Hey Chomper4 here's a friendly word, if you want pictures of TDV so badly then maybe you sould make the drawings yourself! And please stop bugging everyone about it alright.
They are not going to drop what their doing, just because you want something now? Plus they might ban your membership from this site, if you do not stop.
I kind of have an idea, that's somewhat like yours. But instead of a one on one fight before letting them pass by/through. I was thinking on the lines of maybe having them trying to figure/guess a riddle or something, before letting them pass?
Because you already have a lot of dino's fighting battles, as it is in the story! I would like to see something where Littlefoot or one of the others using his or her brain to guess a riddle or something like maybe having more brain's and less brawn for at least one part of your Twilight Valley story.
Look I'm sorry for jumping on you like that, but it's just that the cold air has been making my feet hurt a lot lately. And it's somewhat hard for me to get around with that kind of pain? So again I'm sorry DH.
Well then maybe you could make a picture of Pterano's sister. (Petrie's Mother)
And I'll do the color change for Rinkus and Sierra pictures! Yeah I know they had sharpteeth in the movie. But the people that made the movie, did that to let us know that they were the bad guys of the 7th movie, I think.
I mean if you want to get technical, Pterano's kind were sharptooth flyers in real life. they ate small fish just like Rinkus and Sierra's kind were. Besides this is just fanfiction, so if we can, want to think that Pterano, Rinkus and Sierra were leafeater's before the change?
I hope the next two pictures are of Rinkus and Sierra as sharptooth flyers. In fact just to make it a little easier for you? You could always take the Pterano sharptooth picture and change the color on it. One would have Rinkus's pink coloring and the other would be Sierra's tan coloring!
No it doesn't look too brutal to me, in fact it look's okay to me. Besides I've seen/read stories that are worse? Plus I hope you get the next chapter up soon!
Serris I hate to tell you this but the two Matrix songs that you have for Littlefoot vs Excidium and Phobos vs Deimos, they kind of sound the like the same song?
I think it would be better if you changed the Littlefoot vs Excidium to Duel of Fates (Star Wars: Episode I) Not only that, but you could use for the Final battle Theme!