Uncharted

[Raptor]

An Unamed Planet, in an insignifigant section of the Galaxy, is about to experiance something very signifigant.. Thus far, the planet has had no experiance with technology or any form of outside contact. The planet is populated with animals. No sentiant, dominant race as emerged from evolution. The planet hasn't even been discovered by Xenobiologists. However, all that is about to change....

A battle crusier, thousands of feet long and containing countless warriors from differant races, has been shot down over the Unamed planet. Most all of the warriors died in the insuing explosion. The planet's foilage quickly claimed it, leaving it a forested, metallic cave. Many Animals have made it thier home. however, there is something coming, to claim something that was hidden within the cruiser...

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You make the Story-
For the first time, almost the entire story(save what was specified above) will be decided by the RPers!

You name the Planet-
When outsiders make contact to the planet, the RPers will decide the name!

You decide the Biology-
The RPers will decide on the planet's enviroment!

You decide the Creatures-
All creatures, not just player-created, but NPCs, will be created by the RPers!

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Bios:

Name:
Species:
Age:
Gender:
Species Description:
Personal Markings:
Personality:

Name: Kirx
Species: Emerald Swordjaw
Age: 19 (16 in human years)
Gender: Male
Species Description: Emerald Swordjaws tend to range from eighteen to twenty feet tall, an forty to fifty feet long. They are usually colored dusty brown with dark brown stripes, though there is a green and blue morph, for which the Swordjaw is named. The face of a Swordjaw is bizzare. Instead of an upper jaw, they have a pair of long horns extending forward from a rounded nub. The horns are lined with barbs on the underside, which can inject a poison which paralyses prey, and take the place of an upper jaw. The lower jaw becomes extremely thin near the end, ending in a hooked spike. The lower jaw is lined with razor-sharp teeth. Swordjaws have a short, thick neck. Swordjaws are bipeds, but have three pairs of arms, which end in curved, flipper-like hands with spikes on the inside. They have no tail, but instead a slightly elongated nub. Swordjaws also exhibit spontaneous gender change from male to female when there is a shortage of females.
Personal Markings: Aside from a slash mark on the front left tentecle arm, none.
Personality: Calm when not hunting, but voaracious hunter.

So, what do you think?