Guilty Until Proven Innocent

[FlipperBoidSkua]

Thank you sooooo much for that post, StrutEggStealer. Due to the sudden lack of feedback, I was worried (and still am worried) that I did something wrong with ending this story. I don't get too much practice with endings (unless they're One-shot, I usually don't finish a story anytime soon) and I'm having the nagging feeling I've bombed it on this one :unsure:  

But your comment has lifted my spirits a bit on the subject matter! I'm glad to know that you enjoyed the story! *hugs*

[Mr Wonk]

I've not read the ending yet so don't worry FlipperBoidSkua. I'm sure it's great.

[Blais_13]

When I first read this fanfic months ago I thought it was abandoned,but it's good to see that it's not,becose it was a very good and interesting read.You did a very good work with the domeheads,they were evil enough,yet they still acted only as their nature wants them to do.As for the ending I think it was worthy for this great fanfic ,I find it ironical that the domeheads who acted like sharpteeth were eaten up by real sharpteeth.I think you will have a hard time if you want to make Cepher alive,becose he's covered in blood in the land of predators and scavengers,and there's nobody who want to help him as he lost his only companions.I'm curious about how are you going to save him,and i'm sure if you do it,it will be a start of another great fanfic.

his pain disappearing slowly as he lost consciousness once more, for what could possibly be for the very last time...

I think the for witch i underlined isn't necessary there,but i'm not a native english speaker,so I can be easily wrong.

[Mumbling]

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