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Im going to post chapter 2 up. Again, if you find any goof-ups in the story, please let me know!

P.S: I posted chapters 1 and 2 on FF.Net Along with a few chapters from Journey to the Island, One Silly LOTR short story and one Castlevania one based on the secret boss from Lament of Innocence. Reviews are welcome for those as well

Onboard another Cursed Vessel
So. It really wasn't my time. Although i must ask myself: Why do i continue to write when i have not done so before? Maybe it's a force of habit. Now, as for the question "How did i escape"?
As i was writing, a snake slithered over my leg. One side of it's face was normal while the other seemed to be the serpent's skull. The snake slithered back to it's master who just so happened to be the infamouse Jolly Roger himself, and he was the one who helped me out. The foolish guards, always sleeping on the job. Although thanks to the guard sleeping he would not have raised an alarm. Never the less, Jolly Roger unlocked my cell door. strangely enough, without a key.
And so, i made my escape with Jolly Roger and am now onboard his ship, even while i am writing this. Strange, isn't it? I first served under Davy Jones and now i find myself in league with Jolly Roger. However, i cannot deny that fate will have something in store for us. whether it bodes ill for us? Only time will tell..----------------------
It was a whole month since Kraken Guard had wrote in her book. It was very busy on Jolly Roger's ship. Jolly Roger had many ships, but the Kraken Guard was unsure of which ship she was on as they all looked alike. However, she has heard rumors before of a ship called "Death Omen" which is said to be the most feared ship in the caribbean, second only to the flying dutchman itself. Seeing as how the Flying Dutchman had a new captain, it would now make the Death Omen the most feared ship in the caribbean.
Serving on what Kraken Guard assumed to be the Death Oman, it was very much alike from when she served onboard the Flying Dutchman, except there was no pipe organ. Instead, they were constantly being followed by storm clouds that roared with thunder. Kraken Guard listened to what some of the undead had said about the storms. "T'was said that it shows the anger and frustration of Jolly Roger" They had said, and it seemed to be true. Jolly Roger was often seen to be ill tempered and wasn't exactly one of the merciful types either. "If ye think ye're gonna be walking around acting like Davy Jones, think again.." Kraken Guard had said one day, but unfortunately it had come out to loud and at the wrong time. Jolly Roger was just close enough to hear the Kraken Guard speaking and had made the whole crew gasp in surprise and fear.
Many skeletons made way for their captain, usually making comments like "Nice knowing ye, Lassy!" "Ye couldn't keep yer mouth shut?" and "Better ye then me!"
It was then, that Kraken Guard found herself looking up into the eyes (or where the eyes were supposed to be) of Jolly Roger. "What did ye just say?" Jolly Roger said with a venomous tone to his voice. Kraken Guard noticed that the thunder seemed to grow louder which prooved that the storms really were all his doing.
"If ye think ye'll be the new ruler of the ocean, yer more of a fool then you seem." Kraken Guard had said with a grin. Suddenly a bright flash and a loud booming sound caused the whole crew to jump out of whatever skin they had left.
"Yer comin' with me, Lassy. whether ye like it or not.." Jolly Roger said with a hissing tone.
"And why should i? Ye told me ta' help, not to serve.." Kraken Guard began, but was instantly cut off by Jolly Roger..
"NOW!"
"Alright, alright.." Kraken Guard said with a 'yes, dad..' tone to her voice..
The Skeletons watched as Kraken Guard followed Jolly Roger into the captains cabin. One of the Skeletel Brigands, who's name used to be Edgar Stormcrusher had said: "So much for having someone who used to serve Davy Jones himself onboard!"
"Aye, t'is a shame really.." Said a Skeletel Witchdoctor, who's name was Enrique Foulgrim..