The Mighty Hunter

[RainbowFaceProtege]

[Goldenwind]

Fuzzy gray rodent?

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Sounds awfully like: 

This was a fun silly story. XD Like how we got to see the chase from the perspective of the "hunter" as I feel like it's more common for stories to have it in the perspective of the one being chased.  Also poor Wild Arms, Ozzy might just go after him because he is such a scardey-egg. 

Also the detail where it's said that a bunch of larger creatures ran from the "hunter" before... I can't help but think one of them being: 

Also, I was happy to see Etta appear the end, as I think this might be the first fan-fic I read with her appearing. X)

[Sneak]

I love short stories!
Thank you for this litle fun.

[rhombus]

@RainbowFaceProtege

First of all, I will get a review ready sometime next week once my backlog of work is finished.  I am glad to see that you are participating in the alternatives prompt. But please keep in mind that you need to send me a PM with the story's official description, Gang of Five link, and fanfiction.net link for a story to be entered into the contest. 

[rhombus]

Now this is a wonderful little story.  The way in which the narrative is written immediately sucks us into the mystery- who is this hunter and who is the flat-tooth who is being chased?  Through the hunter's own thoughts we can see that he thinks of himself as friendly, but narrators can be unreliable sometimes... as a result the chase is both thrilling and humorous.  This makes the pay off when we find out the mighty hunter is in fact a rodent all the more humorous.  Similarly, finding out that the "prey" was in fact Wild Arms makes perfect sense in hindsight. 

Thank you for sharing this wonderful little story with us.  As soon as I get a fanfiction.net link and an official description in a PM, I will be sure to add it to the fanfiction prompt masterlist. 

[RainbowFaceProtege]