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Land Before Time Captions / Ruby and the tunnel
« on: August 17, 2010, 01:20:47 PM »
Ruby To Littlefoot: Hey littlefoot, I found the tunnel to the Decepticon's Underground HQ!
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Thank you very much for the advice, DarkWolf. I'll have to learn to draw shapes and masses before I can work on focusing on them, though. I do use references A LOT when I'm drawing (often multiple ones for any single picture). I haven't done a lot of life drawings, though, precisely because I don't know how to draw shapes that look three-dimensional. Also, an unfortunate thing about me is that I tend to see almost everything I do as a task; something I need to do and want to do well. I guess I'll have to learn to overcome my perfectionist instincts. It's exactly like I said about not being a very confident artist; for all of the compliments I get, my methods have many flaws, and my own skills and talents are actually very limited.yeah, but I could never reproduce the style of the LBT movies without going extreme with Details (scales and Spikes etc).Quote from: TITANOSAUR,Aug 16 2010 on 08:16 PMDude! I love your art. your way better then I am. Lystrosaurus looks great.Better than you? Oh please! : Even your ALIEN drawings from three years ago were more detailed than my pictures! You're WAY ahead of me in the shading and texture departments. (You're great at making SPORE critters, too. )
Nevertheless, I'm flattered. Thank you.Quote from: Rat_lady7,Aug 16 2010 on 08:48 PMI saw this in your pb account. ^^ All of it.Aw, you've already seen all of the artwork I've uploaded? Couldn't wait, eh? I hope you'll still comment and mention specific things you like, dislike, etc. about my drawings when I post them here.
This is way too awesome. Your attention of detail when it comes to dinosaurs really shows.
Anyway, thank you very much for the comment.
Wow! Now THAT is an impressive piece! Loving the detail and scale of the beastie! I dunno about a "bite" of a Terrorsaurus Rex... I reckon a nibble would probably be the end of you! Nice work Titanosaur! Very good!thanks Littlefoot1616. ya get the chance read my fanfic that features a charactor of this species.
Now that final fight was freaking epic. Grampa got the final strike. I wouldn't imagine him doing something like that, but I guess it makes sense for this guy in particular.well, I was trying to wrap it up. but I also felt the fight with Tornetar was the truely epic fight.
The things I could rack up against you is, Doc automatically joined them right after littlefoot asked. There was no disagreement or anything. That and, after everything was said and done, everything went back to normal in just a few sentences. The kids started playing, doc left, and that was about it. There was no mention how grampa got over his wounds. Next thing I will mention is, the old one's group fight off the army in one sentence. This should have been epic, because fighting off an entire group of sharpteeth isn't a simple task. Final thing is typos, but that isn't worth killing over.
Overall, good story telling. You had them fight at an awesome location, and it wasn't pointless for grampa to head there.
Well, in any case. I await part 3 *coughing even louder*Man, you need to get that Caugh checked.
Not bad, though ali's eyes are blue...Thanks Nick22.
I do know what that feels like, but some stories are meant to be told as they are by the author, not always as the reader sees it. If you can make the character's actions seem reasonable to the reader, then you can go a long way. Being a fan of topsy, I would have immediately left this fanfic, just because I love him as a char. I do feel in a small way that fans should at least respect the characters that they are using. In what I want to write, I make pterano out to be suicidal. However, he will overcome it in some way, making him stronger. That's the kind of "respect" I'm talking about, even through exercising your right to do what you want with the characters.Exactly. I don't like just going out to kill off charactors or put them in horrible situations just to torture them. I love these charactors. when I feel I need a death in the story, I'll use an Expendable charactor(s) I came up with (E.G. Original Charactors).