My Fanfic

LBTFan13 · **on:** January 21, 2008, 04:20:43 PM

I'm starting my own fanfic. It's a work in progress, so it's short at the moment.

Land Before Time - Revenge

UPDATE: Chapter 14 is up!

EDIT:My fanfic story is now FINISHED!!!!!!! You can follow the link above to the completed story.

action9000 · **Reply #1 on:** January 21, 2008, 07:26:06 PM

Moved to the Fanart and fanfic forum.

Kor · **Reply #2 on:** January 21, 2008, 07:48:47 PM

It does seem like a very good start to an story that may well be very interesting.

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #3 on:** January 21, 2008, 10:24:12 PM

I read the first chapter last night...now I gotta face this story!

Kor · **Reply #4 on:** January 22, 2008, 01:35:41 AM

Nice cliffhanger ending.

Chiletrek · **Reply #5 on:** January 22, 2008, 03:08:06 PM

Hello:
It looks like another cool story is beggining to unfold, keep it up! I look forward to see more.

LBTFan13 · **Reply #6 on:** January 22, 2008, 05:45:50 PM

thanks for reading what i have at the moment. i will work on it later tonight, so it will be updated.

Kor · **Reply #7 on:** January 22, 2008, 06:05:21 PM

I'm sure many will be very happy when it is uploaded.

LBTFan13 · **Reply #8 on:** January 23, 2008, 04:22:41 PM

UPDATE: Chapter 2 is up!

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #9 on:** January 23, 2008, 04:48:14 PM

I've already left my review and I look foward to the rest!

Kor · **Reply #10 on:** January 23, 2008, 06:04:35 PM

Interesting development. I guess with Shorty there Bron must be around somewhere.

Chiletrek · **Reply #11 on:** January 23, 2008, 06:04:37 PM

Hello:
The story is getting more interesting, those two are really into something bad and it appears everything is going as they planned >

, keep it up!

LBTFan13 · **Reply #12 on:** January 23, 2008, 11:05:33 PM

UPDATE: Chapter 3 is up. I created a more emotional side to Littlefoot. Hope you guys like it.

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #13 on:** January 23, 2008, 11:06:14 PM

I'm reading it right now! It is good...wow...I am now offically scared of Littlefoot now...I would NOT want to get in his way!

Chiletrek · **Reply #14 on:** January 24, 2008, 12:09:07 AM

Hello:
I must agree, that was very surprising!
This is going to get very good.

Kor · **Reply #15 on:** January 24, 2008, 02:25:40 AM

It seems on in fanfiction does Littlefoot notice the adults do nothing but stand around and argue while he usually does what needs to be done, with only a few exceptions. & he acted in a manner most folks likely would.

kjeldo · **Reply #16 on:** January 24, 2008, 09:54:43 AM

good start

and that is a sign of quality! haha

LBTFan13 · **Reply #17 on:** January 25, 2008, 07:58:19 AM

UPDATE: Chapter 4 is up

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #18 on:** January 25, 2008, 08:48:38 PM

Oh no! Not Petrie too! Rinkus and Seirra have to pay now!

Chiletrek · **Reply #19 on:** January 25, 2008, 09:55:39 PM

Hello:
Oh wow! someone is going to really get mad :blink: .
Keep it coming, you are doing great!