Revenge II

Serris · **Reply #100 on:** February 22, 2010, 02:04:11 PM

The ending was heartwarming but a little underwhelming. You left the Bron/Threehorn debacle untouched.

LBTFan13 · **Reply #101 on:** February 22, 2010, 03:46:48 PM

Holy s***. How did I forget about that? I had every intention of including such scene in the final chapter, so I have no idea why I didn't. If you will bear with me just a little bit, I will certainly go back and add such scene into the final chapter.

Thank you guys for pointing that out to me. I can't believe I forgot about it.

LBTFan13 · **Reply #102 on:** February 22, 2010, 05:17:05 PM

Ok guys. I edited the final chapter to include the scene I intended on having. I simply have no idea how I forgot to put this in there in the first place. Thank you guys for pointing this out to me. Please if you have the time, go back and read the last chapter, at least for the part I added in, and let me know what you think. Just follow the same link on the previous page. It will take you to the edited chapter.

Serris · **Reply #103 on:** February 24, 2010, 02:58:33 AM

The updated version is MUCH better.

Also, I liked the "two faces of Pterano" that Scarbeak mentioned.

Mumbling · **Reply #104 on:** June 20, 2011, 08:22:53 AM

This fanfiction has been nominated by its author to be rated for the fanfiction awards 2011. To all the readers and fans of this fanfiction, please rate and review it!