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LBT Fanart / DarkWolf's Fanart Thread
« on: July 01, 2017, 01:00:02 PM »
Quote from: DarkWolf91,Jul 1 2017 on  11:28 AM
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Thanks very much! I kind of ran out of room so I changed his proportions a bit... should have just made the drawing area larger :lol
Yeah, it was a little weird that there only seemed to be one of his kind at the crater. Maybe his species are mostly from too far away for convenient travel to the dream location... or maybe there were actually a few of them and they all just look exactly the same :smile
Actually, I checked later in movie 10 when those sharpteeth came and two Saltasauruses could be seen standing at the crater ridge with Grandma Longneck as someone warns her not to go down there. There could be others in the background or on the ridge during the eclipse climax, but I don't feel like trawling through the movie at the moment to note number and kinds of background species. :p

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LBT Fanart / DarkWolf's Fanart Thread
« on: July 01, 2017, 10:01:26 AM »
Nice painterly piece of fanart. From what I gleam from this forum's glossary and the LBT wiki, he is a Saltasaurus. I believe we also see his kind in movie 14 with Bron's integrated herd. The longneck is younger/chibier than the screenshot of that character you use as a example, but I don't mind and he's a very faithful depiction of how his species is designed/colored species in the movie. The shading and lighting is also great, and I like the blades of grass we can see. I like his expression, he seems to be cutely sad about something. I hope he gets to cheer up. Great job.

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LBT Fanfiction / We Will Hold On Forever
« on: June 26, 2017, 01:42:06 PM »
@rhombus Thank you for the chapter 1 review. Ichy and Dil were fun to write, and their dynamic is why I chose them for the role they'll play. Littlefoot and and the death quiet in his dream wasn't something I considered but that is interesting. His relationship with his grandparents will be important and there will be confrontations about past and futures.

I didn't consider the action beginning on the first chapters might be surprising to some, but the way I plotted the story necessitated it for story and character development. And/or that's the way the domino's fell as I began to write the chapters. I'll see if that works out. There will be less action-packed chapters inter-spaced with the drama-llama's to come.

@ADRFan125 Thank you for the chapter 1 or 2 (or both?) review. I worked really hard on them.

- For those who haven't read chapter 2, don't look under the line if you fear even vague spoilers.
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@Sovereign Thanks for the chapter 2 review. I'm glad to hear I seem to have handled the chapter well. Transferring the pace of the TV show/movie medium to literature is a challenge, so I'm often unsure if it's too short or drawn out. Which is part of the reason why these two chapters (Which were originally one) are so long. I tend to overextend things and try to give every character their due. Ichy (I think you meant him, with the reference to Ducky and the use of male pronouns) was fun, since he so enjoys playing the Heel with his supposedly self-taught stealth abilities. I'm also glad to hear I've got the gang's cleverness on point.

I've been eagerly awaiting for the reaction to the twist at the end. There was a bit of cackling and steepling of fingers in the week long wait. I hope I foreshadowed that well. I can see how the gang's reaction was a bit toned down. Maybe I could have upped their shock a bit. There'll be answers to the phenomena but not for awhile. Hopefully, I can explain them well.

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LBT Fanfiction / We Will Hold On Forever
« on: June 25, 2017, 06:03:39 AM »
P2/2

Once again, there was the sound of Ichy diving for Ducky. She cringed again, the sound closing in, right on top of her…and then zooming past her with another brush of cold. Ichy’s voice was strangled.

“I can’t be missing – why? Again!”

For a third time, Ichy attempted to snatch Ducky and once more, Ducky heard him miss, that mysterious cold coming across her back again. Ichy was beside himself.

“Oh, not now. Not now! This is the worst time for me to lose my touch!”

Ichy swooped down for a fourth, fifth, and sixth time. Each time, she felt no pain, no contact, only the cool disturbance of air as Ichy kept somehow missing his target. Ducky opened her eyes and uncurled herself as she came to realize something was going very wrong for her would-be killer.

“What am I doing wrong?” Ichy groused. “I’ve done this dozens of times before! She’s not even moving, I should have gutted her. At the very least I should have scratched her! What’s going on?”

While he raged, Ducky tentatively got to her feet. She still couldn’t see Ichy in the darkness, but he didn’t appear to be paying attention to her. When his ranting about his feet reached another octave, Ducky took the opportunity to jog quickly up the passageway. She was still exhausted but the confusion had reinvigorated her with hope, which rose as Ichy’s voice didn’t follow her. Eventually, she stopped hearing him altogether and continued her journey.

The passageway was curving back to the tunnel by the time Ducky heard voices again, much more welcome than Ichy’s. She picked up her pace and found Cera, Petrie, and Chomper standing anxiously at a passageway intersection.
 
“What happened to her?” Cera was saying. “Oh, how can I face the others if Ducky was taken by that sharpbeak?”

“You don’t need to worry about that, because the sharpbeak couldn’t take me.” Ducky said, stepping into view.

The three jumped. After a second or two of staring, they rushed to her with relief.

“Ducky, you alright!” Petrie beamed, briefly embracing her. “We so worried.”

“When you were gone too long, we thought…” Chomper trailed off. “Wait, ësharpbeak couldn’t take me?’ You ran into him?”

“How did you escape?” Cera asked.

“I don’t know.” Ducky answered, brushing her chin in puzzlement. “I really thought I was a goner, but for some reason, I only felt cold wind as he kept missing me. That was confusing, since he caught me with his feet just fine in the Last of Mists. But I’m glad that confusing thing happened, I am.”

“You’re far from the only one.” Cera said, relieved. “Sorry I tripped you up like that. I tried not to listen but he seemed to know how to get into our heads and twist our brains and-”

“Hey do you smell that?” Chomper interrupted, frowning.

“You have best sniffer, so we probably don’t.” Petrie replied.

“But sometimes you can pick up what I smell too.” Chomper sniffed experimentally. “It’s kind of muffled by the water but I smell something like…flowers and grass and treestars. Those aren’t in caves, are they?”

Cera blinked, and her expression dawned. “Of course not. But if you’re smelling them, that means we must be near-”

“The river entrance!”

Hearts soaring, they followed Chomper through the passageways until they got back to the tunnel, where they walked a short distance. At last, they were back on track and they were going to fulfill the mission Littlefoot gave them. There was nothing that was going to stop them now.

Then they came across a thick, sturdy wall. The surface was rough and uneven, as though some rocks and boulders had been melted into the dark rock. Ducky and the others stopped before it in consternation, glancing at where the river lapped tepidly at the stone.

“What is this?” Cera said. “Did we take a wrong turn?”

“No.” Chomper said. “I’m sure we went the right way.”

“But river end here.” Petrie said. “That strange.”

“It is, it is.” Ducky agreed. “If water keeps flowing here, this should be flooded. Let me see what’s going on.”

Ducky moved to the edge and dived, briefly acclimating before she swam forward. A few fish moved past her and she blinked as they didn’t slow but lowered to the river floor, approached the wall, and wriggled right under it. Following their example, she descended until her stomach brushed sand and rock. From her low vantage point, she was able to see a shimmer of light shining below the entire wall, low but distinct. She surfaced near the others.

“There’s an opening near the bottom here.” Ducky said. “The water swimmers swam through it and I can see some light.”

“Of course.” Chomper said. “I thought the plant smell was kind of wet.”

“You mean to tell me we came all this way only to learn the bellydragger and sharpbeak can’t come through here anyway?” Cera said, outraged. “What a rip-off!”

“On bright side,” Petrie said, “bellydragger and sharpbeak can’t come through here. They just don’t know.”

“Maybe if they did know, that might discourage them from trying to take the valley.” Chomper said.

“Who says they won’t use these tunnels or another river to get into the valley?” Cera retorted. “We might still have to cause cave-ins, but we don’t know where. Oh, it’ll take forever to get rid of them.”

“Maybe Littlefoot and the others might have some idea about that.” Ducky suggested. “There must be a way to get rid of them, there must.”

“Not to mention that it would be a long walk for the bellydragger if she decided to enter from another river.” Chomper pointed out. “And not all the tunnels can fit her. If we can confuse the two enough, maybe we can get them lost.”

“If we don’t get lost first.” Petrie said.

“Let’s find Littlefoot and the others before we think about getting lost.” Cera said. “Chomper, use that sniffer. We need to get to them before the bellydragger gets them.”

--

Littlefoot’s lungs were searing. He, Ruby, and Spike had been all over the passageway network for an hour, leading Dil on a wild goose chase. They wedged her in tight passageways, trapped her in caves, and even collapsed rocks to pin her underwater. Each time, she used her strength to break or crack the stones enough to free herself and the chase was on again. Still, it bought the trio time to brainstorm solutions for their friends’ predicament and they used every second available to them.

Not that it led anywhere.

“We can’t split up.” Ruby said. “One of us will have to be alone, so splitting up is dangerous.”

“Cera and the others are in danger right now.” Littlefoot said heatedly. “We have to do something!”

“As I said before, if we go rescue our friends, the bellydragger will go with us and rescue her friend too.” Ruby replied evenly. “Even if we trap her somewhere good and leave, she might eventually free herself and go up the river to trap us or our friends.  Face it, there is little we can do with the plan we have. We’re going to have to trust they’ll know what to do. We know that trust hasn’t been broken in the past, right? Let’s focus on keeping the bellydragger unfocused until they get back.”

Littlefoot glared, but Ruby stood her ground. Spike looked between them, baying in confusion. Apparently, he could see Ruby’s point but wanted to make sure his sister and the others were unharmed too. After a moment, suppressing a flinch from another tail twinge, Littlefoot breathed out slowly.

“I know you’re right,” he murmured, “but I hate just not knowing what’s going on with them.”

Ruby laid a hand on Littlefoot’s shoulder, eyes distancing. “Yeah, I hate that kind of not knowing too.”

There was a groan. The trio looked down at the pit to find Dil shaking off broken rocks, dazed and tired. A few minutes earlier, the trio had almost stumbled into the shallow pit in this cave while fleeing from the bellydragger and quickly drafted up a plan. Ruby lured her in, her slender limbs and sharp fingers allowing her to climb back out while Dil slid and toppled into the pit. After seeing how her descent shook several stalactites from the ceiling, Littlefoot, Ruby, and Spike lobbed rocks until they all came crashing down, burying Dil in the remains of the stone teeth. That had knocked Dil out for a few minutes, allowing the trio time to try hashing out a plan. Now Dil examined them mutinously.

“You three are really going to pay for that,” she growled. “I was thinking of drawing out your suffering but since you made me so tired and hungry, I’ll eat you so fast you wouldn’t know what happened.”

“That’s if you can climb up first.” Littlefoot retorted.

Seething, Dil muttered in what she thought was an inaudible timber. “Ichy, I hope leaving me to flail in the dark was worth it.”

Littlefoot ignored her. “Spike, can you guide us back to the river.”

Spike sniffed and nodded agreeably. Littlefoot was really glad to have drafted Spike to the team. If it wasn’t for his nose, they would have gotten lost in all these passageways a long time ago. Ruby glanced back nervously.

“Not to hurry you up,” she said, “but the bellydragger found a way to hurry out of the pit, so we’d better get ready to hurry off again.”

Littlefoot and Spike followed her gaze, noting Dil found purchase on several protrusions on the curvature of the pit and was already halfway up. When she got back to solid footing on a passageway on the other side, the trio ran, the slap-dash of her footsteps a constant encouragement to keep going. Through a twist of passageways, they ended up back in the tunnel, quickly looking around to regain their bearings.

“Where now?” Ruby said.

“I don’t know.” Littlefoot replied. “I’m running out of ideas. How many ways can you bury a bellydragger before it actually has an effect?”

“We’ll come up with something on the run, like always. And speaking of running, I think we should come up with another tunnel before she comes back to the water.”

Glancing about, Littlefoot saw no passageway entrances in the immediate vicinity, so he picked a direction and led them in a jog. He just so happened to pick the direction where Cera and the others had last been seen but he didn’t expect to bump into the four while on the run. They were either busy sealing up the entrance up ahead or evading Ichy. Littlefoot hoped for the former but feared the latter, so he was quite surprised when he saw shapes running toward them in the distance, calling his name.

“Over here, Littlefoot!”

“Littlefoot, we’re back!”

“It’s the others!” Littlefoot said.

“One, two, three, four.” Ruby smiled. “Four out of four, all safe.”

Spike keyed joyfully and bounded forward. Littlefoot and Ruby didn’t hesitate to follow. The seven reunited, Spike almost pinning his sister to the ground as he nuzzled and licked her, their laughter food for the soul.

“Thank goodness you’re all alright.” Littlefoot said. “I thought the sharpbeak might have got you.”

“He did almost get us.” Ducky said. “But for some reason, he couldn’t.”

“He what?” Ruby shook her head. “You can tell us about that later. Can you tell us if you were able to seal up the tunnel?”

“We didn’t need to.” Chomper said. “There already was a wall there.”

“It pretty thick.” Petrie said. “Ducky said only itty bity space for water swimmers to swim through.”

Littlefoot was stunned. “Are you serious? Those two really can’t go through there?”

“Not unless they shrank.” Cera huffed. “Seriously, all that hassle to find that out. What a waste.”

“Maybe it’s not so wastey after all.” Ducky said slowly. “The sharpbeak did boast a lot while he was scaring us and we all know he and the bellydragger like to fight a lot. Why don’t we make them fight?”

“That is a good plan.” Ruby beamed. “From what we heard while running, the bellydragger doesn’t always like the suggestions and plans the sharpbeak gives her.”

“We just need to tell them the truth.” Littlefoot said. “At least enough of the truth they would be at each other’s throats. The trouble is how do we get them to listen to us?”

There was a snarl and the swirl of disturbed water. Dil had caught up at last, having followed the voices to track them down. She leered in their approximate direction.

“Give it up, kids.” Dil said. “You’re weak and divided.”

“Does it sound like we’re divided?” Cera said.

Dil stopped, stunned. “You four are back? Ichy should have taken care of you lot!”

“Shows what he know.” Petrie said. “He couldn’t even get Ducky.”

“He isn’t as smart as he thinks he is, oh no, no, no.” Ducky wagged a finger. “You can’t enter the Great Valley here. We found a great big thick wall that we couldn’t get through. There is only enough space for water and small water swimmers to get into the valley, which means you can’t get through.”

“What are you talking about?” Dil demanded. “Are you screwing with my head?”

“We’re telling the truth here.” Chomper said. “I smelled the other side of that wall and the Great Valley is out there. Your Ichy didn’t think to check first to make sure this route wasn’t blocked off.”

Dil’s anger drained into confusion and even distress. Her eyes darted about as she mentally digested this.

“No way, this can’t be true,” she muttered. “Ichy sounded so sure about his strategy. You’ve got to be pulling my leg.”

“If anyone’s doing the leg pulling, it’s your sharpbeak friend.” Littlefoot said. “Don’t tell me he hasn’t led you astray before. He couldn’t get us in the Land of Mists and he couldn’t get us now, so his plans aren’t foolproof.”

“His plans aren’t foolproof.” Dil repeated, lip curling. “Yes, I know. Why, if he really did mess up… if he can’t keep track of you brats-”

“Dil! Dil! There you are!”

There was a series of flaps and Ichy’s breathless voice became apparent.

“Have you managed to eat those brats? Mine somehow slipped off and it would do me good if you somehow gave a blow to their…there they are!” he exclaimed disbelievingly. “Yours managed to give you the slip too? Come on Dil, it shouldn’t have been that hard to get them! They’re smaller than you, swallowing them should’ve been a snap!”

“Easy for you to say!” Dil snarled. “They’ve been burying me in rocks left, right, and center ever since we started this chasing game. Did you forget I was blind or something when you went dallying off to play with those children?”

There was a slight gasp, as though Ichy hadn’t expected Dil to lash out quite like that. He replied frostily. “Well, I didn’t exactly hear any disagreement from you. Besides, grumping at me isn’t going to fill your stomach. What are you just floating there for? Attack them!”

“Have you actually checked that river exit thing?”

“What, river exit – we’re trying to eat these kids!”

“But what about eating other members of this stinking valley? Because I was just told we can’t get in through this tunnel!”

Ichy’s next pause held a bit of surprise. “We can’t?” Then, angrily, “They lie! They just want to make sure we can’t get out!”

“They seem pretty ticked they ran all that way to seal it up only to find it was block up anyway.” Dil retorted. “Have you actually checked to make sure there wasn’t a wall there or the kids caused a rockslide to stem us?”

“Well, um…” Littlefoot and the others could practically hear Ichy glance away. “I was busy making sure the kids didn’t actually get to the entrance by following them around. When they came back here, I thought we could team up to make sure they didn’t separate again and…”

Dil’s eyes narrowed. “Liar! You lost them and didn’t even think to check. You’re just covering your tail feathers! I should have known you’d screw this up!”

“I’d screw this up?” Ichy repeated incredulously. “You were the one who couldn’t even eat a slow spiketail!”

“And you couldn’t even catch a whimpering swimmer!”   

“It was dark, I couldn’t – wait, how do you know that?” Ichy then growled. “You mouthy tattle-tale!”

Ducky clasped her hands innocently. “You did try to catch me, like, six times. I thought it might be worth bringing up, I did, I did!”

“So it is true!” Dil hissed. “Your harebrained schemes have lost us food again!”

“Me! You couldn’t even catch those kids and there’s not a lot of ways to get lost in those tunnels!”

“You think? This place is a maze! If you hadn’t left me alone, I might have caught some of them!”
 
“You would have caught them if you paused and used that thing you call a brain!” Ichy snapped. “Then you wouldn’t be always falling into their traps every time like you say…”

The pair proceeded to argue, tones growing louder and bouncing off the walls. They totally forgot about Littlefoot and the others. If they noticed the seven at all, it was as a springboard to air out more grievances against the other. Littlefoot and the others just watched, bemused.

“There’s not much love lost between the two.” Ruby muttered to Ducky.

“Yeah, they did a lot of arguing in the Land of Mists too.” Ducky whispered.

“Now what do we do, Littlefoot?” Cera said.

“I don’t think there’s time to check every tunnel and make sure they don’t lead to the valley.” Littlefoot said. “But if we egg them on, maybe they’ll leave and not want to have anything to do with each other again.”

“But what about sharpbeak?” Petrie asked. “Bellydragger mightn’t come back but sharpbeak can fly. He can eat some of us small hatchlings like me and Ducky.”

Littlefoot winced. That was indeed a quandary. He looked back up to where Ichy’s voice emanated, mentally running through all the plans in his mind, even the ones that trembled his stomach. He had to make some hard choices in the past, but will he have do them again?

“It’s going to take forever to find another path!” Dil was ranting. “Do I look like the type that can walk long distances? A sharpteeth might make me its snack before we get to another river!”

“There must be another way to get in through these tunnels.” Ichy said. “We just need to learn them!”

“And by then, we’ll get lost and starve. These little water swimmers aren’t going to fill me up any good, Ichy! I should have known this plan of yours was dodgy.”

“Dodgy? I’ll tell you what’s dodgy? That I hang around with a blind musclehead who can’t strategize her way out of a tangle of seaweed! I should have contented myself with the fuzzy tree dwellers and runaway hatchlings! Ever since I met you, you’ve been nothing but a liability!”

“Right back at you!” Dil said. “Every time you tell me what to do, you give me a headache. And it isn’t even helpful! You said that learning leaf eater will be easy, that it’d give us the advantage, but instead it allowed the prey to know everything we’re doing. We’d have been better off not understanding them at all. Other predators get by just fine! All of your plans go up in flames this way, and you never own up to your mistakes. Honestly, I’d be better off just sitting in a bog on my own and waiting for idiot water swimmers to swim into my mouth. It’d mightn’t be a complex plan but unlike your plans, at least it’ll get the job done.”

Ichy’s teeth ground together. “Don’t pin all the blame on me! I’m sick of you having to rely on me for every obstacle you bump against when you could use your brain instead. Why should I bother giving better directions, you suck at following them and lose your temper as though that’s my fault. Dammit woman, if you ever thought of using that cranium of yours, I wouldn’t have ended up getting swallowed hole by you in the first place!”

His voice echoed out among the tunnel. A quiet followed like a sudden, cold draft.

“…what are you talking about, Ichy?” Dil’s voice held a different catch. Oddly, she winced as though a rock thudded her cranium. “Ow, now I really have a headache. C’mon Ichy, stop giving me the silent treatment.”

“I…I don’t know.” Ichy said uncertainly. “Those words…they just, they suddenly fell out of my mouth…”

“Now what are they complaining about?” Cera said. “I’m confused.”

“They seemed just as confused as we are.” Ducky said. “Oh yes, oh yes.”

“I still haven’t been able to see or smell this sharpbeak.” Chomper said, taking another vain draft of the air. “If he’s been flying around all over the place, he should be sweating enough for my sniffer to pick him up.”

“Me think me see him.” Petrie said, trembling.

“Where Petrie?” Littlefood scanned the high ceiling. “I can’t see anything.”

“He over there, halfway above her head but…me must be seeing things.”

Puzzled, Littlefoot and the others focused above Dil’s head, raising their gaze further and further until…they almost missed the flicker of a shape hovering there. He was easy to miss, like a whisp of smoke held in place, the caves so dark he was almost invisible. The five who went to the Land of Mists remembered well how Ichy blended into the fog and darkness, wings silent until he was almost upon their smaller brethren. But this form of stealth was different, impossible…

“Guys.” Ruby said. “Sharpbeaks can’t be see-through, can they?”

Ichy started and glanced down at himself. Behind the flyer’s black, grey, and white plumage was the tunnel wall, blurred like in a weak fog. Ichy’s breath clambered up a few notches even as he took in no air, his chest hitching in spreading fear.

“This can’t be possible,” he said. “Why can I see through myself? Dil, explain yourself. Dil, say something!”

“Why are you blaming me for your delusions?” Dil said, confused and slightly panicked. “The lack of food is messing with your head. Just eat one of the kids and everything will clear up.”

“I’m not delusional! I’m transparent and even those brats can see it. Look!”

Ichy darted down and landed on Dil’s snout, close to her eyes. His feet sunk down as though in mud and he gave a panicked flap to get them back on firm reptilian skin. Dil’s nose twitched in consternation.

“Hey Ichy, your feet are cold. Don’t I tell you not to stay on for long? I can see you fine now, you look great and healthy…and I can see right through you to my nose.”

Dil shrieked and slushed water as she backed away. Ichy remained where he was, feet standing on thin air. He didn’t need to flap his wings to stay in place. That only further horrified him.

“I don’t understand!” he said. “I’m so confused. Did I – was I…no, no!”

“Does anyone have an explanation for what’s going on?” Cera demanded.

“Maybe…maybe she did eat him.” Petrie gulped. “He said that because it true but he didn’t want to think about it until he too angry to ignore it.”

“So he’s a ghost who didn’t know he’s a ghost.” Ruby said softly.

“I’m a ghost?” Ichy squeaked. “If I’m a ghost, then I’m…that can’t be true, it can’t be!”

“And that means I – ” Dil’s voice became strangled. “No, no. I spat him out, I spat him out! I almost ate him, but I realized my mistake before it was too late and threw him up. That’s the only thing that makes sense. I should remember this. But why – why can’t I remember spitting him out.”

“Maybe you’re right and we’re both delusional.” Ichy said eagerly. “Yeah, hunger is messing with our brains, it’s making us see things. There’s no such thing as ghosts. You damn kids are just screwing with our heads. All we need to do is just gobble you up and this will all go away.”

“But if you haven’t eaten, how were you able to chase us all over the place?” Ducky said. “Doing that is very draining. You should have dropped, you should have, you should have.”

“Shut up!” Ichy snapped. “I’m just running on fumes, that’s all! All that workout should be making me famished. Any second now, I’ll be so hungry I can eat all of you without feeling full. That’s right, it all makes sense. I just need to wait and everything’ll be back to normal. You’ll see! You’ll be the ones who die!”

“And then you’ll be solid again?” Littlefoot shook his head, almost sad. “I’m sorry. You really are see-through and standing on thin air. You’re…dead.”

That gave Ichy no comfort. He rubbed at his neck and chest feathers, looking around desperately, searching for a way out. His breathing became more and more panicked until he let out a wrenching scream.

“I don’t want this, I don’t want this!” he shouted. “I don’t want to die! I had so many plans, I had so much to do! It can’t end like this, all because of a stupid mistake, all because of –”

Ichy’s eyes landed on Dil. Fury shook through him, and he jabbed an accusing finger toward her.

“This is all your fault!” he said, causing her to jump. “I should have left you to bumble around in that forest. But no, I had the bright idea you might be useful, that we could benefit each other. I can be the eyes and you could be the teeth. What an idiot I was! You never had good impulse control, I should have saw it coming!”

“I-it was an accident, Ichy.” Dil stuttered, sloshing away from him. Her face broke out in self-directed horror. “Oh goodness, this is actually happening. That means I really did –” She then shouted at him, at herself. “I didn’t know it was you, I didn’t know it was you! I’m telling the truth!”

“Oh really?” Ichy flapped closer, teeth barred. “Did the feathers not feel familiar, did the shape not remind you of a certain someone? How many times did I have to tell you to look before you leap, look and then leap! You didn’t stop to think about what you swallowed, did you? You were just satisfied you got a full stomach for once.”

“I didn’t want to fill my stomach with you!” Dil said desperately. “No matter how much you drove me up the wall, I never wanted to eat you.”

“Fat lot of good that does me!” he snapped. “You at least got your fill. I’ll never be able to eat again! I’m dead, and I hold you responsible! And you know what, bellydragger…I’m out of here!”

Ichy turned and flew away, back where he and Dil came from. Dil swam after him, so stricken.

“Ichy, wait! Please, let’s just talk this out! I didn’t want any of this to happen. I’m sorry!”

“Stop, stop!” Ichy whirled around. “I can’t stand to be with you. After killing me, I shouldn’t care about you anymore but when you speak to me and look at me like that…” his voice broke. “I’m dead, so why do you make my chest hurt?”

With that, Ichy opened his wings and flew off as though fleeing a truth he couldn’t stand. Scrambling, a devastated Dil went after him.

“Ichy, come back! I’m sure we can work this out! Ichy…Ichy!”

Soon, she too was gone. Littlefoot and the others stood there, stunned, having difficulty comprehending what they just witnessed.

“Ch-Chomper.” Littlefoot found his voice. “Can you sniff our way back to the entrance?”

Chomper nodded faintly. “Yes, yeah…I can do that.”

Numb, they began the long walk out. They were alive and had drove off the latest threat to the valley but there was no feeling of victory in what they did.

Their spirits only lifted slightly when they came across more and more of the glowing moss. They soon encountered the opening that curved up and led to the surface world. The gang would have immediately ran up to get out of this tunnel, but Littlefoot stopped them and began looking for loose rocks and long vines.

“But they aren’t coming back!” Cera protested.

“Even if they don’t, what if someone else does?” Littlefoot said. “We need to seal off this cave. For the good of the valley.”

Cera blew out a breath, but she and the others did as Littlefoot said. They also searched the river tunnel exit until they found a vine. They waited until they moved into the exit passage before they started pulling the vine, pawing and toppling loose rocks around the plant. It was slow work but there was a collapse and the dust cleared to reveal a pile of stones with nary a gap to glimpse the river or glowing moss. They traveled up the passage, Littlefoot looking around anxiously. He wasn’t content with one collapse. At about the halfway point, they found another vine and collapsed the passage there. It was as slow as last time and the rocks that burst down from the ceiling nearly led to more than one bruise but Littlefoot was willing to take the risks so he wouldn’t have to see what he just witnessed again…so no one in the valley would go through the agony and heartbreak of what those two predators experienced…

With a bit of pushing, there was a rumble and they backed away as the entrance to that whole nightmare was collapsed for good. They panted and fell onto the grass, reveling at the feeling of the warmth of the earth, the gentle glimmer of sunlight, of being on the surface at long last.

“What was that?” Cera said.

“I never saw anything like that before.” Littlefoot looked at the others. “You’re all here. Thank goodness. If anything happened to you…”

The others turned their heads to him, startled by Littlefoot’s statement, their faces for a moment communicating confusion and concern over his heightened protectiveness of the last several hours. But they put that aside for now and gave exhausted, reassuring smiles that filled him with such warmth he returned the expression. Even his tail tip getting another faint thrum of pain didn’t bother him much. Before they could bask in the moment, there was a distracted snort.

“Ugh, what was all that racket? Did you kids cause it?”

Littlefoot and the others scrambled to their feet. The sleeping spiketail had awakened, glaring through half-lidded eyes.

“Uh, we bumped into some rocks and they fell.” Littlefoot said sheepishly. “Sorry for disturbing you. We’ll be on our way.”

With that, they nodded in farewell and hastily marched off, retreating from the spiketail and the memories of the supernatural life and death peril they had just experienced.

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Dil was finding breathing hard. Even in the water, she barely kept up with Ichy. When light came into her vision, she knew she finally escaped the confines of those caves, but that brought her no comfort. She couldn’t escape what had been discovered there, the guilt and horror of what she did. She had thought more than once jokingly or with annoyance that she should just eat him just to shut him up but for that to actually happen…chest hurting from more than exertion, she called out again.

“Ichy, are you still there? Come on, I can’t keep up this chase if I don’t know where you are.”

“That’s kind of the point.” Ichy’s voice said. “For someone said they were better off sitting in a bog on their own, you stick around like a leech.”

“I did think I’d better off in a bog without you but if you really go, what am I going to do?” Dil said. “We’ve been together for so long. I’m really sorry. Just stick around so we can do things as we always do them – I don’t care that you’re dead!”

“Don’t say that.” Ichy said, panicked. “I’ve been reminded too many times of what I am already, if this happens one more time, I’ll start to – to…”

The sound of the flapping slowed and Dil caught up enough to see the faint figure of Ichy hover quietly.

“Too late.” Then he murmured. “So this is what our meals felt. I never thought about it, but…”

“What are you on about?” Dil asked nervously.

“I hate being sappy.” Ichy said. “You were the last person I ever expected to be here for this, Dil. You always pissed me off but now…you’re the only one who will give a damn in the end.”

“Don’t say that.” Dil got closer. “Alright, I admit, it’s my fault. I own up to it, I should use my brain more often. Just…bring out your stubbornness, and do something.”

“I’m dead, Dil. No one can out-stubborn that. I just haven’t left yet. And I’m not mad about what you did. Not anymore. You were only obeying your hunger. If our sizes were reversed, I might have done the same thing. If I survived being eaten, I might have considered it a sign our partnership was doomed from the start and cut off ties with you. Except now…” Ichy laughed. “It’s funny. I thought I’d be glad of any way to be rid of you but the thought of going on without you…it burns. Now I know what ëcan’t live with them, can’t live without them’ really means.”

“I know now too.” Dil said, voice catching. “What would life be without your annoying squawk?”

“Oh, you’ll find some other voice to nag you. You got by without me before, and you’ll do the same again. At least we both know now that this alliance of ours actually had some meaning.”

Ichy was hovering away, becoming faint. Dil splashed hastily to follow.

“No. Wait. Don’t go!”

“It’s already started. Goodbye, Dil. My mind might have sucked at coming up with plans but at least it is good enough to remember all the times we had together.”

He was getting farther, fainter. Dil tried to keep up, swam with all her might but soon all her limited vision could see was blurry blue sky. Her eyes became blurrier, and she blinked hard.

“Ichy, come back. I take back every bad thing I said. Alright, I don’t, but I don’t care about that anymore, just be here with me. I don’t want to be alone. Are you still there, Ichy? Ichy?”

All that greeted her was a vacant wind that carried no trace of flapping feathers.

Next time…

Forgotten Lessons


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Note: I'm aiming to post the next chapter within two weeks but that's not quite fixed. At any rate, I can be sure it'll be up sometime in July.

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LBT Fanfiction / We Will Hold On Forever
« on: June 25, 2017, 06:01:55 AM »
Fanfiction.net Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12535668/2/We-...Hold-On-Forever

--P1/2

We Will Hold On Forever

by

The Analyzer

Chapter 02: From The Mists Part 2


Littlefoot watched in horror. He didn’t even consider the wall remains attached to Spike; it didn’t enter his mind for how to rescue his friend. If he had, it wouldn’t occur to him that it breaking apart might prove an obstacle. Littlefoot should have thought more, but it was too late now and Spike might pay the price for this oversight…
 
At last no more pebbles were falling and Spike’s tail at last snagged out of Dil’s reach as he ran over to his friends. Dil attempted to follow but was thwarted when she stepped on those pebbles and kept slipping. Spike caught up to Littlefoot and Ruby, and the trio fled before Dil could catch up.

“Are you okay, Spike?” Littlefoot asked. “I’m sorry, you nearly got bitten because I didn’t think about those rocks.”

Glancing at Littlefoot in confusion, Spike nudged his shoulder and gave a reassuring smile, indicating he didn’t blame Littlefoot for what happened. Instead, he thrust his head back to their pursuers and made a sound of exasperation and distress. Littlefoot nodded sadly, understanding.

“Yeah, yeah, I know,” he said. “I’m tired of getting into these life-or death adventures too. We get into so many of them. Hopefully, after we get out of this one, we’ll get a reprieve.”

Ruby waved for their attention.

“I believe I have an idea that might distract the bellydragger and give us a reprieve,” she said.

“What do you mean? Distract them by making her and the sharpbeak fight?” Littlefoot asked. “How would that help? They practically argue all the time.”

“I don’t mean that kind of distraction. Though that’s an interesting kind of idea.” Ruby considered it before resuming. “I think we’re near walls of glowing greens, and the walls are brittle around here, right? So what if we had the bellydragger snap at the walls and bite into the green stuff that even Spike wouldn’t sample? If it tastes bad enough, she’ll be distracted trying to wash that taste out of her mouth and we won’t be distracted while we rest up and think of what to do next.”

Littlefoot beamed. “Brilliant, Ruby! Spike, are the glowy greens close?”

As though apologizing for briefly freezing up, Spike sniffed determinedly. After several seconds, he nodded eagerly. Ruby and Littlefoot’s spirits rose higher. They had a plan. They could hold their enemies back in a more active fashion, and keep the valley safe. The quicker the three implemented the plan, the more likely that hope became a reality.

“Spike, lead us to a cave where the other side of the wall is glowy plants.” Littlefoot said. “Someone’s going to taste that green stuff for you.”

In the meantime, Dil followed quickly in the wake of the sound of those little footsteps. Those pebbles hadn’t delayed her too much, only given the trio enough time to keep a good distance ahead of her. They still made enough noise for even an unobservant creature to follow and Dil could work herself up to a fast pace when she wanted to. The trouble was, she couldn’t move quickly forever and she began becoming slightly breathless.

“Where do these kids get all the energy?” Dil huffed.

“They’re kids.” Ichy answered. “Growing up packs them with energy. They don’t yet have to worry about lugging around so much weight.”

“Watch what you’re implying,” she growled.

“I wasn’t talking about your weight.” Ichy said impatiently. “I’m just saying I’m not as swift and nimble as I was when I was a hatchling. It takes a while to adapt to moving around as an adult.”

Dil grunted. “I hope you stealth adaptation hasn’t lost its touch then, because I want you to see where those kids are going so we can actually corner them. I have my doubts about your ability to stay out of sight lasting long.”

“Hey, have more faith in me.” Ichy replied. “If even they’re sniffers couldn’t find me, I doubt they’ll see me anytime soon.”

Ichy accelerated ahead, following the sounds of Littlefoot, Spike, and Ruby. They quickened their pace enough that they disappeared from view. Through the twist of passageways, he eventually found them in yet another cave, this one with a hole big enough for Spike. They had tucked themselves under an overhang, where the shadows nearly hid them from sight. The three were pressed close together, for mutual comfort, their heads rising uncertainly.

“Are you sure we’ll be safe here?” Littlefoot was asking.

“Positive.” Ruby said. “This cave is quite out of the way and she can’t see very well anyway. If we keep quiet, she might walk past us and never hear we’re here.”

“What about that sharpbeak?”

“If he comes through that hole, we’re bound to notice and hear him. This’ll hold up until we come up with our next course of action.”

Ichy smiled deviously, hovering above the ledge. Oh, how wrong they were. He and Dil would play along but just when they let their guard down, Dil shall pounce. The mental image of their reaction was delicious. Ichy silently swung in place and was about to return to Dil when a shape to his right made him stop. He glided closer, eyes adjusting to the low light as he comprehended what was in front of him.

His smile, if possible, became even more devious.

Dil heard the familiar flap of Ichy returning to her.

“We have them where we want them,” he whispered. “Allow me to show the way.”

With Ichy’s quietly spoken directions, Dil took a series of left turns at a few intersections before she found herself nosing yet another narrow hole. Like the one before, this entrance had thin enough walls that Dil could break through without much hassle. However, Ichy hissed into her ear and urged her onward. She made clearly audible steps as her side brushed against the wall, wondering what Ichy was thinking. The brats were clearly in that cave. She should just barge in and take them down.

Then she tripped slightly as she found a part of her was leaning against nothing at all. Dil backtracked and squinted at this absence of wall. There was a swoosh around her from Ichy that made her take a step in and she realized what he had been actually leading to this whole time.

A wider, darker entrance where she wouldn’t be seen. Dil smiled.

*No wonder he was trying to keep in his chuckles* she thought approvingly. *Even with all his squawking, there is a reason I keep him around.*

Quietly, she padded into the cave, scanning what she could and taking a few experimental sniffs. Her nose wasn’t up to the leagues of some sharpteeth but it had proven more reliable than her sight and it told her the general direction of where to go. She made airs of examining areas of the cave to the right, almost sensing Littlefoot, Spike, and Ruby hearing but unable to visually track her whereabouts. Let the three think she was too blind to notice them. There were some advantageous to being underestimated.

“I don’t see them, Ichy.” Dil said to thin air. “Are you sure you saw them go in – wait, what is that?”

On those last four words, Dil delighted at the thrill of movement to her left that indicated a series of startled jumps. Slowly, she turned her head and found three forms trying to phase through the walls. She gave Littlefoot, Spike, and Ruby her best crocodilian smile.

“Ah, there you are. I was wondering where you ran off to. You need to stop doing that.”

“Please, leave us alone!” Littlefoot said, pleading. “We hate these dark tunnels. We just want to get out.”

“Don’t worry, I’ll get you out.” Dil purred. “You’ll be perfectly safe – digesting in my belly.”

“No!” Ruby gasped. “That isn’t the way we want to get out at all!”

“Tough!” Dil snapped. “I want a lot of things but I had to compromise with not always catching prey, never being full enough! Being a poor-sighted predator sucks, and when I can find food that can fill my stomach, I sure as muck am not going to compromise!”

Spike whimpered, cringing down in fright. Dil turned her attention to him, licking her chops longingly.

“Ah, that’s right. You’re the one who robbed me of a meal back in the Land of Mists because you stopped giving everyone the silent treatment. You always looked the plumpest amongst these brats. I might as well have my revenge and a satisfying first bite at the same time!”

Dil snapped forward, making to bite for Spike. Faster than she expected, Spike rolled away and her snout slammed into rock. Dil grunted in pain, and before she could do anything else, Ruby hopped onto her snout and followed Spike. Littlefoot was next, his forefeet landing hard in his rush and his hind feet joining in before he leapt off. That allowed Dil to finally emit a sound.

“Ow! You’re going to pay for that!”

Dil swung, snapping at the trio and nearly getting their feet. They jumped back and Dil advanced, her throat rumbling in consternation. Littlefoot, Ruby, and Spike were unabashed.

“We’re not going to enter your stomach without a fight!” Littlefoot declared.

“You can’t catch us!” Ruby said.

Dil growled. “I hate cheeky food!”

Dil made one more grab at them, and they squealed and scampered back. Dil was undeterred. The three didn’t have anywhere to go. Their retreat would lead them to be pressed against another wall and if they dared to flee around her, the spaces were narrow enough that they wouldn’t escape the reach of her snaps. She had only time to kill as she snapped at them again and again, occasionally brushing close to their legs but also nearly getting startled heads and clumsy tails. They weren’t exactly graceful and their coordination would probably improve if they stopped urgently glancing at the wall. Dil surmised they were mentally counting down to their deaths, which only endangered their chances of delaying the inevitable.

“Almost…almost…” Ruby was muttering.

Dil laughed and made a strike for her ankles. “Yeah, yeah, it’s almost time for you to die. Whatever makes it easier to deal with. I once had a fuzzy who sang annoyingly as one last curse to his fate. There are days where I switch between liking or hating Ichy for making me learn leaf eater.”

“We know some songs that will drive you around the bend.” Littlefoot said.

“Then start singing. As long as I can gulp something down, I don’t care how annoying you are.”

Soon, the trio were up against the cave wall. They looked amongst themselves, breath bated. Dil scanned the whole lot, finding her preferences shifting.

“Alright, new order.” Dil said. “The longneck first. You’re the leader of this annoying merry band and it would be a great relief if their lucky charm is taken care of for good.”

“Oh no.” Littlefoot panted. “Sorry guys. Sorry.”

“That’s right.” Dil chuckled, surging closer. “You should be sorry for ever crossing us…”

“Now!” Ruby shouted.

 Dil was caught off guard but had enough sense to snarl for her prize. Littlefoot zipped to the side, missing her by inches. That wasn’t enough to keep him safe, as she snapped for him once more. He dodged again, oddly keeping close to the wall. He spun to face her and in that moment her eyes were drawn to the flutter of movement that was his tail. A third bite attempt followed, and Littlefoot dodged, fast and swift as always.

This time, though, not fast enough.

Littlefoot yowled at the top of his lungs as Dil’s teeth closed around the tip of his tail. It wasn’t much, nothing more than a few inches but Dil’s grip was hard and it was enough to keep him from going anywhere.

“She’s got me!” Littlefoot yelled.

Ruby and Spike charged in and grabbed Littlefoot’s tail, pulling with all their might. Littlefoot yelled from the strain but his tail didn’t so much as budge. Dil pulled from her end in turn.

“Oh no, you don’t.” Dil said, muffled. “You won’t escape.”

 She opened her mouth slightly and gobbled up another inch of Littlefoot’s tail. The pair tugged back, not willing to give any more ground to the bellydragger, Ruby’s movements quick and panicked. Littlefoot moaned, the agony clear in his voice and yet no matter how much they attempted to get away from Dil, her jaw power was as strong as ever.

“Something,” Ruby said, “there must be something that’ll make her let go!”

“Ruby, Spike, don’t risk yourselves!” Littlefoot then moaned. “Oh, I can’t take much more of this.”

Ruby looked around anxiously, desperately. “I can’t – what should I do? There’s nothing on the tip of my tongue-”

“The only thing on the tip of my tongue is this longneck’s tail.” Dil said. “Shall I bite it off? It tastes good enough already.”

“We’ll stop – wait. Biting is above the tongue. Maybe – maybe the answer is above too!”

Abruptly, Ruby abandoned Littlefoot and rapidly approached Dil, swinging out a foot for an almighty kick. It connected with a blaring amount of pain. Dil made a muffled “ow” but didn’t let go. Ruby didn’t give up though, and gave a second kick with her other foot, followed by a third kick. As a fast runner, Ruby’s legs had a lot of strength, so Dil’s snout was nearly numb from the assault when she brought one foot up and crashed it down atop the bellydragger’s nose. Littlefoot cried out as more pressure pressed down on his tail tip but it was only momentary as Dil opened her jaws to yell out in pain and released Littlefoot from her grip. Hastily, the trio staggered away.

“Are you okay, Littlefoot?” Ruby asked.

Littlefoot flicked his tail experimentally and winced. “I think I’m not going to move my tail much the next couple of days. Now what do we do? That was supposed to be the determinate dodge!”

“We should…” Ruby rubbed her hands together anxiously. “I can’t ask you or Spike to do that again…”

“Urgh.” Dil blinked and twitched her snout, scowling at the trio. “Just because you have a fast and hard kick doesn’t mean you can hold me off forever.”

“Fast? That’s it.” Ruby relaxed and smiled. “Oh, you think so. Have you ever tried to catch a fast runner before?”

“First time for everything. Even fast prey can’t do much in a narrow space like this.”

“Do you want to bet?”

Dil’s long face pinched in consternation and she snapped. Quickly, Ruby zoomed to the side, nudging the base of Dil’s jaw. That only earned her another bite attempt but Ruby easily dodged around to the bellydragger’s other side to give a light kick to the nose. Ruby evaded Dil once more and continued on this reckless pattern, touching some part of Dil’s head to get her attention and then avoiding Dil’s biting snarls, leading her closer to the cave wall. Littlefoot and Spike watched her, having some idea of her plan and being very concerned.

“Isn’t she being a bit reckless?” Littlefoot whispered.

Spike gazed helplessly at Littlefoot and could only bay his confused agreement as Ruby continued her reckless plan until she was backed to that wall. Littlefoot and Spike stepped forward but she caught their eye and subtly shook her head for them to stand back. Her confident expression didn’t waver as Dil’s muzzle came within inches of her feet.

“I never tasted fast runner before.” Dil said. “I heard the legs are delicious. They’ll be the first to go.”

Dil reared a few feet on her hind legs. She gave a growl of anticipation and dived straight for Ruby’s feet faster than expected of someone her size, hunger and a longing to catch one of the hated children, even one she wasn’t familiar with, giving her the energy to be swift.

Ruby was still faster. At the very last second, she ran to the side, leaving Dil’s wide open jaws to crunch onto the wall and break it into bits. Dil landed back down with a thud, much of those wall pieces in her mouth, many of which showed glimpses of glowy green.

“What the…“ Dil said, muffled. She stopped, eyes widening. “Oh my goodness, what’s this gross taste? Get it out, get it – ack!”

Speaking only rubbed her tongue further against the mossy rocks and pushed a few down her throat. She made a gagging sound and charged forward, going through the hole in the wall she created and splashing into the tunnel river, coughing out the mossy wall bits and lapping up water when she cleared her mouth. She pawed at her tongue, alternating between saying “yuck” variations of, “Dang it, Ichy!” She paid no attention to Littlefoot, Spike, and Ruby whatsoever as they tentatively came over to watch the display. Littlefoot winced as his tail tip gave a twinge but he ignored that to turn appreciatively tow Ruby.

“That was smart thinking, Ruby,” he said. “For a second, I was worried you were being too rash for your plan to work out but you managed to get it to work.”

“Yes.” Ruby murmured. “That plan did plan itself out…I’m glad it did.” She shook her head. “Well, just like we’ve planned, it seems like clearing out that disgusting green fuzz would keep her occupied for a while.”

Littlefoot nodded. “The sharpbeak must be very mad at the bellydragger right now.”

Ruby frowned. “Yes, but I’m not hearing any lecturing from him. Strange. Even from what I’ve briefly heard, they like to argue a lot. Why aren’t they arguing now? I haven’t heard the sharpbeak in a while…”

Spike sniffed, and also frowned. He sniffed again, turning around and even padding over to the entrance Dil emerged from to pick up a scent. He worked those nostrils hard and by the time he returned to Littlefoot and Ruby, he wore a worried look on his face. The others stared nervously.

“What is it, Spike?” Littlefoot asked. “Can you – can you smell the sharpbeak?”

Distressed, Spike swished his head side to side. Ruby put a hand to her mouth.

“If we haven’t heard him in a while, that might mean he hasn’t been here in a while.”

Their stomachs sank in horror. Despite the trio’s best efforts, Ichy gamed them and was going after Cera and the others.

--

Cera kept a close watch of the river as she and her chosen companions for this mission journeyed passed it. After they parted from Littlefoot’s team, they went as far as possible through those passageways before they spiraled off in other directions and they were forced to return to the river tunnel. As of yet, they saw no signs that a bellydragger was going to emerge from the river but the group didn’t like taking those chances and were on the lookout for any other passageway entrances they could use. At least in the passageways, the bellydragger wouldn’t be able to catch up with them as quickly on land as in water. They had been moving in silence for a while now and though outwardly they seemed mostly calm, inside their minds kept going back to what might be happening to their remaining friends.

“Are we getting any closer to getting out of here?” Cera asked finally.

Chomper took a scent of the air. “I think so. Something like the outside’s in the air but it’s very faint.”

Cera sighed. “Still a long ways to go then.”

“Me could fly ahead and check.” Petrie said reluctantly. “But with sharpbeak around, that not safe.” He sighed. “Flying so useful with walking sharpteeth but not with flying ones.”

“You aren’t the only one grounded.” Ducky said, in an attempt at being reassuring. “Being a swimmer means you can escape from some sharpteeth in water but when they’re swimmers too, it isn’t much help, it isn’t, it isn’t.”

“Once we get rid of those two, we can go back to screaming away from sharpteeth the old fashion way.” Cera said. “The others will keep them occupied.”

“Yeah, but for how long?” Petrie asked.

“As long as necessary. They have brains too, they can outthink those dummies. Now let’s use our brains to dummy up this place for good.”

The others fell silent, only somewhat reassured by Cera’s words. Cera stared onward as she led them, attempting not to show how nervous she was. She hated when the group split up like this. There was often no method for knowing how the others were coping until they regrouped. Ichy and Dil didn’t seem that bright but they sniffed out a potential way to get into the valley and almost sneaked up on them. To survive this long, the predators must have some cleverness. They were certainly dangerous. It would be horrible if Cera’s team came back and discovered Littlefoot’s team had been fatally outwitted by those scary predators. Losing loved ones while away was painful enough that first time; for that to happen a second time with those she considered as precious as family was…

*No, no, don’t even think about that!* Cera subtly shook her head. *They’ll make it. With Littlefoot and Ruby’s brains, they’re bound to survive and Spike’s no slouch either. They’ll do their job. We shouldn’t let them down by not doing ours.*

Still, even if Littlefoot and the others manage to survive, she couldn’t shake the dangers her own group might face. What if Dil and Ichy give the three the slip and go after them? The mental image of the bellydragger and sharpbeak emerging from the darkness, ready to menace Cera and the others before their grisly demise, made Cera’s ribcage vibrate with fear. She would do her best to protect her friends, to get them away from danger, but a traitorous thought reminded her there was only so much she could do as an adolescent threehorn. Cera took quiet calming breaths but it was hard to dispel the image and grim thoughts.

Instead, Cera tried to focus on the victorious feeling that would come about when they blocked the major entrance for Dil and Ichy. It wouldn’t be too difficult. There was bound to be a weak rock somewhere that could cause the mouth of the river entrance to crumble down. Cera was good at breaking rocks, especially ones that led to a chain reaction. It was that skill that played a major part in rescuing Bron from the lava after all. Cera simply needed to not lose her cool, remember there was always a way out of danger, and work hard to find that way. She would feel quite satisfied when the task was accomplished. Though it wouldn’t spare them from Dil and Ichy’s wrath when they found out…

“Cera, are you okay?”

Cera started, realizing that she had been walking tensely with a look of barely strangled down worry. Ducky had made to walk closer, blue eyes aimed at her with concern.

“I’m – I’m fine.” Cera said, staring ahead. “I’m just thinking.”

“Oh.” Ducky paused, as though thinking through her next words. ”Are there bad thoughts in that thinking? Because if there are, don’t worry. I’m sure we will get through this.”

“Yeah. Sure.” Cera said distractedly.

“We will.” Ducky insisted. “You can smash any rocks with your head and that will be useful in blocking the river or getting away from the sharpbeak and bellydragger. The rest of us will help too, as we always do.”

“Okay. Thanks.” Cera said, still staring ahead, mind elsewhere.

“I mean, we do this sort of dangerous stuff all the time.” Ducky paused. “Well, only once or a few times a cold time, but we’re good at it. We’ll survive, we will, we will.”

“I know.” Cera said, with a trace of annoyance. “Got the message.”

“So everything will be okay, you’ll see. We just need to stick together and do our thing, and then-”

“Alright, we got it, enough already.” Cera snapped. “You know, it’s okay if some of us aren’t happy once in a while. You don’t need to march up to us every time because us not smiling brings down your mood. Just let us be, we can get better on our own.”

Ducky reeled back, as if slapped. After several seconds, her eyes fluttered around and a guilty look entered her face.

“Oh, I didn’t mean-” she sighed. “Sorry. I’m sorry. I didn’t know what I did bothers everyone, I didn’t, I didn’t.”

She looked so contrite that regret burned in Cera’s stomach. Ducky was so cheerful and good-natured lashing out at her could feel like kicking an infant. She was hardier than she appeared, but Cera didn’t feel right for snapping. Awkwardly, she shuffled a foot in the dirt.

“Well, maybe I should have told you some other way.” Cera said. “I meant nothing serious from it.”

Ducky smiled softly and padded Cera comfortingly at the implied apology before she looked down. “This is a stressful situation, and I don’t know how we’re going to solve this. I’m only…worried about how everyone else might get out of this.”

“Like Spike?” Cera asked softly.

Ducky nodded. “Yeah, a little. He can be clumsy and distracted, even if he’s no slouch as you said. But I’m also worried about my many brothers and sisters. We’re all in danger from that bellydragger and sharpbeak. It’d be pretty sad if we can’t swim and splash around again.”

“That not going to happen.” Petrie said, flying closer. “Sharpbeak mean me brothers and sisters can’t fly around either, so that means we make sure to stop them. Don’t worry, we’ll do it. And I like how you make me smile.”

“Me too.” Chomper nodded. “You always look after us, and that makes me feel better. We wouldn’t have you any other way.”

They moved over and touched Ducky’s shoulder in support, Ducky perking up and giving the pair a warm smile. Eventually, Chomper and Petrie moved away and the four continued walking, mood slightly uplifted. Cera was slightly encouraged by this. She might bicker and moan but she didn’t like really hurting her friends as much as anyone else. In some ways, she was glad to have these three here. They had some useful skills. With Chomper’s nose, Ducky’s swimming skills, and Petrie’s ability to whoosh anywhere, they were guaranteed to locate and seal off the river entrance before Dil and Ichy could go through.

Cera was distracted by those pleasant thoughts by the sound of actual but distant whooshing coming from behind them.

“Petrie, are you still with us?” Cera said slowly.

“Me right here.” Petrie hovered lower near Cera’s head in puzzlement. “Why you ask?”

Cera glanced at him, her ears on alert. “If you’re here,” she said slowly, heart trilling warily, “then what’s making that sound?”

The others looked back, where the whooshing got closer and became distinctly, horribly familiar. Ducky’s breaths quickened.

“Oh no, no, no. Littlefoot and the others should have kept them occupied.”

There was an eerie laugh. “They’re keeping Dil occupied. Have you forgotten who’s the brains of this operation here?”

The whooshing had become feathery flapping. Cera and the others glanced up desperately to track Ichy down but there was no more glowing moss in this part of the tunnel and the ceiling was obscured by darkness.

“How did you find us?” Cera demanded, hoping anger limited how her voice wavered.

“Oh, through the method of eavesdropping.” Ichy replied. “Voices carry in these tunnels and you lot do like to argue. It was child’s play to get an inkling of your plan and work around it.”

“Yes, well, so much for that.” Cera said. “You’re still smaller than me and Chomper. If it comes to a fair fight, we will win.”

“I’m not interested in a fair fight. I have the darkness on my side. I could simply sneak up on you and snatch up your smaller friends before you know where they went. You also forget this sharpbeak has some experience in taking down larger prey. All I need to do is apply a bite in the right part of the neck and voila – the ground is died red and the swimmer and flyer no longer have protectors and I can eat enough to make my belly burst.”

“I will make something burst.” Chomper said angrily. “I have much bigger teeth than you – even if you get me, I’ll have you in pieces!”

Ichy laughed. “Am I supposed to believe the cute sharptooth who pals around with leaf eaters has the will and skill to take me down? Softie. Not like the sharpteeth that really sent chills down my spine.”

“Look, just go away.” Petrie said nervously. “Look at river! It has lots of water swimmers. Just eat them and be on your way.”

“They might make a satisfying snack for me but not for Dil.” Ichy said. “Besides, this is about more than eating. This is about vengeance. You have robbed us of our home and dignity. We can’t get our home back but at least we can regain our dignity and pride by picking our teeth with your bones!”

“We can swim!” Ducky said desperately. “Your bellydragger friend is not around, so we can escape you in the water!”

“And when you can’t hold your breath any longer and go back to the surface for air, I can just grab you with my feet. It’s kind of hard to swim and lookout for enemies above at the same time. Face it hatchlings, I can come at you any when, anywhere. Like close to where you breathe.”

A whish went past Cera’s throat. She yelped and staggered away.

“Around where you fly.”

A blur circled Petrie’s wings, making him scream and topple out of the air.

“Under where you keep balance.”

A whoosh of air went under Chomper’s tail and between his legs. Chomper shrieked and jumped as though dancing on hot coals.

“I can even be behind where you speak.”

An arrow of wind whipped up Ducky’s back and inches from her forehead. She screamed and flailed her hands to swat it away but Ichy was already gone, his laughter echoing off the walls.

“Yes, continue screaming. You are all cowards, idiots, wusses, brats. Luck might have saved you last time but now it’s over. All you can do now is entertain me while I work up my appetite. Might as well get out the last of your yelling. You never know when any of these passes might be your last!”

Cera jerked away as a whoosh went past her side. She saw a whish kick up dirt beside Petrie’s feet, a great wind nearly knock down Ducky, a blur dart around inches from Chomper’s neck. Ichy swooped in and around them faster than any of them could see, making them scream and be uncertain where to step. Wherever they turned, he darted past mockingly and when they watched where they last saw him, they felt a presence swoop past the back of their heads. They just didn’t know where to go and the constant near misses and mocking laughter was cracking their resolve.

“What we do?” Petrie said, panicked. “Oh, we can’t – we can’t stay here! We must move!”

“We stick together!” Cera said, with an attempt at authority. “Ducky, Petrie, stay close to us!”

“I don’t want you guys to get hurt!” Ducky said.

“He’s just winding us up!” Cera said, half convincing herself. “Don’t listen to him!”

“I’ll protect you…” Chomper panted. “I’ll protect you guys!”

“Let keep moving this way.” Petrie said. “If we do that, maybe we can break the-”

“Do you want to escort him into the valley?” Cera said angrily. “Let’s try losing him for now. Stay close, and he won’t be able to get close unless he wants to get gored by my-”

Something touched Cera’s neck, light but cold, close to the jugular. It was only for a second but Cera, already scared and keyed up, saw her mortality and lost her head completely. She screamed, circling to get away and she inadvertently knocked Ducky off her feet. Chomper reached out for Ducky but a swoop caused him to shriek and stumble away. Petrie tried to take off into the air but a blur kicked him and he tumbled, latching onto Cera’s tail. They scattered, making a beeline for any passageway entrance they could find, too panicked to know what they were doing or where they were going other than to get away.

Ducky found herself tripping and staggering down a tall passageway, pants echoing loudly. She looked about for signs – of where Ichy was, of her location, of her friends’ whereabouts. So far, Ducky saw nothing and every second alone caused her panic to ratchet up to new heights.

“Where are you?” Ducky whispered. “Petrie, Cera, Chomper.”

She sighed. She hated when she got separated from the others. Even if just one friend was with her, she would have been okay but stranded alone, she felt like a target was painted on her back. Ducky might have an advantage with finding escape routes and refuges with her small size but when a predator set its sights on her, even the smallest meat eater could still make a meal out of her. Not only did she not want to die, the loneliness only accentuated the terror of the danger. She only hoped she could find the others soon before she encountered any dangers that would give her a lonely end.

When she found a three way intersection in the passageway, she brightened and picked up her pace. Maybe there was a route to get her reunited with her friends there. She turned to the left passageway, the direction where she last saw the others. There was a call of recognition from the right passageway, from the last voice she wanted to hear.

“Aha, there you are!” Ichy said. “Just the swimmer I was looking for.”

Ducky shrieked and pelted forward. She moved with all the energy in her but Ichy’s awful flapping quickly caught up with her. No matter how fast she ran, he rarely strayed from above her. All the movement was draining. She didn’t know how long she could keep this up but fear drove her onward. As exhaustion made her footing clumsy, she called desperately into the air.

“Petrie! Cera! Chomper! Help! Help!”

“You’re not getting any help.” Ichy said. “No last minute rescues for you. This time you’re going to be eaten and nothing will stop me!”

“I don’t want to be eaten, no, no, no! Someone, please, help me!”

“You were the last of our prey to evade us. I think it’s kind of fitting you’ll be my first meal. After all the insult you gave us, finally we’ll have our dignity back. Just think, your family will forever wonder what happened to you. I wish I could watch. They’ll never know you died alone, not doing some heroic sacrifice but trying to save your own hide. It’s guaranteed to be delicious. Not that you’ll ever know. You’ll die anonymously, the object of ignorance and ignorant of how others react to you.”

Ducky whimpered, tripping again and barely able to stay on her feet. “Spike…Spike! I need you!”

“You’re weirdo brother isn’t going to help you.” Ichy jeered. “I don’t understand why you would decide to be a sister to lazy creatures like spiketails, since you swimmers like to have so many children, but never mind. It’s nearly lunchtime.”

Ducky attempted to double her speed but she had little energy to double on. Her sore muscles made her stiff and clumsy and she got a stitch in her chest. She pressed against the problem area to stifle the pain but doing that distracted her and her foot caught on a jut. She fell with a smack. Groaning, she weakly pushed on the ground but could do no more than rise a few inches before collapsing back down. The flapping was loud and stationary.

“And so it ends.” Ichy said. “It was nice knowing you, swimmer, but it’s time to fill my stomach. Don’t worry, I’ll make this painless. It can be annoying when the food struggles down your throat.”

There was a final flap and Ducky heard Ichy dive bomb for her. She curled up into a ball and closed her eyes, hoping that if she shut out the world, she wouldn’t notice when she everything went black. The several seconds Ichy took to get closer stretched on for an eternity. Ducky thought about her friends, Spike, and the rest of her family, the many brothers and sisters she wished she got to know better but now never would…

Several seconds passed before she realized nothing had happened. She should have been struck down by now but all she had felt was a brief brush of cold across her back. The flapping was now ahead of her, Ichy making a noise of confusion.

“What? How did I – I’ll get you!”

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LBT Fanfiction / We Will Hold On Forever
« on: June 20, 2017, 09:39:30 AM »
Thank you for the review. I admit, I didn’t think much about making Ichy and Dil more menacing than the film, but now that you mention it, I could see it. I was focused on other priorities. I’m pleased to hear I remained faithful to their characters while showing some depth at least through their dialogue, which was one of my priorities.

The bond between Littlefoot and his grandparents will be a major focus of the story. I always wanted to explore the relationship more closely, and this won’t be the only story where that’s done. Writing action scenes can be a challenge, so glad to hear those shown in this chapter were fun to read.

Yeah, the abrupt cliffhanger was a bit awkward. It was a challenge finding a natural cutoff point at the halfway point of my original 52 page chapter one and Spike being endangered seemed to be the closest fit. There is another point I could have chose a bit later, now I consider it but oh well. I’ll see if I can improve on that with the next long chapters I deal with.

I’m nervous and excited about showing readers like you what I have in mind in this story.

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LBT Fanfiction / We Will Hold On Forever
« on: June 18, 2017, 06:24:22 AM »
P2/2

“I’m pretty familiar with the water swimmers but there’s something new here.” Chomper frowned. “We’ve encountered this smell before…and I don’t like it.”

Littlefoot’s neck prickled. “Should we get out of the water?”

“Maybe?” Chomper sniffed again, frowning harder. “When I smelled this smell, it was on land. I was scared when I caught it…there was a lot of running, even though they couldn’t go very fast…” He trailed off, and panic twisted his muzzle. “Oh no! We really need to get out now!”

“What?” Petrie yelped, gazing about. “What in water?”

A growl rumbled behind them. Slowly, they turned to find a giant, vaguely triangular head rapidly approach, the rest of its long body surfacing, scarlet eyes fixed on them.

“Bellydragger, bellydragger!” Chomper exclaimed. “Out!”

They swam to shore with double the speed, kicking up waves to get away. Ducky was the first to reach shore and she beckoned quickly as Cera scrambled out after her. Spike nudged Petrie on his nose and heaved himself onto land. Ruby leapt out, swung her tail to a struggling Chomper, and fished him back to terra firma. Littlefoot slowed to give his friends space to surface. Reassured they were all safe on dry land, he desperately pawed at the shore. He could hear the bellydragger getting closer, closer, that rumbling growl rising as he was seconds away from becoming a meal. The others gripped his forelegs quickly and pulled hard. Littlefoot was grateful when he got hauled out just in time, the bellydragger snapping its mouth inches from his flailing rear legs and tail.

Littlefoot and the others pressed their backs to the far less mossy wall and cautiously crawled back to put more space between themselves and the immediate threat. The bellydragger followed them with a slightly unfocused gaze, an annoyed curl on its muzzle.

“Those screams really sound familiar,” the bellydragger said. “Are these the kids I think they are?”

“Yep, Dil,” a voice called out. “The same ones that were obsessed with those glowy flowers.”

Shock and dread shook through Littlefoot and the others. They recognized these two predators.

“It’s you guys!” Cera said. “The bellydragger and sharpbeak!”

“Me didn’t want to see them again.” Petrie gulped.

“What are you doing here?” Littlefoot demanded. “Shouldn’t you be back in the Land of Mists?”

“Oh, we would like to.” Dil growled, hatred in her tone. “But you guys are cursed. No sooner did you make your last minute escape that some new residents moved in and took all the food. Eventually, they drove us out!”

“So now we’re here finding a new food source.” Ichy said. “And what do you know, our old prey happens to live here,” he then purred. “This is oh so convenient on all sorts of fronts.”

“Oh, where is that sharpbeak?” Ducky scanned the tunnel ceiling anxiously, remembering all too well the terror of being snatched into the skies. “I can’t see him. You’d better not eat us! Our folks – they know where we are, they do, they do!”

Ichy chuckled. “Nice try, big mouth. I’ve already overheard you lot say you didn’t mention where you were going. If you end up disappearing, Dil and I will have some leeway while your parents desperately search everywhere for you. It seems dinner will be sweet indeed.”

“You overheard us?” Petrie squeaked. “Did you notice a sharpbeak smell, Chomper?”

“No, I didn’t!” Chomper said, distressed. “Water can dampen my sniffer but if he was above us, I should have caught something.”

Chomper’s statement caused Dil and the elusive Ichy to turn their attention to him and Ruby. There was a strangled pause from Ichy.

“You’ve got to be kidding me.” Ichy said at last.

“Hey Ichy,” Dil squinted, “is it just me or are there two new kids with them?”

“There are. They replaced the longneck girl with a fast runner. Goodness knows why, I thought they would be leery of anyone who can’t decide between eating plants or meat. But that isn’t the most shocking part. They replaced their fuzzy pet with – I can’t believe this – a baby sharptooth!”

“A baby sharptooth?” Dil repeated. “You’ve pulling my leg!”

“I’m having a hard time believing it myself but my eyes aren’t lying.” Ichy protested. “A baby sharptooth is standing with them. It’s bizarre.”

“I’m not a baby.” Chomper stepped forward defiantly. “And it’s not bizarre to be with your friends.”

Ichy and Dill gave a small double-take, mouths gaping as they goggled in Chomper’s direction.

“Did – was that the sharptooth that just spoke in leaf eater?” Dil asked.

“Yeah.” Ichy said, dazed. “His mouth moved and formed the same sounds as those green guzzlers. We’re really encountering some high class weirdos here. And he said they’re his friends. Did this little freak learn that language just for that?”

Chomper bristled at the insult. ”To make a long story short, yes!” he snapped. “Save your comments on my taste in friends. We’ve heard them all.”

“And I’d be careful at who you’re calling freaks.” Ruby said. “A bellydragger and sharpbeak speaking leaf eaters is pretty freaky too.”

“Freaky? Pah!” Ichy scoffed. “It’s a strategic advantage. When we encounter our food, we can know how they plan to fight back or escape, and cut them off. It’s left us with some full bullies and you guys say some amusing things before you get eaten. I’m surprised more meat eaters haven’t taken up such a great skill.”

“Though I can understand why they don’t.” Dil said. “The gossip I hear from you leaf eaters while hiding or waiting to pounce can rot the brain. I almost lashed out too early several times to make the agony go away. There are times when I wish I didn’t understand your stupid language.”

Ichy sighed. “And as usual, your ignorance is annoying in any language. Stop missing the forests for the trees. Don’t you understand you’re sounding as stupid as this little biter who learned a language for something barf-worthy like friendship?”

“I’m not little!” Chomper said, stepping forward angrily.

Ichy chuckled. “Oh, I think we’ve hit a sore spot for him. He isn’t going to be much of a threat. Dil?”

The bellydragger surged forward slowly, the flaps of Ichy not far behind, her mouth rising to land. Hurriedly, Chomper went over and stepped up.

“Don’t you get any closer!” he said.

Dil and he stopped, caught off guard for a second, staring at Chomper as though unable to process what he was doing. Gradually, though, they began to laugh, their voices rising in volume until that mocking, hysterical sound reverberated around Littlefoot and the others. Chomper tensed.

“Are you…” Dil took a moment to catch her breath. “Are you seriously thinking your puny self can do anything to shield those leaf eater brats?”

“Oh, this is too rich.” Ichy guffawed. “If we weren’t so hungry, I’d suggest we’d keep him as a pet. Whose a stupid, mushy baby? He is, he is! Whose going to fail in protecting his friends because he’s a weak sap? Why, the one over there! Oh, this’ll be fun!”

“Be quiet! Nothing will happen to them!” Chomper said desperately. “If you touch them, I, I-”

He faltered, unable to think of a good enough threat. Ichy and Dill continued laughing, voices higher than ever. Chomper’s shook his head to fruitlessly block out the sound, breathing becoming unsteady. He glared angrily even as a drop of fear entered those red eyes. Littlefoot stepped near him protectively.

“Chomper, don’t let them get to you.” Littlefoot said. “They’re just trying to make sure we can’t get out of here.”

Dil sneered. “Some sharptooth. They are usually tough and scary but this one needs his leaf eater friends to defend him!”

“Yeah, a few jokes and he’s already hyperventilating!” Ichy jeered. “He won’t be any danger. He’ll end up in our stomachs like the rest of his friends.”

Chomper shook his head desperately. “No! I have a pretty powerful bite, it’ll hurt and –”

Dil and Ichy only responded with more cruel laughter. Chomper slumped, gaze shaking helplessly. Littlefoot wanted to wrap his neck around Chomper comfortingly but now wasn’t the time. From the predators’ mirth, they were winding down the conversation and were about to go for another attack. Littlefoot examined the tunnel ceiling desperately for any sign of Ichy. On that Land of Mists adventure, the sharpbeak proved to be a nuisance that tripped the gang up while they tried to flee Dil, and he was a downright menace to Ducky and Petrie. They needed to know where he was so he wouldn’t sneak up on them or rat out their location. Yet wherever Littlefoot looked, he couldn’t spot Ichy, and panic rose. This part of the tunnel was dark yet not that dark. Did Ichy suddenly become even more experienced at hiding himself?

Dil chuckled lowly. “I’m getting bored of messing with these kids, Ichy. Let’s have lunch.”

“Yes.” Ichy purred. “It’s almost the afternoon. Now would be an appropriate time to fill our stomachs. Be sure to leave some for me, Dil.”

“Don’t worry. I won’t swallow all of them whole, so you’ll have some pieces.”

Dil resumed her approach and all of them became very aware that bellydraggers got their name because they could move on land. Fear gripped Littlefoot and the others but it was Ichy’s cackle overhead that made them lose it.

“Run!” Littlefoot shouted.

Screaming, the seven took off as Dil’s jaws snapped around the place they stood a second ago. They raced down the way they came, Dil keeping up easily in the water. Whenever one of them got too close to the shore, she snapped at their feet or tails, and they leapt out of range and quickened their pace. All the while, Ichy’s voice was never far behind, shouting directions and orders. Only with sheer speed did they avoid getting a limb torn off but Littlefoot didn’t know how long that will last.

“I hope you picked up our scent of where we went, Chomper!” Cera panted.

Chomper sniffed desperately. “I – think I got something but we’ve been in the water for awhile, so we’re going to have to keep going until I can be sure.”

“I don’t know how long we can run after that swim.” Ducky said.

“We’re going to have to know by continuing to run.” Ruby said. “And hopefully we won’t lead them into the valley in the meantime.”

“That’s right!” Littlefoot exclaimed. “The bellydragger might go up the river to the surface and the sharpbeak can fly after us. We can’t have them hanging around the valley.”

“Maybe the grownups can take care of them.” Petrie said nervously.

“Maybe with the bellydragger but the sharpbeak’s small, he can evade detection. We need to do something so neither would be –”

The water next to the fleeing gang exploded, and Dil shot out, her jaws descending upon them. Littlefoot and the others scattered and Dil’s head landed with a crash. In the chaos, Littlefoot was pinned against the wall as she snapped her mouth at them, several of those snaps only missing him by a hair’s breadth. Dil flailed her head too wildly for Littlefoot to move. He waited, terrified, for those teeth to make contact, but a voice rose out in defiance.

“Leave Littlefoot alone!”

Chomper charged in angrily, head lowered. Dil whipped to his voice and the force of the head movement knocked Chomper off his feet. He fell hard, whimpering and gripping his head. Dil continued thrashing to bite Littlefoot, who remained just as trapped. He didn’t know how he was going to escape until Dil focused her attention on Ducky, Spike, and Petrie on one side. A slender arm grabbed his foreleg and snatched him out of Dil’s reach.

“There you go, Littlefoot.” Ruby said.

“Thanks, Ruby.” Littlefoot panted.

Cera’s teeth grabbed the scruff of Chomper’s neck and she dragged him off, annoyed.

“You’re not a threehorn, don’t act like one,” she growled.

“I’m sorry for getting in the way.” Chomper muttered.

“Never mind that now.” Littlefoot said. “She cut us off, where do we go?”

“Into our stomachs!” Ichy jeered. “Get them, Dil!”

Dil advanced eagerly on Ducky, Spike, and Petrie, apparently holding a particular grudge against the trio for thwarting her and Ichy last time. Littlefoot jerked his head about for some sort of way out. In the low light, he couldn’t see much of anything and he automatically leaned against the nearest wall to keep his distance from Dil, only to find there wasn’t any wall at all. Littlefoot stumbled, rebalanced himself, and turned to find a smaller tunnel whose destination vanished around a bend. Hope leapt up his throat.

“Guys, an escape route!” Littlefoot said. “The bellydragger can’t follow us here!”

The others did a double take and visible relief came on their faces.

“This is good news.” Ruby’s brows creased. “But Ducky, Spike, and Petrie can’t reach this good news!”

Littlefoot turned to where the trio backed away from Dil and shouted, “Guys, look for a tunnel and escape down it! There are ones around here!”

The trio were only slightly reassured by this suggestion.

“But how?” Petrie yelled. “It dark!”

“Press against the wall!” Cera replied. “You’ll be bound to fall down one!”

Realizing her prey found a route to escape, Dil angrily turned on Littlefoot, Cera, Chomper, and Ruby but the four yelped and went down their little tunnel. Dil was consternated to find her shoulders slam against the walls on either side of the tunnel and she couldn’t go any further.

“Dang it, they’re getting away!” Dil growled.

Ichy fluttered above her head. “Then get the other ones Dil!”

Disgruntled, Dil turned and followed the sounds of the trio slamming themselves against the wall in search of an escape route. Ducky, Petrie, and Spike backed away when they saw her advance, keeping their sides hugged to the wall in hopes of running into something that wasn’t wall.

“Spike, sniff for a tunnel!” Ducky exclaimed.

Spike flared his nostrils, looking forward where Dil blocked the path Littlefoot and the others took and backward where their ultimate escape route was so far away. Spike didn’t know what he was smelling for. Ichy and Dil approached, the former watching in anticipation as Dil’s opening mouth closed the distance with the helpless trio…

With Ducky and Petrie on his neck, Spike slid back and the three yelped as he fell into a small hole that barely accommodated his size. Scrambling, Spike’s tail vanished down the tunnel and Dil’s mouth closed around only air. She snarled.

“Did they escape, Ichy? Dang it all, I nearly had them!”

“I’ll search for a route to get them, Dil.” Ichy replied. “I’m definitely getting better at this stealth thing. Their expert nose sharptooth couldn’t even find my scent. The benefits of my new bathing plan, I guess,” he added, preening. “Wait around here and I’ll get back to you.”

Ichy looked between the two holes and decided to go after Littlefoot’s little party. The annoying longneck appeared to be the leader of this odd herd and it was likely the remaining three would go for his group. Best to see how they plotted against the pair and find a dastardly way to circumvent them.

Meanwhile, Littlefoot and the others were desperately navigating the small tunnel complex in hopes of reuniting with Ducky, Petrie, and Spike. Chomper still nursed a headache, so he wasn’t in any shape to help. Littlefoot hoped charting a route in the direction the trio were last seen would lead to a reunion. He silently flagellated himself as seconds of nothing ticked by.

*If I said no to this trip…* Littlefoot thought. *If there really are no holes further down-*

Cera cried out when someone ran into her. Littlefoot whirled to find Spike collided with Cera in the low light, Ducky and Petrie atop him. Relief came across everyone and Spike ran forward to lick the four.

“Ack. Okay. Stop.” Cera sighed fondly. “A nuzzle would have sufficed you know.”

Spike chuckled and abided with a gentle head bump, Cera no longer protesting. They settled down to business once Spike calmed down.

“Alright, we really in trouble.” Petrie said. “How do we stop them from going into valley?”

“Me and Chomper aren’t familiar with these caves but those two plan to be familiar with them so they could slip in and out, and eat anyone they can get their mouths on.” Ruby said.

“And we’re distracting them from their plan. If they do get us…” Ducky covered her mouth. “Oh no, oh no…”

“So while we distract them, let’s ruin their plan.” Cera said grimly. “We bury the river entrance and anywhere else that could get them out on top. Making sure they’re distracted while we do this might be a problem though…”

“So we split up.” Littlefoot sighed. “If we must…” He examined his friends carefully. “Cera, you go with Chomper, Petrie, and Ducky. Hopefully Chomper might sniff out the entrance. Be sure to keep Ducky and Petrie close by. Spike, you’re coming with me since you have a good nose as well. Ruby, hopefully we can put our heads together and keep the pair distracted long enough that we can come up with something better. Is that clear?”

There were nods, some more reluctant than others. Not everyone was pleased by this arrangement.

“So me and Ducky are with Cera just to be protected?” Petrie said miserably.

“You can at least fly or swim out into the valley to survey how big the river entrance is.” Littlefoot said. “That would help in bringing it down.”

“But you spoke like being protected is the only important thing.” Ducky said.

“It is important. The sharpbeak is a danger to you. I have to have you protected.”

The pair weren’t exactly convinced but Spike stepped closer with a beseeching expression, pained that he couldn’t be their protector. He sent an uncertain look toward Littlefoot, who briefly had second thoughts. He glanced at Chomper. Should Littlefoot have Spike and Chomper switch places, so Ducky and Petrie would be more assured with another protector? No, Chomper’s nose was stronger and that needed to be used with disposing of the river entrance.

“No, the groups stay as they are.” Littlefoot said. “You all play a role, I assure you.”

“But not with the bellydragger.” Chomper said surly.

“Chomper, let’s not get into this. Any second, any second, the sharpbeak will-”

 “You were thinking that when you looked at me, weren’t you?”

“For goodness sake, keep your personal drama for later.” Cera said impatiently. “Right now-”

A familiar and unwelcome cackle intruded upon them. Jumping, they turned to the little passageway where the sound echoed from, the widest of this little network. There was enough space for someone much bigger than them to come in and sure enough a pair of red eyes were emerging from the darkness. The echo of flapping wings were prominent above the bellydragger.

“Now, don’t mind us.” Ichy said. “Argue some more. It makes it easier for my friend to find you.”

Littlefoot turned to the others. “Go! You know what to do!”

There was no argument. They separated into two groups, Littlefoot’s group racing down a tunnel wide enough to accommodate the three walking side to side while Cera’s pack went through a passageway with barely the sufficient amount of space for Cera to move without scraping one of her sides. Dil went after Littlefoot’s group without any hesitation but paused when she noticed Ichy lingering at the intersection of tunnels.

“What’s the holdup?” she asked.

“I overheard a bit of their plan when scouting ahead.” Ichy replied. “Maybe we should split up to sabotage their…sabotage.”

“Not right away. I can’t see much without you.”

Ichy rubbed the bottom of his beak thoughtfully. “Alright, we’ll have some fun with the longneck, spiketail, and fast runner. They grouped the small ones around the threehorn and sharptooth because they’re afraid of what I’d do to them. So it’d be fun if the three stop hearing my voice while you corner them somewhere and puts two and two together that I’m getting myself a snack.”

Dil grumbled with pleasure. “Fear does add a certain spice to the meal. Alright, let’s see what you can spook up.”

--

Littlefoot kept checking behind him as he, Spike, and Ruby continued their jog. They slowed down when they noticed their pursuing query wasn’t fulfilling the pursuing part of the bargain.

“Have they gone after Cera’s group?” Littlefoot wondered. “If they have…”

Ruby placed a soothing hand on Littlefoot’s shoulder. “You’re plan will work, Littlefoot. Cera and the others have went down the narrower tunnel as planned. Not to mention us bigger dinosaurs are here to get the sharpbeak and bellydragger’s attention, correct?”

Spike’s eyes widened on confusion for a moment. Then something clicked and he glanced at Littlefoot with narrowed eyes. Littlefoot couldn’t meet his gaze.

“I did think the bellydragger would follow our group if the larger of us were here.” Littlefoot said sheepishly. “But the reasons I said to the others are true too. Don’t worry, we’ll be with each other every step of the way. You might even get an opportunity to get another whack at that sharpbeak, Spike.”

Spike was only somewhat mollified. The slap-click of a massive low-lying body moving in their direction put to rest any further discussion as Dil’s silhouette became clear behind them.  

“There they are, Ichy.” Dil’s voice echoed. “Having another one of their chats.”

In spite of their better judgement, the trio lingered so Dil could close some distance before fleeing at a light jog. Littlefoot was only slightly reassured to hear the flap of feathered wings. That meant Ichy also couldn’t resist the lure of larger prey. Cera and the others could now do their work unmolested.

The trio came across an intersection, featuring more of the variety passageways, one of whom ascended up in a spiral. Littlefoot ignored that feature, scanning the ones wide enough for Dil carefully.

“Are we trying to get them lost?” Ruby whispered. “How do we not get lost with them?”

“Can you still remember the scent of that glowy greens, Spike?” Littlefoot asked. “We might need to rely on your nose to get out.”

Spike took a whiff of the air, and nodded quietly. Hearing that slap-click becoming faster, Littlefoot pointed toward the widest of the tunnels to the left and they picked up their pace. Dil could be heard still closing the distance, unleashing another of her hungry rumbles loud enough to vibrate their chest cavities.

“You’re getting close Dil!” Ichy said gleefully. “So close! Closer, closer, closer -”

The repeated word filled Littlefoot with panic, as intended. They couldn’t run forever. Their games had taken a lot of energy. Sooner or later this latest bout of running would drain the last of their stores and they would be at the mercy of Ichy and Dil. Littlefoot, Spike, and Ruby felt air get displaced from Dil’s bites near their tails, and Littlefoot quickly looked for a place to retreat to. He spotted a narrow opening that led to a cave and pond, complete with an even smaller opening on the other side. His heart leapt.

“Over there!”

Littlefoot dived through the hole, Ruby not far behind him. There was a thunk and Spike was wedged in the hole. Littlefoot and Ruby’s heart froze but Spike only had to do a bit of pulling and he popped out. It was just in time, as Dil’s jaw rammed through and got wedged in place. She cried out, red eyes darting about in consternation.

“What, what?” Dil said. “Dang you kids!”

The others took several steps back at her anger, struggling to catch their breath.

“I – I think that’ll hold her off for now.” Ruby panted.

“Maybe.” Littlefoot lowered his voice to a whisper and drew close. “We might have to make it hide and seek to recharge until the others could finish their mission.”

“We’ll have to vary things up so they wouldn’t become suspicious.”

Littlefoot nodded. He was glad to have Ruby around. As the oldest and having spent most of her life surviving in the Mysterious Beyond, her insights with hiding from predators were valuable. The trio hugged against the other wall, stepping a bit into the pond. Spike stumbled, the depth further than he thought. With the bellydragger’s sight problem, maybe they could evade her when they squeezed out the other exit. Dil tried to shove her head further through with no success.

“I’m going to get you, somehow!” Dil shouted. “You can’t stay in there forever, and when you leave-“

Dil shoved back out and in, unable to handle the tightness pressing onto her muzzle. In response, cracks snaked outward and several pieces parted from the edge to tumble upon the ground. Dil froze. She repeated the action, the hole cracking a bit wider, allowing her jaws a few more inches in. A slow grin crossed her face.

“You know what?” Dil said. “Stay in there for as long as you want. I’ll be coming to you.”

Dil backed out and shoved in again, more pieces tumbling down. Littlefoot and the others found themselves hugging against the wall as Ichy’s laugh loudly bounced off the walls.

“You got her to use her brains,” he hissed. “Now you’re really in trouble.”

“You just got to use my triumph as an insult, don’t you Ichy?” Dil growled.

“That was a compliment, don’t act like a stinging buzzer.”

Littlefoot’s eyes flitted to the other, smaller exit, mentally calculating how many seconds squeezing through the hole would take. It would be close but they had few other options. With a head flick, Littlefoot beckoned the others to follow. He smooshed through and met resistance but a quick shove from Ruby and Spike got him out. Ruby had more luck, bending down and squeezing her limbs against herself tightly before popping out. She and Littlefoot turned with forelimbs at the ready as Spike came through. As they feared, he got wedged halfway through and they grabbed his forelegs and pulled hard, the scrape of his rear feet desperately kicking on the other side prominent even through the wall.

“Come on, Spike.” Ruby said. “Suck in your stomach. Go in and out as the bellydragger did.”

Spike sucked in breath and thrust himself back and forward, causing a few cracks to come in. He got through a few more inches but the roar of a collapse in that cave was deafening and time ticked away.

“Spike, move!” Littlefoot shouted. “We need to-”

The wall around Spike cracked harder and exploded. The three were sent back, pelted by debris. Littlefoot’s knocked against the opposite wall, and stars burst in his eyes. Spike landed upside down, a circle of rocks clinging to his middle. Ruby shook her head and already stood alertly. The dust cleared, Dil marched through the wider opening she made for herself, and she shook her head.

“You didn’t need to make that much of a dramatic entrance!” Ichy said, coughing.

“Hey, I didn’t expect the walls to be so thin.” Dil replied. “You should have caught that.”

Ruby stirred. “The walls are thin here…”

No one heard her. Dil gave a hiss and advanced until only several feet separated the trio from certain death. Awakening with a head shake, Littlefoot sprung up.

“C’mon, let’s go!”

Littlefoot ran and he could hear the patter of Ruby keeping up but soon became aware another set of footsteps weren’t beside them. The pair turned to find Spike had just upright himself against the wall, the ring of rocks still clinging to him. He was cornered by Dil and shook with terror. There was still plenty of space for Spike to flee but he seemed rooted to the spot, eyes not wavering from the bellydragger.

“Spike, get out of there!” Littlefoot shouted.

Spike didn’t dare move. Frustration welled up in Littlefoot but then he saw how Dil swept her head back and forth in Spike’s direction, occasionally squinting. Dil was blind, and especially had a hard time seeing still figures. If Spike moved, he likely feared he might get spotted and pounced on. That was an understandable worry dealing with a large bellydragger but Littlefoot knew that Dil would sooner or later spot him or that Ichy might guide her to him. He had to take a chance very soon, or he might have no chance at all.

Quickly looking around, Littlefoot spotted the pebble-like remains of the wall Dil broke through and an idea occurred to him. Remembering what Shorty taught him, Littlefoot came back and flicked several rocks at Dil with his tail. They crackled on her forehead and she snarled at them, giving Spike an opening.

 “You have to move, Spike! Move, move!”

Spike stirred, and stared at Littlefoot. For a second, his mind seemed to blank, as though not sure what to do. But then Spike saw Dil swing her head about, realizing prey was nearby through Littlefoot’s call, and was shocked into action. To Littlefoot’s relief, Spike began to gallop past Dil, but the remains of the wall around his middle started breaking apart. Spike slipped and slid, stumbling over the wall pebbles from his middle just as he had passed Dil’s head. Dil turned and snapped at him. Spike continued to stumble and slip, terror on his face as he barely dodge those rapidly closing bites…

Next time…

From the Mists Part 2

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LBT Fanfiction / We Will Hold On Forever
« on: June 18, 2017, 06:23:46 AM »
Fanfiction.net Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12535668/1/We-...Hold-On-Forever

Summary: A chance encounter with old enemies leads Littlefoot and friends to discover a phenomena they can barely comprehend. The answers to that phenomena shall lead to tough choices that will drive them to their very breaking point.

Notes: So, yeah, my first chaptered fic for this fandom. This is going to be a long one. This was originally going to be twenty-two chapters but with some chapters reaching as high as fifty or sixty pages, I decided I'll cut in half any that exceed forty and wait until next week to post the second part (Yes, if I have the second part mostly completed, I don't need to wait that long...but I'm Satan :p ). I'm not sure about consistent updates, since I'm planning on writing and mostly completing the next chapter before posting the current one. It might vacillate between weekly and monthly depending on. I'll try to figure that out as I adapt to writing and posting long fic.

So without further ado, here’s it begins:

---P1/2

We Will Hold On Forever

by

The Analyzer

Chapter 01: From The Mists Part 1


On a little known river in the Mysterious Beyond, two companions by convenience were once again in a foul mood.

“You really did it this time, Dil.” Ichy muttered.

He and Dil had been riding through the waters in mutual silence, stewing over the latest blunder in their never-ending search for nourishment. Lately, their prey in the Land of Mists had adapted to the changed environment and got cleverer, making getting a full belly an arduous challenge. New predators and other residents had moved in and they didn’t take too kindly to the old guard. The mists that helped Ichy and Dil in so many hunts had then disadvantaged them. The pair were often unaware of the presence of the aggressive competition until it was almost too late. They usually had to scramble away before being found. Dil’s stealth in the water in these cases was limited and nontransferable to land. With all these obstacles in the way, it was only a matter of time before the pair really ticked off someone bigger and meaner than them.

Dil’s eyes lowered. “Well, how was I supposed to know that longneck swimmer was there with how still he was?”

“You should have been more careful after the last time we nearly got caught.” Ichy said. “Always stay low while swimming. How hard is that to understand?”

“It’s kind of hard to be invisible and keep ears above water.” Dil growled. “C’mon Ichy, I did everything you asked. I kept quiet. I asked if there were any swimming longnecks in the area. I swam so slowly I might as well have stayed still. I did my best. But those swimming longnecks were everywhere! Face it Ichy, it just wasn’t a way to live.”

“It’s called adapting. You either shape up or ship out. Those regular longnecks shipped out, remember? We were going to be the ones who shaped up – fitting right in with the mists, taking advantage of the new rivers, making all the weird creatures our dinner. We might have even got used to those large swimming longnecks and carved out our own niche. But that takes time and look where your impatience to get somewhere got us – chased out of the Land of Mists on the threat of becoming someone’s dinner! We can never go back and lean on the advantages we had there. Now we have to go the even longer route to get our next meal.”

Dil grunted. “Don’t think because you’re the eyes you’re also the brain. You didn’t see him either. You couldn’t fast talk your way out of the situation - you barely got us out of there alive. Look, we can pass blame all week if we want, but what’s done is done. What’s important is how this longer route is going to give us a meal.”

Ichy was displeased to be denied the last word but he was tired from arguing and Dil did have a point. His gaze turned onward, to where the river bent and vanished into the distance.

“I’ve seen a few rivers like this whenever we neared the edge of the Land of Mists, and I’ve followed them some ways. Not much life kicking around but they do lead to some caves we can take advantage of. If we do this right, we can have all the morsels we need.”

“Morsels for me, more like.” Dil said. “You’re doing well for someone who hasn’t eaten much lately.”

“That’s because you thought I was some other feathered flyer and nearly ate me again!” Ichy snapped. “If that small domehead hadn’t slipped into the river, I believe you really would have finished me off. That’d scare the appetite out of anyone.”

“Still, you haven’t chomped on much of my later catches.” Dil paused, her next words laced with the slightest fraction of concern. “You should be too tired to fly by now.”

Ichy shrugged. “Maybe I’m adapting to the sparse pickings. Or that whole escape mess is still giving me a high. Either way, I’ll get my appetite back when we feast in the Great Valley.”

Dil stopped so abruptly Ichy was nearly flung off her snout. “The Great Valley? You’re kidding me!”

“No, but don’t you see how brilliant it is?” Ichy said eagerly. He waved expansively. “Only plant eaters live there. Any meat eaters that wander in get chased out – usually because they’re too big and stomping to stay hidden for long. But we’re small enough to sneak around and nip any tiny prey unfortunate enough that stray near us. They can’t know all the tunnels – by the time they think something’s up, we can disappear back into the dark. We can time ourselves enough that it would take forever for them to get suspicious. After all, some dinosaurs must disappear or die in the Great Valley. They can’t keep track of everyone.”

Dil turned this over in her mind. Those were good points. The pair’s smaller size might actually benefit them for once. It was hard to chase after intruders in a tunnel if you were larger than the tunnel. As long as they were quiet, they would be set for a while. Nevertheless…

“That still leaves us with even more big critters to be mad at us,” she pointed out. “We won’t have mists to keep us hidden. If we get caught too far from a cave, we’re screwed.”

“Ah, but without the mist we won’t get lost.” Ichy said. “I can scout the area and pick out potential targets. All we have to do is stay quiet and out of sight. This’ll work, you’ll see.”

Dil sighed. Some part of her remained wary when Ichy had that scheming tone in his voice but the possibility of having enough prey to not go hungry for a while…it was too hard to resist. She was tired of going with an empty stomach for longer than was comfortable and worrying about danger all the time. At least in the valley, she could lower her guard a bit. Not to mention Ichy schemes didn’t always go wrong. As much as he could drive her up the wall, she needed him for his eyes and brain. There was only one answer she could give him at the moment.

“If it gets us food, I’m not complaining,” she grumbled. “I just hope no one recognizes our tracks.”

Ichy waved dismissively. “I doubt they will. I’ve heard Great Valley born residents don’t wander out and those that migrate there tend to stay put. They probably haven’t encountered anyone like us. If anyone has, well…what are the odds we’ll run into them? Let’s just focus on the prospect of having a filling meal,” he rubbed his wings together, a sharp glint in his eyes. “Yes…I can already feel my full stomach now.”

--

Littlefoot yawned, working the stiffness out of his neck. He didn’t get any sleep stories but he had a fine rest all the same. In his often adventurous life, having an uninterrupted and full sleep was a treasure, and he appreciated any time he could have it. As he looked around, he saw his grandparents seemed to feel the same way. They lay near Littlefoot as always, eyes closed and expansive forms curled near each other. Littlefoot smiled. It was sweet to see how close they were to one another, and to him. Also, he was pleased to wake up first this time.

“Grandpa, Grandma, get up!” Littlefoot called. “Time to rise and shine. It’s a beautiful day.”

They didn’t stir. Littlefoot frowned. Well, hearing did fade a bit with age. Littlefoot sometimes had to raise his voice more than once to get their attention. He took a deep breath.

“C’mon, Grandpa, Grandma! You said you wanted the first taste of the water greens in the lake. You don’t want to back out now!”

At this point, they normally would have groaned and grumbled affectionately that if Littlefoot wanted them to be punctual, they might as well get up. But not so much as a peep. Frowning further, Littlefoot wandered over.

“Grandpa? Grandma? Are you alright?”

As Littlefoot got mere feet from his grandparents, he noticed their massive sides weren’t moving. Strange, everyone breathed in their sleep and it was especially noticeable in big dinosaurs like them. And even at their quietist, his grandparents made some noise. Yet he heard nothing.

That was when the smell hit his nostrils. Littlefoot twitched back at the sweet stench, which he couldn’t immediately identity but made his stomach curl. He encountered this smell before, and not within a particularly good context. After a reluctant moment, his mind went back to the time of that encounter, when the sky water dampened the intensity but it was still something he couldn’t ignore as he watched fruitlessly for life to come back to….

Littlefoot’s breath hitched. “No. No, no, no.”

Littlefoot raced forward, thrusted onto his hind legs to push on Grandpa’s face, and ran to Grandma to do the same thing.

“Get up, please get up. Get up!”

He pressed his head against their noses, trying by some miracle to move their heads and stir consciousness back into them. There, Littlefoot noticed his ears hadn’t been lying – he couldn’t feel their breaths, the air that should be breezing in and out of their mouths and nostrils, that which made all life healthy and able to move on. Littlefoot continued to push and shove, the exertion forcing him to inhale more of that sweet, putrid stench he attempted desperately to ignore.

“Not you two.” Littlefoot panted. “Oh, not you too!”

Littlefoot didn’t stop trying to wake his grandparents even when it was clear he would get no response, not a startled snort, an abrupt expanse of lungs, or even the twitch of a tail. Wet pricked his eyes, and his heart pumped from more than the exhaustion that started to settle in his legs. Only when he didn’t have any more energy to push and the stench became so unbearable did he stagger away and collapse. Littlefoot looked between Grandpa and Grandma helplessly, vision blurred, no longer able to stop himself from crying.

“Please, don’t leave me now,” he said “There’s so much I want to do with you. You’re the little family I have left. Grandpa! Grandma!”

“Littlefoot? Littlefoot!”

Littlefoot felt a nudge at his side, and his vision was blurring from more than tears. Blinking, he found himself right back in his sleeping spot and turned his head to see Grandpa and Grandma Longneck gazing at him with concern. They loomed over, his worried guardians, and very much alive.

“Are you okay?” Grandpa Longneck asked. “You’ve been making a lot of noise.”

“You look like you’ve been crying.” Grandma Longneck peered closer. “Did you have a bad sleep story?”

Littlefoot raised a paw and found wetness around one eye. He turned his head and rubbed the tears off.

“I’m fine.” Littlefoot said hastily, voice also wet. He cleared his throat and looked up, smiling warmly. “I did have a bad sleep story, but I feel better now that you’re here.”

His grandparents smiled, touched. Littlefoot was being truthful – seeing his grandpa and grandma here made all the terror of the sleep story distant and blurry. But he didn’t want to go into detail about it.

“We’re glad to hear that.” Grandpa Longneck replied. “But are you sure you’re alright? Grandma and I are always open to discussing whatever might be upsetting you.”

“As you’re probably reminded once in a while,” Grandma Longneck said wryly, “we’ve been around for a long time and seen a lot. We’ve even gone through struggles that might be similar to what you’re facing now. If there’s any way we can use our experience to help you, we wouldn’t mind giving out advice.”

Littlefoot hesitated, but shook his head. “I’m okay now. Maybe I’ll tell you about it later if it really bothers me.”

His grandparents nodded, ready to deal with such a response. Grandma Longneck looked at her husband.

“I believe there’s still time to get the water greens in the lake,” she said.

Grandpa Longneck nodded, chuckling. “There is. Come, no need to dawdle when we have bellies to fill.”

The pair turned and began walking, and Littlefoot scrambled out of his sleeping nook to follow. He kept up, swinging his head around curiously, happy to be up and drinking in the sights of his beautiful home. If his grandparents watched him out of the corner of their eye, they would be reassured whatever troubled him had passed and focus on how they could entertain themselves for the day.

For Littlefoot, that trouble hadn’t passed completely. Every once in a while that morning, he couldn’t help surreptitiously watching his grandparents’ gait, the way they drew in breath, how they got from point a to point b. Adult longnecks weren’t known for their swift movement and his grandparents’ pace wasn’t that much different, he mused. Their breathing sounded fine. They got to the lake and located the green food in the water with little trouble, so their sense of direction was as good as Littlefoot remembered. They were in great health, and it appeared they could go on for a while yet.

*But how long will that last?* Littlefoot thought.

He struggled with the question. Littlefoot had always known his grandparents would pass, sooner or later. He suspected other children knew this with their guardians but that was something they could wait to deal with until they were grownups. But Grandpa and Grandma Longneck were older. They might die before Littlefoot became an adult. He didn’t know what he would do if the signs came that their end was coming. Littlefoot jumped into action when Grandpa Longneck fell ill and risked his life to get him better. Littlefoot would do all he could to recuperate them but if there really was no delaying their demise, Littlefoot would be crushed.

*We’ve been with each other for so long but there’s still so much I want to do with them. I haven’t heard all of their stories. We haven’t played much, though at their age they can’t help that. At the very least, they can see me grow. I want them to be happy with who I’ll become – that I can take care of myself and have a good life. I just hope they live long enough to see that.*

“Hey, Littlefoot!”

Littlefoot raised his head from the water greens his grandparents fished out of the lake to see Cera standing expectantly on a hill, twitching her head back.

“You finished eating yet? The others are waiting, c’mon.”

“I’ll be done in a minute!” Littlefoot thrust down and began finishing off the last of the green food but paused and looked up to his grandparents. “Will you be okay, Grandpa, Grandma? I can stay if you want some company.”

Grandpa Longneck chuckled. “That’s very considerate of you, Littlefoot, but play with your friends. We’ll be fine.”

“Your grandfather is right.” Grandma Longneck said. “At your age, you should be enjoying your youth to the fullest. Trust us, we can find our own way of entertaining ourselves.”

“Um, okay.” With slight reluctance, Littlefoot returned to his green food. With a slurp, he swallowed the last of it and nodded to his grandparents. “See you later.”

Littlefoot scampered over to where Cera waited. She led him to the meeting spot with some impatience.

“You took your time eating.” Cera said.

“Sorry,” Littlefoot said, “I was busy thinking.”

“You can eat and think at the same time.”

“Let’s just say it was pretty hard thinking.”

Cera gave him a curious look but didn’t pursue the subject. They continued their jog until they found the rest of the gang near the cave Chomper and Ruby rested. Petrie was rocking from his perch on a rock, eyes lowered in oddly wistful thought but he perked up when Littlefoot and Cera arrived.

“Morning, Littlefoot,” he waved. “You came in time. Chomper was about to tell us what he found in cave.”

“Do they involve sky-colored stones?” Cera said. “I hope it won’t go like last time.”

The others looked at Ducky, who clasped her hands most innocently. “Oh don’t worry, I’ve learned my lesson. Oh, I have. I’ll be on my best behavior with whatever we find.”

“I don’t believe what he found would interest you in that…interesting way.” Ruby chuckled. “Chomper found a cave system with a river that has interesting plants.”

“Interesting plants?” Cera asked. “What kind of interesting?”

“These plants grow on rocks.” Chomper replied. “I kind of saw them on the island me and my parents stayed on but these are…different. I think you’ll like them. There are also cool water swimmers, they can jump like they’re flying and everything!”

“Water swimmers can be flyers?” Petrie shook his head. “Me even more confused now than ever.”

“There is much we haven’t seen.” Ruby said. “Our job growing up is to see a lot and learn a lot.”

“Will it be the kind of growing and seeing that involves tasting these plants?” Cera asked. “Because the last time any part of my family tried that, me and Daddy had to look after Dinah and Dana because my big sister’s mate got sick eating a funny plant…”

“Don’t worry Cera.” Ducky said. “If anything’s wrong with the plants, I’m sure Spike will warn us. Right, Spike?”

Spike nodded proudly, and sniffed around, making a series of humming sounds that gave him joy. The others couldn’t resist smiling.

“Well, I heard spiketails have hardier stomachs.” Cera said wryly. “What might be delicious to Spike could make the rest of us hurl, so let’s not be too eager for a nibble.”

Spike gave her a bemused look but chuckled and shook his head. He wasn’t going to deny Cera’s assessment if it showed him in a positive light. Petrie meanwhile gave a shudder.

“Me hope there some light down there.” He then added quickly. “Me do find it interesting but…if there anything dangerous in caves, me prefer to see it…even if it scare me even more.”

Chomper smiled wisely. “Don’t worry. Let’s just say the lights will come from an interesting place. So, are you all up for it?”

There were nods and murmurs of assent. What Chomper hinted at tantalized their imaginations enough that they were willing to see it for themselves. Since this cavern was in another part of the valley, they began their trek, humming about adventuring and bantering like usual. Littlefoot became more cheerful. Nothing like a trek of exploration with friends to lift one’s spirits. The disturbing dreams were the furthest thing from his mind. He was more interested in Ducky’s amusing anecdote about two of her siblings switching places to stay with their father. The gang was so caught up with that, they barely noticed the local residents they passed, at least until one talked to them.

“Morning kids. Where are you off to?”

It was Mr. Clubtail, casually chewing some treestars that had luckily fallen from a tall tree. He spoke to Littlefoot and the others with a bit less of his characteristic gruffness but there was a keen gleam in his eyes that made the seven stop.

“Um morning, Mr. Clubtail.” Littlefoot said. “We’re just exploring some caves.”

“Just going to gawk at some weird plants and water swimmers.” Cera said. “Nothing unusual.”

“Nothing unusual, huh?” Mr. Clubtail said wryly. “That’s how it always starts.”

“We’ll be fine.” Ducky said. “There are days when nothing bad happens. There are, there are.”

Mr. Clubtail snorted. “That’s what you say in the morning but by the afternoon, I wouldn’t be surprised if you come back with tall tales about how you kids nearly got killed this time.”

Littlefoot winced as he felt a dull thud in the pit of his stomach, the dream rising back unbidden in his mind. Fortunately, no one noticed this unusual reaction. A few laughed and sighed in exasperation.

“Oh, you’re so dramatic.” Chomper chuckled.

“Just for that, if anything does happen, you won’t be told what happened.” Ruby teased. “After all, there are adventures we haven’t told everyone about.”

“Though we tell you if we need rescue from anything.” Petrie said nervously. “Just follow the screams. We make sure to be loud.”

Mr. Clubtail sighed. “Either way, I can’t help but think I’ll hear something about you lot. Try to actually be safe. Some rare sweet bubbles are becoming just the right amount of ripe today, and it’d be annoying having to abandon them to save your hides again.”

Cera rolled her eyes but Littlefoot stepped forward.

“We’ll stay out of trouble, Mr. Clubtail,” he said sincerely. “Enjoy your sweet bubbles.”

Mr. Clubtail gave them a look of amused skepticism, but returned Littlefoot’s nod of farewell all the same, and the gang moved on. Cera grumbled under her breath.

“It’s not like we ask for help that often from that lazy tail,” she said.

“He cares.” Ruby said. “He doesn’t want us to get hurt. He just shows his caring through grumpiness.”

“Why doesn’t he just show his caring straight out?”

“You don’t always show your caring straight out.” Ducky pointed out.

Cera opened her mouth to reply but no sound came out, so she resorted to glaring. Petrie landed on her frill, barely holding back a smile.

“Don’t worry Cera,” he said. “We find that your charm point.”

Cera sniffed and shook Petrie off her head. “Well, that concern might be true, but he could have put it in a better way.”

“He mightn’t have put it in the nicest way,” Littlefoot said reluctantly, “but caves can be dangerous. It wouldn’t be the first time we got in trouble in one of them. Let’s actually try to stay safe, okay?”

The others turned to stare at him for several seconds at the suddenly cautious tone in his voice.

“Okay?” Cera widened an eye quizzically. “It’s not like we’re planning to do anything else. We don’t exactly search for danger. Don’t think too much about it. Mr. Clubtail might be worried about us but I’m sure he also doesn’t want one of his gorge fests interrupted.”

Chomper nodded thoughtfully. “It is annoying when you’re in the middle of eating some delicious flaily crawlies and something distracts you before you can swallow them.”

Spike swished his head up and down in agreement, giving his friends a fond but exasperated expression. Littlefoot smiled at his friends’ antics as he and Chomper led the gang to another part of the Great Wall, trying to ignore the uneasy prickling still in his tummy.

* I’ll keep a better eye out for trouble.* Littlefoot thought. *Cera’s right, I shouldn’t think about this too much but…better safe than sorry. I might get a better view of what Chomper’s going to show us.*

He wouldn’t raise the issue again. It was clear from his friends’ reaction to what he blurted that they thought it was odd and that he was being paranoid. Littlefoot had to admit, they would be right. He was letting the dream get to him more he wanted to. He didn’t wish to bring down the mood when they were beginning a morning of fun and exploration. Time to just enjoy his day with his friends, as his grandparents told him to, and he wasn’t going to turn down good advice from them.

They quieted as they approached the cave opening. A sleeping spiketail lay against a nearby tree, her snores quiet but nasally, and they slinked past not wanting incur the annoyance of an adult by interrupting her rest. They entered the cave opening, only tall enough for Ruby’s head fin to brush the ceiling. The cave curved down, with the occasional sharp and narrow bends that were difficult to navigate in the lowering light level. Fortunately, the wider among them like Spike were able to squeeze through without much trouble and they soon heard the familiar sound of running water echoing off of cavern walls.

Chomper smiled. “We’re close. Be careful where you stare, guys.”

That vague comment left everyone bemused but Spike inhaled through his nostrils and he let out an intrigued bay. The others also worked their noses and identified an odd, not unpleasant wet plant smell. Interest tugged, they picked up their pace until they came out into a wider tunnel where their eyes were dazzled.

“Wow.” Littlefoot said, and then squinted. “Ow.”

Chomper chuckled. “Yeah, I said something like that when I first saw it too.”

For covering the tunnel walls was a moss that emitted a glow. It was dim, no brighter than the buzzers whose rear ends could glow, but the greenish-gold was wondrous. It was everywhere, most of the lights barely shining out as small pinpricks but a few were clumped together enough that they actually pricked at their vision if they stared too directly at it. A few holes from above glinted morning light into the tunnel, providing the moss with the source to glow. It was like watching the bright circle shine through the green of leaves, only stranger and more beautiful. Littlefoot and the others took a moment to admire this surprise of nature.

“You were right, Chomper.” Ducky said. “It is interesting. It is, it is.”

“These are far from the only glowy plants we’ve seen.” Cera said. “Still, they’re fun to look at.”

Petrie flapped up to examine the less bright moss. He didn’t get too close, as though suspecting it might bite, but the wariness was mixed in with growing, sincere interest.

“It spooky.” Petrie said. “But…it pretty too. I don’t think it so bad.”

“Maybe not so bad to look at.” Ruby said. “But is it bad to taste? What do you say, Spike?”

Spike approached a nearby wall of moss, sniffing speculatively. After getting his muzzle near one spot, he nasally drank it in and considered what he got. Spike stepped back and shook his head, making a “nu-uh” sound.  Everyone else laughed.

“If Spike’s not going to touch it, then I’m not going to either.” Littlefoot giggled. He smiled warmly. “Thanks for showing us this, Chomper.”

“Hey, why see something amazing and not share it with your friends?” Chomper said modestly. He suddenly grinned. “And I’m not done sharing. There’s the water swimmers I told you about.”

He pointed at the river cleaving the tunnel ground into narrow paths. Narrowly shaped fish had just leapt out of the water, sailing through the air with translucent fins before diving out of sight. The others gasped and laughed with delight. Ducky jumped closer to the river.

“I can swim like that, I can, I can. Oh, I’m sure my brothers and sisters would love this. They like imitating water swimmers,” she turned to the others. “Does anyone want to see me try it?”

“Sure!” Littlefoot said. “Maybe we can start practicing it.”

“I don’t think everyone’s bodies is built for that.” Cera said.

“You did fine with Ducky’s swimming lessons,” Ruby pointed out. “And we did fine with her swimming lessons. So why can’t you do fine with this?”

Caught off guard, she bore everyone’s looks before leaning toward the water and wiggling with her tongue stuck out determinedly.

“Alright, you asked for it! I’m going to master that swimming technique.”

“Me too, me too!” Petrie said excitedly. “Swimming is like flying underwater, and me should be able to do the flying part.”

“I don’t want to be left out of this either.” Chomper said.

“Alright, you guys!” Ducky made a beckoning motion. “Follow my lead!”

So saying, the seven stood near the river edge, and leapt in. They stroked underwater and noted the short distance to the bottom before surfacing and swimming after the flying fish, who sailed more quickly ahead, unnerved by these strange new pursuers. Ducky built up speed and imitated the fish’s leaps with near perfection. The others were much less graceful. Petrie twirled in the air but fell on his back, Spike only achieved a few inches before falling with a great splash, Cera returned to the water in a belly flop, Ruby and Chomper only slid through the water faster, and Littlefoot unbalanced and rolled onto his side. They stumbled and bumped into each other, sending waves splashing in all directions. They were a jumbled mess. It would take a while to get the swimming move perfected.

Littlefoot resisted choking on water as he laughed. He kept an eye out for anyone who might get hurt from the chaos but that didn’t mitigate his enjoyment of this silly game. They were chasing odd fish, in a cave with glowing plants. As far as Littlefoot was concerned, his spirits couldn’t be higher. Being with those he considered as precious as family, exploring what was out there and playing to their heart’s content was what living should be. He treasured such days and hoped there were innumerable more to come. He was so cheerful that even this morning’s troubling sleep stories were far from his mind…

Meanwhile, farther back in the tunnel, Dil swam with Ichy as her passenger. It took a bit of a climb to get in here but Ichy swung his gaze about smugly. At last, they were in the fabled Great Valley and the whole population was theirs for the taking. So far, the only noise he heard was the rushing of water, the movements of the fish, and the activity of the valley from the holes above. From what he could overhear, the valley residents were oblivious to the threat passing beneath them. Yes, Ichy thought. As long as that ignorance remained, the pair wouldn’t have to be hungry for a long time to come.

Which was why he was disconcerted to hear the laughter of children up ahead. Ichy hopped closer to Dil’s ear.

“Do you hear that?” he whispered. “I didn’t know kids played here.”

Dil slowed to listen, and frowned. “Maybe some swimmers or underground types like to hang around here?”

“No, it doesn’t smell like this place has regular visitors other than water swimmers. These kids have the scent of being the usual dinosaurs I hear live the valley. They don’t seem like the type to hang around here.”

Dil hummed. “They do sound kind of familiar. Should we make them our first main course?”

“Let’s make sure no one knows where they are. If someone does know and we attack...that spells trouble for us.”

“Good call.” Dil replied. “I was going to tell you to get off anyway, your feet are still a bit too cold for my liking. Can’t you get that fixed?”

“My feet are fine. You cold-blooded animals are just too sensitive.” Ichy shook his head. “Never mind that. Let’s see if we can warm ourselves with these kids’ flesh.”

Grumbling, Dill nevertheless went low into the water, her nostrils peaking out. Rolling his eyes, Ichy flew close to the ceiling so the annoying moss lights wouldn’t give him away. As he neared the sound of laughing children, it became clear Ichy’s sense of smell was correct. These youths were mostly land dwelling types and from their splashing in the river, they were exploring. Ichy flew even closer to the kids, seven in all, attempting to eavesdrop.

“How much farther can we swim anyway?” The threehorn said breathlessly. “If we topple over a waterfall, I’m going to be mad at you.”

“Don’t worry.” A flyer did the backstroke. “Me could fly ahead and make sure nothing dangerous there.”

“And we have Spike and Chomper to sniff out anything like that.” A big mouth swimmer briefly jumped above the water, leading this group. “Besides, the water speed would change if a waterfall is coming.”

“Even if there’s no danger, we should go back at some point.” The longneck said reluctantly. “We didn’t exactly tell Mr. Clubtail where we were going, so if we get lost, our folks might have difficulty finding us.”

There were murmurs of agreement from the rest of the group, including the spiketail and two other kids but Ichy barely paid any attention to the latter pair. His eyes were wide. Dil’s sense of smell was correct about these kids being familiar. The flyer flipped clumsily in his swimming and for a moment, his eyes were gazing in Ichy’s direction. Ichy flinched but kept still and silent. The flyer looked away and continues his swim without any particular reaction. No one else looked up. Thankful they were wrapped up in their fun, he carefully zipped back to Dill.

“They’re free pickings.” Ichy said. “Oh, this is a reunion I can’t wait to have.”

“Reunion?” Dil repeated. “So we did meet them before. Did they see you?”

“One of them did look up but I don’t think any of them noticed me.”

“Stealthy, again.” Dil’s expression turned teasing. “You know, I’m kind of glad I almost ate you. It seemed to have scared you into becoming much better at skulking around for food.”

Ichy huffed. “I’ve always been stealthy. Not many noticed me before and I always want to improve. It’s just that I have had a great learning curve lately. Don’t think too highly of your contributions.”

“Yeah, well…all I care about is that your more useful now anyway.” Dil said. “Anyway, who are these kids we met before?”

“Well...” Ichy smiled. “You might recognize them if you get close enough and have a taste.”

Littlefoot, in the meantime, found his good cheer giving way to concern. Their splashing slowed, their attempts to imitate the leaps of their query (some of which were starting to succeed) draining their energy. They had long lost sight of the flying fish. This game wasn’t going to last for much longer. Littlefoot examined his surroundings keenly. There wasn’t as much of that glowing moss here and the even dimmer light level gave his earlier voiced worries more weight.

“I think we went far enough.” Littlefoot said. “Want to head out?”

“Definitely.” Ruby said. “My arms are definitely swimmed out.”

Petrie nodded.  “Me swimmed out too.”

“Yeah.” Ducky said. “Besides, it’s getting too dark to swim.”

Cera wasn’t pleased but said, “Well, if Ducky’s says so, maybe we should trek back.”

“I’ll use my sniffer.” Chomper said. “I admit, I haven’t gone this far out before. But I’ll try to retrace our steps.” He sniffed, and his brow furrowed. “Hmm, I didn’t smell this before.”

“What haven’t you smelled before, Chomper?” Littlefoot asked.

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Yeah, it does seem like different kinds of paranoia. Though Chomper has had the occasional outright fantastic fear such as when he believed Mr. Threehorn’s words that him losing a tooth meant he was literally going to fall apart. I could see why Chomper might fear Doc might come after him. At some point, gossip must pass out about how the Great Valley is so freaking weird that they allow a sharptooth adolescent to stay there. Still, they can both have the habit of jumping to the worst (and often inaccurate) conclusions about something, so it would be interesting to see what happens when that bounces off each other.

I can see a clash between Hyp and Cera if they were forced to work together on more than a passing basis, especially at their current age. Even if he isn’t as much of a jerk, Hyp might struggle to take the gang’s decisions during danger seriously due to their younger age. Cera likely sees him and his friends as less mature for their age and a bit of a dead weight especially in sink or swim situations (Which…holds a lot of truth, bless them). That is a recipe for conflict even on friendlier grounds, especially if their other friends aren’t present to hold them back and have them keep a cool head. Nevertheless, I can see Hyp coming to recognize that some of Cera’s judgements are sounder just by virtue of the many more dangerous situations she and the gang have been able to extricate themselves from. If he could pull his own weight enough to be useful, Cera could form a sort of respect for him and might consider some of his suggestions if they were actually good. They’d still likely butt heads for awhile, though, even if and when they become friends.

I think when they become older, they might handle conflicts a bit more maturely. Hyp might be still rough and a wise-tail, but I do think he might mellow as he grows up. I can see Cera becoming more easygoing too. At least they might recognize the need to put their prides aside and work collaboratively when the situation deigns it. I could see them using their clashing personalities as part of the good-natured exchange snark and roughhousing. They’d be still rough with one another but I’d think they have enough awareness about each other’s physical and emotional boundaries they wouldn’t go too far.

Anyway, another pair of characters who meeting could engender some interesting interactions might be…Shorty and Mo. Littlefoot’s mud brother and adopted, face-to-face. I think their interactions would be interesting, whether if they’re ignorant of that common connection and especially if they are.

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I don’t know if his vocabulary indicates his level of knowledge either way, but he can be trusting and innocent, qualities he does share with Chomper. I do see the believer point. The Bright Circle Celebration does show he’s the kind of person who celebrates a holiday because he does believe the story around it (Whereas Mr. Threehorn disbelieves, and Tria just think it’s a good opportunity for family and community time). I didn’t find all of Petrie’s fears realistic ones either – the various times he believes in bad luck, among other incidents (Alright, the belief in bad luck mightn’t be too farfetched in-universe ;]).

I didn’t admittedly consider Chomper paranoid fears in the TV series to be farfetched to his character in his two movie appearances. I guess I surmised he might have developed some fears as he grew older (Well, grow older by kids cartoon show standards) as many of us do and I kind of felt we only saw a small slice of his life in movie 5.

As for movie 14, the extent of Chomper and Petrie’s interactions were at the end, where Petrie asks why he and Ruby came, Chomper said they came to rescue the gang, and Petrie thanks them but proudly states that instead they do rescuing (of Bron). Chomper and Ruby are surprisingly chill about not being asked to come along. (I watch the movie on US Netflix. As for the TV series…there are other ways. >.>)

Moving onto other interactions…one I’d be interested in seeing more of is that between Cera and Hyp. I know in Hyp’s two appearances, he was often paired up with Littlefoot, but I was intrigued by the blinks of interaction between Hyp and Cera. When Cera demands he give their ball back in Hyp’s posse’s first appearance, she growls at him and he growls back. In some ways, they are foils to each other, which is made explicit with their fathers. Cera didn’t have much fondness for Hyp and his friends for understandable reasons but as the latter improve themselves, I can see her warming to him slightly.

Though the pair might still find each other annoying. Even if Hyp moves away from being a bully, he’d likely still get into trouble and be a wise-butt, and that’d annoy Cera. Hyp might find Cera a pain because she can match (or maybe even surpass him) in the snark territory and wouldn’t hesitate to point out anything weird or absurd they might be doing. Nevertheless, I can see the pair coming to enjoy the battle of snark and insults that happens when they are in hailing range and that becomes how they express a sort-of affection for each other. When either of them need assistance, especially with family matters, they could either be blunt and direct in telling the other to get ahold of themselves or more gently suggest how to pull themselves out of a problem.

So basically, they could have a scrappy yet affectionate sort of friendship. I can picture Cera saying “He’s like the big brother I’m glad I never had” and Hyp clapping a hand on her before saying, “She’s like the little sister that makes me glad my parents stopped at me.” Then she’d throw his hand off. An amusing and often roughhousingy kind of friendship. When Cera is bigger than him and he’s being annoying, I can see her (gently) stepping on top of him, either saying some variation of “Did you hear something” or “Pardon him, he needs a bit of rough treatment to shut his mouth.” Complete with her occasionally turning up the pressure to elicit some amusing “oophs” out of him. And Hyp might retaliate or induce being stepped by climbing over her and using her horns as a resting place. They would be careful not to really hurt each other but they’d annoy and rough one another up as one way to express affection and it’d be all in good fun.

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LBT Fanfiction / The Heroine Inside
« on: April 28, 2017, 09:43:25 PM »
Thanks for the review. I wanted to develop Ali’s character, and I guess I used her relationship with Rhett to do that. I thought there might a sort of schism when the pair had time to really think about what happened and what it said about their character. I’m glad to hear you found it believable.

The grownups arguing was more of a plot device to allow Ali and Rhett to get separated from their supervision, but I can see the comparison. I admit I do want to explore how these kids relate to the many errors and follies of the adults. These youths, especially the gang, must have the least illusions about the power and wisdom of adults and the greatness of adulthood. Yet it doesn’t change the fact that the gang love and value them any less, and would go to bat to make sure they’re happy and safe.

Yeah, I can see I played up Rhett’s cowardice a bit too much. I was focused on Ali and her development, so he fell by the wayside a bit. This is still her story, but I could have toned down Rhett’s fear.

What Rhett did in his TV appearance was a big dick move, but it’s hard for me to really hate a fictional character, especially youths who don’t fully grasp the consequences of their actions and can change and grow for the better. I prefer to understand characters, and look at things from their perspective. I even do this for characters like Redclaw, to try being faithful to (and sometimes make sense of) their canon characterization. Of course, I do have my own interests for where there characters would and should go, like with this fic where I try to steer Ali back to being bolder and more mischievous again. ;)

Once again, I appreciate the feedback.

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General Land Before Time / Character Interactions You’d Like to See
« on: April 22, 2017, 05:11:36 PM »
The most prominent interaction between Petrie and Chomper I remember is the TV episode where Petrie’s old nest is destroyed and have to move to a new one. Chomper assures him that it might scary but moving will be okay and Petrie defends Chomper from his siblings’ fear.

They do have more in common than you might suspect. They both have a sort of naÔve nature and can be a bit gullible. This comes into play especially in what they fear. Chomper can jump to the worst conclusions when nervous or scared, and he and Petrie can tend to believe any tall or scary tales others tell them.

I think that Chomper might be the sort to reassure Petrie of any worries he might have, though he mightn’t be always effective at it with his own occasional limited knowledge. I can see Chomper accidentally slipping some sharpteeth knowledge and conventions into his assurances, which would bemuse and disturb Petrie. But Petrie wouldn’t be too bothered by that, since that was how Chomper rolled.

Petrie might also assure Chomper of his worries as well, though the effectiveness might vary depending on the subject and Petrie’s knowledge. Chomper would appreciate the intent. I wouldn’t think they’re so naÔve or fearful that they might become a feedback loop of paranoia but I can see that occasionally rising up and either of them would stop it before it becomes too intense.

Several comments indicate that he actually enjoys moving around in high places, so he could go hang out with Petrie or explore someplace high the others mightn’t be too sure to climb or navigate. They can enjoy the wind and talk shop about current events and life there.

They’re also both energetic in ways. Petrie’s certainly not passive when a fear or worry starts to grip him. However, he can channel that nervous energy in loveably dorky ways in games. Chomper is pretty outgoing and cheerful sort. If there’s a game between them, I can picture it being quite outgoing and silly, though with either of them overwhelming the other like through, say, Chomper accidentally kicking a ball too hard at Petrie or Petrie overshooting in some way. They’d shake it off soon enough and not hold any grudges about it.

I don’t have much of a grasp on what their specific relationship would be like but it’d be pretty funny and sweet.

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LBT Fanfiction / The Heroine Inside
« on: April 18, 2017, 02:55:47 PM »
Thank you for the review. Don’t worry about being late, it can take time to read stories and compose a response to them. I say this from experience (Though yes, I often couldn’t resist checking for reviews like the desperate validation-seeker I can be). I didn’t realize I was doing analysis while writing the story, but looking back, I can see where that happens. I’m trying to explain Ali’s mindset and gel her characterizations from her two appearances, and how to get her back to her earlier bold nature. As for Rhett, I thought having him redeemed as yet another Jerk With A Heart Of Gold (i.e. Cera, Hyp, etc.) might be boring, so I tried to steer him in a different, yet still hopefully in-character direction.
   
As for why Ali was a bit harsh with Rhett near the end (I assume that’s what you mean by damning)…I was trying to balance between Ali being forgiving and not letting Rhett off too easily for all that he had done. I’ve read interesting analysis about the errors that can happen in apologies and forgiveness that don’t bury the hatchet or repair a relationship, and wanted to get it right so it’d be clear the pair were rebooting their bond on a healthier front.

I do see the point about Rhett being too irrational and Ali cold-headed. Since Rhett seemed to like hero stories, I could have delved a bit more into that with his reaction to being in the sinking sands, trying to be brave even though being brave in a story about danger is different than being brave in actual danger. Ali only had one or two extra adventures as experience, so I could have had her be more nervous and unsure at points even after she regains her confidence. It’s something I’ll think about when the pair pop up in my fics again (And they will in at least one or two instances).

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LBT Fanfiction / The Heroine Inside
« on: April 14, 2017, 06:51:08 PM »
Fanfiction.net Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12451580/1/The-Heroine-Inside

Summary: While journeying through the edges of the Land of Mists, Rhett falls in sinking sands that will swallow him whole. With no one else around, can Ali rediscover the courage inside her and rescue him?

Notes: Much shorter than Familial Tour, only several paragraphs over eighteen pages. This was my challenge to myself, to have a story about Ali that doesn't involve romance at all. I learned a bit more about Ali and became fonder of her while writing. As before, I nipped and tucked and edited this through the past couple weeks until it was up to snuff.

As a aside, you don't know how many times I mentally double-taked to make sure I didn't misspell the title as some kind of drug. So without further to do:

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The Heroine Inside

by

DaveTheAnalyzer


Ali skipped around between the roots, making sure to keep her mother’s legs in the corner of her eye. Being back near the Land of Mists wasn’t a pleasant experience but there were only so many lands they could migrate through before they found themselves back in familiar territory. Old One had opted the longneck herd go through the less dangerous areas of their former homeland, where there were a few unusual tree denizens and craggly roots snaking through the earth but otherwise nothing that could be truly deigned a threat. Ali didn’t mind the roots. It was an entertaining way to play hopscotch and she giggled as he jumped between one sets of roots to another, barely dodging some of the sharper ones.

“This is fun, Mother.” Ali said.

Ali’s mother chuckled. “At least someone is enjoying herself. I’m afraid I can’t join in. If me or any of other grownup decided to join in, we would be causing a earthshake.”

Ali smiled. The mental image of any adult herd member, particularly the solemn and dignified Old One, partaking in the game was quite amusing. Even if there was no one else participating, at least she had the image of the herd hopping along and causing an earthshake to make her giggle.

She neared a few of the bushes and chanced going near them to glance into the leaves. Ever since her meeting with Tickles, she had grown a bit less afraid of the wildlife around here and she got in trouble for talking to strange creatures more than once. It was true she didn’t know what creatures she encountered might be friend or foe but some of them were quite amazing and if she could make a friend out of them, why turn down the chance? She peaked in one bush and saw the scurry of a disturbed insect. She peaked into another and found nothing notable. She checked the third bush. Green eyes stared back at her.

Ali yelped. So did the bush. After a rustle of leaves, a fellow juvenile longneck fought his way out and blinked bemusedly at her. Ali felt a twinge in her stomach.

“Um, hello Rhett,” she said softly.

“Oh.” Rhett said, recognizing her. “Hi Ali…”

The two stood there awkwardly. Ever since they left the Great Valley, Ali hadn’t gone out of her way to interact with Rhett. Though the pair did get along when they played with Littlefoot and his friends, the full magnitude of Rhett’s lies and what they almost made their herdo do had since sunk in. Guilt flashed through Ali, and she had a hard time maintaining eye contact. When the silence stretched on, Rhett attempted to fill it.

“So…” he dug a foot into the dirt awkwardly. “What were you doing looking through the bushes?”

“Exploring.” Ali said. “What were you doing in the bushes?”

“Playing. I was pretending to be a stealthy hero against the wild but I got spotted so…” Rhett trailed off. “Anyway, I’d better get back to my mom and dad.”

He hastily moved out of the foliage but he tripped on a branch and stumbled. One leg got tangled in a vine, his body went under another vine, and through his clumsy attempts to get out, he soon found himself tied up and pinned where he was. The sounds of his exertion drew the attention of some herd members. Rhett’s parents walked in.

“Rhett, what are you doing?” Rhett’s mother said exasperatedly. “Get out from under there.”

“I didn’t exactly intend to do this.” Rhett said defensively. “I’m too tied up to get out.”

His parents sighed and went down, biting vines around their son until they went to pieces. They helped Rhett pull himself out and ushered him off. Ali caught Rhett’s father whispering as they went by.

“Those are what your lies nearly did to you, Rhett. Be careful. We’re in a delicate position with the herd now.”

Rhett put his head down and the family tried to disappear into the herd. Ali watched with a bit of shame in her stomach.

*Why did I ever believe him?*

She already knew the answer. She had been thinking about it ever since the truth had been revealed and there was a lot of time to think when you were migrating. She didn’t like the conclusions she came to but she couldn’t turn away from the facts laid out before her.

As a member of a migrating herd, there were few chances to meet fellow children she would click with and be able to play with for any length of time. She had been taught to have some wariness of strangers, especially those of different species, so she led somewhat of a solitary life. To compensate, when she did meet other kids, she played and committed mischief with all her heart. She rarely expected things to be much different.

Her expectations changed when she met Littlefoot and the others. The loyalty that eclipsed species, the way everyone helped each other in times of danger, and soldiered on…she never encountered such a bond from children around her own age and she was surprised to find she fit right in. There, she found friends she became close to during a span of time that felt a lot longer than two days. It was exciting, terrifying, uncertain, and overall wonderful.

And within twenty-four hours of returning to the valley, she rejoined her herd and everything was back to the usual routine.

Everything changed after that. Gradually, Ali found herself feeling lonely, which she didn’t notice before she experienced that tight bond with Littlefoot and the others. There weren’t that many children in Ali’s herd. When she did interact with the children that were present, it was hard to forge the same kind of tight bond. Eventually, Ali found herself alone and though she made the most of it and spent a lot of time with her mother and other favored adults, she soon found herself wishing she had someone she can be with.

That was where Rhett came in. When their two herds merged, Rhett appeared interested in playing with Ali and talked frequently about his heroic exploits. Though some of these tales stretched credibility, she told herself her experiences with Littlefoot’s group showed there were children who engaged in dangerous adventures and it was nice to have someone to play with. Even when it became clear Rhett was inclined to call the shots in their games, Ali was reluctant to call him out on it. Ali looked back on those moments with shame. She thought she was quite bold sort, always trying to be polite, but not willing to take someone’s nonsense when the chips were down. Here, though, Ali saw how her delicate her courage was in the face of loneliness.

Rhett himself was also lost. With his lies exposed and weighed with the knowledge of nearly having Chomper killed, he didn’t know how to present himself. He still occasionally indulged in hero games but the other children didn’t want to have much to do with him and that passion was a major topic in his lies in the first place. It appeared he didn’t want to have anything to do with that lying anymore, but Ali wasn’t sure if they could be friends again. They were too awkward around each other to do more than exchange a few sentences before leaving, each reminding the other of their major follies.

Ali shook her head. It was too much to think about now. She would leave the possibility of her and Rhett’s relationship for the future to decide. Currently, she put her concentration on walking like everyone else.

The herd eventually chose to rest sometime after noon, lying very closely together in one corner of a misty clearing as they deliberated on where to travel next. Old One wanted to scout ahead. There was a path up ahead that would take them swiftly to their next destination but there were steep slopes on either side and with the land changing, one can never be sure how stable it would be.

“It would be best if only a few of our smaller brethren accompanied me.” Old One was saying. “We don’t want to endanger ourselves any more than we have to. In the meantime, rest here and be on the lookout for any danger.”

There were a few nods and the herd settled in a wide clearing while Old One and a few volunteers disappeared up the path. Ali’s mother watched them go with some concern.

“I hope it will be safe. I don’t much like the thought of having to travel another way.”

“We should take that other route anyway,” said a herd member. “It might be longer but it hasn’t changed like everything else, so it’s safer.”

“It might have changed in ways we haven’t noticed,” said a third herd member. “We might have to check it too. Hopefully, Old One will find that path is still useable and we can be on our way.”

“Still, if and when it does breakdown, we’re going to have to look for other places and…”

Several grownups fell into a debate about whether to take new routes now or wait until the old route became unavailable. Ali tried to follow the conversation on her mother’s behalf but her eyes soon glazed over and it became so mind-numbing she wandered off a good distance until she could barely hear them. She could still see them, their figures slightly obscured by mist, but visible. She snacked from the bushes, hoping they would be done debating by the time she filled her stomach. If being an adult meant you still walked around in confusion and worry, she mused, than it didn’t live up to its hype.

There were steps behind her.

“Hey, mind if I eat here?”

Ali looked up and found Rhett standing there.

“Be my guest,” she kept her voice even. “There’s plenty of space.”

Rhett stood on the edge of the bush and began eating from it. Attempting not to step away, Ali kept chewing, aware of every movement he took, not sure what was the point of this association.

“So…it looks like we might be here for a while.” Ali said finally.

Rhett nodded vaguely. “The grownups are still arguing.”

“And those who aren’t are just resting. I don’t want to do that.”

“Me neither.” Rhett agreed. “So should we do something else?”

“Hmm?” Ali said. “How about hide and seek?”

“Together? Um, we won’t stray far from the herd, right?”

“There are plenty of places to hide here, right?”

“Of course.” Rhett said, encouraged. “You better hide good then?”

Ali stared. “I’m going to be the hider?”

“Yeah. Why, do you want something else?”

Ali hesitated. “It’s fine,” she couldn’t resist adding. “I guess evading you would be fun.”

“Hey, watch it.” Rhett said, though he appeared buoyed by the banter. “You’d better get hiding then.”

Rhett turned around and started counting. Smiling in spite of herself, Ali turned and began running around the edges of the clearing. There were so many bushes to hide in but they would be all obvious to a seeker. So where else could she go? There was a cave in the distance but he would think to look there. Ali discounted hiding in trees since climbing would be dangerous (unless it was a very small tree). Eventually, Ali found a hole near a tree trunk that she could just squeeze into. It was an easy to miss thing, a bit obscured by tree roots, and Ali pushed herself into the shadows as Rhett finished his countdown.

“Ready or not, here I come.”

Immediately, she heard a rustle as Rhett nosed through the immediate foliage. Ali held in her giggles as his footsteps went away, came back, and went away again in his search. Rhett’s voice sometimes became audible.

“I will find you…there aren’t that many places to hide…”

There was the creak of rocks being shifted, the crackle of wood being swept aside, among other sounds. Rhett was doing his best to be thorough. Ali’s regret at being unable to challenge Rhett’s suggestion was giving away. If Rhett had to be the seeker, at least Ali could have some fun by outwitting him. The footsteps suddenly came very close and Ali stilled as a shadow appeared and seemed to pause over the hole. She saw the shadow of his head swing and for a heart-stopping second, she thought he found the hole.

Then he walked on. “You’re harder to find than I thought…”

There was an odd tone in that voice, as though Rhett was both frustrated and amused by his lack of success. Rhett hadn’t been that way before. Ali allowed a smile to cross her face. Maybe there was a chance they could get along better after all. If any of his old habits came back and Ali pushed back, he might be more receptive to the critique. Ali hoped she would regain the metal to call him out on this but she couldn’t help but fear the pair were still on too tentative ground to be open about it. Ali shook her head. This was a time to have fun, not worry personal and relationship issues.

Rhett’s footsteps vanished up ahead and Ali prepared herself for a bit of a wait. With these games, there was sometimes an uncertainty about when to conclude them. Ali didn’t want to stay in here forever and wondered if she would leave when Rhett made a noise of surrender or when a certain amount of time had passed. Soon all she could hear were the trills of insects, the skitters of furry creatures, the whish of the early afternoon wind. She couldn’t even hear the arguments from the herd. She had wandered a bit far to get this hiding place. For a moment, there was a flash of worry that she and Rhett might be too distant from their herd. Then she dismissed the thought before it could clamp down on her. There was the rustle of rocks in the distance and Ali couldn’t hold back a quiet sigh. Either Rhett was going to find her or he wasn’t. She just hoped this wouldn’t go on so long she would get bored of the game.

She was broken out of her thoughts by the sound of a petrified scream.

Heart in her throat, Ali jumped and squeezed out of her hideaway before sprinting as fast as possible. The mist cleared, revealing the screams were coming from a small cave opening in a hill of rock. It took more seconds than she liked to reach the cave, jump over the boulder covered in vines, and see inside.

“Help, Ali!” Rhett cried. “I can’t get out!”

For a moment, all Ali could do was stare, mind frozen in horror. Rhett was struggling in a pond of dark sinking sand a few feet into the cave, his forelegs moving desperately to stay above afloat. He was already halfway consumed and more of him was slowly but steadily sinking into the sand. His cries for help made Ali shake herself.

“Hang on, Rhett!” Ali said. “I’ll – I’ll do something!”

Ali dropped down from the boulder and got as close to the sinking sands as she dared. She didn’t know what she was doing but she got on her toes and swung her long neck out for him to grab. Rhett made a few swings with his hand but there was still plenty of feet between them.

“I can’t reach!” he said.

Ali tried out with her tail, stretching as far as it would go. She watched with a turned head as Rhett thrust his forelegs forward, attempting to use momentum to get himself closer to her, but his teeth kept napping at thin air over and over again.

“That doesn’t work either!” he cried. “Ali, help!”

Ali swung her head about, breathing rapidly. “What do I do? How do I help him – wait!”

Her eyes caught sight of the boulder covered in vines, recalling how similar vines had pinned Rhett down before. Quickly, she reared on her hind legs and searched for the most solid and well-connected vine of the bunch before she gripped her teeth on it and crunched down until she felt the thick plant matter part under her jaw muscles. Once that was secure, she returned to the sinking sands with the vine gripped in her mouth.

“Rhett, catch!”

She threw the vine over and Rhett made a grab for it. There was a small obscuring splash and Ali feared a moment that Rhett had missed again but he surfaced with the vine firmly gripped in his teeth. He grabbed more of the vine with his forelegs and gripped it tightly, stabilizing himself.

Even so, that wasn’t the solution to their problem. Rhett attempted to pull himself out with the vine but he could only move a few inches before the sinking sands sucked him back in. The sinking sands was a weaker version of tar – there was far more ability to move but it still stuck to anyone trapped within it like glue. Rhett panted, his briefly moderated fear now surging back out of control.

“I – I can’t get out!” Rhett said muffledly, panicked.

“Hold on, I’ll call for help!” Ali said. “Just hang on tight. We’ll get through this.”

“No, don’t leave me!”

Her heart trembled from that plea but there was nothing else she could do but get the assistance of those larger and stronger than her. She leapt out of the cave opening and went ahead a few paces, calling out.

“Help! Rhett is trapped in sinking sands in a cave! We need help!”

There was no response. The mist obscured the herd from view. She still couldn’t hear their debate or any sound from them. Have she and Rhett really wandered that far from the group? She took a few more steps out but found herself rooted to the spot. She couldn’t leave Rhett here. If his grip slipped and he needed help, there would be no one there to give it to him. Ali settled for shouting louder, raising the pitch of her voice until it cracked.

“Everyone, help! This is Ali! Rhett is stuck in the sinking sands of a cave! He needs to be rescued! Can anyone hear me? We – need – help!”
 
Her voice echoed out into the clearing, vanishing into the fog. Several seconds passed but there was no sound of response. Ignoring the tears stinging at the corner of her eyes, Ali screamed once more.

“Is there anyone out there who can hear this? Help us! Please…help us!”

Again, nothing. Ali panted, the full implications of the answering silence coming to her. Yes, they must be still debating about which path to take. In such an absorbing conversation, even those not taking part would be oblivious to any distant voice calling out for them, especially the voice of a child. No matter how loud Ali shouted, there was only so much distance her voice can be carried and right now she was too far to be heard by any members of the heard.

*That’s not all. They probably wouldn’t be able to fit.*

Ali turned to examine the cave opening. It was quite small – a longneck head wouldn’t be able to fit in and, though a tail might, not for very far. The tail wielder wouldn’t be able to see where they were going and could possibly cause a cave-in. The same result could happen if they attempted to make a bigger hole for their heads. Either way, the larger members of the herd would be of limited help to Rhett. Which left only one person that could really save him.

*It’s me. I have to do something.*

A trill of trepidation went from Ali’s heart down to her body. She really needed to find the right strategy to rescue Rhett. If she wasn’t careful, she could get dragged down with him. The sinking sands were sticky and difficult to get unhooked from. One wrong move, and no one would probably ever know what happened to the two. Would Ali be able to save Rhett successfully? Ali had little if any idea whatsoever of how to accomplish this. Saving another life was a huge responsibility and her mind buckled under its weight.

*Hang on. I did save someone else before.*

Immediately, she went back to the time she journeyed with Littlefoot and the others, when Cera had fallen into fast water and was menaced by that sharpbeak and bellydragger. For a moment, it didn’t seem like there was much that could really save her. But Ali looked around and a plan opened up to her, one that led her down to river shore, up atop a snarling bellydragger and to Cera’s rescue. Not much thought has been spared about the great risks involved. Despite her fears, whatever the consequences, she didn’t let anything stop her from doing the right thing and not only did it save Cera, it earned Ali her friendship. Ali always used to do right for herself and others but she let her loneliness in the cold times since weaken her resolve. Ali began to think if she let things be, it would sort itself out. But she was wrong. Sometimes, whatever might go wrong, the only solution was action.

And the only thing that would save Rhett, whatever the risks, was action.

Breathing carefully, Ali forced calm to cool through the fear buzzing in her veins. A solution. She needed a solution. She returned to the cave entrance, examining her environment as she did so. There was little she could do with leaves and it would take too long to cut down and drag a branch here. But as she walked on the boulder, she felt another kind of plant matter beneath her feet. Maybe the vines could be of help?

“Ali, did you get help? Are they coming?”

She saw Rhett, dirtier than ever, having sunk a bit deeper into the sinking sands and holding on desperately for dear life. The vine was already being used as a stopgap measure, Ali realized. It was only able to keep Rhett from sinking any further but there was only so long it would be able to fulfill that purpose. She couldn’t be able to pull him out of the muck with only her teeth while he barely held on with his own teeth and forelegs. Unless…there might be more than one way to use the vines.

“They couldn’t hear me.” Ali replied. “I couldn’t stray far but…hang on. I’m going to get you out. I have a plan. I just need you to be strong for a bit longer.”

Rhett whimpered. “I don’t know how much longer I can hold on.”

Still, he redoubled his hold on the vine. With his words in mind, Ali quickly inspected the rock and its vines, finding places to snip them here and there, making sure they were extra-long in case she misjudged the distance. At last, she dragged several ropes of vine off the rock before she sat down and started wrapping it around her legs, tail, middle, and other firm parts of her body.

“What are you doing?” Rhett demanded.

“Making sure all the vines will stay tied to me.” Ali replied, making sure each vine was knotted firmly. “I’m going to need all the strength I have for this. Making sure they’re all in the right place to use my strength is important. You’re going to have to tie those vines around your body before your front legs so you won’t slip out of them and I can pull you out.”

“Tie them around me? I might sink faster if I let go of this vine!”

“You’ll still hold on with your mouth but you’ll have your paws free to tie in the vines.” Ali admitted.

Rhett shuddered. “I don’t know if I can do this.”

“It’ll be okay.” Ali said. “Just follow what I say. Please, try to be brave like the hero you pretended to be.”

Rhett’s breathing reluctantly calmed. “Okay. I’ll try.”

Nodding, Ali finished tying vines around herself before she dragged the loose ends to the edge of the sinking sands. She tossed out the vines around her neck. He freed his forefeet and barely caught it. She made a reassuring head gesture, grabbing the vine keeping Rhett afloat with her teeth and tail.

“Wrap that around yourself and when you tie it, make sure the knot’s in front of your chest.” Ali instructed.

“Easier said than done when you’re sinking.” Rhett muttered.

Nevertheless, he followed Ali’s careful instructions, quickly rolling one vine around his chest before tying it firmly. He did the same with the next vine Ali provided him and the next. Nearly every time, Rhett almost missed catching the vine. One time, he completely missed and had to fish it out of the sinking sands before it got stuck there. Nevertheless, he managed to keep hold until at last he had all of the vines tied around himself. Ali gave a tug from her tail vine to make sure it was solid

“Alright, when I say so, let go of the vine in your mouth and keep still.” Ali said. “I’m going to drag you out of there and it would help if I meet as little resistance as possible.”

“I’m not sure about this.” Rhett said, shaking a bit.

“We’ll get through this.” Ali replied firmly. She put her back to him and dug her feet into the dirt. “On my count. One, two…”

The vine Rhett held on to tremored, as though his fear was being transferred down it. Ali tried to ignore the tremors going through her as she steeled herself to pronounce the decisive number.

“…three! Now!”

There was a hesitant pause and then the vine in the grip of her teeth and tail went slack as she felt a great weight press at her skin. Letting go of that vine, Ali thrust one leg forward, then another, beginning the laborious process of pulling Rhett out of the sands.

She knew it would be hard, but she was guilty to be surprised at how hard it was. Putting one foot in front of the other was slow work. Her muscles seared with each movement, the vines tight and digging into her skin. It was a struggle to not be dragged back by Rhett’s weight. She could hear the sound of him being pulled through the sinking sands, with the slight crackle of the stickiness as it slowly thinned and snapped away from him. Rhett came across a batch that became particularly attached to him but Ali doubled her efforts and she managed to get him free and slide him through the next several inches. This happened two or three more times, but Ali was glad to find they weren’t insurmountable obstacles and a bit more effort got Rhett through it with only sore skin to show for it.

She could hear Rhett breathing hard as this happened. Glancing back a few times, Ali saw Rhett mostly kept still but there was panic just below his eyes and Ali feared how long he could keep it down. She was a quarter of the way to the cave entrance, she told herself. She was making progress, this wouldn’t take forever. She made sure her movements weren’t too abrupt or nervous less her own trepidations traveled down to him.

Rhett was more than halfway through the sinking sands and the vines attached to him never showed any signs of give. Ali wouldn’t have to worry about any of them snapping, she thought with relief. Rhett had worryingly sunk a bit lower along the way but he seemed to manage himself fine until he slowed to a stop amid a patch of particularly stubborn sticky sand.

“I’m stuck.” Rhett said.

“Don’t worry, I’m working on it.” Ali reassured.

Ali pulled hard, but she only felt the slightest give from the sand. Rhett’s breaths quickened.

“I’m not moving.” There was a slight sloshing, as though he attempted to jerk himself out. “It’s not getting off. What now…what now?”

“Stop moving!” Ali said. “You’ll only make it worse.”

“How much worse can things get? I’m going to die,” his breathing rose another octave. “Oh no, I’m going to die!”

“Don’t panic. That doesn’t lead anywhere and you’ll…”

Rhett had fallen beyond reason. He screamed in fear and flung his legs desperately in a futile attempt to free himself, only attaching other parts of himself to that strong sticky patch and quickening his descent into the sand. The struggling overcame her strength and Ali gasped as she was dragged back, leaving thicker grooves in the ground. She grappled the earth but no sooner did she put a foot in front of herself that it got pulled past where she started. She was being sucked toward the sinking sands and no matter what she grabbed or thought of, there was nothing that seemed to stop it. Despair rose in her.

*Maybe this was too big for me to begin with.* Ali thought.

Much less of Rhett could be seen now. Only the parts above his shoulders were visible and his flailing weakened, either by the constricting sand or exhaustion. The desperation drained out of him, leaving him shaking with fear. A little whimper escaped and a tear slid slowly down his cheek. He was terrified of death, he didn’t want to die, but he saw no way out and he could only despair at the fate the circle of life placed him in. Ali’s heart seized at the sight.

*I couldn’t save him. If only I really called for help, maybe this wouldn’t have happened.*

She felt her tail and then her rear feet come in contact with the sand. She attempted to pull herself out but her heart wasn’t really into it. She was moving on self-preserving instinct, helplessness numbing her. As more of her sank into the sand, she listlessly wished there was more she could have done.

*Wait…could there be more?*

It didn’t seem possible but she found herself thinking about the second time she visited the valley. Littlefoot and the others’ plot to reveal Rhett’s lies blew up in their faces when Rhett led the herd to deal with Chomper. Trying to stop a whole crowd of adult longnecks from hurting one sharptooth youth should have been considered hopeless. But Littlefoot and his friends rallied. The gang pinpointed where Chomper and the herd were going, found the quickest route to intercept them, and stood bravely in front of their friend as they pacified the herd with the truth. It had gotten the kids a scolding but everything worked out because they worked together. Without their hope and cooperation, their sharptooth friend mightn’t have survived that day. At that time, Ali learned that even if a mistake was made in a dangerous situation, there was always a way to survive, especially if you have friends and loved ones who trusted and listened to each other.

Ali didn’t have that many people by her side at the moment but there was one person with her who could cooperate. But he wasn’t listening, just as he always didn’t listen. A hot outrage seized her.

Stop moving, Rhett!”

Rhett froze, shocked out of his own misery. He never heard Ali speak with such a whip-like tone. It was like the sound of a branch snapping after being bent too far for too long. Ali stared at Rhett, panting.

“Look at what you’re doing,” she said. “You’re endangering both of us.”

“What? But I didn’t -” Rhett stammered.

“Because you didn’t listen to me, you sank even deeper into the sinking sands and now I’m caught up in it too. We could both get swallowed up here.”

“I’m scared. How else should I react?”

“There’s nothing wrong with being scared.” Ali then glared. “But you should have trusted me to get you out of this. Rescue requires trust from both people but because you thought I couldn’t do anything, it’ll be a lot harder to get out.”

Rhett appeared floored. He looked at his own sunken state and how Ali was halfway enveloped by the sinking sands with new eyes. After a moment, shame settled in him.

“You’re…you’re right.” Rhett mumbled. “Because of me…we’re both going to die.”

Unexpectedly, Ali smiled. “I said it would be a lot harder. I didn’t say it was going to be impossible. My front feet are still on the ground and my back feet can still feel the wall. With a bit of teamwork, I’m sure we’ll be able to get out of here. Will you be able to do that?”

Rhett stared. Then he nodded slowly, not moving at all.

That was all the assurance Ali needed. She turned her attention forward, scrapping her forelegs hard against the edge, her rear legs finding the wall of the sinking sands and attempting to gain purchase. She dug and kicked and scraped with increasing persistence. She worked herself up until she could move faster than the sands could suck her in. Ali could feel how strong and sticky the sands were but slowly her forefeet inched forward, the sandy strands being pulled away. Soon all four of her feet were on firm earth and now the hard work was going to start.

Using all the strength in her body, she began the process of regaining ground. Though the vines were coated in sand, they were strong as ever. She felt them tighten and yet hold as she moved, feeling them constrict her limbs and cutoff some of her blood supply. She made one step and another, one step and another and Rhett was pulled along, not moving, alternating between closing his eyes to calm himself and staring at her in amazement. He got pulled up a bit but he was primarily tugged across, making slow and glacial progress.

Ali occasionally got stopped in her tracks by Rhett getting stuck in a particularly sticky sand spot but redoubling her efforts and not giving quarter usually freed him in the end. The challenge was made all the easier because Rhett remained perfectly still, making no more than the occasional grunt when some of the stickiness pulled away a bit of skin. That suited Ali just fine, because she needed as little distractions as possible.

By the time she neared the boulder, her muscles were sore and flaring with protest. It took all the will she had to make them move according to her decisions. Rhett was so close to the edge now, his forefeet inches away from grabbing solid terra firma. Ali just needed to use a bit more strength to pull him across. Gritting her teeth, she strained one front leg forward and then another. The sticky sand let out its biggest sound of protest from the exertion yet. Encouraged, Ali ignored the pain everywhere in her in favor of keeping going. Almost. So close, so close…

There was a hasty slop and Ali turned to see Rhett had his forefeet on dry land and was hastily pulling himself out of the muck, the sticky strands attached to him thinning and coming apart. Covered in dirt on almost every part of his body, he shook the last of the stubborn strands and galloped toward the cave exit as though the sinking sands pursued him. Ali didn’t object, also moving quickly to get out of this cave.

They scrambled up the boulder and managed to get back outside without somehow not falling flat on their faces, the vines flopping all around them. Ali laid against the boulder while Rhett flopped onto the ground. They both panted, exhausted to the bone, and putting everything else aside to just recover from their near death ordeal. Slowly, though, Rhett turned his head to Ali in wonder.

“That – amazing. You – you saved me.”

Ali didn’t answer right away. The two sentences lodged into her brain. Gradually she stood up. She wouldn’t go so far as to seriously call herself amazing – ingrained politeness still had some hold on her – but pride now filled her. She had saved someone. Through taking action and doing all she could, she pulled a fellow youth out of the sinking sands and he now lay alive beside her. She was sore, dirty, and exhausted but a completeness filled her that hadn’t been there for a long time. She had made the right decision. There were times where one needed to be brave and draw no quarter to anyone in order to get things done. Though she didn’t want to go out of her way to be mean, she felt much less hesitation with being honest with her companion as well.

“I did.” Ali said quietly. “You didn’t make it easy though.”

Rhett stiffened before he lowered his head. “I’m sorry. I’ve been screwing up, haven’t I?”

Ali stared ahead. “Something like that.”

“Did I screw you up?”

“It wasn’t just you.” Ali then added. “But you didn’t help matters.”

Rhett was quiet for a moment. “Why did you even save me, if I did those bad things to you?”

“Because it was the right thing to do.” Ali replied. “Not saving you never occurred to me.”

“I didn’t think that. When Chomper pretended to hunt us and you asked for my help, my first thought was just to run away. It all turned out to be fake…but I still abandoned you. And I hurt you enough that you didn’t do anything yourself but turn to me for help. I thought you were just a playmate before but…”

“You’re finding there’s more to me than meets the eye?” Ali suggested.

“Much more interesting than all the lies I came up with.” Rhett agreed with a bit of a laugh. “You had much more of an idea of what to do than I ever would. I wondered if I would make it and that you saved me even after all I did…” he shook his head. “I’ll listen to you more from now on. Count on it.”

“I’m not going to be wise all the time. I’m a kid like you too.” But Ali smiled, finally meeting his eyes. “Still, it’s nice to hear that. I’ll hear you over if you hear me over. Is that a fair deal?”

“Sure.” Rhett got to his feet. “Should we be getting home now? The others are sure to be worrying about-”

As he spoke, he began walking off and tripped over the vines tangled around him. He lay there stunned before shaking his head and standing up but the vines had tangled themselves even more between his legs. He could only move his limbs halfway and he wobbled before flopping on his side, twitching among his bindings.

“Um...I think I might need some help,” Rhett said sheepishly.

“Don’t worry, I don’t think this will be – whoa!”

Ali attempted to follow, only to find her own legs restricted by vines and she also fell. She blinked down and moved experimentally to find there wasn’t much give.

“Looks like we’re both stuck.” Ali admitted.

“Yeah, and we’re dirty too. We don’t exactly look like fine and mighty longnecks.”

Ali realized he was right. She appraised Rhett and saw he had been more tied up than he was earlier in the day, forcing his legs and tail to stick out at odd but harmless angles. He was covered from head to toe in sandy muck and even though his head hadn’t got enveloped it was still splattered from being dragged to safety. Ali was in a similar state. Though she hadn’t sank as far into the sinking sands as Rhett, she was just as messy and held hostage by the vines. That combined with the incredulous expressions they both wore caused Ali to giggle. She found it hard to stop.

“What’s so funny?” Rhett said, baffled.

“You’re right. We aren’t fine and mighty. Look at how silly we look.”

Ali continued laughing. Confused, Rhett looked at his own mucked up state, at Ali’s, and back again. Something clicked, and a grin split his face. His laughing started low but in spite of himself, it rose until it match Ali’s. Their hysterical laughter echoed throughout the clearing and they alternated between rolling on the ground and pounding the dirt. It was such a relief to find something to laugh about, especially something that contrasted so sharply with that frightening experience, and it took a while for the pair to come down enough to be able to form words.

“We – we should probably go.” Ali shook a tear from her face. “The herd is probably wondering where we are.”

“But we’re still stuck here.” Rhett said, breathless.

“Don’t worry, we just need to bite through them. It’s hard but if we choose the right vines…”

Looking down, Ali selectively bit the vines connected to her neck, legs, and tail. She tugged and pushed, and they eventually came apart enough that she could crawl out to freedom. Rhett watched her enviously.

“Um, a bit of help here. I would do the same, but they’re all covered in dirt.”

Ali gave Rhett a dry look and Rhett had the grace to appear sheepish. Grimacing, he put his teeth around the vines attached to his chest and Ali did the best she could to cut through the ones that connected to hers. Rhett had to spit out some grim but he freed himself all the same. Exchanging tired but amused shakes of the head, they made their way back to the herd’s resting spot.

They found an aggregate of worried longnecks, some searching the area while others whispered worriedly among themselves, their tones full of confusion and dread. Marshalling them all was Old One, who had returned from her scouting mission and was maintaining calm throughout the ordeal.

“…keep a clear head,” she was saying. “They can’t have wandered far. We must go to where they have last been seen, follow any tracks they might have left behind, and spread out from there. Now does anyone remember where they have last been seen?”

“I was kind of distracted but I’m sure they went in that – that…” Ali’s mother turned to point with her head but froze. “They’re coming in our direction.”

The others stared in confusion before they noticed Ali and Rhett’s return. They gawped at the pair’s sudden appearance and dirty personage before crowding in close, angry and concerned.

“Where have you been?” Ali’s mother demanded. “We’ve been worried.”

“You can’t just disappear on us like this.” Rhett’s father said. “Why are you in that state?”

“Um,” Rhett averted his gaze, “we – I kind of got stuck in sinking sands.”

“Sinking sands?” Rhett’s mother said sharply. “Where? When? How?”

“In the caves over there.” Ali answered, waving back to the where the pair came from. “We were playing hide and seek, so he looked in there and fell in. It was hard but we managed to get out.”

“You mean the sinking sands in the cave.” Old One asked. “Those sinking sands?”

“Are there any others around here?” Rhett replied, looking around nervously as though afraid those other sinking sands were about to pounce him.

The others exchanged looks of disbelief.

“Around this area, there is only the sinking sands in the cave.” Old One said finally. “And they have taken many young ones and smaller dinosaurs. We never heard of anyone escaping from them before.”

Whispers rose up from the herd. Ali took a moment to digest this. Now that she thought about it, that sinking sand was especially sticky. It took all of her efforts to pull Rhett through it. No wonder the herd stayed away from that part of the clearing. She knew that cave of sinking sands was dangerous while fighting for their lives but with this new information, Ali looked back on the experience with a bit of a chill.

“I didn’t know any of that.” Ali said quietly.

“Me either.” Rhett said, looking green.

“It’s a good thing your ignorance wasn’t your downfall then.” Old One replied sternly. “You should count yourselves fortunate for surviving such a danger, especially after wandering away from adult supervision. I hope this experience has taught you to think more carefully before you let boredom or curiosity lure you away from the herd.”

Guiltily, Ali and Rhett bowed their heads.

“I should have thought about that.” Ali murmured. “Sorry.”

“I got stuck in there, I should have been more careful.” Rhett said. “I would be a goner if it wasn’t for her.”

Old One surveyed the pair silently for a moment. Her expression softened.

“Well, at least you two appear to have learned something from that ordeal,” she said gently. “We still have some time before we move on. Clean yourselves up in the river over there and make sure to keep in sight of the grownups.”

“Thank you, Old One.” Ali said. “I’ve had enough adventure for one day.”

“After today, I wouldn’t want to be beyond adult supervision again.” Rhett muttered.

Old One nodded, the briefest of smiles flitting across her face before she moved on to talk about their next destination. Ali and Rhett went to the river a bit hidden by the trees, their parents trailing after them and watching like flying sharpteeth. The pair washed in the shallows, throwing water over themselves and scrubbing at dirty spots with their heads and tails. It was difficult – the grime was just as reluctant to get wiped away as the sinking sands were of giving up their catch. Ali’s skin was starting to feel a bit sore by the time she cleaned up a spot and she moved gingerly as she cleaned other parts of her body.

“So, you really forgive me?”

Ali looked up. Rhett was wincing from one foot to the other as he washed himself but not just because of soreness. From the way he averted his eyes, he had been working himself to speak. Ali was confused.

“I mean, after all I done.” Rhett continued. “From how you said you we were going to hear each other, you were okay with associating with me.”

“That’s what I meant.” Ali said.

“You said something similar after the mess with Chomper was cleared up. But why – even after all I did, why are you so forgiving?”

Ali stared and thought the question over. It was true Rhett had did some very selfish things that hurt her and hurt those she considered her friends. He only stopped because of some major shocks that those like him were usually unlikely to face. Any other person would have understandably cut all ties with Rhett after the truth of his lies got out. So why was Ali willing to let bygones be bygones and stay in contact with him? After some moments, the answer came to her.

“You appear to be willing to change.” Ali said slowly. “You realized you’re wrong and are attempting to work away from it. Not perfectly but…it’s more than I can say for some people. It’s kind of hard for me to hold a grudge unless it’s something really really bad. And I’ve made some mistakes too. I was nervous about Littlefoot’s friends and usually dissuaded him from them being around at first. When we went to rescue his ill grandfather, I didn’t exactly tell him all of what I did or didn’t know about the Land of Mists until I was pressed to. I got over some of these things but others I’m still working on too.”

“Really?” Rhett asked.

Ali nodded. “I have done some deceitful things myself. Not as extreme as many of your lies but…Littlefoot and the others have forgiven me for my mistakes and it’s hard for me to hold grudges. Not to mention…you’re figuring yourself out. I’m still figuring myself out. I’m thinking that maybe we could figure help each other figure ourselves out together. We have been through some amazing stuff, that few others have. With that in common, let’s try and see if we can really be friends.”

Rhett nodded, his unsureness disappearing into encouragement.

“Of course, just because I’ll be your friend, it doesn’t mean I won’t call you out if you do something wrong.” Ali said hastily. “You’ll be hearing a lot from me whether you like it or not.”

Rhett laughed. “I think I might need that anyway.”

By this time, they wiped off the last of the dirt. Other than looking a bit red in places, there was no sign they had been stuck in the sinking sands at all. Ali and Rhett shook themselves dry, relieved. As amusing as being dirty can be, there was no great feeling quite like splashing yourself clean. Something about that lodged an idea of mischief into Ali’s mind. She turned innocently to Rhett.

“Since you’ll be hearing a lot from me, you might hear me say a few things more than others.”

“Really? Like what?” Rhett asked, having no idea what was coming.

Ali flicked her tail and slapped it on Rhett’s side. “Tag! You’re it!”

Before he could react, Ali had already zoomed off, giggling to herself. She heard a strangled cry of consternation and there was a patter of footsteps that hastily tried to catch up with her. She made sure to stick close to the herd as she ran but fortunately there were many hiding places to take advantage of. With their parents and other herd members following them with their eyes, Ali jumped into a bush on the side of the path and waited until Rhett galloped past, slowing breathlessly.

“Where – where are you? I swear I’ll -”

Ali reached out and nipped Rhett’s tail before he could finish. He yelped and she raced off in the opposite direction, ducking into another bush around the bend. No sooner did she settle in that Rhett panted past.

“How can you move so fast?” he muttered.

Her answer was to slink around and accidentally-on-purpose brush past him. He jumped but she disappeared before he could catch her. She returned to the river and hid above in a small tree, watching as he moved cautiously, poking his head into foliage and on a general lookout for anything out of the ordinary. He didn’t anticipate she would use higher ground to evade him. She waited until he walked into the river to make the next move. She leapt down and covered Rhett in a great splash, causing him to stumble. He shook his wet head and gazed woozily at her.

“For someone who just rescued me, you have a lot of energy.”

Ali giggled and backed away. “Well, what can I say? Learning can energize you – and I just learned one other thing – you can’t catch me!”

And Ali darted away. He stared after her retreating figure, his brain struggling to catch up with her words. Then he surged to his feet.

“He – hey! I can catch you! That’s not fair! I’ll-”

Rhett moved after her and there was laughter beneath his footsteps. Ali continued to evade him, sometimes nipping and touching to startle him. Rhett still made startled noises but amusement entered his voice more and more the longer this game of cat and mouse continued. Ali grinned. The pair of them might make more mistakes and were still figuring themselves out but Ali felt she was now on firmer ground on who she was as a person. After the confidence she regained, she had the feeling she could take on any challenges that awaited her in the future.

The End

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Silver Screen / Power Rangers
« on: April 13, 2017, 02:47:31 AM »
Saw the movie. It's flawed but I like the characters (Even if Jason occasionally leers into a at times bland Standardized Leader kind of person) and wouldn't mind seeing them again. It can be very different from MMPR but I enjoyed it on its own terms. I liked Billy the most and he was a good portrayal of an autistic character. I kind of shipped him with Jason, who he was closest too. Trini is confirmed to be queer, though that doesn’t get much focus. I would hope that’s explored more in the next movie. And apparently, the movie cast is lobbying for Tommy to be a girl in the sequel. That would be interesting and it’d be great to have the rare ranger team that’s gender parity. I wonder if there’s going to be a comic book crossover between the Reboot and original cast at some point, since IDW’s doing that with Ghostbusters. It’d be pretty neat.

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Character Discussion / Spike
« on: April 09, 2017, 12:45:31 PM »
Ah, Spike. I can’t remember what I thought of him when I first watched the series, but after rewatching several times in the past year or so, I gained a great appreciation for him. He’s one of my favorite characters. He doesn’t speak and shows little shame in his appetite, often wandering off to explore what interests him in ways that mark him off as odd. He occasionally licks people out of affection, and that does mark him as odd (Even if in an animal world like LBT, it shouldn’t be that odd, but whatever). Yet he shows little shame for who he is and his friends generally treat him well. The most they do is laugh fondly at his antics.

He is rather laidback and friendly, wanting to appreciate the extraordinary in the simple in life. From that TV episode where we get a peek into his thoughts, he does wish his friends would kick back and take a page out of his book. He seems a bit exasperated about the often dangerous adventures they find themselves in, as seen in the song he sings to himself in that episode. However, as shown in other episodes and movies, he does have a genuine interest in exploring and learning. In that same episode, he even smiles fondly to them. Whatever his complaints, he really enjoys being in their company.

As for if he understands…I’m kind of under the impression he does, he just tunes some talk out, like the arguing and the insistence that he follow them. In that same episode, there are times where he responds to specific things his friends say. When Littlefoot and Cera argue about the existence of Hard Water Sweets after surviving an avalanche, Spike thinks in frustration “But I know where they are!” This indicates that Spike finds speaking much harder than thought. It takes a life or death scenario like his sister on the verge of being eaten or him drowning for him to talk. Clearly, there’s more to his nonverbal nature than a disinclination to speak.

I’ve read of nonverbal people learning to be verbal when they grow up and that’s displayed in a few fics, but I’m interested in what happens if he can’t do anything more than be nonverbal or minimally verbal as an adult. Would he remain content with who he was or would this might be an issue or frustration to him? He’s been treated rather well by his friends and most people, but there’s always the chance they’ll meet someone who can’t understand or is a jerk and those who might expect him to talk when he grows up. That could affect him, especially if there are things he wants to say but are difficult to get across if you can’t use words. That might be a struggle awaiting him but hopefully his friends will support him into accepting himself.

I do like Ducky and Spike’s relationship. There’s obvious mutual affection. Though he can be at times exasperated with Ducky, he cheerfully plays along with her just as much. He appears to enjoy her cheerful spirit and he must be appreciative she looks after him so much. For the first days (and weeks?) of his life, she was his guardian and the gang the first family he knew. That’s got to color how he views them. I do like the glimpses of how he relates to the others. He’s given Littlefoot a few licks, appreciating his kindness and how he looks after everyone. That episode about Spike and Chomper was pretty sweet, since they’re both the youngest and with the best noses, so I wouldn’t be surprised if they bonded. Cera mightn’t be always the easiest to get along with, but I could see him liking her wit and occasions for mischief. I can see them becoming closer when they take mud baths with Tria and Ruby, in turns relaxing and maybe lobbing mud at one another. Spike and Ruby would get along, since the latter’s calm and thoughtful, which the former’s laidback nature would agree with. Spike does seem to get along with Petrie. He can relate to Petrie’s occasional fear of adventure and danger, and seems to find Petrie’s idiosyncrasies whether in fear or play fondly amusing. As someone small like Ducky, Spike seems protective of Petrie. I’m fond of his bond with the others and I’d like to see that more explored.

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Character Discussion / Ozzy and Strut
« on: April 05, 2017, 06:21:42 PM »
Ah, these two. I have the feeling the pair were omnivores in-universe as well (Though did Struthiomimus actually have eggs in their diet? My googling doesn’t bring up much about it), though Ozzy seems to be fond of the eating plants part. I’m under the impression he finds their kind eating eggs makes them “unique and amazing” and that eating plants takes away from their special snowflake status. He does consider himself quite a scheme, though he isn’t as clever as he thinks he is. He doesn’t seem completely fond of Strut, who he seems to have around partly to have an egg hunting companion and partly out of family obligation. He isn’t patient with Strut not getting with the program fast enough and doesn’t listen to his suggestions much. Ozzy has a “why do I put up with you?” air for his brother, but I wonder if he gets endangered and Strut’s the only person that can save him, will his fondness for his brother might shoot up.

As for Strut, I agree that he’d be helpless and directionless without his brother. He never seemed to have never got the hang of this independent adult thing, so he relies on the leadership of others to survive. He does have his own opinions, which mostly revolve around just surviving on what’s around than on anything too ambitious, but he doesn’t have much backbone to back these thoughts up. His suggestion to drop Littlefoot from a high place might indicate some hidden malice but it can also indicate how since he can’t stand up to his brother’s bullying, he turns against someone weaker like Littlefoot to air his grievances. People are often taught to react to bullying by those stronger than them through bullying someone less powerful. There might be more fondness for Ozzy from Strut’s side. If Ozzy’s endangered, he might try to rescue him out of that fondness but he might also do so because he selfishly needs Ozzy to help him survive. I don’t know how honest Strut would be about that.

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Character Discussion / Doc
« on: April 03, 2017, 05:57:40 PM »
Yeah, I think Dara should have been given a bit more development, at least in quick brushstrokes, other than “Southern niceness.” Though there’s no way of knowing if Dara would want them to settle down. For all we know, she wants to walk the earth as well and they’re content with using the last years of their life doing that.

I think another reason Doc keeps a low profile besides not liking attention is that he sees fame and admiration as steps onto a bad path. Those can influence both him and others in ways that are less than healthy. He doesn’t want to become a Pterano (Who would make an interesting foil for Doc if they ever bumped into each other), and he doesn’t want to be swayed by the herd mentality that can lead to all sorts of screw-ups and tragedies. He wants to keep a cool, grounded mindset, unreservedly knowing his strengths but realistic about their limits and what can and can’t be done out in the world. He’s the sort who doesn’t tries not to be swayed or blinkered by emotion. Of course, even he isn’t immune to emotions and common opinion, as seen with Chomper (Even if the execution wasn’t up to snuff, I like the concept of the episode where Doc ends up being wrong about something and Littlefoot is right).

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General Land Before Time / Character Interactions You’d Like to See
« on: April 03, 2017, 03:50:35 PM »
Yeah, a very special scenario would have to come up where Cera’s mother would be discussed later in the timeline. There could be a flashback to that first conversation that links to the present moment but who knows.

Chomper learning about the death of Littlefoot’s mother…I think that might be brought up in those surely fraught days when Ruby and Chomper came to the valley. People would be against this and confounded. At some point, someone would turn to Littlefoot in Chomper’s presence and mention things like, “How can you do this, wasn’t your mother killed by a sharptooth?” and the fact Littlefoot plotted the sharptooth’s death might be mentioned. Chomper would be upset and horrified by these revelation but Littlefoot would say it was the experiences of that tragedy he cared of Chomper and he doesn’t group the youth with his mother’s killer. There would be awkwardness but I think Chomper and the gang will come to a understanding.

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Character Discussion / Tippy
« on: April 02, 2017, 05:00:41 PM »
Since Tippy is addressed with male pronouns and words, I presume that the spiketail identifies as a male. He was voiced by Jeremy Suarez in movie VIII (aka Brother Bear’s Koda) and Cree Summer in his TV appearance (Lizzie, the Tinysaurus Cera befriended, as well as a zillion other roles) in a case of crossdressing voices. I would hope Tippy’s mother would be considerate enough to use the correct pronouns with the gender identity her child identifies as.

There isn’t that much to his character admittedly but his enthusiasm and friendliness are endearing. His mother must take good care of him to be so cheery and joyful. He and Spike getting into rough-and-tumble action is just adorable. There seems to be rarely anything more than simple good-nature behind his roughhousing tendencies. He can be oblivious and innocently insensitive sometimes, not noticing Ducky’s reactions to the pair of them becoming close. The TV episode did show he had some gumption and cleverness, sneaking away from her herd when they had a falling out with the valley and playing with Spike in some less populated places. When they found the green area, his first instinct is go tell the others about it but he had some misgivings about being the pair being found out. I don’t know if Spike helped them decide to go public or if Tippy did so on his own, but they were brave to come out in the open like that.

When Mr. Threehorn and the spiketail herd leader started arguing over who had dips on the green space, his tired expression of frustration and flouncing off with the gang was amusing. He tried to be cautious over the land bridge leading to the green space, but the ice was too slippery and they fell. But in the process of being saved, he seemed to get closer to Ducky, which is sweet. I think he’d appreciate Ducky’s cheerful and affectionate demeanor. I wonder if he’d become closer to other members of the gang in future visits or if he’d stick mostly with Spike and Ducky. He appears like someone who’d get along with most people no matter what.

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