Well, what should I say...
your artworks about your story 'The Big Quarrel'(which is a great story btw

) are fairly good. I'm very self critica¥l myself which was the main reason for not doing art until March I guess, I was just to much convinced that I can't draw <_<
Anyway, back on topic, would you like a detailed review? I wouldn't mind

Helpful critism isn't the classical 'good job, keep it up man' way but a detailed and critical review though due to you being self-critical there isn't much to point out

Although you indeed made some mistakes I somehow like your style of drawing the characters, and you are good at creating backgrounds which I usually fail at