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"Wow looky! the light coming from that big whirling thing in the sky" Ducky points to it but couldn't really look at it for long being bright and where it appeared the moon to the right of it in the sky was seen in the blue day time sky.
"I was only kidding about the all night to day instant thing" Cera spoke out then the vortex folds into itself and vanishes just as it does a second later the night time sky returns just as fast. "Ok... now I am really weirded out by that, that wasn't normal at all!!!" Cera said loudly and she'd had a good point.
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At the moment of the sky turning dark again the shuttle still head from the atomsphere the sublight rock that formed already entering the atomsphere of the planet burning brightly as it zooms towards the surface.
"Warning 5 seconds till atomsphere impact" Computer stats
Captain work on by passing the damage systems then gets thrown back against the wall behind him as the ship hits the atomsphere and starts heading towards the surface the hull burning bright from the force the ship hit the atomsphere. "Damn it..." he reaches for the tool and push the pad on it and get the by pass down quickly.
"Warning... Hull tempeture reaching critaicle levels... Hull breach in 12 seconds... Impact in 28 seconds" Computer warning goes out to the Captain
Captain finishes the by pass "Computer reactivate helm control and emerengy thrusters now!!!" Computer does as commanded and the ship starts leveling out the flames die out part from the damaged nescell that smoke pored out of it.
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Cera then sees something in the sky first two bright burning things then only one but that one came in fast "Flying rock!!!" Cera yelled and it comes in over the Great Wall shooting over them then hitting another wall bouncing off it then bouncing off another part of the wall causing big impacts of dust and rock bursting up and then hits the ground the sublight rock hitting through a tree then the ground sliding through more trees before coming to a stop covered by all the dirt hiding it light but the impact caused pieces of rock and durt to fly up and leave trees fallen.
"Did you see that? did ya did ya!" Ducky said to the others.