Haunted

chomperrules1993 · **on:** February 11, 2015, 05:03:35 PM

It was a beautiful day in the Great Valley. All of the valley residents were celebrating the defeat of Sharptooth.

"Me hope we never see him again." Petrie said fearfully yet happily.

"Yeah me neither." Littlefoot agreed with a nod of his head. Everyone was eating, dancing, and having a great time. But little did the residents know...

Chomper was shaking almost as soon as he woke up. Standing before him was Sharptooth, even those with the strongest of stomachs would've thrown up at the mere sight of his appearance.

"You... You! It's your fault I'm like this! I swear I will find a way to get my revenge! Then I will KILL you too!" Sharptooth then vanished just as suddenly as he had appeared.

Chomper was shaking terribly but after awhile he managed to calm down. "So it's not over yet eh?" Chomper then decided to join the celebration but decided to keep his little encounter a secret for now...

Here is the sequel to Corrupted. Enjoy!

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #1 on:** February 12, 2015, 11:37:38 AM

Here's chapter 2. Enjoy

The celebration was still under way and every one was having a great time.

Littlefoot noticed Chomper walking towards them.

"Hey Chomper, you feeling ok? You haven't been looking good ever since being freed from Sharptooth." Littlefoot said,concern evident in his voice.

Chomper shook his head, closed his eyes for a moment and replied

"No Littlefoot, I haven't been the same, but I'll do fine." Littlefoot just shrugs his shoulders (or tried to shrug his shoulders)

Pretty soon the celebration ended and Chomper decided to head back to his cave. On his way there though he felt an uneasy feeling, one that he's felt numorus times before, it was Sharptooth and he was right beside him! "Aah!" Chomper screamed in surprise but before he could continue, Sharptooth inturrupted him.

"Do you really believe that you are free? Even without me you will always be a monster. I don't care how many times you call yourself a 'nice sharptooth' you will never escape the urge to rip into your prey's flesh!" Sharptooth taunted Chomper, who shook his head wildly.

"I will not hurt my friends!" Chomper declared angrly.

"Oh really? Face it Chomper you still have a little bit of me in you, that is something your pathetic longneck friend's mother coulden't get rid of! The only way to rid of me is if I free you from my grasp. Ha ha ha, but I intend to stick around for a long time. You will be like me, maybe even my sucessor".

Chomper was too angry to reply to anything Sharptooth was saying so when he had calmed down Sharptooth was already gone.

"Will he ever leave me alone?" Chomper asked out loud before heading to his cave.

Elsewhere Sharptooth was looking at his reflection, his ghostly, or should I say demonic like form was looking more and more like that of the living. Sharptooth laughed evily. "Looks like I'll be having my revenge after all and I'll make Chomper's death the most grusome, and I will make it slow, very slow". Sharptooth then vanished.

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #2 on:** February 13, 2015, 02:07:42 AM

Please enjoy chapter 3

Three weeks later…..

Chomper was asleep in his cave when suddenly he had a scary sleep story.

In it he saw a vision of Sharptooth and looked like he was actually alive! Next the vision changed to that of Sharptooth killing innocents either physically or with use of his demonic powers. After having killed a domehead, Sharptooth looks towards Chomper and gives an evil smile.

Chomper soon jolted awake from the scary sleep story, "I have to tell Littlefoot and the others about this!"

Chomper soon began his search for his friends and soon found them near the Sheltering Grass. As soon as he saw them he ran straight for them and Cera was the first to notice.

"Woah there Chomper! What's the rush?"

Chomper was breathing hard and panting severely but finally managed to say between breaths "I had a scary sleep story and I had a vision of Sharptooth! He was actually alive!"

Needless to say the gang was shocked. "You sure it wasn't just a scary sleep story Chomper?" Littlefoot asked. The longneck and the rest of the gang would've dismissed this as nothing more than crazy stories but after the possession and exorcism of Chomper, they knew that anything was possible.

"No. Call me crazy but I believe it was a premonition. It just seemed too real to be a scary sleep story! But there's something else I should tell you all, three weeks ago after I was freed from Sharptooth's grasp and we had that celebration, I saw Sharptooth, he wasn't really living yet but he threatened that he'd kill everyone and save me for last!"

This was all too much for the gang to take. Premonitions? Coming back to life? "How can Sharptooth come back to life though? It's impossible!" Cera asked as she didn't believe what she was hearing.

"My theory" Chomper began, "Is that all the negative things Sharptooth did while in my body caused his dark resurrection" Chomper was dead serious about his theory and surprisingly so was the rest of the gang.

"But how we stop Sharptooth?" Petrie asked.

Chomper thought long and hard but couldn't come up with anything. "I don't know but we better find out soon before more innocents are put in harm's way!"

Meanwhile Sharptooth, now fully resurrected and restored but still having his demonic powers through strange means, had just snapped the necks of two sharptooth parents with his own mind [he basically flicked his wrist/claw] He then appeared to be imagining Mr Threehorn coughing up blood! He even seemed to imagine him having his organs spilled out!

While this was happening Mr Threehorn was just roaming around when he suddenly started throwing up blood! Grandpa Longneck and some other residents came to the threehorn's aid. But when they got there it was already too late.

Mr ThreeHorn had died from blood loss and organs were trailing out due to his stomach being ripped open through unnatural means.

"What happened?" Grandpa Longneck asked himself silently.

Chomper and the others were still talking about how to destroy Sharptooth when Chomper suddenly had a chest pain and saw a vision of Mr Threehorn dead!

"Cera. Your dad is dead! Sharptooth killed her!"

Cera was of course angry with Chomper. "Chomper that's not funny!"

Chomper wished he was kidding but he somehow knew this vision was the real deal. "Cera I'm not kidding! I had a vision of your dad lying dead in a pool of blood!"

Cera still thought he was making a cruel joke but one look in his eyes showed no deception.

"Cera?" A voiced called. They looked towards the voice and saw Grandpa Longneck walking towards them.

"What is it grandpa?" Littlefoot asked.

"It appears that…."

However the elderly longneck couldn't finish his sentence because Cera interrupted "I know my dad is dead."

LittlefootAndAliTogether · **Reply #3 on:** February 13, 2015, 09:01:31 AM

Poor Topps.

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #4 on:** February 15, 2015, 10:37:53 AM

I unfortunately have no more ideas for this story but when I do I will certainly update

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #5 on:** February 15, 2015, 07:02:40 PM

Is everyone enjoying the story?

LittlefootAndAliTogether · **Reply #6 on:** February 15, 2015, 07:16:57 PM

Yes. I'm just hoping they find a way to stop Sharptooth as he appears to be a near demigod.

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #7 on:** February 15, 2015, 07:29:08 PM

Quote from: LittlefootAndAliTogether,Feb 15 2015 on 06:16 PM

Yes. I'm just hoping they find a way to stop Sharptooth as he appears to be a near demigod.

Glad you're enjoying the story

Soon as ideas strike me I will update with new chapters

LittlefootAndAliTogether · **Reply #8 on:** February 15, 2015, 07:59:30 PM

I just hope that Sharptooth cannot summon dead Sharpteeth (the Sharptooth from film V, the Sharptooth from film VIII or the Sharpteeth from film XIII.).

If Topps isn't safe, I worry for the parents of the other kids.

I wonder how old the kids are now. If Chomper is in his teens or older, maybe he could duel Sharptooth or something, as Sharptooth seems determined to kill him last. Sharptooth might even think it's amusing if Chomper does this, as he might think he's going to get Chomper to be his successor if by some chance he loses to Chomper.

I mean, he'd be provoking aggression out of Chomper and it might give him the idea that Chomper is turning away from Leaf Eaters or could soon.

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #9 on:** February 16, 2015, 12:58:51 PM

Here is chapter 4. Enjoy!

"Poor Three-Horn"

"How could this happen?"

"He just started throwing up blood"

The residents of the Great Valley were shocked at seeing the dead body of Mr Three-Horn. Grandpa Longneck and the gang at just recently made it to where the three-horn's corpse laid.

Needless to say, when Cera saw the dead body of her father she broke down. "Why did this happen? I mean I know Sharptooth is pure evil but whyyyyyyyyyyyy?" Cera said in between sobs

"I am so sorry Cera. I know what it's like to lose a parent to Sharptooth." Littlefoot said while thinking of his mother. Even after all these years he still missed her greatly.

"But whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy." Cera said while crying uncontrollably.

"Because it's fun!"

The residents were in shock when they looked over and saw Sharptooth standing before them!

When Cera saw Sharptooth she felt an uncontrollable rage. "You!"

Cera attempted to attack Sharptooth but he merely pushed her against a tree with his mind by waving his hand back. "Ugh" Cera hit the tree hard and was rendered in a daze.

"Tsk tsk tsk" Sharptooth said while motioning his claws in a "no no" gesture. "Such a temper. Such a temper."

"You're a monster!" Grandpa Longneck said angrily

"Ahhh is Grampy upset cause I killed his daughter? Oh boo hooo!" Sharptooth said mockingly

"I'll kill you!" Grandpa Longneck said with rage evident in his voice

"Oh really? You shouldn't be fighting in your old age. You might get a heart attack." Sharptooth then glared at the elderly longneck

Suddenly Grandpa Longneck felt a deep pain in his chest! "Ugh"

"Grandpa!" Littlefoot said in fear at what he was seeing

"Dear!" Grandma Longneck said in extreme worry

"Heh heh heh. I could kill your grandpa if I wanted to but…" Sharptooth snapped his claws causing Grandpa Longneck's ill effects to wear off. "Where's the fun in that? Mr. Longneck have you considered joining me?"

Grandpa Longneck was extremely furious. "I'll never join you!"

"Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha. That's what you think!"

Sharptooth then dashed towards the residents in an unnatural speed then pushed all the residents except for Grandpa Longneck as well as the gang a few feet away. He then made eye contact with the elderly longneck. "You belong to me. These folks mean nothing to you." While Sharptooth was saying this his eyes were glowing pale white.

Littlefoot and the others had just recovered from Sharptooth's attack.

"Your Grandpa is mine Littlefoot! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!" Sharptooth snapped his claws and Grandpa Longneck vanished. Then Sharptooth himself also vanished.

"Grandpa!" Littlefoot said in anguish.

Meanwhile in the Mysterious Island…..

Sharptooth and Grandpa Longneck had just encountered two domehead hatchlings. "Squish them!" Sharptooth said evilly

Grandpa Longneck had no control over his actions. "Yes master." The longneck then went over towards the domehead hatchlings then squashed them! Grandpa Longneck's eyes were pale white and tear was trickling down

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #10 on:** February 16, 2015, 01:46:08 PM

I hope you all enjoy chapter 4 (as well as the story itself)

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #11 on:** February 20, 2015, 10:10:56 PM

I hope you're all enjoying the story

LittlefootAndAliTogether · **Reply #12 on:** February 20, 2015, 10:19:54 PM

I love it. Poor Grandpa Longneck.

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #13 on:** February 21, 2015, 01:13:08 PM

Quote from: LittlefootAndAliTogether,Feb 20 2015 on 09:19 PM

I love it. Poor Grandpa Longneck.

Glad you're still enjoying the story

LittlefootAndAliTogether · **Reply #14 on:** February 24, 2015, 06:22:37 PM

I had an idea. There might be someone to rival Sharptooth out there. It's a risk if Chomper goes to get him, but it just might work. Red Claw! Get Red Claw to fight Sharptooth.

Red Claw would be more afraid of Sharptooth than Chomper anyway and might be persuaded to help Chomper.

Red Claw, Screech, and Thud certainly wouldn't like the competition.

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #15 on:** February 24, 2015, 09:52:41 PM

Quote from: LittlefootAndAliTogether,Feb 24 2015 on 05:22 PM

I had an idea. There might be someone to rival Sharptooth out there. It's a risk if Chomper goes to get him, but it just might work. Red Claw! Get Red Claw to fight Sharptooth.

Red Claw would be more afraid of Sharptooth than Chomper anyway and might be persuaded to help Chomper.

Red Claw, Screech, and Thud certainly wouldn't like the competition.

Thanks but I already have an idea for the final battle