Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]

Megatoph · **on:** March 30, 2008, 05:09:30 AM

the cover for the Pilot.

after the fight with the firenation, Toph's planet is visited by the USCM, and she joins the Marines. her first mission is to figure out why a colony on the Planet "Thaida" has not communicated for weeks. but is this Earthbender ready for a life as an advanced soldier. the Original Pilot for a short series of Comics.

Kor · **Reply #1 on:** March 30, 2008, 06:52:39 AM

Looks like it could be interesting. Though likely very dark and bloody, if it is like the typical alien movie.

Megatoph · **Reply #2 on:** March 30, 2008, 11:17:40 AM

the pilot of a show or a comic is usualy dark toned.

Clawandfang · **Reply #3 on:** March 30, 2008, 12:39:03 PM

Just a quick suggestion, I think "The Thaida Massecre" could benefit from moving a little away from the edge, and also from being spelt correctly (you were meaning "massacre", right?)

Generally, so far so good. It simply radiates potential.

Megatoph · **Reply #4 on:** April 01, 2008, 01:08:42 AM

no its Massecre.

anywho this is just the cover, the full comic won't be posted here.

Clawandfang · **Reply #5 on:** April 01, 2008, 03:07:11 AM

Quote from: Megatoph,Apr 1 2008 on 05:08 AM

no its Massecre.

Is "Massecre" an Americanism or something? What does it mean?

Megatoph · **Reply #6 on:** April 01, 2008, 03:12:58 AM

Massive killing in one place. look it up.

Clawandfang · **Reply #7 on:** April 01, 2008, 11:49:37 AM

Yes... that's spelt "Massacre"... definately... rrrr... to prove I'm not just April Foolsing you now:

Massacre

There.

Megatoph · **Reply #8 on:** April 01, 2008, 11:50:50 AM

btw, I think I'll have Toph die in the final comic.

Kor · **Reply #9 on:** April 01, 2008, 03:46:06 PM

Up to you. I'm sure it does occur in fiction. Fits in with a dark theme I would think.

Megatoph · **Reply #10 on:** April 02, 2008, 04:41:43 AM

nah just kiddin. not gonna kill her off.