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The Seven Hunters

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@ CeraTheRed:

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Awww, finally a sweet chapter. The pack's getting the training they need, Terri's better, the pack finally has parents again, and Ruby got a gift that helped her come to terms with the fact that she's part of a different family, now. Things aren't looking so good with Skytail's pack, though, and I hope things get better there. It was neat, too, how the Rainbow Faces recognized what the pack was doing, through memories of their former lives.

Thank you for the review.  Yes, this chapter had a major theme about family and what it means to be part of a family.  Additionally, the pack is now beginning to be trained in how to be full-fledged sharpteeth.  This will require some major sacrifices on the part of some of the packmates, as we shall see in the next chapter.  As for Skytail's pack, they are differently in a difficult situation.  Red Claw's plans certainly do not bode well for anyone in the Mysterious Beyond or the Great Valley.

@ Ducky:

Thanks for the review, Ducky.   :) I have made the corrections that you have noted.

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Same goes to the discussion the seven hunters minus Chomper are having. It's very imteresting to see how you portrait each character. Littlefoot is in a state of uncertainty and thoughtfulness. Cera is not the hard-headed troublemaker, submitting pointy remarks all the time, but a little more ponderous. Both are obviously haunted by the death of their mothers. (BTW: Nice seeing that you pick up Cera's Mother and her unknown situation in the movie). Ducky seems to be her usual self, always optimistic whereas Petrie is rather quiet (which changes after a bit). Spike seems to take the initiative, leading his friends in the right direction.
Ruby doesn't say much.
Who would've thought... the Night Flowers! If you continue like that, you're going to reference the whole 13 movies in this story biggrin.gif I recall that  vonboy used them in his story PAST-O-RAMA to cure one of Chomper's parents. I, however, can't remember the exact details...

I don't remember that.  Perhaps I should reread PAST-O-RAMA to re-familiarize myself with that plot point.  In my mind, I always thought of the night flowers has containing strong antibiotic chemicals and as such it would be a beneficial treatment for any respiratory ailment.

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That's a reasonable story. Redclaw attacking cowardly, Terri being sick regularly since then... However, I wonder what kind of sickness Terri actually has... Is it a sickness known to mankind that can be triggered by an injury? It looks to me like she has a sort of flu with heavy coughing in particular. Nothing I thought people are getting due to injuries... Or maybe you were simply being creative? smile.gif

I viewed Terri's illness as a respiratory ailment (Tyrannosaurus pneumonia?) that was able to take hold because of her being weakened by her severe injuries.  Some respiratory ailments will get better and then relapse until they are finally treated with antibiotic agents and that is how I portrayed the illness here.

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Oh, another story Dino_grins.gif
A fanfiction within the fanfiction itself, so to say... It is certainly a moving story. It is often said that the relationships that start off really bad are going to be very strong. This is certainly true with Dein and Terri smile.gif
I believe it has two important messages; maybe three...
1. Character weigths more than physical things (Terri's unability to lay eggs here)
2. Never give up. There's always hope (the two mating finally & getting Chomper at last)
(3. Help others whenever you can)
Chomper probably would have slumbered in peace after being told the story, if it hadn't been for his friends showing up with Night Flowers (so they must have succeeded smile.gif)
Let's see if they will work...

That is correct. :yes  Those are 3 of the major points of Dein's story.  The other thing that I wanted to show in that story is some of the character traits of Chomper's parents.  There was a noticeable lack of affection in their interactions in the fifth film and I wanted to show that they were indeed loving to one another, but in a very 'sharptooth' way.  Hence, the snarkiness in their initial interactions.  Even though they may trade insults and taunts at one another that is simply the way that they show their love.  

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Overall, this chapter is particularly well written! in-yes.gif

Thank you very much!  :) I hope that you enjoy the next chapter.


Go ahead and check out my fanfictions, The Seven Hunters, Songs of the Hunters, and Menders Tale.


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And now for the thrilling conclusion of the second act.  As it exceeds the character limit for the forum, this will be another two post chapter.

Fanfiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/38/The-Seven-Hunters

Chapter 37   A graduation in blood

"We are all ready to be savage in some cause. The difference between a good man and a bad one is the choice of the cause."
― William James


Dein had surprised the pack in the morning with two special announcements.  First, he had informed them that he had provided them with breakfast, leftovers of an adult threehorn.  This was a pleasant change from the requirement of catching all of their own meals over the last several days.  Second, he had told them to relax until the sun was at its highest in the sky.  He informed them that their task on this day would be the hardest thing that they had ever done and that each of them needed to be well rested and prepared.  He would tell them their mission at high noon, and they should be prepared to form three groups.  It sounded like a hunt was coming.

Understandably, the second announcement filled the pack with foreboding and dread.  After quickly eating their meal in silence, each member of the pack broke off to relax in their own way.  Petrie decided to fly in order to calm his nerves, whereas the others discussed amongst themselves and decided to break up into their respective groups.  After all, each group member needed to be acquainted with what the other was thinking prior to conducting any hunt.  The failure of any one member could doom the hunt or lead to serious injury.  If only they knew what their mission actually was...

"Hmph!  This is so frustrating!"  Cera muttered.  "How are we supposed to plan anything if we don't know what we are doing?"

Ducky looked at the yellow fast biter and shrugged.  She knew that this was simply Cera's way of blowing off steam.  It was infuriating that they had to basically plan their actions with absolutely no idea what they were going to be asked to do.  But Ducky supposed that was probably part of the test.  Perhaps they were supposed to learn to think on the fly?  They couldn't learn how to do that if they obeyed orders all of the time.

"I do not know, Cera.  Nope, nope, nope!"  Ducky answered.  "But maybe they are training us to think fast?  If we do not know what to do, then we have to learn what to do!"

Cera snorted.  The situation must have Ducky flustered as well if she was repeating herself.  "Don't start talking like Ruby, Ducky.  That gets old fast."  Seeing that Ducky actually took on an annoyed expression at her accusation, Cera quickly continued.  "I guess you might be right.  But it's just so annoying."

Ducky sighed, temporarily putting aside her annoyance at having her way of talking mocked and nodded.  However, a thought suddenly came to mind.  If they were going to hunt today then only she, Littlefoot, and Chomper would have any experience killing other dinosaurs.  The others had only killed insects, eggs, and ground fuzzies.  A far different proposition than killing another being that was capable of talking and thinking like yourself.  This filled Ducky with misgivings.  "Uh... Cera?"

"Hmmm?"  Cera was only halfway paying attention.  She was still fuming about their situation.

Ducky continued after a pause.  She supposed that there was no delicate way of asking the question.  "Are you ready to kill?"

Cera looked at Ducky as if she had claimed to be a longneck.  "Kill?  Ha!  Who has the record for killing the most ground fuzzies?"  Cera bragged.

Ducky frowned.  Well, Chomper does actually with fourteen... But she knew better than to get sidetracked correcting Cera, especially when Cera's ego was involved.  Besides, she had a more important subject to discuss.  "Not ground fuzzies, Cera.  Dinosaurs."

Cera blinked.  Yes, that was a bit different.  "Um... Of course I am!  I mean..."  She trailed off for a moment as Ducky gave her a stern look.  Ducky's look communicated one thing: be honest with me right now!  You not fooling me!  Cera finally looked down for a moment and answered truthfully.  "I don't know..."

Ducky didn't speak for a few moments.  She was waiting for her friend to get ready to speak again.  She had been friends with Cera long enough to know not to rush such things.

"I mean..."  Cera continued.  "We used to be...  we used to be leaf-eaters..."  She then looked at Ducky with a horrified expression.  "How did you handle it?"

Ducky looked at Cera with an unreadable expression.  "Well, you talked to me the next day.  I did not handle it well, did I?"

Cera looked down.  "It... it will be different..."  She paused.  "Ground fuzzies don't talk..."

Ducky shrugged.  "Well, they squeak..."

Cera roared.  "That's not what I meant!"  She then stopped herself when she saw Ducky's concerned expression.  Did I just do that?  She questioned herself.  "I'm sorry Ducky... I... uh..."

Ducky nodded.  "I know.  I do.  I do."  She consoled her upset friend.  "I went through this before.  Are you ready to... do what we have to do?"

Cera gulped and looked at the ground for a moment, before again looking at Ducky.  "It will be hard but...  Yeah...  Yeah I will be ready."

While the two friends were comforting one another over the possibility of hunting dinosaurs, Littlefoot and Ruby were having a conversation of their own.

"You seem quiet today."

Ruby looked over to Littlefoot.  Yes, I suppose that I have been quiet.  She agreed internally.  She had been preoccupied by the blood stone that her parents had given her.  She had placed it by the pack's resting area for safe keeping, but what it represented still haunted her.  Was her current predicament caused by random chance or was it meant to be?  The fact that the question was unanswerable did nothing to calm her nerves.  The possibility that had given her comfort the night before had caused reservations this morning.

"Yes, I guess that I am."  She admitted reluctantly.  "Its... what we talked about yesterday..."

Littlefoot nodded.  "Yeah... I can see how it would confuse you..."  He thought for a moment.  "Just remember that we are all in this together, alright."

Ruby nodded, but then sighed.  "I know, but I am not sure that knowing is enough."  She then closed her eyes for a moment.  "I'm not sure that I am ready for what we have to do."

Littlefoot blinked for a moment.  "Well, we have killed before..."

Ruby shook her head.  "You have killed before.  I have only killed eggs, snapping shells, fish, and ground fuzzies.  Killing dinosaurs would be..."  She paused for a moment.  "...horrible."

Littlefoot nodded.  "I know and when I did it... I was upset."  He had to admit that was quite the understatement, as it took Chomper's careful attention to calm the former longneck down after he had killed Rhett.  "But we have to do this now.  When the Cold Time comes we have to hunt whatever we can find."  He then absentmindedly opened his arms in a welcoming gesture.  "And if you break down we will be here for you."

Ruby took Littlefoot's gesture as an invitation and, without thinking about it, embraced Littlefoot in a loose hug.  "Thanks, Littlefoot.  We need to stick together if we are going to live together."

Littlefoot was taken aback by Ruby's embrace, but did not push her away.  He figured that she needed some time to regroup after the emotional rollercoaster that was the Time of Training.  It was during these times of hardships that they were reminded of what they missed the most.  The safety of the valley, the comforts of their previous lives, and most of all, their beloved parents.  He would be more than willing to comfort Ruby in her time of need.

Neither of them questioned why they continued to hold claws even after the embrace was over.  For each of them it simply felt like the right thing to do at that moment.

Their tender moment, however, was soon interrupted by a familiar voice.

"Okay, kissing time is over, you two."

Littlefoot turned around with a sour expression as Ruby looked embarrassed at the sudden intrusion.  Spike had a satisfied grin on his muzzle, while Chomper appeared to be holding back a laugh.  Chomper's eyes appeared apologetic, but his mirth indicated that he appreciated the humor.  His feelings were not shared by Littlefoot.

"What do you two want?"  Littlefoot asked with thinly hidden annoyance.

Spike shrugged.  "Dein is getting ready to give us our orders... I figured that I would let you two know."

Littlefoot responded gruffly.  "We're coming."

Spike tried to hold his snicker and tapped on Chomper to follow him back to the nest, while Chomper gave an apologetic nod to Littlefoot.  As Ruby and Littlefoot followed the purple sharptooth and the dark green prankster, Littlefoot whispered in Ruby's ear.  "Let's hope that he doesn't tell Cera.  Then we will never hear the end of it!"

Ruby nodded and whispered back.  "Yeah, Cera never lets things drop..."

"What are you two whispering about over there?"

Littlefoot and Ruby both sighed.  It seemed that Cera had now caught up to the duo without them knowing. If our attention is this frayed during hunting then we are doomed. He thought to himself.  What has me so distracted all of a sudden?

"Nothing!"  They responded in unison, much to their mutual embarrassment.  This caused Spike and Chomper to both burst into laughter, while Cera gave the two dinosaurs an odd look.  Hopefully they will drop the matter right here.  Littlefoot thought to himself.  However, Ducky soon quashed those hopes.

"But you must have been whispering about something.  Yep, yep, yep."  She replied in her usual innocent way.  "Otherwise you would not be whispering."

Ruby interjected at this point.  "Littlefoot was just comforting me..."

Spike interrupted from the front.  "Oh... Is that what it's called?"

Ruby's face fell as she was not in the mood for their usual exchange of teasing.  She was seriously concerned about what she would soon have to do and she did not want to play a part in the usual exchange of playful insults.  Littlefoot was also to the point of erupting in rage as well, until an unexpected voice interrupted the exchange.

"That's enough!"  It was Cera!  "We have a lot to do today, let's...  just try to play nice, okay?"

This surprised everyone into silence and the pack resumed their forward motion towards the sleeping area.  Littlefoot was glad for the truce offered by Cera.  I guess that she is trying to put her sarcastic ways behind her.  I thought that I would never see the day.  Maybe this is the last we will hear of Spike's accusations? As they approached, however, Cera whispered one more thing to the duo.

"We can talk about you two love flyers later..."

Littlefoot scowled.  Damn it!

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Meanwhile, in the Lowlands:

"Run!"

Skytail's pack had evaded their pursuers from the previous night by using the river to their advantage.  They had managed to use the river in order to hide their scent and had taken refuge in their old home.  However, in the process of trying to leave the lowlands at dawn, Calin's pack had again discovered them.  Calin had anticipated their strategy.

"To the river!  Run!"

Skytail's voice was hoarse and ragged from several minutes of sprinting.  With the enemy pack hot on their heels, they had no time to rest or regroup.  They simply had to flee or die.  And at the moment Skytail had to admit that the latter seemed like the more likely option.

To the astonishment of Skytail and the others, the enemy pack seemed to be keeping pace with the pack of Utahraptors.  This was unexpected, as the Velociraptors and smaller fast biters in the group should have been unable to keep up with larger strides of Skytail's pack.  They are afraid of falling behind. Skytail deduced.  They all got into the pack through treachery or being force to fight their packmates to the death... No one wants to be seen as weak...  What Red Claw had created was an abomination that may be unstoppable.  A pack built from traitors on the basis of fear meant that the fast biters were not bound by any sense of honor or reason.  Their only duty was to themselves and Red Claw.  Their only way of surviving was to serve the pack and Red Claw.  A member of a pack such as that would fight to the death in order not to be seen as the weakest link.  How could anyone reason with such madness?

Skytail spared a glance to his sides.  To his right, Taunt and Breeze were keeping up, but were quickly tiring.  He knew that they would be spent by the time that they reached the river.  What would they do then?  To his left, he could see that Vigilant and Scarflank were beginning to fall behind.  They were about half way between the front of the pack and their enemies, nearly a longneck length behind.  If anything happened...

"Ahhhh!"

With dawning horror, Skytail looked back to his left to Scarflank tumbling uncontrollably.  His headlong sprint did not allow for much time to maneuver and as a consequence, he must have not seen the obstruction until it was too late.  His massive bulk began to careen toward Vigilant, until she too was crumpled under his large body.  Within moments, both of the packmates lay prone upon the ground.  Scarflank appeared to be stunned, but Vigilant was clearly clawing at her packmate as she desperately tried to regain her footing.  She knew what their lives were at stake.

Only slowing slightly, Skytail stared in horror at his fallen companions.  His trusted friends.  He knew that he could do nothing to save them without losing himself and the remainder of the pack in the process.  The enemy horde was simply too great.  He called out in anguish to his friends.  "Get up!"  His voice began to break as he pleaded to his fallen comrades.  "Please!  You have to get up!"

But it was too late.

In horror, Skytail and the others saw the pack rapidly overtake their two companions.  An orange juvenile Utahraptor leapt at Scarflank and landed squarely on his back, causing him to let out a bloodcurdling scream.  The Utahraptor's claws ripped through his fellow raptor's back exposing the delicate muscle underneath.  Now in a panicked frenzy, Scarflank rolled off of Vigilant, which caused the Utahraptor to tumble off of his target.  Now finally able to regain his footing, Scarflank knew what he had to do.

"Run!"  He commanded to Vigilant.  With the resolve of a dinosaur that no longer had anything to lose, he turned towards his pursuers.  He couldn't save himself, but perhaps he could save the ones that he loved.  The only ones who had ever accepted him during his troubled life.  He knew that this would be his final stand.

Immediately two Velociraptors lunged at the brave raptor.  With a swift maneuver, he deflected the blow of one of the Velociraptors and tried to roll to the side.  However, the second Velociraptor hit its target.  

"Ahhhh--ack!"

Scarflank flicked the Velociraptor off of himself, but it was too late.  His neck had been sliced open.  Grimacing, he tried to ignore the grievous injury and searing pain.  He again rose and again confronted his attackers.

A small raptor approached the injured dinosaur with overconfidence and attempted to strike at Scarflank's neck.  With a swift pivot to his left, Scarflank evaded the clumsy attack and swiped the feed of his attacker with his tail.  As the raptor fell to the ground, Scarflank leapt upon its exposed underbelly with his sharp talons.  A sickening roar emanated from the raptor as his torso was simultaneously ripped and crushed by the heavier adversary.  Scarflank had struck down one attacker.

Almost immediately, however, another challenger approached from Scarflank's side.  A Velociraptor lunged towards his throat, but Scarflank deftly dodged this maneuver.  Curiously, the other fast biters seemed to be ignoring him and instead ran past his position, as if they were after other targets.  Scarflank ignored this detail as irrelevant and continued to defend himself.

The Velociraptor seemed to be undaunted by his comrades' actions and made another attack, which Scarflank dodged albeit much more slowly.  For some reason unknown to him, his vision seemed to be getting cloudy and his feet were no longer obeying his commands.  He also couldn't seem to catch his breath.

That was when he noticed the blood gushing from his neck.

So this is how it ends...  He thought morosely.  The first attacker had wounded him mortally after all.  He could feel a blow to his left leg that he couldn't seem to deflect and another to his back that he barely noticed.  The Velicoraptors were finishing him off with small strikes throughout his body.  A body that he could no longer defend.  Slumping to the ground, his vision began to fade as his body failed him.  The final sensation that he felt was a sudden blow to the back of his neck.

Scarflank's tragic life was over.

Vigilant cried out in anguish at seeing the fate of her friend as she continued her frantic run.  She knew that she had no hope in fighting the pack, so she did not dare stop her desperate sprint.  Her legs burned with exertion as she struggled to catch up with the rest of the pack.  She had always been a swift fast biter and there was no stronger test of her abilities than this.  She would not let Scarflank's sacrifice be in vain.  She had to persevere.  She had to survive.

She was slowly getting closer to her remaining three friends, but so was the enemy pack.  She could feel their hot breath against her heels.  She could feel the vibrations from their trampling feet.  She knew that any misstep now would mean a quick end.  With her heart beating like it would hop out of her chest, she continued her frantic pace.

Taunt was beside himself with grief and terror.  Scarflank was a mostly silent, but loyal protector in the pack.  He had helped him on a number of occasions and had often talked the others down from throttling him for the occasional ill-advised prank.  Taunt had considered him amongst one of the best friends he had ever had.  

And now he was gone.

There had been no time for goodbyes and condolences.  No time to say things that had been unsaid for far too long.  No time to even reaffirm their friendship.  As suddenly as the pack would kill a leafeater, Scarflank had been taken from them.  Would this be the sad fate that awaited them all?  A life snuffed out without anyone left to tell the tale?

Taunt bared his teeth and steeled himself.  They had to survive.  The memories of their pack had to live on in story and song like their ancestors before them.  He would not allow his friend to fade from memory.

"There's the river!"  Skytail cried.  His voice between a hoarse yell and a sob.  

Their destination was in sight, but their enemies were at their heels.  The same haunting question echoed through their minds: would they meet the same fate as their fallen comrade?

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Dein looked at the children with an unreadable expression.  They had passed the test of endurance and proven that they were physically strong enough to join a pack.  Their leader had passed the test of leadership to confirm that he was willing to risk everything to support his comrades.  And they had passed the tracking test, of which Dein had no doubts that they would.  That only left one final task for the children and there was no way to ease them into it.

They had to get over the act of killing.

He knew that only four of the children had actually killed before.  Chomper, who obviously had to kill during his time on the island, had many victims to his name prior to his time in the valley.  Littlefoot, who had killed his friend Rhett during the pack's time of hunger, was the first of the former leaf-eaters to shed the blood of a dinosaur.  Petrie, who had killed the babies of the mother flyer, and nearly lost his life in the resulting attempt at retribution against him.  And Ducky, who struck down the mother flyer in order to prevent the death of her close friend.  That left the others: Cera, Ruby, and Spike.  Before they could even entertain the idea of taking down larger prey, the remaining children needed to cross that line.  To help in a hunt was one thing, but to actually kill another dinosaur was quite another.  This was true to sharpteeth, but especially true for the former leaf-eaters that stood before him.

"Today, children, you are going to become the sharpteeth that you need to be."  Dein began, as the seven children stared at him in anticipation.  He could smell the concern and excitement radiating off of them.  They thought that they were ready for what was coming.  We will see about that. Dein thought ominously.  "Those of you who have never killed a dinosaur... Step forward."

With some trepidation, Cera, Ruby, and Spike walked in front of the pack.  He could clearly see Spike's unease and a slight shake to Cera's hind legs.  Only Ruby appeared somewhat calm at being called out.  Dein continued.

"You all will kill today."  At that proclamation, Cera closed her eyes while Spike let out a barely audible sigh.  Their time of innocence was soon about to pass.  "Before I can train you in how to take down larger prey, all of you must know what it is to be the chooser of the dead."  He stared at the three gravely.  "You will become that today."

The remaining four dinosaurs began to look amongst themselves in nervousness.  The same thought was undoubtedly going through their minds: What does he have in store for us?  

Dein turned towards the others now.  "Today we are going to engage in a joint hunt.  I have found the target that I want and Petrie..."  The flyer suddenly looked at the massive sharptooth in trepidation.  What did he want?  

"Yes...?"  Petrie muttered in nervousness.

Dein continued.  "I already know who we are going to kill, but it will be up to you to find him.  You must prove your flying and tracking abilities, Petrie.  You are the flyer... that is your role."   Technically, this was not part of test, but he had to improvise with the small flyer.  Petrie obviously couldn't take part in the direct assault on the dinosaur, but he could do his part.  What do sharpteeth flyers do for a test anyway? Dein thought to himself.  Do they even have tests?  Shaking his head, he continued.  "Your target is brown threehorn."  Cera looked up with some trepidation at that statement, as he continued.  "He has an injury to his back leg and a scar by his eye.  He seems to be a loner, except for his family, you will not find him by the rest of the herd."  He then looked at all of the children in turn.  "He will be the dinosaur we will kill tonight."  Looking back towards the three dinosaurs immediately in front of him, and making his gaze linger at Cera, he finished.  "He had three children, how convenient."  He had selected him for that purpose.  "You three will harass and kill the children, whereas the rest of us will kill the father.  Once this is done, then I know that all of you are ready for whatever lies ahead."

Littlefoot thought for a moment as the orders echoed in his mind.  "Mr. Sharptooth?"

Dein nodded.  "Yes, Seeker.  Any questions about today's hunt?"

Littlefoot shook his head.  "Uh... no... not really.  But...  what happened to the mother?"  If they had another threehorn to deal with then that would have complicated the hunt significantly.

Dein smiled.  "Don't worry.  I already took care of that.  How did you enjoy breakfast?"

Littlefoot nodded at this while Cera took an audible gulp.  They had eaten leftover threehorn for breakfast.

Dein took a deep breath.  "I know this won't be easy on you kids, but you have to toughen up.  You have fed on ground fuzzies and eggs, but the time comes when you have to be what you have to be."  He stared at Littlefoot in such a way that it was as if he were staring into his soul.  "Regardless of why you are sharpteeth, that is what you are now.  You have no choice but to accept that fact."  He looked to his right and could see that Terri was looking approvingly at his speech.  He had to admit that he had taken some liberties with the children upon her urging.  His father had simply told his to 'suck it up' during his Time of Training.  But he supposed that special circumstances were in play here.  "Good luck, children."

With several muffled instances of "thank you, sir" being uttered by the pack, the speech came to an end.  Now they simply had a difficult task ahead of them.  This brief lull in the activity gave Terri an idea, however.

"Chomper?"

Chomper turned at having heard his nickname called.  He only allowed his friends to call him anything but Path.  "Yes, mommy?"

Terri smiled.  "This might be a good time to teach your friends some of our culture, son.  Littlefoot told me about you performing the naming ceremony on them."

Chomper looked away somewhat embarrassed, while Cera made a sarcastic remark.  "Are you using our leaf-eater names now?  I thought they were considered silly or something..."

Terri smiled.  "I suppose it won't hurt around family, but don't spread those names around.  Otherwise, they will think that I was a horrible parent.  Who would name a child 'Chomper'?"

Littlefoot sighed and looked somewhat glumly.  After all, he had named Chomper.  "Well, I thought it was a good name."

Dein snorted.  "Oh, come on!  That would be like... I don't know... A longneck naming a kid 'Tree Star'!"

Ducky blinked a few times at this.  "Huh?  My aunt is named Tree Star!"

Terri sighed.  "Alright!  Alright!  Enough with the names."  She chuckled to herself.  Part of the reason she was doing this was to calm the agitated children.  They obviously had a lot to think about before tonight.  She then turned her attention back to Chomper.  "Before you and your friends hunt today, perhaps you could tell them a story, Chomper.  Do you remember the parable of the serpent and the ground fuzzy?"

Chomper nodded.  "Yeah... It was the one you told me after my first hunt, wasn't it?  The one about why we shouldn't take too much?"

Dein interrupted.  "Yes, although it is also about revenge... depending on why the story is being told..."

Terri nodded.  "Perhaps you could tell it to your friends before they get started.  They should learn how not to kill, before learning how to kill."

Chomper smiled.  "That sounds great!"  He then looked at his friends.  "Gather around, everyone!  Here is the parable of the serpent and the ground fuzzy..."

......

Back to the Lowlands:

Damn it!

The pack had arrived at the river with little time to spare, only to see that it had overflowed its banks.  A torrential amount of water was flowing down its treacherous rapids.  There was no way that any dinosaur, even a swimmer, could fight its unstoppable current.  It looked like this was the end of the line for the pack.  Skytail was heavy with grief.  Scarflank had sacrificed himself to save the pack and this was what happened?  He didn't want to believe this cruel turn of fate.

"Oh, isn't that tragic..."

The mocking tone of Calin again reached Skytail's ears.  Calin spoke with a conversational manner, as if he were passively mentioning what he had for breakfast the previous day.  It was obvious that the death of Scarflank and the injuries to those under Calin's charge did not trouble him in the slightest.  To him it was just another day.

"It rained up north, you know."  Calin mentioned in passing, as he absentmindedly cleaned his sickle claws on the grass below him.  He seemed more concerned about the buildup of dirt on his feet than the accumulation of blood on his claws.  "That is why the river is flooded."  He then turned his attention to Skytail again.  "I guess you should have paid more attention to the weather.  tssk... tssk... tssk..."  He smiled a toothy smile.  "So... What is it going to be then?  Are you going to fight us?"  He then lazily raised his claws in a mockery of defensive gesture.  "Are you going to beg us?"  He then got down on his knees in a pleading gesture.

Skytail's rage was at a breaking point.  He could not take any more of this psychopath.  It was bad enough facing their deaths in such an inauspicious way, but he refused to die at this fiend's claws.  He griped the ground below his feet with his sickle claws in preparation to charge at Calin.

"Or maybe you will take your chances swimming?"  Calin mocked finally.  "That would be a shame though...  All of your meat gone to waste...  I suppose only the fishes would have a meal.  Won't you share it with us instead?"

Skytail looked at the plants around them, as they were plants that he recognized from his childhood, and began to absentmindedly clean his sickle claws against them.  To everyone else around him it simply looked like a nervous gesture, but Skytail was formulating a plan.  A plan that might just save his friends.

Skytail then looked at his three remaining packmates.  Vigilant looked to be on her last legs.  He doubted that she would survive a swim, but that would be her best option for survival.  She certainly wouldn't survive a fight with the pack which surrounded them.  Breeze looked at Skytail with sad eyes.  She had been his friend and companion for as long as he could remember.  She knew that they would be parting now.  Their chances for survival were remote.  Taunt also looked at his leader with compassionate eyes.  Skytail had no doubt that if he ordered Taunt to sacrifice himself for the pack that he would do so willingly.  Their pack was how the natural order was supposed to be, not Calin and Red Claw's perversion of the system.  The pack came first even if that meant the end of the individual.  

Even if that meant the end of the individual.

Skytail took a long look at the orange sap that was accumulating on his sickle claws and then took a deep breath.  He knew what he had to do.  With a slow turn towards his companions, he whispered as firmly as he possibly could.

"When I charge, jump into the water and let it carry you.  I will jump in after you."  He hated lying, but he knew that she would understand in time.

Breeze protested softly, as tears began to appear at the corners of her eyes.  "Skytail..."

Skytail shook his head and whispered back.  "Just do it please.  And remember our stories..."

"Some final words being exchanged?  Or perhaps you are preparing for battle?"  Calin mocked.  "Oh this should be interesting!  I can't wait!"

Skytail slowly turned towards Calin and returned his smile.  This gesture caused Calin to frown somewhat as he was obviously trying to read his adversary.  He was smart enough to know that an enemy with nothing left is the most dangerous enemy of them all.  Such an enemy would hold nothing back.  Calin kept his position, however, as he was loathe showing any weakness or doubt.  Finally Skytail decided to answer his adversary's taunts.

"Oh, a bit of both actually."  Skytail muttered.  "It is quite nice to have friends to actually talk to when times are dark.  Of course, you would know nothing about that..."  Skytail then took on a ponderous expression as he approached slightly closer to Calin's pack, who were waiting for the order to finish the pack off.  "Did your parents ever tell you about the parable about the serpent and the ground fuzzy?"

Calin looked bemused for a moment, but then laughed.  "No, they did not.  They were too busy trying to keep us fed to worry about children's stories."

Skytail took on a fake look of sadness at that.  "Aw... That's a shame.  It's such a good story..."

Taunt and Breeze both approached the edge of the bank as quietly as possible.  Vigilant, after regaining her bearings after a few moments, edged closer as well.  All three were waiting for the order to jump and wondering what their leader was up to.  Meanwhile, Skytail continued.

"Well, I am afraid that I am not as good of a storyteller as my parents, but I will give it my all.  In the days before sickle claws, belly draggers, and spiketails; in the times before longnecks and threehorns; in the ages before dinosaurs and flyers, there were simply the ground fuzzies and those who hunted them.  The hunters in those ages, like the hunters of this age, were governed by a code of conduct dictated by their instincts.  Most hunters of ground fuzzies were careful not to kill too many of them, as they were their food, but there were always brutes..."

Skytail glared at Calin with the intensity of a thousand bright circles.  There was no doubt who he represented in the story.

"The serpent was one such brute.  He killed indiscriminately.  He killed those of his own kind.  He ate the eggs of rivals.  He killed ground fuzzies even when he wasn't hungry."  Skytail stepped a bit closer and looked at the ground as if he were considering something.  "He took more than he gave.  The ultimate crime of a hunter."

Calin snorted "Bah!  Hunters take!  Such is the way of things."

Skytail ignored Calin's rebuttal.  "One day the serpent attacked the burrow of one such ground fuzzy and killed a mother, leaving her children motherless.  Then the next day the serpent came back and killed two of the children.  Finally, the father ground fuzzy couldn't take anymore of the injustice and he called upon the Night Circle to grant him revenge."

Calin stared at his adversary with an amused expression.  What was this?  Story time?  He figured that he would let the fast biter amuse himself for a bit more.  After all, chasing his pack had been the most amusing thing they had done that week.  He would hate to spoil the fun prematurely.

Skytail continued.  "The Night Circle answered the ground fuzzy's plea and told him thus: 'Eat this plant and die.  In your death you shall have your revenge!'  He ate the plant as directed and promptly passed away."

Calin then spoke up, as some of his other packmates commenced laughing at the story.  "Is that it?!  The Night Circle told the ground fuzzy that he would have his revenge if he offed himself and he committed suicide!"  He looked at his packmates with an amused expression.  "It's almost a shame we have to kill you, Skytail.  Are you sure that you don't want to join us and discard the slow weaklings you call friends?  You're the best source of humor we have had in weeks!"  Due to his conversational tone, Skytail couldn't tell if he was serious or not.  There was no telling what was going on in that twisted mind.

Skytail smiled slightly and finished.  "Then when the serpent came the next day, the children were nowhere to be found and only the body of the father was visible.  Not wasting any time, the serpent ate the father in one gulp and slithered away.  Suddenly, however, the mighty serpent began to fill ill and slowed to a crawl.  He couldn't move and his vision began to flicker.  Finally he saw a small ground fuzzy approach him.  The serpent called out to the small fuzzy: 'Have you come to mock me, ground fuzzy?  When I recover I shall eat you as I have eaten the others!'  The ground fuzzy twitched its nose and responded: 'I am my father's avenger, dread serpent.  I am here to finish what my father started.'  With great precision and determination, the ground fuzzy burrowed into the serpents throat, killing him."

Skytail then took a look at his three comrades.  "If I don't make it, avenge me!  Now, jump!"

Taunt, Breeze, and Vigilant both dove into the raging river as their beloved leader charged at Calin.  Calin brought his claws up to defend against Skytail's assault, as Calin's packmates prepared to dive onto the advancing threat.  With as much speed as he could muster, Skytail leaped at Calin and extended his sickle claws at his defending arms.  He was going for a hit.  Any hit upon the killer of his friends.  As his body descended upon the contemptuous fast biter, Calin dodged to his right in order to avoid the attack.  As a result only the back of Calin's tail took a hit from Skytail's sickle claws.  As Skytail collided with the ground below, he could feel the claws and teeth of Calin's minions rip into his flesh.

It is done.  Skytail thought with some satisfaction through the pain.  Goodbye my friends.

"No!!!"  Taunt cried as the currents swept him away.  The last view he could see of his beloved leader was the other pack diving upon him and a sea of red gushing out of the onslaught.  His cherished friend was being ripped to pieces and there was nothing he or the rest of the pack could do about it.  Finally, after a few moments, the currents carried him and the other two raptors away from their leader's last stand.  They would not meet their fate in battle, but rather in the rapidly flowing waters of the treacherous river.  Their survival was in their own hands now.

After the remaining raptors were out of sight, Calin called to his forces.  "Eat your fill of the fallen... they are of no further use to us."  He then clutched the small wound on his tail while giving a hiss of pain.  This caught the attention of some of his packmates.

"Are you alright, sir?'

Calin grimaced.  He was usually far better at handling pain than this.  Undoubtedly his 'concerned' packmate was simply looking for any sign of weakness in order to challenge Calin's position.  Hiding his discomfort, Calin answered resolutely.  "I am fine!  Tend to you bellies!  We need to be ready to move out when the boss says so!"

Calin wondered why he was suddenly reminded of the serpent in the story Skytail told.  Oh well, he had better things to think about then the mad ramblings of a dead raptor.  

He tried to ignore the searing heat that was beginning to course up his tail.

......

Darkness began to descend upon the swamp as the Bright Circle proceeded on its journey to the horizon.  It was now twilight and nightfall would soon be upon the residents of the Land of Shallow Waters.  The sounds of buzzers and gently flowing water could be heard throughout the expanse.  A scene of peace and tranquility.

But looks could be deceiving.

High above the green trees, blue waters, and opaque mists, a pair of yellow eyes were examining the land.  The flyer that they belonged to was facing downward in his observation of the land below, while his powerful wings continued to keep him aloft in the moist air.  The flyer did not have the same capacity for smell that other sharpteeth possessed, but even he could smell the tell-tale smell of water and algae.  It was everywhere in this land of moisture.  It was both a smell of new life and decaying death.  As both intermingled in this land of unseen mysteries.

The flyer seemed to scowl, if his beak could be said to have the ability to make such a gesture, as he obviously was not seeing whatever he was looking for.  His eyes darted from side to side even as his head stayed completely still.  His agitation was becoming clearer and clearer by the moment, as his wings began to beat faster in agitation.  He would have let out a scream of annoyance if that wouldn't have betrayed his purpose.

Then the flyer seemed to suddenly do a double take at something on the ground below.  Making a careful maneuver with his powerful wings he began to hover in place.  A technique which required much more power to maintain, but which gave him a far greater ability to focus on the target he was assessing.  The flyer gazed intently on whatever he saw below as a smile appeared on his face.  Without breaking eye contact, he began to fly backwards a few meters and allowed his wings to take broader flaps in the moist air.  Yes, the flyer certainly had his target in sight.

His triumphant call radiated out into the approaching night.

......

"Sounds like Petrie has found him..."  The massive sharptooth muttered to his assembled pack.  "He has passed his test.  Let's see if the rest of you have what it takes."

Littlefoot grunted at the not so subtle taunt.  "We are ready, sir."

The six members of the pack present were lined up two abreast.  Littlefoot and Chomper were at the front, with Cera and Ruby behind them, and Spike and Ducky taking up the rear.  Both Cera and Littlefoot had pointed sticks in their hands, an idea given to them by Petrie from something the 'brilliant' rainbowfaces had shown him.  Dein has no idea what to make of that development, but he would not dissuade the children from trying their own strategies.  He remembered how his mate's construction of a 'bridge', as Chomper had called it, had saved him from a muddy grave in the mud pools so long ago.  He had learned from that experience that some ideas sounded crazy until they actually succeeded.  Although he was still doubtful that sticks would help them in what was about to come.

Turning his thoughts away from past exploits, Dein again focused on the hunt at hand.  He had decided to get the hunt started.  "Well then...  This is your hunt...."  The emphasis was on the word 'your', the pack would have to plan and carry out the hunt.  Dein would simply be the muscle in the operation.  "What is your plan?"

Littlefoot paused for a moment.  "Chomper and I will get near the threehorn and distract him, while Cera and Ruby will go after the kids.  Ducky and Spike will cut the kids off after the chase begins..."

Dein nodded.  "So an initial distraction, an attack on the weakest, and then the final assault when the father is distraught."  His voice gave no indication of if he thought it was a good plan or not.  Littlefoot supposed that this was part of the test.  They had to succeed or fail on their own merits.  But surely Dein would stop them if the plan was suicidal, wouldn't he?  Dein continued.  "Well then, you had better get started..."

With a curt nod, Littlefoot looked back at his companions.  They had already assembled themselves into their respective pairs, with the exception of Chomper who was slightly behind Littlefoot.  Pointing at Spike and Ducky, he motioned for them to go in first and then motioned towards his eyes.  The message was clear: they would scout first and then report back.  Then the bloody task would begin.

......

Roh sighed at the coming of the night.  It had only been a day since his beloved mate had been struck down by the wicked beast of the swamp.  That night had started like any other.

"Dad.. We're thirsty..."

"It's late, Ann.  It can wait until morning..."

"It's okay, dear.  I can go get some water.  Fetch some large tree stars, will you?"

But it might not be safe!

Don't be silly...  The river is only a short distance away.  You watch the other two young ones.  I will be right back.

Moments went by as he watched his two youngest sleeping peacefully in the crisp night air.  They were so innocent and unaware of the life their family had to lead.  They were shunned by the nearby herd because of his father's misdeeds.  He had committed the crime of challenging the leader and losing.  The successor to the leadership, the previous leader's son, had kept the punishment in place.  The grudges that permeated threehorn society often were passed down for generations.

That was when he heard the screams...


Now he was truly alone in this treacherous place.  He had gone from having a mate and three loving children to being an only father with no margin for error.  If anything happened to him then the entire family would be wiped out.

The massive threehorn yawned.  He had to admit that he was utterly exhausted.  He had spent the previous day comforting his young children and explaining to them that mommy wouldn't come back.  The day was especially hard on his daughter who had seen the attack on her mother.  She would carry those emotional scars for the rest of her life.  None of the family could eat on account of their grief and the horror of the night before.

Finally lying down, he took a final look at his three children.  They looked so calm and happy in their sleep stories, but the next day would surely bring the reminder of what they had lost.  They would need to again be comforted.  Roh closed his eyes and prepared for sleep.  He couldn't be there for his fallen mate, but he could protect her living legacy.  The three younglings were all that he had left.

He didn't see the two pairs of eyes examining him from the bushes...

......

"The threehorn is asleep, Littlefoot."

"Hmmm...  A change of plans might be in order then."

......

"Daddy!"

Roh awoke with a jolt and immediately went to his feet.

The children!

He looked to where his children were supposed to be and noted that four fast biters had surrounded them, growling threateningly.  No!  Not again!  He thought morosely.  He would save them!  He wouldn't let these cowardly brutes take those that he loved.  Never again!

Without thinking, he went into a full charge at the yapping fast biters and let out a roar of his own.  A torrent of emotions went through the father in his headlong assault.  Anger.  Grief.  Sadness.  Disbelief.  Would his children meet their end here?  No.  He resolved to himself.  Not if he had anything to do with it.  Operating on pure instinct the rampaging threehorn could only see red.  Blood would be shed tonight.

As he approached the fast biters, they broke ranks and ran.  Yes, run cowards!  But that was when he felt a terrible pain in his right front foot.

"Ahhhh!!!"  He roared.

He looked towards the site of the injury and could see a stick embedded in his right foot.  He must have stepped on it during his wild charge.  It had impaled the side of the foot and half of it remained outside of the wound.  It was only when he stopped his charge and looked at the wound that he saw another fast biter, a yellow one, rush back into the bushes.  It had been a trap!

That was when he could feel the vibration of heavy footsteps.  The beast was back.

......

The collision of the two dinosaurs caused the swamp to shake.  The threehorn had just enough time to reorient himself towards the advancing sharptooth in order to deflect his bite and push him away with his massive horned head.  The two were now circling each other and exchanging growls.  The trap had not quite worked as expected.  The threehorn had not been taken out in the initial assault.  Now they were evenly matched: a full-grown Tyrannosaurus and a grief-mad Triceratops.  None of the fast biters witnessing the onslaught doubted that this would be a fight to the death.  Had their failure cost Dein his life?

"Go, daddy!"  Chomper called out, as he, Ducky, and Littlefoot approached the scene.  They knew that there was little they could do in this battle in order to turn the tide.  But they had to think of something!

Elsewhere in the swamp, three threehorn children were fleeing for their lives.  They were running in an erratic pattern away from the clearing where their father was fighting Dein.  Close behind them, three fast biters were in pursuit.  A rose colored fast biter was bringing up the front, taking long strides that seemed to be effortless.  She obvious had prior experience running.  Close behind, a dark green fast biter with blue feathers was approaching.  He was a bit larger than his two companions.  Finally, bringing up the rear was a yellow fast biter who seemed to be having second thoughts.  She was obviously not exhausted by her run, but her pace was rapidly slowing.  Each of them was unaware of the close battle taking place in the clearing, having fled upon the threehorn's charge.  Their only concern was to kill the threehorn children and pass the test.

Or in the case of Cera, questioning her resolve.

Cera was unsure of herself.  The three threehorn children were so like Tricia that she was nearly too distraught to continue.  Was this what they had become?  The murderers of children?  It was one thing to help kill other prey, but to kill her own kind... her former kind...  It was horrific!  It was simply too much for the former threehorn.  With each scream, she could hear Tricia in her head.

"We.. Runun...  Runun!"

Damn it! Cera thought to herself.  Now she was close enough to actually hear their yells and screams.  With the ground fuzzies she could pretend that they were unthinking meat sacs, same with eggs, but this was not the case with these younglings...  The pack was about to kill living dinosaurs tonight and she knew that she couldn't stomach it.  It was just too much.

"Nono!  Treree.."

She looked in front of her.  The three younglings had ran straight towards a fallen tree.  Their avenue of escape was blocked.  They were now doomed.

With quick thinking, Ruby ran towards the right side of the children, whereas Spike did the same thing on the other side after a momentary pause.  Cera, for her part, stooped in front of the three children.  They were now trapped.  It was simply up to them to make the killing blow.  But would any of them have that in them?

......

Both dinosaurs were now bleeding from their continued battle.  The threehorn had massive gashes to his head and neck, whereas Dein had injuries to his massive legs.  The battle thus far was a draw, but any misstep by their combatant could result in a quick death.  There was no margin for error.

Crash!

Roar!


Seeing a gap in the sharptooth's defenses, the threehorn impacted the Tyrannosaurus's hind leg with his massive horned head, causing Dein to lose his footing for a few terrifying moments.

"Daddy, no!"  Chomper cried.  Was he going to lose his dad, just like he had nearly lost his mom?  The poor sharptooth was beside himself with worry.  The test had quickly turned into a battle of life and death.

Chomper's two fast biter friends, however, had an idea almost simultaneously.  Thinking quickly, both Ducky and Littlefoot ran towards the lumbering threehorn and let out a series of snarls.  The threehorn briefly turned their way, before concluding they were not a threat and turning his attention back towards the sharptooth.  That was all of the time that Dein needed.

Now with both combatants back on their feet and circling one another, the terrible battle resumed.

......


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"Well, I guess this is it then?"  Ruby called uncertainly at her comrades.  "We have to..."

Spike simply nodded.  He was sick at the realization of what they were about to do.  How did his sister manage to kill the mother flyer when Petrie was threatened?  The cowering threehorns reminded him of Ducky's siblings in a way.  So innocent and playful.  To imagine actually killing them...

Cera was now nauseated at the task ahead of them.  I can't do this!  She raged at herself. It would be like eating Tricia!  It's sick... It's wrong...  Making up her mind, she realized that she would rather not do this despite that fact that they would either have to or starve in the Cold Time.  She would rather be called a coward.  She was unwilling to take this final step.

"Guys, I can't do this!  It's just so wrong!"

At Cera's explanation, Spike and Ruby both looked at her with uncertain eyes.  They were conflicted as well and were hesitating at delivering the killer blows to the children.  Their mental anguish, however, was cut off by a horrific sound.

Crash!

"Get up Dein!  Get up!"


......

Dein had fallen for a second time when Roh crashed into his legs.  This time he was prone on the ground, apparently being knocked unconscious.

"You have to get up!"

Littlefoot and Chomper were both trying to rouse the incapacitated sharptooth, but it was to no avail.  They knew that a momentary distraction wouldn't work here and that the pack couldn't take out the threehorn on their own.  It seemed that this was the end of Dein, their gracious benefactor.

"No!!!"

Littlefoot turned in surprise, to see that Chomper had latched himself onto the threehorn's tail.  The threehorn, in his surprise in anger, was attempting to shake the little predator off.  It was a brave but foolish thing to do.  Whenever Chomper was knocked off of the tail he would certainly be crushed.  With his father knocked unconscious, his son's sacrifice would be in vain.

"We have to help him!"  Littlefoot yelled to Ducky.  With little regard to their own safety, both Littlefoot and Ducky began to attack the threehorn's feet in an attempt to distract him from both Dein and his son.  It was a valiant effort, but each knew that they were in desperate straits.  With that in mind, for the first time in his life, Littlefoot yelled out a distress call.

Caw!

......

"Oh no!  They're in trouble!"  Ruby called out in a panic.  "We need to help!"

Spike's eyes darted from to and fro in the resulting confusion.  "Help how?  It's a threehorn!"

Cera mind was in turmoil.  Not only was she faced with the act of killing younglings, but now it appeared that the others were in distress from the adult threehorn.  How could she or anyone else stop such an onslaught?  Threehorns were the most powerful leaf-eaters on the planet, what weak points could they possibly use to...  No.  Oh no.

Cera looked back at the three small threehorns, who were still huddling and crying together.  She knew what she could used to distract the threehorn, but she was unsure if she would ever forgive herself.

Ruby looked back at Cera.  "What are you doing?!  We have to help!"

Cera yelled back.  "We are helping!  Now do what I do..."

With unsure paws and a growing feeling of nausea, Cera approached the small threehorn in the middle and bit down on her hind leg.

"Ahhhh!!! Da... da... Ahhhh!!!"  The small child cried, as her two siblings screamed in terror.

Cera carefully ripped down the sibling's leg in order to cause maximum suffering.  She had to make her screams and cries as loud as possible.  She tried to ignore the sweetness of the blood in her mouth, the screams echoing in her ears, the mournful cries of the traumatized siblings, or the quivering of the child she was now ripping apart.  A symphony of sensations that made her simultaneously hungry and disgusted.  Excited and disturbed.  The important thing now was to distract the father and give them a chance of victory.

She could hate herself when it was all over.

Through her own mental anguish and the deafening screams of the child she was hurting, she could barely tell when the others joined her in slowly disemboweling the other children.

......

"Ahhh!!!"

The screams of the massacred children cried out into the night.  A horrible, mournful cry that struck foreboding in all who heard them.

"Children!  No!"  Roh completely disregarded the fast biters and the battle at hand and turned towards the muffled screams.  He broke into a full run as he struggled to find them in time.  Completely unnoticed, Chomper slumped off of his tail and landed on the safety of the firm ground.  His gamble to buy his father time had worked.

"Ahhh!!!"

The screams changed from a high pitched scream of pain into several screams.  The fast biters had gotten them all.  As he ran in horrified silence, the screams began to take on a hoarse, gurgling sound.  And then the voices were silent.

He stopped.  This couldn't be!  This simply couldn't be!  But the screams did not return.  Only the silence in the dark swamp greeted him.  His family was gone.  Only he remained.

In rage, he turned back and charged towards the massive Tyrannosaurus.  His family was gone, but they still could be avenged.  He would see to it that the monster who killed his mate would meet his end.  His rage-filled thoughts contained little else.

That was when he felt it.

A slight stinging pain came to the edges of his perception.  A pain that wasn't there moments before.  Not stopping his run, he looked down at his thigh by his right hind leg where the pain had started and saw that a massive torrent of blood was now gushing from the wound.  A pointed stick fell to the ground as well, having been ripped from the wound by the massive blood flow.  A single brown fast biter backed slowly away from the threehorn.  He had hit his target.  The deed was done.

Roh struggled to resume his charge, despite the steady loss of energy, but he began to feel incredibly dizzy.  The brown fast biter had dealt a mortal wound... but he could still get his revenge before he rejoined his family in the land of death.  The sharptooth was still down... still defenseless...  He just had to go a few more seconds... just a few more...

That was when a massive weight fell upon him and knocked him to the ground.

Groggy and losing consciousness fast, he saw the tell-tale shape of a Tyrannosaurus looking down upon him.  Another...  No...  He thought to himself morosely.  His entire family gone and he couldn't even avenge them. Pointless... Pointless...  His mind sadly concluded, as the large sharptooth ended his life with one stomp of her foot.

"Mom!"  Chomper cried.

"Terri..."  A groggy Dein called out nearly simultaneously.  He was still struggling to get up after his ordeal.

Terri looked over at her mate.  "It sounded like you were having some trouble.  Bite off a bit more than you can chew?"

Dein rolled his eyes.  "Damn you woman!  Can't I get any sympathy?"  His words were unkind, but his tone was playful.  He was just happy to still be alive.

Using her body as a support, Terri helped Dein off of the ground.  "I seem to be back to my old self again."  She affirmed to her mate.  "But it looks like you need to rest for awhile."  He snorted at this as he steadied himself on his feet.  He was still woozy from the threehorns powerful blows.

Chomper wasted no time and hugged his father's toe claws.  A gesture that earned him a nuzzle from both parents.  Taking a look at Ducky and Littlefoot, Terri decided to speak.

"You dealt a mortal blow to the threehorn, Littlefoot.  I have never seen a young fast biter do that to a healthy threehorn.  He would have died even without my attack."  She then paused for a moment.  "But I am sure that Dein didn't want me to wait..."  Dein nudged her at rubbing in the fact that she had saved his life, but then the two leaned on one another in the sharptooth equivalent of an embrace.  Despite their faux vitriol, they both knew that they had a close call today.  She had nearly lost her mate.  "No more solo hunts, Dein."  She demanded.  "I am well enough to hunt again.  We will do it together."  She then looked at the three children.  "All of us."

After a few moments, the embrace ended and the two sharpteeth were able to take stock of the situation.  Finally, Terri asked the pertinent question.

"So, did they pass the test?"

Dein looked at the two fast biters before him and his own son.  Looking back towards the bushes, he could also see the other three arrive.  Each was coated from head to toe in blood.  Each wore dour, contemplative expressions on their faces.  They had slaughtered the threehorn children in order to save him, despite the turmoil that it had caused them personally.  All of them had risked their lives and their sanity in order to do what had to be done.  They were ready to confront the realities of their new lives.  In light of this, there was only one answer that he could possibly give.

"Yes.  Yes they did."

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Location unknown:

"Gasp... cough... cough..."

Air.  Wonderful air.  Taunt had little recollection of what had happened after his dive into the raging river.  There was blue water and white mist.  The rolling green of the land around him as he tumbled in the cacophony of water.  And...

Skytail.

His mind rebelled at that memory.  The recollection of his dear friend being ripped to shreds, while he could do nothing to save him.  He raged at fate for placing him in such a situation.  He would have rather joined his leader in death than flee like a coward, but that was what Skytail had made them all do.  He had obviously planned this in order to ensure a possibility of their survival.  In his honor and commitment to duty, Skytail had willingly sacrificed himself and now both he and Scarflank were gone.  It was just him and...

The others.  Did any of the others make it?

Still gasping for breath, Taunt attempted to rise from his position, only to fall again.  His legs were failing him, it seemed.  The struggle with the river having weakened him beyond exhaustion.  he looked to his sides.  There was only jagged rocks and the river in the distance.  This doesn't look like the lowlands at all... He noted to himself.  How far did we go?  

Coughing again, he resumed his search for his friends.  But a terrible thought came to him: what if he was all that was left?  What if the others had not survived the hopeless swim?  What would he do then?  The pack's existence couldn't end like this!  He had to find someone... anyone... who survived this tragedy.  And then they would deal with Calin and his pack of mongrels.

Looking to his right, he could see a rock that was a bit different than the others.  It was gray, whereas most of the other rocks had a brown color.  That's no rock, that's a raptor!  He thought suddenly.  That's Breeze!

"Hang on!  I am coming!"  He croaked, as he stumbled towards his fellow companion.  Please be alive, Breeze!  Don't leave me here alone!  As he struggled to keep his footing, he came crashing down again.  This knocked the air out of the poor raptor as he rolled on the rocks.  Taking a few raspy breaths, he began to claw his way towards his friend.  Finally, after what seemed like an eternity, he reached his destination.

What greeted his was a soaked Utahraptor, with no obvious sign of life.

Please... Breeze!  Don't be...

"She is alright, Taunt.  She is just resting."

Taunt froze.  He recognized that voice.

"The other... I am sorry... I'm afraid that she didn't make it."

Taunt choked back a sob.  So Vigilant wasn't able to survive the journey down the river.  He had feared as much.  That only left him and Breeze as the last legacy of the pack.  What would they do now?  And how did they survive the swim?  Who carried them to shore?  A sudden realization reached Taunt.  It had to be the dinosaur who was talking to him right now.

"I wish that I could have done more..."

With his arms wrapped around his legs for warmth, Taunt slowly turned his head towards the soft-speaking dinosaur.  He knew the voice, but seeing the face was something else entirely.  He was face-to-face with a raptor he thought that he would never see again.  With a hesitant voice, Taunt spoke to the dinosaur who had saved them.

"Dad?"

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The lowlands:

"Thanks for your help back there!  I have never seen that many fast biters!"

Bron heartedly thanked the other longneck.  He and the spiketails were holding the fast biters at bay, but Tippy and Shorty were nearly picked off by a clever fast biter.  That was when the mysterious longneck made his presence known.  A few flicks of his massive tail sent the forward group of the fast biters running, the rest began to flee shortly thereafter.  The mysterious longneck, however, was not one to brag.

"Just did what needed to be done."

Bron took a closer look at the longneck and noticed a tell-tale scar on his right eye and large gash on his right flank.  The gash appeared to be far more recent than the scar on his eye.  He must have seen much in the way of battle.

"Dad..da..."

Suddenly the mysterious longneck turned and his expression softened.  A small infant longneck, born no later than the last Cold Time was looking at the mysterious longneck with a happy expression.  The mysterious longneck smiled slightly.  Without a word he picked up the small longneck with his mouth and placed him on his back.  His voice called out with much more emotion and compassion than his previous gruff statement had indicated he was capable of.

"You be careful there, young one.  Remember what your mother taught ya."

Shorty had rejoined Bron and was by the massive longneck's front feet.  He had demanded to go with his father on his journey to avenge Littlefoot.  Bron had initially resisted, but Shorty noted that the spiketail herd would provide protection just like Bron's old herd had provided.  Finally, Shorty's perseverance had paid off and he was allowed to come along.  He had been bored on the long journey, with no longnecks to converse with besides Bron, but he had played a few games with the spiketail named Tippy.  It seemed that both dinosaurs had lost friends in Chomper's betrayal and they had struck up companionship on that basis.  Right now, however, a question raged in the little longneck's mind.

"Where is his mother?"

As soon as he had said it, Shorty regretted his decision as the mysterious longneck again turned distant and frowned.

"I and Stomper are all that remains."

Bron's face fell, a gesture that Shorty repeated.  He didn't intend to bring back sad memories to the hero of the hour.  Bron answered after a pause.  "I am sorry for your loss..."

The longneck sighed.  "It is what it is...  I should get going..."

Bron looked at the longneck with concern.  "Wait!  You could have protection here.  I am sure after what you have done that the herd will allow you to tag along..."

The spiketail leader spoke up at this.  "Yes..."  Although his tone of voice was a bit more reluctant.  "We have been forced to have two longnecks come along on our journey, I fail to see why one more would be much worse."

The mysterious longneck seemed to want to initially decline the offer, but the playful chattering of his son on his back seemed to cause something in the longneck's expression to change.  "Alright.  Thank you for the hospitality...  Where you all going?"

The spiketail leader turned and began to head out with the rest of his herd in tow.  "The Land of the Shallow Waters... Try to keep up..."

The mysterious longneck gave a slight snort at the spiketail's obvious lack of enthusiasm, but joined with Bron at the rear of the herd.  After a few moments, Bron asked a question that was on his mind.

"So, what's your name, friend?"

The mysterious longneck looked at Bron for a moment.  Bron's expression was welcoming, but had a hint of melancholy in it.  A sign of deep distress over a recent loss.  He also couldn't help but notice that Bron's 'son' was of a different kind that he was.  It seemed that Bron was a bit of a mystery himself.  Well, no reason for my name to be a mystery. The dinosaur thought to himself.

"The name's Doc."

End of Act 2


I would like to thank all of my readers for the reviews and continued interest. I have been working on this story at a rapid pace for awhile now, but I plan on continuing my schedule of posting a chapter every five or six days. This might change once I get into the fourth act (probably sometime in September) but I will try to maintain this pace for the duration of Act 3.

As always, I look forward to your reviews and comments.  The first chapter of Act 3: Echoes of the Past should be posted sometime on Sunday.


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Dang! There was a lot of death in the final chapter of act 2, and Thud and his son reunite. I'm curious as to how things will progress, especially with Calin. And what a surprise to see Doc return. I'm looking forward to seeing his role in the story.


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Quote from: CeraTheRed,Jun 18 2014 on  11:04 AM
Dang! There was a lot of death in the final chapter of act 2, and Thud and his son reunite. I'm curious as to how things will progress, especially with Calin. And what a surprise to see Doc return. I'm looking forward to seeing his role in the story.
Thanks for the review.   :) Yeah, this chapter certainly has a lot of death even by my standards.  However, with Taunt and Breeze surviving, at least the sacrifices of the others were not in vain.  Calin, however, is bad news to everyone in the Mysterious Beyond.  The combination of an ambitious, unscrupulous leader and followers who are being led by fear of being eliminated for being too weak has lead to a very dangerous pack to come across.  However, as we shall see, Skytail's use of poison in this chapter will have consequences later on.

As for Doc's return, yes that will certainly be interesting.  :yes I don't want to give anything away, but let's just say that when he hears what happened to Littlefoot from Bron that there will be some repercussions...


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Quote from: rhombus,Jun 19 2014 on  01:05 PM
Quote from: CeraTheRed,Jun 18 2014 on  11:04 AM
Dang! There was a lot of death in the final chapter of act 2, and Thud and his son reunite. I'm curious as to how things will progress, especially with Calin. And what a surprise to see Doc return. I'm looking forward to seeing his role in the story.
Thanks for the review.   :) Yeah, this chapter certainly has a lot of death even by my standards.  However, with Taunt and Breeze surviving, at least the sacrifices of the others were not in vain.  Calin, however, is bad news to everyone in the Mysterious Beyond.  The combination of an ambitious, unscrupulous leader and followers who are being led by fear of being eliminated for being too weak has lead to a very dangerous pack to come across.  However, as we shall see, Skytail's use of poison in this chapter will have consequences later on.

As for Doc's return, yes that will certainly be interesting.  :yes I don't want to give anything away, but let's just say that when he hears what happened to Littlefoot from Bron that there will be some repercussions...
Very true. There's still hope! You are also very welcome! I LOVE reviewing this story just as much as I love reading it! :D
That's what I figured! I have an idea of what will happen, based on the Skytail's story, but I'll just wait for you to continue it.

So far, I've really liked all the characters you've brought back, and their roles in the story, so I might like Doc's, too. I shall see with the next part Doc's in, I suppose.


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Another good chapter,now Doc is back things will get even more interesting. Don't think he'll be too happy when he hears about Littlefoot's 'death'.

Nice cliff hanger to end it on,I look forward to see how it all carries out.

Lots of death going on here,but thats nature it ain't all sunshine and rainbows. True this is a fic for a cartoon movie but it really does show a predators point of view of the world,it's really interesting. They kill to survive not just kicks and giggles. Sometimes it does get a bit detailed but I also like that,I like you don't dumb it down. I hate it when people do that,I don't really like those types of fics that are all sugar and love,reality is life hurts and you show that very well. LBT for teenagers/adults=awesome :D

Poor,Cera she really didn't want to kill those threehorns,but she had to for survival. Must be awful for her,as well as everyone else when they first have to eat their own kind (leafeaterr versions anyway xD)

Well thats all I got to say for now,look forward to the next chapter. I havne't noticed and typos really,then again I can't even notice my own.

I'll just end this off with my favourite quote from the last chapter.

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Ducky blinked a few times at this. "Huh? My aunt is named Tree Star!"

Haha,little bit of humour there..or maybe I'm just easily amused. Either way it made me chuckle.


Keep it up.


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Thanks for the review.  :)

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Lots of death going on here,but thats nature it ain't all sunshine and rainbows. True this is a fic for a cartoon movie but it really does show a predators point of view of the world,it's really interesting. They kill to survive not just kicks and giggles. Sometimes it does get a bit detailed but I also like that,I like you don't dumb it down. I hate it when people do that,I don't really like those types of fics that are all sugar and love,reality is life hurts and you show that very well. LBT for teenagers/adults=awesome :D

I am glad that you think so.  That is one thing that annoys me with a lot of children's entertainment nowadays, that is that they water down tragedy instead of using it as a teaching moment.  The first LBT film was not guilty of this, but it can be argued that some of the sequels were.  If children are only given positive depictions of reality then that will put them at a disadvantage when the realities of life come crashing down upon them in adolescence and beyond.  I want to get into the harsh reality in order to stress the realities of the pack's situation and the decisions that they must take.  I am glad that you and many of the other reviewers like that stylistic choice on my part.

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Poor,Cera she really didn't want to kill those threehorns,but she had to for survival. Must be awful for her,as well as everyone else when they first have to eat their own kind (leafeaterr versions anyway xD)

Yeah, her actions in this chapter show that she was reluctant to take the actions that she did.  Despite her bravado about hunting ground fuzzies, her well-developed sense of empathy came shining through when she was confronted with what she was ordered to do.  It is doubtful that she would have followed through if it wasn't for Dein's plight forcing her hand.

Thanks again for the review.  I hope that you enjoy the next chapter.


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Author's note: So here it is, the beginning of the third Act of this four-act story. This chapter begins several weeks after the events on the last chapter and in the intervening time, the gang has taken to exclusively using their sharptooth names. With that in mind, here is another reminder as to what those names are:

Littlefoot: Seeker

Cera: Stern Claw

Ducky: Haven

Petrie: Spotter

Spike: Finder

Ruby: Ponder

Chomper: Path

With that out of the way, I hope that you enjoy the next Act.


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Fanfiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/39/The-Seven-Hunters

ACT 3: ECHOES OF THE PAST

Chapter 38   Comings and goings

“Some people come and go and are forgotten. But there are other people who share a part in our destinies. They come, they go, but they are never forgotten. They come, they go, but even after they go... they're still here. They never really went anywhere.”
― C. JoyBell C.


Hmmm.... This seems promising.

The fast biter smelled the air for what seemed like several minutes.  Smells did not travel as well in this rain-soaked valley that she found herself in.  The smells of a variety of dinosaurs was overpowered by the scent of moisture.  However, with vegetation like what was found in this valley, she knew that there had to be prey somewhere.

It would simply be up to her to find it.

She proceeded to walk through the thick vegetation of the field that she found herself in.  It was overgrown with tall grass and curious bushes.  It seemed almost familiar... in some way.  

She shook her head.  She never remembered herself hunting here before so she ignored the sense of dÈj‡ vu.  She had to refocus herself onto the matter at hand: hunting.  Everything else could wait.

Then she heard it...

Laughter.

She stood upon her hind limbs and peeked above the tall grass.  There in a nearby open field was a small infant threehorn, which couldn’t have been older than one Cold Time.  Better yet, the pink dinosaur didn’t appear to be with any adults or playmates.  She was all alone and defenseless.  The fast biter smiled.

Perfect.

With slow, deliberate steps she advanced through the tall grass until she could just begin to see the outline of the small dinosaur through the vegetation.  She then took another sniff of the moist air.

Only the smell of the small threehorn was present.  The coast was clear for an attack.

But yet... There was something holding her back... something stopping her from beginning the assault.  The threehorn seemed familiar in some way.

Nonsense.  She thought to herself.  I know of no threehorns, they are simply food to me!  

She shook her head.  It was time to stop thinking and get to work.  With little warning, she sprung out of the grass.

“Ahhh!!!!”

The threehorn screamed as the fast biter suddenly appeared to her right.  She ran in a headlong sprint back towards the center of the valley.  But, she was too far away... There was no way that she was going to make it in time.  She had traveled too far away from the nest.

The sound of running footsteps began louder and louder until finally the threehorn felt a terrible pain in her hind legs.  She shreaked in pain and began to tumble end over end in the open field.  Her hind legs had been ripped asunder.  She was now a sitting target for the merciless predator.

The fast biter advanced more slowly now.  She was quite satisfied with her hunt.  The threehorn was incapacitated and would soon be dispatched.  Not bad at all for a first hunt in an unknown location.  As she advanced towards the small threehorn, it turned to look at the approaching danger.  The small threehorn’s eyes opened as wide as a snapping shell and she began to mutter something through the pain.

“Cew... Cewa... Cera?”


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Cera awoke in a panic.

She struggled to catch her breath for a few moments as the horrifying scene slowly dissipated from her mind.  That is the third time that week. She thought to herself.  Why can't my sleep stories leave me alone?

As Cera pondered her predicament in her sleep-deprived state, another fast biter looked at his friend with some concern.  This was the second time that he had been awakened by her nighttime ordeals.  He initially didn't want to draw attention to her as he was fully aware of how much Cera's pride meant to her, but after a repeat of this situation he decided that it was time to risk her wrath.

"Are you alright, Stern Claw?"  The brown fast biter whispered at his companion.  He had used the sharptooth version of her name, a trend that all of the others had been following since the hunting test they had fulfilled several weeks ago.

Cera turned towards Littlefoot.  She was embarrassed to have her bad sleep stories be noticed by her friend, but she knew that lying about it would not make the situation any better.  They had been getting worse as of late.  With a sigh, she decided to tell the truth.

"I don't know, Seeker."  She affirmed, using Littlefoot's new name.  "It's the same sleep story every night..."

Littlefoot noted that she had a faraway look to her eyes and a morose expression on her face.  This is unlike Stern Claw!  Littlefoot thought to himself.  If she is feeling upset and is willing to admit it then it must be really bad! With a grim expression on his face, he gestured to have Cera follow him away from the sleeping area.  He figured that Cera needed some time to confide in privacy.  Cera, for her part, nodded and followed wordlessly, her tail dragging behind her.  Littlefoot could not tell if that was from fatigue, sadness, or both.  He resolved to find out.

The two walked away in silence from the small depression that served as their sleeping area.  Upon passing Dein's test and killing the threehorn family, the pack had exceeded the number of hunts that Skytail had once told them meant that a fast biter was skilled enough to be on their own.  There was no similar cutoff in the case of Chomper's kind, but nonetheless both of Chomper's parents had affirmed that Chomper could stay with his pack and sleep just outside of his parent's nest.  It seemed that Chomper and the pack were now being considered sharpteeth and not just young biters.

However, the freedom of being on their own also came with a price in the form of the burdens that placed upon them.  Cera was now beginning to strain under those burdens.  Littlefoot, Ducky, Petrie, and Chomper had all killed dinosaurs prior to that unforgettable hunt, but the others had not yet taken that step.  The strain was especially hard on Cera, as she had to kill another dinosaur of her former kind.  A small dinosaur that Littlefoot suspected reminded her of someone she hadn't seen in several months.

Finally after a few moments of walking, the duo was by a nearby stream.  With a deep breath, Littlefoot invited Cera to share her thoughts.

"I know you don't like talking about this stuff, but um..."  He began uncertainly.

Cera sighed deeply in annoyance.  "Yeah... yeah... I know.  Just give me a moment, will ya?"

Littlefoot waited for several moments as the silence continued.  Only the sound of buzzers and gently flowing waves could be heard in the darkness.  Finally, Cera spoke again.

"How um... how are you adjusting to this?"  She blurted out rather inarticulately.

Littlefoot blinked a few times.  "What?"

Cera sighed softly.  "To being... you know... what we are now."

Littlefoot nodded slowly at her statement.  "Well, about as good as everyone else, Stern Claw.  I mean... we all can hunt now and we all do sharptooth things..."  He wasn't sure where Cera was going with this conversation.  They had all put their misgivings about what they were aside months ago, or so he thought.  But then again...

"Well, Littlefoot..."  Cera began.  The change to referring to him by his leaf-eater name was not lost on Littlefoot.  "You were the first of us to kill... well... besides Chomper, of course..."  She seemed to contort her mouth oddly as if she were searching for the right words, but they refused to be found.  "That hunt... that hunt... was my first time killing another dinosaur, you know?"  

Her voice sounded exhausted, Littlefoot observed.  However, there was something more to this.  He just wasn't quite sure what it was, but he was beginning to have his suspicions.  "Is the little threehorn what you dreamed about?"

Cera looked down and turned away from Littlefoot to hide her face.  Littlefoot instantly knew that he had gotten to the heart of the matter.

Cera took a breath.  "I dreamt that I killed Tricia."

Littlefoot nodded as his suspicions were confirmed.  However, he remained silent in order for her to tell him what she wanted to tell.  He knew that she needed a listener right now more than she needed explanations.  When she wanted him to answer her then she would let him know.

"I know that I would never..."  She started.  "But then again I never thought I would kill another one of... what I used to be."  She had avoided saying 'what she is', Littlefoot noted.  She continued after a brief pause.  "I'm afraid of losing myself...  Am I already gone?"  

Littlefoot stood mouth agape as he saw Cera suddenly begin to sob.  After his brief surprise at her sudden distress, he speedily ran over to her and quickly offered a nuzzle to his oldest friend.  It seemed that Cera had held the internal crisis for far longer than all of the others and as a consequence she had the hardest fall.  Littlefoot had simply assumed that her practical nature had allowed her to endure when the others struggled, but now he knew that she was putting on an act for the most part.  Deep inside, she still thought of herself in some deep way as a threehorn.  The act of killing a threehorn child had finally dealt the killing blow to the last vestiges of her old identity.  Now she was in the identity crisis that they all were struggling with in their own way.

Littlefoot spoke to her gently.  "You are still you, Cera."  He was careful to use her leaf-eater name.  "We have been this way for months now.  We have had to kill and eat flesh.  We have had to do... terrible things.  But we are still ourselves."

Cera broke away and looked at the brown fast biter with uncertainty.  "Are we?"  She then shook her head.  "The stuff that I have done... I would have done as a leaf-eater.  Most of my thoughts are about food and hunting.  I even enjoy hunting..."  She paused for a moment to collect her thoughts.  "I enjoyed it when I was hunting ground fuzzies... but with the threehorn..."

Littlefoot nodded.  "That was different."  It was an observation, not a question.

Cera nodded.  "I hesitated and I felt bad afterwards, but I didn't feel bad because of killing her..."  Littlefoot waited for Cera to finish her statement and he noticed with some concern the haunted look that came over her face.  "I felt bad because part of me felt nothing at all.  The screams...  The begging...  Part of me was indifferent to it all."  

Littlefoot was beginning to understand now.  He was absolutely distraught with Rhett's killing at his claws, but subsequent acts of stealing eggs and planning hunts had not fazed him much at all.  The first kill was the hardest and then...

"We use sharptooth names now and play sharptooth games and I wonder where 'Cera' died and 'Stern Claw' was born."  Cera continued.  "I don't know whether I want to remember my old life or... or to just forget."

Littlefoot took a deep breath.  He had made peace with his change, but he had not had the same reaction that Cera was having.  He had despised the sharptooth that had killed his mother and feared them all of his life, but part of him knew that they had little choice in their diet.  As a result, he was more willing to view himself as still being Littlefoot deep inside. Or am I lying to myself? Littlefoot thought suddenly.  I have gone from an adventurous kid to a killer.  Maybe 'Seeker' is all that remains anymore.

Littlefoot then shook his head.  No, that was not correct.  He still remembered his mother, he still remembered what is was like to be a leaf-eater, and he was never more cruel than necessary.  He would have to set Cera straight.

"If you were truly gone, Cera..."  Littlefoot was careful to use her leaf-eater name again.  "...then why would eating Tricia in your sleep story make you upset?"  Cera seemed to be taken aback by this.  "You still remember what you were, right?"  At Cera's nod he continued.  "You still love your parents, right?"  She nodded again.  "Then you are still you where it matters."  Littlefoot finished.

Cera took a deep breath and nodded her head.  "I guess that you're right, Seeker."  She had fallen back into her habit of using his sharptooth name.  "It's just so hard...  It would be so much easier to just..."

"Forget?"  Littlefoot offered.

Cera nodded.  "Yeah."

Littlefoot sighed.  "I guess that is why we use our sharptooth names now... If we think of ourselves that way then it is easier to do what we have to do... I guess that as long as 'Seeker' remembers what it's like being the food then 'Littlefoot' will still be here, somewhere."

Cera looked up at the stars while he was speaking and simply gave an affirmative grunt at his statement.  The two continued to keep one another company for several more moments, before both of them returned to the sleeping area and attempted to go back to sleep.

There were no more interruptions that night.

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The small flyer groaned as his rest came to an end.  As the first rays of sunlight reached his perch above the slumbering pack, his eyelids began to open at the unwanted intrusion of light.  Morning had arrived and with it a new day.  However, with a jolt, he remembered the events of the previous day.

Pterano gone. Petrie recollected.  Uncle gone with the herd.

Petrie had remembered his discussion with his uncle from several days ago.  It was the first time that Pterano indicated that his herd was leaving.  It was a most difficult conversation for the flyers.

Petrie, my nephew, it seems that my herd will be heading out soon.

Petrie nodded at this.  He suspected that this time had been coming for a while.  That did not mean that he was looking forward to it, however.  "So you have to go, uncle?"  His voice was soft, but controlled.  The leaf-eater Petrie would be very upset, but the sharptooth 'Spotter' knew better than to cry at the inevitable.  There were simply some things that could not be changed.

Pterano looked circumspect and hesitated before answering.  "Well, that is what I wanted to talk to you about.  I am thinking about not following the rest of the herd."

Petrie blinked at this.  "What?  Why?"  He wasn't upset that his uncle wanted to keep him company, but leaving the herd was foolishness.  What if he were attacked by a sharptooth flyer?  It was far safer in a large herd.

Pterano looked at Petrie with surprise.  He obviously had not expected his nephew's response.  "Well... um..."  He hesitated with uncertainty, an unusual act on his part.  "I figured that I could spend more time with you.  The Land of Shallow Waters seems safe enough.  I am sure that I can manage without the herd."

Petrie shook his head immediately.  "That not good, uncle!  Me not big enough to stop large sharptooth flyer!  You should fly with herd; be safe."

Pterano looked at his nephew with surprise and tilted his head in confusion.  He seemed to analyze his nephew for some time before responding.  "You have changed, Petrie."

Petrie took on an unreadable expression at that affirmation.

Pterano quickly continued.  "I don't mean that as an insult, but the old you would have not thought about things like that.  You would have brushed them aside."  Pterano then gave his nephew a small smile.  "I supposed that my loneliness overrode my reason."  He then nodded.  "I guess that I should follow the herd... but will you be alright?"

Petrie returned Pterano's sad smile.  "Me will be okay, uncle.  Petrie will be sad to see you go, but me understand."  He then bowed his head slightly.  "Me just want you to stay safe."

Pterano offered his wing to Petrie and he readily accepted the offered embrace.  Pterano then spoke again.  "You stay safe as well, Petrie.  I... I can't even to begin to understand how you must live now, but as long as your stay with your friends I am sure that you will be okay."

Petrie nodded at this, before noticing that he had wetness in his eyes.  It seemed that he was not quite as hardened as he had originally assumed.  He spoke softly.  "Me can still try to visit you when you near here.  We flyers can fly faster than others walk."

Pterano nodded.  "That is true...  The herd will be at the Red Coasts for the winter... Now that the mothers have vacated their nests..."

The mentioning of mother flyers and their children caused Petrie some discomfort on account of his hunt of a flyer family, but he hid his discomfort from his uncle.  It couldn't be helped in any case.

"That is where we will be going, Petrie.  Feel free to fly by if you should ever need anything."

Petrie broke the embrace and smiled at his uncle.  "Me will, uncle.  Me will."


Petrie shook his head at the memory.  With the rainbowfaces having already departed for the Great Valley, the pack was truly alone within their own territory.  The only leaf-eater adults that knew of their plight where far away from them and only reachable in a timely manner through the efforts of the small flyer.  He was now not just their most important scout, but also their outlet in order to talk with their scattered allies.

It was a task that he would continue to perform admirably, he resolved.

"Hey, beak-face!"

Petrie groaned.  That was Stern Claw's voice.  It undoubtedly was time for their morning games.  He just hoped that someone would defeat her today, lest she become even more insufferable than she already was.  But her tendency to throw out taunts did not mean that he shouldn't join in the fun.  After all, he was a sharptooth as well.

Smiling, he decided to trade an insulting greeting of his own.  "Me coming, slow-walker!"

An irritated "Hmph!" emanated from the ground as he heard Stern Claw storm off.

Me finally getting better at this! Petrie thought to himself.  It easy being jerk when others can't catch you! Shaking his head, he flew down to join the others in their impromptu gathering.  

Me wonder what game we play today?

......

The pack still had plenty of food from their catch the previous night.  In the process of chasing an adult, Dein had scared a young hadrosaur who then ran straight into the path of the pack.  He had skillfully evaded the attacks from the pack, but after a spear thrown by Ruby struck him in the hip, the swimmer immediately crumpled to the ground.  The prey was then quickly dispatched by Cera and Littlefoot.  

Each of them quickly devoured some of the remains from the slain hadrosaur, as each was eager to begin playing.  Purposeless play was a somewhat uncommon luxury in the Land of Shallow Waters, as the pack often spent most of their time hunting and preparing for hunts.  They regularly would go for a day or more without having the time to even play 'Hunter and Prey'.  Their instincts made the hunts feel like play to some extent, as the excitement and exhilaration of a hunt could not be matched despite whatever internal conflicts they still had about killing, but each of them desired the simpler pleasures that they enjoyed before their transformation from time to time.  The act of play was one of the few remembrances of that time that they could still enjoy.  Accordingly, the discussion around the swimmer carcass revolved around the upcoming game.

"How about Hunter and Prey?  We have not played that in a while.  Nope, nope, nope!"

Cera had to shrug at this.  "True, Haven.  But we haven't really done anything fun in a while.  Unless, you count getting Spike out of the mud pool as being fun..."

Spike grunted indignantly.  "I had to try to catch that swimmer!  I never let good food go to waste!"

Petrie took on a sarcastic expression.  "Well that obvious..."

Spike looked at the flyer with a deadly glare, while the others laughed heartedly.  Despite being a swift and deadly fast biter, Spike was still the heaviest of the group.  He loved his meat, although with his physically active lifestyle much of it turned into thick muscle on his athletic build.  However, after a few moments, even Spike had to give a slight chuckle at Petrie's comment.  He knew the flyer meant no malice by his insulting statement, as fast biters often used sarcasm, insults, and false vitriol to show their affinity for one another.  As the only sharptooth statement went: If a dinosaur insults you and you want to kill them, then they are your enemy.  But, if a dinosaur insults and you don't want to kill them, then they are your friend.

Seeker then spoke up.  "How about 'Tracker and Hider'?  We haven't played that game in a while."

Ruby nodded at this.  "Yes, that sounds like a good game to play.  Hopefully, I will play the game good!"

The others nodded and grunted their agreement as well.  The game had been decided.

......

The rose colored fast biter slowly walked through the underbrush.  She had been caught twice and now was tied with Cera.  If she could just catch her one more time then she would be the winner of today's match, as all of the others had been caught multiple times.  However, it seemed that the pack was getting much smarter in avoiding being tracked.  Between the trick that Chomper had taught them of walking through water in order to hide your scent and her own idea of walking multiple times in different intersecting paths, the job of tracker had become much more difficult as time went on.

Maybe if we had known these tricks as leaf-eaters then we could not have been chased as much!  Ruby thought to herself.  Of course, maybe if I didn't ponder so much then I could find someone!

She stopped in a clearing and took another deep breath.

She winced slightly at the torrent of smells that reached her nose.  Spike had apparently used some of the foul-smelling fruit that sickens sharpteeth and smeared it nearby.  She shook her head. How was he able to use that stuff?  It is making me sick smelling it!  How was he able to smell it and not get sick? Pushing that unsavorily scent aside in her mind, she could smell a few other things of note.  There was moisture and the tell-tale smell of ferns in the air, a constant presence in this swamp that they now called home.  Other than that, there was simply the smell of ground fuzzy urine and pheromones from the various herbivores.  Normally those pheromones would have been a promising sign for a potential hunt, but right now they were only a distraction.  She was hunting for Cera, not for food!

She sat down on her haunches for a moment in order to catch her bearings again.  I guess that I could try to retrace my steps. She pondered to herself.  Or I could go to the stream and smell for them there.  They might have left a scent when they crossed over the water.  While she was thinking to herself, however, she heard a small rustling in the grass behind her.

She turned and immediately took on an alert posture.

She stared as the tall grass that stood behind her.  The grass was gently swaying in the breeze, but there did not appear to be anything amiss in the vegetation.  But I was sure that I heard something... Ruby thought to herself.  She took another tentative step...

There! She thought to herself.

Between some of the blades of grass she could just see a flash of tan.  The tan was far too pale to be the coloration of Cera's, but perhaps it was simply the swaying grass playing games with her eyes?  The only pack member that had a color even close to tan was Cera's... It had to be her!

With a smile erupting on her face, Ruby went into a stalking posture and leaned forward.  She had to sprint and tackle Cera before she could sprint away.  She would only have one shot at this.  Ruby took one final breath and slowly exhaled.  Her heart beat accelerated in anticipation of the upcoming chase and her feet twitched in excitement.  She was ready for this!  Without any warning, she sprinted into the grass and dived upon the hiding figure.

"Ahhh!!!"

Ruby dove back from her catch when she heard the scream of a male voice.  This wasn't Cera!  This was someone else!  With extreme trepidation, she took several steps back and took on a defensive posture.  The stranger that she had pounced on did the same.  As both fast biters circle one another, Ruby screeched a series of three warbles.  This was a clear sign to her packmates that an intruder had been found.  They would be running to her position shortly.  After performing her duty in the matter, Ruby decided to break the awkward silence between herself and the mysterious stranger.

"Who are you, stranger?  Why are you in our territory?"  The response was blunt and unkind, but such was the appropriate response to competitors who dared enter their territory.  Was the stranger hostile or simply lost?  She could take no chances here.  It would be better to be harsh and powerful as opposed to being soft and kind.  Weakness could get you killed far more quickly than rudeness.

The tan fast biter smiled slightly and gave Ruby a cordial wave, which caused her to tilt her head at the mysterious stranger in confusion.

"The name's Calin."

......

"There it is!"

Doc turned in the direction of where Bron was looking.  A land of seemingly lush vegetation and plentiful waters stood in front of them, a sudden departure from the barren lands that they had just crossed.  It would be a welcome change of scenery for the spiketail herd and the four longnecks.

"Yes.  So it is."  Doc answered gruffly.  

Looking to his side, Bron could see that Stomper was continuing to follow and imitate Shorty's mannerisms, much to the green longneck's annoyance.  It seemed that Stomper had no one near his age in order to play with or look up to... until now.  Now the infant longneck was acting like Shorty's shadow.  He barely stifled a laugh, knowing that would make Shorty even more embarrassed at his current predicament.  It was as if Shorty now had a little brother of his own...

The last thought sent a shiver of pain and remorse through the tall Bron longneck.  He had a brother... and now he is gone.

Doc saw the sudden change in the brown longneck and knew that the demons from his past were again haunting him.  He recognized the signs, as he had experienced them in the past.  The loss of a mate and the loss of a son could do terrible things to a parent.  Doc could see the anger rise and the determination follow.  He shook his head.  Just don't leave your child an orphan, Bron.  No need to leave another child without a parent.  

Despite his misgivings, however, Doc knew that he would help the stranger when he decided it was time to strike.  Those sharpteeth had killed far more than Bron's son.  They had killed the brave and mischievous youngling that he looked forward to seeing on his visits, Littlefoot.  It saddened him that he would no longer be part of future of his kind and that allowed him to feel the same rage that Bron now felt.  I was right about sharpteeth all along. Doc thought with some remorse.  I should have never backed down.  I should have told Littlefoot to disown the purple fiend.  Yes, Chomper would pay for his betrayal.  

Both of them would make sure of that.



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Review of chapter 36:

Aww, poor Chomper. I really hope his mother is going to make it. Dein's word make him feel better I hope.

Good hunting scene! Ducky didn't seem to object hunting her own kind. The Rainbowfaces were watching though I didn't quite get why. Did they want to ensure that they are doing alright?

Ah, now that's some relief :) Terri is on the way of recovery at last. It is quite a touching scene that Chomper's parents allow the Seven Hunters to stay under their supervision :)

Ah, Petrie :) So Dein wants Petrie to fly faster which is a very logical thing to do. The Gang will have to hunt adults soon indeed.

Oh, now these are worrisome developments... Calin's pack seems to be very powerful and now threatens Skytail and his pack. They are Redclaw's allies so this is a considerable threat not only to the pack itself but also to the dinosaurs of the Great Valley and the Seven Hunters and their supervisors.

So you're not ending the chapter on a cliffhangar but happily and peacefully. Interesting :) Ruby's story is a nice approach on the origin of her name and her connection to Chomper.

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Good hunting scene! Ducky didn't seem to object hunting her own kind. The Rainbowfaces were watching though I didn't quite get why. Did they want to ensure that they are doing alright?

I didn't spell it out in the chapter, but I viewed their actions as being mainly driven by curiosity.  They had never encountered a group of herbivores who had been turned into carnivores, so they were curious how they would manage during a hunt.  This reflects the rainbowfaces origins as scientists.  That would also explain their dismissal of Pterano's unease at seeing the pack hunting.  Oftentimes when a researcher is focused on an experiment, we lose track of anything unrelated to the task at hand.  At the very least, I know that I was guilty of that several times when I conducted research in graduate school.  I once went strolling into a restaurant after trapping my specimens and wondered why everyone was looking at me funny.  It turns out that I was still wearing my camouflage fatigues and had my large knife on its holster.  :oops

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Chapter 37:

Interesting... I wonder what kind of challange the Seven Hunters are going to face.
I can imagine that they are worried about the challange because they know what might await them... killing a dinosaur.
And do I see a shipping here? :DD Littlefoot and Ruby seem to like each other, yep, yep, yep!

Oh no! Scarflank! :cry Hurry everyone else!!!
At least he died in honour: Saving the life of at least one of his friends and fighting like a man!

Ah, that was kind of predictable now :p I was wondering how Dein would arange the killing since three of them need to kill but it would be difficult to hunt down three adults. Children are a good start. The fight with the Threehorn will be epic, I know it! :D

Bad Luck sends its regards... What once were five are now three. Skytail's story is a good one. Too bad the last ones to hear it are his murderers. I have an anticipation as for what the remaining three are going to do :)

Littlefoot's plan sounds all right. I'm very excited to see the hunt get started and how the sticks are being used :yes

What a wicked battle!!! :wow Poor Threehorn and children though... both had to suffer prior to death. The pack did a good job, risking their lifes in order to save another. The use of sticks proofed to be the matchwinning strategy. And Terri seems to be healthy again :)

Another one is down :( The pack is cut down to a team. Surviving in such a small group will be hard... though, oh surprise, THUD! :D At least he can protect them.

Finally a sign of Bron. I'm beginning to recognise some plot points from your old synopsis... though Doc is a surprise. Reads like he lost Tara... and like Calin's pack attacked Bron and the Spiketails... and like Tippy's Mother is gone too?

Great chapter!!!

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Thanks for the review.   :)

Yeah, that chapter was probably the most bloody chapter that I have written thus far,  In terms of body count it is undoubtedly the most deadly.  :yes Now the pack recognizes the harsh reality of their situation and all of them have made the fateful act of killing another dinosaur.  Now that they have fully embraced their new way of life, they are ready to fulfill their destiny, whatever that may be.  However, as I am sure you have gathered by now, some echoes from the past are soon going to be having an impact on the pack.  Both Bron and Doc are on the way, because there is no kill like overkill. :p

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Finally a sign of Bron. I'm beginning to recognise some plot points from your old synopsis... though Doc is a surprise. Reads like he lost Tara... and like Calin's pack attacked Bron and the Spiketails... and like Tippy's Mother is gone too?

You are correct on all of your deductions, except for Tippy's Mother.  She is still alive, but Shorty has interacted with Tippy somewhat as there are no dinosaurs of his age in the herd.  The fact that Doc is now a single father will have major implications on how he sees the world.  Bringing life into the world and being entrusted with the care of a child greatly affects a person's perspective.

Thanks for the corrections once again.  I have made the indicated modifications.


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Chapter 39   A pearl in the rough

The trust of the innocent is the liar's most useful tool.
― Stephen King

 
"The name's Calin."

The newcomer's statement hung in the air for several moments as Ruby stared him down.  He seemed to be a young adult, probably a few years older than her, and his larger size attested to that fact.  He had a pale tan coloration to his skin and he lacked feathers, being of the same subspecies as Skytail and the others.  He seemed quite alert and healthy, with his defensive posture matching her own.  The only noticeable deficit in his overall demeanor was that his tail slumped behind him.  She was unsure, however, if that was indicative or injury or something else.  The possible injury and the stranger's smug demeanor put Ruby on edge, something about it all simply made her feel uncomfortable.  An instinct deep inside of her seemed to be screaming that he was untrustworthy.  In any case, it would be something that Littlefoot and the others would have to decide.  Since Skytail's pack was introduced, they had never had to deal with intruders into their territory.

Suddenly she could hear the crashing of feet upon grass some distance behind her and she knew that the rest of the pack would soon be backing her up.  With that knowledge in her mind, she pressed the matter.

"Why are you here?!"

The newcomer seemed to be considering his options at this point, as his ears twitched at the sound of approaching fast biters, but he held his ground.  He was apparently wise enough to know that a retreat would leave his flank vulnerable to attack.  Instead, he took a few tentative steps backwards and placed his claws in a placative posture.

"I was passing through..."  The newcomer, Calin, replied.  "I was following the herds that were heading this direction."

Ruby was about to respond when the others arrived en masse.  A torrent of growls left the assembled pack, as Littlefoot charged forward and bared his teeth.  Ruby had given the signal to indicate an intruder and based upon her body language he suspected the worst.

He whispered in leaf-eater quietly.  "Are you alright, Ruby?  Who is this?"

Ruby whispered back in a low voice.  "I am fine.  He calls himself Calin.  He says that he was following the herds."  Her tone of voice indicated something else as well, something unsaid.  Suspicion.  She did not trust this character.  Littlefoot gave a curt nod as he considered all of this.

"So the name is Calin, is it?"  

The newcomer seemed surprised to be addressed by the leader by his name.  Does this mean that he has heard of me?  He thought with some concern.  The two fast biters had exchanged some whispered gibberish between them that made no sense to him; was that some kind of coded language?  If so then that did not bode well for him, he deduced.  A pack suspicious enough to have made its own language would be a paranoid pack indeed.  Maybe I should take my leave and report back...  He didn't get a chance to finish that thought, however, as Littlefoot continued.

"This territory is taken.  We are the sworn allies of Dein and Terri, the dreaded two footers.  All who oppose us shall be dealt with harshly."  Littlefoot had used the style of voice and address that Dein had recommended for such an occasion.  In many cases a boastful threat could stave off even the most dreaded challengers.  You may be bluffing, but your adversary had no way of knowing that.  Not to mention, with Dein and Terri on their side, Littlefoot knew that they had the upper hand if any challenger decided to press his luck.  Not even Red Claw himself would attempt an attack here with two healthy two-footers and a pack of fast biters on his side.  The benefits simply did not outweigh the risks.

Littlefoot's statement, however, made something click in Calin's mind.  Terri and Dein? He thought to himself with some amazement.  Those are the two that Red Claw despised... That must mean... He looked over at the assembled pack, which was still fixing him with deadly glares.  They all appeared to be fast biters with two exceptions.  There was a flyer, of all things.  Why is the name of sanity is a flyer with the pack?  Did they hatch it out as an egg?  Is this a humorous case of imprinting gone horribly wrong?  Normally, Calin's irreverent frame of mind would allow him to imagine that image, of a hatched sharptooth flyer calling the brown fast biter "momma!", however he currently had seven carnivores looking at him with deadly intent, so his mind didn't linger on the thought.  The other thing that caught his attention was the purple two-footer.  That must be the one that Red Claw hates! Calin thought with some amazement.  Red Claw never forgives being disrespected!  Maybe if I... Calin suppressed a smile as a thought came to his mind.  He would have to spend more time in the pack's territory in order to put his plan into action, but the rewards would be worth it.  His mind made up, Calin knew what he had to do.

"I wish to join your pack."  Calin exclaimed.

Littlefoot tilted his head at this.  Well this is an unexpected development.

......

"Show us an offering, Calin, and maybe we will let you have a chance.  No one enters a pack without passing a challenge."

Littlefoot's affirmation of the fast biter tradition still echoed in the minds of those present.  Calin had been charged with finding them a suitable offering of food and then the pack would present him with a challenge.  If he could pass their unique test of wits then he would enter the pack as one of their own, otherwise he would be forced to depart.  Such was the way of things.  However, this unexpected situation left the pack with much to discuss.

The pack had assembled in their usual sleeping area in order to discuss the situation.  It was high noon, but they needed to meet and discuss the issue of Calin nonetheless, and their sleeping area seemed to be the wisest meeting place.  It was deep in Dein's and Terri's territory, which overlapped the fast biter pack's, and therefore was safe from prying eyes and inquisitive ears.  This was well and good, as one of the participants was not quiet about her grievances.

"I don't know if we need another member.  Maybe we should set an unreasonable challenge for him to pass?"  Littlefoot opened.  "We are all friends and... I know that we would do anything for each other.  But we know nothing about Calin."  Littlefoot briefly reflected on the trials and tribulations that the pack had persevered through since their transformation.  Even the challenges they faced from before their change was more than enough to make them fire-forged friends, but recent events simply amplified that point.  Would they really be willing to allow another into their inner circle?  It was a great risk.

"I do not know.  I do not."  Ducky admitted.  

Spike gave a nod at his sister's uncertainty, before offering his own thoughts on the matter.  "Was it just me or did Calin seem... a bit off?"  Spike had to rely upon his powers of observation in order to read people back when he was a spiketail, due to his lack of speech and somewhat limited understanding of the intricacies of language.  As a result, he was able to have a very good read on the mannerisms of others.  This was a skill that he retained as a sharptooth and it was telling him that Calin was hiding something.

Cera pondered Spike's observations and Ducky's hesitation for a few moments.  She normally would have voiced her dissent on the newcomer immediately, but the words of caution from among the two most accepting of the pack members gave her pause.  We definitely need to be cautious here. She thought to herself.  She was about to say something when she was suddenly interrupted by an angry outburst.

"We should have chased him away from us!  Nothing good will come from him!"

Littlefoot and the others turned towards the source of the outburst.  Littlefoot tried to remain composed but could not suppress a look of surprise.  Cera and Ducky both stopped their conversation on the matter and slowly turned to confirm that the dinosaur speaking those words was who they thought it was.  Chomper, meanwhile, stared at his former caregiver with amazement, mouth agape.  He would have expected this lack of trust from Cera, but not from her.

Ruby was in the center of the circle with her claws clinched at her sides in agitation.  The others had been engaged in a somewhat orderly discussion on the newcomer, but Ruby's outburst quickly silenced everyone.  It was very uncharacteristic for Ruby and that filled the rest of the pack with some concern.  What did she see that the others did not?

Cera spoke after a brief period of silence.  "Um... Not that I disagree, Ponder... but what makes you think that?"  This was unexplored territory for Cera as she was usually the outspoken one in questioning new situations, whereas Ruby was usually a voice of calm acceptance.  Cera suspected that she was missing something important.

Littlefoot had to nod at this.  "Yes, Ponder.  Why do you not trust him?"  He had to admit that he had his misgivings as well, as he had mentioned them to the pack already, but Ruby had apparently already made up her mind on the newcomer.

Ruby sighed deeply and looked downward for a few moments, as if she were collecting her thoughts.  "He just doesn't seem true.  He almost acts like a fake-face..."  At the look of confusion from the others, she continued.  "A fake-face... a dinosaur that doesn't feel, but pretends like he does..."

The others still seemed confused, but Cera offered a tentative question.  "Like Pterano?"

Petrie immediately grew angry at Cera's accusation.  "Hey!  He not fake-face!  He..."

Ruby interjected suddenly.  "No!"

Everyone grew suddenly silent.  That was the second time that Ruby had reacted harshly to something that was said in the pack discussion.  It was now obvious to everyone assembled that something about the situation had Ruby spooked.

Ruby noted the stunned reactions of the others and quickly spoke more softly.  "No.  Pterano is not a fake-face.  He cares about Petrie and he helped us.  He wouldn't help us and care about Petrie if he were a fake-face."  She sighed for a moment.  "My... daddy had an encounter with a fake-face when he was younger... and he nearly died."

The others barely suppressed gasps at Ruby's admission.  No wonder why she was acting so agitated.  Her family must have had a history with these mysterious fake-faces.

Littlefoot moved closer to Ruby and asked his next question softly.  "What makes you think that Calin is a fake-face, Ruby?"

Ruby shook her head.  "The smile seemed forced...  His request to join us seemed to be an afterthought..."  Both Cera and Littlefoot nodded at this.  That was part of the reason they were acting so suspicious at Calin's overtures.  But Ruby was not done.  "...And he waved at me after I raised my claws!  After I raised my claws, he waved at me!  It... It was like he didn't get the difference between greeting someone and preparing to kill them."  She shook her head again.  "Fake-faces are dangerous..."

Chomper joined Littlefoot in approaching Ruby and looked at the rose-colored fast biter with inquisitive eyes.  "Maybe you could tell us your story, Ruby?  Then we could know more about these fake-faces."

Ruby paused for a moment before finally nodding.  "Alright... Well I only remember what my father told me... This happened long before I was even an egg..."

"My daddy was an adult and had been away from his parent's nest for six cycles of the night circle.  They had not taught him much in the way of survival.  Not much in the way of survival had they taught him.  His life was hard and a shortage of vegetation and fish were about to make his life much harder...

......

"Damn this blasted wind!"  Detras muttered to himself.  "I asked the night circle to protect me from starvation.  Perhaps this is its answer?"  He gestured with both arms out in a show of mock piety.  "I can't starve to death if I have already frozen to death!  Ha!"

Detras struggled on in the barren wasteland as the winds assaulted his purple body.  He had kept his wits about him by relying upon his unique blend of dark humor, but the humor was fast being overtaken by the darkness in his one-sided banter with himself.  He had not eaten for several days and there was no sign that the situation was soon going to improve.  If only there were some fish or eggs around!

He was left alone with his downtrodden thoughts when suddenly he heard a welcoming voice on the wind.

"Greetings stranger!  It seems like you are having a hard time!"

Detras looked towards the mysterious figure.  It was a purple fast runner, probably not much younger than himself.  He had a rather stocky build for a fast runner, but nothing out of the ordinary for another of his kind.  His mouth was forming a curt smile and his open clawed gesture indicated potential hospitality.  Detras smiled and decided to answer the strange fast runner.

"I am!"  He affirmed.  "Food is scarce!"

The mysterious stranger laughed a bit at that.  A fake-sounding laugh to those familiar with socialization, but one that was still welcomed by Detras.  He had not seen another fast runner since he left the nest of his parent's and he was starved for any socialization or kindness.  The stranger then began to respond to Detras's affirmation.

"Indeed it is!  Come along!"  The stranger then motioned with his arm for Detras to follow him.  "I know where there is a stream teaming with fish!  It will be quicker if there are two of us to do the catching!"

Detras followed in the other fast biter's steps immediately.  The promise of fish and companionship being too much for him to simply pass up in his condition.  Perhaps if he were wiser to the dangers of the world then he would have noticed the predatory glint in the stranger's eyes...

......

"My daddy followed the stranger into a dried out stream bed for a rather long time until they finally came across the river that the stranger was talking about.  That was when he saw something that caught his attention..."

......

Detras was about to ask the stranger where this supposed river actually was when suddenly he could smell the tell-tale scent of moisture in the air.  There it is!  Detras thought to himself.  He could not see the water of the river, but the sound of flowing waves and the smell of moisture indicated its location nonetheless.  It seemed that the stranger wasn’t lying about the possibility of fish.  Detras began to salivate at the possibility of food after so many days of starvation.  His mind would focus on little else.

As he began to step over the hill, however, he could finally see the river before him.  It was not as impressive as his nose had originally indicated, only being about half the size of the empty stream bed that they had walked through.  This did not make the possibly of catching fish impossible, but it greatly dampened the fast runner’s spirits.  Detras couldn’t help but think that if this river was ëteaming’ with fish then it had room for little else.  The river itself did not look promising at all.

Detras was about to say something to his otherwise silent companion, when he heard the other fast runner give a sigh of annoyance at something.  

Detras turned his head in the direction that the other fast runner was looking and noticed a female fast runner coming from the other side of the hill.  She seemed quite thin, as if she hadn’t eaten in quite a while as well.  She had an angry glare fixed on the other fast runner and seemed to ignore Detras completely.  When she was within a few feet of the duo, she finally spoke.

“Varen!  Just what it the name of sanity are you doing now!  We have little food as it is...”

Detras took careful notice of her words.  They have little food?  But what about the fish?  As he was considering the female’s words in his mind, the male fast runner spoke.

“Come on now, sister... Things aren’t that bad.  Are they?”  Varen took a very brief glance in the direction of Detras and then stared back at his sister.  It appeared that a nonverbal conversation was being conducted before Detras’s eyes.  He was quickly growing suspicious of Varen... The ëriver’ was more of a stream than anything else and his sister appeared to be far too thin for this river to be teaming with fish.  Perhaps Varen was prone to telling tall tales.  In any case, he decided to see how this situation played out.  He had traveled too far to simply leave now empty-handed.

Varen’s sister gave an exasperated grunt.  Finally after fixing her brother with a deadly glare, she decided to speak.  “I don’t know what you are planning, Varen, but knowing you it isn’t anything good...”  She then began to storm off in the direction of the river.  Undoubtedly in an attempt to secure some food for herself.

Detras had heard enough in order to determine that something fishy was going on.  The signs all pointed in that direction and even his companion seemed to have an unguarded look on his face, just like a hatchling you got caught doing something bad.  Detras decided that now was the time to make his concerns known.

“Look, Varen...”  He turned the name over in his mind.  It was odd that the other fast runner had spent the entire trip telling him stories about his adventures in the Mysterious Beyond, but did not even bother to mention his name or his sister.  “You promised a river teaming with fish, but your sister is quite thin...”  He let the question drop.  It was obvious what he was accusing Varen of doing.

Varen looked at his with an uncertain expression, before it quickly changed into an apologetic one.  “I’m sorry Detras... I suppose that I often tell things a bit more impressively than they actually are...”  Varen seemed to be searching for the right words.  “But there are some fish in that river... and when I saw you shivering in the cold, I figured that I could help you.  I didn’t mean to mislead...”  He fixed Detras a sad expression to indicate his apology, but Detras couldn’t help but notice a certain fakeness to it all.  However, Detras had come too far in order to just leave, so he decided to see this river for himself.

“I suppose that is forgivable, Varen.  Let’s just try to catch some fish.”

......

“Daddy waded into the river with Varen in order to begin searching for fish.  Varen had the idea that Detras could swim for the fish and drive them towards Varen so that he could catch them.  They began to have a conversation as they prepared.”

......

"So... You live here with your sister?"

Detras was trying to make Varen open up a little.  He had seemed quite open and accessible prior to when they arrived at the river, but when confronted by the reality of the situation he had close off.  It was almost as if he were trying to avoid finding himself caught in another lie.  Detras did not say this, of course, but his doubts about his companion were growing by the minute.

"Yeah..."  Varen offered.  "We have been in this area since our parents were lost in a sharptooth attack."  He then sighed, but it came across as a sigh of annoyance as opposed to an expression of grief.  "My sister was always the excitable one.  Don't pay too much attention on her comments about the fish.  The situation isn't that grim."  Varen then offered a slight smile.

Detras offered his condolences.  "I am sorry about your parents."  However, his heart wasn't really into his statement.  Varen had just swerved from discussing the deaths of his parents, what would normally be a devastating loss to most dinosaurs, to suddenly trying to make his case about the fish again.  Worse yet, he could tell from Varen's demeanor that he didn't actually care about the loss of his parents at all.  It seemed to just be an inconvenience to him based upon his facial expressions.  

The entire situation was beginning to feel Detras with unease.  An older Detras would have listened to his instincts and departed from the mysterious fast runner, but Detras was not as skilled in listening to his inner voice as a juvenile.  As a result, he stayed with Varen and prepared to fish.

Varen simply nodded at Detras's show of concern.  "Thanks, but it happened a while ago."  He then seemed to look at Detras for a long moment as if considering something, before suddenly looking away again.  "Alright, I guess that we are ready to begin fishing."

Detras placed his hand into the water and seemed to look at how it splashed when he moved his hand around.  The water was quite turbid, a sign of algae growth.  Some part of him doubted that Varen would even be able to see the fish when Detras flushed them out from his position.  Nonetheless, he decided to proceed.

"Good luck, Varen."  Detras offered.

Varen smiled an odd sort of smile as Detras began to sink into the water.  "No, Detras.  Good luck to you..."

Detras didn't think anything of Varen's odd parting, but instead decided to focus on the task at hand.  He took a deep breath and dived into the murky water.

The water was only about as deep as he was tall, Detras deduced, now that he was completely submerged.  He could only see about a foot in any direction due to the algal bloom and the mud that he had drudged up when he walked into the river.  These conditions were not good for fishing he could see almost immediately.  He suspected that he was wasting his time in this enterprise.  Nonetheless, he surfaced briefly and took in another deep breath before diving again.  He would give this effort his best shot.

He quickly began to swim in the murky depths and soon passed the area where he had disturbed all of the mud.  He was relieved to find that the water was much clearer in this area and he could see for quite some distance.  

No fish. He observed as he proceeded on his swim.  There were no signs of movement or even fish corpses in the water.  The water seemed quite still and dead.  He was about to surface and suggest to Varen that they seek out a new area, when something caught his attention some distance away.  It was a large lump on the bottom of the water that seemed to have a rock atop it.  Thinking this to be curious, he surfaced one more time and then quickly resumed his swim.  He needed to find out what that was.

He did not notice that Varen was keeping pace with Detras by walking behind the fast runner...

As he approached the large lump on the bottom, he noticed that it was covered not only by a boulder, but also by dust as well.  He couldn't quite make of what he was looking at.  Taking some time, he slowly began to wipe away some of the accumulated dirt and took a closer look.  It was quite slow going and he was about to surface again in order to have a fresh breath while he worked, but then suddenly a large clump of dirt fell from the object in order to reveal its idenity.

It was a skull.  A fast runner skull.  This was the body of a fast runner.

Detras nearly screamed when he saw the empty eye sockets of the skeleton in front of him.  What was a fast runner doing down here and why was it weighed down by a rock?  The placing of a rock like that required time and intent.  His mind racing in a near panic, Detras began to swim upwards in order to surface.  He was nearly out of air and he was scared out of his mind.  Who could have done such a thing?  He thought to himself.

Suddenly, as he was nearing the surface, he could see a purple face staring at him from the surface of the water.  It was the face of Varen.

Oh no! Detras thought as his mind finally put the pieces of the puzzle together.  He now realized that the murderer was right in front of him.

As he felt Varen's large body crash into his, Detras noted with horror that he had the air knocked out of him.  Now it would only be a matter of moments before he drowned.  How could he meet his end like this?

In the moments that followed, Detras was only aware of flashes of light and bursts of sound.  He could hear the suppressed growls of his opponent when he apparently succeeded in gouging his eyes, he could hear the dampened sloshing of their struggles in the water, and he could see flashes of light as he turned head over heels in his attempt to right himself and find the surface.  Finally, however, he began to become less aware of his surroundings as he became oxygen starved.  It was almost over.

As his vision and hearing began to fade, he almost thought that he heard a massive 'thunk' as if something had hit the water. Then he could feel himself begin to rise.  Was this what happened when dinosaurs died?  Did their essences rise into the stars as the stories told?  He didn't have much time to ponder his predicament as his consciousness began to leave him.  The final thing that he saw before blacking out was the concerned face of a female fast runner.

......

Detras came to very slowly.  One of the first things that he noted was that he felt horrible.  His head felt as if it had been bashed by a rock and his legs felt heavier than the heaviest rocks.  However, there was air.  Glorious air!  He could breathe again... but how?  He was certain that he was a goner once Varen had him in his grasp.  What had saved him?

Gradually, as his wits returned to him, he could hear a soft sound in the distance.  It was softer than the crashing waves of the river, but far more mournful.  Someone was crying.  Detras, despite his weakness and misgivings, slowly rose to his feet and half walked, half crawled in order to see who was crying.

It was Varen's sister.  She was sitting beside some object in the distance and was crying into her hands.  He could tell by her shuddering and sobs that she was utterly unaware of Detras's recovery.  For a moment he was unsure of what to do.  Should he interrupt her private moment and inquire as to what happened?  Or should he quietly depart the area before Varen returned.  After a few moments of hearing the female's grief, he clinched his hands into fists.  He knew what he had to do.  With slow, unsteady steps, he decided to approach the female.

As he approached the female, he could see that she was in front of some purple and red object.  It seemed familiar in some way, but he didn't have much time to consider that thought.  He suddenly felt very dizzy and barely caught himself before he crashed headfirst into the ground below.  Before he could continue his journey to the female, he heard her speak.

"I didn't mean to kill him, mother!  But I had no choice...  He... He..."

The voice was interrupted by sobs once again as the female fast runner again descended into her grief.  Detras, meanwhile, slowly righted himself again and walked slowly towards the female.  He stopped when he realized what the object in front of the female was.

It was Varen.

His body lay prone on the ground, with obvious track marks from where she had apparently dragged him out of the water.  Now cognizant of his surroundings, Detras could also see where he was dragged out of the water.  Had she saved him?  He then took another look at her fallen brother.  His eyes were wide with what seemed like a permanent look of surprise, which was probably the final emotion he felt.  His head had a large gash right above the left eye where the head seemed to have obvious signs of deformation from blunt trauma.  He had met a quick end.

Detras decided to break the silence.

"Did you... save me?"  His voice sounded very weak.  Perhaps the struggle had taken more out of him than he anticipated.

The stranger turned around and looked at Detras with a mixture of surprise and grief.  "I... Yes."  She continued to shed tears as she continued speaking.  "Do you feel alright... my brother was... my brother..."  She trailed off.

Detras wanted to embrace the female, but was uncertain if that would help her in this situation.  She had apparently saved him at the cost of killing her own flesh and blood.  He had no idea how to respond.

"I... am alive.  Thanks to you."  He finally offered.  He was grateful, but uncertain how to approach the situation.  If he mentioned what she did to her own brother then that would probably make her feel even worse.  "Why did he do it?"  He finally inquired.  Murder was not unheard of with omnivores, but usually there was a good reason.  Whether that be to stop a threat, get food, or win a mate, but Varen's actions seemed arbitrary.  Why did Varen want him killed?

The female was silent for a few moments before responding.  "My father gave me the duty of watching Varen when he died...  He is my youngest brother."  She stopped for a moment in order to collect herself.  For his part, Detras did not rush her.  "My other brother, Trafir, disappeared some time ago and I didn't know why..."

Detras deduced where this story was going.  "Was he... the fast runner that I found in the water?"

The female nodded sadly.  "I think so... I knew that Varen was cold, but how could he do that?  To kill his own..."  She took in a shuddering breathe in order to compose herself.  That was when Detras had a disturbing thought.  She was very thin, but Varen looked stock and well fed.  What if... No...

The female then completed his thought with her own deduction.  "...To result to cannibalism..."  

Detras was stunned.  The fiend had killed his own brother to use as an alternate food source and obviously left his own sister out of the secret.  Doing nothing while she began to starve in this inhospitable land.  Then he had lured Detras himself here in order to have him meet the same fate.  What kind of monster does that to their own kin?

"Was I going to be next?"  The female asked softly.  "Was he simply keeping me around so that one day I could..."  She shook her head.  "I cared for Varen!  I CARED for him!"  She raged.  "And this... this is what he actually was...  He didn't care about any of us at all."

Detras swallowed and embraced the female.  To his surprise, she did not break the embrace but rather continued to sob into Detras's arms.  They were now the only ones left in the land by the river.

After a few moments, almost as an afterthought, Detras asked an awkward question.  "I... I haven't been introduced to you properly, have I?  Uh... I am Detras."  He offered.

The female blinked away a few tears and look at the male before her.  She offered a slight smile.  She was still distraught over her killing of her own brother, but she knew that it was the right course of action.  She couldn't let him kill an innocent in cold blood.  With a slight pause, she answered.  "My name is Pearl."

......

"That was how my mommy and daddy met.  They had a hard few days after... what my mommy had done, but daddy helped her to accept the situation.  They became mates later that year."

Ruby then looked at the stunned listeners around her.  "My daddy never forgot the lesson that he learned that day and he never wanted me to forget either.  Some dinosaurs may pretend to feel, but they don't feel.  If they could feel then they wouldn't need to pretend.  We have to be careful in avoiding those dinosaurs.  Fake-faces are dangerous."

There was silence for many moments as the pack absorbed Ruby's story.  None of them could have guessed that their parents had a life story that was steeped in so much death and betrayal.  The guilt over killing your own brother, even if he deserved it, was more than many of them could comprehend.  However, her lesson about fake-faces was noted by all who were present.  They needed to be careful with the Calin situation.

"That... was a sad story, Ponder.  It was, it was."  Ducky offered.

Ruby nodded.  "I cried when I first heard it... I knew that I never knew my uncles, but my daddy's story made me know why."

Chomper had a dour expression on his face.  "We sharpteeth can... result to cannibalism if we are starving."  As the heads of the others turned to him, he quickly added.  "But usually only to those already dead.  The dead don't need their meat, after all."

The others would have looked horrified at Chomper's tale, but they had now been sharpteeth for many months.  The realities of survival no longer horrified them as they once did.  They were much changed from the seven young biters that had originally fled from the valley.

Littlefoot then finally spoke, as he had had time to consider Ruby's story.  "Thanks, Ponder.  I am sure that story was not easy to tell."  At her confirming shake of the head, he continued.  "I agree with all of you about not trust Calin too easily.  He is a stranger.  But we shouldn't be too quick to make an enemy either..."  He seemed to ponder the situation for a few moments.  "Maybe we can offer a long challenge to Calin?"

Cera stared at Littlefoot for a moment.  She was unsure what the leader was getting at.  "What do you mean, Seeker?"

Littlefoot continued, as he realized that he had been thinking aloud.  "Maybe we could make a long challenge like... I don't know... He has to help us in all of our hunts for one moon cycle."  The others seemed to ponder that idea as he continued.  "That way we could see if he continued to act... odd."

Spike nodded at this.  "That seems like a good idea.  It would give us more time to watch him."

Ducky and several of the others also voiced their agreement.  Littlefoot noted that it seemed that a cautious attitude prevailed in the meeting.  They would need to collect more information before reaching a conclusion.  Speaking of more information...

"Spotter?"

Petrie flew down from his perch and landed beside Littlefoot.  "Yes, Seeker?"

"I have an idea..."  Littlefoot began.  "Maybe our allies have heard about Calin?  If so, then we could learn more about his reputation in the community.  Also... we haven't had a chance to talk with them in a while.  It would be nice to check in with our allies."

Petrie nodded.  "Sounds good, Seeker.  Me already eat this morning.  Me can fly soon."

Littlefoot nodded in approval at the flyer.  "That would be great."

At the other end of the meeting place, Cera looked deep in thought.  Taunt... I haven't seen him in a while.  I wonder what he has been up to?

......

Several weeks ago:

"Dad?"

Taunt's voice was tired and disbelieving in its tone.  He was now face to face with a dinosaur that he never thought that he would actually be able to see again.  There was so much pain and hurt in his history with his father, but yet something about having him here made him feel more secure.  It was an odd conflict of emotions.  Comforting memories from his childhood were clashing with the memories of hurt and betrayal from his independent years.  Right now, however, the grief from losing his beloved comrades was still the prevailing emotion on his mind.

Thud looked upon his son with an apologetic expression.  After his experiences, Thud felt as broken as his son currently looked.  He had betrayed his son when Red Claw demanded that he and Screech chase away his son's pack.  He had little choice as failure to comply would have certainly meant death, but he knew that his betrayal still placed a chasm between himself and his son.  His son had struggled and apparently succeeded in making a name for himself in a pack of his own, while Thud had served as the lackey of the most hated sharptooth in the Mysterious Beyond.  Thud's attempt to become strong enough to face any threat had instead made him a reviled figure.  He had ended up becoming what he had originally taught his son to avoid.  He knew that his son was more of a fast biter than he was and that made witnessing Taunt's heartbreak all the more tragic.

Thud took a deep breath.  "Yes, son."  He had no idea how to respond to his son.  What exactly could he say?  Sorry for betraying you?  Sorry for allying with the enemy?  Sorry for not being there when you actually needed me?  He knew that he was undeserving of such forgiveness, so he wouldn't even bother asking for what his son obviously would not give.  "You need... you need to rest.  I was worried that you may never wake up..."

Taunt seemed to fix his father with a surprised and sad expression.  "Why... why do you even care?  You tried to kill us."

His son's words made something in Thud break and he lost his composure.  He sat down and looked down, blinking away the moisture in his eyes.  His son simply knew him as the dinosaur who tried to kill his friends.  Thud could fight against bloodthirsty packs, rage-filled longnecks, and other dangers of the wild, but he was helpless to his son's blunt assessment of him.  He figured that he would simply tell his son the truth.

"I remember your last conversation with me, son.  You were right then and I was so wrong."

"What in the name of sanity are you doing, dad?  This won't bring mom back!"

Thud raged at his son's insolence.  "I was too weak to save her and I will never let myself fail the ones that I love again!  Red Claw is the strongest of us..."

"He doesn't care about you or anyone else!  If you fail to perform..."

Thud grew tired of this debate.  "You are too young to understand, son.  The only thing that matters in the Mysterious Beyond is strength.  I plan to ally with the strongest."

Taunt looked at his father with moist eyes.  "This doesn't sound like the raptor that I used to know..."

Thud looked away from his son.  "That raptor died when your mother died.  I was a fool back then."

Taunt looked heartbroken at his father's statement, but decided to make his case.  "I cannot support your decision father.  I have found a pack of my own.  An honorable pack.  If push comes to shove then I will support them over you."

Thud began to shake as both grief and distress overtook him.  He was unable to process the confusion torrent of emotions, so he simply reacted in the one way that he knew how.  He had to push away the source of his torment.  The only remaining thing that reminded him of what he had lost - his son.

"Then leave!"  Thud raged.  He then began to charge at his son, which caused him to flee from the area.  "Keep yourself and your fellow runts out of my territory!"

As his son left without another word, Thud finally had time to calm down and reflect upon what he had said.  He had turned away his son due to his rage and grief.  He had also just referred to him as a runt - a grave insult to his son who had persevered despite being hatched weak and sickly.  He had gone way too far.  He had to make amends.

"Son?"

Thud called out to the empty field, but no answer came.  He was now truly alone.


Thud continued.  "After I said those things... I was ashamed."

Taunt retorted his father's apology.  "That didn't stop you from still joining Red Claw, now did it?"

Thud looked away and shook his head.  "No."  He then paused for several moments as his son was shaking due to both being grief-stricken and cold.  Thud reflected that he probably was not helping matters at all.  "I still joined.  I let my pride and ego get in the way of doing what was right.  I was a fool."  

Thud then took a shuddering breathe.  He noticed that his son was now looking his direction again.  At least he was listening, that was a good sign.  With some hesitation, Thud continued.

"Your uncle and I allied ourselves with Red Claw and we had some successes.  We captured the Lowlands for an entire wet season and expanded our reach into the nearby lands.  We were unstoppable.  And then Red Claw gave us those terrible orders..."

Thud was chasing away the offending fast biters with great speed.  He had to make an example for Red Claw so that any other upstarts would think twice about staying in the area.  This was their land now and everyone needed to fear their wrath.

He was slowly advancing on the juvenile fast biter and preparing to strike at its back when something grabbed ahold of his leg and knocked him down.

"Ah!"  He screamed as he tumbled.  Looking to his rear, he could see the culprit.

"Taunt!"  He screamed in a mix of surprise and fear.  Surely his son realized what he would have to do now?  Red Claw was watching.  Any insubordination on his part would lead to his death and that of his brother, Screech, as well.

He heard a roar from behind him.  Red Claw was approaching.  He would have to chase his son and make it believable.  It was the only way to ensure that no other members of his family would die.


"I pretended not to notice when you and the rest of the pack hid in the cave."

Taunt looked at his father in surprise.  "You knew that we were there?  I was certain that..."  A sob escaped him.  "...that..."

Thud looked horrified at his son's unspoken accusation.  "You thought that I was still trying to kill you?!"  He couldn't believe that he had left that impression.  Surely his son would realize that he would never do that to his son.

Taunt simply nodded his head and began to sob.  

Night Circle!  He thought that I actually wanted him dead!  Not just that I was obeying orders...  He actually thought...  Taunt...  Thud shook his head in disbelief.  He didn't realize that his son thought that he hated him that much.  Thud didn't hate his son at all, not even when Thud was a loyal minion of Red Claw.  He may have had to make the chase believable, but he only pursued Taunt due to the consequences if he failed.  Not only him but Screech would have been killed.  But my son thought...

"Son... Son..."  Thud consoled, as he approached his son slowly.  Taunt did not move away as he was still overwhelmed by the revelations of the day.  "I chased after your packmates and that is unforgiveable, but I would never kill you.  Even if I would have caught you... I would have let you go...  I would never..."  He embraced his son as he too began to sob.  Taunt did not repel his father's embrace as the two both shared a tender family moment for the first time in years.

When Breeze finally woke up several hours later, she was surprised to see Thud curled up with his father by the river bank, both of them being in a restful slumber.  Still in shock from the loss of her packmates and her unexpected rescue, she likewise lay beside Taunt's warm body and returned to sleep.

Another long day would be in store for them tomorrow.


Go ahead and check out my fanfictions, The Seven Hunters, Songs of the Hunters, and Menders Tale.


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I liked both new chapters, though this latest one had a sweeter ending to it. Still, I wonder how things will turn out with Littlefoot's pack now that Calin has found them. And I hope they don't run into Doc any time soon...things are really getting interesting now!


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Thanks for the review.  :) Yeah, several things are beginning to come together in recent chapters: Calin has found the pack and is up to an unknown agenda; Bron and Doc have found the Land of Shallow Waters; and Taunt and Thud have reunited.  Not to give anything away, but several things will be coming to a head in the next few chapters.  :smile


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Quote from: rhombus,Jun 28 2014 on  03:37 PM
Thanks for the review.  :) Yeah, several things are beginning to come together in recent chapters: Calin has found the pack and is up to an unknown agenda; Bron and Doc have found the Land of Shallow Waters; and Taunt and Thud have reunited.  Not to give anything away, but several things will be coming to a head in the next few chapters.  :smile
I shall eagerly await them, as things are getting REALLY interesting now, and I'm curious to see how it continues from here.


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Chapter 40   Rage

“Anger is useful only to a certain point. After that, it becomes rage, and rage will make you careless.”
― Lauren Oliver, Pandemonium


Several weeks ago:


"This doesn't look like the Lowlands."  Breeze offered warily.

Thud looked at her with a confused expression.  "I should hope not!  You are in the Bay of Rocks.  We are about a three days trek from the Lowlands."

"How?"  Taunt offered.  "How did we travel that far down the river?"

Thud looked at the two raptors with a confused expression, before finally realizing what they were implying.  Then he looked outright startled.  "You followed the river from the Lowlands?"

Breeze nodded.  "Yeah... That is where Skytail..."  She took a shuddering breath.  "That is where we fled."

Thud shook his head slowly while having a look of awe on his face.  "It is a miracle that any of you are still alive."

Taunt shook his head.  "If there were miracles then our friends would still be here.  But we are all that remains.  Red Claw and Calin took them from us!"

Thud looked at his son sadly, but spoke softly at his exclamation.  "They may be gone, son, but as long as you remember their deeds then they are never really gone.  Both of you remain despite the odds against you.  It seems that fate doesn't want your pack to fade away so easily."  At their contemplative expressions, he offered a question.  "Did your pack have any allies that you could join with?"

Taunt nodded.  "Yes, there was that pack led by Seeker.  They were going to the Land of Shallow Waters the last time that we saw them."

Thud placed his claws to his mouth and pondered for a moment.  "I guess that we can head that direction after the two of you are well enough to travel."

Breeze puffed out her chest at his comment.  "We are well enough, we just..."  Her statement was broken up by a coughing fit on her part.

Thud gave her a slight smile.  "Like I was saying, we will rest here for a few days and then we can get moving.  It will be a hard journey to the Land of Shallow Waters.  After all, I am not exactly the best guide when it comes to traveling that direction...  If only Screech was still here..."

Taunt observed his father's sudden melancholy and decided to ask the obvious question.  "Dad, where is uncle Screech?"

Thud gave his son a look that communicated Screech's fate.  Taunt nodded sadly.  It seemed as if he and his father were all that remained of the once large extended family.

Thud sighed.  "So much has happened... I guess that we should each tell our respective tales."  As Breeze and Taunt both settled down to listen, Thud decided to tell his side of the story.  "It all started when we got tired of Red Claw's crazy fixation on the valley...

......

"And then we woke up here."

Taunt had just finished his retelling of their final battle as a pack and its aftermath.  Now that both Thud and the two young fast biters were acquainted with the events leading up to their reunion, silence dominated the scene.  Neither of them was fully aware of the despair and heartache the other had been through until it had been laid bare for all to hear.  

Taunt now realized that Thud was a victim of his own alliance and that his father still harbored regret and guilt over his brother's death, whereas Thud now realized the full depth of his son's loss.  After Thud and his son had left on not so good terms, Skytail and the rest of the pack had acting like an adopted family to the small fast biter.  Now that most of them were gone, it was reminiscent of the loss of his mother and the betrayal of his father all over again.  Must everyone that he loves be taken from him?

Thud, for his part, had no words to placate his grief over his son's loss and hardship.  He realized that if he wouldn't have joined with Red Claw then everything would have been different.  He could have spared his son the loss of losing his remaining parent to a foolish alliance with the enemy, and he could have been there for when his son needed counsel.  For now, however, all that he could communicate was his grief and regret.  To that end his nuzzled his son, who reluctantly accepted the gesture.

"You're still a bastard."  His son offered as his father pulled away from the gesture.

"I know."  Thud responded sadly.  "But I can try to be a father again... if you let me."

Taunt looked at his father for a long moment, his eyes giving nothing away.  After a few moments, however, he averted them somewhat.  "Part of me wants to hate you..."  He shook his head at the thought and looked away.  "But I can't do that...  I don't have it in me.  You were just like me after I left the nest...  A screw-up screwing-up in a screwed-up world."

Thud averted his eyes somewhat at his son's admission.  "I guess that we both need to get our act together then."  He offered with a slight smile.

Taunt nodded.  "Yeah..."

Silence again took hold over the group for several moments, until Breeze interrupted the two by clearing her throat.

"Uh... It's not that I am not grateful for you saving our lives and all, but is family time over now?  We need to decide what we are going to do."

Thud and Taunt both looked at one another and began to laugh.  After so many moments of tension between the two, Breeze's untactful statement was enough to elicit some humor from the two fast biters.  After a few moments Thud spoke.

"She obviously has been around you too much, son."

Taunt could only smirk and give a slight nod as Breeze gave an annoyed "Hmph" in response.  After a few moments, however, the three fast biters moved on to the more pressing matters that faced them.

"Well, we need to get food.  A swimmer herd is quite close by, so that will last us a while.  The journey to the Land of Shallow Waters will be a bit tricky though."  Thud stopped speaking for a moment and placed a claw by his chin as if he were pondering a difficult problem.  "We need to avoid the sandstorms."

Breeze nodded at that.  "Yeah... It was unpleasant when Skytail and I went through the barren lands..."  She trailed off as she continued to remember the close friend that she had lost.  She had known Skytail since his family had taken her in as an adopted sister.  The loss affected her especially hard.

Taunt unconsciously leaned against Breeze, a gesture which she reciprocated.  Thud noticed this and decided to change the topic, lest the two fast biters again be lost to their grief.

"So um..."  Thud began, as the two fast biters again focused on the adult.  "The pack that you were allies with... what were they like?  Who were they?"

Taunt and Breeze took a long look at one another.  Thud could not quite see their facial expressions, but it look as if they were having an entire nonverbal conversation as he waited.  Finally, Breeze nodded and Taunt again looked at his father.

"Our allies are a mixed pack, believe it or not.  One two-footer, one flyer, and five fast biters with feathers.  Quite the combination."

Thud looked horrified at his son's words, as there were only five fast biters with feathers that he knew of and he had chased them in the Mysterious Beyond.  The inclusion of a flyer and a two-footer only confirmed the identity of that pack.

Thud answered with a wary voice.  "You are allies with Path's pack?"  Obviously Thud's previous history with his son's allies would be quite a complicating factor.  What would Thud have to say when they finally met?  Sorry about trying to kill you?  And these were his son's allies...  I really screwed things up...

Taunt looked somewhat surprised, but nodded.  "Yeah...  Though Seeker is their leader.  You knew Path in the Mysterious Beyond?"

Thud gave a noncommittal grunt.  "We met."

Taunt didn't know what to say about that, so he decided to let the matter drop.  Breeze, however, knew that there was part of the story that would be the hardest for Thud to accept.  Nonetheless, she knew that depending on how Thud knew Path it would make a big difference in how their allies reacted.  She began to whisper at Taunt in hushed tones.  After a few moments, Taunt looked up again and gave his father a slight smile.  The smile communicated no humor, but rather seemed to almost be apologetic.  Surely his father would think that his son had gone insane after he relayed this tale.

"Well, dad, that's not the complicated part..."  Taunt began.  "You see...  Seeker and the rest originally came from the Great Valley..."

"They let sharpteeth into their valley?!"  Thud asked in surprise.

Taunt looked a bit uncertain at his father's exclamation.  "Uh... no... not exactly..."

......

Back to the present:

This should be enough for the little biters. Calin thought to himself.  I can't believe their leader was so naive.  Idiot.

Calin was half-carrying, half-dragging the corpse of a young spiketail towards the clearing that Seeker had directed him to bring his offering of food.  This was the first step in the process of being accepted into a pack.  First an offering had to be made and, if the pack required further proof of worth, then a challenge would be given.  Calin had no doubt that he would pass any challenge that the pack placed upon him.  And once he finally gained their trust...

That was going to be the tricky part, Calin realized.  

Calin realized that he was different from a rather young age.  He would notice his siblings acting concerned for others and feeling exuberant at the family's successes.  At first he thought that these reactions were a fiction that everyone followed in much the same way that a storyteller would get worked up over a story that he knew that he made up.  However, it soon became apparent to the young biter that was not what was going on.  There was a certain something that he lacked that the others seemed to have.  He did not take this as a disadvantage, however.  Far from it.  Everyone else allowed their emotions to govern themselves, but he was delightfully free of that burden.  He could do the deeds that others would shy away from.  He had the courage to pursue his own interests over those of his "loved ones".  He had no time for weaklings or those who cared for them.  There were only "useful" dinosaurs and "useless" ones and he felt no need to bestow sympathy onto the useless ones.  Accordingly, when he finally left his parents to find a pack with his older siblings, he only had his own benefit at heart.  That made it so easy to turn on them years later when Red Claw and his recruits made them an offer that they couldn't refuse.

"How can you do this, Calin!  We're family!"

"You're a competitor, brother.  I plan on living."

"Brother...  We... We could take them on!  Some of us could escape!  What would father do?  What would...urk."

While his brother attempted to talk to the uncaring sibling, Calin kicked at his brother's throat, sending a spray of blood onto his other siblings who were huddling behind the bulk of the mortally wounded fast biter.  Calin smiled at his superb handiwork.  The fool had let his guard down around his opponent.  The idiot deserved to die.

With a small smile he advanced towards the remaining siblings who had foolish struggled against their 'recruiters' earlier.  They were all huddled together in a whimpering mass, still shocked by their older brother's death and Calin's willing betrayal.  They would be easy pickings for Calin.

"I am not my father."


Calin was so distracted by the prideful memory that he nearly bolted upright when he heard Littlefoot's call.

"I see that you brought an offering.  I think that the rest of the pack will be satisfied."

Calin looked towards Littlefoot for a moment, before taking on a more pleasant facial expression.  "I am glad that you approve, Seeker."  His eyes locked with Seeker's, who seemed to be analyzing the tan fast biter with a noncommittal expression.

Littlefoot stared into Calin's eyes for a moment, as if he were staring into his very soul.  He noted Calin's smile, but something about it seemed fake and disingenuous.  As a result, Littlefoot's smile soon turned into a slight frown.  Littlefoot noted with some interest the look of confusion that transpired over Calin's face over the sudden change of expression.  He couldn't help but present Calin with the same fake mannerisms that Calin exhibited in droves.  

"I have determined a challenge for you, Calin.  If you succeed then we might let you into the pack, but if you fail then you must leave our territory."

Calin frowned at this.  "You might let me in if I succeed."

Littlefoot nodded.  "Might.  Your challenge is to successfully help us in our hunts for the next cycle of the night circle.  If the pack is impressed with your efforts then you may stay.  Otherwise you will go."  Littlefoot returned to the fake smile that he had presented Calin with earlier.  Calin seemed to be giving little away of his true feelings and neither would he.

Calin noted Littlefoot's smile and took on a dark expression in response.  This fast biter was toying with him.  He did not like to be toyed with.

Littlefoot continued.  "Now don't be angry... You will be allowed to have your fill on the pack's catches during this time.  We won't starve you.  But we have to make sure that you are... the right fit... for our pack."  He concluded his remarks with a beaming smile at the smug fast biter.  

Calin did not respond for some time.  He was struggling to get his anger under control before making a diplomatic response to the rival fast biter's challenge.  It would not be wise to start a battle in his own territory.  No... He would simply revert back to his previous plan of action.  As he debated his next course of action, he fixed Littlefoot with an off-putting expression of thinly-veiled contempt.  At this expression, Seeker seemed to nod.  As if Calin had confirmed something for the other fast biter.

Littlefoot had been uncertain of whether Calin was trustworthy, but his odd reactions to Littlefoot's challenge confirmed his worst suspicions about the strange fast biter.  He obviously was putting on a fake face for the pack.  Ruby's story from a few moments before about fake-faces now seemed to be prescient in its accuracy.  Littlefoot knew that he could not retract the challenge that was offered without losing face, but he already knew how he would end Calin's efforts.  He would simply use Calin for free labor for a few hunts and then evict him from the territory on the grounds that the rest of the pack found him to "not be the right fit".  Littlefoot would not allow such an obvious threat into their midst as a fellow pack member.  His internal monologue was soon interrupted, however, by Calin's careful response to the challenge.

"I see."  Calin offered.  He tried to bring his anger under control.  He had no plans on actually joining the pack for any significant amount of time, but only for long enough to do his work.  Now, however, this cheeky fast biter had prevented him from joining in a timely manner.  Worse yet, he had insulted Calin with his lackluster challenge.  He would enjoy watching Littlefoot die when the time came.  "In that case I decline my request for membership... My offering is offered to keep the peace."  Calin's voice was seething.

Littlefoot noted the tone of Calin's voice and wasted no time in proclaiming his response.  He immediately removed the smile from his face and gave a curt nod.  "The pack accepts your peace offering.  Now leave."  Calin's offering meant that he would not be chased out, but he nonetheless would be taking his leave of the pack.  The abruptness of Calin's actions, however, made something sink in Littlefoot's stomach.  Something wasn't right here.  Something wasn't right at all.

As Calin rapidly departed from the clearing, Littlefoot raised his right paw and gestured in a forward motion.  Suddenly, the remaining pack members emerged from the tall grass upwind, where they had been hiding.  If Calin had attempted anything dangerous they were prepared to mount an ambush.  Now, however, they had much to discuss.

"What a creep!"  Cera exclaimed.

Ducky nodded at Cera's statement.  "I do not think that he was telling the truth.  Oh, no, no, no!"

Chomper walked to the front, where Littlefoot was standing, and whispered into his leader's ear.  "Should we kill him?"

Littlefoot was taken aback by Chomper's sudden question, but he couldn't fault the logic of that option.  They were dealing with a competitor who would now more than likely consider them an enemy.  Furthermore, the fast biter in question was obviously untrustworthy and probably malignant.  Chomper had been a sharptooth for far longer than any of them and for Chomper to suggest killing another sharptooth meant that his instincts were telling him that trouble was imminent.  However, Littlefoot knew that he had offered Calin safe passage out of their territory, so he gave Chomper a shake of the head.

As Chomper nodded and retreated back to where the others were, Spike advanced towards the offering.  The spiketail was laying face down on the ground with its back towards the pack.  However, Spike noticed something disturbing familiar about the scent of this spiketail.  Something that he couldn't immediately identify.

Shaking his head at this momentary distraction, he proceeded to grip the spiketail's tail in his mouth and pull the body towards the rest of the pack.  As he proceeded on his task, Cera and Ruby approached from the side in order to help Spike's efforts.

That was when an audible gasp caused everyone to stop what they were doing.

Spike let go of his quarry and looked in the direction of the sudden outburst.  It was Cera.  She looked wide-eyed at something near the front of the spiketail.  Tilting his head in an inquisitive fashion, he walked in Cera's direction.

"What is it, Cera?"  He asked as he walked to her position.

Cera seemed to trip over her words for a few moments, before responding intelligibly.  "Spike... I don't know how to tell you this..."

Spike didn't wait for Cera to spit out the words and instead looked at where the terrified fast biter's eyes were fixed.  Spike looked at the face of the dead spiketail in front of him and froze.  He knew this spiketail.  He would recognize that face anywhere.

It was Tippy.

......

"Tippy!!  Tippy!!"

Doc awoke with a start at the sudden exclamation from one of the spiketails.  He had decided to take a midday nap before searching for the sharpteeth that had killed Bron's son.  The sudden alarm calls and frantic yelling, however, put a quick end to that.

"What's going on, ma'am?"  Doc offered to the panicking female.

"Oh!!  It's my son, Tippy!  I can't find him anywhere!"

Doc could then hear some of the other spiketails join in the chorus yelling the missing spiketail's name.  The possibility of a young one leaving the herd in a place like this was a dangerous one.  There were many places for a child to get trapped, injured, or hunted by sharpteeth.   Sharpteeth...

Doc frowned.  He hated sharpteeth.

"Ma'am, I can search for your son... But can you watch my little one?"  He offered the female.

The mother spiketail seemed to be taken aback by this.  "Thank you... but it is dangerous out there!"

Doc shrugged.  "All the more reason for me to find your kid."  

Doc then picked up Stomper from his back and placed him beside the spiketail.  "Now you be careful, young one.  Stay with the spiketail."  The grateful mother then immediately nuzzled the somewhat shy infant, while he emitted a worried coo at his father.  Doc smiled at his son.  "I'll be careful... now be a good boy for dad, will ya?"  The child gave another coo, more subdued this time, as Doc gave his son a light nuzzle.

His son attended to, Doc immediately began stomping off in the direction that the spiketail said Tippy was last seen.  For some time, only the rhythmic drumming of his feet could be heard over the panicked calls of the spiketail's.

That was until another set of stomping feet could be heard approaching.  He stopped for a moment.

"Bron."  Doc called.

"Doc."  Bron answered.

Doc paused for a moment.  He knew that telling Bron to go back to safety would be a futile gesture, as he was now driven by the same drives that drove himself.  Doc never wanted to see another son left without a mother in the same way that Bron never wanted to see another parent lose a son.  Knowing that Bron would be helping his search whether he wanted it or not, he simply decided to urge him on.

"Let's get a move on then.  The spiketail couldn't have gone far."

The two longnecks then resumed their journey into the swamp.

......

Silence dominated the pack as Spike stared at his dead friend in mournful silence.  His beloved friend was now gone forever.  Although they were not the ones who killed the small spiketail, they were the ones who commissioned the act.  They were the ones who requested an offering to humor the upstart, Calin.  They were the ones that set out the events that led to Tippy's untimely demise.

Gradually, as the thought of what had happened began to plow through the fog of memories in his mind, Spike began to shake.  He was overwhelmed by grief and anger.  It was bad enough that he was considered dead by his family and would forever be doomed to feed upon the flesh of others, but now even his beloved friend was deprived of life before his time.  The inherent unfairness of life caused something to break within the mournful fast biter.  In his limitless grief he let out a bloodcurdling scream.

......

"What was that?!"  Bron asked as a sudden roar permeated through the entire swamp.

Doc stared in the direction of the scream, which was near where they were originally heading.  Thinking for a moment, he answered the other longneck.  "Sounds like a sharptooth... Tippy might be in trouble."

Looking at one another briefly, both longnecks began to run in the direction of the scream.  Each was in a hurry in order to protect whoever might be threatened by the unknown predator.

......

"Finder!"  Cera hissed Spike's sharptooth name in exasperation.  She was well aware of the massive shock that Spike had just been put through.  He hadn't even known that Tippy's herd was in their territory, let alone that Tippy was the victim of a hunt they requested.  However, she was also very aware of the danger of giving their location away with the spiketail herd so close by.  They weren't exactly in the center of their territory anymore.  They were open to attack if anyone discovered them.

Littlefoot jumped into action and ran beside his overwhelmed friend.  Ducky followed close behind as she was concerned about her adopted brother.  She knew that he and Tippy were close despite only having the opportunity to meet with one another on two occasions, the loss had understandably shattered the former spiketail's heart.  As Ducky pressed herself close to Spike in an attempt to comfort the grieving fast biter, Littlefoot stood behind and tried to speak words of comfort.

"I'm so sorry, Finder...  We had no way of knowing that he was in the area... or that Calin would go after him..."

Spike shook his head and lightly pushed his sister away.  "We requested the hunt!  We wanted Calin to prove himself and now look what we have in return!"  Spike was livid.  His body was shaking in a mixture of grief and anger that was soon turning into rage.  "A dead friend for a meal and a new enemy in Calin!"

Littlefoot gulped.  He couldn't exactly disagree with Spike's assessment.  Calin had not left the pack on good terms as he had rejected their challenge and Tippy was dead.  They all had hoped that after they killed the threehorn family so many weeks ago that they could put aside the memories of their leaf-eater lives.  They had begun to almost always use their sharptooth names and all of their games were sharptooth games.  An outsider could have been forgiven for thinking that they had been sharpteeth for all of their lives, but the recollection of who they used to be still remained.  The sudden death of Tippy only reinforced the turmoil between their beloved past and harsh present.  It seemed that the echoes of the past wouldn't allow them to forget what they used to be.

Spike broke down again into sobs.  His anger had dissipated almost as soon as it had arisen, being replaced with the numb emptiness of a friendship that would never be returned.  Both his instincts and his pragmatic nature wouldn't allow him to deny the reality in front of his face, but that didn't make accepting the reality any easier.  Tippy was gone and there was nothing that he could do about it.

With slow steps, Littlefoot walked towards Cera and Ducky who were attempting to support Spike from a distance.  With a few brief looks exchanged between the three fast biters, he spoke authoritatively.  "You should get Spike out of here.  Bring him back to the den.  Seeing Tippy like this... isn't going to help."

With a few slow nods, the two fast biters tried to get Spike to follow them back to the den.  The poor fast biter obviously needed time to rest and think about his loss.  This was something that only time would heal.  As the three fast biters began to walk away, Ruby whispered into Littlefoot's ear.

"What... um."  There really wasn't any tactful way of asking the question.  "What should we do with Tippy?"

Littlefoot looked back at Ruby with a slightly angry expression, but when he saw Ruby quickly look away in fear and regret, he quickly sighed and recollected himself.  He couldn't get mad at Ruby for considering the subject of food.  Nothing would be gained by having Tippy go to waste. Go to waste.  Ha.  I guess that I am a sharptooth now, to have a thought like that.  He thought without humor.  He quickly shook his head and answered the rose colored fast biter in a soft voice.

"I guess we can drag him back towards the den, but... not too close to it.  We don't want Finder to find him, you know."

Ruby nodded.  "I guess that would be best..."  She trailed off and placed a comforting hand on Littlefoot's back.  "Let's move him before somebody finds us."

Littlefoot heard footsteps approaching and saw that Chomper had joined them and was giving Littlefoot a sympathetic look.  They were all in this together.  He had no doubt that as long as they stuck together that they could get through anything.  Even something as senseless as the loss of Tippy.

In silence, each of them bit down on Tippy's body and proceeded to drag it towards the den.

......

Bron and Doc had quickened their pace when they heard the loud roar earlier.  They were now in the fastest trot that a full-grown longneck could manage.  As the sound of stomping echoed across the swamp, they couldn't tell if they were getting close to their destination.  The grass and other vegetation made finding dinosaurs and following tracks nearly impossible.  They were operating blind in the search for their latest lead.

To speed up their search, Bron suggested that they split up while remaining within visual range of one another.  That way each could call the other for backup if they found Tippy, while they could still double their coverage area.  Accordingly, Doc was now by the river bank in his search, whereas Bron was fast approaching a clearing in the lush vegetation.

That was when he saw it.

Blood.

There was blood all over the clearing and a depression where a body must have laid.  Bron's heart quickened its pace as the possible implications of that finding began to dawn on him.  Following the trail of blood with his eyes, he could see that it led out into the tall grass that was adjacent to the clearing.  He couldn't see much through the grass, there was only the vegetation waving in the wind and...

Something purple.

He looked closer and could see the tell-tale shape of a tail peek out of the grass, followed by a familiar face.  He knew that face.  With rage building deep inside the longneck, he didn't even think to call for Doc's help.  The only motivation of the longneck's brain was the destruction of the sharptooth that killed his son.

"Chomper!"

For a brief moment the eyes of the two dinosaurs locked despite the distance between them.  Bron's eyes communicated nothing but malice and contempt, whereas Chomper's showed surprise and palpable fear.  Chomper's two companions also observed the newcomer with looks of dawning horror and dropped what they were dragging behind them.  The body of a young spiketail.  That was when Bron's rage-filled brain made another deduction.

Tippy.  They had killed Tippy.

With a rage-filled roar, Bron charged at the three sharpteeth as they began to bolt away from their pursuer.  Littlefoot and Tippy were going to be avenged if it was the last thing that he ever did.  He would make sure of that.

The chase was on.


Go ahead and check out my fanfictions, The Seven Hunters, Songs of the Hunters, and Menders Tale.


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Yikes! Calin may have moved on, but now the pack is in danger from a different sort. Also, poor Tippy. Never saw THAT coming, and now Spike is gonna have to deal with all that pain...yeesh. It'll be interesting to see how things progress with Breeze, Thud and Taunt. That's getting interesting.


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^  Thanks for the review, CeraTheRed. :) I hope that you enjoy the latest installment.

Fanfiction link:  https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9990125/42/The-Seven-Hunters

Chapter 41   Complications

“To save all we must risk all.”
― Friedrich Schiller, Fiesco; or, the Genoese Conspiracy


No... Not like this.

Littlefoot stared at the charging longneck in horror.  Of all of the ways he could have reunited with his father, this was the one that he hoped would never come to pass.  His father was now charging at him and his friends in a murderous rage.  Tippy's corpse lay between the three dinosaurs, having been dropped when Bron started his chase.  Undoubtedly Bron now thought that they had killed Tippy...  He was outed as a killer even before he could talk to his father.  If he even would get that chance.

Littlefoot was so distracted by his own thoughts that he froze in place.  In a panic, his two friends tried to get him out of his stupor.

"Seeker!  Seeker!"

"We need to get moving!"

"Oh no!"

Smack!

Littlefoot turned his head in astonishment at the sudden assault.  It was Ruby!  She had slapped him across the face in order to get him out of his melancholy.  Rather than be upset at this development, he immediately came to and realized that he had to be a leader.  

"Let's go!  Head for the forest!"  He shouted in sudden imperiousness.

The three dinosaurs launched into a headlong sprint towards the nearest forest, some half mile away.  However, Littlefoot's distraction had cost them a lot of time.  Bron was steadily gaining on them.

......

Run all you want, you bastard!  My son will be avenged!

Bron ran with undaunted resolve towards the three fleeing sharpteeth.  However, his focus was on one of them in particular.

Chomper.

He didn't know which sharptooth had dealt the killing blow on his son, but he did know that if it wasn't for Chomper then Littlefoot would still be alive.  Instead, the purple sharptooth had allowed sharpteeth into the valley and betrayed his longneck friend and his beloved companions.  Bron owed it to himself and the valley to complete his mission.  Not only did Bron's guilt-ridden heart demand vengeance, but the valley itself needed Chomper's pack eliminated.  If the sharpteeth outside of the valley learned of its secret entrances and weaknesses...  The consequences were too dire to imagine.

"Bron!"

The longneck heard Doc call his name in confusion, but Bron paid him little heed.  He was fixated on his sworn mission.  For Littlefoot, Tippy, and all of the others that these fiends had killed, he would end Chomper's reign of terror.

Nothing would stop him now.

......

Ruby spared a quick look at her companions as they continued their hasty retreat.

Littlefoot was sprinting slightly ahead of Chomper, having recovered from his momentary shock at seeing his father again.  He still had an almost glazed-over expression on his face, as if he were running in a trance.  She feared that the sudden confrontation by his father had broken something in her close friend.  She and Chomper at least had access to their parents and they knew of their children's fate, but Littlefoot and the others lacked that luxury.  It seemed that they were doomed to simply being seen as part of the enemy.  As the sharpteeth who had "killed" their beloved children.  She hoped that the sense of loneliness and betrayal would eventually fade from Littlefoot's eyes, but it seemed that fate was not letting their past stay behind them.

In fact, Bron was keeping up with them.

Taking a look behind her, she could see that Bron was now only about ten longneck lengths behind them and not losing any distance.  They had faster movements, but Bron could take wider strides.  It was odd, however.  They had easily outrun longnecks and threehorns before, but yet they couldn't seem to shake Bron from their trail.  It seemed that he was pushing his body to its limit in his single-minded desire to catch them.  It was both heart-breaking and frightening.

She turned back to the direction they were traveling.  They were only about ten longneck lengths away from the safety of the dense forest.  They only had to maintain their run for a few more moments and they would be free.

Thud!

Ruby turned suddenly in order to ascertain the source of the noise.  It was Chomper!  He had tripped and fallen in the grass!  Bron would be upon them in mere moments.  She had to do something!

With little regard for herself, she sprung into action.  Despite the increasing volume of the longneck's thundering footsteps, She immediately ran to the side of her friend.  Her sudden action was caught by Littlefoot after a moment's confusion and he too ran towards his friends.

"Path, we have to go!"  Ruby screamed as she lifted him off of the ground.  To the relief of both fast biters, he seemed to still be aware of their dire situation and immediately resumed his sprint in the direction of the forest.  But it was too late...

Crash!

Ruby barely caught sight of Littlefoot tackling Chomper and pushing him out of the way when the ground around them seemed to explode in a torrent of mud and debris.  The fast biters careened end over end as the surge of dirt and mud covered everything that they could see.  After what seemed like ages, but was only a split second, each came to rest in a prone position.  Ruby was too stunned by the sudden percussion to quite realize what had happened.  But then the realization hit Ruby: the explosion of the ground, the sudden percussion...  Bron must have struck out with his tail!

That was when they heard Bron's rage-filled voice.

"Chomper, you evil brute!  This is for my son!"

Turning her head in fear, she could see that Bron was preparing his tail for another strike.

......

Chomper could see the massive appendage rise into the air and he knew that he and his friends only had a few seconds left.  With that in mind he tried to buy some time.

 "I didn't hurt Littlefoot!"  Chomper protested loudly in leaf-eater.  He knew that Bron wouldn't believe him based upon how the other residents of the valley had acted after their discovery on the fateful night, but he figured that he would at least try.  While he waited for the massive longneck's response, he began to jab Littlefoot in the ribs.  The fast biter was slowly beginning to stir, as the near miss of Bron's tail had discombobulated the poor dinosaur.  Littlefoot had to be alert for them to have any chance of escape.

"Don't lie to me you worthless dung pile!  I heard the stories from the valley!  I saw Littlefoot's bones by the forest!"  Bron stomped the ground in rage, which caused all of the dinosaurs in the vicinity to vibrate with the ground.  Littlefoot began to stir from his position and joined his friends in looking up at the massive sauropod.  Distantly, Chomper could also hear much more muffled footsteps in the background.  Doc was approaching.  They were fast running out of time.

"Do you have anything to say, sharptooth?!"  Bron roared at Chomper.  His tail was cocked in preparation to strike.  Bron was entirely fixated on the purple sharptooth.  Even if they were to scatter, Chomper knew who Bron would aim towards.

Chomper closed his eyes for a moment, before taking a deep breath.  He quickly gestured with his two small arms, telling his two companions to run in opposite directions of him.  He knew that he would be unable to avoid Bron's strike, but he would make sure that his friends were alright.  Bron's single-minded fixation on him gave both Ruby and Littlefoot a chance.  With tears beginning to well up in his closed eyes, he made one final request of his friends.

"If this goes badly, tell mommy and daddy I was brave."

Both Ruby and Littlefoot looked horrified at Chomper's sudden resolve and Littlefoot began to protest.  "Path..."

That was when Chomper opened his eyes.  

An odd, serene expression was set in those eyes.  It was as if they contained wariness beyond Chomper's years.  Whereas Bron's eyes only communicated rage and determination, Chomper's conveyed an odd mix of determination and regret.  A determination to save his friends even if he couldn't save himself and regret that he would never be able to say those words that he needed to say.  Although he knew that his friends knew them anyway.  With a sad expression, he spoke what he thought would be his last words.

"You're making a terrible mistake."  Without pausing he hissed in sharptooth.  "Now, guys!"

Following Chomper's plan, both Ruby and Littlefoot ran in opposite directions away from the purple sharptooth as Chomper began to run away from Bron in the direction of the forest.  He heard a final taunt from the enraged longneck.

"Not as bad as yours!"

Chomper ran with all of his might, but he knew that his situation was hopeless.  Even though his body continued its retreat, he internally awaited the final blow that would put an end to his short life.

"Ahhh!!!"

At Bron's sudden scream, Chomper knew that it was all over.  He would never see his friends again.  He would never be able to tell his parents how much he loved them.  He would never be able to grow up and perhaps start a family of his own.  His lineage would end with his inauspicious death by the actions of a rogue longneck.  At that was left was the final blow by the massive tail of his best friend's father.  Which would be ending his short life at any moment.

Any moment now.

Any moment...

Wait, I am still alive?

Without breaking his stride, Chomper took a glance back at the massive longneck and could see that he was struggling to remove a splinter of some kind from his rear leg.

Wait, a splinter?  Chomper glanced back at the figure for a moment.  It wasn't a splinter, it was a spear!  But who had speared Bron?  Whoever it was saved his life.  As the feeling of relief washed over him, he felt a presence to his left.  He immediately turned and saw two green fast biters catching up to him.

"Keep running, Chomper!"  Spike called.

The lighter green fast biter then spoke encouragingly.  "We're almost there.  Yep!  Yep!  Yep!"

As Chomper looked towards his destination, he could see that Ruby and Littlefoot had both made it and they were being joined by Cera, who was clutching a spear in hand.  The rest of the pack had come to their rescue.

As Chomper ran into the safety of the thick forest, he could hear Doc's footsteps stop, presumably at Bron's location.  That was when he heard something that made his blood run cold.

"I swear on my son's honor, Chomper, I will kill you!  I will kill you if it is the last thing that I ever do!"

Chomper looked towards Littlefoot, who was now on the verge of collapse he noticed.  His eyes were tearless, but his expression still conveyed shock and horror.  Ruby and Cera were both at his side whispering some words of comfort, but they didn't seem to be having much of an effect.  Ducky and Spike both simply looked on.  The pack had stuck together and came to one another's aid, but their leader seemed to be directionless now that his father had made an appearance.  Each of them now seemed concerned that he would be unable to function at all.

After a few moments, however, Littlefoot seemed to regain some of his composure and he mutely gestured towards home.

In solemn silence, the pack quietly resumed their journey to their home.  None of them were looking forward to the inevitable conversation that awaited them.

......

Terri quite enjoyed the warmth of the afternoon.  She, like most other large biters, conserved her energy during times of plenty and there was no more enjoyable way of doing that then taking a mid-afternoon nap.

Snort!

She opened her eyes.  Well, the nap was good while it lasted. Terri thought to herself, as she gave Dein a slight nudge with her forelimbs.  He didn't even stir, as nearly nothing could awaken Dein when he was peacefully asleep.  She didn't really want to wake him up anyway.  She simply wanted him to roll over so his snoring would cease.  

As the snoring did not abate, she rolled her eyes and proceeded to get up.  That was when she saw the children enter the clearing.  I wonder what they have been up to today? She thought to herself.  That was when she caught sight of Chomper and Littlefoot both limping at the front of the group.

"What happened, Path?!"  She exclaimed loudly, as Dein immediately woke from his slumber.  Both sharpteeth looked towards Chomper with concerned eyes.  Not only was he and Littlefoot injured, but the others seemed quite shaken up as well.  Was it a hunt gone bad?  A dominance battle in the pack?  The possibilities ran through her head like raindrops.

Path looked reticent, Terri observed, as he seemed to try to process what to say.  However, Littlefoot soon answered for him.

"My father happened."

Terri looked at the brown fast biter with some confusion, before the situation began to dawn to her.  Littlefoot, or "Seeker" as her son had renamed him, used to be a longneck.  Therefore, his father...  Oh dear!

Terri took a quick look over at Dein, who had now risen to his full height, and the two shared a brief glance.  It seemed that her mate's mind had made the same deductions that she had.  He went from a look of some confusion to a look of grim resolve.  His face communicated one thought to her: this was far more than a simple skirmish.  If Littlefoot's father truly believed that Chomper killed his son then this would not be the last they would see of him.  She returned a halting gesture with her forelimbs as she turned around to face the children once again.  She knew that Dein would be hell-bent on removing the threat, but she realized that she had to be delicate here.  This was Littlefoot's father, after all.

"Gather around, children.  Let us take a look at your injuries and then we will talk about this..."

......

"Then we stabbed Bron with the pointed sticks.  We did, we did."  Ducky finished.

Dein nodded.  It seemed that the pack's strategy of using pointed sticks had proven useful yet again.  They could not take down a full-grown longneck, of course, but they could cause enough damage to distract the beast.  It had proven to be enough to save his son.  For that he was eternally grateful.

"You two saved my son..."  He then gave the two fast biters a nuzzle.  Ducky freely accepted the gesture, whereas Spike gave little reaction.  

That is an odd reaction. Dein mused.  In response he took a closer look at the green fast biter.  

Spike looked utterly exhausted.  Not only did his body show signs of physical fatigue, a sign that was shared by all of the others, but he also had dreariness in his eyes.  A sign of mental exhaustion.  Upon reflecting for a split second, Dein figured that Spike was still distraught over the loss of his friend, Tippy.  The fact that Spike's friend had died was mentioned in passing during Ducky's story, but Dein could tell that it was not a mere afterthought to the green fast biter.  No, this was something far more hurtful.  

Although Dein could not relate to having a leaf-eater friend, he could understand the agony of losing someone due to a situation that is out of your control.  It was a fact of life for sharpteeth that even though you may consider another sharptooth to be a friend, they may die in dominance battles or fights over mates.  In such circumstances, no reprisals could be launched, nor condemnations made.  If a dinosaur called another out in single combat or a were to enter into another's territory, then the dinosaur in question was responsible for their own demise as far as tradition was concerned.  Dein had lost more than a few acquaintances under such circumstances and he could do nothing to avenge them without being in the wrong.  It was a fact of life that he eventually learned to accept, but not without regret for those he lost.

He looked at Spike again.  I need to make him understand that he did help one of his friends today.  He couldn't help Tippy, but he did save my son. Dein sighed softly.  I hope he gets the message.

Dein continued.  "Had Chomper died... I don't know what I would have done.  Thank you both."  He then gave them a second nuzzle.  He was pleased to see that Spike returned the gesture this time.  Although Dein knew that Spike's pain would not heal overnight, he was relieved that Spike was again showing signs of responsiveness.  He knew that as long as Spike was responsive then the rest of the pack would attend to his emotional needs.  They were far better at emotional support than he was.

As Dein raised his head after nuzzling the two fast biters, he noticed the expressions of the rest of the pack.  Path was still consoling his mother over the ordeal, while Terri was still teary-eyed at the thought of potentially losing Chomper.  Both he and Terri had their run-ins with death in the previous month; the last thing that they wanted was for Chomper to have his own brush with mortality.  Thankfully his friends were there to save him.

Looking at the remainder of the pack, Dein could see that both Cera and Ruby were staring at Littlefoot with more than a little concern.  Littlefoot. Dein thought of the former longneck in his original leaf-eater name, as it was an echo of that life which had confronted him on this day.  The poor leader of the pack had come face-to-face with his father and had been nearly killed by the same.  What would Chomper have done if he faced me and I...  Dein couldn't even finish that thought.  To be threatened by your own flesh and blood, even if they were now a different kind, was too horrible to contemplate.  Dein knew that what he would have to talk to Littlefoot about would haunt the poor fast biter, but he had no choice.  Bron was a threat to his son and to all of Littlefoot's other friends.  He would have to be dealt with, father or not.

"Littlefoot?"

The use of Littlefoot's leaf-eater name, or rather the equivalent in the sharptooth language, was not lost on the others as they all turned and looked towards the massive sharptooth.  Dein was not concerned with all of them, however, he was only fixated on the dinosaur that he had called.

Littlefoot was hunched over in a pose that communicated exhaustion.  It almost seemed as if it was only the leaning of Ruby's and Cera's bodies against his that kept him upright.  His eyes, which were now fixed upon Dein's, were free of tears but still had a haunted look to them.  Yes, the day's events had taken their toll on Littlefoot.  Dein decided that he would not rush the poor fast biter.  He would wait until he was ready to respond.

"Yes..."  Littlefoot muttered softly.  

Dein sighed.  He was not the most diplomatic sharptooth.  In fact, that was quite an understatement.  However, he was still reasonable enough to recognize that he would have to be gentle in how he broached this subject.  With that in mind, he began his statement.

"I know it must be hard for you, Littlefoot.  But... You are the leader of your pack."  The tone was firm, but understanding.  Dein was trying to appeal to Littlefoot's leadership qualities so that he would recall his first duty.  His duty to the rest of the pack.  "What do you think needs to be done here?  How can you keep them safe?"  Dein knew that he was being manipulative, but Littlefoot needed to confront the reality of this situation sooner rather than later.  The longer that he reflected on his previous life and his previous relationships, the harder it would be for him to do what needed to be done.

Littlefoot gulped.  The former longneck took on a grim expression, as he proceeded to look down at the ground.  He seemed to be deep in thought, but after a few moments he responded to Dein's questions.

"He... he won't stop chasing us, will he?"  It wasn't really a question as Littlefoot and the others already knew the answer.  "And we can't talk to him... He won't give us a chance..."

Dein nodded.  "And none of us would allow you to risk yourself like that.  You nearly died today, Seeker."  He returned to using Littlefoot's sharptooth name, as he had succeeded in shifting the former longneck's focus to his leadership duties.

Littlefoot took in a shaky breath.  "I can't kill him..."  There it was.  The obvious end result of Bron's quest for vengeance.  If he was truly hell-bent on the destruction of the pack, then either he would succeed in killing them or they would have to strike first.  "I can't kill my own dad!  I'm not a monster!"  

Littlefoot immediately collapsed in broke into tears.  The emotional dam had broken under the combined weight of his obligations and memories.  As Dein watched both Ruby and Cera come to the fast biter's aid, he felt some guilt about driving Littlefoot into this state, but he knew that is was necessary.  Littlefoot would be unable to function in the emotionally-numb state that he had been in previously.  At least now he could confront his emotional turmoil and reflect upon what had to happen.  Depending on when Bron wanted to strike next, they may not have much time.  All of the sharpteeth needed to agree on a strategy in order to remove the threat to their survival.  In order to do that, Littlefoot had to be a leader again.

Dein gave an apologetic look to Terri, but she did not give him the angry expression that he had expected.  Instead, she returned his apologetic gaze with a sad, knowing expression.  It seemed that she understood what he was doing quite clearly.  For that, he was quite relieved.  It appeared that they would have to take out Bron and Doc sooner or later, whether or not Littlefoot actually helped in the battle or not.  In order to take that step, Littlefoot needed to be prepared for the harsh reality that faced them.

Dein slowly kneeled down and lowered his head towards the grieving brown fast biter.  It was as if Littlefoot already mourned for his father.  Dein mused that Littlefoot probably felt as if his father were already dead even though he was currently among the living.  His father simply viewed Littlefoot as another sharptooth.  With that in mind, Dein decided to speak directly with Littlefoot.

"I know that this is hard on you, Seeker.  No one should ever be placed in this situation."  The brown fast biter again focused his attention on the massive sharptooth, as the other two fast biters continued to comfort their leader.  Seeing that Littlefoot was again focused on him, he continued.  "No one is going to ask you to help... take your father down."  Littlefoot was beginning to shake in grief, but he kept his gaze on Dein.  "But you have to realize Seeker that we can't let him hunt all of you down.  We have to do what we must in order to defend the pack.  You understand?"

Without waiting for Littlefoot to respond, Ruby whispered at him.  "We're sorry, Littlefoot...  But if your dad attacks us then we have to do what we have to do."  Her voice conveyed sadness mixed with concern, but there also was firmness there.  A firm resolution to do whatever was required to protect the pack.  It was a firmness that Littlefoot's voice usually contained and that verbal echo seemed to awaken something within Littlefoot's psyche.  Both fast biters locked eyes for a moment as each seemed to convey their thoughts through a nonverbal language of their own.  Each pair of eyes staring deeply into the yellow depths of the others.

Littlefoot slowly broke eye contact and gave a light nod at Ruby's comments.  Taking a moment, he briefly looked at the rest of the pack.  Cera continued to look at him with a concerned expression, which was a mannerism that she shared with Ruby at the moment.  His emotional breakdown had caught her by surprise and she had reacted in an almost sisterly way.  There were no biting comments, no sarcasm, and no appeals to strength.  She appeared to simply want him to get back to his old self.  He then looked over at Ducky and Spike, the two who had saved Chomper and quite possibly Ruby and himself.  They looked back with concerned expressions.  Ducky's eyes were red with the evidence of crying, whereas Spike's gaze simply conveyed sympathy.  Finally, Littlefoot looked back towards Chomper, who was looking back towards his best friend from his current location, by his mother's massive foot.  It seemed that entire pack was stopped in anticipation of their leader's next move.  

An internal battle had been waged within Littlefoot's mind.  A battle between memories of the days past and his current obligations to the pack.  A battle between family and his friends.  A battle between a hopeless dream and a harsh reality.  Littlefoot had always been the idealist of the group in many ways.  But now he was being faced with another unwinnable situation.  The first time that he had been faced with one of these, he had finally resorted to hunting - leading to Rhett's death at his claws.  Would he now have to do the same to his father?  Had it come to this?  With dawning horror, Littlefoot realized that he had already made up his mind.  He would do anything to protect his friends, as he now considered the pack his family.  In fact, they were the only family he had left.  He would kill for them and, if necessary, he would be killed for them.  He would never forgive himself if it came down to killing Bron, but he knew that he would do it all the same if there were no other alternative.

Again looking at Dein, Littlefoot simply nodded his head.  "I will do whatever it takes...  But I don't think that I could..."  This was harder than Littlefoot ever anticipated.

Dein lightly nuzzled the brown fast biter.  "Don't worry...  We will take care of the kill if it comes to that...  But we need to know that you will help keep everyone else safe."

Ignoring the sense that his world was collapsing around him, Littlefoot took a deep, shuddering breath.  He then gave the only answer that his sense of duty would allow him to give.  "I will."

......

As the sun sank below the horizon, Chomper stared at the figure by the forest.  Everyone else had settled down to go to sleep, but Littlefoot remained at the threshold of the trees, seemingly looking at the night sky.  Taking a deep breath, he began to walk towards the lone fast biter, but was suddenly stopped by a familiar set of claws that had grasped ahold of his shoulder.

Chomper turned his gaze to the dinosaur that had stopped him and noted that Ruby was shaking her head slowly.  "Littlefoot needs to be alone for a while, Chomper.  He needs to think by himself so that he can be himself."

Chomper blinked.  He didn't quite understand.  "But he is sad!  We were all trying to cheer him up earlier.  Why shouldn't we try to help him now?"

Ruby smiled a sad smile at the purple sharptooth.  "Trust me, Path; I would help him if I could.  But right now he needs to think alone.  Do you remember when I would go to my thinking place back in the valley?"  At Chomper's nod, she continued.  "There are some truths that you have to find for yourself, Path.  There are some paths that you have to walk alone."

Chomper pondered this for a moment, but he still didn't understand.  "I don't get it, Ruby."

Ruby smiled with a small amount of amusement.  "I know, Chomper.  But you will one day."  She then spared another look at Littlefoot's long shadow that seemed to grow out of the night circle's light.  She decided that she could provide some encouragement to the small dinosaur.  "If he doesn't come back to us soon then I will check on him.  Okay, Chomper?"

At Chomper's reluctant nod, both dinosaurs turned and walked back to the sleeping area.  Littlefoot was being left alone in order to consider his troubled thoughts.

......

Littlefoot was totally unaware of the others watching him from a distance, as he stared at the full night circle.  Its brilliant light seemed to mock the darkness that permeated the rest of the sky.  It was a perfect metaphor for the small hope that bubbled inside of him despite the grave darkness of his inner thoughts.

He knew that it would be hopeless to have the pack confront Bron and try to explain their situation.  For one thing, Bron wouldn't believe them and the pack wouldn't have enough time to provide proof until his father and Doc would crush them underfoot.  An open conversation was therefore impossible.  That only left the possibilities of waiting until Bron attacked and responding... or attacking first and gaining the initiative.  Both of the possibilities would put his own father's blood on his claws.  He may not be directly responsible for the killing blow, but he would have contributed to his death nonetheless.  It was a horrifying possibility that seemed to become more real as time went on.  If only there was some way for him to explain himself without risking the entire pack...

That was it!

With a sudden determined expression on his face, Littlefoot began to advance into the forest.  He knew exactly what he had to do.

He had to confront Bron alone.

......

Meanwhile, outside of Haven Valley:

"So here it is."  Chronos intoned as the small valley came into sight.  

It was hard to believe that they had traveled so far to get to the Great Valley, only to be forced to leave it nearly as soon as they had arrived.  But that was what a voracious swarm of swarming buzzers could do.  Now here they were at what the residents called The Haven Valley, a place that they first encountered the last time that the valley had been beset by the ravenous insects.  It would have to sustain them until the valley became lush again.

"It appears so."  Logos muttered.  She frowned at the scene before her.  

It would have been much easier to put their plans into operation within the Great Valley, but they would simply have to settle with what fate had given them.  As soon as the residents got settled down, they would impart their manufactured story to some of the other residents.  They had to plant the seeds of doubt on the matter of the children's "deaths".  Only if they did this would they have a chance to be reunited with their parents.  Despite their claimed dispassionate interest in this world, each had developed a sense of duty when it came to these children.  Not only where they intelligent and brave, but they were also the next step of evolution for their respective species.  They would try to give them every chance to succeed.

Without any further conversation, the two rainbowfaces followed the others into the valley.  Hopefully they would be safe until the vegetation returned to the valley.

......

None of the dinosaurs present noticed the pair of yellow eyes watching them from above.  The sharptooth flyer seemed to examine the herd for a few moments, as if he were making a head count, and then fixed the herd with a wide smile.  

Red Claw will be very interested in this!

Without making a sound, he slowly turned towards the south.


Go ahead and check out my fanfictions, The Seven Hunters, Songs of the Hunters, and Menders Tale.