Well, I guess I can review here at least.

I'm honestly not a bionicle fan but I sure am a land before time fan.

When I saw your original story, Quest for the energy stones, on FF.net, I ignored it at first but then, with it there everytime I turned to the second page so I decided to give it a shot. Boy you didn't dissapoint me.

It turned into a great find that got me reading it for hours on end trying to find out what happened. when I finished, I wanted to read the sequal, so I went looking for it but sadly couldn't find it. When it did came out, both here on GOF and on FF.net, I practically jumped for joy. This is one of the best fanfics, and I can easily say, I have ever read.
Now onto the review! It was great, a few misshaps here and there, but don't look at me for them. I'm sure pangaea will give you all the info you need. But I agree with Pangaea on one note. When the monster came up, wouldn't Littlefoot and Cera be terrified of it? I know I would be. Well that's all for me. Get the next chapter up soon. Bye now!