why would they shut down the Universal Animation Studio when there is still animated movies out made from universal studios? honestly?

I would not blame anyone unless it's for  a good reason.

I think it's wrong to blame somebody that dosen't know what he had done.

If the Land Before Time XIV is a rumor then it's a rumor.

I have been thinking about mailing the LBT story copie to The Universal Animation Studios.

plus I've been thinking of adding illustrations to the LBT story too

do either of you have any honest suggestions?

 Not bad not bat at all Vonboy!   you have done a triple good! good! good job!!!

Well Yes, Vonboy I Haven't done a welcome Topic since I first got one  

Chapter 11: The Ending

On the very high cliff, I was dangling by his fingers, with the General now holding onto my leg. "I'm not finished you are!" I yelled out to General Young. Suddenly, part of my pants ripped from my leg, and the General plummeted a thousand feet down to his death. As his screams for help faded away, I started to slip myself. Littlefoot quickly bit onto my hand to try to pull me back up, but it wasn't enough. me and Littlefoot both fell over the edge.
It looked as if all was lost, when Granma Longneck ran over just in time to gently grab the dinosaur and the human in mid-air. As she slowly laid us down on the ground, everyone else made their way down the cliff to meet up with them.

"I'm so glad to see all of you little one's safe" Grandma Longneck spoke up.
"We came as soon as we heard the General making that...sound that he makes."
"It's called a gunshot." I piped up.

"Where is the general now?" Grandma Longneck prodded.
Littlefoot lowered his head and said. "Well, he fell off a very high cliff. I don't think he could have made it." Littlefoot felt a little sorry for the General. He always did when anyone died, even a bad person.

"At least he can't bother us anymore!" Jay said.

As everyone took a moment to take a breather from all that had just happened, more of the adults of the Great Valley congregated at the scene. Any action in the Great Valley attracted attention, since the valley was usually such a quiet and peaceful place. Everyone there didn't know what to think of the action they experienced. The prehistoric denizens never heard a gunshot before.
Grandpa Longneck replied, "Please everyone! Please calm down!!!" and they all remained silent. "I have seen this happen before by the humans when they tried to kill us. Those...bullets have no effect on us though. They are small, and they just bounce off of our skin. At least we won't hear from them again. We now know that not all humans are bad.

"That's right!" Chomper spoke up. "They aren't all bad, just like not all sharpteeth are bad!"

"That is very true, Chomper" Grandpa continued. "They are animals like we are. They have good sides and bad sides!"

The dinosaurs all looked at, Robert, Jay, me and the other Zoo animals that came along. Littlefoot came up to me and said "I want to say thank you for bringing me back!" "you're Welcome Littlefoot” I replied.
Littlefoot noticed now that I looked quite sad. "Why are you so sad, Alan?"
"Because this is where this is where we say our good bye!" I reported.
"Why?" Littlefoot asked.
 
"Littlefoot...let's just say that there won't be anyone to bother you anymore!"

"But Alan!..."
 
I gave a long sigh. "No buts Littlefoot, I can't be with you anymore. You belong here, with your family, and all of your friends. I...don't belong here."
Littlefoot broke a tear and rubbed his head on Alan's legs. "I am gonna miss you too much!"

I broke a tear as well, but remained calm. "We are all going miss you too. Littlefoot, we both live in two different centuries we live in the 21st century and you live here in Mesozoic world.” I rubbed my eyes and continued, “You are a longneck, if we took you back they’ll be others in our time that'll take you back to the zoo. We can't let you come the 21st century. It is no place for a dinosaur like you. It's just too dangerous for you."

Littlefoot understood, but that didn't stop the tears from streaming down his face. "Don't forget about us!" littlefoot sobbed.

I put my hand on Littlefoot's head and said. "We won't forget about you, we promise!"
Janice, Elvis and Bo went up to him and Janice said. "Farewell Littlefoot!"
"You were great kid!" said Elvis.
"We won't forget about you or this adventure you gave us!" Bo added in.
As we and the animals prepared to go back to their time, they looked back at the huge group of dinosaurs seeing them off. We paid special attention to Littlefoot.

Before I pressed the button on the Time Lazer, I called out to the little longneck one last time. "Well, who knows? We just might decide to come back sometime!". With that, We and the zoo animals disappeared instantly, leaving behind an empty and barren patch of ground.
Chomper walked up to Littlefoot, and tried to comfort him with a brotherly hug. Littlefoot thought about the last thing that Alan said. Would they perhaps come back someday? It was anyone's guess, but Littlefoot wanted to believe that they would.

THE END

Not bad at all Vonboy, like the part where chomper lets the redback go by pretending to trip. I knew Chomper wouldn't hurt anyone  

Yeah, I hope we can get it done and posted sometime next week.

Also, just for a little fun, here's the chapter 10 that Joshua wrote before I edited it.

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Cera, Ducky, Petrie, Spike and appeared infront of them. At first They were very happy to see Littlefoot again.

They quickly realized that they were back in the Great Valley. The grandparents thanked The Texan Brothers for there geinus hard work. However Littlefoot's friends went over to Janice, Elvis and Bo and Cera asked. "What kind of Dinosaurs are you?" Janice questions "what's a dinosaur?" "you don't know what dinosaur is" Petrie asks, "Nope" Elvis answers "this is just a suprise to see more then one up close, Your friend Littlefoot is the first one we met"

the grown ups arrived and the animals were now into it now. they asked the animals the questions and they were getting tired of answering so they just took a long break.

At night, Littlefoot was sure happy to be reunited with his friends again that he told his story about his journey to a new world. they were sure fasinated by it and I couldn't blame him that he met me, Jay and Robert.

All of a sudden it started to rain heavily, which the dinosaurs call it the days of rising water. the meeting was still going we went under Grandpa Longneck to stay dry and then Mr. Clubtail showed up with the fossilized Tyrannosaur skull/the stone sharptooth skull way to and I was suprised to see it again.
We didn't say a word about it cause it might ruin history.

After the meeting Littlefoot and his friends showed us the great view of the Great Valley but suddenly The General Appeared with a pistol in his hand pointing at Alan.

"Hand over the Time Lazer" The General Growls and threatens. "who are you?" Ruby asked.

The General fires at Ruby but the bullet hit in between her legs. the gun fire sound was heard from a mile away and Littefoot's grandparents recognized that sound. "The General in Great Valley?" Grandma Longneck says in shock. "We must warn the others" said Grandpa Longneck.

Cera charges at the General and the General fell to the ground. He kicked Cera off of him and I pounced on him but the General flips flipped. Me and The general got up and the General punched me 3 times on the sides. Thinking quickly I punched General Russel Young under his chin. The General was still standing. He held his mouth and he spits out a bloody tooth I was suprised about that. The General growls and punched Me in the stomach. It was painful that I went on my knees.
He picked up the pistol and points it at my forhead. "Give Me the Time Lazer now or you are finished!" he chuckled crazily.

Chomper growls and he bites General Russel Young's Leg. The General tries shaking him off. But then Littlefoot pounced on him and He stomps on him with all his strength. The General grabs Littlefoot's Neck and strangles him. I punched him on the side that he lets go of Littlefoot. I punched General Young a lot.
With one Hard Punch General Young blocks it and headbutts him. I slipped and the General came close and sayed "You're finished." "I'm not finished you are!" Littlefoot Charges at the General and headbutts him. The General loses his balance and he fell over the edge of the cliff. He grapped my leg; Littlefoot grabes my sleeve with his mouth but sinces it was raining he struggles to pull Alan up...

(He wrote some more stuff after this, but I cut it off here for a cliff hanger.)

  Well.... I write a lot to get better at writting stories and when ever I get done with a chapter on the LBT story I let Vonboy proof read it.  
 
Now I am allowing Vonboy to write the final chapter, chapter 11. I think you all will like the whole story.    

looks triple good, good, good so far
 

That Drawing of Chomper and Ruby is Triple Great! Great! Great!!! I give you 100 points on that.  

Keep up the good work