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LBT Fanfiction / The Land Before Time: The Bite Of Tornetar!
« on: August 13, 2010, 04:34:00 AM »
Yep! and here it is. OH! there is a lil blood. but no worry, its not a blood fest. its just a small enjury nothin to flip out over. 
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THE LAND BEFORE TIME
The Bite Of Tornetar
(Prologue)
Last time on the Land Before Time; Littlefoot has a Terrifying dream about a Giant Sharptooth that is revealed to be a warning. Chomper finds a cave blocked off by large rocks and hears who he beleaves to be a person in trouble, using a large stick, and prying at the largest boulder said to be holding the rocks in place, Chomper manages to remove the boulder. but the person trapped inside is infact a blood thirsty Sharptooth called Tornetar, an Evil Giant Sharptooth that towers over the tallest longneck. unable to lift the boulder and put it back in place, Tornetar escapes and slowly makes his way back to the Great Valley. Destroying the Rock shapped as a longneck and gathering many other Sharpteeth and Fastbiters. Grandpa Longneck reveals Tornetar Killed his parents. but before anything more can be revealed, Tornetar attacks, destroying a section of the Great Valley's wall, allowing swarms of Sharpteeth and Fastbiters to enter the Valley as we continue the second part of The Land Before Time.... The Bite Of Tornetar!
Part 2: The Rise Of The Terrorsaurus
Although the sun was high in the sky, the ground was darkened by the shadow of Tornetar. a Giant Sharptooth. his scales along his back and sides where black with grey stripes and his underbelly was darkgrey, the color of Ash. the giant Tyrannosaurid roared to the sky, frighting all inhabitants of the Great Valley. the Sharpteeth where biting the rocks and widening the opening of the Great Walls even more to allow swarms more of Sharpteeth and Fast Biters to enter the Valley.
meanwhile, the seven Dinosaurs including Grandma, Grandpa, Topsy, Mama Flyer, and a couple of Ankylosaurus Brothers Thailog and Tosk stood there frightened. hearing the screams of other dinosaurs Fallen Victim to the Sharpteeth.
"We HAVE to do something!" Littlefoot said to the others.
Tost looked at the carnage and looked back at the young Longneck.
"Like what? we're out numbered, AND we're at a tatical disadvantage. IF we attack thoughs Sharpteeth will tear us to peices. and as long as Tornetar serves as they're leader they won't be so easily scared off." Tosk said as he thought up a plan.
Littlefoot looked at Grandpa Longneck and came up with an idea himself. Only one longneck had ever successfully defeated Tornetar. if he could get him to fight off Tornetar then the other Sharpteeth can be dealt with much easier.
"Grandpa, what about Doc? you said the lone Dinosaur beat Tornetar once before? me and the others believe Doc was the Lone dinosaur. do you think its possible he can help us?" Littlefoot said to Grandpa longneck.
"But Me thought Lone Dinosaur no come back." Petrie said. "If Doc Lone Dinosaur, what make you think he will come here?" Petrie asked.
Littlefoot thought for a moment before he could say a think Thailog interupted with a loud stomp with his tail.
"HRRRRRRRR!, How could one Dinosaur fight THAT monster!? I say we form a possy and Take that oversized lizard Down!" Thailog announced with an eagerness to fight.
Topsy walked up next to Thailog shaking his head in agreement.
"I agree. if we don't do something now, we'll never be able to save our Valley." Topsy said with a hot temper.
Grandma and Grandma longneck shook there heads, believing the idea to be a foolish move that could get everybody killed.
"PLEASE Everyone, We can't go head on against something so large and Powerfull!" Grandpa said with Grandma nodding her head. "Yes, I think, if anything, we need to come up with a plan." Grandma added.
Cera was getting angry with the adults, she believed Littlefoots idea, dispite the fact that finding Doc would be difficult should still be better then loosing the Valley to Sharpteeth.
"HEY!!!!!" Cera yelled silencing the adults. "We already HAVE a plan. Me, Littlefoot, Spike, and Petrie can go out and get help from Doc, while you guys can see if you can atleast bide us some time." Cera said to the adults.
Grandpa looked down at the young Dinosaurs. giving a sigh of agreement.
"You kids are right. the Mysterious Beyond can't possibly be as dangerous as it is here." Grandpa said. "But Spike, I think you atleast should stay behind and watch your sisters for your mom." Grandma added.
Spike nodded, and began to head home. Littlefoot looked at his Grandpa.
"I'll come back as soon as I can, then we'll show that Giant Sharptooth that hes not as strong as he thinks." Littlefoot said to his grandparents.
after a Tearfull Snuzzle with they're Parents. The six young Dinosaurs venture off to find Doc.
"I just hope we end this with all of us alive at the end." Grandma said tearfully.
glancing back at the Great Valley, Littlefoot, Cera, Petrie, Chomper, and Ruby think on the first time laying there eyes on the Great Valley.
"don't worry guys, we're gonna end this chaos and make everything right again." Littlefoot said to the others.
Petrie looked at Littlefoot with a big question on everyone's mind...
"How we find Doc? No Body know where he is?" Petrie asked.
Littlefoot thought to himself for a half second then looked at everybody.
"We ask around. we'll look and ask all the Longneck heard we can find." Littlefoot said, "We will find Doc."
Cera came up with an idea.
"Well, while looking for doc, why don't we also ask some strong Longnecks if they can help us. I remember how my daddy said, that Threehorns would sometimes gang up on a Sharptooth if things got bad." Cera suggested.
Ruby Thought about the idea and Agreed.
"Yeah, we can fight muscle with numbers. cuz we can fight with Numbers against Muscle!" Ruby stated.
"OOOOH!!! Me know! why don't we ask Ali herd if they can Help Great Valley?" Petrie suggested.
Littlefoot thought that the idea was a good one. sence finding doc would be difficult enough.
"OK, lets do this!" Littlefoot said to all the small dinosaurs. "LETS SAVE THE GREAT VALLEY!!!!"
So off they went, the six dinosaurs asked arround the Mysterious beyond. finding old friend Ali's heard and creating the largest army of Longnecks ever known. looking high and low for Doc, Littlefoot, Cera, Ducky, Petrie, Ruby, Chomper, Ali and the herds of Longnecks looked everywhere.
Petrie flew down to Littlefoot. exhausted and panting heavily.
"Me no see Doc ANYWHERE!" Petrie said strained.
"What if we can not find doc? I don't want to live somewhere elses, Oh NO NO NO!" Duckey said scared.
Littlefoot, determined not to give up looked twards an old skeleton of a Spiketail.
"Well, we're not gonna just give up." Littlefoot said with a strong voice.
"Then what else can we do? our numbers are great enough to beat this Tornetar." The Old One stated.
"Yeah, Maybe your right. I mean, its impossible to find a lone dinosaur. much less a wandering dinosaur who prefers to be alone." Cera stated.
"what about your dad littlefoot? you think he can help us?" Ali asked.
Littlefoot thought for a moment. but shook his head.
"No, I may have already lost my grandparents by now. I'm not gonna loose my Dad." Littlefoot said in a tearfull voice.
Meanwhile, at the Great Valley, the Dinosaurs of the once Peacefull Valley join together to fight Tornetar to buy Littlefoot and the others some time.
"Tornetar! Your going down!" Thailog yelled.
Tornetar was unimpressed, but felt he could use some fun. he roared at the sky, telling all the other sharpteeth to back off. Tornetar was gonna fight all the Great Valley dinosaurs himself.
"Do you realy think you all can beat me. I am a Terrorsaurus! I have fought many battles and won!" Tornetar gloated.
Grandpa Longneck shook his head.
"You forgot the Lone Dinosaur Tornetar! do you not remember how he beat you and how he trapped you in that cave?" Grandpa Longneck said. not worrying that he may anger the giant.
"Bah! The Lone Dinosaur was only lucky." Tornetar yelled angerly "but you Old-Timer, you will not be so lucky, I believe I'll save you for last!"
Tornetar roared once more. as five Giganotosaurus's broke Grandpa Longneck off from the rest of the dinosaurs. Preventing him from helping the rest.
"Its Okay Longneck, we can handle this Sharptooth ourselfs!" Topsy said before letting out a loud Bellow. the other Dinosaurs began to attack.
One by one, Tornetar took each Dinosaur down with little effort. untill he came to the last three dinosaurs. consisting of Topsy, Thailog, and Tosk.
Thailog waisting no word charged at Tornetar's legs and swong his tail, bashing the giant at its feet. Topsy lept to Tornetar's chest hoping to go at the heart, by the time he got to Tornetar's neck but Tornetar quicky ducked the threehorned Dinosaur, and Topsy was hit by Tornetar's Tail, being flung to the ground. Thailog was about to hit the Terrorsaur's shin with his tail, but Tornetar raised his leg up, Thailog missed his target, confussed the ankylosaur looked up and saw a large foot coming down upon him. "BOOM!" was the only thing Grandpa could hear. when the smoke cleared Thailog was pinned down, still alive, but being crushed. Tornetar raised his foot once more. picked the Ankylosaur up with his mouth and tossed Thailog aside Topsy. Tosk was angry that his brother was beaten in such a manner. he Jumped at Tornetar when he was staring down at the two beatened dinosaur. Using his club, Tosk slammed his tail onto Tornetar's face, breaking off one of his teeth.
his mouth bleeding, and extremely fierious, Tornetar headbutted Tosk, causing him to hit the Great Valley wall. Tosk wasn't through with yet however. Tosk, laying next to the great wall, looked at the Valcano and had an idea, to lure Tornetar to the smoking moutain and, if possible, kill him by tossing him into the lava below. The Ankylosaur unfortunantly, had no time to execute onto this plan as Tornetar, using his tail, hit the great wall, causing an rockslide. within moments. the Ankylosaur was burried alive.
with all the dinosaurs beaten, Tornetar laughed maniacly at the Dinosaurs laying on the ground. he then looked at Grandpa longneck.
"You see Old-man, I can hold my own against anyone and anything." Tornetar Gloated over the longneck.
"I might be old, by I'm not as weak as you prefer to think Tornetar. I'll Never forget what you did to my parents!" Grandpa Yelled in an Angry reply.
Tornetar thought back, then he realised who the old Longneck was. the young Dinosaur who witnessed the death of his parents by his claws.
"Aaaah! I see, your that young longneck I saw, witnessing your parents death at my teeth. your Parents had some good meat! I wonder if your's would be any better?" Tornetar said antagonising Grandpa longneck.
Fierious, Grandpa longneck swong his tail and the Giganotosaurs, knocking them all out with one swing.
"Doc might have taken you down in his prime, but I will not die without a fight!" Grandpa yelled angerly.
Tornetar tilted his head in confusion.
"Who's this Doc guy?" Tornetar thought to himself.
Grandpa Longneck charged Tornetar, and pushed the giant down. Tornetar got up. a little disorianated, when his vision cleared Grandpa looked at him with an angry face. getting up on his hind legs Towing over the giant, Tornetar gapped at Grandpa longneck before recieving a blow to his head by the Longneck's front legs. Tornetar's head slammed to the ground, Tornetar then began to think he hit a bad cord when he Taunted the old Longneck.
Meanwhile. in a land of dry dirt and sand Littlefoot and the other young Dinosaurs, along with Ali and her herd, began the trek back to the Great Valley, but then a dust storm appears from nowhere. the Herds begin to panic.
"Everyone, stay together, this storm shouldn't last too long!" The Old One commanded.
as littlefoot, Ali, Cera, Petrie, Chomper, Ruby, and Ducky scurry to hide under the Old One, the young Dinosaurs begin to hear footsteps. he looks up as a large foot comes down infront of him. the Dust storm ends, and as the dust, sand, and debris clear. the setting sun's rays eluminate the land, and infront of them, stood a large longneck... Littlefoot looked up and saw the face of the giant longneck.
"Its HIM! ITS DOC!" Littlefoot exclaimed in a cheerfull manner.
(To Be Continued)
Next on The Land Before Time; Littlefoot, Petrie, Cera, Ali, And Ducky return to the Great Valley with Doc. the herds of Longnecks fight the Sharpteeth and Fast Biters out of the Great Valley, and Doc, Grandpa, Ali, Littlefoot, and the rest of the young dinosaurs fight Tornetar atop of a large Valcano. the fate of the Great Valley hangs in the ballance in the most titanicular Dinosaur Battle ever. can the Peacefull Plant Eating dinosaurs end the terror of the Callosal Tornetar? or will the inhabitants of the Great Valley meat there demise. Find out in the exciting concusion of. The Land Before Time... The Bite Of Tornetar!
: THE LAND BEFORE TIME
The Bite Of Tornetar
(Prologue)
Last time on the Land Before Time; Littlefoot has a Terrifying dream about a Giant Sharptooth that is revealed to be a warning. Chomper finds a cave blocked off by large rocks and hears who he beleaves to be a person in trouble, using a large stick, and prying at the largest boulder said to be holding the rocks in place, Chomper manages to remove the boulder. but the person trapped inside is infact a blood thirsty Sharptooth called Tornetar, an Evil Giant Sharptooth that towers over the tallest longneck. unable to lift the boulder and put it back in place, Tornetar escapes and slowly makes his way back to the Great Valley. Destroying the Rock shapped as a longneck and gathering many other Sharpteeth and Fastbiters. Grandpa Longneck reveals Tornetar Killed his parents. but before anything more can be revealed, Tornetar attacks, destroying a section of the Great Valley's wall, allowing swarms of Sharpteeth and Fastbiters to enter the Valley as we continue the second part of The Land Before Time.... The Bite Of Tornetar!
Part 2: The Rise Of The Terrorsaurus
Although the sun was high in the sky, the ground was darkened by the shadow of Tornetar. a Giant Sharptooth. his scales along his back and sides where black with grey stripes and his underbelly was darkgrey, the color of Ash. the giant Tyrannosaurid roared to the sky, frighting all inhabitants of the Great Valley. the Sharpteeth where biting the rocks and widening the opening of the Great Walls even more to allow swarms more of Sharpteeth and Fast Biters to enter the Valley.
meanwhile, the seven Dinosaurs including Grandma, Grandpa, Topsy, Mama Flyer, and a couple of Ankylosaurus Brothers Thailog and Tosk stood there frightened. hearing the screams of other dinosaurs Fallen Victim to the Sharpteeth.
"We HAVE to do something!" Littlefoot said to the others.
Tost looked at the carnage and looked back at the young Longneck.
"Like what? we're out numbered, AND we're at a tatical disadvantage. IF we attack thoughs Sharpteeth will tear us to peices. and as long as Tornetar serves as they're leader they won't be so easily scared off." Tosk said as he thought up a plan.
Littlefoot looked at Grandpa Longneck and came up with an idea himself. Only one longneck had ever successfully defeated Tornetar. if he could get him to fight off Tornetar then the other Sharpteeth can be dealt with much easier.
"Grandpa, what about Doc? you said the lone Dinosaur beat Tornetar once before? me and the others believe Doc was the Lone dinosaur. do you think its possible he can help us?" Littlefoot said to Grandpa longneck.
"But Me thought Lone Dinosaur no come back." Petrie said. "If Doc Lone Dinosaur, what make you think he will come here?" Petrie asked.
Littlefoot thought for a moment before he could say a think Thailog interupted with a loud stomp with his tail.
"HRRRRRRRR!, How could one Dinosaur fight THAT monster!? I say we form a possy and Take that oversized lizard Down!" Thailog announced with an eagerness to fight.
Topsy walked up next to Thailog shaking his head in agreement.
"I agree. if we don't do something now, we'll never be able to save our Valley." Topsy said with a hot temper.
Grandma and Grandma longneck shook there heads, believing the idea to be a foolish move that could get everybody killed.
"PLEASE Everyone, We can't go head on against something so large and Powerfull!" Grandpa said with Grandma nodding her head. "Yes, I think, if anything, we need to come up with a plan." Grandma added.
Cera was getting angry with the adults, she believed Littlefoots idea, dispite the fact that finding Doc would be difficult should still be better then loosing the Valley to Sharpteeth.
"HEY!!!!!" Cera yelled silencing the adults. "We already HAVE a plan. Me, Littlefoot, Spike, and Petrie can go out and get help from Doc, while you guys can see if you can atleast bide us some time." Cera said to the adults.
Grandpa looked down at the young Dinosaurs. giving a sigh of agreement.
"You kids are right. the Mysterious Beyond can't possibly be as dangerous as it is here." Grandpa said. "But Spike, I think you atleast should stay behind and watch your sisters for your mom." Grandma added.
Spike nodded, and began to head home. Littlefoot looked at his Grandpa.
"I'll come back as soon as I can, then we'll show that Giant Sharptooth that hes not as strong as he thinks." Littlefoot said to his grandparents.
after a Tearfull Snuzzle with they're Parents. The six young Dinosaurs venture off to find Doc.
"I just hope we end this with all of us alive at the end." Grandma said tearfully.
glancing back at the Great Valley, Littlefoot, Cera, Petrie, Chomper, and Ruby think on the first time laying there eyes on the Great Valley.
"don't worry guys, we're gonna end this chaos and make everything right again." Littlefoot said to the others.
Petrie looked at Littlefoot with a big question on everyone's mind...
"How we find Doc? No Body know where he is?" Petrie asked.
Littlefoot thought to himself for a half second then looked at everybody.
"We ask around. we'll look and ask all the Longneck heard we can find." Littlefoot said, "We will find Doc."
Cera came up with an idea.
"Well, while looking for doc, why don't we also ask some strong Longnecks if they can help us. I remember how my daddy said, that Threehorns would sometimes gang up on a Sharptooth if things got bad." Cera suggested.
Ruby Thought about the idea and Agreed.
"Yeah, we can fight muscle with numbers. cuz we can fight with Numbers against Muscle!" Ruby stated.
"OOOOH!!! Me know! why don't we ask Ali herd if they can Help Great Valley?" Petrie suggested.
Littlefoot thought that the idea was a good one. sence finding doc would be difficult enough.
"OK, lets do this!" Littlefoot said to all the small dinosaurs. "LETS SAVE THE GREAT VALLEY!!!!"
So off they went, the six dinosaurs asked arround the Mysterious beyond. finding old friend Ali's heard and creating the largest army of Longnecks ever known. looking high and low for Doc, Littlefoot, Cera, Ducky, Petrie, Ruby, Chomper, Ali and the herds of Longnecks looked everywhere.
Petrie flew down to Littlefoot. exhausted and panting heavily.
"Me no see Doc ANYWHERE!" Petrie said strained.
"What if we can not find doc? I don't want to live somewhere elses, Oh NO NO NO!" Duckey said scared.
Littlefoot, determined not to give up looked twards an old skeleton of a Spiketail.
"Well, we're not gonna just give up." Littlefoot said with a strong voice.
"Then what else can we do? our numbers are great enough to beat this Tornetar." The Old One stated.
"Yeah, Maybe your right. I mean, its impossible to find a lone dinosaur. much less a wandering dinosaur who prefers to be alone." Cera stated.
"what about your dad littlefoot? you think he can help us?" Ali asked.
Littlefoot thought for a moment. but shook his head.
"No, I may have already lost my grandparents by now. I'm not gonna loose my Dad." Littlefoot said in a tearfull voice.
Meanwhile, at the Great Valley, the Dinosaurs of the once Peacefull Valley join together to fight Tornetar to buy Littlefoot and the others some time.
"Tornetar! Your going down!" Thailog yelled.
Tornetar was unimpressed, but felt he could use some fun. he roared at the sky, telling all the other sharpteeth to back off. Tornetar was gonna fight all the Great Valley dinosaurs himself.
"Do you realy think you all can beat me. I am a Terrorsaurus! I have fought many battles and won!" Tornetar gloated.
Grandpa Longneck shook his head.
"You forgot the Lone Dinosaur Tornetar! do you not remember how he beat you and how he trapped you in that cave?" Grandpa Longneck said. not worrying that he may anger the giant.
"Bah! The Lone Dinosaur was only lucky." Tornetar yelled angerly "but you Old-Timer, you will not be so lucky, I believe I'll save you for last!"
Tornetar roared once more. as five Giganotosaurus's broke Grandpa Longneck off from the rest of the dinosaurs. Preventing him from helping the rest.
"Its Okay Longneck, we can handle this Sharptooth ourselfs!" Topsy said before letting out a loud Bellow. the other Dinosaurs began to attack.
One by one, Tornetar took each Dinosaur down with little effort. untill he came to the last three dinosaurs. consisting of Topsy, Thailog, and Tosk.
Thailog waisting no word charged at Tornetar's legs and swong his tail, bashing the giant at its feet. Topsy lept to Tornetar's chest hoping to go at the heart, by the time he got to Tornetar's neck but Tornetar quicky ducked the threehorned Dinosaur, and Topsy was hit by Tornetar's Tail, being flung to the ground. Thailog was about to hit the Terrorsaur's shin with his tail, but Tornetar raised his leg up, Thailog missed his target, confussed the ankylosaur looked up and saw a large foot coming down upon him. "BOOM!" was the only thing Grandpa could hear. when the smoke cleared Thailog was pinned down, still alive, but being crushed. Tornetar raised his foot once more. picked the Ankylosaur up with his mouth and tossed Thailog aside Topsy. Tosk was angry that his brother was beaten in such a manner. he Jumped at Tornetar when he was staring down at the two beatened dinosaur. Using his club, Tosk slammed his tail onto Tornetar's face, breaking off one of his teeth.
his mouth bleeding, and extremely fierious, Tornetar headbutted Tosk, causing him to hit the Great Valley wall. Tosk wasn't through with yet however. Tosk, laying next to the great wall, looked at the Valcano and had an idea, to lure Tornetar to the smoking moutain and, if possible, kill him by tossing him into the lava below. The Ankylosaur unfortunantly, had no time to execute onto this plan as Tornetar, using his tail, hit the great wall, causing an rockslide. within moments. the Ankylosaur was burried alive.
with all the dinosaurs beaten, Tornetar laughed maniacly at the Dinosaurs laying on the ground. he then looked at Grandpa longneck.
"You see Old-man, I can hold my own against anyone and anything." Tornetar Gloated over the longneck.
"I might be old, by I'm not as weak as you prefer to think Tornetar. I'll Never forget what you did to my parents!" Grandpa Yelled in an Angry reply.
Tornetar thought back, then he realised who the old Longneck was. the young Dinosaur who witnessed the death of his parents by his claws.
"Aaaah! I see, your that young longneck I saw, witnessing your parents death at my teeth. your Parents had some good meat! I wonder if your's would be any better?" Tornetar said antagonising Grandpa longneck.
Fierious, Grandpa longneck swong his tail and the Giganotosaurs, knocking them all out with one swing.
"Doc might have taken you down in his prime, but I will not die without a fight!" Grandpa yelled angerly.
Tornetar tilted his head in confusion.
"Who's this Doc guy?" Tornetar thought to himself.
Grandpa Longneck charged Tornetar, and pushed the giant down. Tornetar got up. a little disorianated, when his vision cleared Grandpa looked at him with an angry face. getting up on his hind legs Towing over the giant, Tornetar gapped at Grandpa longneck before recieving a blow to his head by the Longneck's front legs. Tornetar's head slammed to the ground, Tornetar then began to think he hit a bad cord when he Taunted the old Longneck.
Meanwhile. in a land of dry dirt and sand Littlefoot and the other young Dinosaurs, along with Ali and her herd, began the trek back to the Great Valley, but then a dust storm appears from nowhere. the Herds begin to panic.
"Everyone, stay together, this storm shouldn't last too long!" The Old One commanded.
as littlefoot, Ali, Cera, Petrie, Chomper, Ruby, and Ducky scurry to hide under the Old One, the young Dinosaurs begin to hear footsteps. he looks up as a large foot comes down infront of him. the Dust storm ends, and as the dust, sand, and debris clear. the setting sun's rays eluminate the land, and infront of them, stood a large longneck... Littlefoot looked up and saw the face of the giant longneck.
"Its HIM! ITS DOC!" Littlefoot exclaimed in a cheerfull manner.
(To Be Continued)
Next on The Land Before Time; Littlefoot, Petrie, Cera, Ali, And Ducky return to the Great Valley with Doc. the herds of Longnecks fight the Sharpteeth and Fast Biters out of the Great Valley, and Doc, Grandpa, Ali, Littlefoot, and the rest of the young dinosaurs fight Tornetar atop of a large Valcano. the fate of the Great Valley hangs in the ballance in the most titanicular Dinosaur Battle ever. can the Peacefull Plant Eating dinosaurs end the terror of the Callosal Tornetar? or will the inhabitants of the Great Valley meat there demise. Find out in the exciting concusion of. The Land Before Time... The Bite Of Tornetar!
Silverweed in Season 3 was the most interesting character of everyone but in the end was limited to what he ultimately had to do. Shame, because he was a real threat to Fiver.