Just started on chapter 9! In all my story will have 15 chapters.

Does anyone want to read my edited chapters 1 and 2? they're in the this fourm. Just look in the fanfictions part.

Anyone esle want to review what I have so far?

I've read it I like it! I like the story line.

I am saddened that the footage is lost.  

star wars soundtrack.

I'll get back to working on my fanfic now. later!

I'll keep my story here.

(Here's chapter 2.)
"Hey ali what up," asked petrie.  "Nothing much petrie," replied ali.  "What do you want to do," asked petrie.  "Why don't we play tag," suggested ali.  "Me no it," said petrie. "Not it," said littlefoot.  "Not it," said ducky.  "Well I'm not it," said cera.  "I'm not it," said ali.  "spike's it, said everyone.  Just then a old swimmer entered the valley.  "So this seems like a good place to take control of, this is where my campain will begin," said Havanaman. Oh man locals I'd better play it cool. "Hello I am Havanaman what is your name threehorn," asked havanaman.  "I'm known as M.R. threehorn aroud here got that," said mr threehorn. Can you be quiet!  Why you... uh notices littles grandpa. Sorry about that starnger.  "It is alright I don't mind, where I come from if your friend said that he would be banished. Oh well I don't know what to say.  "You needn't say a word kind sir," replied havanaman.  "I come from elka," said havaman.  "Elka oh yes I fought in that war," said grandpa.  "What side did you fight on," asked havanaman.  "The ostein side of course, replied grandpa.  "What side did you fight on," asked grandpa.  I did not fight in that war.  "Really," asked grandpa.  "Yep," replied havanaman.  "Now I'll be getting some rest since I've had a long and tiring journy so if you'll excuse me," said havanaman.  Of course.  Hmm I shall soon take control of this great valley.  Then I'll take control of the world with my sharptooth army.  Meanwhile else where.  "Are they still following us," asked bron.  kid looks back to see the larger sharpteeth burst through a large bunch of trees. Yes they are still following us! "We need to stop them," yelled pops. "Yes but we need some help now," replied kid.  At that moment 4 more raptors appeared. The six raptors with some help from some of bron's herd defeated the larger sharpteeth.  "Hey kid is that you," asked frank.  "Sir," commented kid.  "It's been a long while," replied frank.  "Yes it has sir," replied kid.  "Stop calling me that," Shouted frank.  "Ok," replied kid.  What's in that area over there kid? I don't know frank.  Let's find out what is over there.  "Uh kid pops who are they," asked bron. "Oh this is frank joe smith and charles,' replied kid. Nice to meet you all. Likewise.  So are we going to see what's over there?  Right let's get to that now.  as they walk away. "It's been twenty years since we've talked," said frank.  "Yea it has been twenty years, replied kid. A few feet behind. "Can we trust them bron," asked shorty.  "We haven't given them a chance let's give them one," replied bron.  Ok we will. A few feet ahead. "Kid get down," said frank. "We'll have a better view from that ridge," said kid.  "What do you see down there," asked frank.  Sharpteeth hundreds, no thousands.  "Looks like someone wants to take over the world," said frank.  Yes but who? There is only one that I can think of who could arrange this havanaman.  "But he's dead," said kid. "Or so we're ment to think," said frank. Do you think he's already at the great valley? If he is we're going to need a lot of help.  They walk quickly back.  "So what was there," asked bron.  Oh nothing was there.  Pops joe smith charles I need to talk to you, and speaks to them in sharptooth language. "Havanaman is not dead he has rallied a sharptooth army, get a hold of everyone else kid and I will escort the longnecks to the valley," said frank. "Right away," replied pops.  (That's chapter 2!) (I'll post chapter 3 later.)

It's more clear on who's talking.  Now for chapter 2 which I will post tonight.