Fanart by LeventeII

LeventeII · **on:** January 03, 2018, 04:41:41 PM

Yesterday, 3rd January 2018, I have done my very first artwork.

I think there are still many things to improve. I have copied it without tracing it.

Feedback?

zero-point · **Reply #1 on:** January 03, 2018, 04:45:16 PM

Pretty cool! Can't wait to see more of your artwork here!

Sovereign · **Reply #2 on:** January 03, 2018, 05:07:59 PM

That is a really impressive drawing, especially considering it's your first here! The anatomy, expression and details are truly decent and the whole picture is a really nice one. The only problems I can point out is that the lighter area around Littlefoot's mouth looks a bit weird (is it too large perhaps?) and his body might be a bit too small. However, really nice job with this picture! It's great to see a new artist on this forum!

LeventeII · **Reply #3 on:** January 03, 2018, 08:46:34 PM

Thanks for the feedback!

I've done my second work. This time it's Spike. He is scared by something.
It took 2 hours.

Flathead770 · **Reply #4 on:** January 03, 2018, 08:57:18 PM

It's great to see another person drawing and for a first drawing it's pretty darn good. The overall shape is well done and you've put a good amount of detail into it.

There are a few things that I have noticed that might help. If you compare the space between the edge of his nose bulge and the end of his face, it's longer on the far side then it is on the closer side giving it a bit of a lopsided look to it. I think this is why Sovereign believes the lighter part of the mouth is too large since it's larger relative to the top of his nose area. I hope this makes sense as it is a little hard to explain. In the end this isn't that big of a deal as the face has been drawn well otherwise. Another small detail with the face is that his ear is missing.

As for the body, the the curve on the hind leg's thigh as it goes towards the knee seems a little too pronounced.

Lastly it would be good to make the lines darker. It's great to start out light like this to fix mistakes and get it the way you like and then afterwards re-trace all the lines with more pressure (I tend to draw extremely light so I usually end up doing this twice). A problem with it being to light can be that it's hard to make things out. For example, one of the lines on Littlefoot's right foreleg (front leg closest to the left side of the paper) is really hard to notice.

I hope I don't come across as overly negative. I really like the drawing and I hope to see you keep at it!

[EDIT]Well it seems I spent so much time looking at your first drawing that you've posted your next one.

You did a great job drawing Spike and I don't notice any real big issues, especially with the expression. Keep it up!

Sneak · **Reply #5 on:** January 04, 2018, 07:37:24 AM

They're pretty good!
Well done!

Sovereign · **Reply #6 on:** January 04, 2018, 11:10:57 AM

Yeah, the Spike drawing is really nice too! Maybe his body should be a bit longer but the expression is quite spot-on and the lines are smooth enough. Are you planning to color your pictures in the future?

LeventeII · **Reply #7 on:** January 04, 2018, 03:20:21 PM

Thanks for the feedback!

I will pay more attention next time.

Yes, I'm going to colorize them. I'm going to make a photocopy to have a backup.

I have finished my third one. Ducky and Petrie from a scene in the 13th movie.
It took 3 hours.

I have the impression that something is wrong... but i don't know what.

Sneak · **Reply #8 on:** January 04, 2018, 06:05:00 PM

Is this scene so popular or something? Oo I find it everywhere! XD
(can't see something very wrong.

)

LeventeII · **Reply #9 on:** January 05, 2018, 12:54:58 AM

It is a scene from the 13th movie.
When Doofah dropped some flowers behind her, some of the blossoms landed on Cera. Ducky laughed. Cera turned around and was angry.

Petrie: me not laughed, it her!

Ducky: I don't believe that you have told on about me!

I don't think that this scene is popular. Maybe it's a memorable moment that Ducky is angry.

I'm very motivated on drawing, so I've finished my 4th work, Cera!

It was very hard, it took 4 hours.

I think the eyes have a mistake... Maybe it will look better when it's colorized.

Flathead770 · **Reply #10 on:** January 05, 2018, 02:48:35 AM

Wow your on fire! Both of these are looking good!

For the Ducky and Petrie one, I was originally going to say that Ducky's back as it leads to her tail looks strange but when looking at the scene that's how it looks. That's all I noticed for that one.

Cera is drawn well and the expression is solid. You mention there might be something wrong with the eyes and I think you are right. To me it might be that the eye on the left has the pupil slanted inwards? I don't know if it's just because of the perspective but at the top of her head it looks like her frill ends short. Cera's face can be difficult sometimes. There's always something that feels off when I draw it.

Sneak · **Reply #11 on:** January 05, 2018, 10:05:28 AM

awesome!

Now it's time for friendly sharpteeth! Right? ^^

Sovereign · **Reply #12 on:** January 05, 2018, 04:03:36 PM

You're doing really well with your drawings! These new pictures look great as well and it shows you have a good grasp on these characters.

Cera and Petrie look great but Ducky's face looks weird for some reason. Her eyelashes could be a bit more pronounced and maybe her eyes are too long? Still, thank you for sharing these pictures! You're a really talented artist!

LeventeII · **Reply #13 on:** January 05, 2018, 10:10:16 PM

Thanks for the Feedback

I really wanted to draw a sharptooth. But then I noticed, that they have a sharptooth as friend. I forgot Chomper.

It was very frustrating! 3 hours, but at the end it was better. Here it is:

It is Chomper as he tastests his very first food.

Ducky123 · **Reply #14 on:** January 06, 2018, 07:57:29 AM

wow, I can hardly keep up with that speed of yours

Let me try to give my very best to write a good and fair critique and give feedback. (I just retired from working on my own art for the moment due to frustration, maybe it helps

)

first some thoughts in general:

It seems to me that you're only drawing the lineart. Do you intend to colour some of these in the future? Coloured art looks 1000% more awesome

Your paper has a bit of an own colour to it. It just looks a bit odd to me since I'm used to white paper but that might just be me

Now let's tackle the individual drawings.

1. I find that his head and neck are drawn very well, however his rump looks slightly distorted. Though don't worry. If I draw Littlefoot without tracing, it'll probably look similar if not... worse

2. I seem to recall that pose of Spike. Don't know which movie it is from but he's probably seeing a Sharptooth right there

Very good lineart, I can't spot anything that looks off

3. When I saw that one, I had to grin because... I've drawn this very scene myself in the past

The lineart seems to be pretty solid here as well, nice work

4. Cera is very hard to draw. I can draw Ducky, Petrie and Littlefoot from memory (well, it won't look good) but Cera is hard to memorize (and there are just so many small things you can butcher so very easily

: ) I'm not sure if her face is 100% correct but it certainly looks good to my eyes

5. Also nice work on Chomper!

Overall, pretty solid drawings so far, I'm excited to see more

Sneak · **Reply #15 on:** January 06, 2018, 08:20:21 AM

sweet! ^^

Now - how about VERY NOT friendly green immortal super sharpteeth? *winks*

anyway, can't wait for more!

Sovereign · **Reply #16 on:** January 06, 2018, 09:44:00 AM

That's a really good and cute Chomper!

This drawing is actually quite spot on and actually, I have nothing major to criticize here (the minor thing is that Chomper's left knee seems to point at a slightly wrong direction). The expression looks natural and the anatomy truly works here! Have you ever considered doing some backgrounds? They always make a drawing even better!

LeventeII · **Reply #17 on:** January 07, 2018, 01:22:45 AM

Thanks for feedback!

The scene with Spike is from the 6 movie I think.

Drawing Backgrounds will be the next level I think.

At the moment I have no pencils for colorizing. But I'm going to colorize them all as soon as possible

In that Federal State in which I live in Germany are at the moment school holidays, and that's the reason why I have no colored pencils at the moment. Also, the light at this place is not the best, and that's why the paper has an odd color. The paper is actually white.

I couldn't find a good picture for drawing a Sharptooth. But I'm searching for one. I'm sure I'll draw one in the early future.

I don't know why, but drawing Ruby took 6 hours!

It was exciting to draw her.

Sneak · **Reply #18 on:** January 07, 2018, 10:15:43 AM

NoICE. :3

Sovereign · **Reply #19 on:** January 07, 2018, 10:37:10 AM

This one is, once again, really well drawn!

The expression is adorable and faithfully captured from the actual scene and the rest of the picture is excellent too (except that her feet have different number of toes here)

. In any case, your last two drawings have been your best ones yet! Keep it up!