of the artwork I've uploaded? Couldn't wait, eh? :p I hope you'll still comment and mention specific things you like, dislike, etc. about my drawings when I post them here. ;)

Anyway, thank you very much for the comment. :)
yeah, but I could never reproduce the style of the LBT movies without going extreme with Details (scales and Spikes etc).

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LBT Fanart / Pangaea's LBT Artwork
« on: August 16, 2010, 09:16:56 PM »
Dude! I love your art. your way better then I am. Lystrosaurus looks great.

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LBT Fanfiction / A New Charactor for a Fanfic
« on: August 16, 2010, 08:39:25 AM »
Quote from: Littlefoot1616,Aug 16 2010 on  06:06 AM
Wow! Now THAT is an impressive piece!  :o Loving the detail and scale of the beastie! I dunno about a "bite" of a Terrorsaurus Rex... I reckon a nibble would probably be the end of you!  :p  :lol Nice work Titanosaur! Very good! ;)
thanks Littlefoot1616. ya get the chance read my fanfic that features a charactor of this species.

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LBT Fanfiction / A New Charactor for a Fanfic
« on: August 16, 2010, 06:59:06 AM »
hate to double post, but I felt I should bump this topic because I now uploaded the sketch on Photobucket. so heres the pic...



Tornetar (the Antagonist from my fanfic 'The Bite of Tornetar') is a member of this species. so everytime I refer to a Terrorsaurus Rex in my fanfics I am refering to this sketch as well as the species itself.

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LBT Fanfiction / The Land Before Time: The Bite Of Tornetar!
« on: August 15, 2010, 06:09:58 AM »
Quote from: Campion1,Aug 15 2010 on  03:54 AM
Now that final fight was freaking epic. Grampa got the final strike. I wouldn't imagine him doing something like that, but I guess it makes sense for this guy in particular.

The things I could rack up against you is, Doc automatically joined them right after littlefoot asked. There was no disagreement or anything.  That and, after everything was said and done, everything went back to normal in just a few sentences. The kids started playing, doc left, and that was about it. There was no mention how grampa got over his wounds. Next thing I will mention is, the old one's group fight off the army in one sentence. This should have been epic, because fighting off an entire group of sharpteeth isn't a simple task. Final thing is typos, but that isn't worth killing over.

Overall, good story telling. You had them fight at an awesome location, and it wasn't pointless for grampa to head there.
well, I was trying to wrap it up. but I also felt the fight with Tornetar was the truely epic fight.

I do admit Doc kinda agreed to fight a lil too quick. but I again I was trying to finish the story and I also wanted to get to the final sequence asap.

before you worry, I do plan to make a version of this fanfic in a seemless story. so I might be able to tie up some loose ends with it.

and Grandpa healed, cuz if you remember, he did stop bleeding. (Grandpa must be a fast healer) so I figured it was obvious to everybody that his wound has healed. because it is set a week or so after that battle.

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LBT Fanfiction / The Land Before Time: The Bite Of Tornetar!
« on: August 15, 2010, 05:07:50 AM »
Quote from: Campion1,Aug 15 2010 on  03:04 AM
Well, in any case. I await part 3 *coughing even louder*
Man, you need to get that Caugh checked.

anyways. as promised heres Part 3!!!

THE LAND BEFORE TIME

The Bite Of Tornetar

Part 3

(Prologue)

Last Time On The Land Before Time. Decieving Chomper into moving a large boulder, Tornetar; a Giant Tyrannosaurid was released from a Cave that the Lone Dinosaur trapped him in many years ago. leading a great army of Sharpteeth and Fast Biters, and destroying a section of the Great Valley's wall. Tornetar waged a Bloody Battle against the inhabitance of The Great Valley. Spike heading back to his mom to help protect his family. Littlefoot, Cera, Ducky, and Petrie set out to find Doc and after finding Ali's Herd, they begin a Trek back to the Great Valley, believing to never being able to find Doc in time. Grandpa Longneck fight Tornetar after the Giant Dinosaur taunted and Antagonised him for killing Grandpa's Parents. Trying to bide Littlefoot and the others time, and weaken Tornetar. meanwhile, the young dinosaurs and Ali's Herd are hit by a dust storm. the storm ends and the dust settles to reveal Doc walking twards them. CAN Littlefoot and the others Persuad Doc into helping them and to kill Tornetar? Or will the Great Valley be destroyed, and the Great Valley dinosaurs loose their lives, allowing Tornetar to rule the land? Find out in this exciting conclusion of The Land Before Time; The Bite Of Tornetar!

(Feel The Bite!)

on the way back to The Great Valley, a Dust Storm hits the seven young Dinosaurs and the Longneck herd.

"Everyone stay close! this storm should last long!" The Old One commanded.

Ducky began to spit perfusely as dirt and dust kept getting in her mouth.

"Yuck! Dust is getting in my Mouth! It Is, It Is!" Ducky yelled.

the Young dinosaurs ran under the Old One to be shielded from the dust storm. the dust storm settled and standing infront of them was Doc himself. Littlefoot was relieved to finaly find him. Doc looked down upon Littlefoot and smilled.

"Hello Kid. Hows it going?" Doc asked Littlefoot.

Littlefoot shook his head, "Bad, Theres a Giant Sharptooth in the Great Valley, along with houndreds more Sharpteeth. we need your help." Littlefoot replied.

Doc nodded and off they went, with a formable army, Littlefoot believed they had a chance, so long as they believed.

Meanwhile. Grandpa and Tornetar continued their battle. Grandpa though old had the upperhand. using his tail to trip Tornetar, Grandpa then raised his tail up there it stayed for a couple seconds. when Tornetar tried to get back up, Grandpa Slammed his tail back down upon the Tyrannosaur. "WHAM!!!" The Giant Tyrannosaur realised he needed to find a point of wich to attack before he gets hit again. Grandpa got up on his hind legs again, preparing to crush Tornetar with his front legs. Tornetar took the chance like a strike by a Viper, Tornetar lunged and bit Grandpa Longneck's left rear knee. unable to bare the pain Grandpa collapsed. Tornetar got to his feet. still woozy, he shook his head to get himself corrected. he looked at Grandpa longneck and Smiled. blood ran off of his teeth, both Grandpa's and his own from when Tosk broke one of his teeth. Tornetar began to advance twards the old longneck, although hurt, Granpa wasn't out yet.

Grandpa once again used his tail, swinging and slamming his tail on Tornetar's ankle "CRACK!" the giant tyrannosaur fell to the ground once more. Grandpa got up, he lemped twards the Valcano. Tornetar got up, but when he stood on his ankle he felt great pain, dispite his age, Grandpa's strong tail was able to sprain the Tyrannosaurid's ankle. he began to lemp as well. giving a slow yet antagonising chance to the old longneck.

"You can't run forever Longneck!" Tornetar yelled. "when I catch you... I'll Kill You!" the wounded Tyrannosaur yelled while Panting in a heavily manner.

Grandpa looked back.

"We'll see about that Tornetar!" Grandpa responded. "I've been in worser wear then this, and its still not gonna stop me!" Grandpa said, angering the Tyrannosaur even more.

the two continued on. Tornetar however began to tire. his ankle was hurting so bad he could barely stand it. Grandpa wasn't feeling any better either. his knee had stopped bleeding, but was verry tender. every bend of his knee hurt so bad, he was considering tearing off his own leg. Grandpa chuckled a bit of the idea, unknown if it was shock or if he wanted something to share he desided to share another word with his enemy.

"Heh, you know Tornetar? we might have it easier for us both if we just tor off our legs." Grandpa joked.

Tornetar, dispite hatting the old longneck chuckled as well.

"Yeah Maybe!" Tornetar replied.

the dinosaurs however, still continued the chase. the ground began to turn black and chared the land began to show the red vains of Magma bleeding from the earth. Grandpa just continued. he needed more time to gather his strength.

Meanwhile in the valley Littlefoot, Cera, Petrie, Ducky, and the herd of Longnecks finaly arrived. Doc looked around, his hard eyes couldn't believe the carnage.

"Wow kid. this is even worse then I thought." Doc said.

they looked around, they the young dinosaurs found the place where the adults fought Tornetar, the ground was turned to rubble. they found their parents alive and began to help out. meanwhile Ali's herd of Longnecks, led by The Old One, Fought the other sharpteeth and Fast Biters off. Littlefoot went looking around for his grandpa when he found a pile of rocks. worried it was his Grandpa, he began to dig. when the rocks came alive. but instead of his grandpa, Tosk arose from the Debres. he looked at littlefoot and smiled...

"Hey, Littlefoot. Ah man, I got a headach!" Tosk said with a rasp in his voice.

Littlefoot smilled for a bit glad to see a not everybody is dead.

"Hey Tosk, wheres my Grandpa? is he ok?" Littlefoot asked.

Tosk looked twards the Valcano. "Ofcourse!" he said to himself. "Littlefoot, your Grandpa is fighting Tornetar. while trying my best to get out. I saw him go twards the smoking Mountains." the Ankylosaur said to the young dinosaur.

Littlefoot looked twards the Valcano and began to worry.

"Then thats where I'm going." Littlefoot said to the Ankylosaur.

Tosk began to walk out of the rubble, he then recalculated his plan.

"If your going, then I have a plan you can tell your grandpa about." Tosk said to littlefoot.

Meanwhile, Grandpa walked around a large rock. he sat down for a break, he looked back and Tornetar was still after him. luckily, the Giant Sharptooth was so big and heavy, he was lagging behind due to the steapness of the mountain. Grandpa took the time to rest. he then looked at some large boulders and came up with a plan to help slow the Giant down even more, and to give him more time.

Tornetar kept limping. looking up he seemed to loose sight of the old longneck. confused he kept going.

"Whered he go?" The tyrannosaur said to himself. "maybe he desided to hide from me?" Tornetar thought.

Then a large boulder came rolling twards him. the boulder hit him so hard he began to roll back down the moutain. enraged he let out a loud roar.

"COWARD! Come out and face me!" Tornetar yelled to the sky.

then more boulders came rolling down the hill. the Evil Carnivore tried to run but his hurt ankle wouldn't allow it. the boulders hit him one by one till all of them hit him at once. the Carnivore layed there, not moving, but still breathing. Grandpa looked on the fallen Giant. he then sat to rest for a moment. keeping an eye on the fallen enemy. but only 30 seconds went by before Tornetar began to move once more. Grandpa sighed with frustration.

"Why don't Sharpteeth learn to stay down!?" Grandpa said to himself.

the longneck felt a little better. but was still tired. however he felt he could go on.

Tornetar got to his feet. he looked to see Grandpa continueing upward. Tornetar said nothing. the hate in his eyes where enough to tell he was angry. he continued upward, yet again giving chase. the chase was still slow. none of the two dinosaurs where able enough to run up the mountain. though their enjuries wheren't as bad as before, the mountain's steapness made it hurt the same.

minutes later Grandpa longneck finaly made it to the top of the valcano, he looked down to see the Valcano was still active. and looked as though it was ready to blow. the ground began to shake violently. Grandpa walked to find another way down. he then saw a good safe rout. but then Tornetar came around the corner of a large rock intending to bite down on Grandpa's neck. luckily the old Longneck ducked in time. Tornetar Roared so loud it drowned out the Valcano's own rumbling. Tornetar's mouth was salvating, his drool was mixed with blood. his eyes where white while the ring around his cornea and puples glowed red. the red glow of the Valcano's Magma eluminated the sky as well as the two dinosaurs. the black smoke ecuminated the air. the ground shook again and again.

"Now, Longneck. you will join your parents in Oblivion!" Tornetar said to Grandpa.

Grandpa grinned angerly. Tornetar began to run twards Grandpa Longneck, his mouth Opened, preparing to rip the old longneck's head off. Grandpa closed his eyes to accept his fate. he then heard a loud boom, and a loud screetch. he looked to see Tornetar laying on the ground. he looked to his left to see Doc, Littlefoot, Ali, and the rest of the children by his side.

"Remember the plan guys!" Littlefoot said.

Tornetar got up to his feet. roaring ferously. he then looked twards doc and was awstruck. he couldn't believe who he was looking at. when he finaly broke his silence with one sentence.

"Its... The Lone Dinosaur!" Tornetar wispered to himself.

The seven dinosaurs began hitting rocks with their tails. hoping to distract Tornetar. it worked when one of the rocks hit Tornetar's soar ankle. he roared in pain then tried to strike at Littlefoot and the others. but both Grandpa and Doc struck Tornetar with their tails. knocking the giant Tyrannosaur to the edge of the Valcano's mouth. Tornetar's weight caused the rockey ledge to crumble. but Tornetar got up and ran twards Littlefoot. but Grandpa, using his tail to scoop the little longneck up in time saved Littlefoot from Tornetar just when his jaws where over Littlefoot's head. Tornetar instead felt the tast of ash and rock. spitting out the disgusting debres Tornetar roared. Doc then began to pummel the Giant Sharptoothed dinosaur twards the edge of the Valcano's mouth. each hit took Tornetar back a few feet. Doc then hit Tornetar on the head a few times with his front feet. rearing up and clobbering the Terrorsaurus's head several times. till finaly only one more stike was needed. Doc then looked twards Grandpa.

"Care to finish this once and for all friend?" Doc asked Grandpa.

Grandpa nodded. "Don't mind if I do." Grandpa replied.

Grandpa Longneck reared back. not caring about his hurt knee. and with a mighty shove, Grandpa pushed Tornetar hard. the Giant Tyrannosaur slipped off the ledge of the Valcano, trying desperately to regain footing, grandpa once again swept his tail hitting the Giant in the face. Tornetar fell into the Valcano, letting out a loud, horrific scream. the Sharptooth fell into the molten lava. he screamed again till he was engulfed in fire and lava.

the ground began to shack again. all the dinosaurs ran back to the Great Valley as the Valcano eroupted. the lava spilled everywhere. the dinosaurs, using large boulders closed off the valley from the Molten lava. the lava covered the boulders and was diverded away.

the Dinosaurs where quickly reunited with their familys. Spike returned with his siblings and with his, and Ducky's mother completely safe. Tosk looked at the now closed off break in the Valley wall, then looked twards the other dinosaurs.

"The burning rocks will soon cool down. and the hole in the Great walls will be fixed. as the rocks underneath would be packed in. we won't have to worry about sharpteeth again." Tosk said.

weeks later, after the Walls where finaly fixed, and cleanup had finaly neared completion Littlefoot, His Grandma, and Grandpa ate in peace.

"Gee, I sure am glad we don't have to worry about Tornetar anymore." Littlefoot said.

"Me too dear. that horrible Sharptooth shall hurt no one anymore and forever." Grandma replied. "Right Grandpa?" She asked.

Grandpa looked twards the smoking moutains.

"I don't know Grandma. in this world. is anything ever forever?" Grandpa replied.

Littlefoot, Cera, Petrie, Ducky, Ruby, Chomper, and Spike run off to play. the day went on so well. a celebration started later in the evening.

Doc soon went off again. and Ali, her mom, and their respective herds left the Great Valley. the Valley was once again safe.

Meanwhile in the Valcano, the black smoke finaly died down. the Molten Lava was cooled down and was black and hard. the ground was petruded to reveal a Large burnt skeleton layed in the ash. the skeleton of Tornetar steamed from the heat. and a ghostly voice sounded yet again.

"I shall Rise.... Again!!!!" said the voice.

(The End)

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LBT Fanart / Littlefoot and Ali on Spore!
« on: August 15, 2010, 12:57:44 AM »
yeah, I forgot you only downloaded them. but they are still good.

when I made Littlefoot I had to work with my own memory. then I just changed the color to some variaties of Pink and Purple for Ali. I think I made her look more like her TV show Counterpart then her Movie version however. but its enough to allow one to recognise her.

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LBT Fanart / Littlefoot and Ali on Spore!
« on: August 14, 2010, 11:04:55 PM »
Quote from: Nick22,Aug 14 2010 on  10:32 AM
Not bad, though ali's eyes are blue...
Thanks Nick22.

Ali got blue eyes blue eyes because when you choose the coat (or detail) color, the eyes will have the same color you choose. sence I choose pink/purple for Ali it desided to make it blue.

kinda wish Maxis allowed the user to choose the eye color too. I could have some wicked fun with it as well.

Ruby looks great there Vek!

I may try to make Petrie and Ducky sometime. but I doubt they'll look show accurate. and believe me guys. I tried to make Littlefoot and Ali show accurate, but as great as spore is. it has its limits with what you can do with it.

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LBT Fanart / Littlefoot and Ali on Spore!
« on: August 14, 2010, 09:29:22 AM »
Hey guys. if anybody here is familar with SPORE, then they know what the game is like. basicly, you choose a planet, name it. and begin the live of a small Microb Cell. you begin to grow that cell from a tiny underdog of the primorial ooz, to a Space farring species of great technological sophystication.

Anyways. one of the well know aspects of Spore is its ability to create your own creature then share it.

in this instance, I desided to have a go at creating our lovable duo. Ali and Littlefoot.

Littlefoot was created first. Ali simply uses Littlefoot's model as I simply repainted it to look like Ali.

anyways heres the pic.



tell me what you guys think? enjoy.

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LBT Fanfiction / The Land Before Time: The Bite Of Tornetar!
« on: August 13, 2010, 11:41:51 AM »
Quote from: Campion1,Aug 13 2010 on  08:32 AM
I do know what that feels like, but some stories are meant to be told as they are by the author, not always as the reader sees it. If you can make the character's actions seem reasonable to the reader, then you can go a long way. Being a fan of topsy, I would have immediately left this fanfic, just because I love him as a char. I do feel in a small way that fans should at least respect the characters that they are using. In what I want to write, I make pterano out to be suicidal. However, he will overcome it in some way, making him stronger. That's the kind of "respect" I'm talking about, even through exercising your right to do what you want with the characters.
Exactly. I don't like just going out to kill off charactors or put them in horrible situations just to torture them. I love these charactors. when I feel I need a death in the story, I'll use an Expendable charactor(s) I came up with (E.G. Original Charactors).

before I say anymore, I am not saying wether or not any of the charactors in the Movies or TV series will die, I am mearly stating a point.

The Path of creativity starts with an open mind. thats one of the ideas I believe and stand by when drawing or writing a fanfic. and I am glad Topsy was replaced because at the time I was thinking up the story, I never liked the idea of Burying a beloved charactor such as Topsy, or anyone for that matter at all. I can only thank my Lady-friend for coming up with the Ankylosaur Brothers to help me out. cuz I still wanted a scene of a dinosaur being burried, but not such a well known and beloved charactor. Tosk being Burried alive still had the impact I wanted in the story, while also avoiding loosing some readers had it been Topsy or any other established charactor from the series. for one, its not a smart move, and another thing. it could very well get me banned and hated upon by the members of this site.

but thankfully I avoided that problem, and Topsy is still alive for part 3. I also thank thoughs who applauds me for giving Grandpa Longneck a great amount of respect. I always figured Grandpa had a long history, and him being so old allows for intepretation as well as and most importantly alot of freedom to work with. he (like Topsy) is a great charactor. and I always like to try and while staying true to the charactor as much as I can, give him more depth. I also try not to make him into a badguy or anything. in Part 2, he gets reasonably angry and rightfully charges Tornetar. he isn't attacking with no reason. Tornetar killed his parents and Antagonised him about it. and he is a threat to Grandpa's friends and family. he is also trying to weaken Tornetar to make him easier to beat for Doc. I'm not trying to make Grandpa just attack like a wild phyco. he is rightfully angry. and hes trying to protect the ones that he loves. I think its what Grandpa Longneck would do if this was an actual movie or an episode of the TV series. I just want people to understand that.

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LBT Fanfiction / The Land Before Time: The Bite Of Tornetar!
« on: August 13, 2010, 09:25:21 AM »
Hey thanks your enjoying the fic there Campion1. Grandpa has always been a kind of guy who looks old, and seems week, but if you get him mad enough he'll open a Can-of-Woop-Ass on ya. especialy if he has the motivation enough. in this case, he is angry and is trying to help save the Valley. I try to make him look good.

Topsy was originaly supposed to be burried alive, but I felt that might not work so good storywise because one is cause it'll be like the Death Of Optimus Prime of 86, and I don't want any of the members on this sight or DA to lock themselfs in there bathrooms for a week over it. also my ladyfriend came up with these two Ankylosaurs she wanted me to put in. so instead of Topsy, Tosk was burried alive.

I know this isn't looking good for me. but I don't want to give out any infomation about part 3 just to ease the minds of somebody on the site. one reason is that it'll ruin the story for them and second of all, I'd see it as bad storytelling. if they REALY need to know anything about part 3 or what happened to the charactors in part 2, they can either IM me OR they can simply wait till part 3 is finished and posted. I just hate giving out spoilers.

anyways, I hope you all enjoy this. I am having a good time writing it, and its giving me some ideas about some new sketchs. it also gives me something to look forward to when I come to this forum, to see how this Fanfic is reaching people. I honestly do hope they are enjoying it. I know my writing skills aren't of that of a Novelist, or of that of a poet. I just hope everybody is enjoying it. and hopefully is being inspired by it. I am not making this a "YEAH! I want to make a blood-bath fic! I want to kill everybody off!" not at all. I love these charactors. I admit I got radical ideas. but this fanfic is not about killing, its not about fighting. I'm just trying to tell a story. I don't plan to kill off any of your favorite charactors, I just want to share my work is all. some people will look at my stuff and think I am wierd and only like violence. but they have no idea how long it took for me to think up this stuff, writing it, making the scenes work so well you can see it unfolding in your mind.

I do have good intentions with this fic, I honestly do. its just that, I get looked at with cautious eyes because my ideas are so radical. but I like to be radical sometimes. its one of the things that makes a person a good artist. you have to dare, you have to be radical sometimes.

uh, sorry for my rambling. anyways Part 3 coming soon.

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