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Journey to the Island

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Great chapter! I wonder if you're going for an IchyxDil pairing?


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Kinda yeah, Kinda no. If i did do an IchyXDil pairing they'll still probably argue alot. I kinda like that pairing though ^_^

In Other news: I did another chappy and not sure what to title it.. Any Goof-ups, let me know :)


Chapter 27: The Plan revealed
Chomper openned his eyes and looked around. He noticed that the Sky Water was not falling as hard like before and the booming sounds were quiter. he was going to go back to sleep when he heard voices. he got up and went to where the voices were coming from..



"If it wasn't for you my plan would have worked!" Ozzy growled at Strut. "If im not mistaken, you wanted revenge as well!" Ozzy said. "But Ozzy-" Strut began, but was cut off. "But what?" Ozzy said with a sinister tone. "Well.." Strut said, but was unable to find the right words. Ozzy shook his head and continued.. "When we go, we're going to go to a high enough cliff and drop them!"


Chomper almost froze when he heard what Ozzy said. He immediately ran over to where Pino was and tried to wake her up. "Pino! Wake up!" Chomper said in a whisper. Pino raised her head and yawned. "What's wrong?" Pino said, rubbing her eyes. "We have to go, they're going to try and kill us!" Chomper chirped. Pino's eyes widened up when she heard Chomper's words..

Both Chomper and Pino snuck out into the rain, they thought they were safe when the bumped into Ozzy..




"Ozzy!" Yelled Ichy. "Ozzy?" Said Dil, trying not to bump into anything. "Who is Ozzy?" Dil asked. Ichy looked down at Dil and said.. "Ozzy is an Egg-stealer.." "An Egg-stealer!?" Said Dil with surprise. "Yes, Dil. an Egg-stealer. He has a brother with him called Strut. they both want revenge.." Ichy said with a grin. "Revenge? Against who?" Dil asked. "I sharptooth called Chomper, and a Longneck called Littlefoot." Ichy said. "Littlefoot!?" Dil replied, bumping into a tree..




"Well, well. Where do you think you're going?" Ozzy said with a sinister tone. Chomper and Pino tried to run away, but Strut was also blocking their way. "What do you want with Pino?" Chomper said, walking up to Ozzy. "If it wasn't for her, Strut might have died!" Chomper said, reminding Ozzy about the time when Strut was sick. "She said so herself, it wasn't as bad as it looked!" Ozzy replied with a venomus tone. "Bad or not, is that the thanks she gets?" Chomper said, looking at Pino then back at Ozzy. "He does have a point." Strut said, but was silenced by one of Ozzy's evil glares. "Let Pino go." Chomper said. Ozzy looked back at Chomper and replied. "How do i know this isn't one of your tricks?" Ozzy said with a questioning tone to his voice. "Let Pino go, she has not done you any harm has she?" Chomper replied again..

Pino frowned and walked up next to Chomper. "Im not going anywhere!" Pino said, looking at Ozzy with a mad look. "Im sticking with my friend till the end." Pino said. "Pino do you know what he might do?" Chomper whispered to Pino. Pino looked back at Chomper and replied. "Yep, but i cant leave you here with these guys! besides i might have a plan.." Pino said, grinning. She looked back at Ozzy and said.. "Besides, i think i might know of a place where theres eggs.." Pino said, smiling at Ozzy. "Cant you come up with a better plan then that?" Ozzy said with a dry tone to his voice.. Pino looked back at Chomper and whispered. "Is there a plan B?"


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Yes, it's a good chapter.
Pessimist sees a dark tunnel. Optimist sees a light in the tunnel. Realist sees the light of coming train. And a driver sees three idiots standing on the track.

"My heart has joined the thousand, for my friend stopped running today." - Watership Down by Richard Adams.


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Trying to keep up with the story, unfortunately im starting to get slower now :( But i dont want to get slower!

In other news: Another chapter, another cliff hanger. Next chapter, someone might get hurt.. :o And you know what to do if you find any goof-ups :)


Chapter 28: Escaped
Ichy and Dil continued their search for Ozzy, Strut, Pino and Chomper, but did not find them.. Ichy was beginning to feel uneasy with the environment and was beginning to hear strange thumping sounds. "Hey Dil?" Ichy said, looking down at Dil. "Yeah?" Dil replied. Ichy looked around and continued.. "Is it me, or should we not be here?" Ichy said, looking at the different bones in the area. "Why? What is it?" Dil said, now with a slightly worried tone to her voice. "You really need to work on seeing better.." Ichy said, shaking his head. "The area is filled with bones!" "Bones!?" Dil stopped all of a sudden, almost sending Ichy flying off her back. She looked around but could not see anything. "Next time let me know when your going to stop like that!" Ichy growled, rubbing the back of his head. "Im starting to hear that thumping noise you were talking about!" Dil said in a scared voice. Ichy looked around the area, then back at Dil. "Lets continue, no sense standing around talking about thumpings and bones!" Ichy said, trying to laugh but it only came out as a fake chuckle. Then, Ichy and Dil continued through this strange place..




"Psst, Chomper!" Pino chirped silently to Chomper while Ozzy talked to Strut about the plan to get rid of the two sharpteeth. Chomper turned his head and listened.. "While they're talking, we're going to make a run in different directions" Pino said..

"... And like i said before, we take them to a cliff and drop them!" Ozzy said, stomping his foot. "But what if the sharpteeth come back again?" Strut said, itching his head. "That was then, this is now!" Ozzy said, shaking his head. He went to look back at the two sharpteeth but they were nowhere in sight..




Chomper ran as fast as he could. He was beginning to remember that time when his parents battled the spined sharpteeth. He wondered if they were still alive..



Pino stumbled when she hit her toe on a rock while running. She was able to get her balance, but wont be able to run as fast now. Her toe was beginning to hurt badly and she had to hop. She suddenly stopped when the area grew dark, and looked up at the large sharptooth infront of her..


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Thanks again :) and once more another chapter. Be Warned! Someone gets hurt! :o surprised they still have their leg in tact though..


Chapter 29: I cant just leave you there!
"Ow!" Dil yelped, stepping on another bone. "Would you stop scarring me like that?" Ichy growled. He looked around to make sure nothing nearby heard them. "Ow!" Ichy jumped again when he heard the next yelp. "How many times do i have to tell you Di-" Ichy began, but was cut off when he saw Chomper infront of Dil..




Ozzy searched for where Chomper had went. He was beginning to hate Chomper and was starting to think plans over.. Suddenly he heard a scream, but it was not Chomper. He followed the sounds of the screaming..



"Help!!" Cried Pino as she ran away from the sharptooth called Acro. She accidently stepped on a small tree crawler's tail and stumbled. When she regained her balance, she ran into someone and fell. She looked up and saw that it was Ozzy, looking down at her with that sinister look..


"Now your going to..!" Ozzy began, but was cut off when he heard something coming. He looked up and saw the sharptooth, charging twords them..

Both Pino and Ozzy ran as fast as they could away from Acro. Pino tried hard not to stumble again, but it was hard with her toe..

Ozzy was beginning to think being around sharpteeth kids was bad luck..

Suddenly they ran into what seemed to be a dead end. They stood infront of a large cliff, but Pino knew that it was climbable. Pino immediately ran over to the rocks and began to climb. She knew Ozzy would follow Pino, and was not sure what he would do to her if another dead end awaited on top. She almost lost her balance when she heard a painfull yell. She looked back down and saw Ozzy being dragged down by Acro who had bitten Ozzy's leg..

Ozzy tried to hold onto the rocks, but was unable to. He struggled to get free but was unable to. Suddenly, Acro let go of Ozzy's leg and growled. Ozzy looked up and saw Pino throwing small stones at Acro. Ozzy quickly climbed up just in time for Acro to try and bite Ozzy only to smash his head on the rocks..

Pino helped Ozzy climb to the top. They both looked down at Acro who roared at them angrilly, and walked away..

"Why did you help me?" Ozzy said, looking at Pino with confusion. Pino looked up at him and smiled. "Call me a fool, but i couldn't just leave you there to get eaten! It just doesn't seem right.." Pino said, now looking down at her feet. Ozzy wasn't sure if he should be angry or thankful. finally he walked past Pino and said "Thanks." with a dry tone to his voice..


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Thanks :) Sorry it's taking so long for the next chapter. I've been taking a break for some time now, hopefully i should have the next chapter done in a couple :)


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I Just finished next chapter, things will hopefully be getting a little more interesting now :) hopefully i wont take so long next time :p Any Goof-ups, let me know! :)



Chapter 30: Through Darkness
Ozzy walked away from Pino but stopped when he saw something. "What's wrong?" said Pino, walking up to Ozzy. She looked to see what Ozzy was looking at and jumped up. "A Cave!" She yelped happily, but thought about where Chomper could be. "I hope he's okay.." Pino thought to herself. "Follow me." Said Ozzy, walking forward. Pino looked up and followed..


"Sure is spooky in here." Whispered Pino. "Do you think we'll be safe in here?" Pino said, looking in the direction Ozzy is in. "No. But, Shh!" Ozzy replied, looking back at Pino with a glare. "Sorry." Pino replied..

Ozzy and Pino continued through the dark cave, struggling to see. Pino was starting to feel a slight chill and thought she could hear something moving up above. Suddenly she tripped on a rock and landed infront of something that sent a shiver down her spine. She blinked in confusion until she finally found out what it was.. "Skull!" Yelped Pino, Running away from the skull and bumped into Ozzy. "Two words, Sharptooth." Ozzy began with an annoyed tone to his voice. "Shut. Up. And be quite!" Ozzy said, continuing forward. Pino looked down at her feet, then back at the skull. If there's a skull in the cave there must be something bad..




"Ow! Who hit me?" Growled Dil, staring down at the small blue blur which was Chomper. Chomper began to back away slightly from Dil until he noticed Ichy. "Ichy!" Chomper yelped. "Hey! How do you know about Ichy?" Dil said with a tone of voice that was both Angry and Confused. Ichy flew off of Dil and landed infront of Chomper. "This is the Sharptooth kid i've been telling you about, Chomper." Ichy said with a grin. "And your Dil?" Chomper asked, looking back at Dil. "Ichy! Since when were you friends with a sharptooth?" Dil growled, trying to look at Ichy but turned her head a little to far and stared at another tree. "Im over here Dil.." Ichy sighed, poking the side of Dil's nose. Dil turned her head a little to fast and knocked Ichy over. "Would you stop doing that?" Growled Ichy, getting up and rubbing his wings. "And no, im not friends with this sharptooth." Ichy said. "Then what about those Egg-stealers, Ichy?" Dil asked with a dry tone to her voice. "Pino!" Yelped Chomper. He turned around but was stopped by Ichy. "What about her?" Ichy said. "Ichy! How many sharpteeth are you friends with?" Growled Dil again. Ichy looked back at Dil and said. "For the last time Dil, im not friends with any sharpteeth!" Dil snorted, almost insulted at what Ichy said. Ichy looked back at Chomper and continued.. "Now tell me, what happened to Pino? And what about Ozzy and Strut?" "Ichy.." Dil began but was cut off when Ichy held her mouth shut with his wings..





Strut looked around, wondering which way to go. "Chomper?" Said Strut, but there was no reply. He continued forward looking for either Chomper or Pino but could not find them. He was beginning to get that feeling that he was lost. Suddenly, he felt the ground shaking and made a run for it to get away from whatever was making the ground rumble..




Ozzy and Pino continued their way through the cave. For some reason though, everything was starting to get lighter, then they saw why. This part of the cave they were in had strange sparkles all over the walls and above, unfortunately that wasn't the only thing that was above..


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Thanks :) Probably going to read up a little bit more about the critters appearing in the next chapter. The only thing i saw them in was in the game (Disney's) Dinosaur and im not sure how big they are. Hopefully i'll have next chapter up tomorrow :)


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Yay! Another Chapter! :) Has a refrence to Lion King(Strut uses a quote). Any Goof-ups, let me know :)




Chapter 31: It's gonna eat me!
"Ozzy? What is that strange chattering noise?" Pino asked, looking around. Ozzy turned around and grumbled. "That chattering noise is you chattering your teeth!" Ozzy said. Pino tried to stop chattering her teeth but to no avail. Suddenly they saw a strange glow coming from up ahead. "What's that over there?" Pino said, tipping her head. Both Ozzy and Pino went in the direction the strange glow was in and saw something they never thought they would see. All over the cave were strange shining stones of many shapes and sizes. Pino walked up to a small one and picked it up. "Look at this, Ozzy!" Pino said happily, walking over to Ozzy. "I never would have thought we would see these! It's a shame Chomper, Ichy and Strut aren't here to see these." Pino said. She looked up and pointed to the other shiney glows from above. "Their even up there!" She said, smiling. Unfortunately, the glowings from above were the eyes of many, many creatures. "I dont think those are the shining stones.." Ozzy said, backing away slowly. Pino looked up again and saw that the creatures from above began to fly after them. "Run!" Yelled Ozzy..

Ozzy and Pino ran away from the strange flyers, not daring to look back..

"Ozzy! Wait for me!" Pino yelped, trying to keep up with Ozzy but tripped on another rock. She got up and began to run after Ozzy, but noticed she did not have the shining stone. She turned around and saw the stone a few feet away. "Ozzy! The Stone!" Yelped Pino, running over to get the stone. "Just forget about it!" Yelled Ozzy in reply, but it was to late. Pino had reached the stone, but was hiddin from sight when the strange flyers surrounded her, and before Ozzy knew it, he to was surrounded..




"Ozzy! Strut!" "Pino!" Yelled both Ichy and Chomper. "Ichy, im hungry!" Dil said, her stomach growling. "Your hungry? I've only been able to eat small crunchy flyers!" Ichy replied, folding his wings. Suddenly they heard a voice yelling out. "Help!" It said. Dil looked in the direction where the voice had came and began to follow it, unfortunately she walked into a tree..




Strut ran as fast as he could away from a Sharptooth. Strut did not look back to see what the colors on the sharptooth were but by its reaction on seeing Strut, it was probably one of Chomper's parents. Suddenly he tripped on something, which growled..


"Hey! Watch where your going!" Growled Dil. Ichy and Chomper got up to see who had tripped. "Strut!" Both Ichy and Chomper said at the same time. Ichy got up off of Dil and went over to Strut. "What's going on?" Ichy said. Strut looked back at Ichy and replied. "IT'S GONNA EAT ME!!" "No, Ichy told me not to eat two Egg-stealers called-" Dil began, but was interrupted by a loud roar.. Ichy, Dil and Chomper looked in the direction where the roar had come from. "Mommy!" Chomper said, getting up off of Dil..


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All right! Chomper's parents are coming back!  :)


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Kinda short but i did not want to keep everyone waiting again. Next Chapter will probably be about Ozzy and Pino's little adventure in the cave. After that, hopefully it will be about Chomper's parents.


Chapter 32 Verse 1: Strange Flyers
"Mommy!" Chomper chirped out loudly at the sound of a sharptooth's roar which he knew to be his mother. Ichy imedietely flew over to Chomper and tried to stop him from chirping anymore. "Quite! If she comes here we're going to be dinner!" Ichy said, hearing another roar. Chomper looked down at Ichy, then back at where the sound of his mother were. "Remember, we have to find Pino first!" Ichy said again. Chomper thought for a moment, then nodded in agreement. Ichy flew back onto Dil and asked Strut, who was still shacking, if he was alright. "Yes, but i almost lost my tail!" Said Strut, shivering at the thought of Chomper's mom lunging at him almost biting off his tail. Both Ichy and Strut looked over at Chomper(Dil tried to look but looked at a nearby tree stump.) "Can i tell her i am alright?" Chomper said, looking back at Ichy. Ichy thought for a moment, and nodded. "Just dont lead her to us!" Said Ichy. Chomper chirped loud enough for the sharptooth to hear, then went over to Dil and climbed ontop..




"Ozzy! Help!" Pino yelped, trying to use the Shiney Stone as protection from the strange flyers. She heard Ozzy saying something but could not make out what he was saying thanks to the flyers..


"Go away! Go!" Ozzy growled, trying to whack the flyers away with his claws and tail. He heard Pino yelling out for help and replied "Im a little busy at the moment!" but was not sure if Pino would be able to hear..


Pino held the shiney stone up for protection against the flyers. She waited for one of them to fly down and snatch her up but they did not..

Ozzy tried to see if he could see Pino anywhere, but she was not found. Ozzy then saw a tunnel and ran inside it get as far away from the flyers as possable..


Pino lowered the stone when she could no longer hear the flapping of wings and the screeching cries of the flyers. She looked around and saw Ozzy was gone..

"Ozzy?" Pino said in a squeeky voice. She looked in the direction the flyers went and thought to herself. "Did they take him away?" She shuddered at the thought of what they would do. Even if he tried to kill her, she still did not want anyone to get hurt. She turned around when all of a sudden something flew into her face.

It yelped on impact and flumped to the ground. Pino held the stone up in defence but thought for a moment. Whatever flew into her face, it was small. She lowered the stone again and looked down at the creature that flew into her. It had long clawed fingers with webbings and pointy ears and it did not have the face of a usual flyer. She sat the stone down and picked the flyer up. She gently rubbed her finger on the flyer's belly to make sure it was alright and noticed that the flyer had soft ticklies all over. "These little guys weren't attacking us, they were fleeing from us." Pino thought to herself. The flyer then began to stur and yelped in fear when it saw Pino. Pino jumped when she heard the little flyer yelp and dropped it. "Oops, im sorry!" Pino said. The flyer backed away but flopped down. Pino moved closer and the flyer held it's wings up in defence. "Dont hurt me!!" The flyer squeeked. Pino gently held her hand out and pat it on the head with her finger. "Dont worry, i wont hurt you!" Pino said, smiling. The flyer looked at Pino and gulped at the sight of her smiling. Pino noticed that the flyer was still afraid and that her smile, which showed her teeth, probably scared it even more. "What is your name?" Pino said, now smiling without showing her teeth. "My name Eris." Said the flyer called Eris. "Eris huh? Funny name!" Pino said, patting her finger on Eris' head again. "What's wrong with my name?" Eris said, frowning. "No, i wasn't making fun of your name, it's just.. Well.." Pino began but stopped for a moment. "I've never seen a flyer like yourself before.." Pino said, gently putting Eris down. "Welp, we call ourselves Night Flyers." Eris said, folding his wings. "Night Flyers, huh? but how can you see in the dark?" Pino said, itching her head. "Welp, we.. Can see in the dark! It's not that hard." Eris said, trying to crawl away. Pino looked around but could not see anything. "It's way to dark!" Pino said, frowning. "Welp, guess we're just born with it.." Eris said, crawling up onto a rock and sitting down. "Welp, i guess we dont really see in the dark.." Eris said, itching his ear with his small thumb, which was not long like the other fingers and not webbed either. "Ya see.." Eris began but was interupted by Pino. "No, i dont see." Pino said, sitting down and feeling around for the shiney stone. "Har har, very funny. Ya see, we dont really see in the dark. When we screech, we can hear what is infront of us or.. We can hear what's here and what's there.." Eris said. Pino thought about what Eris had said and was not sure if she understood or not. Then she shrugged and yelped loudly..


Ozzy wandered through the tunnel and was having trouble seeing where he was going. Suddenly the cave shook and he heard a loud yelp coming from behind..


Eris flew over to Pino's mouth and quickly closed her mouth. "What are you trying to do, burry us?" Eris said with a squeeky voice that tried to sound like that of a sharptooth. "Sorry." Pino said with a quite voice. Eris sighed and hopped off of Pino's nose. Pino looked down at the stone in her hands and looked around to see if she could find any light anywhere, but she could not find any. "If your looking for a way out, an Egg stealer just went-" Eris began, but was cut off again by Pino. "Really? You saw him? Where did he go?" Pino said, hopping up and down. "Calm down, he just went over there in that tunnel." Eris said, pointing his wing in the direction of the tunnel Ozzy went through. "Where?" Pino said, looking in the direction Eris is pointing in. Eris sighed again and flew over to the tunnel. "See now?" Eris said in a grumpy tone. Pino walked over to where Eris was and saw the tunnel finally. She went inside and looked back but Eris was gone. "Thanks.." Pino said, then entered the tunnel..




Chapter 32 Verse 1: Strange Flyers
"Mommy!" Chomper chirped out loudly at the sound of a sharptooth's roar which he knew to be his mother. Ichy imedietely flew over to Chomper and tried to stop him from chirping anymore. "Quite! If she comes here we're going to be dinner!" Ichy said, hearing another roar. Chomper looked down at Ichy, then back at where the sound of his mother were. "Remember, we have to find Pino first!" Ichy said again. Chomper thought for a moment, then nodded in agreement. Ichy flew back onto Dil and asked Strut, who was still shacking, if he was alright. "Yes, but i almost lost my tail!" Said Strut, shivering at the thought of Chomper's mom lunging at him almost biting off his tail. Both Ichy and Strut looked over at Chomper(Dil tried to look but looked at a nearby tree stump.) "Can i tell her i am alright?" Chomper said, looking back at Ichy. Ichy thought for a moment, and nodded. "Just dont lead her to us!" Said Ichy. Chomper chirped loud enough for the sharptooth to hear, then went over to Dil and climbed ontop..




"Ozzy! Help!" Pino yelped, trying to use the Shiney Stone as protection from the strange flyers. She heard Ozzy saying something but could not make out what he was saying thanks to the flyers..


"Go away! Go!" Ozzy growled, trying to whack the flyers away with his claws and tail. He heard Pino yelling out for help and replied "Im a little busy at the moment!" but was not sure if Pino would be able to hear..


Suddenly the flyers landed around them. They did not look like the normal flyers like Chomper's friend, Petrie. They had strange wings that looked like arms with very long fingers with webbings on them and they had long ears..


Pino saw one of the flyers crawling over to her. She held the Shiney Stone up to protect herself from the 'flyer' but to no avail. She felt it sniffing her and then finally, it spoke..

"What are you and your.. Egg-stealer friend doing here?" Asked the flyer. "Friend?" Ozzy said out loud. He must have overheard what the flyer had said and was suddenly silenced by loud screeching noises. "Speak when you are spoken to!" The Flyer said with a threatening voice. He looked down at Pino again and repeated. "What are you and that Egg-stealer doing here?" The Flyer said with a louder tone to his voice. "We were just trying to hide from Acro!" Pino said with a shakey voice. To her surprise, the Flyers began to chirp and screech silently until the same Flyer said. "You will follow us to the main chamber where Lune will judge you.." The Flyer said, crawling away..


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Chapter 33 verse 1: Unfortunate Enimey
Eris flew out of the cave and looked around. The night circle was now in the sky and there were no signs of his other brothers and sisters anywhere, meaning he could now roam the island alone..

He flew in search of slimey crawlers and crunchy flyers to feast on. he was about to screech until something closed it's jaws on him.

Whatever he was in, it was laughing a very mean sounding laugh. Finally, it openned it's mouth and Eris flew out but stopped when the thing that almost ate him said.. "Your family is not enough to satisfy my hunger, i am looking for an egg stealer and a spined sharptooth." Said the creature who Eris knew the creature was Acro. Eris shuddered at the thought of what Acro did to his brothers and sisters but decided to say nothing about them. Instead he told him about Ozzy and Pino..




Tyra continued her search for the Egg stealer she had seen. She could not forget the memory of him, he was the one who held her son by the neck at the great valley. At the same time, she was thinking about the chirping noise. Was it Chomper or was it Pino? She wasn't exactly sure who it was..





Strut kept an eye out for anymore sharpteeth. He was almost eaten by Chomper's Mom and the thought gave him chills, and being around Dil did not help at all..

"Hey Ichy? Im tired. How about we rest the eyes for a few?" Dil said, yawning. Ichy nooded in agreement and said.. "Yeah, i'll take a snooze for a few while you continue walking." Ichy was about to curl up until Dil stopped and growled. "Oh no, im not doing that again!" Ichy sat up again to say something but was interupted by Dil. "Ichy, your outnumbered. A sharptooth, An Egg stealer and Me against you. A small little twittering and squawking sharp beak." Dil said. Ichy looked at Strut, who was still keeping an eye out for Sharpteeth. Then Chomper who was watching, then at last he looked at Dil, who grinned sinisterly. "You know, she's got a pretty good.." Chomper began but stopped when Ichy poked him in the nose. "It will be very importent that you do not finish that sentence.." Ichy said with a grumble..


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Chapter 33 verse 2: The Nightflyers
Ozzy and Pino followed the strange ones to their main chamber. It also had the strange shiney stones in the main chamber as well, but somehow the main chamber seemed darker.


"The Great Nightflyer is in there.." The Strange Flyer, now called a Nightflyer said, pointing his wing in the direction of a dark tunnel. "Nightflyer! I've heard about you!" Pino yelped suddenly. Ozzy looked down at Pino with a glare and said. "Now is not the time to get excited.." Pino looked back up at Ozzy and smiled. "Right, sorry." Pino said.

Ozzy and Pino went inside the dark tunnel. The ground they walked on was beginning to feel rough and sharp, both Ozzy and Pino were beginning to feel that their feet were getting scratched and bruised. Finally they stopped when they heard a voice coming from all directions..

"Who enters the lair of the Great Nightflyers?" Said the voice. The voice sounded old and wise and whatever the voice belong to, it was female..

"Let me do the talking!" Pino whispered to Ozzy. Pino walked up and looked around. The chamber had many tunnels where one could easily get lost. "Oh great nightflyer!" Pino began. "We did not mean to intrude, Honest! We we're only looking for a place to hide from Acro!" Pino said. "Acro? That old scar scale?" Replied the voice. Pino nodded and then from one of the many tunnels came a large Nightflyer. It was larger then the others and was gray with pale eyes that seemed to glow. "Little Spined Sharptooth, i will offer you a test. And same goes for you, Egg-stealer." The Great Nightflyer said, looking at both Ozzy and Pino. "There are two tunnels you must take to exit the cave. Little Sharptooth, you will take the tunnel next to the one i came from and you must face a terrible sharptooth, almost as bad as Acro." Said the Great Nightflyer, looking at Pino who gulped. "Egg-stealer, you will take the tunnel next to the one you came from.." The Great Nightflyer said, looking at Ozzy. "Within the tunnel, are the same shining stones that you saw. However, if you luck at the stone you will see yourself and something very deadly.." The Great Nightflyer said, shuddering. "And what is this very deadly thing?" Ozzy said, folding his arms. The Great Nightflyer shook her head and crawled back to the tunnel where she came from. "Go through the tunnels alive and you will both meet eachother again on the other side. Do not come back here again, you will not be welcome on your second visit.." Said the Great Nightflyer.


Pino walked over to her tunnel and looked inside. She could only see darkness which made her shudder. "If there's one thing i hate, it's dark tunnels!" She thought to herself. She looked back at Ozzy, who was just about to enter his tunnel and yeld out. "Good luck! here i go!" Pino yelled with a smile. she looked back at her tunnel, gulped, and entered..


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Unfortunately i have no new chapters, but i had to go back to chapter 32 and make another verse(Will do another verse of chapter 33 because that one was a tad but to unrealistic.) The Boo-boo on both chapters were bugging me and i had to go back to fix it. The new version of chapter 32 can be read at the top, version 2(Which was actually the first but not as realistic) can be read at the bottom. Reason why i had to change it: Critter was 14 inches big and i made them seem like their pretty big which their not! Anyway's, enjoy the newer, better version of chapter 32! :)

EDIT: Alrighty, i did another verse of Chapter 33. Ichy and Chomper have a quote from Lost World: Jurassic Park.


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Ozzy is my favourite character.... namely because hes angry all the tme when everyone else is so happy and light hearted. Produces a nice character contrast between him and the others.