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It certainly has been a crazy year, hasn’t it?  Well, thankfully, a new year is upon us and here at the Gang of Five forum we have a new year of showcases, prompts, and themes to get the new year started in the right way.  We wish you all a happy new year, and we look forward to what you have in store for us this year!

For the month of January we have a new character showcase.  Please warmly welcome Littlefoot's Mother! :)littlefoot The character showcase topic for this month can be found here.

Also keep in mind that the December and January prompts for the fanfic prompt challenge is now open.  We are doing things a bit differently this season and allowing for people to either fulfill a monthly prompt or a suggested prompt during each month.  I look forward to seeing what you all come up with! :)  The fanfic prompt rules and list of monthly prompts can be found here.

Romance of the Wolves

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I am working on a fanfic series called The New Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog. There are two characters, Obi and Lupe Wolf, the king and queen of the area where Sonic lives, that are prominently featured. For those who don't know, Lupe is a character from the 1993 Sonic cartoon. Obi is an original character of mine. Comments are ok, just no trolling.
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Romance of the Wolves

Obi

Lupe

My wife, my queen

My greatest friend

Fairest and most glorious of all she-wolves

Eyes like sapphires

Flowing, long, silken hair the color of a midnight sky

Fur of silver and white

Our mothers brought us into this world on the same day

As pups, you were my best friend

As young adults, we came to fall in love

I look at you now

My glorious jewel

My royal darling


Lupe

Obi

My love, my king

Once, you were the greatest of princes

Now, you are the highest of kings

Your eyes gleam like fire

Your fur is like the black of the depths of the sea

Who would dare to stir your kingly rage?

No one, if they are smart

Looking into your eyes is like looking at a living embodiment of might and power

Such is your glorious might

My mighty king


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Just curious. Why do you not want critiques?


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^ Because I have never liked them, on account of the fact my writings are often different or odd in style, such as this.


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Sometimes I have a hard time with them too, but critiques are meant to help you to improve on your work. It's hard to improve if you aren't willing to listen to what other people have to say. But it's your choice if you want to listen or not.


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I used the wrong word. I should have said "trolling". I am in a bad habit of saying "critique". I had some bad experiences early on in my writing, so I am hesitant to accept them. However, I do allow for people politely telling me where I can improve.