LBT Meets Galaxy Railways

LBTComeback · **on:** February 04, 2012, 09:20:24 PM

Chapter #1: A New Destiny To Follow!

The Year Of 2053, Man-kind has made succesful objects many years ago. First, a robot that talks, walks, and listens. Second, Inter-glactic Travel. And Finally, The Galaxy Railways And Space Defense Force.

(Big One's Whistle Echo)

The SDF is the galactic police company that rides on trains than police cars.

(Big One Enters The Scene)

(Big One Blows Whistle)

And now, Sirrius Platoon of the SDF will exprecince the most epic adventure of their lives!

THE LAND BEFORE TIME/A BRAND NEW DESTINY

BigFriendlyGun9000 · **Reply #1 on:** February 07, 2012, 09:03:40 PM

Look, I'll ask for it to be moved for you.

LBTComeback · **Reply #2 on:** February 14, 2012, 01:20:38 PM

Chapter #2 The Diemension Warp Drive

(Big One Arrives At SDF Train Hanger)

(Manabu) Well, We Did It Once Again!

(Krillan) Yep, that was such a easy misson!

(Bulge) Well, once you two stop chating! We need to leave big one. They are adding a new warp-drive coupling.

(Sirrius Platoon Members) Yes Sir!

(Sirrius Platoon Leaves Big One)

(Mr. Whittman) Well, once the new diemension warp-drive coupling is in place. Big one can travel through space, time, and travel into other diemensions!

LBTComeback · **Reply #3 on:** February 22, 2012, 03:57:24 PM

Chapter #3 A Prehistoric Mistake

(Whitman) Well, The Warp-Drive Coupling Is Ready to Roll.

(C. Bulge) Thanks! Sirirus Platoon! Let's Move Out!

(Sirrius Platoon) Yes Captain!

(Meanwhile At The Great Valley 70 Million Years Ago)

(Littlefoot) Grandpa? Grandma?

(Ms. Longneck) Yes?

(Littlefoot) I Feel Like Something Is Coming From A Different Dimension.

(Grandpa) Well... It Could Happen, Who Told You That?

(Littlefoot) Well, My Dad Told That He Had A Dream That Had Something He Called A Steam Locomotive Pulling Something He Calls Passenger Cars.

(Grandma) Well, Me And Your Grandpa Will Speak To Him And Find Out Ourselfs.
Why Don't Go Play With Your Friends?

(Littlefoot Runs Off To Find Cera)

(Littlefoot Finds Cera And Explains Everthing)

(Cera) Really? You Really Think That Thing Called A Steam Locomotive Will Come Here?

(Littlefoot) Well, Yea.

(Meanwhile In Space)

(David) I Can Not Believe That This New Coupling Is So Easy!

(Louise) I Know!

(Warning SFX)

(C. Bulge) What's Going On???

(Manabu) We're Out Of Control!

(Krillan) I Can't Get It On Course!

(C. Bulge) Everyone Hang On! Were About To Have A Crash Landing!

(Big One Goes Into Dimension Hole And Disappears!

vonboy · **Reply #4 on:** February 22, 2012, 04:32:39 PM

Hey, you shouldn't make a new topic for every chapter you write, LBTComeback. You should just have one topic and make each new chapter a new post.

I guess I'll say that Littlefoot saying "I think something is coming from a different dimension" doesn't make much sense. How does Littlefoot know about such things? I mean, it might work if his grandparents laughed it off, telling him to stop making up such crazy stories. It might have been fun then. Here, it's just confusing, and makes no sense. Also...

(Manabu) We Out Of Control!

Does Manabu talk like Petrie does, or is that just a grammar mistake?

But hey, keep it up. I like these "The Gang meet someone from another time or place" stories, as they can be really interesting.

LBTComeback · **Reply #5 on:** February 23, 2012, 03:20:56 PM

Chapter #4 A Unexpected Time!

(Dimension Hole Closes)

(Big One Reappears In LBT Dimension)

(Manabu) Man, That Was Totally Insane!

(David) Don't Remind Me!

(C. Bulge) Well, At Least Were Fine.

(Krillan) Uh... That's A Problem!

(Yuki) What Do You Mean?

(Krillan) Well, Were Still Flying, Which Is Good! But, We Went Back In Time... 70 MILLION YEARS AGO!

(C. Bulge) Oh Great Jesus!

(Manabu) Well, What Can We Do?

(C. Bulge) Well, We Must Land Before We Screw Up Time!

(David) Right! Landing Big One!

(Big One Whistles)

(Big One Lands On Rocky Plateau)

LBTComeback · **Reply #6 on:** February 27, 2012, 03:57:17 PM

Chapter #5 Littlefoot And Manabu Part #1

(C. Bulge) Where Are We?

(Krillan) I'll Use The Location Device, Maybe This Can Help Us Out!

(Krillan Presses Some Buttons)

(Krillan) We Are In A Place Called The Great Valley.

(Littlefoot And Gang Sees Something Black And Blue)

(Littlefoot) What's That?

(Chomper) It Doesn't Look Like A Dinosaur.

(Cera) Maybe, A Flying Rock?

(Quido) Let's Go And See What It Is.

(Littlefoot And Gang Walks Over To Big One)

(C. Bulge) Manabu, David.

(Manabu) Yes?

(David) What Is It Captain?

(C. Bulge) Can You Go Out And See If You Can Find Some Help?

(Manabu And David) Yes Sir!

(Manabu And David Walk To The Rear Coach #1)

(Littlefoot And Gang Arrives At The Rear Coach #1)

(Ruby) Woah, This Thing Looks So Cool!

(Ducky) Look Up There!

(Littlefoot Sees Door Opening)

(Littlefoot) Look Out!

(Littlefoot And Gang Quickly Run Toward A Small Forest And Hide)

(Manabu) Hmm... It Looks Like Nobody Is Here.

(David Sees Bushes Shake)

(David) Look Over There!

(Manabu Sees Bushes Shake)

(Manabu) I'll Look, And If I Get Caught, Help Me!

(David) Ok.

(Manabu Crawls Slowly Toward The Bushes)

(Manabu Opens Bush And Sees A Tail)

(Manabu) Hmm...

(Manabu Stands Up Face To Face With Littlefoot)

(Manabu) AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

(Littlefoot) AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

(Manabu Jumps Up And Bonks Head On Tree Branch)

(Manabu Lands On Ground Unconscious)

(Littlefoot) Uh Oh!

(David) Manabu! I'm Coming!

Mumbling · **Reply #7 on:** February 28, 2012, 02:51:51 AM

I have taken the time to merge the 5 topics you had made for this fanfiction and make them one big topic. If you have a new chapter, please post it in this topic from now on

Thank you.

LBTComeback · **Reply #8 on:** March 15, 2012, 02:26:12 PM

Chapter #5 Manabu And Littlefoot Part #2

(Manabu) 'Groaning' Man, I Feel Like A Rock Landed On My Head!

(Manabu Get's Up)

(Littlefoot) Hello? Are You Ok?

(Manabu) AAH!

(Cera) Dude! Clam Down!

(Manabu) This Is Imposable! IMPOSABLE!

(Chomper) What Do You Mean?

(Manabu) All Of You Are Dinosaurs And You Can Talk! THAT'S NOT...

(Ruby) Please, We Know!

(Manabu) Oh! Sorry!

(Littlefoot) None Taken! My Name Is Littlefoot. And These Are My Friends, Cera, Ducky, Spike, Petrie, Ruby, Chomper, And Qudio

(Manabu) My! I Didn't Know That Dinos Had Names! I'm Manabu Yuuki.

(David) And I'm David.

(Manabu) We Are Part Of Sirrius Platoon Of The SDF.

(Qudio) What's Sirrius Platoon And What's The SDF?

(David) Come With Us, And We'll Show You!

(Manabu And David Hop Aboard Rear Coach #1)

(Littlefoot And Gang Climbs Aboard)

LBTComeback · **Reply #9 on:** March 15, 2012, 02:28:29 PM

Chapter #6 Meeting The Crew Of Big One

(C. Bulge) Where Were You? And Why Are There Dinosaurs Here?

(Manabu) Captain, These Are Friendly. Not Mean!

(Ruby) Right Manabu!

(Krillian) 'Gasps' Y-Y-You Can Talk?! :blink:

(Ruby) Yes, Is That A Problem?

(Krillan) Uh... No?

(Littlefoot) Anyway, I'm Littlefoot And There Are My Friends. Cera, Ducky, Petrie, Spike, Chomper, Ruby, And Quido.

(C. Bulge) Nice To Meet You. My Name Is C. Bulge. The C. Mean Captain.

(Louise) My Name Is Louise Fort Drake. But, Everyone Calls Me Louise. I Handle WithThe Communcations

(Yuki) I'm Yuki, The Medical Sexroide. I Help Injured Passengers And Crew Members.

(Krillian) And I'm Krillan. I Handle The Weapons Systems.

(C. Bulge) We Are The Leadgendary Sirrius Platoon Of The Space Defense Force!

(David) So, What Do You Think?

(Littlefoot) I'm Speechless!

(C. Bulge) So, Want To See The Cab?

(Cera) What Is A Cab?

(David) You'll See.

(David Takes Littlefoot And His Gang To Big One's Cab)

LBTComeback · **Reply #10 on:** March 15, 2012, 03:35:06 PM

Chapter #7 The Cab, And Flight

(David) Everyone, This Is The Cab For Big One.

(Littlefoot) 'Gasps' I Never Seen Something So Complex Before In My Entire Dinosaur Life!

(Ducky) What's That Little Thing With The Holes And Handle?

(David) That's The Firebox Doors. That's Were Big One's Fuel Is Put In With Water To Make Steam.

(Chomper Climbs On To The Drivers Chair)

(Chomper) What's This Little Thing Hanging Down From The Top Of The Cab?

(David) That's Big One's Whistle Cord. Want To Try It?

(Chomper Grabs Whistle Cord)

(Big One's Whistle Echos Across The Great Valley)

(Topsy) What Was That?

(Tria) I Don't Know?

(Chomper Lets Go Of Whistle Cord)

(Chomper) That... Was... AMAZING!

(David) I Knew That Would Surprise You. Besides, We Should Get Back Into The Tender Control Room. There Something We Want To Show You.

(David Takes Littlefoot And His Gang Into The Tender Control Room)

(David) Captain, There Were Impressed By The Cab Of Big One. Maybe We Could Show Them How We Roll? Ey? Ey?

(C. Bulge) Well... Ok, Just Because We Have Special Prehistoric Passengers Aboard.

(David) Right! But, Where To?

(C. Bulge) Hmm... Well... Just Drive Through A Canyon And Land Somewhere Flat In The Great Valley.

(Sirrius Platoon Members) Yes, Captain!

(Littlefoot And C. Bulge) Let's Move Out! Ahead Full!

(Big One Whistles And Moves Foward At High Speed)

(Big One Takes Off)

LBTComeback · **Reply #11 on:** March 15, 2012, 04:31:35 PM

Chapter #8 Through The Flyer Canyon Part #1

(Big One Arrives In The Flyer Canyon)

(C. Bulge) Steady As She Goes David. We Don't Want To Crash And Fall Into The River.

(Pterano Sees Big One)

(Pterano) What The Heck Is That?

(Pterano Flys Closer To Big One)

(Pterano) Maybe I Should Land On That Thing And Find Some Clues.

(Pterano Lands On Top Of Coach #1)

(Alarm SFX)

(Ruby) What's Going On?!

(Krillian) Something Is On The Roof Of Coach One! It Seems Something Orange With A Long Beak And Wings!

(Petrie) 'Gasps' That's My Uncle Pterano!

(Cera) Well? Can We Shake Him Off?

(C. Bulge) No! It's Too Risky, We Could Run Into The Cliffside And Have A Derailment.

(Manabu) I'll Try To Reason Him.

(C. Bulge) Allright, Just Be Careful.

(Manabu) Yes Sir!

(Manabu Climbs Onto The Roof And Sees A Shadow On Roof)

(Manabu) Excuse Me? Pterano?

(Pterano Turns Around)

(Pterano) Yes?

LBTComeback · **Reply #12 on:** March 18, 2012, 11:07:57 AM

Chapter #8 The Flyer Canyon Part #2

(Manabu) You! Get Off Of This Train!

(Pterano) And What If I Refuse?

(Manabu Pulls Out His Space Gun)

(Pterano) Oh Pickle-fish-lips!

(Manabu) Now! GET OFF OR I'LL SHOOT!

(Pterano) Ok, Ok! Jezz! But I Can Help! Really!

(Manabu Puts Away His Gun)

(Manabu) Really? How?

(Pterano) I Know How To Get Through This Without Your Thing Crashing Into A Rock.

(Manabu) Fine! You May Want To Put This On Your Ear... If You Have Ears.

(Pterano) What Is This Thing?

(Manabu) It's A SDF Ear Radio. It's Used To Commuacate Other SDF Members Of Only One Platoon.

(Pterano Puts SDF Ear Radio On His Left Ear)

(Manabu) Now Contact Us If We Arrive At A Fork.

(Pterano) Ok, I'll Try!

(Manabu Walks Back To Big One's Tender Control Room)

LBTComeback · **Reply #13 on:** March 18, 2012, 11:18:14 AM

Chapter #8 The Flyer Canyon Part #3

(C. Bulge) So Have You Gotten Rid Of Him?

(Manabu) Well...

(Manabu's Ear Radio Turns On)

(Pterano) 'Speaking Through Radio' You About To Reach A Fork, Take The Path To The Right!

(C. Bulge) Manabu!

(Manabu) I Couldn't Kill Petrie's Uncle! That Wouldn't Be Right For Him Or Me!

(David) Well, He's Right About Something. We Are Reaching A Fork And The Route On The Left Is Too Dangerous.

(C. Bulge) Right! Turn To Starboard!

(David) Yes Sir!

(Big One Whistles As If Turns Right)

(Big One Turns Into The Safe Right Path)

LBTComeback · **Reply #14 on:** March 18, 2012, 11:51:43 AM

Chapter #9 A Terrifying Villan/T-rex Part #1

(Big One Leaves The Flyer Canyon)

(Pterano Hands Back The SDF Ear Radio)

(Manabu) Thanks For Guiding Us Through That Canyon.

(Pterano) Don't Mention It! If You Need Help! You Know Where To Find Me!

(Pterano Flys Away Back To Flyer Canyon)

(C. Bulge) Now Where Are We?

(Ducky) I Know Where We Are!

(David) What Do You Mean?

(Ducky) We Are In The Mysterious Beyond!

(Louise) What's A Mysterious Beyond?

(Cera) It's Where Sharpteeth Live!

(Chomper) And Out Of All Sharpteeth We Seen, The Most Scariest Sharptooth Is...

(Littlefoot And Gang) Red Claw!

(C. Bulge) Hmm... David? Can You Research This Red Claw?

(David) I'll Try!

(David Types Red Claw On To His Computer)

(David Sees Error Message)

(David) It Seems That The Computer Can't Respone At This Hight

(C. Bulge) Maybe We Should Land?

(David) I Think That Will Work. Landing Big One!

(Big One Whistles)

(Big One Lands On Flat Land)

(David Trys To Research Red Claw Again Until...)

(CRASH)

(Everyone Falls Down To Floor)

(C. Bulge) What The Heck Was That?

(Louise) I'll Go Out And See.

(Louise Walks Out Of Big One)

(Louise Sees Red Claw, Screech, And Thud)

(Red Claw Sees Louise And Licks His Lips)

(Louise) Oh My... :blink: 'Screaming' HELP!!!!

(Sirrius Platoon Members, Littlefoot, And Gang Hear Louise)

LBTComeback · **Reply #15 on:** June 18, 2012, 08:49:27 PM

Chapter #9 A Terrifying Villan/T-rex Part #2

Manabu: That's Louise! She's In Trouble!

(Krillan Finds Louise On Computer)

Krillan: I Found Louise, But She Has Been Captured By A Tyrannosaurs!

(Crew's Mouths Drop Open)

Bulge: ... Everyone Get To A Fighter! Were Going After Red Claw!

Everyone: Yes Sir!

Now I'm Getting Sick Of Doing All Of The Chapters! Can Someone Post A Chapter That Conculde This One?