If We Hold On Together - Me

[duckytears]

Okay....not the best....but I gave it a shot. after listening to this song like 20 times or more lol I just had to go for it.

http://www.yousendit.com/download/ZUcwek9yTERZY1EwTVE9PQ

The link is avaiable for 7 days.

Lets all be kind

[action9000]

Well, I must say it seems we have another star singer among us!
Beautifully-handled!

[duckytears]

awww *blush* thank you

I was really bored and wasnt doing anything...so I recorded a few more once I post this im heading off for the night, thanks to all for making my first night here amazing!!

Kids Like us
http://download.yousendit.com/BE471A5A5512BBAA

Things Change
http://download.yousendit.com/8A3DB047039BD505

It Takes All Sorts
http://download.yousendit.com/ED7EC14C33AFADC9

Big Water
http://download.yousendit.com/29B42D3E641EB987

for me Petrie is the hardest voice to get but I did my best for you all ^_^

[action9000]

I haven't listened to them much yet but from what I heard, you fail to disappoint me yet again!

To offer some critique, I listened to "Things Change" and I have a quick tip for you since you made the same little boo-boo every time:

During the chorus "All at Once things change"
"at" and "things" are different notes.  You tended to sing them as though they were the same pitch.  I'm not sure how much music theory you have but I'll start with the quick and technical explaination.  If it's too confusing, read down some more:

"All" is a high Bb (B-flat) note:
"at" is the Eb (E-flat) below that:
"once" is back to the Bb
"Things" is a D (a half-step Below the Eb above)
"Change" is a C below that D,
as seen in the image below:


If that's too confusing, just remember to leave a little more room to go down from "at". B) "Things" is a little bit lower.  If you can get this worked out, your chorus will sound amazing!  Just sing the word "at" (or the 2nd syllable of the chorus) slightly higher than you have been and you'll go from very good to awesome!  You have "Things" in the right place, you just need to bump that 2nd syllable up a half-step. B)
(If you're still lost, feel free to ask! )

[Nimrod]

I haven't listened to them much yet but from what I heard, you fail to disappoint me yet again!

To offer some critique, I listened to "Things Change" and I have a quick tip for you since you made the same little boo-boo every time:

During the chorus "All at Once things change"
"at" and "things" are different notes.  You tended to sing them as though they were the same pitch.  I'm not sure how much music theory you have but I'll start with the quick and technical explaination.  If it's too confusing, read down some more:

"All" is a high Bb (B-flat) note:
"at" is the Eb (E-flat) below that:
"once" is back to the Bb
"Things" is a D (a half-step Below the Eb above)
"Change" is a C below that D,
as seen in the image below:


If that's too confusing, just remember to leave a little more room to go down from "at". B) "Things" is a little bit lower.  If you can get this worked out, your chorus will sound amazing!  Just sing the word "at" (or the 2nd syllable of the chorus) slightly higher than you have been and you'll go from very good to awesome!  You have "Things" in the right place, you just need to bump that 2nd syllable up a half-step. B)
(If you're still lost, feel free to ask! )

Very very very nice I must say. How action said. A new star singer. :

[Unknown Person]

Man, what is the time signature of that thing!  You've got 3, 4, 2, and then 2 beats in each bar.

[Nimrod]

Man, what is the time signature of that thing!  You've got 3, 4, 2, and then 2 beats in each bar.

yes, I¥m wondering a bit, too.

[Flathead770]

it soesn't realy matter, this was just to show the change in pitch between "at" and "things" in the song.

[Nimrod]

Man, what is the time signature of that thing!  You've got 3, 4, 2, and then 2 beats in each bar.

yes, I¥m wondering a bit, too.

But if you sing this part of the song like the notes are telling it, it¥s right.

[Nimrod]

Man, what is the time signature of that thing!  You've got 3, 4, 2, and then 2 beats in each bar.

yes, I¥m wondering a bit, too.

But if you sing this part of the song like the notes are telling it, it¥s right.

Here is the link for the song No one has to be alone, singing by me.

http://download.yousendit.com/977AC9FA6ADC06D8

I¥m sorry, because that¥s only my voice without the background music. That means, too, that there alre two breaks in the song.

[duckytears]

Lol guess I started a bit of a discussion here.

I havent had much vocal training so I was pretty much playing on by ear. Its all in good fun, long as im not making anyones ears bleed then im pretty much happy LoL!.

Thanks for the listens!

[action9000]

Man, what is the time signature of that thing! You've got 3, 4, 2, and then 2 beats in each bar. 

So the 1st and last measures aren't written right, time-wise

it soesn't realy matter, this was just to show the change in pitch between "at" and "things" in the song.

But if you sing this part of the song like the notes are telling it, it¥s right.

Exactly, I was just too lazy to write in the time signature and note lengths to make it all work. :

[Nimrod]

Man, what is the time signature of that thing! You've got 3, 4, 2, and then 2 beats in each bar. 

So the 1st and last measures aren't written right, time-wise

it soesn't realy matter, this was just to show the change in pitch between "at" and "things" in the song.

But if you sing this part of the song like the notes are telling it, it¥s right.

Exactly, I was just too lazy to write in the time signature and note lengths to make it all work. :

Upps, sry, I put my link in the wrong order.    

[action9000]

To help everyone feel better, here's an update to the picture

[Nimrod]

To help everyone feel better, here's an update to the picture

sry, but that¥s not correct. In the first part four times, in the second, too, but in the third only three.

[Nimrod]

To help everyone feel better, here's an update to the picture

sry, but that¥s not correct. In the first part four times, in the second, too, but in the third only three.

The last note must be three times long

[action9000]

The last note must be three times long

Why?  There is a quarter rest taking up the last beat of the 3rd measure.  It all adds up to 4.

[Nimrod]

The last note must be three times long

Why?  There is a quarter rest taking up the last beat of the 3rd measure.  It all adds up to 4.

Oh, that¥s right, sorry, I haven¥t saw it.

[Petrie.]

Your singing is quite good.  Is it a untrained or trained (meaning you don't or do take vocal lessons)?

[duckytears]

its untrained. Ive never taken any professional...or really even unprofessional lessons. I was in kids choir but there were never really any lessons involved just learning and memorizing songs to sing.