Impressive fanfics as usual tfm... I can picture it from my mind perfectly, I don't know how did you do that, but you did.

every chapter is very fun to read. As for the last chapter, or the epilogue. I love the part where Mr. Threehorn gets slapped by grandpa longneck

really funny.
As for Pterano and Haylie getting married... Awesome! I didn't know they already have a marriage system at that time.

And for the kiss... AWESOME!
I'll give you 3.5 Treestars / 5 treestars for your fanfic
Keep writing more intriguing fanfics! You won't regret it.
P.S: The end is just the beginning
