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The Land Before Time: Far Away Home

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Hey Caustizer!

Just to let you know that I am steadily catching up with your fanfic. I'm up to chp 14 so far and I've gotta say that the continuity of quality has been excellent ;) I reviewed up to chp 13 the other day on FF.net but I'll reiterate about how the depth of character portrayal, both good guys and bad, is wonderful. I'll get around to finishing the other chapters when I can.

Keep up the good work matey ;)


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Posted here is about 2/3rds of the next chapter.  The heels are dragging with this story now even though it is over half way done, and I figure it's better to give you guys something to munch on now then postpone the entire chapter indefinately so i can finish the last bit.

After the start of the last part, The Eye of the World, I am thinking of having like a Far Away Home marathon, where I post two or three chapters in rapid succession as things begin to come together.


Part IVa: Arrival  


Things had gotten incredibly boring within the Abyssal Caves for Cera, Chomper and the gang.  The days just seemed to stretch on, and with the overwhelming tide of the lake blocking their escape and an angry wingtail keeping them from exploring the caves some more the entire group just ate, slept, and occasionally talked about their past lives.

“My brothers and sisters never really kept me around too much… not because they hated my hide but because… well… they hated my hide,” explained Gentry, “my skin colour was so obvious that any bloke could see me coming from a horizon away.”

Cera and Chomper were there too, displaying both fatigue at sitting around and doing nothing as well as restlessness for something to do.  The small sharptooth was picking up a single rock and dropping it over and over again as he sat on the ground, while Cera was laying her head on her crossed arms in boredom.

“Can’t we talk about something else?” asked Cera, “…like how we’re going to get out of here?”

Chomper lobbed the rock into the pool half heartedly.

“I wish Littlefoot was here… he would know how to get out.”

Cera snorted.

“Hah, more like he would get his new friend Sky to show him the way.”

“Are you still mad about that?” inquired Chomper thoughtfully.

“Well just look at where we are,” Cera said bitterly as she rose to her feet, “if it wasn’t for Sky being so stuck up and leading us on a green food in-the-wind chase for no good reason, we would all still be in the Great Valley with our families.”

“Not mine,” replied Chomper sadly.

It had been a long time since Chomper had seen his parents, and although Ruby’s family had been really nice to him it just wasn’t the same.  He missed them and every now and then it grew very depressing to know that he might not ever see them again.

“Say, who’s this Sky mate you’re talking about?” interjected Gentry.

“He’s a wingtail we met in our home the Great Valley,” answered Chomper, “he seemed kind of nice, at least when he spoke to me.”





A length of the tunnel-like cave away, Glide’s eyes snapped open.  Ruby jumped back in fright, certain he had heard her enter.

“Sorry, I didn’t mean to scare you,” apologized Ruby.

The fastrunner was holding a fish in her hand that she had just caught from the pool.  She had been hunting water swimmers since she first started swimming to the point where it had become a completely natural thing to her.  Ruby’s mom had forbid her to do it in the Great Valley though when she came with Chomper so the leaf eaters wouldn’t be inclined to drive her out, but now that her mom and siblings lived there she could eat what she pleased.  During her swim she thought of how long the mysterious wingtail had been sitting there alone at the bottom of the entrance hole and decided to get him something to eat.  One thing she wasn’t too sure of though was how her gesture would be received.

Glide yawned and flapped his wings once, before settling into his standard composure.

“What do you want?” the black wingtail said roughly.

“I… I brought you something to eat so you wouldn’t be so hungry,” replied Ruby, as she approached him with the bluish water swimmer.

Glide simply watched her unblinkingly as she set it down next to him and backed up.

“Why are you doing this runner?” he asked curiously with a slight edge.

“Everyone has to eat when they’re hungry,” Ruby said with a smile, “you haven’t eaten for a long time, and so I thought you would be really hungry.”

The black wingtail glanced from side to side, to make sure nobody else was around to hear him.

“Thanks,” he whispered considerately.

Light on her feet, Ruby waved and went back into the dark caverns towards the pool.





“Can I tell my story now… please, please, please?” butted in Thylo just as Cera had finished talking about herself.

“Fine, but it’s supposed to be Chomper’s turn,” insisted Cera.

“It’s okay… I’m not that interesting anyway,” Chomper admitted.

“Oh, oh… tell me how you got all those nasty teeth!” Thylo pushed.

Cera and Gentry raised their eyebrows (or at least their upper eye lines since they have no hair) at the stupidity of the question.

“Umm… well…” started Chomper awkwardly.

“From feasting all on little spiketail chops,” laughed Gentry he grabbed her tail.

“Hey,” blurted Thylo as she yanked her tail out of the egg-stealer’s grip, “stop it…”

“Only when you stop asking bloody stupid questions,” retorted Gentry more matter of factly then mean.

Thylo stuck up her nose and turned away from him.

“Guys, I don’t want you fighting over me… I can tell my story if you want,” stepped in Chomper.

“Yeah,” peeped Thylo, who just shrugged.

“Sounds all good to me,” added Gentry.

“Humph, might as well,” groaned Cera.

A moment later, Chomper’s story was interrupted by the swift return of Ruby.  They stopped what they were doing to greet her, and were mildly curious about how the ëgift’ she had given was received.

“He loved it!” exclaimed Ruby, “If we keep being friendly to him maybe he could be our friend too.”

Cera scoffed at the idea.

“Yeah right,” the threehorn said as she rolled her eyes, “and then he’ll kidnap us and throw us in the lake to drown…”

“Really, I think we aren’t that different at all,” replied Ruby, “we are all really in the same place at the same time so we can’t be that different from each other.”

Gentry snickered, attracting everyone’s attention.

“Sorry,” corrected Gentry as he rubbed his snout, “had something in my nose.”

“Hey… look!” gasped Thylo at something unseen behind their backs.

The entire group of them including Ruby, Chomper, Cera, and Gentry all tilted their heads to get a look at what had startled Thylo, and they gasped in surprise.  Glide had emerged from the cave and had been listening in – his expression entirely neutral and emotionless.  Nobody said anything for about ten seconds, before the silence was broken by Cera.

“What do you want?” she growled with about as much tact as a landslide.

“Cera,” barked Ruby in alarm, before turning to address Glide, “sorry Cera can be a bit mean sometimes… you can come over here with us if you want.”

Glide’s eye’s narrowed slightly, but again he didn’t say anything.  After a moment he turned away from them and trudged down to the pool to do what he came for – to get a drink of water.  The black wingtail lapped eagerly with his tongue taking in as much water as he could, not caring that all the young dinosaurs were still staring at him.

“You know Cera, when you first met me you didn’t like me that much remember?” said Chomper thoughtfully.

“Yeah, but we’re friends now Chomper,” replied Cera, “what are you trying to say?”

“Well maybe… he could be our friend too if we got to know him,” finished Chomper with a shrug.

“…maybe,” Cera grumbled admissibly.

“I’ll tell you one thing mates,” added Gentry, “I’m not gonna be the one going anywhere near him… looks like he might explode any second.”

“Someone has to talk to him… any volunteers?” suggested Chomper.

“Oh, oh pick me!” shouted Thylo eagerly, jumping on her feet.

“That won’t be necessary,” interjected Glide with a bit of contempt as he finished his drink, “what are you hatchlings doing down here anyway… this is a wingtail cave.”

“Hah…” piped Cera, ready to vent her mind.

Ruby stepped in front of her.

“You see, we aren’t supposed to be here,” answered Ruby sadly, “they’re keeping us down here.”

“Who?” inquired Glide.

“The other flyers who look just like you,” replied Chomper, “they caught us and threw us down into this cave for no reason.”

Thylo and Gentry looked surprised.

“We aren’t here for no reason mates,” said Gentry somewhat timidly, “…don’t you all know?”

Ruby, Chomper and Cera all looked at each other in a circle and echoed the same looks of confusion.

“The white flyer makes us come shout into his big shiny thingy so it makes us all loud and stuff,” added Thylo in the best way she knew to explain the strange behaviour of her wingtail captor, “sometimes he comes down and gets us for it or drops down more friends to play with!”

“What!?!” Glide roared, “…you mean Eybron has been kidnapping children to test the Sonicron?”

The outburst triggered a coughing fit from the black wingtail, whose ribs hadn’t fully healed over yet.  To the gathered young dinosaurs it was like he was speaking an entirely different language.

“Who wants us to test what?” Cera said somewhat sarcastically.

Where Glide would have been still angry, the pain humbled him into sadness.

“What does it matter,” he mumbled to himself while he clutched his chest, “he’s already taken the only thing I cared about.”

And on that note, there was a good minute of pure silence.  It was not a confused or curious silence, but more of a depressing one.  Every one of them in the cave at the side of the life-giving pool was far away from those who cared about them and they loved back.  It was almost if they were all lost in personal reflection… all but Thylo that is.

The young spiketail had grown up in the Verdant Valley… a very large, fertile, and rich valley that was a paradise to leaf-eaters.  The nearby Black Mountain had disturbed their lives occasionally, but for what it took away therein grew green food anew even better then what had been there before.  The adults of the Verdant Valley wanted everything to be perfect for their children – as their parents had ensured for them – and that meant they reacted to any threats from sharpteeth or egg-eaters suddenly and severely.  Life had been so good for her family that Thylo had actually been bored with it.  

Nothing exciting ever happened in the Verdant Valley.

Unlike her spiketail brothers and sisters she possessed a heart that desired adventure and danger, to see all edges of the world and encounter all the deadliest of enemies along the way.  Perhaps it was this longing for adventure that fuelled her passion for sharpteeth – or maybe it was just plain ignorance at never having met a real mean one face to face.

Thylo also had a secret too… and that was she had submitted to Eybron’s wingtails willingly.  She heard them talking in a tree one day on her long adventure walks near the edge of her home valley… and they talked about wondrous things.  In what was either a good or bad choice, depending on how you look at it, she offered to go with them to help with what they needed.  The two flyers were all too happy to oblige, and soon she ended up here in the bottom of the hole with a host of friends she had just met – the ultimate adventure.

As the group of them sat there, the swishing movements of Glide’s tail caught her eyes.  It was so mesmerizing; the little bushy tree-star twirling back and forth… it reminded her of a real tree-star flowing in the wind.  She was getting hungry. Back and forth, back and forth… she began to salivate.  At last she couldn’t take it anymore, and primal instinct took over.

Thylo pounced on the tree-star and bit down on it hard, and all hell broke loose.

Glide screeched so loud the entire group of them jumped back in surprise, and he rounded on the little spiketail with a look of pure venom and hissed at her.  Contrary to the terrible surprise, Thylo was actually laughing.

“Your tail tastes funny,” she giggled.

Chomper couldn’t help it, and started laughing too.  Before long the entire group of them was cackling away, while Glide just sat there and fumed.  Had he of been covered in water, there most definitely would have been steam rising off him.  This wasn’t funny.


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Glide is not amused. Things are going to be rough... :p
I liked this chapter. I'm also liking Thylo more and more as I read more of her.  :lol:

A marathon? You mean, you'll be posting new chapters in short periods?
I like the idea, but then the story would be over so soon (even though I want to read the final chapters as soon as possible... XP).

Ahh... I don't make sense so, just keep up the good work.  :)


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As crazy as I am about this fanfic, I like to have the chapters staggered just a little bit, to prolong my enjoyment of the story. Perhaps for Act IV you could wait three days between posting chapters, instead of a week? (Though do you foresee yourself writing the final chapters fast enough for a marathon?)

While I slightly prefer it when all parts of a chapter are posted at once (not that I can complain about seeing more of this story either :P:), I really liked this installment. The part at the end was hilarious, and I liked getting an insight into Thylo’s life before she was imprisoned.

I spotted two errors in the chapter: a missing question mark...
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Had he of been covered in water, there most definitely would have been steam rising off him.



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Maybe if the trapped characters can get Glide to join them, they can start to form a conspiracy to make a prison break :idea.  I also like Thylo and Gentry :lol.


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Wow I gotta say. I've been reading this for the last few days and I'm really impressed. This is a well written fanfic :)

The characters are very well done here. I really enjoy this and can't wait for the rest of it.

Keep it up :D


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I'm glad you like it LBTFan13.

What I meant when I said a Far Away Home marathon is that once I get to the last 3 or 4 chapters or so things get very intense as the story wraps to a close, so I felt that it would be best to finish things off appropriately (rather than having three weeks of cliffhangers).

The main thing that is slowing me down at this point is that there are quite a few little things I need to fit in before I'm ready to conclude the Act, and choosing how to order them or cut them out  is difficult.


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Part IVb: Arrival


Again Sky got them up at the break of dawn, but Littlefoot was so used to it by now he just yawned, rubbed the sleep from his eyes and feasted himself to a morning breakfast while the others were still half asleep.  There was no talking amongst them, which was unusual for the trip but not entirely surprising given how exhausted they still were.

“I have a surprise for you this morning children,” informed Sky to their backs while the group was eating.

Ali dropped the treestars she had been chewing on and turned to face the blue wingtail.

“Surprise… what surprise?” she asked eagerly.

It was unusual for Sky to say something like this, so it made it really interesting. In response the wingtail took to the air and beckoned for them to follow.

“You will see.”

All the children including Littlefoot, Ali, Ducky and Spike bounded after him.  Petrie naturally took to the air and followed close behind the blue wingtail.

“It not scary surprise is it?” inquired the small flyer as he joined with Sky, who had been taking his time to allow the land walkers to catch up.

“It depends,” answered Sky with a sly smile.

“Depend on what?” chirped Petrie with fear.

“… It depends on whether you enjoy lots of food, water, and the company of many others of your kind,” chuckled Sky as he swooped down towards the ground.

Petrie flapped rapidly to keep up, diving through a gap in the trees only to have the land underneath him give way to a massive cliff, and a drop of hundreds of feet.  The flyer was so shocked he almost fell out of the air.  Sky circled around until he was level with him.

“Quite impressive isn’t it?” the wingtail commented.

“Me not like being up so high so fast!” Petrie responded.

“Come now,” responded Sky in a homely manner, “what kind of flyer is afraid of flying?”

Petrie gulped.

“Me.”

Sky frowned.

“Well if you’re not into bettering yourself, then perhaps you will enjoy my surprise instead.”

The blue wingtail pointed towards the ground.  Bellow them was the largest, most beautiful valley Petrie had ever seen.  He wondered what the others would think when they saw it.





Littlefoot and the others had reached the edge of the cliff, and come to a grinding halt.  There were no words to describe the beauty of the place contained within the basin, but the best comparison he could make was when he stumbled across the Great Valley as a child.  From the seemingly endless flocks of trees, to the grassy plains and flowing rivers the Verdant Valley appeared to be a natural paradise of huge proportions.  Littlefoot turned to Ali next to him who had her mouth open in wonder.

“Wow… it’s indescribable.”

The whole group of them stood there, transfixed by the sight.

Spike was the first to break out of the spell, and he wasted no time making his way down the cliff walls.

“Spike is still hungry… he is,” commented Ducky with amusement.

“Come on Ali,” laughed Littlefoot as he ushered her after him, “lets go eat.”

It took them almost an hour to get down the cliffside that guarded the Verdant Basin, but when they finally did there was a joyous celebration.  Ducky rolled in the grass while Spike took it upon himself to ësample’ every piece of green food he could find.  As the group split up to do their own thing, Littlefoot remained.  Sky came to a landing next to him as the longneck waited.

“Littlefoot, what do you think of my surprise?” the blue wingtail asked.

“I love it,” responded the longneck with a bit of excitement, “you came through for us… just like I knew you would.”

Unexpectedly, Littlefoot nuzzled the side of Sky’s neck catching him by surprise.

“Oh,” said Sky in surprise as he regained his balance, “I’m glad you’re happy… but I think you should join your friends instead of hanging back here with me.”

As Sky said it he pointed towards the forest in the direction Ali had gone.

“See ya later Sky,” laughed Littlefoot as he proceeded after his longneck friend.

“Goodbye Littlefoot,” whispered Sky with unease when he was out of earshot.

So many things weighed on the blue wingtail, and while the children had still been sleeping after he woke up from his dream he had made a stark decision.  He had begun to think of them almost as his family, but yet he had led the children far enough… under the zealous protection of the dinosaurs of the Verdant Valley they would be safe.  The next leg of the journey was his and his alone.  For Littlefoot, that was his final goodbye.


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ëFraid I don’t have much to offer in terms of a review for this installment, seeing as it’s so short. However, I’m beginning to wonder if the gang has forgotten about the star day celebration they were going to give Sky. If they haven’t, Sky’s going to miss out on it by leaving them at this point. :p (Of course, knowing the gang, I doubt he’s going to get rid of them so easily.)



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Short, but good nevertheless. ;)
Can't wait for the next part! :lol:


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Part V: Countdown until Dawn


As the night settled down upon the Feral Forest, familiar sights and sounds began to take place.  The crickets began to chirp, or whatever other insects that made their residence in the trees and plants bellow were.  Wingtail parents quietly ushered their offspring into the safety of their nests high above in the canopy of the trees.  As the Great Circle set once more and shifted its gaze away from the known world the hustle of the twilight began to fade until nothing but darkness and silence remained.  Silence of course with the exception of Eybron’s tapping feet.

The white wingtail had been waiting… and not just for Star.  The council of elders had a strange schedule that often kept them busy for days at a time taking care of various matters within the forest.  Being as old as they were routine was everything and even with all the events that had aspired to his favour over the past week, they had refused to meet with him until all else was as it should be.  It made him angry to be subjugated to their will like this… but such was how things worked.  All that really mattered was that no matter what he did they were always on his side – as the hatchlings say, a good survivor knows how to run… but a great survivor knows the sharptooth.

Sharpteeth… their very existence in the world disgusted him, and apart from his desires with Star he could think of no better pursuit then to wipe them off the face of the earth.  The wingtails around him pretended to be as tough and clever as he was, while the hatchlings idolized him as a role model for when they grew up… but none of them could ever possibly know what he had been through.  It was one of the reasons he hated being around children – their cries of joy and laughter only reminded him how ignorant they were and how fast it could and would end.  Sometimes, when no one else was around, he heard their dying screams once again…

“Is everything alright my lord?” inquired Barrau, who had roosted next to him while they waited for entrance into the elders’ tree.

He stopped tapping his feet and turned slowly to face his aide, who recoiled slightly at his gaze.

“How long until the elders said they would return?” countered Eybron as he returned to facing forward and tapped his foot.

“Precisely at great circle down my lord… Cinceel has been gone three days negotiating with the jungle runners regarding the disappearance of more eggs…”

Eybron snorted.  ëNegotiations’ with the jungle runners usually resulted in a mud slinging war of threats and counter threats, followed by a tussle or enraged departure.  It was why Cinceel was chosen to do it – it was her specialty.

“And in addition to this your father has been –”

“You will not refer him as my father under any circumstance… am I clear?” interrupted Eybron harshly.

“As you wish,” Barrau relented.

It would appear as though the two of them had issues… issues that he as a servant couldn’t possibly understand.  Not that he wanted to, as it wasn’t his duty.   A few minutes of silence passed as the two wingtails waited for their admittance into the elders’ tree… and it just seemed to drag on and on.  Finally the attendant poked his head out of the leaves.

“The elder’s council will see you know.”

“Finally,” growled Eybron as he pushed his way through the brush, Barrau close in tow.





The gathered elder wingtails were of course completely silent as Eybron and his faithful aide entered the canopy with purpose, and settled down in the lower branches.

“Good evening, my son,” extended Tenebron, who was in his usual position as head of the council.

Eybron only responded with a low growl, silencing his father.

“I trust your quest has been fruitful…” started Cinceel with a touch of sarcasm, “otherwise you would not have dared see us at such a late hour.”

Try as she could, the wingtail couldn’t stop the yawn and covered her mouth with her wing as she did so.

“Indeed,” answered Eybron with confidence, “I have with me the Occular, as you requested.”

With a small ring, the white wingtail withdrew the clear lens from inside his wing and slowly set it down inside the narrow beam of moonlight that lit up the centre stump of the roomy chamber.  The edged surface was so perfectly shaped it reflected the light upwards in all directions illuminating the looks of wonder covering the faces of the gathered elders.

“You have done well young Eybron… we knew we could count on you,” praised the eldest male of the group.

“Good show,” added a younger male elder, who rarely spoke at all.

“I’m actually impressed,” declared Cinceel who crossed her wings and puffed up her chest, “but where is the other we assigned this task too… Glide was his name wasn’t it?”

The others were wondering that as well and looked to Eybron for the answer.

“He is… spending some quality time with his family.  I shall be sure to pass this on to him as well,” responded the white wingtail.

“Humph,” snorted Cinceel, “and what of Sky’s fate… is he dead as we demanded?”

There was a whoosh of gasps from the others.

“We never demanded such a thing!” blared out the younger male elder.

“Of all the preposterousness…” mumbled another female elder.

“Sky is a traitor, a thief and an eternal stain on our kind… if I wasn’t the one to declare it then you all were implicating it,” snarled Cinceel.

“Enough!” shouted Tenebron, “our discussions on this subject are not for this time Cinceel.”

“Is Sky dead, or is he not?” demanded Cinceel of Eybron as she leaned forward ignoring the statements of Tenebron.

“Be silent Cinceel or so help me!” hollered Tenebron.

The female elder turned and hissed at him, triggering a maze of shouts and gasps from the rest of the nine councillors.

“Stop this… both of you!” interrupted the oldest male elder, who seemed to hold enough power to stay the shouting match and stop it from degrading into violence, “You should be ashamed… all of you… now is not the time and place for our disagreements.  A serious matter is at hand and you are to listen to and trust the will of our current leader – of which Tenebron is so.”

The answer was met with mumbles of agreement.

“Alright,” started Tenebron, “Eybron, my son, is the one who is the cause of this mess now deceased?”

“No,” answered Eybron, “but I have reason to believe that that should be our goal.”

“And what would this reason be?” asked Tenebron uncomfortably.

Eybron paused for a moment, to work out a way to best present his answer.

“I have discovered that Sky may be in league with the sharpteeth… in league with Tyron.”

Whether the fact was true or not it did not matter… it got the exact reaction Eybron had desired.  Suddenly, the death of Sky seemed like a much more appealing option to him. With Sky dead, not only could he get vengeance for his theft of the Occular, but that would ensure Star was a completely free female – at least until he claimed her.  Eybron relished the thought.

“You see Tenebron… your indecisiveness on this whole matter has caused this,” snarled Cinceel, “If I was the head of the council, I would have dealt with this swiftly and mercilessly as it should have been done long ago.”

And once more the elders started arguing.  Such dis-unity wasn’t pleasing to Eybron, who simply sighed and rolled his eyes.  At last he couldn’t take it and shouted.

“Give the task to me, and Sky will be dead within a single day.”

The elders all stopped what they were saying and turned in his direction.

“One day…” repeated Tenebron with disbelieve, “son you can’t be serious.”

In response Eybron laughed.  It was a sound that none of those gathered had ever heard before – and it was only the second time in his life he had done so.

“Are you questioning my dignity?” spat Eybron towards his father, “I can guarantee that I will kill Sky within a single day… tomorrow in fact.”

Eybron was dead serious, and nobody else in the canopy was about to question him.  Sensing the fish was in his mouth, the white wingtail took a verbal step back.

“That is with your permission of course.”

There were worried glances about the gathered elders, but not because of fear.  When Eybron laughed about something, it meant that someone somewhere was going to get hurt and get hurt badly.

“By all means, do what you have to do,” stated Cinceel after a long pause.

Eybron smiled.

“In fact… you all can come and watch me.”

“But… how?” asked the oldest male who looked shaken at Eybron’s sudden delicious confidence.

“You will need to wake up really early I’m afraid,” said Eybron as he checked his nails casually, “say at… oh… the very break of dawn.”



“If I must ask my lord, how do you plan to do it so quickly?” asked Barrau as the two wingtails flew home from the meeting.

It had all gone so well that Eybron felt the need to celebrate.  Perhaps he could convince Star to…

“You will see… along with everyone else,” the white wingtail said with a bit of annoyance.

Barrau knew that now his master did not want to be asked questions – perhaps he himself did not know what he had promised.  Something told him though that this was not the case, for Eybron was just too sure for this to be false.

“There is something I would like you to do for me Barrau before you rest tonight,” continued the villainous wingtail.

“What is it my lord?”

“I want you to get me one of the children out of the hole… they will be important for what I have planned for tomorrow.”

“As you wish,” obeyed Barrau as he swerved off into the night towards the Abyssal Caverns.


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The Verdant Valley was so vibrant, so alive that Ali didn’t know where to start.  Compared to the other places they had visited in their travels, or indeed the places her herd had visited over the past couple seasons it was almost what she would consider ëcrowded’.  There were different types of dinosaurs everywhere from longnecks to spiketails to threehorns.  Since there was a lot of food to go around, they all lived together in harmony just like the Great Valley.

The young female longneck spent the morning after their arrival trying to make new friends, or just find out more about where they were.  Strangely, nobody seemed to have any time for her.

“Hey… get out of my way,” pushed one male longneck about her age as he shoved by her.

How rude… if it wasn’t for the complete paradise of the location she would have been on her way out already.  About lunch time she encountered Petrie, who was feasting on a bushel of sweet bubbles he’d picked out earlier.

“Hey Petrie, this is such a lovely valley isn’t it?” she commented, unsure of what else to say since she had never really spoken to the flyer too much.

“It nice but… other flyers so busy and mean,” responded Petrie with a sigh.

“Yeah, it’s the same thing with the longnecks,” said Ali with distain, “I wish I knew what everyone was so rushed about.”

Petrie shrugged.

“Just the way it is, me guess.”

Another thought hit Ali, and she decided to change the subject.

“Say Petrie, I was wondering if you could help me with something.”

The flyer stopped eating, and started listening.  Ali continued with her thought.

“See… I want to get Sky something for his Star Day, but I don’t know what you flyers really like…” she said nervously as if unsure how to word the question.

Petrie laughed.

“Oh that easy, just get him something really really shiny!” he exclaimed, flapping his wings in emphasis.

“Really, it’s that simple?” asked Ali timidly.

Petrie had to think about it for a second.

“Sky like shiny things right? He carry that shiny rock under wing in case he want to look at it.”

“Yeah I guess your right,” admitted Ali, “I’ll find him the biggest, shiniest stone he could ever look at.”

And on that note Ali left on her quest to find Sky’s Star Day present, leaving Petrie alone amongst the branches.

“Hmm, I wonder where Sky is?” thought Petrie.

Most people did not know that Petrie actually thought rationally, but when it came to speaking his mind it always came out a bit garbled.  His mom knew right away because her father had a similar problem until he was much older.  It was a family affliction, and it tended to affect the male side once every second generation.

Having nothing else better to do, the small flyer decided to spend his time seeking out Sky, who had become somewhat of a mentor to him.  Having another big flyer around just like his uncle Pterano was rubbing off on him and he was starting to be less and less afraid.  Maybe one day Sky would take him through the dreaded sky puffies so he didn’t have to face his fears alone.


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It took Petrie an hour and half to find Sky, but when he did the blue wingtail was in deep conversation with another, strange flyer that he had never seen before far away from the rest of the group.  Being polite, the small flyer waited until the talk was over before taking off and eventually landing next to Sky.

“Wow this nice valley… I glad we stop here,” Petrie commented.

Sky was surprised by his sudden landing, and jumped back on the branch away from Petrie.  With a sudden turn in the small flyer’s direction Sky growled with displeasure.

“Oh, did me scare you?” asked Petrie apologetically, “me sorry…”

“How long have you been here, how much did you hear?” asked Sky aggressively.

“Nothing, me wait until you done with strange flyer… who he anyway?”

“That’s none of your business!” shot Sky, “you shouldn’t be here.”

Petrie was shocked, the blue wingtail was always so calm and considerate and he had never treated him this way before.  He must have done something to make his friend angry with him.

“Me do wrong again,” sobbed Petrie, “me so sorry!”

Sky sighed as Petrie looked on the verge of tears.  He had really hoped it would be easier to leave them here so he could continue on with his task, but it would seem that events were catching up with him.  The little flyer couldn’t ever know what he had just flew in on – and Sky could only hope that he hadn’t heard what had been said.

“I will be leaving now,” the blue wingtail proclaimed as he turned away, “and you and your friends cannot follow me – this journey is mine alone, you shouldn’t have come.”

Petrie started crying.

“But why… why you do this?”

Sky remained with his back turned to Petrie, so that the young flyer couldn’t see the enormous look of guilt on his face.  He had actually become quite fond of the children and enjoyed their company, but at this point bringing them any further would endanger their lives.  This was his responsibility, and he couldn’t bear the thought of them all going down with him.  Maybe someday Littlefoot and his friends would understand that what he was doing was out of love, but now he had to make sure they didn’t follow him and the only way to do that was through a false regrettable betrayal.

“I didn’t ask for you to come with me,” Sky shouted as he rounded on Petrie, “It wasn’t my wish for you to risk your lives going wherever I led you… this has gone far enough!”

Sky pointed aggressively back into the center of the valley.

“Go back to your friends where you will be safe, and don’t follow me or I will see to it you will never fly again.”

Sobbing lightly, Petrie took to the air and did as he was told.  In a few moments he was gone, leaving Sky all alone.  With a deep flap of his wings the wingtail took off and glided towards the northern edge of the crater-like basin that housed the Verdant Valley.  As he reached the edge of the green paradise he made a soft landing on the cliff face and looked back, brooding over his decision to leave the children behind.

They would be safe here, Sky reasoned, so they didn’t need him anymore.  Unfortunately that didn’t make the goodbye any easier, and as he took one final glance at the setting sun he wiped a single tear away before leaving into the depths of the dark desert.


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Great chapter, great chapter! ^_^
Wow, now that's a villain I would like to see in cartoon movies more often.  :D
I see Sky's starday is still present. :)

Say, the name "Tenebron", isn't that latin for "darkness" or "dark"?


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Yay! A new chapter! :DD And better yet, a full one! Very satisfying! :smile

I thought it was neat that you used a wingtail-style idiom in the council meeting scene:
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Eybron was dead serious, and nobody else in the canopy was about to question him. Sensing the fish was in his mouth, the white wingtail took a verbal step back.
I interpreted the expression to mean that either everyone is waiting for Eybron to speak, or he has just said something dubious and they are focused on him because of that. Am I close? :confused

Eybron, by the way, is genuinely scary in this chapter. :blink:

I also liked how you gave us a little insight into how Petrie’s mind works, and an explanation for his speech habits. :p

One thing I’ve been wondering about Petrie, however: way back in Act 1, Part I, you implied that he was feeling distant from his friends as a result of them leaving him behind in Rise of Storm Tide. Has there already been a sort of unspoken, unreferenced reconciliation between him and the rest of the gang (now that he’s on another adventure with them), or is this an issue that’s going to crop up again soon, perhaps in relation to the apparently ongoing fragmentation of the group? (Of course, if it’s the latter, you can just give a cryptic answer or none at all. :p)

I noticed one sentence in need of revision:
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“One day…” repeated Tenebron with disbelieve, “son you can’t be serious.”
That should be “disbelief”. I’d also recommend a comma following “son”.

Please keep posting complete chapters like this. I don’t know about everyone else, but to me they’re much more fulfilling to read than fragments. :D



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So now comes the moment of truth... the next few chapters will be the most revealing in the entire story.  :smile

I'm curious, what do you guys and girls think is the real reason for Sky's journey to the North?  I've dropped hints along the way of various degrees of subtlety.  Express your theories and I promise I won't confirm or refute them (this is a test to see if I have done a good enough job up till this point with the plan)  :lol

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Oog...my memory’s so bad, I can’t even remember the pretense of Sky’s journey (let alone guess the real reason for it). :wacko I may need to peruse the preceding chapters a second time to refresh my memory.



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Well then it looks like it will be a complete surprise... excellant, I love writing about surprises  :smile




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The real reason... guess I have to read it again to remember. But I like being surprised, so I think I just let it be. :lol:


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Unfortunately it doesn't look like I'll be able to add a new chapter for Far Away Home anytime soon.  As midterms come to a close I'm off to the south for reading week and spring break only to return directly into the midst of more midterms!  I might produce a chapter over the past three weeks, but until my schedule becomes a bit more lienient you will have to sit and ponder more about what evil Eybron is concocting (and where Tyron is in all this mess).


Have a good break,

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Naaww... how bad. And I was getting really excited.  :(
Well, I wish you the best and have a nice spring break!  :yes