Characters you have created

F-14 Ace · **on:** June 17, 2008, 03:13:32 AM

I thought it would be a good idea to discuss the characters you have created for the stories you write. I have several.

My Star Wars characters:
Paito Grimm, my bounty hunter. I have redone the story and made some major changes to the character. He no longer wears battle armor. Now he just wears a blaster-retardant mest under his clothing. Also, the story no longer takes place after the fall of the Empire but right in the middle of Palpatine's reign. Paiot has a strong dislike for the Empire because of what they did to the natives of Ra'Kel, who were friends of his.

Jedi Master Ra'Lis
A Raptorian Jedi from Ra'Kel who managed toescape Imperial forces and escape to an unknown planet.

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Characters from Beasts of the American West

After three years, I am still working slowly on this story. However, the reviews I have been getting are good. Some have even suggested that I publish it. Anyway...

Blaze is one of the major characters in the story along with his older brother, Rhen. They are a pair of bison who are the last members of their herd trying to survive in a changing world.

Heather is another major character but she plays a smaller role. She is a moose who Rhen and Blaze encoundered in a cave while seeking shelter from a severe storm. She has developed a crush on Rhen and has grown fond of Blaze as well but longs to return home to the mountains.

This is all I can do for now. I will post more later. Please feel free to share your characters.

StarfallRaptor · **Reply #1 on:** June 17, 2008, 02:34:24 PM

Let's see...
Eragon Fanchara--Ryonosuke Kazan and Setsuna(Dragon Partner)
A young wandering swordsman and his dragon partner, who aid the Varden "When we feel like it" His weapons are a pair of Katana and his personal Nodachi sword, which he calls the "Monohoshizao", after the legendary sword of Sasaki Kojiro.

Spyro Fancharas--Keres, Haru, Gale, Sienna, Alfons, Heath, and Kyohei
Read the eventual story on FF.net. Too many to count.
Haru is an ex-servant of the Dark Master, as is Keres. Gale is a myrmidon with the odd habit of falling asleep anywhere, anytime, and Sienna is a young healer with the ability to use light magic. Alfons is the 13th descendant of the legendary Dr. Faust, and Heath is a bond-partner to his wyvern, Luna. Kyohei is a flame wielder, as well as a sardonic, easygoing person.

LBT Fancharas--Dante, Virgil, Motochika
You know these guys.

There are others, but these are the main ones. Art and such coming soon!

Serris · **Reply #2 on:** June 17, 2008, 08:48:09 PM

These are from my fan fic Twilight Valley. There are many characters but these are the main characters.

Deimos - Utahraptor deserter from Claw Valley. He is very well trained in hand-to-hand (or is it claw-to-claw?) combat. His hand-to-hand combat system is what I jokingly call "Dino Krav Maga" (Krav Dino). He is allied with the Great Valley.

On a side note: Ducky and her mother enter combat in this fan fic. Ducky's mother has a fighting style similar to Escrima and she rarely enters combat without her weapon (a tree branch). Ducky will enter combat after Chapter 9 and her fighting style is similar to Deimos (See Chapter 9 when it is finished for details. Yes, you will see Ducky use "Dino Krav Maga"). Yes, I'm aware that I screwed over the canon and I really don't care because there is no other way to involve Ducky in Twilight Valley (I refuse to have her as the "damsel in distress" too many times!).

Blue-Scale - Allosaurus deserter from Claw Valley. He is allied with the Great Valley.

Raptix - Velociraptor deserter from Claw Valley. He is allied with the Great Valley.

Styracus - an evil and power-hungry Styracasaurus who leads an army of herbivores. Allied with Claw Valley.

Theta - 2nd in command of Styracus's army. Shares power with Hasta.

Hasta - Stegosaurus. 2nd in command of Styracus's army. Shares power with Theta.

There are many more important characters but I don't want to spoil anything.

jedi472 · **Reply #3 on:** June 19, 2008, 07:33:25 PM

Let's see...Markus Silverman is my main OC, but Moff Thalus is also another. Other than those two, I have created no more as of yet, but there may be more to come.

f-22 "raptor" ace · **Reply #4 on:** June 19, 2008, 09:08:14 PM

Frank Anderson and Gene Vond are two OCs I made.

jedi472 · **Reply #5 on:** June 28, 2008, 10:15:13 AM

I've created the character of Markus Silverman in my story, along with Moff Thalus and a few other Imperial officers. I plan to create more.

Modification: Whoops. Sorry, guys. I forgot I posted here already.