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Role Play Discussion / Turn based Space Empires game
« on: January 20, 2013, 02:17:38 AM »
No, it was an idea I got when I was playing Spore, though it is a creepy coincidence that there was a game with a similar title and style.  :huh:  :confused

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Role Play Discussion / Turn based Space Empires game
« on: January 20, 2013, 01:38:41 AM »
This is an idea I had based on the turn based strategy RP. Only this involves space empires. It functions similarly, with focus on building colonies, currency collection, and war.

The different parts are infrastructure, war, and colonies.

Colonies are the lifeblood of a player's empire, as they provide the man power, resources, and money to keep an empire going. You can build these in game(see list of units)

War is achieved in two modes, ground and space, ground is reminiscent of world war 2 while space is like Star Wars.

Infrastructure are specialized parts of colonies that include mining, industry, and agriculture. These can be built in game.

A player's military relies on resource and currency, and are, like war, in two categories.

Diplomacy takes place when a player approaches another player with one of these, Non-aggression pacts, declaration of war, offer of alliance, or a peace treaty. The player who receives these gets to decide whether to accept them, with the exception of a declaration of war.

Currency is gained by mining, industry, or colonies. Each colony gives the player 1,000 currency units each 2 turns. This is increased to 1,500 if a planet has a mining facility.

Shipyards and factories produce arms and supplies for militaries, and are a vital part of the players industry.
List of units

Colonial

Colony, 10,000
Mining facility, 1,000
Shipyard, 5,000
Factory, 1,000

Army

Heavy Vehicle company, 600$, a powerful vehicle that is good in all roles, examples include a Tiger Tank or the AT-AT walker from starr wars.

Medium Vehicle company, 400$, A medium vehicle that is a good vehicle destroyer, an example would be a Panzer Mark IV tank.

Light Vehicle company, 200$, A weak vehicle that is anti infantry, an AT-ST Walker or a Panzer Mark II.

Soldier Division, 50$, 10,000 soldiers each. Good against eachother.

Artillery gun, 100$, A weapon that is stationary and is strong against all.

Starfleet

Mothership/ Flagship, Warship,

Capital Ship, Warship

Frigate, 600$, Anti corvette, Warship

Corvette, 300$, Anti Interceptors and Bombers.

Interceptor, 50$, Designed to dogfight.

Bomber, 100$, Designed to defeat Frigates and Capital ships

Astronomy

Blue Planet, Planet that supports life, can harbor great colonies. Like Earth.

Desert Planet, An arid, lifeless planet, like Mars.

Ice Planet, A cold, lifeless planet, like Pluto or Hoth.

Volcanic Planet, A planet that is covered in volcanoes and lava, like Mustafar.

Gas Giant, A giant planet that is gas, like Jupiter or Saturn.

Asteroid field, A cluster of asteroids close together.

Red Dwarf, A small, relatively cool star.

Main Sequence, a normal star, like our sun.

Blue Giant, a large, hot star, like Betelgeuse.

Red Giant, A giant, dying star

Nebula, an area filled with gas where stars form

Blackhole, An area of space where anything that comes to close is sucked in by the blackhole's gravity.

This is the main list of units and locations. You can describe or use an object from a sci fi movie here and can also create your own race aswell as name your homeworld. Tell me if you want to play.

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General Land Before Time / Particular sequel the series went downhill with?
« on: December 29, 2012, 11:40:05 PM »
After 10 in my opinion, as it was the last decent sequel, and it had an amazing action sequence towards the end, though after that, the ship was struck with a torpedo in 11, listed in 12, and sunk in 13.

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LBT Fanfiction / Land Before Time Crossover
« on: December 16, 2012, 12:03:41 AM »
Prologue

All was quiet. No sound. The darkened landscape serene, peaceful. Or was it really like this. Suddenly, there was a massive stomping that could be heard. The little light the moon provided revealed a massive T-rex.

50 feet long, 20 feet tall, 7 tons of killer dinosaur. The huge monster's white teeth gleamed like swords in the moonlight. His red eyes burning through the darkness. His dark blue skin and white underbelly were exaggerated by the moonlight, making him look black and grey.

The carnivore turned his head as he heard more stomping. A much smaller tyrannosaur walked up behind him. It was a female. She was only 36 feet long and 13 feet tall, much smaller then the large male beside her.

Normally, a tyrannosaur this small would never approach another one that was far bigger. But this was an exception. This female was his mate. Unlike the male, the female had light green skin, and soft, kind baby blue eyes.

It was a wonder two sharpteeth so different in appearance and size would become mates. But then again Chomper, the male, was not normal. Neither was his mate, Tyranna. Infact, she was still a hatchling when he found her as a pre-teen.

He was only the size of a fast-biter at that time, but still, he pitied the hatchling, she was an orphan, abandoned, left for dead. He took her under his wing, and by the time she was a young adult, he was over 30 feet long, while she just 20.

However, this actually was an advantage. Tyranna was very fast, and often chased prey towards Chomper, who would lunge out and overpower the prey, this was something they used to deadly effect.

Unfortunatley, Tyranna couldn't join him on hunts anymore, because she was heavily pregnant, and could not risk the eggs. This somewhat lowered their success rate, but still, Chomper found enough food to feed both, and soon, they would have to feed their hatchlings.

Their territory was roughly 40 miles from the Great Valley, and in a fertile, lush floodplain, with a forest to the east, and a mountain range to the north.

This was the perfect place for there home. But would it stay like this?

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History Section / Need facts for alternate history
« on: December 08, 2012, 05:57:30 PM »
I want to make the most realistic Civil War Confederate Victory, and need facts to do it, so could people here give me these facts:

What would the new map of America look like?
What would be the sides in World War I and II, I.E America on the axis? powers or Confederacy with Germany?
What would happen to the U.S.?
What would the cold war era look like with a southern victor?
What would have become of the south in the long run?

Just need some of these facts for a very realistic scenario on a southern victory.

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LBT Fanfiction / Destiny
« on: December 05, 2012, 01:25:09 AM »
Prologue

A strange noise came in the dead of night. 7 young dinosaurs were telling stories when they heard it. One, a young female Triceratops, was confused. "What was that?" She asked. "I don't know Cera, but maybe we should see what it is." A young Apatosaurus replied to the Triceratops, now identified as Cera.

"But what if thing that make strange noise dangerous?" A small flyer asked fearfully. "If it is, then we could all be in danger, we should warn the grown ups if we see what it is." A young T-rex replied. "Chomper's right, Petrie, we need to find out what it is so we can see if its dangerous, as it could be dangerous." A female Oviraptor replied to the Pteranodon, identified as Petrie.

"I do not like this idea, nope, nope, nope." A Saurolophus named Ducky chimed in. The Apatosaurus, named Littlefoot, shrugged. "Alright, if you don't want to come, then you can go home, those who want to come, follow me." Littlefoot announced.

Ducky, Petrie, a young Stegosaurus named Spike, and Ruby went home, while Chomper, Cera, and Littlefoot went off to find whatever made the noise. As they looked for the source, they saw something shiny out of the corner of their eyes.

"Hey what's that?" Chomper asked, his sharp eyesight picking up the object. "I don't know, it looks like a stick, but its shiny." Cera commented. "Its not moving, it must be a stick." Littlefoot said as they approached.

When they came closer, the stick was much more intricate then any they saw before. It was silver, but had black stripes on the bottom, a golden stripe around the middle with a rectangular cube sticking out, a series of black stripes towards the top, and a golden top that looked like it was cut down the middle.

Chomper walked up and saw that the top had a hole. Raising his eyebrow, he picked the stick up and saw something that looked loose, like a red rock in the middle.

Curiosly, he pushed it, and the reaction was shocking. From the hole a brilliant blue blade of light illuminated the tranquil valley and everyone leapt back in surprise. "What the?" Littlefoot asked, shocked.

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LBT Fanfiction / Shattered Friendship
« on: December 02, 2012, 12:52:04 AM »
Prologue

Chomper stomped around the small valley, brooding on his next move. It had been 5 years since that incident and 10 since he left the valley. But the incident still lay burned into his memory, and no matter what he tried, he could not get rid of it.

Of course, if you lose your family, then it never does leave. His mate, Alberta, had been guarding their nest while he hunted for prey. But suddenly, he had heard that roar, that cry for help that hatchling's used when in danger, or adults when they needed their mate.

He had rushed to them, but he was to late. Alberta lay in a pool of blood and their eggs were crushed, he even saw one tiny hatchling laying on the ground, skewered by a threehorn. Something snapped that day. All the love of flatteeth, all the need to defend them, all the feeling of belonging with them, was destroyed that day.

Chomper even completely forsaken his own name, and had renamed himself Silverclaw, and gave himself a scar on his eye that caused that eye to go completely red, he made himself unrecognizable.

He then searched for followers, and he got them alright. But before he did, he made sure to carve out his name among sharpteeth and flatteeth alike. He patrolled the mysterious beyond, and anytime he came across another animal, he killed it.

However when it came to packs, he often let one go so they could spread the news, and spread it did. Within a year his name was feared, and nobody who stood up to him lived.

He also began calling for followers, and they came. They were a mixed bunch, both in species and goal. Some were weak seeking protection, ambitious seeking glory, and thuggish seeking more refined forms of cruelty.

He eventually had 25 in his pack, aswell as their families. He also used them to spread his name, he would tell them to find certain dinosaur herds and then he would attack them.

They wiped out Tippy's herd, leaving no survivors. They nearly massacred Ali's herd. They slaughtered dozens of farwalker herds. And in all this bloody terror, he left the Great Valley untouched, he allowed no leaf eaters to get there, and soon, many saw it as to dangerous to go to, even if the valley itself was safe, the area outside was a graveyard.

In the end, even Redclaw came to fear him. Chomper, or as we should call him, Silverclaw, took wicked pleasure in this, and soon took it upon himself to personally kill the once famed sharptooth.

Screech and Thud abandoned Redclaw after that and joined his pack, and eventually entered his inner circle. These 5 were given permission to command other members of the pack ore make decisions, though Silverclaw could always veto any of them.

But as this reign of terror continued, Silverclaw loosened his iron grip on the Dinosaur world, and allowed one herd to get through. That is where our story begins...

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1988 Theatrical Release / I Will Chase Them!
« on: November 24, 2012, 04:26:27 PM »
I personally see it as revenge. Sharptooth just started out hunting for food, but when the thorn in the eye incident occured, he wanted revenge. Evidence, Chomper is proof that sharpteeth have more personality then leaf eaters think, and as Redclaw is actively seeking revenge against the gang, Sharptooth probably is too. If someone stuck me in the eye with a thorn, I would want revenge, so there's no reason it couldn't be revenge.

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LBT Fanfiction / Ascending Evil
« on: November 23, 2012, 04:27:54 PM »
Chapter 2, Darkclaw

Chomper struggled against the raptors, but couldn't get up, there were too many and he was to small, but he stopped when he saw the black colored spinosaur stalking towards him.

The raptors stopped to. One stepped off and bowed. "He is subdued my lord." The raptor stated. "Excellent Nychus." Darkclaw replied. The raptor, now identified as Nychus beamed for a little bit and stood beside the Spinosaurus.

"Am I correct in the assumption that this adolescent is Chomper?" Darkclaw asked. "Yes," Chomper said quietly, not looking into the killer's burning red eyes. "Well this is quite lucky isn't it, the second casualty of this war is the traitor to his kind." Darkclaw announced, the sharpteeth and raptors laughed because of this.

Darkclaw didn't join in but moved his head to just above Chomper's. "So you decided to come to stop me to save your friends? How flattooth." Darkclaw sneeed, his army laughed again. Chomper bared his teeth but he could do nothing else.

"Oh now I remember, you also came here to avenge your grandparents?" Darkclaw asked, smirking. "Yes, you'll pay for what you did!" Chomper growled.

Darkclaw let out a chuckle of amusement. "You think you can fight me? Very well." Darkclaw sneered. "Let him go!" Darkclaw said to the raptors, they obliged.

"You must have some experience, now take your best shot." Darkclaw said. Chomper lunged forward, only to get slapped back to the ground by Darkclaw's tail. "Oh well done! I'm sure your parents would be proud, especially your filthy mother." Darkclaw said sarcastically.

Chomper lunged again but was gain knocked to the ground. "I'm going to kill you Chomper, I am going to destroy you." Darkclaw paused. "After tonight, no one will ever again question me, if they speak of you, they will only speak of how you begged for death, and, a merciful lord, obliged."

"Get up!" He ordered and Chomper was somehow forced to get up. Darkclaw turned around for a second. Chomper tried to flee, but Darkclaw slammed a rock at him knocking him down. "Don't you turn your back on me Chomper! I want you to look at me when I kill you! I want to see the light leave your eyes!" Chomper had enough, he wasn't going to run, he would fight, even though he was certain to lose.

He got up and walked towards the spinosaurus. "Have it your way." He charged at the sharptooth and they collided. Darkclaw attempted to knock him down but he dodged and rammed into him.

Darkclaww raised his claws and slashed Chomper's face. "Do nothing, he's mine!" Darkclaw screamed. Chomper attacked again and Darkclaw attempted another tail swipe.

Chomper however bit down. Darkclaw screwed his face in pain but didn't scream, and lunged. He grabbed Chomper by the neck, and began the neck crushing bite he had used so often.

But then a small, flattooth flyer slammed into the sharptooth knocking him away from Chomper. "Leave him alone!" Petrie commanded. Darkclaw simply charged at the flyer, Chomper taking the opportunity, ran for dear life. For a few minutes Petrie distracted the enraged sharptooth.

Chomper was far out of reach by the time Petrie returned, but he was hurt. Chomper limped slowly back to the valley, Petrie following him.

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LBT Fanfiction / Ascending Evil
« on: November 23, 2012, 03:46:58 PM »
Chapter 1, Looming War

Littlefoot just arrived at the rock circle. Today was an exceedingly important meeting so all of the valley inhabitants were told to come. Even the children. Still, Littlefoot was glad that he was now an adult, and so was the gang, now they didn't have to run on any adventures, they could simply fight off any threats.

Chomper had found a way to survive in the valley into adulthood, by eating fish. (A/N: I believe that if a spinosaur could survive off fish, being bigger then T-rex, then Chomper could to) This had allowed him to stay with his friends, which made them all happy, as they could be together.

Ruby and her family moved in when Ruby was a teenager and they had settled in well with the rest of the group, though, like Chomper, they were sometimes distrusted due to the fact that some of their kind ate eggs, though they didn't.

Almost all of them had also found mates; Littlefoot and Ali eventually told eachother that they loved eachother and became mates. Cera had found a young male threehorn named Tri who shared her personality. Ducky had met a swimmer named Para who was a little bit more down to earth but still a little like Ducky. Petrie had run into a flyer named Tera when they found her unconscious near the great wall, she was alot like Petrie, and taught him proper grammar skills.

Ruby had met a male Fast Runner named Emerald when he saved her from a fast biter, she brought him to the Great Valley and became mates with him. Chomper and Spike were the only ones who hadn't found mates yet, Spike didn't seem interested in starting a family and Chomper wanted a mate but couldn't find one for obvious reasons.

All of them were there, and they saw two dome heads standing in the middle, conversing with Grandpa Longneck. Littlefoot had a good look at his face, and he would do a double take if he could. Grandpa had fear in his eyes, genuine fear. Littlefoot hadn't seen that since his mother died.

Grandpa nodded and turned to the crowd. They fell silent upon seeing his face. "Everyone, it has come to our attention that, as horrible as it seems, he is back."

Whispered conversations among the adults filled the air. "Who is he?" Asked Mrs. Maia, looking afraid to ask. Grandpa lowered his head, and said. "Darkclaw." That word caused an atmosphere of absolute panic and anxiety.

All around the adults began running in circles, screaming, acting like a bunch of hatchlings cornered by a sharptooth. "Silence!" Mr. Threehorn roared, they fell silent, "where is the proof of this?" He snapped at the domeheads.

The larger of the two stepped up, "he attacked our herd weeks ago, he killed all of them but us, he told us to let you know that he was coming." She said.

"You call that proof? It sounds like a bunch of fear-mongering, he can't be back!" Topsy sneered. The other one, obviously younger, stepped forward. "You call 20 dead domeheads fear mongering." He snarled.

"He's not back!" Threehorn growled. Suddenly there was a flapping sound and a very scared looking Pterano came fluttering down. "They're not lying, he is back!" Pterano cried.

Everyone seemed taken aback by this, if three leaf eaters who didn't know eachother said the same thing, could it be true, but, on the other claw, he was notorious for lying in the past, but the look on his face said it was true.

"Ba! This means nothing, Darkclaw is dead!" Threehorn growled. The domeheads were getting frustrated. However, before either of them stepped forward, Chomper walked in.

The domeheads noticed him for the first time and let out a growl of distrust. "What is he doing here?" The older one asked. "Yeah, he's probably a spy for Darklaw." Chomper's eyes narrowed to slits at those words. "How dare you! I would never hurt anyone here!" He snarled.

"Yeah sure! Tell me when Darkclaw sent you!" The younger domehead sneered. "He never was sent here! He was born here, me and my friends found his egg and took him here, he'd never hurt us!" Littlefoot growled.

"Oh really..." The younger domehead started, but Chomper let out an earsplitting roar that silenced the crowd. "LISTEN DOMEHEADS, I AM NOT LIKE THAT MONSTER! I NEVER WILL BE LIKE HIM! I LOST MY GRANDPARENTS TO HIM DURING THE WAR! Chomper screamed.

Silence fell, and Littlefoot's mind was doing a double take. Chomper knew about this, and he lost family members, but they were sharpteeth, why would they be attacked?

The domeheads looked surprised, and then realized what he was talking about. "We're sorry." They said. Chomper nodded curtly at them. "I will go and wait for him, and if I spot him, I will come back, you say he's a few miles away, then I'll wait for him, and tell you if I see him." Chomper announced.

Everyone let out shocked gasps, someone willingly searching for Darkclaw, was anyone that brave. "How will we know if your not letting him know what's happening?" The younger domehead asked. Chomper was about to say something, but Petrie cut him off.
 
"I will go with Chomper." He said. "WHAT?" Everyone cried. "I can follow him from the air and make sure he is alright." Petrie explained. Everyone realized what he wass getting at.

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After saying goodbye to his mate and their friends, Petrie and Chomper set off, and slowly they walked, the great wall of the valley shrinking into the distance.

However Chomper started to walk slower, trying not to make as much noise. Petrie thought he heard something. Suddenly, ten raptors leapt out of a bush and knocked the young sharptooth down. "Chomper!" Petrie cried. "Get out of here Petrie!" Chomper called back.

Petrie didn't want to abandon his friend, but he realized that he couldn't save him, so he flew up, but he saw out of the corner of his eye, a huge, dark sharptooth stalking towards Chomper and the Raptors, followed by dozens of sharpteeth, and atleast a hundred more raptors.

Darkclaw, Petrie thought as he saw them.

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LBT Fanfiction / Ascending Evil
« on: November 21, 2012, 01:25:46 AM »
Prologue

Droplets of water bombarded the ground all over. The grey clouds overhead darkening the world beneath them. Lightning flashed, and the gloomy landscape seemed sterile, unmoving, unliving.

But this was shattered when a tiny little mammal crawled on the ground. She was searching for food and was the only living thing in sight. Or was she?

Suddenly, an enormous foot smashed down onto the little creature. It gave a tiny squeak of shock and pain, and died. The sickening crunch that filled the air as its killer stepped down filled the air.

The foot belonged to a sharptooth. A very large sharptooth, over 60 feet long, and 30 feet tall. His great fin on the back of his neck cut through the air like a sword through skin. His six foot arms and 12 inch claws were illuminated in another lightning strike.

His crocodile like head was frightening, it was covered in scars, and when he opened his mouth to let out the most frightening roar heard in the area, foot long, razor sharp teeth gleamed.

His scales were a terrifying jet black, like obsidian. His powerful legs lifting his 8 ton body off the ground, and his thick, enourmous tail gave him balance to stand upright.

But most imposing of all, his piercing, burning, terrifying red eyes. They had the look that would make even the most accomplished liars in the world fess up.. Their blood red appearance and black slit in the middle gave the shaprtooth a truly terrifying appearance.

He liked to keep it that way. As he lifted his foot, he saw the flattened body of the mammal at his foot. He smirked, taking pleasure in its death. He started walking off, his feet shaking the ground with every step.

He didn't even eat the dead animal. Unlike most sharpteeth, who kill to eat, he killed for fun, for sport. He tortured his prey, made them suffer, before finally killing them. His appearance and manner made him everything that evil was.

He also wasn't alone. He had an army, 500 sharpteeth who followed, still following him, his subjects. Their were three other notorious sharpteeth in his pack. Redclaw, an equally sadistic, short tempered, vicious t-rex. Sharptooth, their name sake,  a cruel, cold, calculating T-rex who took a particular hatred to longnecks, due to his family's death at the hands of them.

Last, but not least, Gigas. Gigas was as calculating as Sharptooth, and as sadistic as Darkclaw, but he also was a skilled linguist, understanding leaf eater, sharptooth, mammalian, and Sea animal.

Together, these four had created a pack that they used to start a campaign to create an empire, by recruiting other sharpteeth to join their cause, and attacking other sharpteeth territory and enslaving the flatteeth herds.

This had nearly worked 50 years earlier. They had amassed over 200 sharpteeth followers and went on a dramatic campaihn to enslave the leaf eaters, but soon, after reeling from horrific casualties and traumatizing battles, the leaf eaters regrouped and attacked again.

The battle that followed ended with their defeat. Even so, them and their allies had more then doubled their army, and were now preparing to again launch an attack. He, Darkclaw, would rise again.

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The Welcome Center / Hello!!!
« on: November 10, 2012, 11:29:30 PM »
Welcome to GOF! Hope you like it here!  :)

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The Party Room / Never piss off.
« on: October 30, 2012, 12:38:14 AM »
:add

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The Written Word / Things change
« on: October 29, 2012, 11:38:56 PM »
A/N: This is a story I wrote about Calvin and Hobbes, and it deals with the transition between child and teen. This is sad, no happy ending, but this is also written from my own experience, abandoning toys that I held on to for so long. Review please. Note: not for the faint hearted, made me almost cry writing it.

Hobbes always heard from Calvin's other toys what would happen one day. That one day, everything would change, and he would lose his best friend. But he refused to believe them, because he and Calvin had a special relationship. Love. Not romantic, but brotherly.

No matter how many time they fought, in all the G.R.O.S.S meetings, every time Calvin got home from school, or just when they argued. They always had that love. But as Calvin grew older, he started to change.
When he was 7, he was still that imaginative, rule-breaking, crazy kid Hobbes knew. But he was changing. When he turned 8, Calvin started to have less and less G.R.O.S.S meetings, and didn't antagonize Susie as much.

9, Calvin suspended G.R.O.S.S completely, and they had a big fight. But they still stayed together. 10, Calvin started to get interested in girls, and he and Susie, began to hang out more. Hobbes began to think that it was coming. But the thing he dreaded the most, he told himself, would never come.

11, Calvin left Elementary school, and went to middle school. It was farther, and Calvin no longer played any 'Spaceman Spiff' or 'Stupendous Man'. He also began to date Susie, and that drove them even farther away.

12, Calvin threw away the transmogrifier, and the time machine, they hadn't used it in more then 4 years. By this time, Calvin could easily beat Hobbes in a fight, and so the pouncing began to lessen, and soon stopped dead. At the same time, his favorite comic books were given to a charity, as were most of his toys, all but Hobbes.

13, Calvin and Hobbes barely talked, Calvin simply walked in, and Hobbes always waited for him, trying to talk. Calvin only did on certain occassions. The summers after 10  were not like they were before, Calvin was always off with his friends, human friends. The winters were worse, everytime Hobbes offered a snow ball fight, building a snowman, or waiting for Santa, Calvin said no.

What hurt the most was that he just said no. Just no. Not a kind, 'sorry, I have to do this or I have to go there'. Just flat out, annoyed no. Hobbes eventually burst into tears, and Calvin didn't even notice, and he saw that, for the first time, no matter what he did, Calvin just ignored him. He realized that, now, Calvin had moved on. The spunky, bratty, insane kid was dead. In his place, a normal, every day teenager.

But Calvin was not normal. He never was normal. But now he was. One day, he heard Calvin's mom asked if he wanted to take him to a charity. Hobbes realized then that it was over. Calvin was gone. It was over.
Hobbes snuck out the door and ran to the woods. Crying and roaring, he would not do this, even though Calvin abandoned him, Hobbes would not abandon his friend. Finally, he saw the creek and dove in. He never let himself go up. After 3 minutes, lack of air kicked in, and Hobbes was gone. It was over.

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LBT Fanfiction / Darkclaw
« on: October 26, 2012, 12:23:38 AM »
A/N: This is a fanfiction where I wanted to write on my OC, Darkclaw. Read to find about his personality.

Of all the fabled sharpteeth the Flatteeth had encountered in their vast history, three stood out. One, Blackneck, was one of the most feared, he had a reputation as being the strongest, fastest, deadliest sharptooth on the planet, he slaughtered entire herds, and left a path of destruction in his wake, to the flatteeth, he was known only as Sharptooth.

He finally met his end, not by fighting a huge herd of flatteeth, but five hatchlings who cleverly lured him into a trap, and killed him. But there was another, Blackneck's brother, who vowed to create his own place among the sharptooth legends.

Redclaw not only continued his brother's slaughter of leafeaters, but extended this campaign of terror by extending it to sharpteeth, eventually being reguarded as their ruler, or, as some sharpteeth called it, Emperor.

This title had only been claimed two other times, once by sharptooth himself, and the other, the very embodiement of sharpteeth strength. He was the one who created the title, and he began using it as a way to identify other social roles in his sharpteeth pack. The second in command, General, were answerable only to Darkclaw himself, and they helped him rule the pack.

At the middle were the soldiers, or warriors, and they were often the fittest, fastest, and strongest in the pack. Below them, the commoners, who were often the youngest, oldest, or parents in the pack.

This system created a balance of power, and eventually, Darkclaw saw what he could do, they had created a vast territory two-hundred square miles by driving off other sharpteeth, and perhaps, they could convince all the other sharpteeth in the area to join the pack, and continue to swallow up other territories, and create a vast empire.

Darkclaw also saw flatteeth as the perfect fuel for the empire he envisioned, they would be livestock for them, and be bred as such, aswell as being training dummies for the sharpteeth.

This brutal system of slave labor would come to be the groundwork of his plan, he preached everywhere that this was necessary, and soon, hundreds joined with them, and as news spread, so did thousands. Darkclaw then put all the new recruits through a brutal training regimen, and through that, instilled a blind sense of loyalty to their emperor.

They were taught no seed of laughter, hope, tolerance, or mercy, just loyalty. Finally, Darkclaw ordered his armies to launch an attack. Very quickly they seized vast tracts of territory, covering up to 50 miles per day, and slaughtering all resistance.

Soon news spread of the massive pack conquering the lands of Pangea, and many began to wonder if Darkclaw would conquer the world. But many leaf eaters began to form resistance groups to face Darkclaw. Quickly, these swelled, and they marched off to fight Darkclaw. In the first series of battles, the Flatteeth were defeated, superior training and intent allowed the sharpteeth to wipe out their enemies while taking minimal casualties themselves.

But the flatteeth caught on and their own training programs eventually ended with a skilled fighting force capable of challenging the sharpteeth, an army 7,500 strong, compared to the sharpteeth's 9,000. Several battles erupted and the sharptooth advance stalled, but at the same time, savage battles erupted between the sharpteeth and flatteeth.

One such battle ended with 3,600 deaths for the sharpteeth. This was when a sharptooth army of 5,000 tried to attack the great valley, to be met with the full force of the flatteeth. The battle ended in a devastating defeat of the sharpteeth.

With this victory, the flatteeth turned the tide, and slowly, they pushed back the sharpteeth, culminating in a final battle at the very doorstep of Darkclaw's home territory.

The battle left 2,600 flatteeth dead, but at the same time, the sharpteeth were annhilated. Darkclaw was thought to have died in the battle. But in reality, the Emperor survived, and began to steal eggs from nests and recreated his training regimen, and even more blind, deadly sharpteeth warriors were born and another army, 10,000 strong, was amassed by the time Redclaw was killed.

Redclaw's killer, Chomper, a sharptooth who was raised by leafeaters, became a prime target Darkclaw knew he had to eliminate before he launched another campaign.

He almost did, but Chomper survived and he managed to warn the valley, but they were outnumbered and few managed to escape. After securing the prize that eluded him more then half a century earlier, he attaked a second time, this time reaching more then 2,000 miles of territory.

But the army was overextended, and this oppurtunity was seized by hundreds of resistance groups, and soon the sith army fell back to the great valley, losing 4,000 in process.

Their, Chomper led the final assault on the sharpteeth, against an army 6,000 strong, compared with 12,000 resistance fighters. The largest battle of the war ended in a victory for the resistance, and the total defeat of the sharpteeth, and Darkclaw's death at the hands of Chomper.

But the spirit of the Sharptooth remained, and he eventually was ressurected by a sith lord, and trained in the ways of the darkside, eventually, he became Dark Lord and used the dark side to create a star forge that could create soldiers, warships, vehicles and otherweapons in minutes.

An army of 5,000,000 could be produced in a year, and a thousand warships could in the same time, finally, after five years of arming, Darkclaw launched an assault.

A/N: This is a one-shot about my OC, and if you want to find out what happens after this, I will write a story on it. Also, if you want to read the story he's in, find "Sharptooth war" on the fanfiction part of the site. This is fantasy, so I know alot of stuff might be inplausible, but its fanfiction.

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LBT Fanfiction / Insane Crossover Concept Thread
« on: October 24, 2012, 11:31:38 PM »
Not really a crossover, but insane, allied and central power troops get somehow transported to the dinosaur age during the battle of the somme, and are forced to work together to survive, of course until they find the great valley, but unfortunatley, the other nations find this world and use as a new way to wage war and start an empire. This is the most insane crossover idea I've got.

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The Fridge / Happy (Belated) Birthday GOF
« on: October 23, 2012, 09:28:58 PM »
:) Happy birthday GANGOFFIVE! :celebrate  :celebrate

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LBT Fanfiction / Betrayed
« on: October 23, 2012, 08:43:53 PM »
Chapter 3, Betrayal

"NO!!!" Littlefoot heard Cera scream. Did the sharptooth attack again? He had a very bad feeling it dead as he ran to help his friend, but being a longneck, he could only go so fast.

He hoped Redclaw hadn't found a way in, but as he heard the sound of crashing and roaring, he knew it must have been. But when he got there, it was not Redclaw fighting Cera, but a new sharptooth.

This one was atleast a foot larger then Redclaw, and had dark blue scales and red eyes, his left eye containing a large scar that looked like it was caused by a threehorn. But it was not fresh, so it had to have been an injury sustained weeks ago.

The enormous sharptooth was absolutley pummeling Cera, she was covered in claw marks and bites and the tip of one of her horns was broken. Littlefoot wasted no time, and he joined the fray, and not a moment to soon, as Cera had been slammed into the ground and wouldn't get up.

Littlefoot dove in front of the sharptooth, and swung his massive tail, stunning the sharptooth. The sharptooth roared in anger, but didn't retaliate. "Move!" He said in a vicious voice.

Littlefoot was shocked, and suddenly, he realized who this was. "Chomper??" He asked, not willing to believe it. The sharptooth nodded.

Littlefoot exploded. "HOW COULD YOU??! WE TRUSTED YOU AND YOU ATTACK CERA! SHE DID NOTHING! YOU BE-" Chomper cut him off. "Actually, longneck" Chomper snarled, "I am not after Cera, she is in my way. Her father is the one I am after." Chomper growled.

Littlefoot turned around, and he saw the barely breathing body of Mr. Threehorn, covered in injuries. "Why are you doing this?! What did he do to you?" Littlefoot growled.

Chomper's eyes flared and he bared his 13 inch teeth. "That bastard murdered my family." He roared. Littlefoot took it in. Was this the reason? "I see you don't believe me, so I'll say what happened: I had found myself a beautiful mate and we fell in love instantly, and just a month ago, she layed 4 eggs. I had gone off to catch some food, and when I returned, she was dead. I smelled Cera's father here, and there were threehorn tracks. So I did what any one would do." Chomper growled. His eyes were still angry, but they had a hint of sadness in them. "You call us monsters? You think we chose this, we are merely doing what we are meant to, but your kind kill us in cold blood, and think we have no feelings, I thought I could teach sharpteeth to be nice, but I guess I need to teach flatteeth to be nice! Goodbye flathead." Chomper snarled.

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LBT Fanfiction / Betrayed
« on: October 22, 2012, 07:58:46 PM »
Chapter 2, First blood

A flattooth was grazing peacefully on the edge of the Great Valley. Being a clubtail, she was to heavy a target to take down, atleast thats what most thought.

But in some trees not far away, an enormous sharptooth waited, and suddenly, it happened.

Naturally, it shocked the valley, the death of a clubtail seemed impossible to most, but apparently, whatever killed it had sustained no injuries, for no blood other then that of the victim was seen.

But for one longneck, this was even more unsettling. The dream Littlefoot had just last night and this attack just couldn't be a coincidence. He had not told his friends of it, but he had a bad feeling that something was about to happen.

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The Fridge / New planet discovered
« on: October 21, 2012, 11:02:29 PM »
We found Pandora.

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