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The Land Before Time: Far Away Home

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^ Wow, that's awesome! :DD

I absolutely LOVE his expression and pose. If Glide ever had his portrait painted, I bet it would look exactly like that. :lol

Great work, Sky! :)



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Good news, the next installment of Far Away Home will be finished by tonight... hooray!

Also, hooray for me becoming a Queen (Cera) on this very post!


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And to complete the three cheers, hooray for the longest chapter to date - 4012 Words.


Part VI:  Assimilation


The Forgotten Forest, for all its weird food and above normal temperatures, was actually very similar to the Great Valley.  The first thing Ducky noticed was how there were a lot more longnecks here then she was used to.  The young swimmer had nothing against longnecks… in fact she would be friends with anybody who wanted to play!  But therein lied the problem; the games the residents of this forest played were the type that only a certain kind could participate in – like Tree Munching, Drinking Contests (water of course), and aggressive games like Seed Charging.  It’s not that the young longnecks didn’t want to include her and Spike, it was just that they weren’t used to having to accommodate friends of different types.  So inevitably, Ducky, Spike and Petrie found themselves sitting and watching, while dozens of longnecks had their fun.

There was a time when Ducky did not understand why Ali didn’t want to play with them, back when they first met, but now it seemed all too apparent.  Ali had only ever played with other longnecks before, so she must have been intimidated by them at first.  The changes that Littlefoot was going through recently were similar to those that some of the older longnecks were experiencing.  The change had come for Ducky too, but unlike Littlefoot for her it was on the inside.  She was coming to realize that the world was not as nice a place as she imagined it was.

“Hey Ducky, Spike, isn’t it great here!” proclaimed Ali as she waded in from the river and shook herself off.  

The other longnecks were playing a pretty rough game of water toss the seed, which unlike the Great Valley version featured no rules in regards to contact.  Were Ducky in the mood, it might have been fun to watch them beat their teeth out.  As it was though, she was feeling left out and couldn’t share in Ali’s enthusiasm.

“It’s alright… I guess,” sighed Ducky as she sunk into her hands.  Spike let out a groan of boredom, and slunk down to his belly.

“Aww come on guys, your ruining the fun,” stated Ali, but none of the three of them looked too happy.

“There no fliers here, it so boring,” added Petrie as he lied down on Spike’s back.  Another longneck broke off from the game, which was picking up quite a bit now that the score was tied, and joined the group of them on the riverbank.

“Nah, it’s because the wingtails chased them all out,” snorted Shorty, who had gotten over his fight with Littlefoot.  Ducky rose up suddenly at the comment.

“You mean-ed there are more like Sky?” she asked.

“Oh yeah, over the Spiketail Hills there’s tons of them,” responded Shorty casually, “I wouldn’t go over there though… they’re pretty stuck up.”

“What do you mean?” asked Ali in alarm.  She had thought that, apart from the one that attacked Sky in the caves, wingtails were nice and intelligent creatures.

“Last time one of the hatchlings wandered over there, they nearly ate him,” replied Shorty, “luckily his folks were nearby to drive them off.  That’s why beyond those Hills are off limits – it’s where they live.”

“Hey, flyers!” exclaimed Petrie excitedly.

The group of them turned their heads towards the sky, and sure enough a group of no less then five wingtails was gliding over the glen.  Four of them seemed to be concentrating on the path ahead of them, while another black one darted from side to side, scanning the ground for something.  As the echelon passed over the pool of playing longnecks and the group on the shore, Ducky recognized the wingtail as the one who attacked them in the cave.  From this close, he looked even more menacing.

“That one is bad, he attacked us in the cave, he did!” called out Ducky.

“What, he attacked you guys?” interrupted Shorty as he stomped on the ground in rage, “let the overstuffed freak come down here and I’ll teach him a lesson.  Nobody hurts Ali on my watch.”

Ali sighed and lowered her head to the water to take a drink.  Littlefoot wouldn’t be happy if he found out Shorty was flirting with her again.  It was probably best not to tell him.


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Bron had approached Littlefoot that morning and offered to take him on a trip through the woods, to show him around as well as to get some “father-son time”.  His father had been quite busy lately, between discussions regarding supposed sightings of sharpteeth within the forest – dismissed as illusions – and the awkward behaviour of their closest neighbours the wingtails.  On top of this, Bron was invited to a few nests at the last minute to watch baby longnecks hatching from their eggs.  The mothers of the valley had deep respect for him, even though he had not chosen another mate.

As the morning sun rose higher in the sky Bron trudged along slowly as Littlefoot followed him.  Littlefoot was absolutely full of things to talk about, and his father all too happy to entertain him.

“This is such a beautiful place dad… how did you find it?” the young longneck asked.

“The herd and I have wandered quite a bit over the past few seasons Littlefoot, just like our kind always has, stopping only to rear the young.  After we visited your valley, many of us came to realize that we were better off finding a place of our own to settle down… a place where we could always eat and be safe from sharpteeth.  This forest was lush, green and empty… it was the ideal choice.”

“But what about the Great Valley, you could have stayed with us, with me.  There’s plenty of food for everybody,” said Littlefoot as he jumped up briefly on a rock and then hopped back down.  Bron laughed lightly at the comment.

“Oh I don’t think there would be enough room for all of us, not to mention the reception we got from your neighbours the last time we came for the Longneck Test,” Bron responded matter of factly.

Noticing that this conversation wasn’t going anywhere productive, Littlefoot decided to ask another question.

“Dad, what’s happening to me?”

The question was so surprising, Bron stopped and curled around his massive neck to face Littlefoot directly on the ground.

“What do you mean Littlefoot?” he asserted.

Littlefoot shied away a bit, and looking down at the ground in shame he batted a rock with his foot.

“Well, a few great circle rises ago I went to the river for a drink and I noticed my face had... changed.”

Bron laughed in a friendly manner.

“Don’t worry Littlefoot, your just growing up.  I remember when I was your age it happened to me too… mysterious lines under my eyes, and some feelings I’ve never had before.”

“Did you ever, you know, get this weird feeling whenever you were around a girl?” asked Littlefoot a bit timidly.  He decided not to mention the fight with Shorty.

“Of course I did Littlefoot, you are in love,” Bron answered.

“In love,” repeated Littlefoot as he raised an eyebrow in confusion, “but, it will go away right as I get older?”

Bron stretched forward and licked Littlefoot with his long tongue, knocking him back.  Littlefoot laughed, as a faint childhood memory surfaced of his mother doing the same.  When he was around Bron, it was like she was with him again if in part.

“I’m afraid not, love is permanent and carries with you for the rest of your life.  It was like that between your mother and I when we were kids,” Bron recalled.

There was another question Littlefoot wanted to ask, but he wasn’t sure how to word it properly.  In the end he decided to make it up as he went.

“Dad, there’s more to it then just this… weird feeling right?”

Bron frowned.  There was more to love then just affection and desire, but he wasn’t sure it was time to reveal it yet.  Littlefoot was just coming of age, and it was up to him to discover the most important pact love possessed.  If it was a tale of a story speaker, then it was up to his son to reach the ending of his own accord.  It took the large longneck a few moments to compose his answer.

“There is, but I’m afraid I can’t tell you that part.  It is for you to find on your own.”

“But what if it comes, and I don’t know it when I feel it?” asked Littlefoot in fear.

“You will know, trust me,” reassured Bron.

He remembered his first mating, back when he was still a young adult with barely the second line under his eyes.  He had feelings for another female, a young beauty who sat beside him during story times and played together with him and his friends during the day.  They sat talking together one night under a shady tree and it just sort of… happened.  Their relationship didn’t last however as she found another male more suitable to her tastes.  Such was the fickle nature of love, but as fate would have it Littlefoot’s mother proved to be the girl of his dreams.  He still hadn’t forgotten her even so many seasons after her death, and he saw her everyday in their son whom he was now raising.  The Great Circle sometimes had a funny way of doing things, but often it worked out for the best.



Bron’s tour of the valley ended up turning into one long walking conversation between him and Littlefoot.  They caught up on each other, joked around a bit, and the large longneck even showed Littlefoot the `top-secret` diving rocks where he could have lots of fun jumping from a huge height into the water below.  It wasn’t until later that afternoon that they were hailed by some unpleasant guests.

The five wingtails found them just as they were enjoying their dinner in a forested glen on the east side of the river.  They landed in the trees nearby, and one of them piped up.

“Now listen here longneck, we’re here to-” began Glide aggressively, but he was cut off by one of Eybron’s senior guards present with a wing slap to the flank.

This situation was far too delicate to be so careless, since they were addressing the leader of their neighbours.  As if relations weren’t strained enough without Glide making an ass of himself and their kind. The black wingtail glared at his attacker with contempt, and crossed his arms in displeasure.

“We are here seeking the one known as Bron, the acknowledged leader of these herds… would you happen to be this longneck?” asked the most senior of Eybron’s guards.

“That would be me,” responded Bron, but he didn’t stop eating nor turn to face them.  

It was his right and dignity, considering this was a surprise gathering and not one they bothered to inform him about.  There was a time when he respected and admired the creatures, but after so many quarrels with them, sometimes over senseless things like attacking hatchlings, he had lost his patience.

“Good, we are here seeking another of our kind, one who has committed crimes against his fellows and must be returned for justice,” the senior wingtail said officially, “this one goes by the name of Sky.”

Through the tree Bron could see Littlefoot on the other side and out of view of the wingtails.  His son had stopped feeding and was shaking his head.  Bron took note of the gesture and turned to respond to his guests.

“I’m sorry, but I haven’t heard of someone of that name.  He mustn’t be bad; otherwise I would have had to deal with him already.”

Bron’s scorn was not lost on Eybron’s guards, and many of them scowled with distaste.

“Very well, then we request that you allow us to search your valley for any trace of his presence,” the senior replied.

Bron saw no reason to deny them this.

“You may, but don’t make any trouble.  There are lots of hatchlings around in these times and there will be no tolerance for any sudden aggression.  Am I clear?”  Bron asserted.

All the guards ruffled their feathers in insult, but Glide didn’t.  Something caught his eye that was moving in the tree behind the large longneck, and he squinted to get a better look.

“Move out,” commanded one of Eybron’s wingtails, and all of them but Glide departed.

Suspicious, Glide decided to conceal himself within the leaves and he shimmied over slightly on the branch so he was out of side.  After about a minute Bron looked around, and turned to the bushes.

“Okay Littlefoot, they’re gone… you can come out now,” he said.

Littlefoot emerged from the other side of the tree and swallowed a mouthful of treestars.  After he had taken care of that, the young longneck turned to his father.

“Thanks dad, those wingtails have been after us from the start… after Sky,” Littlefoot summarized with a tinge of bitterness.

“Well then it’s a good thing I didn’t tell them about your friend, now at the very least they don’t know he’s here.”

It was all Glide needed to hear.  His eyes narrowed with anger, and he hissed at Littlefoot from the tree.  The small longneck jumped back in shock, and Bron growled from the depths of his throat.

“Go on, get out of here!” Bron shot venomously as he used his tail to swat at the tree branch Glide was resting on, “scram!”

Glide took off long before the clumsy longneck could hurt him, and continued to hiss at the both of them as he departed.  There would be a reckoning for these ignorant longnecks, one way or the other.  First in line though, was the fate he had in mind for the traitor Sky when he found him.

Bron snorted as he watched the cowardly creature flee from his wraith, before turning with a dire look towards Littlefoot who returned with a worried expression.  Contrary to the best efforts of Eybron’s guards, Glide had managed to make an ass of himself towards their neighbours.



The two longnecks were so distracted by the whole episode with the wingtails, that they didn’t notice the sound of claws skirting through the leaves, or the suppressed growls of hate and blood that advanced through the woods.  They didn’t notice the eleven sets of devilish yellow eyes watching them hungrily from the bushes, or the almost silent snarled command of attack.

After a week of waiting, watching and lurking Tyron was finally making his move.


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Sky literally felt like he could walk on air.  The morning sun was warm and pleasant on his feathers when he awoke that morning, and it was like the entire world had lit up to his occasion.  Last night was probably the best night of his life, and when they finally drifted off to sleep Star had pressed against him with her head and rested against the side of his neck.  The feathers on the back of her head brushed against his chin, sending chills up his spine.  It was disappointing when he awoke that morning, early as always, to find she was gone.

It could very well have been a dream, but Sky didn’t think so.  For starters, he felt so light and carefree today that it couldn’t have been a dream. He loved her, and she loved him back, and he had been given the chance to express it.  He really wanted to see her again, and perhaps settle down with her for the rest of his life.  Now all there was to do was to end this charade… he would have to return the Occular.

Sky tapped the inside of his wing, but there was nothing.  The wingtail gasped in shock, Star must have taken it!  His feeling of elation disappeared with the wind as it dawned on him that she probably used him to get at the eyeglass.  It couldn’t be, he thought, their experience was just too intimate, too real to be fake.  Either way, she had the Occular now and was probably taking it back to the elders on her own.  If he was lucky, the deed would clear his name so he could finally come home.

The blue wingtail flew around for most of the morning, lost in his thoughts.  Around lunch time he found a nice pool to go fishing in.  After a few passes he managed to snatch a good one out of the water.  Landing on the bank, he proceeded to bang it on the rock to kill it so he could eat.

Nearby, a trio of young longnecks watched with curiosity.  Their parents told them scary stories about wingtails, saying that they would come gobble you up if you misbehaved.  Now that one was here in person, was it here to eat them up for being bad?  One of the group, a small beige female, got too close and slipped in the mud.  She cried out in surprise as the dirty ground carried her right down to where Sky was by the pool.

There was a moment of awkwardness as their eyes met, before the longneck barely older then a hatchling burst out crying.

“Please don’t eat me, I’ll be good, I’ll be good I promise!” she hollered through the tears.

Sky had seen some fairly amusing things in his life, but this one took the sweet bubbles. He set the now limp fish down onto the rock and set about reassuring the youngling.

“There, there, I’m not going to eat you,” The blue wingtail said.

“You’re… not?” the child asked timidly as she sniffed.

“Of course not… we only eat water-swimmers and other things that live in the lake.  The mean ones will sometimes scare you, but really your too big for us to eat,” Sky lectured as he symbolized some of the things he said with hand motions so the child would understand.

“So… you’re a nice one?” inquired the child who had for the most part stopped crying.

“You might say that,” chuckled Sky.

“Help, help… Sharpteeth are in the forest, help!” came a sudden shout through the forest.

A middle aged longneck came roaring through the trees a hundred meters away.  He continued going through the forest, repeating the message over and over inciting panic in the sparsely group longnecks, who rushed to find their children as chaos set in.

“Oh no, what have I done,” whispered Sky in horror as he remembered the fast-biter he saw in the forest the day before.  He had been so caught up with Star he had completely forgotten about it.

In a shot the wingtail took off from the riverbank, leaving the dead fish on the rocks.  If Tyron was here then he would go first for the leader of the herd – Littlefoot’s father.




The fast-biters attacked so quickly that Littlefoot barely had time to cry out before they were on him.  Seeing he was doomed the longneck sunk to the ground and covered his head to wait for the end.  Bron jumped forward to protect his son as fast as he could, but due to his enormous bulk he was too slow.  To Littlefoot’s surprise, the fast-biters ignored him entirely, and one of them even hopped onto his back and off again as he moved forward.  It was clear that they were here for Bron and Bron only.

The large longneck roared with defiance and rage as they snapped and slashed at him, targeting his calf muscles.  The sounds of the fight reverberated throughout the entire area and through the screeches and hisses of the fast-biters and Bron’s low pitched roars the crescendo was as deafening as it was brutal.

“Dad!” cried Littlefoot out in alarm.

“Go Littlefoot, run away as fast as you can!” his father shouted desperately.

Blood was now running down Bron’s legs from the places where the sharpteeth had bitten him, and they weren’t relenting either.  The longneck was ten times each of their size, but there were so many of them he was being overwhelmed.  One of them hit the mark, and slashed the muscle on his left rear leg.  Unable to sustain his weight anymore Bron fell to the ground and continued to fight off the rest of the pack in anyway he could.

“Run Littlefoot, run!”

Littlefoot was so traumatized he stood on the spot, staring at his father and trembling in fear.  For the second time in his life, things were happening so fast that there was nothing he could do.  In moments, his father would be dead and they would come after him with blood and murder in their eyes.  There were no friends here to help him now, they were either far over the horizon or way out of his reach… he was alone.

A piercing, rumbling roar reverberated through the trees and stopped the fast-biters in their tracks.  With unerring discipline they halted their attack, leaving Bron bloodied but alive.  Tharon was approaching.

Sky swooped down from the air and landed right next to Littlefoot.  One look around and he knew exactly what was going on… they had to leave and leave right now.

“Littlefoot, come with me we have to go!” shouted Sky.

The young longneck didn’t listen… he was still staring straight forward at his father.  The wingtail could clearly see he was going into shock.

“Snap out of it!” cried Sky and he regretfully slapped his friend hard in the side of his head with his wing, “Tharon is coming… he’s here for your father and if we don’t go now we’re next!”

“Huh, Sky?” asked Littlefoot in a daze, “Wha… who is Tharon?”

“It doesn’t matter, come on!”

Sky pushed Littlefoot towards the dense brush and the longneck obeyed.  As the two of them disappeared into the ferns the fast-biters made no attempts to follow them.  Their job was already done… Tyron had gotten his wishes of them. Now it was up to Tharon to fulfil his task.

The massive sharptooth approached slowly, taking his time.  It wasn’t like he needed to hurry, the prey wasn’t going anywhere.  As he neared the downed longneck, he tightened his lips revealing rows and rows of deadly teeth.  This was his favourite part of the show.

“I’m not afraid of you, sharptooth!” called Bron as he rose his head off the ground to fully observe his killer.

Tharon snarled, it was more fun when they had some fight in them.  He opened his jaws as he closed in for the kill.  Bron let out a massive roar of defiance and hit, and then closed his eyes to receive his death.  A moment later, the air was split by a thunderous snap.



Littlefoot heard the roar and came out of his stupor.

“Dad, No!” he shouted.

The longneck tried to go back, tried to make any attempt at all to save his father his closest living relative, but it was too late.  There was nothing he could do.  Sky landed in front of him, stopping Littlefoot from running back to his doom.

“It’s over Littlefoot, there was nothing you could do,” Sky said calmly.

“No, it can’t be, not again,” sobbed Littlefoot.  

Tears were pooling in his eyes and starting to drip down his face.  Sky sympathized with his friend, but they had to leave this place and leave it now.  It was wrong to have stopped here for so long.

“Come, we must find your friends before those sharpteeth do if we are to have a chance of escape.”

Littlefoot took his front foot and wiped the tears from his eyes.  He could be sad later… now was a time for action.  Sky was right.  With this task and the sharpteeth on their minds, Littlefoot completely forgot to tell Sky about the wingtails that were after him.  It would turn out that it didn’t matter… they would meet soon enough.


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Poor Bron. I had a feeling that he would die in this story. I feel even sorrier for Littlefoot; having already lost his mother to a sharptooth attack, the same thing’s now happened to his other parent. :( I also can’t help but feel a little irritated at Sky, for not warning them about the Stalkers. <_<

While far less tragic, it was also sad to see Ducky, Spike, and Petrie so lonely (I’d still like to see them featured more prominently in this storyómore dialogue, at least). I am glad that the first part of this chapter shows some things from Ducky’s perspective.

Sorry; I think I warned you before that the tone of my reviews for chapters like this probably wouldn’t match the eagerness with which I await the posting of said chapters. :oops



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Quote from: Pangaea,Nov 9 2009 on  04:06 PM
Poor Bron. I had a feeling that he would die in this story. I feel even sorrier for Littlefoot; having already lost his mother to a sharptooth attack, the same thing’s now happened to his other parent. :( I also can’t help but feel a little irritated at Sky, for not warning them about the Stalkers. <_<

Sorry; I think I warned you before that the tone of my reviews for chapters like this probably wouldn’t match the eagerness with which I await the posting of said chapters. :oops
You might be surprised at the ending of this Act... heck you probably will be surprised!  :DD

Not giving some hints why though, thats for you to find out!


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While far less tragic, it was also sad to see Ducky, Spike, and Petrie so lonely (I’d still like to see them featured more prominently in this storyómore dialogue, at least). I am glad that the first part of this chapter shows some things from Ducky’s perspective.

I know you want Ducky, Spike, and Petrie to get more involvement but the plot dictates otherwise for... well for the next few chapters at least.  I really want to bring them in too but if I altered the flow of the story according to what reviewers want in the now, the overall polished appeal of the story will drop.  Ducky gets her day trust me, but it's not going to be until the plotline reveals it.

We are so close to revelation, everything you say makes me want to tell you the secrets of Far Away Home, but alas it will all be revealed in time.  :bang

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P.S. What do you think of the new avatar? I wanted to come up with a good way to express my affiliation with the wingtails now that I'm writing a story about them.


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Nice to see some action. :D
Now Littlefoot has only his grandparents left... that's really sad to hear.  :cry

I don't know, but I think I'm liking your avatar.  :lol

Gaahh! I wish I could say more to this awesome story than this...  <_<


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Quote from: Caustizer,Nov 9 2009 on  11:23 PM
What do you think of the new avatar? I wanted to come up with a good way to express my affiliation with the wingtails now that I'm writing a story about them.
As I said before, I love the new picture of Glide. It works well as an avatar, though, admittedly, it’s such a drastic change from the old tank that it took me a little time to get used to recognizing you by it. (Typically, the avatar is the first thing I notice at the left of a post; I see the screen name second.)

However, if the purpose of using this particular picture as an avatar is to indicate the wingtails’ connection to your fanfic, I think you might want to change your member title (much as I like what you already have written :lol) to something that says “I wrote a LBT story about wingtails” (not in those words, but you get what I mean). There are probably a lot of members out there who haven’t read your fanfic, and are unaware of the wingtails’ role in it; making the connection clearer might not only help attract more readers, but also reduce the number of incidences in which you are mistaken for Sky. :p



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Hooray for another action packed chapter and a fitting ending to Act II! I think I might include authors notes at the end of each chapter, just like Serris does.  Could make things more interesting.


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Part VII: Convergence


It took them a good part of the day, but when Ruby and Chomper finally reached the top of the enormous bluff they couldn’t help but admire how brilliant the view was.  These cliffs lied right next to the Abyss Lake, a body of water so pure and blue Ruby could see all the way to the bottom in some places even from this high up.  It was incredible, and as she followed them with her eyes fish of all shapes and sizes darted about on the bottom going about their daily feeding ritual.  Perhaps more astounding was the sheer number of wingtails that darted about in the air, occasionally diving in to snatch an unfortunate water-swimmer from the lake.  She had believed that, like her kind the wingtails were sparse and spread throughout the Mysterious Beyond but the impressive scene before them hinted otherwise.

“Wow look at them all,” Chomper commented as he reached the top and walked up beside her.

“Oh yes, there’s so many of them there’s too many to count,” added Ruby.

“It’s a good thing they’re too busy eating to bother us.”

“I wouldn’t be so sure of that,” came a deep voice from behind them.

Ruby and Chomper turned on the spot to come face to face the two wingtails they were here to confront, the ones that kidnapped Cera.  Both of them bore identical smirks, as if they were amused at their ability to surprise the two young ones with but a few words.  Ruby was reminded of her siblings, who had a tendency to finish each others sentences.  It was funny but it got on her nerves sometimes, especially when they ganged up on her to make her do things, like taking them down to the river for a swim when she was tired.  In this case however things were a bit less trivial… it was time to bring these wingtails to justice.

“Give us back our friend or you’ll be sorry!” Ruby demanded while wagging her finger in a scolding motion.

“Yeah, give us back Cera or things are going to get real ugly,” Chomper added as he gritted his teeth.

“Such bravery for ones so small… but you should learn to respect your elders,” commented the lighter one of the brother wingtails.

“It’s so convenient that you chose to come all this way on your own, I was afraid we were going to have to carry you like that wretched threehorn,” added the darker one.

“Oh yeah, well your messing with a sharptooth pal!” Chomper snarled.

Both the wingtails laughed.

“And your going to do what… bite my tail?” the lighter one chuckled.

“I was planning on it, yeah,” Chomper admitted.  It was a technique that seemed to work in the past.

Their aura of invincibility slightly broken, both wingtails tucked their tales in out of his sight with looks of worry on their faces.  After a moment though, it was gone.

“Enough games hatchlings… you’re going to join your friend in our little hole or else!” the darker one snarled.

“Come and make me fish-breath! Chomper taunted.

Without a sound, the two villainous kidnappers simultaneously pounced into the air towards the small sharptooth.  Unlike back in the Land of the Mists, this time they were ready for the attack.  Ruby jumped forward and kicked the lighter one in the chest, throwing him off balance.  Where they both would have grabbed him like they did with Cera, only the darker one got him in his grip instead.  The weight threw him off balance and Chomper took advantage of it, clamping his jaws around the darker wingtail’s tail.

“Rarr, I’ll kill you for that hatchling,” he snarled, and barrelling through the air he repeatedly snapped at Chomper with his toothless jaws, but kept missing.

“Take that you… uh… you meanie!” Ruby added after the vicious kick.  She didn’t like to call people names, but in this case she was willing to make an exception.  The lighter wingtail caught his breath and jumped into the air, leaving the fast-runner alone on the bluff.

“You do realize how high up we are little one… a single misstep could send you tumbling into the Abyss,” the lighter one stated as he circled above her, smiling at the pun he had just made, “why don’t you just go quietly, and I won’t have to hurt you?”

“We’re not going anywhere until you give us back Cera!” Ruby proclaimed defiantly.

“Ah so Cera is her name is it?” commented the wingtail half heartedly, “Bah what does it matter… since you are refusing to go quietly, you get to find out just how good of a ëcreator’ I actually am.”

He dove at her, but she was pretty fast and sent another swift kick his way.  Midair, the wingtail halted and grabbed her outstretched leg.  Ruby cried out in surprise.  With a single motion he dropped to the ground and pulled her up until she was dangling upside down over the rocky ground.

“See, it’s a little move I invented myself called the kicker-catcher.  Pretty elegant isn’t it?” he taunted at Ruby.

“Put me down, or you’ll be sorry!”

“Oh if you insist, I suppose I must.”

The wingtail trudged over to the hole in the rocky wall that was the entrance to the prison like cave where they held the children until they needed them.  It was really quite the natural wonder inside, but of course that was for this ignorant fast-runner to find out on her own.

“Chomper, Chomper help me!” Ruby cried.

Chomper was in a bit of a sticky situation on his own. The darker wingtail was clearly the meaner one and he was going through every trick he knew to dislodge the sharptooth from his tail.  He rammed it repeatedly into the rock, but still it wouldn’t budge.  He hissed in rage.

“Need some assistance, brother?” the lighter one asked as he dropped Ruby down into the hole.

“Gah get him off, get him off!” shouted the darker wingtail as he crashed to the ground.  The lighter wingtail rolled his eyes.

“Ah, the things I do for you.”

Using his two fingers the wingtail grabbed Chomper by the corners of his jaw, forcing him to release his bite via a pressure point.  The sharptooth snarled and struggled in his painful grip, but before long he too was carried towards the hole that Ruby had been thrown down.

“Enjoy your visit… son of Tyron.”

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As soon as he heard the snap, like a crack of lightning, Bron knew he was dead.  Strangely, he felt nothing.  He thought it would be painful and shocking, but most of all he expected there to be at least something and there was… the feeling of hot breath on his face.  Bron opened his eyes slowly, only to come face to face with a maw full of teeth.  The sharptooth hadn’t gone for the kill, snapping short of his neck… either that or the sharptooth had missed.

To Bron’s amazement however, Tharon rolled his eyes and leaned backward, before beginning to pace in impatience.  All around the fast-biters looked bored as well, with some of them licking their claws and others clacking their teeth in anticipation.  What was going on here, why were they sparing him?

“Greetings leaf eater, leader of these herds,” came a voice from the trees above.

The large but injured longneck slowly turned his head around to come face to face with a strange looking flyer he had never seen before.  It appeared to be similar to a flying sharptooth, but nowhere near as intimidating to him due to its small size.  Without waiting for any sort of answer, Macaw continued with the lines he had repeated many times before, as he had been ordered to by Tyron himself.

“The Tyrant King has consented to spare your life, in recognition of the service you will now perform for him.”

“Wha-what are you talking about…what’s going on, who are you?” Bron stammered, having not comprehended the scope of the situation.

“The King of Sharpteeth demands that, once per seven circle rises, you send a mature member of your herd away from this land, to be consumed as Tyron sees fit,” Macaw continued, ignoring Bron’s questions.

While this exchange was going on, Tharon battled with suppressing his instinct to kill like he always did on all these occasions.  His brother had chosen him to lead his Stalkers for a good reason… not because of his ability to fight and kill (which he was both very good at anyway) but for his unique ability to restrain himself when assimilating another territory into Tyron’s domains.

It was a very simple concept really, but also a very brutal one.  In order to feed the masses of sharpteeth in his stead, Tyron ordered his specially trained stalkers to hunt the leader of each herd, and separate them from the rest.  Once they were alone and at his mercy, the most devious phase of the plan begins.  Rather then making the kill right then and there, Tharon and his fast-biters intimidate the leaf-eater into obeying their demands, which were to send one of their own to be ëharvested’ once a week.  They all resisted of course, especially the longnecks.  Sometimes they would agree with a set of jaws at their throat, only to fail to deliver on the set date and hide amongst their peers from a reprisal… a practise which greatly displeased Tyron and his minions.  In return they took out their anger in the most brutal way possible – a method that earned Stalkers their nickname amongst the other sharpteeth as ëchild killers’.  Every day that their meal was not delivered, they would hunt down and kill a single child in the valley, leaving the corpse in a clearly visible place.  In more extreme cases… well… it’s best not to talk about that.  It only happened once, a few seasons ago, but the so called ëScythe Valley’ never disobeyed the King’s will again.

If this worked, and this longneck agreed to Tyron’s terms, then it would complete the fortnight so that if each of his domains sent one of their own to die on a separate day, the sharpteeth would get a free kill every day in some part of Tyron’s domain.  The Tyrant King has a reason for everything he does.

“You are suggesting I send another to die in my place,” stated Bron, “but I will never do such a thing, especially not for the likes of you!”

Macaw ruffled his feathers in displeasure.  The other sharpteeth, who couldn’t understand leaf-speak, saw the sign and growled with hate.

“What a pity,” lamented the Sharptooth Flier, “then I guess your son is the first to die.”

With a nod of his massive head Tharon set a pack of his fast-biters, six in all, off on their next hunt.  They were to kill the longneck child, as they had been trained to do.

“Wait, wait!” Bron stammered.  The threat these sharptooth posed was very real and more horrifying then any encounter he had had before with their kind.  He didn’t have a choice.

“Oh dear, it looks like you are too late,” commented Macaw with a hint of pity, before getting back to the discussion on hand, “so, now that you are relieved of the burden of parenthood allow me to inform you of your position here.  If you refuse, we will kill you and devour your flesh down to the bone.  Once your herd picks your replacement, we will corner him too with the same offer until one of you pathetic clumps of meat caves in and obeys our demands.  You can’t win longneck.”

The vile comments sunk deep into Bron’s heart.  The bird was right, he didn’t have a choice.  The herd would need his guidance in the years ahead, and a few sacrifices could be made to preserve this.  After all, death through predation was usually much higher in wandering herds… he knew that from experience.

“If I agree, will you spare the rest of the herd?”

Tharon let out a low growl of impatience.  This exchange was taking too long and he was hungry.  If that wretched flier didn’t finish soon he would devour this helpless longneck and be done with it.  His natural instincts could only be suppressed so much, even if it was for Tyron.

“Of course,” responded Macaw with a hint of gluttonous pleasure.

“Alright, I’ll do it then… I’ll obey your demands.”

“Good, then we have no more business here leaf-eater. Be thankful that you are still amongst the living.”

On that note the flyer took off, and noticing the sign the rest of the fast-biters flashed up onto their feet and were off into the woods, on their way out of the forest.  So it was until only Tharon remained, the sharptooth breathing hard out of his nostrils.  The smell of blood and fear was so strong, it was nearly too much to resist.  Bron glanced at him with concern, but continued to attempt to rise to his feet regardless.  After a moment Tharon knew if he stayed much longer he would become a slave to his instincts, so he snorted with disrespect and followed his minions into the woods leaving Bron alone.

“Littlefoot…” the longneck whispered as he stood on his feet through the pain.

With a moment of pause, he limped off slowly to rejoin the herd.  The agony of his leg was intense, but it was nothing compared to the even greater injury he had suffered – the slashes to his pride.


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Through the chaos and cries of fear from the adult inhabitants of the forest Littlefoot and Sky made their way through the trees on their way to the clearing where the longneck knew his friends were.  They found them on the edge of a pool, with Ducky, Petrie, Spike, Ali, and Shorty all talking together on the shore while the rest of the longneck children continued with their game.  It amazed Sky how oblivious the children were to what was going on in the rest of the forest, but he supposed it was in their nature.  Land-walkers like the ones he had known were quite fearless – until death showed up to claim them in the form of rows and rows of pointed teeth.  Such was how things were, for if they were timid and careful creatures sharpteeth would never get a meal.

“Ducky, Spike, Ali, Petrie, we have to go right now!” cried Littlefoot, stopping to catch his breath.

“But why, is it because of the sharpteeth?” Ali asked calmly.  She couldn’t see anything to be too afraid about.

“Ali, these are not normal sharpteeth… we have to go or all of you will be in danger,” stated Sky.

The blue wingtail had proven to be their best friend and protector on more then one occasion, so there was no cause to doubt him now.  If Sky said they had to go, then they had to go.

“Wait,” interrupted Shorty, “were are you going we’re perfectly fine here.  No sharptooth would dare cross us!”

“It’s not just one sharptooth Shorty,” Littlefoot said hastily, “and… I’m sorry.”

“Sorry for what? Littlefoot that fight was weeks ago we’re still pals, right?” responded Shorty, this was starting to freak him out.

“It’s not that Shorty… I’m just, sorry,” the young longneck said on a sorrowful note.  Shorty would find out why soon enough.

On that note the whole group of them turned tail and left, leaving Shorty on his own up to his knees in the pond water.

“What… I don’t…” stammered Shorty, but he gave up on whatever he was going to say.





“Well it would appear that you are useful after all Glide,” commented the most senior of Eybron’s wingtails as the scene below them unfolded.

Glide had predicted that to find Sky all they had to do was find his friends and wait... sure enough, it proved to be true.  Within an hour the traitor had revealed himself, landing amongst his friends with a note of urgency. This time, Glide intended to finish what he had started in the Ice Caves and end his life once and for all.  With Eybron’s ilk helping him there was no way he could lose this time… sharpteeth or no sharpteeth.

The well conditioned wingtails to his left shot up from the branches, and quickly settled into formation to give chase.  Glide didn’t have the patience to join them, and bolted forward on his own with all his strength.  He soon pushed ahead; locking Sky within his sights… luckily he hadn’t been noticed yet.

“Flyers,” hollered Petrie, “Mean, mean flyers!”

Opps, thought Glide, spoke too soon.

Ali turned around and spotted the villainous creatures descending upon them, and screamed.  This caught everyone’s attention causing them to scatter as Glide tore in towards Sky for the kill.

“Sorry, gotta run!” uttered Sky quickly, before he banked away from the black wingtail’s attack.

Glide ended up driving his feet into the dirt, and hissed with rage.  In an instant he was back in the air and on Sky’s tail.

“You won’t get away from me this time… it’s over for you Sky,” Glide breathed as he weaved in and out of the trees, brushing off the scraping of leaves and branches like a black bullet.  

For all his titanic strength Glide was slightly heavier then Sky, and it was starting to show… the blue wingtail was pulling away.  Desperate to gain air, he pushed himself harder and faster and gained on his quarry.  With on final push he was within inches of Sky’s diamond shaped tail… he opened his jaws with anticipation of clamping down and dragging him to the ground.

Suddenly Sky swerved, dodging a thick branch right in front of him.  Glide saw it too, but he was going too fast and for a moment he blanked out… and then he hit it.  The impact knocked the wind clean out of him, and there was a vicious cracking of ribs.  The black wingtail barrelled out of control, crashing into countless hard obstacles before finally coming to a rest on his back.



The next thing Glide remembered he felt raindrops on his face, and slowly he opened his eyes.  The sky was a dark, volumous black that boiled with turmoil and hate as cloud to cloud lightning arched from various points to his sight.  The wingtail was so confused, and in so much pain he didn’t even acknowledge Sky looking down on him, a visage of worry all over his face.

“Glide… are you alright?” asked Sky.

A droplet entered his throat, and the black wingtail viciously coughed.  A line of blood ran down his face, signifying internal injury.  He certainly wasn’t alright.

“Don’t move, you will only make it worse,” added Sky considerately.  

Clearly he bared no ill will towards the wingtail that had hunted him relentlessly for the past half season, and even respected him.  Glide wasn’t about to return it.  He raised his right wing slowly, causing Sky to jump back.

“The Occular, give it to me,” insisted Glide bitterly in a whisper without even looking at Sky, “give it to me and I’ll help you die quick.”

“I’m afraid I can’t do that Glide… it’s gone,” answered Sky.

“Gone?” questioned Glide with surprise, his voice still in a whisper, “where did you hide it?”

“I didn’t hide it away… I gave it to your sister.”

“What!?! Impossible!” shouted Glide, before coughing up more blood in a fit.

If Sky wanted his brother in law to live, he would have to be more careful with his words.

“She was very upset… upset with you.”

Glide turned his head to face Sky who was standing not a meter away.

“Don’t lie to me Sky… my sister would never come to the likes of you for anything,” the black wingtail spat, both literally and figuratively.  If he kept up like this, his injuries would surely kill him.

“And besides, why could she possibly be angry with me?” Glide added sarcastically.

“Because you have protected her all these seasons, only to give her away when it suited you,” Sky responded.

Glide wheezed as the truth of the situation set in.  Star had come to see Sky… she truely was upset with him.  What had he done?

“Then I suppose… it ends here,” Glide managed, as he coughed again this time very deeply.

Sky didn’t have an answer for him.  

Luckily he was spared by the arrival of Littlefoot and his friends, followed unpleasantly by Eybron’s wingtails.  The brave young longnecks and their friends formed a barrier between Sky and his assailants, giving him momentary protection.

“Hah, I don’t believe this,” spouted one of the younger wingtails, “these land walkers are actually trying to protect Sky, one of us.”

“You won’t hurt Sky, you won’t, you won’t,” stated Ducky defiantly.

“Yeah, Sky’s our friend and if you want him you gotta go through us first!” shouted Ali with daring, consumed with loyalty for her friend.

The senior wingtail of the group was unaffected, but his younger companions were having none of this.

“Sky is a criminal who has betrayed his race and stolen our past, if you hatchlings won’t back off then you will share his fate of death!” hissed one of them.

“Yeah,” added another one, who had been just about to say the same thing.

“Alright then,” spoke the senior with authority, “…kill them.”

There was a terrible screech as a fast-biter leapt from behind them and pounced on one of the wingtails, driving him to the ground.  The others were so shocked by the sudden attack that soon another Stalker was amongst them, snapping at their flesh with her teeth.  The three survivors took to the air and engaged the snarling fast-biters, filling the air with the sounds of hissing and screeching.  In the confusion, the warring evil factions totally forgot about who the true prey was… Sky and his friends.

Sky looked around for a way out, a better path they could use to get away.  He soon spotted it, a nearby log that bound together the two bluffs that passed over the thinnest point of the Mudflow.  Recently the Black Mountain had begun to steam and bellow with the earth’s rage, and had melted the hard water on its peak.  The water flowed down over the minor lava chutes and filled the river system with dirt and searing hot magma, forming a phenomenon the dinosaurs called the Mudflow.  There were only two safe ways across, and this was one of them.

“The crossing, go now Littlefoot!” demanded Sky as the fight raged on.  Another wingtail was dragged down out of the sky by the vicious sharpteeth.

“But what about you?” the longneck asked as he obeyed Sky and brought the others with him.

“I will follow,” replied Sky disheartedly

As powerful as Eybron’s wingtails were, they were obviously outmatched.  With two of them dead or dying, there was no choice but to flee.  In a whisk of air, the two of them still alive circled once, hissing their anger, before taking wing back to the east.  The senior of them passed a spiteful glare down at Sky, assuring him that there would be a reckoning between the two of them.  Once Barrau returned with news of this to Eybron, there would be retribution… he knew it.



The fast-biters, six in total, were ravenous and bloodthirsty, and without pause took to surround Sky and Glide to solidify their advantage.

“Sky… tell Star I’m sorry,” lamented Glide.

One of the fast-biters stepped forward, sniffing the air.  There was something familiar here, someone he recognized.  Redgar levelled his evil yellow eyes with Sky, narrowing his eyelids with concentration.  Yes, he did know someone here.  Now he remembered.

Sky opened his mouth and hissed loudly, crouching into a combat stance next to Glide.  Despite the hate that filled the heart of his brother, he was willing to die for him.

It didn’t happen however, as with a low growl Redgar commanded his pack to back off.  They had no enemies here.  Surprisingly, the six fast-biters simply walked away, leaving the two wingtails alone at the edge of the forest.  They took care to grab their fresh kills, and were soon gone into the woods.  All of them but one.

Redgar sent a collection of sounds at Sky that Littlefoot listened to with amazement, but didn’t understand.  Sky returned with another angry hiss, and Redgar snorted back with indignity before following the rest of his pack.  With the threat gone, Sky relaxed a bit, and took one last look down at Glide.

“A bid you a safe journey, wherever you may be going,” the blue wingtail stated, before taking to the air to rejoin his friends.

Glide wasn’t going to let him get away with that.

“This isn’t over Sky, someday, someplace I’m going to find you and make you pay for all this!”

Sky circled above once, but couldn’t find anything else to say.  If Glide was to live through this ordeal, it would certainly be due to his own steel.  Perhaps, for now, it was best to let him be the subject of the black wingtail’s hate.

With a look of slight amusement at the thought, Sky flapped his wings and continued after Littlefoot, Ali, Petrie, Ducky, and Spike into the mysterious lands beyond, and whatever else awaited them in the north.


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Aw, shucks :slap!  A rescue attempt failed.  Well, maybe Chomper, Ruby, and Cera can now form an escape plan :idea.


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Author's Notes:

Okay, time for my first try at this.

This latest chapter I really felt that I wanted to throw the readers' expectations of the story off balance... again!  The plot is very complex with mulitiple layers of villiany and twists, and I wanted to emphasize the different powers that are Tyron & Eybron.  They both have different reasons to go after the gang, and both are quite villianous in their own way.

Eybron is an appealing 'main villian' because of how smart and well-respected he is to the rest of the wingtails.  It is up to the reader to decide if they hate him or not, though there is certainly plenty of incentive for that to come!

Tyron is appealing because he represents an evolution of the 'basic' evil of the LBT universe... the sharpteeth.  He is present only in image, but with a ton of references behind him so when we finally meet Tyron in the flesh, the occassion is quite monumental.  

Prince Tyrus is also an important character, but for a different reason.  I won't say too much about it, but believe me he was not a throw in villian and he has a very important part in the story to play.

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I really didn't want to end the fight between Ruby & Chomper without having them introduced to their fellow captives, but again I ran out of space.  I have something great planned for this, but it looks like it's going to be an Act III Part I-II thing.

Another thing I regret is how little detail I have been putting into the setting description lately, focusing entirely on the characters and their actions.  I don't like having to do this but it would seriously cut into the action and not to mention take up a ton of word-space.

I try to keep my Parts from 3,000 to 4,000 words to keep them managable, but even with minimal description this past chapter went over that count by 200 words!

I'm sure you guys aren't going to complain about the extra reading though,  :lol


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This may change as circumstances dictate, but it looks like this weekend may just end up being a somewhat-sort prologue (ie 1000 words).

Apart from that, I've heard a couple of songs recently that I really think fit the theme of Far Away Home, but I don't think I'll cite them yet until I can be absolutely sure.  Everyone interprets sound differently.


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No reviews this week guys? I was hoping you would respond before tommarrow morning, but it looks like I'll just have to post the Act III prologue anyway.  I'm sure you're pretty busy atm, just like me  :confused.

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Here's an idea: Cera, Ruby, and Chomper all make Wingtail Stew out of those twin wingtails, then let Chomper add just a dash o' stinky on it 'n enjoy :DD!  To be more serious, I hope those three escape soon.

Somethin' else that's been buggin' me is there has been no mention about Littlefoot missing any of those three.  I mean, he's really close with Chomper, and Cera's his best friend.  Was it really that easy for him to just forget 'em like that <_<?


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Well, I am quite busy right now too... but since you asked... ^_^
Like all the other chapters, this chapter was great! A great ending for Act II.

Ah well, guess Ruby, Chomper and Cera will need an idea to escape from that hole.
I had a feeling that Bron's life would be spared. But I thought someone would rescue him instead. :p
As for Glide, I'm sure he's still alive.

Now that Act II has ended, I will work on the picture you requested.  :lol:
But it will need some time since I have alot of work...  :x

Oh, and I can't wait for the prologue (even if it's short).  :yes


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I'm so sorry. :( There's a load of things that I've wanted to get done this week, but I've been procrastinating on just about all of them. :bang Here you go, and again, my apologies for being so late:

Well, for starters, I hope this doesn't disappoint you too much, but I really wasn’t all that surprised when it turned out that Bron wasn’t killed. (I was a little suspicious that his death wasn’t actually shown, but since I couldn't be absolutely sure, I figured it was safer to share my sentiments than to say, "Oh, I don't think he's dead." :p) Though the way he survived was a little different than I had expected; I had thought that the snap heard at the end of the last chapter was meant to imply that Tharon had broken Bron’s neck, when it turns out it was actually Tharon’s jaws snapping shut.

Something I don’t believe I’ve complimented you on yet is your ability to design truly despicable (in the best possible sense :p) villains. You’re doing an incredible job of making their actions horrifically cruel, yet logical and realistic. The way Tyron’s sharpteeth manipulate Bron to force him to agree to their demands is an excellent example.

All in all, this was an outstanding chapter, and concluded Act II quite nicely. :yes



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Somethin' else that's been buggin' me is there has been no mention about Littlefoot missing any of those three. I mean, he's really close with Chomper, and Cera's his best friend. Was it really that easy for him to just forget 'em like that ?

Littlefoot has been quite a bit caught up in things, like escaping death at the hands of a sharptooth, to meeting his father again and learning about growing up, to running again from a sharptooth.  Cera & Chomper do share quite the bond with Littlefoot, but one of the aspects of growing up is you start to, shall we say, "go your own way".  Plus with Ali around, he has all the company he needs.  There are some people out there who get so caught up in their girlfriends that they forget about their real friends.  Littlefoot is one of those people, by my interpretation of course (I'll admit there is a bit of a 'lack of missing' going on here that I plan to address at some point).

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As for Glide, I'm sure he's still alive.

Are you sure, really really sure?  Just kidding  :lol , though I've stated before that the only characters immune to death are the Gang of Seven and Sky.  Everyone else is fair game.

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I hope this doesn't disappoint you too much, but I really wasn’t all that surprised when it turned out that Bron wasn’t killed. (I was a little suspicious that his death wasn’t actually shown, but since I couldn't be absolutely sure, I figured it was safer to share my sentiments than to say, "Oh, I don't think he's dead." )

I made the mistake of telling you to "expect the unexpected," and now that means no matter what I do you will expect it - doh!  That being said I really wanted to fool you guys into thinking Tharon had executed Bron, when in reality they intimidated him into surrender.  I doubt Bron will be calling the Sharpteeth "dumb" anymore.



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Act 3: The Black Dawn

Prologue:

“Our rescue attempt didn’t work out so well,” repeated adult Ruby with a bit of concern, “but if we didn’t try… well… then nothing would have worked out well!”

The glowing cracks flickered slightly as the light danced off the bodies of the youngsters who were present, as well as the adult Littlefoot who was there to listen to Ruby’s version of the story as well as occasionally ëcorrect’ her memory.  Unlike the night when the story began, the sky was cloudy and dark with no stars revealing themselves to light the night-time.  It might have alluded to the tone of the story, if the children were actually listening.

Despite her good will, Ruby had a tendency to repeat herself very often and occasionally explain things too much.  On some occasions Littlefoot had to remind her to get back on topic, but by the end the children had lost their attention span and had started focusing on other things, like throwing pebbles at each other or (in Landar’s case) eating.  Even the young longneck Xavier, who was absorbing every detail like a sea sponge, was beginning to lose his patience.

“Sky has been gone all night,” he exclaimed disheartedly, “is he even going to be here at all?”

“Yeah, so we can actually get a good story?” added Wayne.

Littlefoot cleared his throat loudly.

“Sky will be here as soon as he can children, but in the meantime you should be glad that Ruby has kindly agreed to step into his place,” he commented with a fatherly smile, “after all, without her you wouldn’t have found out about our past.”

“Yes dad,” replied the small blue longneck with a pout.  At least if Sky was here, the story would be a lot more interesting.

“Look, it’s Sky… he’s here!” shouted Ducky’s daughter Aura, prompting Kala to wake up suddenly.

“I see him, I see him!” the spiketail added with glee.

Sky had indeed arrived from his long absence, and the wingtail circled briefly before coming in to land near the glowing cracks.  Notably, he did not do his usual loop in the air before he set down onto the ground.  He brushed off his wings and folded them neatly before speaking.

“I apologise for my lack of punctuality children, but I had some… business… I needed to attend to this eve.”

Sky turned to Ruby, who seemed to be in thought about what to say next about her marvellous adventures.  It wasn’t easy to tell a story when you had only been through half of it on your own.  It was a good thing that Littlefoot was here, otherwise she would have never gotten it straight.

“Ah Ruby,” addressed Sky, “you have been telling the story in my place I see.  You have my gratitude.”

The blue wingtail bowed slightly with respect.

“Not a problem Sky, I’m here whenever you need me to be here,” replied Ruby with a smile.  The fastrunner picked up her feet and departed.

“Wait a minute,” interrupted Landar, “what really took you so long Sky? You’ve never ever been late for one of your stories before.”

The other children were equally curious, and despite Sky’s refusal to talk about it they insisted.  With a sigh, the Great Valley’s story speaker finally relented.

“I… had to meet an old friend.”

“What friend… is he in your story too?” pushed Xavier.

“I suppose he is,” responded Sky, “but I would prefer not to –”

“What’s the matter Sky, trying to hide me underneath a rock like the rest of your bloody and treacherous past?  How like you.”

The young dinosaurs and the adults present looked around, trying to identify where the voice came from.  Sky knew who it was, and hung his head as another wingtail emerged from the curtain of darkness into the neon light of the glowing cracks.  

The cold black of Glide’s feathers was matted by small streaks of grey; clear evidence of age.  It was not a natural age though, as he was still only a few years older then Sky...  it was an aging of the soul.  The seasons had not been kind to Sky’s brother in law, and as the wingtail grew from an adolescent to an adult the venom and violence was replaced by a well of brooding and hate.  Despite this fire inside, Glide had also been somewhat moderated by his experiences and was less arrogant then in times past. Maybe with the loss of his youth came the temperament of experience and perhaps even a bit of a fatherly instinct he didn’t know he had. As Glide revealed himself, Sky ignored his comment as if it hadn’t been said at all.

“Well, aren’t you going to introduce me to your ëfriends’?” Glide taunted villainously, not hesitating to lower his tone on the word ëfriends’.  He was still wary of his brother in law’s tendency to befriend other races who were clearly quite different from their own.  Land-walkers and wingtails didn’t belong together, in his opinion.

“Children,” began Sky as he made a slight wing gesture of recognition, “this is Glide.”

Their reactions were mixed, but all echoed the shock of the revelation.  Aura screamed and jumped behind Kala, who covered her head and started shaking.  Xavier backed up a step closer to his father, while Landar dropped the bug he had been about to eat and stood up.  Wayne, on the other hand, was pretty impartial.

“Hah, you’re the Glide we’ve been hearing about? You don’t look so tough,” Wayne commented with a bit of a snub.

“Is that a challenge, threehorn?” threatened Glide, and he cracked his knuckles in anticipation.

A bead of sweat began to run down the back of Wayne’s neck.  He didn’t expect the black wingtail to respond like that.  Coming face to face with a villain from the story speaker’s tales, it was clear he was outmatched.

“I was just kidding, no need to get mad or anything,” replied Wayne sarcastically, trying to keep some of his dignity intact without getting pummelled.  Landar looked highly excited, which was very unusual for him.

“Wow this is so awesome,” he commented, “you mean you actually beat the snot out of Sky… twice!?!”

“Can we not discuss this here, please?” interrupted Sky politely as he could.

“Oh it was more then that… but that’s not why I’m here,” responded Glide as he crossed his arms and talked to Sky’s back, “am I to believe that you, Sky, are telling these children our story… the one where you sold out our kind and stole a piece of our past?”

Xavier looked ready to defend his favourite teacher, but decided it wasn’t the smart thing to do.  It was safer just to watch, as unlike for the previous few hours the story seemed more interesting then ever.

“As much respect as I have for you Glide, your business here with me is done.  Could you please leave in peace?”

Littlefoot opened his mouth to step in, but at the last moment decided not to.  As long as these two didn’t threaten the children with their fighting, they would have to resolve their differences on their own.

“And let you poison their minds with your lies, I think not!” countered Glide aggressively. They began to growl at each other.  Littlefoot eased the tension with a thoughtful response.

“You know Sky, maybe it’s better to let him take over for a while.  Like Ruby said earlier, ëyou can’t tell the whole story without the whole story to tell’… we all lived through these things, so perhaps it might be wise to get a different perspective?”

Glide looked just as repulsed by the idea as Sky was, but for an entirely different reason.

“Longneck, what makes you think I’m going to waste my time bragging about my previous exploits to your land-walker children that I couldn’t care –”

The black wingtail stopped mid sentence.  Telling his story to a group of wide eyed youngsters who would have usually avoided him was an idea that appealed to him on some level.  Nobody in the Feral Forest really cared for him that much, so this could be a good opportunity to pass along the things he had done and look good in the process.

“Alright, I accept,” answered Glide with a satisfied grin.

“Littlefoot, I don’t think this is a good idea,” mentioned Sky with a bit of annoyance, “there are parts of my past that I don’t…”

“Your afraid of what I might say aren’t you?” shot Glide with a smirk.  Sky snorted with anger.  He was too smart to get involved in a pointless mud-sling like this, so naturally came up with a better angle.

“No… of course not,” responded Sky with indignity, “… children, is this what you want?”

The responses were divided, but nobody dared to talk down about Glide since he was standing right there.  There was a general consensus though, and that was ëanyone but Ruby’.  In the end the blue wingtail listened to Littlefoot and stepped aside.

“Alright Glide, it looks like I am beaten.  Please don’t be too brutal in your recounts; they are only young ones you know.”

Sky took to the air, and circled a few times while Glide and the others watched him intently.  He landed in a branch next to Littlefoot, and whispered something into his ear nobody could hear.  The longneck nodded and soon Sky was gone into the air once more.

“Alright… where did the fastrunner leave off?” grunted Glide with displeasure.

“Umm…” answered Wayne with uncertainty, “you were lying on your back coughing up your insides.”

Glides eyes narrowed.

“I can see that I need to create a bit of a different picture… one of how things truly were back in that time.  In those days, there was blood everywhere and you didn’t know who you could trust.  Enter Eybron, the worst wingtail of them all.”

As the children engrossed themselves in Glide’s tale, Littlefoot pondered Sky’s words with a bit of weight on his mind…

“Don’t let them judge me.”


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A few author's notes:

The story is being told to the children in a different way from how I'm writing it.  What I'm writing is what actually happened, as opposed to how the character telling the story percieves it.  This is good because it allows me to go off on tangents a bit as well as explain the villians prior to their appearance.

Also I have a bit of a question...  do you guys read the chapters I post right away and then comment on them later, or do you leave it to midweek to read and post your comments?  The reason I'm asking is because often I'll put up a chapter and it will go nearly a week without being reviewed so I start to think that my story is disinteresting and quickly lose inspiration.

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Sorry. :oops I generally open this thread the instant I see it updated, reading chapters as soon as they are posted, but I often can’t find the words to provide a review immediately. (It doesn’t help that lately I’ve been growing increasingly scatterbrained as a result of college assignments. :wacko) My interest in this story, however, has most certainly NOT declined. Just to prove it to you (and since I figure I’m already talking :p), here’s my review for the prologue right now:

I have to say that this prologue was very good, especially considering that wasn’t originally a planned part of the story. Glide’s introduction as the new storyteller came as a considerable surprise to me, as his presence makes it obvious that, whatever events are to transpire in the next two acts, he survived them. I have to say, I’m a little relieved; as unpleasant a character Glide often is, the numerous misfortunes he’s experienced (and the obvious love and concern he has for his sister) have garnered him a degree of sympathy from me.

I’m feeling sorry for Ruby, though; specifically, because of the response she's getting from her audience. Evidently, storytelling standards have risen since the days of the gang’s childhood (as I recall, THEY thought Ruby was a good storyteller).

Much as I hate to say it, there’s a couple of (minor) spelling errors in the chapter as well:
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“but of we didn’t try… well… then nothing would have worked out well!”
“Of” should be “if”.

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As the children engrossed themselves in Glide’s tail, Littlefoot pondered Sky’s words with a bit of weight on his mind…
I’m pretty sure you meant “tale”.



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I read the newest chapter as soon as I see it's posted, and then I think about my reaction to it and what to say before I return and give my two cents ;).