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The Seven Hunters

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 Chapter 27   Taunts and reprisals

“If I were a magician, I’d hand out broken compasses. It’s all about misdirection.”
― Jarod Kintz, At even one penny, this book would be overpriced. In fact, free is too expensive, because you'd still waste time by reading it. (Yes, in case you are wondering, that is the actual title of the book.)


"Make sure that you mark them all!  We want them to know we mean business!"

Skytail was encouraging them to fulfill their mission with impunity.  They had to let the rival pack have no doubts about the strength and intentions of his pack.  By marking their sleeping area with their scent they were sending a very clear message.  They were five strong and they were challenging their right to reside in the lowlands.  This would leave the rival pack only two options.  Either they could acknowledge the strength of his pack and flee from the lowlands, or else they could meet their challenge with a reprisal of their own.  If threats failed to yield the desired outcome then they could take the lowlands by tooth and claw.  Skytail was certain, however, that it would not come to that.  If the leader of this pack was as smart as Skytail figured that he was then he would see that he was beat and go to a more defensible position.

"Alright, that's good enough!  Let's get out of here!"

The other pack members wasted no time in rising from their places and proceeding to vacate the cave.  They did not want to be present when the other pack returned to their home.  That would most certainly invite a fight.

As the others began to sprint through the tall grass, Taunt stopped for a moment and looked back towards the cave that they had just desecrated.  To violate a pack's home is one of the most egregious violations that one could do to other sharpteeth.  He knew that he had just contributed to putting the rival pack into an unfortunate position.  They would either feel the need to retaliate for this insult or else they would evacuate their home.  Admittedly, his leader had chosen the most humane and least dangerous option by making a show of force, as the rival pack would probably take the hint and leave.  However, he still felt some guilt for their actions.  He wouldn't want to be treated like this if he were put into their place.

Well, I guess it can't be helped.  Taunt thought morosely.  

Shaking his head, he turned back to where the rest of the pack had fled and resumed his sprint.  Now only time would tell how the other pack would respond.

......

"Where have they have gone?  Hopefully, they are home so that they aren't gone."  Ruby exclaimed.  The remainder of the pack had been searching for Littlefoot and Chomper but had little success in looking for them around the watering hole.  Perhaps they chased some prey across a long distance?  Or maybe they simply went home?  They eventually decided to return home and resolved to resume a more thorough search if they could not be found back in the cave.  

"I am sure that they probably caught something and are waiting for us to arrive so that they can gloat!"  Cera responded sardonically.  Littlefoot seemed to be reveling in annoying her over the last few days.  Sure, she had been a bit of a braggart in the weeks prior, but surely Littlefoot's commentary was a bit excessive.  Of course, the others did not quite see it her way, as their poorly suppressed chuckles at her comment indicated.  They had been on the receiving end of her bragging in the same way that Littlefoot had and they were enjoying Cera's comeuppance.  

Petrie was the next to respond.  "Me no know about that.  When we get there then we find out!"

The band of the sharpteeth continued their journey through the tall grass of the lowlands.  After a few moments, however, they heard a sound that made them stop in their tracks.

Roar!

The sound was coming from the direction of their cave and it was clear what the source was.  It was Littlefoot!  The roar was one of profound, unrestrained anger.  Without speaking, the entire group began sprinting in the direction of the cave.

"How dare they?!"

That was from Chomper.  The seething anger that radiated from his words was lost on no one in the vicinity.  Even the leaf-eaters in the area cowered at the sudden commotion.  They may not be able to understand the words, but they understood one thing: There are sharpteeth over there and they are angry!

After a few moments of running at break-neck speed, the band arrived at their cave and began speaking at once.

"You okay?!"  Petrie squawked.

"What's going on?!"  Cera and Ruby shouted nearly simultaneously.

Littlefoot and Chomper both turned to look at their newly-arrived friends and stared for a moment.  Each trying to bite back at their anger before they spoke.  Chomper was finally the first to respond.

"Smell!"  It was a command, but the other members of the pack took a moment before they seemed to understand what Chomper meant.  Slowly but surely, each raised their nostrils into the air and took in deep breaths.  That was when the scent hit them.

Fast biters.  Other fast biters.  

The implications of what they smelled suddenly came upon them.  The rival band of fast biters that Cera had smelled earlier had invaded their territory, intentionally marked their home, and then fled the scene.  They did not understand the entirety of what this gesture meant but they could deduce one thing that it communicated.

We can find you anytime.  You are not safe.

The rage built up silently for a few moments before it suddenly came forth in a torrent.

"How dare they invade our home?!  This isn't their home to invade!"  Ruby declared angrily, with a raised fist for emphasis.

Cera stomped the ground with both of her hind limbs and her forelimbs, in an almost realistic replication of how she would have responded as a threehorn.  She began to pace sideways as if she were contemplating charging an unseen enemy.  The other pack was lucky they were not here.  Cera was in a murderous rage.

"I do not like this!  Nope, nope, nope!"  Ducky responded angrily.  Her classic triple affirmation not showing any of her usual happiness, but rather expressing her agitation.  She was not quite aware of why she was so angry at this moment, but something deep within her instincts told her to be angry.

Spike grunted in agreement with the others, his teeth were bared in a fuming expression.  He then advanced into the sleeping area and sniffed his regular spot.  He reared back when he smelled the torrent of scents.

Urine.  They had "marked" their home in a very literal sense of the word.

"I will kill them all."  Spike spoke in a low voice, the lack of shouting actually making the affirmation even more creepy and disconcerting.  Spike wanted blood.  "Let's track them down and finish this!"

Littlefoot was inclined to agree, but he realized that his emotions were getting the better of him at the moment.  He understood, of course, that the actions of the rival pack were despicable, but he did not realize the full implications of what had happened.  What was the rival pack trying to communicate?  How should they respond?

Littlefoot looked towards Chomper for a moment and asked a pointed question.

"What is the meaning of this, Chomper?  What are they trying to do?"

Chomper looked at Littlefoot with a look of amazement for a moment, before he seemed to understand something and sighed.  He would have berated another sharptooth if they had asked such a stupid question, but he realized that the rest of his pack had not been raised as sharptooth and therefore had no knowledge about the types of challenges and reprisals.  This was a very delicate matter.  A wrong move could escalate to outright combat and death.  Despite their anger they had to respond carefully here.

Chomper shook his head as he began his answer.  "It is a challenge, Littlefoot.  They are putting us on notice."

Ruby looked at Chomper darkly.  "Well we have gotten the notice!  But how do we put them on notice!"

"Yeah!"  For once Cera agreed with the rose-colored fast biter.  "How do we show those morons who is boss?!"

Chomper appreciated the spunkiness of his friends, as he shared their sentiments, but as his anger turned to concern he realized that they needed to be careful here.

"Uh... What they did was a warning...  They could have attacked us instead..."  Chomper replied.

Littlefoot asked the obvious question.  "Why didn't they?  We didn't know they were here."

"Yeah..."  Chomper nodded.  "But an attack is dangerous.  Most sharpteeth try to avoid them if possible."

Ducky sputtered, an odd response coming from her.  "Sharpteeth avoiding attacks?"

Chomper nodded.  "Yes.  A sharptooth avoids attacking unless he is certain of winning."  He then looked at Cera and Ruby who were on the other side of him.  "A sharptooth who fights often will die young.  Or at least that is what my mommy always told me."

Ruby seemed to understand.  "So they are trying to avoid fighting by scaring us?  They think that if they scare us away then they don't need to fight?"

Chomper nodded.  "Exactly!"

Cera was enraged.  "Well, I am not going away!  I say we fight!"

As the others pondered for a moment on the proper course of action, Petrie gave a lone voice of dissent.  "Well, the food is getting scarce-ier.  Maybe we should leave?"

Spike answered immediately.  "Never!"  He then advanced towards the flyer, which caused Petrie to fly towards Littlefoot and land on his back.  "They have insulted us and I won't sleep until they submit to us!"  Despite being sharpteeth for over a month, the imperious desire for power and dominance was still a relatively new phenomenon for the pack.  No sharptooth of any worth would willingly submit to an enemy unless it was necessary for survival.  There was no shame in fleeing from an unwinnable battle in order to fight another day.  Fleeing from an evenly-matched battle, however...

Cera nodded.  "Yeah!  And besides there are seven of us, but only five of them!  There are only five scents here.  I say we take em'!

Littlefoot tried to play devil's advocate.  "Even so, Cera, one of us could get hurt or worse..."

"So we should just run off?!"  Cera responded angrily.

"NO!"  Littlefoot yelled.  "But we need to be smart and think about what we are doing!"  He then punctuated his points.  "They were born fast biters.  The know how to fight.  We do not."  He then shook his head.  "I don't think a fight would go well for us."  He admitted the last point reluctantly.  He did not want to dwell on his pack's weaknesses, but if he was going to make the best choices for his friends then he had to accept reality.  Right now, the reality supported Petrie's idea of running away.  Unless they could find a third option...

"Maybe we can mark their home?"  Ruby offered.

Chomper shook his head.  "They will probably be guarding their home.  They will be expecting us."

"Maybe we can challenge them?"  Spike offered.  "We are inexperienced, but they don't know that."

Ducky was concerned, however.  "But what if they called our bluff.  That would be bad.  It would.  It would."

Littlefoot continued to think as the others continued to argue about the best course of action.  Ruby noted his ponderous expression and asked a question to her leader.

"Any ideas, Littlefoot?"

Littlefoot looked at Ruby with a forlorn expression, before shaking his head.  "Not yet...  We can't let this go unpunished!  But I don't want any of us to be hurt!"

Ruby nodded and raised a claw to her chin in a ponderous expression.  Her sharptooth name, Ponder, seemed quite apt in her current expression.  If only we had a way to mark their home!  If we could do that when they are home then it would really make them scared of us! She then took on a frustrated expression.  But if they are guarding their home then how can we sneak into their home?  They will see anyone who walks by!  

In her frustration she looked back towards the remainder of the pack, who were still arguing about the best course of action.  Chomper and Spike were both arguing about the merits of directly challenging the rival pack, but little progress was being made.  Littlefoot, meanwhile, was looking at Petrie who seemed to be following the discussion from a distance.  It is a shame that Petrie would not be much help in a fight or in marking the rival...  Wait!  That's it!

Ruby looked at Littlefoot, who seemed to have the same idea based upon the smirk that had formed on his face.

"Are you thinking what I am thinking, Littlefoot?"  Ruby probed curiously.  

"I think so..."  Littlefoot replied with a huge grin.  "Could you go find some branches, Ruby?  Petrie will need them if we are going to do this right."

Ruby smiled.  This should be interesting... She looked forward to seeing how this situation developed.  If they were lucky then perhaps they could avoid bloodshed.

Shortly thereafter, Littlefoot's lingering stare at Petrie finally gained the notice of the others.

"Littlefoot?"  Cera inquired.

"Let's mark the rival pack's territory."  Littlefoot answered absentmindedly.  "We won't even have to go there..."

The rest of the pack looked at their leader as if he had gone mad.  How were they supposed to mark the rival pack's home if they did not actually go there and do so?

"Okay, I've got branches.  Now we need to rub on them!  We need to rub on the branches!"  Ruby suddenly affirmed from the threshold of the cave.  The others hadn't even notice her leave as they were so focused on their argument.

"Rub on branches?"  Cera inquired.

Littlefoot smiled.  "Yes, and then Petrie will do the rest..."

Petrie nearly fell off of his perch when he heard Littlefoot call his name.  "Me will?"  Petrie had no idea what he was supposed to be doing.  What did those two have in mind?

Littlefoot nodded and then waved his paws to indicate for the others to gather around.  When they had all congregated around him, he and Ruby began to discuss their plan.

"Alright, guys, this is the plan..."

......

Me don't like this!  What if they catch Petrie on the ground?

The rest of the pack had done a thorough examination of the lowlands in order to pinpoint where the rival pack was located.  They were careful not to actually encounter the rival members, as the entire point of this exercise was to avoid a direct confrontation, and they had given Petrie a general idea of where their shelter was.  It was now up to him to do the rest.

He looked at the area around him.  There was a rather large crevice, perhaps extending for ten full-grown longnecks in length, which extended to the north.  The crevice did not quite create a valley worth of the name, as it was maybe only about half a full-grown longneck in depth and the same distance in width.  Whatever forces that had created the pack's own cave seemed to have also created this particular geological formation.  It was quite defensible, but far from where the herds in the lowlands congregated.  It was obvious why the rival pack wanted to move into the pack's territory.  When that was added to the consideration that the food sources were becoming scarcer...

Ignoring his racing thoughts, Petrie looked at the crevice more closely.  On either entrance there were fast biters keeping guard.  An orange fast biter with black stripes stood at the north entrance, whereas a gray fast biter stood at the south entryway.  It was obvious that their home shelter must be in the crevice itself.  He took a look at the crevice below and noted no other dinosaurs, but there were several distinct indentations near the middle of the crevice.

There we are...

Smiling, Petrie gripped the branch in his talons extra tightly and proceeded to dive to the crevice.

......

Taunt examined the area around the north entrance.  There had been absolutely nothing of interest happening since he began his watch several hours ago.  Nonetheless, he kept his vigil.  He did not want to be the one who had to explain to Skytail why the rival pack was able to retaliate during his watch.  No, he would keep up his mission until the others arrived after their hunt.

Hmm...  What is that?

A small flyer seemed to fly by the crevice as if he were searching for something.  Must be looking for ground fuzzies.  Doesn't sound like a bad idea... Ignoring the flyer as unimportant, he returned his focus to the terrain in front of him.  If he and Breeze kept their visual then their home was safe.  Considering that it had been nearly half a day since their challenge, it was obvious to Taunt that the other pack must be preparing to leave the lowlands.  Any self-respecting pack would have responded by now.  Undoubtedly they were choosing the smart option and leaving their territory to the superior pack.

Sorry, Cera. Taunt thought to himself, remembering the yellow fast biter that he had met nearly a month ago from the rival pack.  But we are in control here.

If he had known what was going on in his home, however, then he would not be so cocky.

......

Swoosh!  Swoosh!  Swoosh!

Petrie carefully rubbed the treestar-laden branches against the indentations in the ground.  Five unique fast biter scents emanated from them.  These were undoubtedly the sleeping areas of the rival pack members.  Petrie had found his target.

Littlefoot, Ruby, and the others had rubbed their bodies and, in the case of Spike, urinated on the branch in question.  By rubbing it against the sleeping areas of the rival pack Petrie was returning the favor to the other pack.  Now they would see what it was like to have their security violated.  Petrie was careful in his deliberate brushing to make sure that his body never made contact to the ground around him.  He could leave no evidence of how the pack had seemingly accomplished the impossible.  They had to think that their rivals were mysterious and dangerous.  They had to know fear!  They had to be shown humility!

Swoosh!  Swoosh!  Swoosh!

That last of them!  Now me can leave no evidence!

Slowly rising from the crevice, Petrie then flew back towards the watering hole.  The rival pack couldn't find the evidence of his trickery if it was at the bottom of the water!

The brown flyer smiled a toothy smile.  Petrie wished he could be there when the rival pack discovered what had happened.

......

"How could this happen?!"  Skytail roared at the two shamed guards.  "You two were supposed to stand watch!"

Taunt had seldom seen Skytail this angry and was visibly cowering, a rare expression from him.  "We were, sir!  I never moved from my spot!"

"Then how do you explain this!"  He roared.  "Our entire home, marked!  They have met challenge with challenge.  You know as well as I do what that means..."

Breeze paled as Taunt looked down in shame.  Vigilant spoke after a pause.  "Do we escalate... or back down?"

Scarflank gave his opinion immediately.  "I say that we escalate.  If they don't back down then we could still carve out a territory, could we not?"  He was not open to attacking the rival pack, especially since they had apparently managed to outsmart their rivals, but he was under no impression that the rival pack was highly superior to theirs.  For now he simply assumed that Taunt and Breeze had gotten into one of their usual verbal sparring matches and let them down.  They needed to probe their rival's strengths and weaknesses before any fight.  Sporadic challenges on a one-on-one basis would be a good way to do that.

Skytail responded.  "Even a limited engagement might escalate into a full fight.  We should meet them in pack on pack.  That way if it escalates into a fight we will be at full strength."

The rest of the pack then took in the leader's idea.  The might have to soon enter into a full engagement with the rival pack.  Usually such engagement ended with one side retreating or both sides stalemated in the exchanging of verbal challenges.  However, deaths and serious injuries were also possible.  Skytail did not phrase his idea as an order, but rather as a suggestion.  This indicated that he felt that it was a matter that should be decided by consensus, as each would be risking their lives in such an endeavor.  This was something that the pack would have to consider carefully.

"Wait, check this out!"

Every head turned at Vigilant's exclamation.  Skytail, who was rather annoyed that his solemn proclamation of the stakes that they faced was interrupted, responded with a frustrated response.

"What, Vigilant?"

Vigilant looked at Skytail with a horrified expression.  Whatever she had seen had discovered obviously spooked her.  

"Their scents are all around where we sleep, but nowhere else!"  She exclaimed.  "They snuck by you two."  She gestured at Taunt and Breeze.  "Which is disturbing...  But how did they hide their smell?"  She looked at Skytail with utter fear and repeated herself.  "How is a pack scent-less?!"  She exclaimed.  "What kind of pack did we pick a fight with?!"

Skytail jumped up and tried to check Vigilant's findings.  He tried to keep his emotions in check, but he was having difficulty as the reality of the situation began to dawn on him.  The rival pack, all six of them, had apparently snuck right by their two experienced members without being seen.  They had then rubbed their scent all over the sleeping areas.  And then they had escaped without leaving any evidence of how they entered their home.  No tracks.  No scents.  Nothing.

The others began to sniff around as well and made the same findings.  Panicked mutterings began to be uttered amongst them.  The pack was quite spooked by this turn of events.  Even if Skytail ordered a confrontation now, his pack would be prone to panic and run at the rival pack's threat display.  He already knew that this engagement was lost.  That did not concern him at the moment, however.  What concerned him were the implications of Vigilant's findings.

Have they angered a pack of ghosts?  Are the Hidden Runners that he was told about as a child true and not simply a child's tale?  He had not felt this much fear since he was a small child.  This changed everything.  A pack that could do this could do anything.  What was stopping this rival pack from killing them in their sleep if they so desired?  No scent, no tracks, and no visual signs.  The original insult was his idea, he noted.  This left him with one raging question in his head.

I have endangered my entire pack.  What have I done?

He then looked at Taunt and Breeze with an apologetic expression.

"We have underestimated our rivals."  He then looked back towards the north entrance, where the two longneck younglings that they had killed laid prone and exposed.  He knew what he had to do.

"We have to make amends..."

Taunt and Breeze both gasped.  Skytail had never backed down to anyone.  Nevertheless, they could not disagree with his reasoning, as they were now facing something that they didn't fully understand.  A pack which could be practically invisible and scent-less was a horrifying threat indeed.

With great sadness and apprehension the pack began to walk towards the two longneck corpses.  There would be a confrontation between the packs today, but not in the way that they had originally foreseen.

They simply hoped that the rival pack would be forgiving...

......

"And if they make this sound:  Rarr!  Rarr!  How do you respond?"

"We make the same call and then click at them?"

"Exactly.  And then?"

"Then we advance in a line and rear our heads back and forth?"

"Yes.  That is how your kind responds to a threat from a rival."

Chomper was going through the finer points of challenge rituals with Littlefoot and the rest of the pack.  It was important that Littlefoot understood what to do, as the rest of the pack would simply follow his lead.  They had to use proper form when and if the other pack met them as disorganization could indicate weakness and invite an attack.  If, however, they performed well then they might be able to avoid a fight or, at the very least, be able to gauge the strengths and weaknesses of the other pack before engaging in battle.  Such battles usually ended when one side fled, but it was still possible that serious injuries could be sustained on both sides.

Chomper had never imagined that he would be going through these lessons with the pack, but yet here he was.  They had to dissuade the other pack from evicting them; otherwise they risked an uncertain future elsewhere.  With no sign of his parents and no allies to call upon they would be in a very desperate situation.  They had to fight for their territory if it came to that.

"What if they apologize?"

That question came from Ducky.  Chomper considered it for a moment.  If their plan worked then it would certainly spook the other pack and perhaps they would try to rectify their actions.  It was a long shot, as Petrie would probably have left some of his scent back at the rival pack's home and thus give away their methods, but it was worth considering.

"Then they would do the greeting call, as I have shown you.  Then they would act submissive, like this..."

Chomper then bowed his head low and walked with a shuffling gait towards Littlefoot.

"They would then offer an offering of some sort."

Littlefoot blinked.  "Then what do I do?"

Chomper shrugged.  "That would be up to you...  You could dictate your terms then.  You are the pack leader."

Cera grunted lightly at that affirmation, but she did not challenge the statement.  Despite her confidence in Littlefoot, she was still uncomfortable with having so much authority in one dinosaur.  Where he could effectively dictate the pack's fate with one word.  To be fair to Littlefoot, he was not quite comfortable with the idea either.

Rarr!  Rarr!

There was the greeting call.  This meant that the other pack was approaching, but it did not indicate their intentions.  Either way, they had to make a strong showing here.

Rarr!  Rarr!

"It sounds like they are by the watering hole!"  Ruby offered.

Littlefoot nodded and seemed to take on a stern appearance.  Upon seeing this change in demeanor, the others took on harsh expressions as well.  It was now time.

"Let's head out.  Remember your displays!"

Petrie took to the air and stayed some distance away from the pack.  He did not want to give away the secret of how they marked their territory to the other pack, as that would defeat the entire purpose of what they had done, so it was agreed earlier that Petrie would stay out of this particular interaction.  Petrie had already done his part.  This was simply between the land walkers now.

With that the pack went out with all six members in a line.  Their steps being synchronized exactly.  Their expressions being fixed on the unseen destination in front of them.  They then returned the call in kind.

Rarr!  Rarr!  Click!  Click!

Step...  Step...  Step...  Step...

Rarr!  Rarr!  Click!  Click!

They continued walking in the direction of the rival pack for several minutes.  All the while, they returned the calls of the rival pack at set intervals and continued walking in step.  They had to show uniformity and power here, Chomper had taught them earlier.  A show of strength here could deter a battle if they did it right.  Likewise, if a battle did occur, then perhaps they could spook the rival pack by their threat display and provoke them into a panicked retreat.  Either way, they had to follow their instincts and training now and be the fierce sharpteeth that they now were.

Finally the tall grass of the lowlands gave way to the shorter grass by this area of the watering hole.  They could now see the rival pack.  It consisted of five fast biters, seemingly not much older than they were.  Each was arrange along a straight line which was now directly in front of their pack.  Their facial expressions gave nothing away in terms of their intentions or motivations.  To the side of the group, two longneck corpses lay prone on the ground.  That could either indicate a peace offering or a display of fighting prowess, as the intentions of the rival pack was not yet known.  Either way, they had to act hard here.

Rarr!  Rarr!

Littlefoot's pack immediately stopped at his sudden call.  The other five stayed behind, while Littlefoot took a single step forward and rose to his full height.  He then stared at the rival pack's leader with unblinking eyes and a fierce expression.  The other five fast biters then began to pace back in forth while making aggressive gestures at the opposing pack.  The dichotomy between the calm and unblinking Littlefoot and his aggressive companions, added to the fearful, statuesque display.  This was something that Chomper had once seen small biters do in a threat display he had witnessed on the island where he and his parents had once lived.  He was unsure if it was appropriate for their respective kinds, but since it was the only one that he had seen from beginning to end he had decided to teach it to the pack.  He hoped that it would be intimidating enough.

The rival pack faltered slightly as the pack performed their display, but otherwise gave no response.  It was the other leader's turn now.

The opposing leader, a greenish-blue fast biter, then advanced a step and stopped for a moment.  The members of the pack held their breath in anticipation of what was about to happen.

Then, with a heavy sigh, he lowered his head in a sign of capitulation and stepped forward slightly in a few shuffled steps.  He did not fall to his knees as a sign of unconditional surrender, but he did signal an end to the day's exchange of threats and reprisals.  He was conceding, in effect, the territory without a fight.

Littlefoot did not change his expression, but rather continued to stare at his counterpart.  Chomper was quite clear that the display should not be broken until words are exchanged.  Accordingly, he hid his satisfaction with the events of the day and retained his outward display of ferocity.

The leader then gestured with his right paw and two of the other fast biters grabbed a hold of the two longnecks and meekly dragged them in front of their leader. So they were peace offerings.  Littlefoot concluded.  This has gone better than I could have hoped.

"We offer this as a sign of reconciliation."  The rival leader said in a tone of voice that communicated both meekness and shame.  It was the tone of voice that one would use if they were unaccustomed to losing.  "The day is yours.  We will honor your territory."

Silence.  Not a single word was spoken as everyone was waiting for Littlefoot's response.  He could very well expel the other pack now and they would have no choice but to accept his terms.  However, no one had asked Littlefoot what he would actually do in this situation.  His response was as much a mystery to his own friends as it was to his rivals.

"Your offer is accepted."  Littlefoot began, choosing his words very carefully.  "What is your name?"

Skytail was surprised to be addressed directly, but he answered after a moment's hesitation.

"Skytail is the name I have earned.  Blueclaw is the name I was given."

Littlefoot nodded.  "I am Seeker."  He then looked at the rival pack's members for a moment before continuing.  "Why did you insult us, Skytail?  Is that the usual way you invite yourselves into someone's home?"

Skytail winced at Littlefoot's stinging rebuke.  He was incensed that this fast biter, who was smaller and undoubtedly younger than he was, had brought him so low.  However, he bit back on his anger.  These fast biters obviously had talents that he could not even begin to fathom.  He would answer the leader's question.

"We... needed a new place to live.  The food was getting scarce...  So we came here."

Littlefoot smiled slightly.  "And you thought that you could displace us?"

Skytail simply nodded.

"What will you do now, Skytail?"

He paused.  He had not actually discussed that matter with his pack mates, but he pretty much knew what he had to do.  With some trepidation, he answered.

"We will leave the lowlands and try our luck elsewhere.  There is nothing left for us here."  

Skytail then began to retreat and rejoined the rest of his pack.  He looked at them apologetically before giving them the signal to retreat.  They then turned their backs to the other pack, a sign of defeat in this context, and began to head away from the watering hole.

"We will eat the longnecks together."

The rival pack stopped where they were as Cera and Spike both looked at Littlefoot as if he had lost his mind.  As Skytail looked back towards Littlefoot with a look of confusion, Littlefoot continued.

"You have shown that you are reasonable, now we will show the same."  Littlefoot began.  "I would much rather have close allies than distant enemies.  If you are willing to ally with us then you may stay at your home."  Littlefoot then offered his paw in a receptive gesture.

"Littlefoot!"  Cera hissed in an angry manner.  What is he doing?!  Her thoughts raged.  They don't deserve an alliance after what they did to us!

Chomper, however, could only smile at Littlefoot's surprise move.  They were inexperienced and they were going to have to leave this area soon anyway.  So if they could gain five permanent allies then it would be worth the extra competition for a few weeks.  An alliance that is vowed, as opposed to an alliance that is simply agreed upon, cannot be broken without those involved losing face.  Chomper was surprised that Littlefoot remembered his talk about that several weeks ago.  It seemed that Littlefoot was listening to his lessons far more than he let on.

Skytail slowly approached Littlefoot as both packs looked on in amazement.  Littlefoot took on a curious expression, but otherwise did not change his stance or demeanor.

Skytail then bit down on his own paw.

Littlefoot blinked.  Chomper had not told him anything about this!

As blood began to trickle from Skytail's paw, he explained.  "I have never made alliances, Seeker.  Alliances mean obligations.  Obligations mean risk."  He then shook his head.  "If I agree to this then it is to the death.  I would expect the same loyalty from you as I expect from my pack... and in turn you can expect the same from us..."

Littlefoot nodded.  "Of course!"

Skytail continued.  "If we do this then we make a vow.  We swear in blood."

Littlefoot paled slightly as Chomper looked on.  Chomper had never gotten to tell him about exactly how alliances were made.  As it was, Chomper was not quite sure how fast biters entered into such arrangements.  But now they knew.  Littlefoot knew that he had to act fast or else it would be seen as a sign of incompetence or weakness.

So hit bit down on his own paw.

Littlefoot ignored the painful sting as blood began to trickle out of the slight wound.  Finally, with a flourish, the two fast biters joined their paws in a show of unity.  

"We will shed blood for one another as we have shed blood today!"  Skytail intoned.

"Until death!"  Littlefoot affirmed.  He was improvising as he did not really know if he was doing the vow correctly or not.

Skytail nodded.  "Until death!"  It seemed that Littlefoot had improvised adequately.

As the two leaders then stepped back from one another, the members of each pack silently reflected upon what had just happened.  Neither of them would ever be the same again.

The former rivals were now allies.


It seems that Littlefoot has made quite the diplomatic maneuver.  Neutralize a potential threat and secure the possibility of future assistance as well.  In the next chapter we get to find out how the packs react to the decision of their respective leaders.

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Awesome :D


So our Pack of Seven now have some alliances,aye? That cool :3. Though I'm curious at the biting their own paws part,I'm curious on how that custom was formed.

Littlefoot really is turning more and more into a full predator,oh if his Grandparents saw this...I don't wanna know what they would think..

Not to mention Bron....or Littlefoot's Mother-she was  killed by a meat eater saving her son from one now her son is a meat eater.

Longneck + Longneck=Fastbiter

Logic :lol.

Sorry in a joking mood right now

No mistakes that I noticed.


This story is getting awfully long :lol,is this even close to being finished? xD



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Thank you for the review Zimba.  :)

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So our Pack of Seven now have some alliances,aye? That cool :3. Though I'm curious at the biting their own paws part,I'm curious on how that custom was formed.

I would imagine it would have formed as a symbolic thing.  They might have to shed blood in battle in order to honor the alliance, so they signify that by drawing blood in the ritual.   :yes I based this off of the traditional "blood brothers" ceremonies that many tribal cultures have.

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Littlefoot really is turning more and more into a full predator,oh if his Grandparents saw this...I don't wanna know what they would think..

Yeah...  Littlefoot's more imperious behavior is going to be a major focus of a future chapter.  He was always a more conciliatory leader, listening to what everyone else had to say before reaching a decision (well, at least after the first film).  But now he has taken on a much more forceful leadership style.  Some of the other members of the pack may not take kindly to that...

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This story is getting awfully long :lol ,is this even close to being finished? xD

Let me see...  We are on Chapter 27, so we only have about 46 chapters to go.  :lol But the second Act is about halfway over.  :yes


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Quote from: rhombus,Apr 30 2014 on  03:16 AM

Let me see...  We are on Chapter 27, so we only have about 46 chapters to go.  :lol But the second Act is about halfway over.  :yes
 
Only 46?

Oh thats not much at all,man this story is going to be shortest fic ever-sarcastic Nahla is sarcastic. Both made up dino version and real life human version.


I already left a review for this chapter on FF.net but posting here because I have something to add to it.

Is it sad it took me this long to catch on that the blue text is thoughts and the orange is like sound and stuff? xD

I can read AN about things like that 100 times and I still won't catch on to it *face palm*.

Anyway,great job

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^  Thanks for the review on FF.net, I will include a response when I post the next chapter.  With regards to the 46 chapters yet to come... Yeah...   If I follow my current schedule then this story will be finished sometime around Christmas.  :yes


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Chapter 28   Raid on the longneck herd

“Where the battle rages, there the loyalty of the soldier is proved.”
― Martin Luther


Nothing else was said for several moments as the members of each pack slowly took in what had happened.  Both of their leaders had agreed to a blood vow.  The most sacred of alliances.  Neither pack could back out of their obligations, barring mutual assent, without losing face in sharptooth society.  Their fates were intertwined now.

Finally after several moments, Littlefoot turned to his pack and gestured for them to meet him in the clearing between the two packs.  As Littlefoot's pack began to converge on his position, Skytail gestured for his pack to do the same.  Before long all of the ten fast biters and Chomper were congregating around one another and standing around awkwardly.  No one seemed to know how to properly begin to socialize with those who shortly before were their rivals.

Finally, however, the bolder members of each pack decided to take action.

Cera looked towards the other pack and immediately fixated upon the orange form of Taunt.  This was the same insufferable dinosaur that had insulted and provoked her during her first week of being a sharptooth.  This was the same dinosaur who had intentionally rubbed his scent upon her sleeping place.  His smirk and smug demeanor were imprinted upon her mind.  However, none of that smugness was visible now.  Only stunned silence and confusion.  Cera found it refreshing to finally see him on the defensive and this gave her the confidence to make the first move.

"So Taunt."  She began.  "We meet again..."

Taunt was startled at the yellow fast biter calling him by name and his scent conveyed that surprise.  Cera couldn't contain her smile at his change in demeanor.  He had made her feel fear at his pack's show of strength a month before and she was greatly appreciative of the change in roles.  Now they were the ones in a dominant position.

"Yes."  Taunt answered meekly.  "It seems that you beat us at our own game."

Spike spoke up at this.  "Someone urinated where I slept.  I would hardly call that a game!"

Littlefoot sighed, before trying to restrain Spike's anger.  He was still enraged by the insult from the other pack.  "Spike, they have apologized and we did get our revenge..."

Spike grunted, but then retreated.  "I know.  I know.  But it still angers me..."

"That is understandable."  Skytail offered, before continuing.  "You have been more than generous with us by offering us an alliance.  We will honor your generosity with good deeds of our own..."

Breeze and Vigilant did not say anything, and were instead observing the exchange in silence.  It appeared that despite the formal agreement to ally that there was still lingering misgivings between the packs.  This was understandable, of course, as deeds confirmed good intentions, not words.  Each of them hoped that these misgivings would eventually dissipate.

Spike paused for a moment, before responding.  "Very well...  Let's eat... Perhaps that will improve our spirits."

Ducky and Chomper both laughed at this.  

"Eating always improve your spirits, Spike.  Yep, yep, yep!"  Ducky affirmed.

Spike grunted in annoyance, but no venom was in his vocalization.  He was very aware that Ducky's words were true.

Scarflank then responded to this line of conversation.  "Hmm...  Sounds like a fast biter close to my heart."  He then continued his thoughts on the matter.  "I agree.  Let's eat!"

With laughter and polite conversation resuming between the various members, they all began to migrate towards the dead bodies of the longnecks.  In a ceremony that would be recognizable to most other sharptooth packs, their new alliance would again be cemented through the partaking of a joint dinner.

......

The two packs separated into two mixed groups in the process of dining upon the longnecks.  Ducky, Spike, Scarflank, and Vigilant met up to eat the female longneck, whereas the others focused upon the male longneck.  However, after nearly half an hour of eating a rather familiar sound greeted Littlefoot's ears.  

The sound of flapping wings from some distance away.

Littlefoot cursed himself under his breath.  He had forgotten about Petrie, as he had told him to avoid being seen in order to keep up the ruse with the other pack.  If he had not been able to secure an alliance with the other pack then he might consider keeping up the subterfuge a bit longer, but as it was...  He decided to break the silence.

"Come on down, Petrie...  I think that you need to be introduced to the others."

Petrie flew down slowly and landed on Littlefoot's right shoulder.  Skytail and Vigilant looked somewhat surprised by the newcomer as they had thought that the entire pack had already assembled.  Taunt, however, recognized this flyer from his failed attempt to protect their shelter.  

"I remember you!  You flew around our home before the others came..."  Taunt thought aloud.

Petrie said nothing for a moment, but then replied simply.  "Yes.  That me."

Taunt then placed a single claw under his chin and thought for a moment.  There was no scent trail to indicate where the other sharptooth had traveled in order to find their sleeping areas.  The others were also not seen in transit.  Perhaps that was because the others weren't responsible..."

"You!  You were the one who marked our home!"  At Taunt's accusation, the other members of the packs looked over to listen to the conversation.  All of the members of Littlefoot's pack knew that their trick had now ran its course.  They listened with trepidation as the waited to see how that would affect relations between the packs.  "But how?"

Petrie looked towards Littlefoot, being unsure if he should say, but upon Littlefoot's nod he decided to answer.  "Me grab stick that all of the others marked.  Then me mark your home."  As Taunt shook his head in disbelief and Skytail stood wide-mouthed at the simplicity of the plan that had tricked him, Petrie added.  "Me scare you good."

All of the assembled sharpteeth stood in complete silence.  The only sounds which permeated the scene were the croaking of various amphibians and the buzzing of flying buzzers.  Everyone was waiting for something to happen.

That was when Skytail laughed.

Taunt was flabbergasted for a moment.  How could the leader of his pack be so flippant and jolly about being showed up by such a simple trick?  They had made a solemn vow to a pack that they had believed to be superior to them, whereas the pack in question had simply outsmarted them!  However, the more that he thought it about the more sense that it made.  This pack may be lacking in experience, but they certainly had some intelligence to them.  They had tricked a superior foe in order to avoid a battle and their leader had allied his pack with their foe in order to gain an ally.  It was brilliant really...  Had they had not been tricked then they would have never made such a diplomatic decision.  Now that Taunt thought about the situation, it actually was quite humorous.

As Taunt also began to laugh, the others joined in as well.  Finally, after several moments Skytail began to speak again.  "So you aren't some amazing scent-less rouges that can strike in the middle of the day...  You are just a bit too smart for your own good!"

Littlefoot blinked.  He was still unsure whether to take the laughter as a sign of levity or mockery.  For that reason, he gave a safe answer that betrayed neither smugness nor fear.  "We have been told that, yes."

Skytail continued to smile.  "Well, a little wisdom is more important than a lot of strength, or so the old songs say...  I still think that we have done well to have you as allies."  

Littlefoot looked relieved at Skytail's declaration.  Skytail then turned towards the flyer.

"We haven't had many dealings with flyers...  They tend to keep with their own."  Skytail admitted.  "How did you meet up with the others, Petrie?"

Petrie paused for a moment before answering.  "Um...  Well, it be long story..."  He cleared his throat and decided to give a description of how he actually met the gang, minus the details that would be hard to explain.  "Mommy and siblings fly away and Petrie couldn't fly.  That when Littlefoot and Ducky find Petrie!"  Skytail looked surprised.  Probably because Skytail was wondering why the other two dinosaurs didn't eat the helpless flyer.  He didn't realize that they all were herbivores back then...  "We find new home together and find others later!"  He answered quickly.

Skytail nodded.  "Well, it is nice to meet you, Petrie.  Having a flyer should prove quite useful to both packs!"  Littlefoot nodded at this as Petrie's worth had been proven many times over since their change.  "You can see things that we land-walkers cannot."

Littlefoot affirmed this.  "Yes, Petrie has done a lot for all of us."  But then, realizing that Petrie was probably quite hungry since he had been absent from the feast, he offered a clawed paw and pointed it at the longneck closest to him.  "Go ahead and eat, Petrie!  After all, you are the main reason that we are all here together.  You must be hungry!"

Petrie gave a grateful nod, before digging into the exposed torso of the dismembered longneck.  He was more accustomed to eating ground fuzzies, but he had to admit that land-walkers tasted much better.  As his head was now covered in viscera, he realized that he was perhaps a bit hungrier than he had originally suspected.  He had skipped two of his meals in order to trick the other pack...

As Petrie began to tear into the longneck, Chomper reflected for a moment.  They had accomplished quite a lot in one short day.  They had responded intelligently to a challenge by a rival pack, they had turned their rivals into allies, and they had even struck fear into the two egg-stealers that had harassed him during his infancy...  Wait!  The egg-stealers!  In the confusion over the challenge and its aftermath, they had totally forgotten to tell the others about that incident.  Now that their new allies were also here this would be an opportune time to bring up the issue.

"Um..."  Chomper began.  "The food has been getting scarcer around here lately.  But we did catch up with some interesting acquaintances today..."  With those sentences out of his mouth, Chomper looked at Littlefoot.  He was going to let Littlefoot try to explain this one to the others.  After all, if it had been up to Chomper then they would be eating egg-stealer right now...

Littlefoot looked a bit apprehensive.  "Ah...  Yeah..."  He then looked towards his pack members and began with his explanation.  He figured that they would be harder to convince than the other pack.  "We met up with those egg-stealers from when Chomper was born..."  He didn't even have a chance to finish the sentence.

"You killed them and you didn't tell us?!"  Cera inquired.  

Oh crap. Littlefoot thought to himself.  This is not going to end well...  He looked over to Chomper for a moment, who simply shrugged in response with a slight smirk on his face.  Littlefoot had proposed a more diplomatic solution to the egg-stealers, whereas Chomper was still inclined to finish the hunt, albeit with some reservations.  As a consequence, Chomper seemed quite content to watch the others berate Littlefoot on his idea. Damn you, Chomper!

Cera noticed the pause and asked.  "You let them get away?!"

Littlefoot sighed.  "We decided..."  Chomper crossed his forelimbs and shook his head.  "I decided..."  Littlefoot corrected.  "That we could get more food if we worked together with them."

"What?!"  Cera asked.  She was almost too surprised to be enraged.  What had that crazy dinosaur gotten them into now?  "Who do you plan on allying with next, Littlefoot?  Screech and Thud?"  She retorted sarcastically.  She did not notice Skytail look away uncomfortable or Taunt taking ona morose expression for a moment.

"If we had killed them then they would only feed us for a few days, but if we help them get the longneck eggs then they could feed us for much longer."  Littlefoot explained.  "One of them is injured and I have their scent.  They know that trying to flee will be a fatal mistake."

Cera just stood there stunned and stared at Littlefoot.  She didn't even know where to begin.  First, their leader had decided to ally the pack with the same dinosaurs that had marked their home.  Then, he decides to ally with the egg-stealers who had terrorized them many seasons ago.  She then looked in Chomper's direction.  He had been the most wronged by those two egg-stealers.  Surely he had an opinion about all of this.

"Chomper?"  She began.  "They tried to eat you as an egg.  Why would you agree to this?"

Chomper looked at Cera for a moment.  "We will get more food out of this and..."  He pondered for a moment, thinking back to the incident itself.  "Back then they were just trying to find food.  Can we really blame them for that?  We have to kill for a living as well."

Cera took a deep breath.  She supposed that she couldn't argue with Chomper's logic and if he were willing to put the past aside then she had little argument to not do the same.  "Fine!  But, don't expect me to be happy about this!"

The other pack was watching this scene play out with a mix of curiosity and amusement.  The opposing leader was obeyed, but it seemed that he did permit dissent in the group.  This was a rather odd combination, but since he was obeyed it did not convey any weakness to the other pack.  Skytail supposed that in order to lead a diverse pack such as Littlefoot's a unique leadership style was probably necessary.  Makes me glad that I only have to manage fast biters!  He thought.  We are hard enough to manage!

"Cera, I don't suspect they expect you to ever be happy."

Speaking of hard to manage, there was Taunt giving a sarcastic remark to Cera.  As Cera took on an aggressive stance and the members of the two packs began to laugh, Skytail knew that Taunt had gotten the desired response.

Cera pointed at the orange fast biter.  "Don't you start, Taunt!"

Deciding to head off a possible retort from Taunt, Skytail then asked.  "So... What exactly is the plan?"

Littlefoot smiled, as he gestured for the others to gather around him.

"This is what I had in mind..."

......

Seven days later - during the New Moon

Strut was walking towards the meeting place where Chomper and the brown fast biter had instructed them to meet when the moon was no longer visible in the sky.  He had been walking slowly in the previous few days, but was now back to full speed.  It seemed that his leg was only severely sprained, but no bones were broken.  A very fortunate outcome for Strut, as a broken bone in the Mysterious Beyond almost certainly meant death as the injured could not escape from predators.

Ozzy was walking behind his brother as they made their way towards the assigned spot.  Normally he would be out ahead of Strut and ranting on and on about what they were about to do.  However he was in a much more contemplative mood today.  After nearly losing his life the week before, he had begun to reflect upon their situation.  They had been wandering for years now after they had been evicted from their herd of egg-stealers.  Their parents were on the wrong side of a dominance dispute for the leadership of the herd.  In the aftermath of the dispute, Strut and Ozzy had found themselves orphans and abandoned by the herd that had severed as their family for the first ten years of their lives.  Ever since that dark day, he had been leading his younger brother through the wilds of the Mysterious Beyond in search of eggs.  However, his fixation on that glorious food was another story entirely...

"Do you think that we are close, Ozzy?"  Strut asked suddenly, cutting off Ozzy's thoughts.  "I don't remember exactly where we were."  

Ozzy blinked a few times before responding.  "You don't remember?"  He asked in incredulity.  There was no venom in his voice, just surprise at his brother's lack of remembrance.

"Well, I was kind of more worried about running at the time..."  Strut answered flatly.

Ozzy had to chuckle at this.  "Yeah...  I suppose that is as good reason as any..."  He then looked around him for a few moments in order to ascertain his location.  "Actually, I think that we are almost there..."  He ran ahead for several feet, before stopping.  "Yes!  Up there is where we met... them..."  He spoke the last word in a whisper.  He was still uncomfortable about running errands for sharpteeth, but that was preferable to the alternative.  

The two brothers then began to sit and wait for the sharpteeth to arrive with their instructions.

Ozzy still couldn't believe it, however.  The purple sharptooth from his past had come back to haunt them in a very literal sense.  Had he known that that much trouble would ensue from one egg, then he would have left it alone.  It seemed that their adversary... and now boss... did have a certain kindness to him, however.  He had agreed to let him and Strut live after Ozzy offered his life in exchange for his brother's.  The sharptooth had risked himself as an infant to save his longneck friend...  Perhaps that deep-seated empathy was there from the beginning?  

Ozzy shook his head to clear away that tangled web of thoughts that assaulted his mind.  In either case, they were here now.  They would have to do their job for the purple sharptooth and his frightening boss, the brown fast biter.  Ozzy had no doubt that he would kill them both if they failed.  Ozzy had no idea that Littlefoot was actually the one who was their salvation, whereas Chomper had quite the opposite opinion.

Silence permeated the scene for several moments until they were both greeted by an unseen voice.

"It is time, egg-stealers."

The imperious voice roared in a commanding fashion and both egg-stealers jumped up in response.  They could not see the source of the voice, as its owner was obviously in the darkness, but they could hear him well enough.  The brown fast biter had returned.

"Al...  Alright.  How do you want us to do this?"  Ozzy asked in fear.

The voice chuckled slightly.  A horrifying and improper sound coming from a sharptooth.  The brothers began to tremble.  "We will make a diversion.  You will know when it happens.  That is when you will begin taking the eggs."  He paused for a moment.  "Our flyer will point out to you where to drop off the eggs.  Do you understand?"

Ozzy gave a timid nod in response, whereas Strut offered a muffled "yes."

"Good."  The voice stated simply.  "We will begin soon..."

And then as suddenly as he had arrived, he was gone.  Both brothers looked at one another in dismay.  This was it.  They had no choice but to do as they were told.  The brothers then began to run towards the outskirts of the longneck sleeping areas.  The tall grass would give them cover as they waited for the sharpteeth to make their move.  It was up to them now...

......

Petrie examined the scene as he flew over the egg-stashing site.  They had found a crevice in the ground that was relatively close by the longneck herd in order to hide the eggs.  The idea of hiding the eggs at a relatively close site was the invention of Ruby.  Petrie remembered her words quite well.

My dad was hurt when I stole the threehorn egg.  But he wouldn't have been injured if he had somewhere to hide it.  We need to hide the eggs if we don't want to be hurt!

It was getting quite dark, however, and very soon he would be unable to effectively fly or, more importantly, safely land.  This was especially true since the night circle was not out to provide illumination.  When that happened it would be up to the others to manage the egg-napping expedition.  He hoped that the two egg-stealers would appear soon so that he could give them the sign...

Wait!  There they are! Petrie could just begin to see the two tan-colored dinosaurs come into view.  He gave a slight squawk and dived towards the ground in a precise manner, before again rising into the sky.  He repeated this several times so that the egg-stealers would get the point.  Finally, after the third dive, he looked back towards the duo.

He could clearly see the lead egg-stealer nodding in his direction.

Good!  They finally get point. Petrie dryly thought.

The flyer then flew back in the direction of the pack's home.  His part in the day's activity was finished.

......

Littlefoot peeked above the tall grass and could see that Petrie was flying back towards the pack's hideout.  That meant that the egg-stealers were now aware of the egg-stashing site and that they were ready to begin.  With a slight smile on his face, he decided that it was time to give the order.

"All right, guys!  Let's do this!"

The others wasted no time in complying with Littlefoot's order.  The planning of the diversion had involved every member of the pack and each had contributed their own ideas and suggestions.  They had even done a surveillance mission as a group, a first for them as they usually split into smaller groups, and investigated the habits of the herd.  That was an oddly communal and relaxing experience for them all.  Almost like how they felt as leaf-eaters when they played the sky puffy game... except with far more gruesome consequences.  During their surveillance mission they had identified a narrow crevice that would serve quite well as a hiding spot for the stolen eggs, as it was only a few moments away from where the herd slept.  They had covered it with twigs and dried grass in preparation for its use by the egg-stealers.  After several hours they had also clearly identified the weak points of the herd and the optimal places to strike.  They had determined everything except for...

"Attack the leader or the children?"

That question was from Cera.  They had not really formalized a specific target in the attack, but rather had only narrowed it down to two possibilities: the Old One or the children.  Either one would be sure to rouse the herd and distract attention away from the eggs for a few moments.  It all depended on where each target was in the herd.  They needed to strike away from the nesting sites, so that the herd members would congregate away from the eggs.  

Littlefoot rose again.  The large form of the Old One was clearly visible very near where the egg-stealers were supposed to be congregated.  That would not do.  They would need to strike at the children, who would be closer to the center of the herd.

"The children."

As soon as the words left his mouth, Littlefoot paled at the implications of what he had said.  Just a month ago, he had been forced to kill Rhett in order to feed himself and his pack.  At that time the decision to kill had nearly broken him and the others, and the reality of eating the flesh of another dinosaur had changed them beyond recognition.  Now he was effortlessly giving orders to the rest of the pack to attack children, including his friend Ali, in order to secure eggs for the pack and their allies.  True, he did not plan on completing the attack as it was a diversion, but the implications were eerily similar.  He and the rest of the pack had become the sort of thing that they had feared as leaf-eaters.  Brutal killers who would even kill children in order to meet their needs.

He shook his head.  Lamenting what could not be changed would not fill their bellies, nor would it keep them safe.  They had to kill now in order to survive.  If the leaf-eaters were stupid enough to let their guard down when the attack came then they deserved what they got...  With a hardened resolve, he commenced the attack in an overt and loud fashion.  They had to attract as much attention as possible.

Roar!

Screams emanated from the children who were congregated in the center of the herd.  Ali was not anywhere to be seen, Littlefoot noted.  Perhaps she was sleeping by her mother instead of with the other children of the herd?  In either case, their attack had evoked the desired response.  The adults rose up in a flurry of activity and the children proceeded to run towards them.  The pack was well away from the children who were congregated in the center of the herd, but rather close to the adults who were congregated in the periphery.  They had to get out of here before they got trampled.

"Run around the herd!  Keep your distance from the adults!"  Littlefoot yelled.

The pack did as they were told, as several of the adults gave chase.  With many of the adults forming a circle around the children and several others chasing the pack around the periphery of the herd, the egg-stealers had a prime chance to make their move.

It was up to them now...

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"Twelve...  Thirteen..."  Ozzy intoned as he and his brother dropped their cargo into the crevice set aside for that purpose.  The pack's diversion was working wonderfully.  They had stolen all seven eggs from one nest and six from another.  Their mothers had apparently left to protect their other children in the communal crËche.  In protecting their firstborns they had unknowingly sacrificed their unborn.

"Let's get some more, Strut!  We are doing well today!"  Ozzy bragged in a triumphant fashion.  They had never had this much luck when they searched for eggs as a pair.  Perhaps working with sharpteeth wasn't that bad...

"But what if they see us, Ozzy?  Surely we have enough?"  Strut meekly asked.  He was glad to see his brother so happy.  However, he feared that their luck could come to an end.  The hiding spot for the eggs was large enough to secure eggs and hide them from prying eyes, but they would not be effective at hiding dinosaurs.  If they were caught in the open then they wouldn't stand much of a chance.

"Two more, Strut!"  His brother encouraged.  "Then we can call it a day!"

Strut sighed, but deferred to his brother's wishes.  "Ah...  Okay, Ozzy."  

Strut supposed that his brother may have a point with his fanatical drive to catch eggs this time.  They simply had to get enough to feed the pack, however large that may be.  Strut gulped at that thought.  Hopefully their catch would be enough.  Otherwise they might be on the menu in the place of the missing eggs...

"Hurry up, Strut!"  Ozzy hissed silently.  "We need to hurry before the longneck's notice us!"

Strut snapped out of his thoughts.  He had to focus on what he was doing.

"Right, Ozzy!"  He answered.

Ozzy nodded.  "Let's go!"

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The pack was running as fast as they could away from the longneck who was trailing them.  He was not nearly as fast as the sharpteeth, but he was quickly tiring them out.  Fast biters were made for speed, but not endurance.  And when the situation of Chomper was factored into the equation.  Well...

"Littlefoot..."  Chomper sucked in a breath.  He was clearly exhausted.  "I think it's time..."

Littlefoot looked back quickly and saw that Chomper was exhausted.  It was time to bring the mission to a close.

"Right."  Littlefoot affirmed.  "We will lead him away, Chomper.  You run back home."

With that Littlefoot gave a downward gesture with his forelimbs and the pack slowed somewhat.  This gave Chomper the opportunity to outrun the pack in his trek home.  The longneck then refocused his attention on the remaining members of the pack who, were from his perspective, threatening the children of the herd.  The fast biters could easily outrun him, however.

"Now we finish!"  Littlefoot declared.  This meant that they all had set instructions to follow now that they had planned during the days before this hunt.  "Ruby?  Cera?"  Littlefoot checked to make sure that they were ready.

"Right!"  They both declared nearly simultaneously.  

With a sudden flurry of speed, both fast biters broke away from the pack at great velocity.  They were running in the fastest sprint they could muster.  Their mission was to recall the egg-stealers while the rest of the pack ran at a slower speed so as not to alert the longneck following them to the existence of the egg-stealers.  If the egg-stealers were discovered then the entire plan could backfire.

Suddenly a panicked scream emanated from up ahead.

"Egg-stealers!  They are stealing the eggs!"

"Oh crap!"  Littlefoot yelled.  He could see Cera and Ruby make exasperated head gestures in front of him.  No doubt they were having the same thought that he was.  He now had two choices.  He could abandon the egg-stealers to their fate and simply reclaim the eggs from the hiding spot later...  Or he could help out his minions.  A momentary battle raged in the mind of the former longneck.  He knew full well that he owed the egg-stealers nothing because the demands that he had placed upon them were simply reparations for the wrongs that they had committed against him and Chomper so long ago, but despite that he couldn't shake his sense of personal responsibility.  He had made an agreement with them and they had honored their side of the bargain.  It did not matter to Littlefoot that they were coerced into honoring the arrangement, the fact that an agreement was made was sufficient to make him feel ethically responsible.  He would help the egg-stealers, but he would not endanger the rest of his pack in the process.

"Everyone go home!"  He gave the evacuation order.  At his call all of the members of the pack, including Cera and Ruby, turned towards home and sprinted.  

He would do this alone.

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"Run!"  Strut yelled, as the two egg-stealers fled from the advancing herd.  

It had all started with a misstep from Ozzy.  He had grabbed another egg, but then tripped over a twig in his haste.  The sound of the falling orb cracking on the rocky soil was enough to alert the nearby longnecks.  It seemed that they had pushed their luck too far and now they were about to pay for their mistake.

"Get them!"  A large male longneck yelled.  That was Brako, the same hot-headed longneck that had chased Littlefoot during his scouting run on the herd over a month before.  Now, however, his forceful attack was entirely justified.  He had identified the true threat to the herd while many of the others were still fixated upon the diversion.  Many of the other herd members, including the mothers with eggs, were now sprinting towards the hapless duo.  They were quickly gaining on them.

"They're too fast!"  Ozzy screamed.  "Where can we hide?!"

That was when they heard the sound of crashing grass immediately beside them.  It was the brown fast biter!

"Follow me and hurry!"  Littlefoot screamed.

The two egg-stealers wasted no time in following their would-be savior into the unknown depths of the tall grass.  This provided them with some cover, but not much, as the tall longnecks could still see the trail that they made in the vegetation.  The longnecks were still gaining on them.  It would be over very soon...

Roar!

Suddenly the sound of growls and roars rose from some distance away.  

"Sharpteeth!  Guard the children!"  Littlefoot heard the Old One bellow from far away.  Brako, who was leading the group chasing the trio, stopped giving chase for a moment as he was uncertain what to do.  Should he continue to chase these egg-stealers or help confront the sharpteeth?

The angry mothers were not so conflicted, however.  They were still in a rage at losing their precious unborn children.  Children who would more than likely never even have a chance to hatch now.  "Keep after the egg-stealers!"  One of them yelled.  "My babies!"  Another lamented at her lost eggs.  At their prompting, he resumed his chase...

Roar!

Littlefoot recognized those roars.  It was from Skytail's pack!  They were not supposed to be part of tonight's mission, although Littlefoot had alerted them of it in advance.  They must have honored their alliance when they discovered that their counterparts were in trouble.  Littlefoot smiled.  Skytail was as good as his word.  It seemed that he had chosen well in making this pack allied with his.

"Way to go, guys!"  Littlefoot whispered under his breath.  They may have just given them the chance that they needed in order to escape.  The longnecks were still hot on their tails, but the distance between them had widened.  Perhaps just enough to reach the safety of the pack's cave.  That was if the two egg-stealers could keep up...

"Hurry up!"  Littlefoot yelled.  "We're almost there!"

......

"Perhaps we should go get him!  Otherwise something else might get him!"

Ruby and the others were huddled in their cave as Littlefoot had directed.  They had run all the way to the cave itself before realizing that their leader was not with them.  They had begun to suspect that he may have returned for the egg-stealers, although they were split on whether they should violate his orders and search for him or not.  This resulted in the argument that they were having right now.

"But he told us to go home.  He did.  He did."  Ducky replied.  

"We know that he is faster than the egg-stealers."  Spike mentioned.  "Even if they get crushed, Littlefoot can escape."

"But we have to help him!"  Chomper yelled.  With the possibility of Littlefoot being injured, his mannerisms returned to that of an over-excitable child.  He couldn't bear the possibility of something happening to Littlefoot.

"I am sure that he will be fine, Chomper."  Cera replied.  "But perhaps Petrie should fly?  Maybe you could see something?"

Petrie shook his head.  "It too dark.  Me will not see anything."

Ruby placed her paw on her chin in a ponderous expression.  "Well maybe we could..."

She then paused as she and the others could hear the sounds of... something... outside.  As they were in a cave, the sound lacked the clarity that it would have in an open environment.  Only the low-pitched sounds from the outside reverberated through the ground into the cave.  It made a very distinct sound.

Thump!  Thump!  Thump!

"Oh, I don't like-ed the sound of that!"  Ducky lamented.  She didn't know what that was but she knew that it probably wasn't good.

Thump!  Thump!  Thump!

"I agree.  It doesn't sound... OOF!!!"

Ruby's words were cut off as suddenly a brown fast biter landed right on top of her.  It was Littlefoot!  Perhaps she shouldn't have sat so close to the cave's narrow entrance?

"Where did he go?  Ahhh!!!"  

The two egg-stealers then fell through the opening and landed on the two dinosaurs.  Rolling off of them, they eventually came to rest beside a rather familiar purple sharptooth.  There was silence for a moment until the entire earth seemed to shake.

Crash!

The entire cave began to lurch violently as some of the loose rocks on its low ceiling began to crumble and fall.  The small rocks and dust on the ground of the cave also began to rise and fall with the sudden movement.  Initially the dinosaurs thought it was an earthshake, something that they had experienced little of since they had left the valley, but a new sound made it very clear that it was not an earthshake causing the violent movement.

Crash!  

"Damn egg-stealers!"  

Crash!  

"Why!"  

It was the anguished mothers of the captured eggs.  They could not enter the cave where the pack had taken refuge, nor could they probably see its exact entrance.  But nonetheless, they were taking out their grief and anger on the ground where they saw their tormentors fall.  Their children were gone and there was nothing that they could do about it.  After a few moments, they could hear some more commotion outside of the cave.

"If you wouldn't have stopped, we could have got them!"

"I am terribly sorry...  But the children..."

Smack!  

It seemed that the mothers had turned their aggression onto something else.  The pack then heard the sounds of loud footsteps running, which seemed to get weaker and weaker as their creators fled from the scene.

After a few moments of silence, Littlefoot looked up at the members of the pack.  Spike, Ducky, and Cera looked surprised, whereas Ruby looked outright angry, with both of her forelimbs clinched against her sides.  Chomper, meanwhile, had an expression of poorly restrained irritation.  Littlefoot could almost predict Chomper's thoughts at this very moment.  First you save them even though I told you we should eat them... and now you risk your life to save them? He would definitely have to talk to Chomper a bit more later.

Ozzy then spoke, looking up at the irritated purple sharptooth.  "I never thought I would be happy to see your face!"  He then laid his head down, obviously trying to regain his bearings after his desperate flight from danger and violent crash.  It was probably for the best that he did not see Chomper's facial expression after Ozzy spoke those words...

Littlefoot then smiled, deciding that he should probably be the one to break the silence.  After all, he was going to hear the pack's complaints and disagreements anyway...

"So...  That could have gone better!"  Littlefoot affirmed.

Most of the others groaned in response.  They had achieved their objectives, but at great risk to themselves.  It went without saying that if they had many more incidents like the one of that night, then their lifespans would be rather short.  They needed to make adjustments in their strategy if they were to survive.

There was also the matter of Littlefoot's actions as of late...

With the leader's response providing tacit approval for discussion amongst the pack, a yellow fast biter came forward to speak her peace on the subject.  

"Let me tell you what I think..."


I hope everyone enjoys the latest installment.  In the next chapter the pack is going to let Littlefoot know their opinions on his leadership style as of late...  Poor, poor Littlefoot...  There will also be a fateful conversation which will be overheard by an unexpected visitor...

Find out what happens in Chapter 29: An overheard conversation.


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Review of Chapter 27:

I can imagine that marking someone else's home with one's scent is a bad move... That's like placing a "stink bomb" in the room of your siblings :DD
Taunt seems to see the possible trouble caused by their actions... and he does show some compassion after all...

Oh, the Gang sure is very angry. I'm especially amazed that Spike doesn't lack Cera's bloodlust at all... Overall, the conversation is very interesting to read :yes
Littlefoot and Ruby come up with a brilliant plan (as I was reading the discussion, I came to the same conclusion as the two...). While I'd absolutely LOVE a fight, I know that it's more than unwise to start one...

Petrie did it! Now they'll be pissed off :lol And as you wrote, Petrie's actions indicate a mysterious enemy. I'm very excited to see how this continues...

Ah, very nice... Petrie has done a good job as the other pack is utterly scared and impressed :smile Now I might have a clue where this is leading to...

And I was right (guess why? :p) However, I didn't quite expect this event to occur the way you have shown here :) I like the fact that those fastbiters seem to have rituals for almost everything... and you are always able to make them unique and reasonable, yep, yep, yep!
Littlefoot has shown more maturity here than I ever saw in any fanfiction so far. His diplomatic approach of the challange was a great idea and I'm sure it'll be worth it... for the time being :)

I hope my next review will follow very soon. Good chapter!

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"I don't like this! Nope, nope, nope!" Ducky responded angrily.
Ducky would say "do not" instead of "don't...
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"Yeah!" For once Cera agreed with the rose-colored fast biter. "How do we show those morons whose boss?!"
It should write either "who is" or, more likely, "who's" instead of "whose"...
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Most sharptooth try to avoid them if possible."
Sharpteeth...
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Full-grown...
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Thanks for the review.  :) I will make the corrections in a few moments.  For some reason FF.net is not cooperating with me at the moment.

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Oh, the Gang sure is very angry. I'm especially amazed that Spike doesn't lack Cera's bloodlust at all...

Oh yeah...  The fact that someone has urinated in his sleeping area has pushed him to the limit.  It is bad when Cera wants to fight someone and Spike's reaction is pretty much "Sounds like a good idea!" :p  Had Littlefoot and Ruby not come up with the more diplomatic idea then there would have been hell to pay.  The gang was ready for a fight.

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I like the fact that those fastbiters seem to have rituals for almost everything... and you are always able to make them unique and reasonable, yep, yep, yep!

Thanks.  I wanted to show that with greater intelligence and socialization comes more complex social rituals.   :yes Often these rituals are used in order to smooth over the more problematic or distasteful aspects of a culture's existence (corporal punishment, war, etc.) and with the fast biters are no exception.

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I hope my next review will follow very soon. Good chapter!

I look forward to it.  :)


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Poor Littlefoot,must not be easy leading a fastbiter pack,let alone starting attacks on other dinosaurs for prey,even worse the herd of his own friends.

I wonder if you plan for the pack to bump into Bron's herd in the future and if so would Littlefoot willingly make an attack on the herd of his own father? Hmm...


Good chapter,a short little post from this  time because my mind is else where going 'la di da di da'.

Looking forward to see what happens next.


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So the packs start their first verbal exchanges and have dinner... and Spike is hungry :p
Taunt accepts Cera's pack as the superior... Now I wonder how well the alliance will work out.

So Petrie is introduced to the other pack as well. It is quite remarkable how much such a vow must be worth because I, personally, would have felt betrayed :smile They take it with humour, appreciating the advantages a flyer could mean to them just as much as Petrie's friends.

Ah, the Gang (and the other pack) are finally told about the two Eggstealers :smile Cera's reaction is just the expected sarcastical comment she'd always make... and she seems to like Taunt (being sarcastical myself :p).
Chomper makes a valid statement by claiming that the eggstealers only had to feed themselves just like they have to and, more importantly, understanding this.

Strut seems to be cured... good for them :p That way, Ozzy and Strut can do as they are told without the obstacle of a hurting leg...
You tell us some background information about the two stealers and I think it is very reasonable a story.
Another note: Littlefoot doesn't seem to be treating them well, hehe.

Their strategy is smart... Either the kids or the weakest ---> The Old One. Ruby has a good point too.
And you really are putting this very familiar herd on the menu again... how dare you? :D They want to live on and you're going to have the two packs take their eggs and possibly their already hatched children or even some elder's lives. I shall name you the most evil rhombus, yes, yes, yes!
Back on topic: Littlefoot does show concerns (for Ali in particular) but he's been on the other side for too long to let them distract him from doing what he has to do :)

Wow, Ozzy and Strut are quite successful in stealing the eggs from the Longneck herd. Maybe the alliance with the carnivores will be of persisting advantage for the stealers ;)

Ohh, the Gang are cowards :p though sometimes it is wiser to retreat and this is such a situation...
I'm quite amazed that Littlefoot comes to Ozzy and Strut's rescue. It is also remarkable that Skytail's pack supports the retreat despite not being asked to.

Phew, they made it. Though I wonder what you are pointing at in your author's note :unsure Doesn't seem like there's a happy chapter ahead... after all the hunt didn't go well

Good chapter, even though it lacked of action a little (a hunt usually means action after all ^^

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As he head was now covered in viscera, he realized that he was perhaps a bit hungrier than he had originally suspected.
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Thanks for the review.  :) I will be correcting that silly typo in a few minutes.

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So Petrie is introduced to the other pack as well. It is quite remarkable how much such a vow must be worth because I, personally, would have felt betrayed  :smile

Indeed.  Skytail seems to be rather wise in his interactions with others.  Hence, why he became the leader of his pack.  His taking the situation in good humor guided the rest of his pack to accepting the situation.  After all, if he were to break the alliance right after he agreed to it, then it would reflect badly on his leadership skills.  It is better to remain allies with a pack that provides you with a distinct advantage, as opposed to the alternative. :yes

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Strut seems to be cured... good for them  :p That way, Ozzy and Strut can do as they are told without the obstacle of a hurting leg...
You tell us some background information about the two stealers and I think it is very reasonable a story.
Another note: Littlefoot doesn't seem to be treating them well, hehe.

Yeah... Littlefoot has been becoming more and more aggressive in his leadership style as of late.  He has readily adapted to using fear as a motivating factor in order to control the two eggstealers.  His change in demeanor (and the pack's reaction to it) will be a major subject in the next chapter.  :yes

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Ohh, the Gang are cowards  :p though sometimes it is wiser to retreat and this is such a situation...

Yep.  It puts a whole new perspective on Bron's insult that "all sharpteeth are cowards!"  :p Perhaps Littlefoot and Bron will have a chat one day on the subject... :idea

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Phew, they made it. Though I wonder what you are pointing at in your author's note :unsure Doesn't seem like there's a happy chapter ahead... after all the hunt didn't go well

Your intuition is correct.  I should have the next chapter posted in an hour or two.  Then we will see how the pack's "chat" with Littlefoot goes.  :smile


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 Chapter 29   Conversations

You can throw a novel into focus with one overheard line.
― Joan Didion


"Is everyone alright?!"  The Old One asked after the fast biters fled from the herd.  It seemed that their tried and tested defensive strategy had worked once again.  Keep the herd in a group and keep the children protected by a circle of adults.  At least from her vantage point, she couldn't see any injuries.  Although, a few members of the herd seemed to be missing...

Ali, meanwhile, remained cowering behind her mother's protective bulk.  She was not with the other children when the fast biter's attacked as she was sleeping beside her mother at the time.  Usually all of the children congregated in one group in order to make them easier to protect, but the Old One had granted Ali a special exception on account of her situation.  She had experienced having a friend be slaughtered right in front of her, so it made sense that she would seek out the security of her only remaining family.  Ironically, it seemed that this exception allowed her to be spared another frightening attack.  Nonetheless, the traumatized screams of the other children and the fearful yells of the adults made unpleasant memories return to the young longneck.

"Left flank is fine!"  One deputy called out upon seeing that his section of the herd was safe.

Ali shuddered as the memories returned to her.  The screams of the children and the adults, it reminded her of when she came back to the herd... alone...

"Right flank is clear!"  Another deputy affirmed.

Her mother was ecstatic to see her daughter safe and sound, but immediately grew concerned when she saw the look of fear on her face.  "They got Rhett!  They got Rhett!"  She had shouted as she collapsed against her mother's leg.  As her mother tried to console the distraught longneck, Ali could hear the anguished wail of Rhett's mother.  The last of her progeny had died.  She was now left with nothing.

"We are missing some of the front group.  Brako went after them."

The Old One grew concerned by this.  "Some of the herd left?"  This was not the plan.  They were supposed to stay together and protect the children.

"I think they wanted to check on their eggs..."  He muttered in an unsure fashion.

It had been a hard month since then for the young longneck.  She was repeatedly haunted by horrible sleep stories of that horrible night.  Sometimes she would be the one dying in her nocturnal visions, but in others Rhett met his fate as he did in reality.  The worst ones were where she and Rhett both survived.  Eventually she would have to wake up and realize, with crushing despair, that her friend was still gone.  The true nightmare was her reality.  She had talked to her mother about what happened and she, to her credit, had done her best to comfort her daughter, but she could only do so much.  It didn't help that the other children were reluctant to play with her.  The other parents were worried that she would lead them off on another adventure and that their children might meet the same fate as Rhett.  

The Old One cursed herself.  The eggs!  They had left them unprotected in their zeal to protect the children and the rest of the herd.

Without meaningful companionship, Ali spent most of her time with her mother and the other adults.  Her life had reverted to how it was before she had met Rhett and Littlefoot.  Littlefoot...  She was curious what he was up to.  No doubt he was on one of his adventures with his friends...

......

"I think that you have been far too bossy!"  Cera accused.  The brown fast biter looked at his counterpart with surprise, while the others did not look shocked at all.  The complaints about Littlefoot decisions as of late were about to come into the open.

"Bossy?"  Littlefoot inquired.

"Yes!"  Cera affirmed.  "Did you even stop to think about us in your decision?"

"Of course!"  Littlefoot confirmed in an annoyed tone.  He began to pace in order to calm his raging nerves.  Why am I so agitated?  He asked himself.  I wasn't like this before. Even he noticed his change of demeanor since his transformation.  "That is why I left alone.  I didn't want to risk any of you!"

Cera huffed.  "How is that your choice, Littlefoot?  We are a pack, remember?  We do things together!"

At this point Ruby stepped up as well.  "We can't be together unless we stick together!"

Ducky rose as well.  "I do not want you to risk-ed yourself again.  Oh no, no, no!"

Littlefoot then sat down and collected his thoughts for a moment.  "Then what would all of you have done in my place?  Risk the entire pack for two egg-stealers?"

Spike then spoke.  "Oh to the dung pit with the egg-stealers!"  He said this as waving at the still-incapacitated duo with a dismissive gesture.  "Why did you have to rescue them anyway?"

Chomper nodded.  "Yes, Littlefoot.  Why?"

"They made a deal with us!"  Littlefoot answered in a surprised yelp.  Why couldn't his friends understand their responsibilities?  The egg-stealers had helped them, so they had to help them back.  "I had to help them!"

"Me no see why."  Petrie answered.  "They get eggs.  They hide eggs.  Why we need them when we have eggs?"

Littlefoot stopped for a moment to look in disbelief at his companions.  Perhaps it was the frustration and anger in the cave, but they seemed to be acting unlike their old selves.  They were acting very much like their sharptooth forms would seem to imply.  Very little of the innocence remained.  He had tried to fight that side of him for so long.  For the sake of his friends and for the sake of himself.  Had he angered them so much that their own control was beginning to fray?

"Guys...  Listen to yourselves!"  He began.  "If we go around breaking promises than what will that make us?"

"We?"  Cera accused.  "You were the one who made that agreement, Littlefoot.  Only you."  She said this while pointing an accusatory finger at his chest.  "We followed along, but I am getting tired of following."

The threat was not lost on Littlefoot, but for now he focused on the subject at hand.  "I have done what I felt was best for the pack!"  He caught his breath for a moment.  "Do you think that you could do better?"

Cera took a few steps forward.  "With the way you are acting right now?  Yes."

Littlefoot took the bait.  "The way that I am acting right now?!"

"Yes!"  Cera affirmed.  "You may be doing what you think is right, but are you even listening to us?  No."  She then began to pace herself.  "You made an alliance with that other pack and two egg-stealers without even asking us!"

Littlefoot sputtered.  "I had to make a decision, Cera!  I couldn't tell them to hang on a moment that we had to vote on the matter!"

"No, you couldn't."  She agreed in a flat tone.  "But you could have run the idea by us before the ritual!"

The two stared down for a few moments, before Littlefoot looked back at the rest of the pack with a somewhat resigned expression.

"Do...  All of you agree with Cera?"  Littlefoot asked suddenly.

Four nods and one affirmative grunt greeted Littlefoot.  It seemed that Cera had correctly read the sentiments of the pack.  Have I really been that overbearing? Littlefoot questioned himself.  I was only doing what I thought was right... He then began to realize that the other six were not the only ones who were beginning to lose themselves to their new instincts.  

Littlefoot looked away and pondered his situation for a few moments.  Some instinctual part of his mind told him that this was a sign of weakness, but he didn't care.  He needed to do the right thing here, but that wasn't quite clear to him.  He supposed that he would let the pack decide.  That is what I should've done from the beginning.  He acknowledged.  

"I'm sorry."

The rest of the pack was in total silence.  Cera has a somewhat mollified expression, while most of the others had expressions of concern or sadness.  None of them enjoyed calling out their leader like this, but they had enough of the unilateral decisions.

Littlefoot then looked at the egg-stealers.  Both of them had looks of profound fright on their faces.  They were trapped in a cave with seven sharpteeth who were all speaking their unintelligible language.  Littlefoot figured that the same thoughts were probably moving through their minds right now.  Are they going to eat us?  Why did we ever make an agreement with sharpteeth anyway? Littlefoot knew that his strategy was correct and that his intentions were good, but it seemed that was not enough sometimes.  In listening to his instinctual drives he had lost the conciliatory aspect of his leadership style.  That part of him that listened to everyone before making a decision.  With some regret, he realized that he needed to start again here.

"I made a promise to them... and so did you, Chomper."  Chomper blinked, but then nodded affirmatively at Littlefoot's words.  "Even if you don't want me to be leader anymore...  I ask that you let them go."  Littlefoot hung his head, still not looking back at the group.

Cera's mouth went agape as the others also took on various expressions of shock.  Ruby covered her mouth with her paws, while Spike made a surprised gulp.  Chomper, meanwhile, had a very concerned expression on his face.  He knew that whatever happened next would be up to Cera...

"Littlefoot..."  Cera began.  "We don't want you to quit!  We just want you to listen!"  As much as the egotistical part of her wanted the leadership, she knew after knowing them all for years that Littlefoot was far better suited to the role.  Besides, she couldn't bear to see him like this.  Not that she would admit any of that openly...

"I agree!  Oh, yes, yes, yes!"  Ducky affirmed, quickly followed by the others.

Chomper then slowly walked up to where Littlefoot was situated.  Chomper was pleased to observe that Littlefoot was not crying, but rather simply looked despondent.  He supposed that Littlefoot was probably more confused than anything else.  He had experienced the conflicting drives between dominance and friendship.  Now he simply had to try to reconcile the two.  The fact that he had admitted that he had made a mistake was a good start.

Littlefoot noticed that Chomper was beside him and asked the little biter a question.  "I guess that I am still learning, huh?"  He asked with equal parts melancholy and sadness.

Chomper simply nodded in response.

Littlefoot continued.  "I am surprised that you don't want to take over, Chomper."  At his look of surprise, Littlefoot continued.  "I mean... You did great during our first hunt and you are better at all of this sharptooth stuff..."  He shook his head.  "Ever since we became sharpteeth because of the Stone of Cold Fire, we seem to be losing ourselves."

Chomper shook his head.  "But you're better with others, Littlefoot.  And you are still you..."  He said that while pointing at Littlefoot.  He then took on a more humorous expression and tried to loosen up the mood.  "Besides, I will be the leader one day anyway!"

Cera took the bait.  "What is that supposed to mean?"

Chomper smiled.  "Your kind gets kind of big, but not as big as mine!  Eventually you will all be my helpers!"

"Oh great!"  Cera snorted.  "A giant purple Red Claw.  That is all that we need!"

"I would never be like Red Claw!"  Chomper protested.   But it was obvious that Cera meant her taunt in jest.

Littlefoot laughed at the hijinks of his companions.  He really needed some relief after his breakdown earlier and now he had it.  He was now ready to refocus and get the pack back on track.

"Alright, gang!"  He began.  "Where do we want to go from here?"

The others paused for a few moments as they considered the question.  Spike's growling stomach interrupted the silence, however, and that decided the next item on the agenda.

Littlefoot laughed.  "Alright, let's grab those stashed eggs first!"  He then looked back at the egg-stealers, who were still petrified in fear as they couldn't understand what had been said previously.  He then looked inquisitively at Cera and the others.  At the affirmative nod of Chomper and the reluctant affirmative grunt of Cera, Littlefoot finally spoke in leaf-eater.

"Come along Ozzy and Strut!  You were the ones that got the eggs, after all."

The two egg-stealers nearly fainted at suddenly being talked to by the frightening sharpteeth.  The pack laughed at their response, as they began to leave the cave.

They didn't know that their conversation had been listened to by others...

......

Taunt and Skytail looked at one another with stunned expressions.  Had they actually heard what they heard?

They had decided to enter their ally's territory in order to confirm that they were alright after the egg-stealing attempt.  This was obviously not a mission that required the entire pack, so Skytail only had Taunt follow him into the land of their allies.  Besides, to enter with an entire pack might be considered a threat...

When they had arrived at the outskirts of the cave, they heard Littlefoot's voice and they were immediately relieved.  He had survived the assault of the longneck herd.  But when they heard what sounded like the beginnings of a leadership battle, they both had hid behind some tall grass and listened intently.  Allies or not, a shake-up in the leadership would need to be noted by the allies.  If a leader was deposed unwillingly, then the alliance would be forfeit.  If the leader resigned willingly, on the other hand...  They needed to find out what the outcome was.  And if that meant they had to do some incidental spying, well...

"I am surprised that you don't want to take over, Chomper."

This surprised the duo.  Chomper seemed to be competent enough for a youngling, but he was still a child.  In fact, he seemed to be too young to actually be apart from his parents...  What was going on here?

"I mean... You did great during our first hunt and you are better at all of this sharptooth stuff..."

Sharptooth stuff?  Skytail thought to himself.  What other kind of stuff is there? He had absolutely no idea what Littlefoot was getting at.  The expression on Taunt's face showed that he was just as confused as his leader.

"Ever since we became sharpteeth because of the Stone of Cold Fire, we seem to be losing ourselves."

Alarm bells went off in Skytail's mind.  The Stone of Cold Fire? He remembered that there was a massive impact by the Forbidden Valley about a cycle of the moon ago.  The entire pack was concerned because of the azure color of the stone.  Could it have been the stone of legend?  Were their allies simply insane or did they speak the truth?

Skytail whispered to Taunt, who seemed to be staring off into space.  "We need to tell the others..."

Taunt did not respond.  He was still processing what they had just heard.

"Taunt!"  Skytail hissed.

"Huh?"  Taunt responded.  "Uh... right."  He finally seemed to catch his bearings.

The duo then stealthily snuck off towards their own territory.  

......

The pack speedily exited the cave, with the egg-stealers in tow.  The egg-stealers were noticeably uncomfortable with being surrounded by the pack of juvenile sharpteeth, but they had little choice in the matter.  At least they're allowing us to eat some of what we caught!   Ozzy mused.  Unless they are bringing us as the appetizer!

Ignoring the egg-stealers obvious discomfort, the pack continued on their journey to the site where the eggs were hidden.  A conversation was already in progress between the sharpteeth.  

"Skytail's pack helped us out back there."  Littlefoot mentioned.  "Perhaps we should give them part of our catch?"

Cera snorted.  "That depends on how big the catch is!"

Littlefoot shrugged, but decided that Cera probably had a point.  Looking back towards the two egg-stealers, he called out in leaf-eater again.

"How many eggs did you gather?"

Both jerked at being called by the brown sharptooth, but each settled down when they realized what was being asked of them.  Strut was the one to anser.

"Uh...  Fourteen I think."

"Fourteen!"  Littlefoot yelled in surprise.

Both egg-stealers stopped and began to shake.  Had that not been enough?  Were the sharpteeth angry?  They had no idea if Littlefoot was happy or disappointed with their efforts.

"That's more than enough to feed both packs!"  Littlefoot exclaimed with joy.  The other sharpteeth began muttering in sharptooth as well, although the egg-stealers couldn't understand their commentary.  Nonetheless, based upon their leader's comments, it seemed that they had caught enough eggs to satisfy their employer.  Both egg-stealers sighed in relief.

"So we invite the other pack to eat with us?  Ruby inquired.

Littlefoot nodded.  "Unless there are any objections..."  He was being cautious after being called out by the pack on his imperious attitude just moments before.  He wanted to make sure that he was acting like his old conciliatory self.  "I mean...  They have helped us out..."

Spike nodded.  "Seems fair to me..."

"It would be a nice gesture.  It would.  It would."  Ducky affirmed.

Cera huffed, but there was no real venom in her response.  "Fine.  I guess we can share."

The pack continued their walk towards the site of the egg stash.  Littlefoot and Chomper took the lead, with Cera, Spike, and Ducky following close behind the egg-stealers.  Ruby walked a bit to the side of the egg-stealers, she appeared to be focusing on something by Strut's leg.

"Oh!  That is a nasty gash!"  She exclaimed.  "Does it still hurt when you move it?"  She inquired.

Strut gave her a blank stare.  Ruby could've smacked herself.  Silly Ruby.  She thought.  Just because I speak sharptooth doesn't mean that they can speak sharptooth.  If they could speak sharptooth then we would be speaking right now! She tried again in the leaf-eater language.  A language she had only recently relearned with the assistance of Chomper.

"That injury looks bad.  Does it still hurt when you move it?"

Strut nodded.  "It...  doesn't hurt as bad as it used to...  I can still run on it."

Ruby nodded, before looking pointedly at the two dinosaurs leading the group.  They were the ones who chased them and led to Strut's injury.  But then her expression softened.  How can I judge?  We are the killers, aren't we? She supposed that she felt some affinity for the egg-stealers, as they did on a regular basis what she had only had to do once during her time as a fast runner - steal eggs.  Her kind... Her old kind were egg-stealers as well, or at least they could be.  Now she and the rest of the group were using the egg-stealers as free labor.  Could she justify this?  How would she have felt if she were commanded by Chomper's parents to steal eggs upon pain of death?  Perhaps it would be more kind to simply kill instead of using fear to compel others?

She shook her head.  So that's what Littlefoot was talking about earlier back when he was talking.  We had gotten on to him about being a tyrant, but we are being tyrants to the egg-stealers. It seemed that all of the pack had changed significantly.  Now Ruby was beginning to ponder what it meant to be a just sharptooth.  In her ponderous state, Ruby lost track of the conversations going on in the pack.

"Hey Ruby!"  Chomper called.

The rose-colored fast runner paused.  "Huh?"

"We're here!"  He affirmed.

Spike and Littlefoot had already begun to peer into the small crevice where the eggs were stashed.

"They weren't exaggerating!"  Spike exclaimed.  "There are a lot here!"

Ruby smiled at the two egg-stealers, which was a rather unnerving sight from the vantage point of the omnivorous duo.  She then slowly removed two eggs from the hiding place and gave one to each of them.  She then looked towards Littlefoot.  "We can let them go now, right?  They seem ready to be let go."

Littlefoot nodded and then addressed the two directly.  "You did a good job here.  You may take your two eggs and go."

The two egg-stealers were in no mood to delay their departure, so they began moving in haste.  However, before they left Strut said one last thing to Littlefoot.

"You saved me back there but I never said...  uh... Thanks."

Littlefoot smiled.  "You're welcome.  We may call upon your help again someday..."

Ozzy groaned at that response, but Strut was less reproachful and instead gave an appreciative nod.  After a few moments the two egg-stealers speedily sprinted away, leaving the pack alone with the remaining twelve eggs.  The pack was ready to dive into the bountiful meal, when Littlefoot remembered the help that the other pack provided.

"Well then let's go get our allies!"  Littlefoot affirmed.  "They should get part of the meal."

Petrie called from his perch on Spike's shoulder.  "Me get them!"

However, the pack could hear the sound of rustling grass from nearby and they immediately got into a defensive posture.  Perhaps they were too loud in their exclamations?  Had they been discovered?  Were the egg-stealers coming back for some reason?  In either case, they all prepared to either fight or run at the unknown intruders.

"No need.  We are already here."  The familiar voice of Skytail called from the grass.

"Skytail!"  Littlefoot greeted heartedly.  "We were just about to invite you!  You saved us back there!"

Skytail suddenly appeared from the grass and shrugged.  "We just did what we are supposed to do.  Besides, I think the only ones that I saved were those two egg-stealers of yours...  You could have run away."

Littlefoot paused for a moment, but then nodded.  "Yeah... I guess."  He seemed to think about something for a moment.  "But I am glad that you helped!  I would have hated to go back on my word to them."

The rest of Skytail's pack appeared from the grass as well.  They all seemed to have preoccupied and wary expressions on their faces.  If Littlefoot was not so involved in his conversation with his counterpart, he would have noticed the odd demeanor of the allied pack.  As it was, however, the rest of Littlefoot's pack was beginning to notice.  Spike and Ruby exchanged concerned glances, before moving beside Littlefoot in a protective stance.

"Your word means a lot to you, doesn't it?"  Skytail asked rhetorically.

Littlefoot simply nodded.

"It means a lot to me too."  Skytail continued.  "I guess that is why I always liked you.  Even when we were marking your den..."

Spike repressed a growl.  He still was angry at the insult from over a week ago.

Skytail's monologue continued.  "... I thought that an intelligent leader resided here.  You made your den in a good location.  Your pack members all seemed loyal.  And now I realize that you keep your word, an admirable trait in the cutthroat land that is the Mysterious Beyond."

Littlefoot didn't say anything.  He was flattered by the praise, but he was unsure where his counterpart was going with this conversation.  Spike and Ruby had similar expressions of uncertainty, while the rest of the pack was now fixated on the conversation as well.

"There is one thing that I didn't understand, however."  Skytail paused.  "How could a group of sharpteeth be so intelligent, so loyal, and so sure of themselves... and yet be so inexperienced at life."

Littlefoot took on a more grim expression.  He was not sure where this was going, but he was quite certain that he was not going to like it.

"You improvised when you responded to our challenge...  You improvised when you made the blood vow..."  Skytail then moved closer to Littlefoot and whispered.  "The proper ending is 'give blood to blood' and not 'until death'".

Littlefoot paled at this, but then Skytail continued.  "I will honor it anyway.  The intent was there even if the words were not."

Littlefoot nodded at this, but had to interrupt.  "I am glad to hear that Skytail, but what are you getting at..."

Skytail continued unabated.  "We didn't mean to eavesdrop; we simply wanted to make sure that you were all okay after the longnecks chased you...  And we overheard your discussion."

Littlefoot paled.  How much had he heard?

Skytail smiled.  "I was hoping that you would tell us a bit more about yourself, Littlefoot."

His name...  His actual leaf-eater name... He had heard the entire conversation...  Silence permeated the scene as each member of Littlefoot's pack took on a surprised expression.  The silence was broken after a few moments by a familiar voice from above.  It was Petrie's and his sentiments were shared by the others.

"Well... crap."

......

"...and that's when we went for the lowlands."

Littlefoot had finally finished telling his tale to the assembled pack.  This was a conversation that he would have expected to give to his grandparents assuming they ever returned to the Great Valley, or to Chomper's parents, but not to another pack.  A pack that had so recently been rivals...  He had no idea how they would take this information.

"You're insane."

More than likely. Littlefoot thought with dark humor.  Who would be sane after what we have been through? The accusation against Littlefoot's sanity had been made by Scarflank, the most silent member of the other pack.

"You're all insane."  Scarflank looked at them with uncomprehending eyes.  "How can you believe this stuff?  Leaf-eaters do not turn into sharpteeth!  Food stays food!  No stone can change that!"

Cera, who had been silent through all of this, replied to her counterpart from the other pack.  "Why would we make something like this up?"

Breeze then spoke for the first time, having been stunned into silence during the entire story.  "The stone...  Did you ask it to change you back?"

Scarflank looked back at Breeze with a disapproving expression.  "Don't tell me that you believe this nonsense!"

Breeze shrugged.  "A blue sky rock crashed in the direction where they said that they lived.  And a blue sky rock is just how the legends described it..."

As Scarflank groaned, Ruby answered.  "We tried to wish our wish away, but our wish wasn't granted.  The stone was black."

"So you're all stuck then..."  Taunt spoke up.  He was utterly amazed by their story, but he had always been told of the Stone of Cold Fire during the stories his father would tell him.  Even if the story wasn't true, he could smell no deceit on any of the pack.  They believed their story.  Even if it wasn't correct, it was true to them and his pack would have to try to understand their story in order to understand them.

"Yep, yep, yep."  Ducky answered morosely.

Vigilant then spoke up.  "I smell no lies in them."  She answered flatly, confirming Taunt's unstated findings.

"I know."  Skytail answered.  "That is why I am inclined to believe them."

"You can't be serious!"  Scarflank exclaimed.

"I am."  Skytail responded forcefully.  "They aren't lying otherwise their scent would give them away.  Their story explains their great intelligence but lack of experience.  It also explains something else as well..."  Skytail stepped closer to Littlefoot.  Spike and Chomper began to intercede, but Littlefoot waived him off.  Littlefoot would not show fear in front of the other leader.  Skytail then touched one of Littlefoot's arm feathers in an inquisitive fashion.

"You are of our kind.  You have the scent..."  Skytail then paused.  "But you have these..."  He pointed at the feather he just touched a moment before.  "None of our kind has these.  None that I have met, anyway..."  He seemed to ponder this for a moment, before reciting something from memory.  "You will not understand the work of the stone..."

"...But you will know when you see one of its works."  Taunt finished.

Skytail looked back in surprise at the orange, striped fast biter.  "So you have heard the stories as well?"

Taunt shrugged.  "Who hasn't?"

Littlefoot cleared his throat for a moment, not wanting to interrupt the other pack's discourse on the situation, but wanting to make sure that everything was okay nonetheless.

"Are we good?"  Littlefoot asked.  The question had nothing to do with morality and everything to do with the alliance.  Were the packs still on good terms or not?

Skytail nodded.  "Of course."  He then looked at Scarflank with a pointed expression.  "Aren't we Scarflank?"

Scarflank sighed, his blue form rising and falling with his deep exhale.  "Yeah...  You all might be insane, but at least you are trustworthy..."

Cera snorted at this and even Littlefoot had to crack a slight smile.

Breeze then spoke again.  "But what are you going to do now?"

Littlefoot blinked.  "Well, that is the question, isn't it?"  He then paused for a moment.  "We can't exactly see our parents while we are like this...  They would try to trample us... And would they even believe us even if they listened?"  Skytail nodded in understanding as these words left Littlefoot's mouth.  "We should go find Chomper's parents when food gets too scarce here..."

Skytail pondered this for a moment.  "What are their names?"

"Huh?"  Littlefoot was not sure what Skytail meant with that line of questioning.

"...Of his parents."  Skytail clarified.  Dinosaurs of Chomper's kind generally amassed large territories if they survived long enough to become adults.  As a consequence, the smaller sharpteeth would quickly learn of these territories, usually by having the sharpteeth in question threaten their lives.  The smaller sharpteeth would try to be mindful of the temperaments of the 'large ones' who resided within each of these territories and be particularly careful while traveling in them.  If Chomper's parents were in the area then they would be quite well known.

Chomper answered.  "Dein and Terri.  That's my mommy and daddy!"

Taunt gasped in surprise at the mention of those two names.  This reaction was not lost on the other dinosaurs.

"You've heard of them?!"  Chomper asked excitedly.

"Yeah."  Taunt said flatly.  "They tried to eat me!"

Chomper wasn't really listening to Taunt's story.  He simply heard the affirmation and knew that his parents were found.  

"That's great!"  Chomper responded.

Taunt had a contemptuous expression on his face, as Cera began to laugh hysterically at Chomper's response.  He may not have intended it to sound like that he wanted Taunt dead, but Cera appreciated the sentiment anyway.  As Taunt turned his glare towards Cera, he could hear Breeze begin to chuckle as well.

"Oh don't you start!"  He responded, as Breeze gave him a reprise of his usual obscene gesture and proceeded to laugh hysterically as well.  Skytail could only shake his head at the antics of his fellow pack members.

"Um..."  Chomper now realized that his statement could be taken the wrong way.  "I mean... It's great that you've heard of them!  Not that they tried to eat you... Where were they?"

Taunt sighed, but then answered after a few moments.  "I was in a place called the Land of the Shallow Waters.  Have you heard of it?"

Littlefoot and Chomper both shook their heads as they listened to Taunt's recollections of the place.  It seemed that when the food finally began to run out that they now knew where to go next...

......

"My babies!  They are all gone!"

Ali lay prone on her mother's back trying to drown out the mournful cries of the expecting mothers who would now never see their children.  While the herd was chasing off the sharpteeth, egg-stealers had ransacked some of the nests.  Now only a few eggs remained of the original clutches.  The herd's hopes for the coming year were dashed.  There would be few, if any, new herd members.

As she thought back to the last time she had heard such a mournful sound, she was again inundated with the memories of Rhett's final moments and her terrifying escape.  The memories of guilt and despair returned.  She only had one friend left in this world.  And she had no idea when she would see him again...

I hope you are alright, Littlefoot...

Ali, like many of the mothers in the herd, cried herself to sleep.  After the remaining eggs hatched in a few days, the herd would travel on from this place of grief.  But for now, they had no choice but to remain where so many others had met their end.

The mournful cries, however, were heard by others outside of the lowlands...

......

"What was that?"  Chronos muttered to his resting companion.  They had been on this journey for quite some time and had found no trace of the children.  Based upon that fact that the adults had chased away fast biters, which had mysteriously appeared on the day that the children 'died', they had some idea what they were trying to find, but that was easier said than done.  Generally fast biters didn't stop to hang out and chat...

Logos responded after a moment's pause.  "Sounds like someone is wailing..."  She had a sad, yet steely expression on her face.  An expression which communicated deeply constrained emotion.  She was absentmindedly cleaning two smooth black rocks that appeared to gleam in the starlight.  Those two 'rocks' were the only technology that they were permitted to take with them when they journeyed to this planet.  Suitably disguised technology that would leave little trace of their tampering with this world.  Now that they finally had reason to reclaim them where they had stashed them so long ago, she seemed oddly protective of them.  Of course, one of them was their only way to communicate off-world and the other was their only actual weapon...

Chronos then responded to her deduction.  "Oh..."  He had noticed her change in demeanor over the past week, but had not yet decided to call her out on it.  She has been on edge ever since we reported our findings back to the high command via the talking rock... Urgh!  It disturbed Chronos that even his thoughts were being inundated by the 'leaf-eater' talk.  Via the communicator... I wonder what has her so upset?  Probably out beloved commissar...  His thoughts quickly turned malicious when he thought about their commanding officer.  He was the one who had turned this mission of theirs into an excuse to maroon them, so that their influence on the consortium would be weakened.  Chronos thought with some trepidation about what the isolationists would do if they assumed complete dominance on the council...  Logos, meanwhile, remained lost in her own little world, ignoring the grimace on her companion's face.

The sounds continued then for some time.  It was clear that many voices were in the mournful ensemble.  Something terrible must have happened.  This made Chronos have a passing thought on their current preoccupation.  He was still hesitant, however, to interrupt the dour mood that she appeared to be in.

"Do you think...  That could have been them?"  He asked timidly.

Logos looked at Chronos as if he had grown a second head.  "I highly doubt that sharptooth children could make an entire herd mourn, Chronos..."  She shook her head in a dismissive gesture.  "Assuming that the children are even still alive..."

Chronos looked down with a morose expression.  He didn't want to even consider that possibility.  He couldn't imagine the horror of suddenly becoming something that you feared, and then being chased by your own parents, and then meeting your end out there... alone.  No one deserved that.

Logos saw Chronos change in demeanor and felt guilty about her bluntness.  I shouldn't take out my frustrations on him...  She quickly spoke again. "We will keep searching.  If they... adapted... well then they probably would have gone towards the swamp.  What did the residents call it?"

Chronos brightened.  "The Land of Shallow Waters!"

Logos rolled her eyes.  She still was not used to how simplistic the leaf-eater names were.  "Well then, after we finish up here then that is where we should go next..."  Logos pondered the predicament of the children.  She hoped that if they had met their end that it was as quick as possible.  And if they were still alive, that they were close by.  

Logos was the commander of this mission.  At least, officially.  As a commander she knew about the secret orders that were in place with the artifacts from the ancients.  Orders that were specifically reiterated to her during their last communication with home.  The artifact was a potentially destabilizing force that could cause changes that may be threatening to the consortium.  After that first incident so long ago... it was decided that the artifacts, and anything that they contaminated, must be quarantined and possibly destroyed.  She didn't have the heart to tell her colleague about their final sad duty on this mission.  It would break his heart in the same way that it was already breaking hers.  But she knew that she would either have to tell him eventually or carry them out herself...

She steeled herself.  Lamenting her orders would not change them.  She would soon have to perform one of the most difficult actions of her life or betray her oath to the consortium.  Their drive to look for the Stone on this planet had already vindicated their original mission.  A fact that no doubt was causing headaches with the isolationists in the consortium.  Their findings were a victory for the supports of intervening in outside affairs.  If she would complete her mission and 'neutralize' the 'contaminated' specimens then they would undoubtedly be hailed as heroes and their adversaries would be further discredited.  

If, however, she violated this final order then it would be a sign of insubordination.  A sign that the native culture of this planet had contaminated the researchers and a confirmation of the isolationists claim that outside influences could be dangerous.  That would doom the cause of the interventionists for years to come.  All that they would have worked for would be lost.  It would all be in vain, as well.  If the 'contamination' remained then the consortium would probably opt for the only option that would ensure the complete elimination of the Stone's influence.  An option that had not been used since The War, over a hundred years ago...

The extermination of all life on the planet.

She sighed.  They really had little choice now...  If they were to finish this mission then they needed to find the children.  The only question was, when they found them, would she have the heart to do what was now required?

I hope that everyone enjoys the latest installment.  In the next chapter we will learn a bit more about the rainbowfaces' new mission and why the Consortium is so cautious about the stone.  It will be a rough ride for the pack...


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Dang! Return of the Rainbow Faces, but a more drama, too. That's gonna be one tough order to obey, but at least both Sharpteeth packs are now on the same page. You really know how to create good, dramatic cliffhangers. Also, I like the back story you came up with for them. It seems to fit.


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Thanks for the kind words.  :) Yeah, the rainbowfaces have been given quite the conundrum, but they have little choice.  They will either have to confirm to the Consortium that the "contaminated" children have been disposed of and the "danger" to the galaxy has been resolved, or else the Consortium will make sure that the threat is removed by eliminating all life on the planet.  In the next chapter we will begin to learn why the Consortium is so paranoid about the stone and why the rainbowfaces have been given this terrible order.


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Quote from: rhombus,May 9 2014 on  12:35 PM
Thanks for the kind words.  :) Yeah, the rainbowfaces have been given quite the conundrum, but they have little choice.  They will either have to confirm to the Consortium that the "contaminated" children have been disposed of and the "danger" to the galaxy has been resolved, or else the Consortium will make sure that the threat is removed by eliminating all life on the planet.  In the next chapter we will begin to learn why the Consortium is so paranoid about the stone and why the rainbowfaces have been given this terrible order.
You are welcome. You are ARE a very good writer. It'd probably be easier if they didn't know the kids personally, but there's nothing they can do about it now...I can't wait for it. This is really getting good, and the Rainbow Face chapters are the best ones, as far as I'm concerned.


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Well, this chapter went different than I expected. I thought I was going to see more of "Littlefoot changing to be more forceful and arguing with the others", but what happened instead, well I have to side with Littlefoot, more so than the others.

Yeah I can understand not liking being forcibly led, and not liking that Littlefoot made decisions without them, but he only did it twice, and they act like he's being "bossy". Making two choices (unless there's any I missed) doesn't count as "bossy" to me. Now if Littlefoot were trying to order every aspect of their lives, including what to say, when to say it, when they can sleep, etc, then I'd think he was being bossy. I just can't help but feel the gang is just overreacting to the whole thing.

I was expecting something more dramatic with Littlefoot's change in leadership. Cera calling him 'bossy' would have made more sense if she brought it up after Littlefoot made a slew of choices for his friends, not just a mere two. And the whole "let the eggstealers die; we don't need them" vibe I got from the others, that did little to help me sympathize with the rest of the gang. At that point, I would rather Littlefoot be bossy, because Cera's version of "bossy Littlefoot" is more likeable, to me, than what the gang has become at this point.

I did get the concern that perhaps they are worried he would have gotten hurt by going after to save the eggstealers, which would make sense. I can see the pack running into trouble if Littlefoot were badly hurt and was not able to lead them properly. And if that was what they were concerned about regarding saving the eggstealers, then okay, I can get that. I can sympathize with that, as they are a pack.

But that effect is washed away with their overall cold attitude regarding the eggstealers. If they were worried for Littlefoot's safety, since there was an angry herd of longnecks coming after them, they could have addressed that without the "let the eggstealers die" thing (well that's what it sounded like to me, based on what I read) and the effect of concern for Littlefoot would have been stronger, in my opinion.


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^  Thanks for the feedback.

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And the whole "let the eggstealers die; we don't need them" vibe I got from the others, that did little to help me sympathize with the rest of the gang. At that point, I would rather Littlefoot be bossy, because Cera's version of "bossy Littlefoot" is more likeable, to me, than what the gang has become at this point.

But that effect is washed away with their overall cold attitude regarding the eggstealers. If they were worried for Littlefoot's safety, since there was an angry herd of longnecks coming after them, they could have addressed that without the "let the eggstealers die" thing (well that's what it sounded like to me, based on what I read) and the effect of concern for Littlefoot would have been stronger, in my opinion.

I am glad that you caught that.  The cold attitude towards the eggstealers was meant to be jarring and disconcerting for the reader.  

Even though the gang are the protagonists of this story, I have endeavored to show both sides throughout the previous chapters.  That is why I showed much of the original hunt from Rhett's point of view and the second hunt from the mother flyer's point of view.  Even though we may sympathize with the gang, their victims will have a very different perspective.  Up until now, they have killed young dinosaurs, killed an entire family of flyers, tricked a longneck herd into losing their eggs, and a multitude of other actions that would horrify any leaf-eater.  They have gradually become more accustomed to this lifestyle and (as you have seen in this chapter) are becoming a bit less empathetic to their victims.  

Their experiences and instincts have hardened them.  As both Littlefoot and Ruby have realized in this chapter:

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Littlefoot stopped for a moment to look in disbelief at his companions. Perhaps it was the frustration and anger in the cave, but they seemed to be acting unlike their old selves. They were acting very much like their sharptooth forms would seem to imply. Very little of the innocence remained. He had tried to fight that side of him for so long. For the sake of his friends and for the sake of himself. Had he angered them so much that their own control was beginning to fray?

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Ruby nodded, before looking pointedly at the two dinosaurs leading the group. They were the ones who chased them and led to Strut's injury. But then her expression softened. How can I judge? We are the killers, aren't we? She supposed that she felt some affinity for the egg-stealers, as they did on a regular basis what she had only had to do once during her time as a fast runner - steal eggs. Her kind... Her old kind were egg-stealers as well, or at least they could be. Now she and the rest of the group were using the egg-stealers as free labor. Could she justify this? How would she have felt if she were commanded by Chomper's parents to steal eggs upon pain of death? Perhaps it would be more kind to simply kill instead of using fear to compel others?

She shook her head. So that's what Littlefoot was talking about earlier back when he was talking. We had gotten on to him about being a tyrant, but we are being tyrants to the egg-stealers. It seemed that all of the pack had changed significantly. Now Ruby was beginning to ponder what it meant to be a just sharptooth. In her ponderous state, Ruby lost track of the conversations going on in the pack.

On to your other point:

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Yeah I can understand not liking being forcibly led, and not liking that Littlefoot made decisions without them, but he only did it twice, and they act like he's being "bossy". Making two choices (unless there's any I missed) doesn't count as "bossy" to me. Now if Littlefoot were trying to order every aspect of their lives, including what to say, when to say it, when they can sleep, etc, then I'd think he was being bossy. I just can't help but feel the gang is just overreacting to the whole thing.

That is a good point.  He has only dictated three decisions without their input, but you have to keep in mind that the magnitude of those decisions were quite significant.  First, he allies with the other pack.  A pack which had insulted them and quite possibly would have fought them if it wasn't for their well planned trickery.  Second, he allies with the same two eggstealers who harassed the gang during their youth.  Third, he risks his life to save the two eggstealers.  

The pack followed along with these three decisions and, in the case of the alliance with the other pack, those decisions went well.  It is easy to ignore shortcomings when a leader is successful.  Now however that the last decision of his (saving the eggstealers) nearly cost him serious injury or worse the pack is unloading the latent frustrations on their leader.  Are they overreacting?  Perhaps.  But I have seen people overreact in similar circumstances where a loved one was nearly injured.  Often the conversations made in the heat of the moment will not be very rational.

We also have to look at the eggstealer situation from the viewpoint of the pack.  We may know the backstory of the eggstealers and understand their motivations, but the pack does not for the most part.  To them, the eggstealers are simply a means to an end in the same way that a young longneck would be a source of food.  It isn't until Ruby actually starts thinking about the situation later (as the quote from her above indicates) that she begins to realize what they have become.  A major focus of the remaining chapters in Act 2 (aside from the rainbowface plot angle) is how the pack comes to terms with their new reality.  The decisions that they make will determine whether they continue to become more cold in their treatment of others, or if they eventually reach some sort of balance.


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Nice idea to start with the Longneck herd. Nobody seems to be hurt, physically (not counting the eggs; where are they anyway? :p)
Even though the death of Rhett has happened over a month ago, Ali is still suffering. This is of course quite understandable... One never really recovers from losing a loved one after all... Now I get your spoiler from the Hurt & Heal game at least :p

Littlefoot's leadership is being challenged by his friends. Obviously, this had to lead to a debate where everyone has one's arguments... Cera and - to a smaller degree - the others point out that Littlefoot's decisions weren't agreed on by the group. He rightfully retorts that he couldn't have asked them during the ritual only to be challanged that he could have discussed the possibility of an alliance with his friends.
Littlefoot ends up offering his leadership but Chomper, Cera (quite surprisingly) and Ducky decline, telling him to work and stick together always.
Chomper's little joke cheers the former Longnecks up again :)
And Ozzy and Strut must be feeling quite awkward among the meateaters :D Well, they're offered to take part of the meal (ah, the eggs are still in the cave :idea

The others are spying? Interesting :smile I can totally imagine that some fragments of their conversation must sound weird to an outsider :lol

I didn't expect that to happen... Skytail's pack discovers their secret :smile Well, the conversation that follows is quite interesting. I'm also glad that Littlefoot allowed Ozzy and Strut to take their leave :)
They might have a place to go now (and it's something I can actually remember from the synoptic summary :D

Aww, poor Ali, poor herd. That's like if a tree doesn't carry any fruits, only more severe... :(

Oh, and that last part about the Raunbowfaces is mysterious :smile I'm looking forward to learn more about them and, of course, about the Gang and their allies :yes

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Thanks for the review and the correction.  :)

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Even though the death of Rhett has happened over a month ago, Ali is still suffering. This is of course quite understandable... One never really recovers from losing a loved one after all... Now I get your spoiler from the Hurt & Heal game at least

Yeah... the events of this story have been quite harsh on Ali.  Interestingly, I did not originally start off trying to make that happen to this extent, but the story seemed to naturally head into that direction.  She is actually one of my favorite characters.  Well... The version of her from the fourth film is at least, not the lobotomized version that we got in the television series.  :yes

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Littlefoot's leadership is being challenged by his friends. Obviously, this had to lead to a debate where everyone has one's arguments... Cera and - to a smaller degree - the others point out that Littlefoot's decisions weren't agreed on by the group. He rightfully retorts that he couldn't have asked them during the ritual only to be challanged that he could have discussed the possibility of an alliance with his friends.
Littlefoot ends up offering his leadership but Chomper, Cera (quite surprisingly) and Ducky decline, telling him to work and stick together always.
Chomper's little joke cheers the former Longnecks up again  :)

Yeah...  The argument was interesting to write to say the least.  Littlefoot's actions were bound to strike some resentment in the group and when he finally slipped up, their objections rose to the surface.  He is also suffering from some deep insecurities (as we could see from him offering up his leadership) as a byproduct of his inexperience as a sharptooth and his own confusion over how to proceed.  Luckily the others were able to steer him out of his mental anguish.

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Oh, and that last part about the Raunbowfaces is mysterious  :smile I'm looking forward to learn more about them and, of course, about the Gang and their allies  :yes

I am glad to hear that.  The next two chapters will heavily feature the rainbowfaces.  We will soon find out why the Consortium fears the Stone of Cold Fire so much.  :yes


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Quote from: rhombus,May 11 2014 on  07:39 PM
I am glad to hear that.  The next two chapters will heavily feature the rainbowfaces.  We will soon find out why the Consortium fears the Stone of Cold Fire so much.  :yes
Ahhhh, you don't know how happy I am to hear that!...errr, read that.
But, argh, I have to wait! I HATE waiting! Ah, well, they do say good things come to those who wait, so I shall wait excitedly for the next chapter. I think I love the Rainbow Face chapters best is cause...well, I love the Rainbow Faces now...the female being my favorite...or Logos, as you call her. It figures, though. I love Star Trek and Sci-fi stuff in general, so it was only natural that I'd eventually start to like the two, :lol
Really, I'm on the edge of my...well, bed (I got wi-fi, and like to sit on the bed or lay in it), waiting for the next part. :smile