Corrupted opinions

chomperrules1993 · **on:** February 25, 2015, 12:15:03 AM

How many of you liked Corrupted? It"s under "New Fanfic"

Ducky123 · **Reply #1 on:** February 25, 2015, 11:25:29 AM

Sharptooth having super powers kind of ruined it for me but that's just my opinion, others might like this. I would have preferred a really vicious fight which is better described with more details and also longer and more exciting.

DarkHououmon · **Reply #2 on:** February 25, 2015, 01:52:12 PM

I'll be honest, I haven't read it from start to finish. But I do agree with Ducky123 regarding Sharptooth having superpowers. I don't think that was really necessary, personally. He was terrifying enough without them. I think it would have been better if he was just portrayed how he was in the movie; just a really strong sharptooth with high durability.

chomperrules1993 · **Reply #3 on:** February 25, 2015, 03:51:14 PM

Well Sharptooth is a demon in my story. Him having powers made sense to me at the time