Update:
I have completed the additon of SaphireRaptor (thanks Petrie for your feedback

). Thanks also, of course, to SaphireRaptor for sending this in. You did an awesome job!
Anywho, the link to the song:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=6OJJP84QSaphireRaptor, I only have a couple of comments for you:
1) Your singing is fantastic! You sound amazing; you must have had some practice singing in the past. B)
2) The only real faults I saw in your recording were technology-related. With a better microphone, you would have sounded absolutely amazing in this song!
One little piece of advice for you in the future: Try setting your microphone volume and sing from an appropriate distance so that the loudest points of your voice never "clip" (distort) the sound. I noticed a few occasions where your recording started to distort on your louder notes. This is impossible for me to edit out in most situations.
I'm almost tempted to buy and send you a microphone for all your hard work. Sadly, I'm still unemployed and don't have the money to do so..but trust me, you earned it.
